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* MomentOfWeakness: PlayedForDrama. As much as Camilla loves her daughter, she also wishes that she was better at fitting in so that she didn't have to deal with being socially outcast. This fuels her decision to send Luz to Reality Check Summer Camp, even though she didn't actually ''want'' to see her BlitheSpirit crushed. Not only does the camp turn out to be ''[[DeadlyGame far worse]]'' than she'd imagined, Shigaraki suggests to Luz this "proves" that her mother is actually a ResentfulGuardian.

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* GreaterScopeVillain: Emperor Belos, the tyrannical ruler of the Boiling Isles, serves as this during Arc 2. [[spoiler:He's working with his descendant Tyler Wittebane to kill off people with super powers, including All For One who he even takes a personal interest in having fought her predecessor a decade before the story started]].
** Gravesfield, Luz's and the Wittebane's hometown, is revealed to be the reason why Luz has so much self-doubt about herself and why Belos is a genocidal witch-hating maniac. Gravesfield's modern society sees Luz as a weirdo that needs to conform to society by any means necessary, namely forcing her to go to a special summer camp, which the Governor of the state turned into a Death Camp for supers and allows All For One to start molding her against the world. Gravesfield is also revealed to have an unsavory history of being a Sundown Town and witch-hunting during the 17th century, which is referred to as the town's favorite tradition. This time period is where Belos originally came from and his VillainousLineage starts.

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Emperor Belos, the tyrannical ruler of the Boiling Isles, serves as this during Arc 2. [[spoiler:He's working with his descendant Tyler Wittebane to kill off people with super powers, including All For One who he even takes a personal interest in having fought her predecessor a decade before the story started]].
** Gravesfield, Luz's and the Wittebane's hometown, is revealed to be the reason why Luz has so much self-doubt about herself and why Belos is a genocidal witch-hating maniac. Gravesfield's modern society sees Luz as a weirdo that needs to conform to society by any means necessary, namely forcing her to go to a special summer camp, which the Governor of the state turned into a Death Camp for supers and allows All For One to start molding her against the world. Gravesfield [[spoiler:Gravesfield is also revealed to have an unsavory history of being a Sundown Town and witch-hunting during the 17th century, which is referred to as the town's favorite tradition. This time period is where Belos originally came from and his VillainousLineage starts.]]



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** : All For One admits to Luz that he was shunned by his peers for having Quirk in his youth. His people were seen as monsters, were culled for it, and it was even worse with those who had mutations.

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** : All For One admits to Luz that he was shunned by his peers for having Quirk in his youth. His people were seen as monsters, were culled for it, and it was even worse with those who had mutations.



* TheHunterBecomesTheHunted: The 2 teams at the Death Camp target Luz after being promised billions to kill her [[spoiler:...she quickly turns the tables on them.]]

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The 2 teams at the Death Camp target Luz after being promised billions to kill her [[spoiler:...she quickly turns the tables on them.]]



* IndyPloy: [[spoiler:The Governor admits that the Death Camp he arranged is a half-baked plan. This was all sprung at him with no sudden warning, including Luz’s power. This whole thing was slapped together in a matter of hours.]]

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* IndyPloy: [[spoiler:The Governor admits to himself that the Death Camp he arranged is a half-baked plan. This was all sprung at him with no sudden warning, including Luz’s power. This whole thing was slapped together in a matter of hours.]]
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* HeroicSelf-Deprecation: The beginning of the chapter 7 reveals Luz having doubts on her ability to be TheLeader of her team due to her having NoSocialSkills and a FriendlessBackground.

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* HeroicSelf-Deprecation: HeroicSelfDeprecation: The beginning of the chapter 7 reveals Luz having doubts on her ability to be TheLeader of her team due to her having NoSocialSkills and a FriendlessBackground.



* HoistByHisOwnPetard: Shigaraki admits to Luz that creating One For All was the beginning of his downfall that eventually led to All Might killing him. He notes in hindsight he shouldn't have given his little brother a Quirk.

