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* GroinAttack: In Chapter 12, while the two transsexuals Alice (the male-to-female) and Bruce (the female-to-male) are brawling during a circus act, Alice is given a very hard punch to the dick that impacts her enough to fall back onto a pillar, knocking it down upon some audience members and crushing them to death.
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* GroinAttack: In Chapter 12, while the two transsexuals trans people Alice (the male-to-female) and Bruce (the female-to-male) are brawling during a circus act, Alice is given a very hard punch to the dick that impacts her enough to fall back onto a pillar, knocking it down upon some audience members and crushing them to death.
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* LoadsAndLoadsOfCharacters: This mainly applies to the inmates, both canon and OC, early on, but later applies to other [=OCs=], Dr. Lana Mumford and Mistress's assistant Anais included.
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The writing styles between the two authors are notably different. For example, while Cooljoe64's writing style is riddled with spelling and grammatical errors, [[{{Creator/Voltalia}} guardianemessiah]] (better known as Voltalia) writes with little to no errors at all and writes with wit and and sophisication. It should also be noted that before abandoning the fic, Cooljoe64 wrote the first four chapters (the last one [[{{Creator/Voltalia}} Voltalia]] proofread for him). She then accepted to take over the fanfic from that point on.
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The writing styles between the two authors are notably different. For example, while Cooljoe64's [=Cooljoe64=]'s writing style is riddled with spelling and grammatical errors, [[{{Creator/Voltalia}} guardianemessiah]] (better known as Voltalia) writes with little to no errors at all and writes with wit and and sophisication. It should also be noted that before abandoning the fic, Cooljoe64 [=Cooljoe64=] wrote the first four chapters (the last one [[{{Creator/Voltalia}} Voltalia]] proofread for him). She then accepted to take over the fanfic from that point on.
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* BabiesMakeEverythingBetter: {{Deconstructed}} and then {{Reconstruction}}. Actually, the Mistress's pregnancy does not instantly make everything better with the Warden nor is she even sure she can take on the responsibility at first. Warden actually has to put effort into his relationship with his rival in order for her to be more trusting of him. He also decides, as time goes on, that he needs to [[EarnYourHappyEnding face his consequences head-on and not try to run away from them]]. His crappy childhood with a JerkAss [[EvilMatriarch father]] [[SufferingBuildsCharacter serves as further motivation]].
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* BabiesMakeEverythingBetter: {{Deconstructed}} [[DeconReconSwitch Deconstructed and then {{Reconstruction}}. Actually, reconstructed]]. Initially, the Mistress's pregnancy does not doesn't instantly make everything better with the Warden nor is she Warden. She's not even sure she can take on the responsibility at first. Warden actually has to put effort into his relationship with his rival in order for her to be more trusting of him. He also decides, as time goes on, that he needs to [[EarnYourHappyEnding face his consequences head-on and not try to run away from them]]. His crappy childhood with a JerkAss [[EvilMatriarch father]] [[SufferingBuildsCharacter serves as further motivation]].
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* InstantBirthJustAddWater: In Chapter 12, Mistress's water breaks while she is angrily insisting Warden that she is fine and that her contractions are just cramps. Given that this is her first child, this would actually be unlikely. Fortunately, this trope is partly averted as Warden and Anais are able to move her to another room, the duration of the labor is a bit longer, and the DeliveryGuy is Mistress's doctor.
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* InstantBirthJustAddWater: InstantBirthJustAddLabor: Played with. In Chapter 12, Mistress's water breaks while she is angrily insisting Warden that she is fine and that her contractions are just cramps. Given that this is her first child, this would actually be unlikely. Fortunately, this trope is partly averted as Warden and Anais are able to move her to another room, the duration of the labor is a bit longer, and the DeliveryGuy is Mistress's doctor.
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* ChuckCunninghamSyndrome: See AbortedArc.
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* DeadpanSnarker: This mostly applies to Mistress.
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** This mainly falls specifically under CostumePorn.
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* ShoutOut: Alice's act as the "Goblin Queen" as well as her costume are meant to be a reference to ''Film/{{Labyrinth}}'''s Jareth AKA Goblin King, specifically cosplayed by Creator/JewWario in ''WebVideo/SuburbanKnights''.
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** Alice's act as the "Goblin Queen" as well as her costume are meant to be a reference to ''Film/{{Labyrinth}}'''s Jareth AKA Goblin King, specifically cosplayed by Creator/JewWario in ''WebVideo/SuburbanKnights''.
** Alice's act as the "Goblin Queen" as well as her costume are meant to be a reference to ''Film/{{Labyrinth}}'''s Jareth AKA Goblin King, specifically cosplayed by Creator/JewWario in ''WebVideo/SuburbanKnights''.
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* WackyCravings: The Mistress's cravings are said to involve raw meat, live grasshoppers (or locusts), ''and'' hot sauce.
** She even eats a couple of the flesh-eating locusts in Chapter 10.
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** She even eats a couple of the flesh-eating locusts in Chapter 10.
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* WackyCravings: The Mistress's cravings are said to involve raw meat, live grasshoppers (or locusts), ''and'' hot sauce.
**sauce. She even eats a couple of the flesh-eating locusts in Chapter 10.
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* BabiesMakeEverythingBetter: {{Deconstructed}} and then {{Reconstructed}}. Actually, the Mistress's pregnancy does not instantly make everything better with the Warden nor is she even sure she can take on the responsibility at first. Warden actually has to put effort into his relationship with his rival in order for her to be more trusting of him. He also decides, as time goes on, that he needs to [[EarnYourHappyEnding face his consequences head-on and not try to run away from them]]. His crappy childhood with a JerkAss [[EvilMatriarch father]] [[SufferingBuildsCharacter serves as further motivation]].
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* BabiesMakeEverythingBetter: {{Deconstructed}} and then {{Reconstructed}}.{{Reconstruction}}. Actually, the Mistress's pregnancy does not instantly make everything better with the Warden nor is she even sure she can take on the responsibility at first. Warden actually has to put effort into his relationship with his rival in order for her to be more trusting of him. He also decides, as time goes on, that he needs to [[EarnYourHappyEnding face his consequences head-on and not try to run away from them]]. His crappy childhood with a JerkAss [[EvilMatriarch father]] [[SufferingBuildsCharacter serves as further motivation]].
