Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 29 (click to see context) from:
* [[spoiler: AttackTheMouth:]]
to:
* [[spoiler: AttackTheMouth:]]AttackTheMouth:]][[spoiler: Maki beats up Tsumugi so nastily and quickly she has to pull broken off teeth from Tsumugi's broken jaw just to make sure she doesn't choke to death on them.]]
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 82 (click to see context) from:
* [[spoiler: EndingByAscending]]] [[spoiler: Only by finally using the rocket of his execution, can Kaito finally pierce the glass wall keeping them all contained and reach the heavens.]]
to:
* [[spoiler: EndingByAscending]]] EndingByAscending]] [[spoiler: Only by finally using the rocket of his execution, can Kaito finally pierce the glass wall keeping them all contained and reach the heavens.]]
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* [[spoiler: EndingByAscending]]] [[spoiler: Only by finally using the rocket of his execution, can Kaito finally pierce the glass wall keeping them all contained and reach the heavens.]]
Added DiffLines:
* [[spoiler: RailRoading:]]
Added DiffLines:
* SpottingTheThread:
Added DiffLines:
* [[spoiler: ThrowingOutTheScript:]]
Added DiffLines:
* [[spoiler: VillainousBreakdown:]]
Added DiffLines:
* [[spoiler:TheWallAroundTheWorld:]][[spoiler: The giant glass wall that surrounds the school and keeps the outside world out.]]
Added DiffLines:
* [[spoiler:TheWholeWorldIsWatching:]]
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* [[spoiler: AndThFandomRejoiced:]]
Added DiffLines:
* [[spoiler: AttackTheMouth:]]
* [[spoiler: AudienceReactions:]]
* [[spoiler: AudienceReactions:]]
Added DiffLines:
* [[spoiler: Bathos:]]
* [[spoiler: BatmanGambit:]]
* [[spoiler: BatmanGambit:]]
Added DiffLines:
* [[spoiler: BigShutUp:]]
Added DiffLines:
* [[spoiler: Breaking the Fourth Wall:]]
Added DiffLines:
* [[spoiler: ConditionedToAcceptHorror:]]
* [[spoiler: ControlFreak:]]
* [[spoiler: ControlFreak:]]
Added DiffLines:
* [[spoiler: Crazy-Prepared:]]
Added DiffLines:
* [[spoiler: Determinator:]]
* [[spoiler: DidNotDieThatWay:]][[spoiler: Poor Kirumi wasn't actually killed by her execution, but when Monokuma threw her still barely alive body into the incinerator.]]
* [[spoiler: DidNotDieThatWay:]][[spoiler: Poor Kirumi wasn't actually killed by her execution, but when Monokuma threw her still barely alive body into the incinerator.]]
Added DiffLines:
* [[spoiler: KickThemWhileTheyAreDown:]]
Added DiffLines:
* [[spoiler: True Companions:]]
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* HumiliationConga: Also doubles as a TraumaCongaLine, but Kokichi being poisoned, becoming so sickly that he is unable to walk, being forced to be vulnerable and rely on other people, and being aware that he’s dying slowly and pathetically in front of ''the entire world'' doesn’t do any favors for his already badly damaged psyche. Rather than being seen as HumblePie, Kaito and everyone else thinks this level of destroying someone’s pride is simply another example of the Mastermind’s cruelty and sadism.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* AnimalMotifs: Kokichi has horses. Really, there’s too many instances of him making horse reference to count. This even extends to his ChessMotifs, in which he’s compared to the Knight piece, a horse that moves around the battlefield in bizarre patterns. Less frequently, he’s also compared to a cat.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* HorrifyingTheHorror: Maki is the Ultimate Assassin, and even she is shocked and disgusted by [[spoiler: Tsumugi poisoning Kokichi by literally weaving the poison into his bloodstream.]]
-->'''Maki:''' Congratulations, [[spoiler: Tsumugi.]] Not even the most depraved assassins in Japan have ever thought to teach me ''that'' one.
-->'''Maki:''' Congratulations, [[spoiler: Tsumugi.]] Not even the most depraved assassins in Japan have ever thought to teach me ''that'' one.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* CrossesTheLineTwice: Majority of Kokichi’s jokes and humor fall into this.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 107 (click to see context) from:
* PapaWolf: Kaito goes through utter hell and back trying to keep Kokichi safe. Hurting the Supreme Leader quickly becomes one of Kaito’s biggest BerserkButton.