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* HoistByHisOwnPetard: Shigaraki admits to Luz that creating One For All was the beginning of his downfall that would eventually led lead to All Might killing him. He notes in hindsight he shouldn't have given his little brother a Quirk.
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* FinishingMove: She does one against Kennedy, combining [[SpringCoil Springlike Limbs]], [[MegatonPunch Kinetic Force]], SuperStrength, [[MagicEnhancement Force Multiplier]], [[SuperToughness Shock Absorption]], [[BladeBelowTheShoulder Sword]] and [[CombatTentacles Vines]] into her right arm for a devastating blow to [[spoiler:crush Kennedy.]]

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* FinishingMove: She does one against Kennedy, combining [[SpringCoil Springlike Limbs]], [[MegatonPunch [[EnhancedPunch Kinetic Force]], SuperStrength, [[MagicEnhancement Force Multiplier]], [[SuperToughness Shock Absorption]], [[BladeBelowTheShoulder Sword]] and [[CombatTentacles [[VineTentacles Vines]] into her giant right arm for a devastating blow to [[spoiler:crush Kennedy.Kennedy to death.]]
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** Darlene mock apologizes for "crashing the party" as [[spoiler:Julia lies bleeding out from the fatal wounds she gave her.]]

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** Darlene mock apologizes for "crashing the party" as [[spoiler:Julia lies bleeding out from the fatal stab wounds she just gave her.]]
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* AFateWorseThanDeath: Luz believes being rendered brain dead by her PowerParasite Quirk counts as this.

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* AFateWorseThanDeath: Luz believes being rendered brain dead by her PowerParasite Quirk counts as this. [[spoiler:Which is why she decides to give Derreck a MercyKill.]]
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* TheTeaser: The beginning chapter 8 foreshadows with an injured, superhuman, teenaged boy who happened to be a survivor of a TotalPartyKill on the enemy teams crawling for his life in a forest fire before being brutally killed by his vengeful assailant. [[spoiler:Said attacker is Luz that has finally snapped and out for revenge.]]

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* TheTeaser: The beginning chapter 8 foreshadows with an injured, superhuman, teenaged boy who happened to be a survivor of a TotalPartyKill on the enemy teams crawling for his life in a forest fire before being brutally killed by his vengeful assailant. [[spoiler:Said attacker is Luz that has finally snapped and out for revenge.revenge for her fallen comrades.]]

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* BarrierWarrior: Forcefield Projection allows Luz to create a near-invincible forcefield in front of her that can withstand almost any kind of attack. However, it can only protect in front of the user but create up 2 of them. Multiple powerful blows will slowly chip away at its absorption, like most absorbing Quirks. [[DeadlyForceField Alternatively, Luz can shoot these forcefields at a target, and the more power they have absorbed, the more devastating the blows from the forcefields become in the form of explosions.]]



* FeelNoPain: Pain Nullification is Quirk that allows Luz to completely nullify any and all pain of any kind.



* GravityMaster: Zero Gravity is a Quirk that originally belonged to a girl by the name of Juniper, someone who was caught in the crossfire during the battle between Luz and Sophia, a Wittebane Assassin. This Quirk allows Luz the ability to remove the gravity of anything that Luz comes into physical contact with using her hands. This Quirk is an exact replica of Ochako Uraraka's Zero Gravity from ''Manga/MyHeroAcademia''.



* HavingABlast: Bomb Touch is a Quirk originally belonged to Riley Stewardson, [[spoiler: Luz's cousin and an assassin for The Wittebane Mega Church]]. The Quirk allows her to blow up anyone from the inside out, so long as she feels a deep hatred for them, and so long as she comes into physical contact with them. Otherwise, it is completely useless.



* HealingFactor: Super Regeneration is a Quirk that allows Luz to recover from life-threatening wounds, up to and including missing limbs, missing chunks of organs or entire organs, bones, muscles, and skin. The process is quite painful though, and often leaves scars behind, but nothing too damaging. [[spoiler:It's only because of this power that allows Luz to survive the blow back from too many Quirks and the mortal injuries she gains from her fights. Shigaraki implores her to keep this power no matter what.]]



