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* TheChick: Cream the Rabbit is probably the most wholehearted, genuinely heroic of TheChosenMany.
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* TheHeart: Cream the Rabbit is probably the most wholehearted, genuinely heroic of TheChosenMany.
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* AnAxeToGrind: Pacifica's weapon in the Dark World is a pink ax.
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** Also downplayed with Pacifica. In her parent work, she's an ActionSurvivor and BadassPacifist. Here, she [[AnAxeToGrind holds an ax]] and seems more willing to get dirty.
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** Also downplayed with Pacifica. In her parent work, she's an ActionSurvivor and BadassPacifist. Here, she [[AnAxeToGrind holds an ax]] ax and seems more willing to get dirty.
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* WhiteMagicianGirl: Cream is the kind, sweet and empathetic WhiteMage of the Fun Gang, frequently using JapanesePoliteness and treating everyone she meets courteously.
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* WhiteMagicianGirl: Cream is the kind, sweet and empathetic WhiteMage of the Fun Gang, frequently using JapanesePoliteness and treating everyone she meets courteously.courteously.
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* TheTheTitle: In contrast with ''Mysterioustale'''s more structurally varied chapter titles, all the chapters of this fic follow this naming pattern.
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* EntitledToHaveYou: It's mildly hinted through the story, especially early, that Senpai wants Pacifica to be close to him, especially with how frequently he refers to her as "his". This is one of the reasons why Pacifica hates him and yet fears him.
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* BewareTheNiceOnes: Cream is the nicest of the protagonists, polite and hopeful to a fault, and even with some shades of childish naivete. It doesn't stop her from being pretty serious, honest, and scolding whenever the topic is Senpai's behavior and how much he emotionally scarred Pacifica.
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* SourOutsideSadInside: Downplayed with Pacifica, who's more TheQuiet, snarky, and grumpy than a full-blown jerk, but terribly mangled deep down.
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* SourOutsideSadInside: Downplayed with Pacifica, who's more TheQuiet, TheQuietOne, snarky, and grumpy than a full-blown jerk, but terribly mangled deep down.
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* TheTheTitle: In contrast with ''Mysterioustale'''s more structurally varied chapter titles, all the chapters of this fic follow this naming pattern.
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* MrExposition: Cream's introduction involves her explaining to Pacifica and Senpai the prophecy, and later she teaches the former about how to get across the Dark World. Amethyst, in Chapter 7, explains the Lightners and Darkner's relationship in the past, and a bit of the Kingdom's backstory.
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** NiceMeanAndInBetween: Cream is the Nice (a sweet NiceGirl that uses Japanese politeness mannerisms and has a soft-spoken voice), Senpai is the Mean (the story doesn't waste time to show that, underneath his TheAce facade, he's aloof, forcing, and abusive), Pacifica is the In Between (brooding and cynical but not mean and unheroic, and just sought to survive the perils of high school before entering the Dark World).
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** NiceMeanAndInBetween: Cream is the Nice (a sweet NiceGirl that uses Japanese politeness mannerisms and has a soft-spoken voice), Senpai is the Mean (the story doesn't waste time to show that, underneath his TheAce facade, he's aloof, forcing, and abusive), Pacifica is the In Between In-Between (brooding and cynical but not mean and unheroic, and just sought to survive the perils of high school before entering the Dark World).
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* TheBully: Senpai is this for Pacifica, tormenting her with terror and verbal insults simply because she knows his facade is a lie and she refuses to be with him. This also extends to the younger major characters (Cream and Peridot), both of whom he treats with disdain.
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** Cream wears orange, associated with warmth and enthusiasm, combining with her TheCutie attitude.
** Peridot's major color, green, is more on the ironic side, however, as it mostly tends to symbolize tranquility and balance, contrasting her initial snotty brat attitude.
** Peridot's major color, green, is more on the ironic side, however, as it mostly tends to symbolize tranquility and balance, contrasting her initial snotty brat attitude.
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* CatchphraseInsult: Downplayed with Senpai, who still uses "worm". Played very straight, though, with Peridot and her iconic "clod".
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* CatchphraseInsult: Downplayed with Senpai, who still uses "worm"."worm" to describe some characters. Played very straight, though, with Peridot and her iconic "clod".
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* ColorMotif:
** Pacifica wears blue (respectively, cyan in the Light World and darker shades in the Dark World), symbolizing her being TheHero, her femininity, but also her melancholic character.
** Senpai wears blue and pink in the Light World, helping in enhancing the TheAce facade he has. In the Dark World, instead, his skin is red (which can be associated with anger and violence; and is also the color of his real form as the narration described) and purple (supernatural forces and power), and his clothes are brown and gold (respectively, filthiness/decay and heroism), showing his decaying facade, how he's not as pretty as he appears to be, yet how he's destined to [[CharacterDevelopment become heroic]].
** Pacifica wears blue (respectively, cyan in the Light World and darker shades in the Dark World), symbolizing her being TheHero, her femininity, but also her melancholic character.
** Senpai wears blue and pink in the Light World, helping in enhancing the TheAce facade he has. In the Dark World, instead, his skin is red (which can be associated with anger and violence; and is also the color of his real form as the narration described) and purple (supernatural forces and power), and his clothes are brown and gold (respectively, filthiness/decay and heroism), showing his decaying facade, how he's not as pretty as he appears to be, yet how he's destined to [[CharacterDevelopment become heroic]].
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* LemonyNarrator: Like in its predecessor, this fic's narration has some dry wits.
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* DarkerAndEdgier: Than ''Mysterioustale''. The stakes are higher, the heroes, side characters, and villains alike are more jaded/mean/broken (especially the protagonist, Pacifica), and it only mildly shies away from a swear and [[spoiler: SelfHarm]].
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* MoralityPet: Downplayed. Pacifica is mostly good-natured, if not neutral-minded on her own, but she's fundamentally broken, jaded, and anti-social. [[TheCutie Cream]] wants to bring out her best during the quest.