to:
* PapaWolf: Kaito goes through utter hell and back trying to keep Kokichi safe. Hurting the Supreme Leader quickly becomes one of Kaito’s biggest BerserkButton.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* TheMedic: Maki is an assassin with a decent knowledge of anatomy and has presumably had to treat her own wounds, so she winds up being the ClosestThingWeGot.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 73 (click to see context) from:
* FireForgedFriends: Probably the biggest example in all of fanfiction is Kokichi and Kaito, who start out entirely hating each other and working together due to having a common goal, but in the span of ''hours'' manage to become close enough to trust and rely on each other. [[spoiler: It culminates in Kaito being utterly agonized when he thinks there’s no hope for Kokichi, and being overjoyed when they find an antidote. He becomes more and more determined to protect Kokichi after that point.]]
to:
* FireForgedFriends: Probably the biggest example in all of fanfiction is Kokichi and Kaito, who start out entirely hating each other and working together due to having a common goal, but in the span of mere ''hours'' manage to become close enough to trust and rely on each other. [[spoiler: It culminates in Kaito being utterly agonized when he thinks there’s no hope of a cure for Kokichi, and being overjoyed when they find an antidote. He becomes more and more determined to protect Kokichi after that point.]]
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* FireForgedFriends: Probably the biggest example in all of fanfiction is Kokichi and Kaito, who start out entirely hating each other and working together due to having a common goal, but in the span of ''hours'' manage to become close enough to trust and rely on each other. [[spoiler: It culminates in Kaito being utterly agonized when he thinks there’s no hope for Kokichi, and being overjoyed when they find an antidote. He becomes more and more determined to protect Kokichi after that point.]]
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 18 (click to see context) from:
* AdaptationalBackstoryChange: Kokichi's backstory is much more fleshed out and intertwined with the cast than before, [[spoiler: though if these memories are real or just inventions of the flashback lights is left uncertain.]]
to:
* AdaptationalBackstoryChange: Kokichi's backstory is much more fleshed out and intertwined with the cast than before, [[spoiler: though if these memories are real or just inventions of the flashback lights is left uncertain. Kaito, however, thinks that it doesn’t matter if they’re real or not, as the emotional pain it brings Kokichi is definitely real.]]
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* LoopholeAbuse: The cast constantly utilizes this to keep one step ahead of the game and keep everyone alive and not executed.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* GuiltInducedNightmare: Kaito feels really bad about everything that's happened to Kokichi.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* NightmareSequence: Turns out being in a killing game isn't very productive for not having nightmares.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* DreamSequence: Kaito has a few of these.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* FireWaterJuxtaposition: Kokichi is hot while Kaito is cold, the opposite of their personalities. Though as the fanfic progresses, the two stop becoming a juxtaposition and instead start melding into the others element.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* EvilIsBurningHot: Kokichi is constantly metaphorically on fire with his own guilt, often resulting in rather trippy dreams and hallucinations where he is enshrouded in it as he pushes others away.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 99 (click to see context) from:
* PapaWolf: Kaito goes through utter hell and back trying to keep Kokichi safe. Hurting the Supreme Leader quickly becomes one of Kaito’s biggest BerserkButtons.
to:
* PapaWolf: Kaito goes through utter hell and back trying to keep Kokichi safe. Hurting the Supreme Leader quickly becomes one of Kaito’s biggest BerserkButtons.BerserkButton.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* PapaWolf: Kaito goes through utter hell and back trying to keep Kokichi safe. Hurting the Supreme Leader quickly becomes one of Kaito’s biggest BerserkButtons.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* ExtremelyShortTimespan: It's been only two days.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* DeathIsASadThing: No death of any of the students or deaths of people in their flashback lights go unmourned, grief at times utterly consuming members of the cast.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* CycleOfRevenge: Subverted, despite Tsumugi's attempts to invoke this trope with flashback lights. Every time the group seems close to falling into this trope, they actually manage to talk it out or post-pone anger until they're safe.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* SeenItAll: Shuichi becomes incredibly hard to phase with more weirdness by the end of the story, able to just accept oddities as they happen because they have become pretty par for the course and they still aren't as weird as the time that Monokuma lost his fur.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* TheCorrupter: Tsumugi and [[spoiler: Junko.]]
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 77 (click to see context) from:
* Heartfelt Apology: Multiple of these are given over the course of the fic, with characters often having moments of reflection after confrontation letting them realize where they messed up and work to make it up to who they hurt.
to:
* Heartfelt Apology: HeartfeltApology: Multiple of these are given over the course of the fic, with characters often having moments of reflection after confrontation letting them realize where they messed up and work to make it up to who they hurt.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* Heartfelt Apology: Multiple of these are given over the course of the fic, with characters often having moments of reflection after confrontation letting them realize where they messed up and work to make it up to who they hurt.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* CombatPragmatist: Kokichi and Maki, though most of the cast ends up taking up similar beliefs by the end.