* LongLived: The Longevity Quirk triples the user's lifespan. For example, if Luz’s lifespan is 89 years, then with this Quirk, their lifespan jumps to 267 years. Shigaraki tells Luz this is a must-have power.



* MultiArmedAndDangerous: Multiplier originally belonging to Derreck, an assassin hired by the Wittebanes, this is the first Quirk Luz steals after the Death Camp. It allows the user to grow multiple arms from their body. They can also merge the many hands to together into GiantHandsOfDoom. Being a power that Shigaraki had when he was alive, he egged Luz on to take it [[spoiler:before she kills the hitman. It especially comes in good use not long later as it saves her life]].



* NumberTwo: Julia noffers to be Luz's second-in-command on her team, so that Luz doesn't feel too pressured. TheLeader is so happy she hugs her for it.

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* NotQuiteFlight: Airwalk gives Luz the ability to float upward infinitely. However, she can't move in any other direction. She can, however, move downward. Propulsion using any other ability can be used to allow her to move in any direction she wishes. But aside from that, it is only used to scale high surfaces.
* NumberTwo: Julia noffers offers to be Luz's second-in-command on her team, so that Luz doesn't feel too pressured. TheLeader is so happy she hugs her for it.



* PowerParasite: All For One allows the user, in this case, Luz, to give and take Quirks from others. The process is painful for the person getting the Quirk/energy drained from them. [[spoiler:It can also be used to steal magic.]] The ones Luz has are currently:
** [[TheAgeless Longevity]]: Its a Quirk that triples the user's lifespan. For example, if Luz’s lifespan is 89 years, then with this Quirk, their lifespan jumps to 267 years. Shigaraki tells Luz this is a must-have power.
** [[HealingFactor Super Regeneration]]: Its a Quirk that allows Luz to recover from life-threatening wounds, up to and including missing limbs, missing chunks of organs or entire organs, bones, muscles, and skin. The process is quite painful though, and often leaves scars behind, but nothing too damaging. [[spoiler:It's only because of this power that allows Luz to survive the blow back from too many Quirks. Shigaraki implores her to keep this power no matter what.]]
** [[SuperToughness Shock Absorption]]: Originally from [[GentleGiant Stanley Richardson]]. This Quirk allows the user to tank great force without any drawback to the person’s physical body in a single blow. However, it can be worn down by the use of repeated, constant action applied at a constant rate, I.E. fire. [[spoiler:Stanley gives his power to Luz out of guilt for not stopping Kennedy murdering their teammates]].
** SuperStrength: Originally belonging to Thomas. A Quirk that gives the user superhuman levels of strength, relative to their own physical body’s strength. The stronger they were before having the Quirk, the stronger they are with the Quirk. This will of course continue to grow as the user becomes stronger, and has no set limit. [[spoiler:This the first Quirk Luz steals from after killing the original via AttackOnTheHeart with VibrationManipulation. Ronny Armstrong also has a similar Quirk but unlike Thomas, he survives.]]
** [[AbsurdlySharpClaws Spear Fingers]]: Originally belonging to Darlene. A Quirk that allows the user to turn her fingers sharp and pointed like spears, and fire them toward people like extendable pole-arms from a distance of 25 meters. [[spoiler: Luz steals this Quirk before [[YourHeadAsplode killing her]] avenging Julia's murder by her hands.]]
** [[FeelNoPain Pain Nullification]]: A Quirk that allows Luz to completely nullify any and all pain of any kind.
** [[SpringCoil Springlike Limbs]]: Allows user to coil their bones and muscles like springs, giving them heightened resistance to drawback, knock-back, or kickback to any of their attacks. Luz can also launch her limbs outward around 5 feet from her body, and recall them back. It can also be used to jump high altitudes, easily covering small skyscrapers in a single bound.
** [[DeadlyForceField Forcefield Projection]]: This allows Luz to create a near-invincible forcefield in front of her that can withstand almost any kind of attack. However, it can only protect in front of the user but create up 2 of them. Multiple powerful blows will slowly chip away at its absorption, like most absorbing Quirks. Alternatively, Luz can shoot these forcefields at a target, and the more power they have absorbed, the more devastating the blows from the forcefields become in the form of explosions.
** [[NotQuiteFlight Airwalk]]: Gives Luz the ability to float upward infinitely. However, she can't move in any other direction. She can, however, move downward. Propulsion using any other ability can be used to allow her to move in any direction she wishes. But aside from that, it is only used to scale high surfaces.
** [[VictoryByEndurance Stamina Negation:]] A Quirk that allows the user to negate all Stamina depletion. They can never grow tired, although this doesn’t negate the need for sleep.
** [[MultiArmedAndDangerous Multiplier]]: Originally belonging to Derreck, an assassin hired by the Wittebanes, this is the first Quirk Luz steals after the Death Camp. It allows the user to grow multiple arms from their body. She can also merge the many hands to together into GiantHandsOfDoom. Being a power that Shigaraki had when he was alive, he eggs Luz on to take it before she kills the hitman. [[spoiler:It especially comes in good use not long later as it saves her life]].
** [[GravityMaster Zero Gravity]]: This Quirk originally belonged to a girl by the name of Juniper, someone who was caught in the crossfire during the battle between Luz and a Wittebane Assassin. This Quirk allows Luz the ability to remove the gravity of anything that Luz comes into physical contact with using her hands. This Quirk is an exact replica of Ochako Uraraka's Zero Gravity from ''Manga/MyHeroAcademia''.
** [[SpaceMaster Limitless]]: This Quirk originally belonged to [[spoiler: Sophia Humbolt of The Wittebane Church, an assassin sent to kill Luz]]. It allows Luz to create orbs of blue and red energy. Red is a purely offensive move, whereas Blue is mostly defensive, as shone off by its original user. Only one can be used at a time.
** [[TeleportationWithDrawbacks Warping]]: Luz steals this Quirk from Charlie. While useful it has drawbacks as all quirks do. Warping can only bring people to and away from the user, and in the case of the latter, only to people the user knows. It can also cause a severe case of tonsillitis to the user, and the slime produced while using it is noted to stink like hell. However, the user doesn't need to know anyone's exact location to use it.
** [[HavingABlast Bomb Touch]]: This Quirk originally belonged to Riley Stewardson, [[spoiler: Luz's cousin and an assassin for The Wittebane Mega Church]]. The Quirk allows Luz to blow up anyone from the inside out, so long as she feels a deep hatred for them, and so long as she comes into physical contact with them. Otherwise, it is completely useless.

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* PowerParasite: All For One allows the user, in this case, Luz, to give and take Quirks from others. The process is painful for the person getting the Quirk/energy drained from them. [[spoiler:It can also be used to steal magic.]] The ones Luz has are currently:
** [[TheAgeless Longevity]]: Its a Quirk that triples the user's lifespan. For example, if Luz’s lifespan is 89 years, then with this Quirk, their lifespan jumps to 267 years. Shigaraki tells Luz this is a must-have power.
** [[HealingFactor Super Regeneration]]: Its a Quirk that allows Luz to recover from life-threatening wounds, up to and including missing limbs, missing chunks of organs or entire organs, bones, muscles, and skin. The process is quite painful though, and often leaves scars behind, but nothing too damaging. [[spoiler:It's only because of this power that allows Luz to survive the blow back from too many Quirks. Shigaraki implores her to keep this power no matter what.]]
** [[SuperToughness Shock Absorption]]: Originally from [[GentleGiant Stanley Richardson]]. This Quirk allows the user to tank great force without any drawback to the person’s physical body in a single blow. However, it can be worn down by the use of repeated, constant action applied at a constant rate, I.E. fire. [[spoiler:Stanley gives his power to Luz out of guilt for not stopping Kennedy murdering their teammates]].
** SuperStrength: Originally belonging to Thomas. A Quirk that gives the user superhuman levels of strength, relative to their own physical body’s strength. The stronger they were before having the Quirk, the stronger they are with the Quirk. This will of course continue to grow as the user becomes stronger, and has no set limit. [[spoiler:This the first Quirk Luz steals from after killing the original via AttackOnTheHeart with VibrationManipulation. Ronny Armstrong also has a similar Quirk but unlike Thomas, he survives.]]
** [[AbsurdlySharpClaws Spear Fingers]]: Originally belonging to Darlene. A Quirk that allows the user to turn her fingers sharp and pointed like spears, and fire them toward people like extendable pole-arms from a distance of 25 meters. [[spoiler: Luz steals this Quirk before [[YourHeadAsplode killing her]] avenging Julia's murder by her hands.]]
** [[FeelNoPain Pain Nullification]]: A Quirk that allows Luz to completely nullify any and all pain of any kind.
** [[SpringCoil Springlike Limbs]]: Allows user to coil their bones and muscles like springs, giving them heightened resistance to drawback, knock-back, or kickback to any of their attacks. Luz can also launch her limbs outward around 5 feet from her body, and recall them back. It can also be used to jump high altitudes, easily covering small skyscrapers in a single bound.
** [[DeadlyForceField Forcefield Projection]]: This allows Luz to create a near-invincible forcefield in front of her that can withstand almost any kind of attack. However, it can only protect in front of the user but create up 2 of them. Multiple powerful blows will slowly chip away at its absorption, like most absorbing Quirks. Alternatively, Luz can shoot these forcefields at a target, and the more power they have absorbed, the more devastating the blows from the forcefields become in the form of explosions.
** [[NotQuiteFlight Airwalk]]: Gives Luz the ability to float upward infinitely. However, she can't move in any other direction. She can, however, move downward. Propulsion using any other ability can be used to allow her to move in any direction she wishes. But aside from that, it is only used to scale high surfaces.
** [[VictoryByEndurance Stamina Negation:]] A Quirk that allows the user to negate all Stamina depletion. They can never grow tired, although this doesn’t negate the need for sleep.
** [[MultiArmedAndDangerous Multiplier]]: Originally belonging to Derreck, an assassin hired by the Wittebanes, this is the first Quirk Luz steals after the Death Camp. It allows the user to grow multiple arms from their body. She can also merge the many hands to together into GiantHandsOfDoom. Being a power that Shigaraki had when he was alive, he eggs Luz on to take it before she kills the hitman. [[spoiler:It especially comes in good use not long later as it saves her life]].
** [[GravityMaster Zero Gravity]]: This Quirk originally belonged to a girl by the name of Juniper, someone who was caught in the crossfire during the battle between Luz and a Wittebane Assassin. This Quirk allows Luz the ability to remove the gravity of anything that Luz comes into physical contact with using her hands. This Quirk is an exact replica of Ochako Uraraka's Zero Gravity from ''Manga/MyHeroAcademia''.
** [[SpaceMaster Limitless]]: This Quirk originally belonged to [[spoiler: Sophia Humbolt of The Wittebane Church, an assassin sent to kill Luz]]. It allows Luz to create orbs of blue and red energy. Red is a purely offensive move, whereas Blue is mostly defensive, as shone off by its original user. Only one can be used at a time.
** [[TeleportationWithDrawbacks Warping]]: Luz steals this Quirk from Charlie. While useful it has drawbacks as all quirks do. Warping can only bring people to and away from the user, and in the case of the latter, only to people the user knows. It can also cause a severe case of tonsillitis to the user, and the slime produced while using it is noted to stink like hell. However, the user doesn't need to know anyone's exact location to use it.
** [[HavingABlast Bomb Touch]]: This Quirk originally belonged to Riley Stewardson, [[spoiler: Luz's cousin and an assassin for The Wittebane Mega Church]]. The Quirk allows Luz to blow up anyone from the inside out, so long as she feels a deep hatred for them, and so long as she comes into physical contact with them. Otherwise, it is completely useless.


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* SpaceMaster: Limitless is Quirk originally belonged to Sophia Humbolt of The Wittebane Church, [[spoiler:an assassin sent to kill Luz]]. It allows her to create orbs of blue and red energy. Red is a purely offensive move, whereas Blue is mostly defensive, as shone off by its original user. Only one can be used at a time.


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* SpringCoil: Originally belonging to Darwin, "Springlike Limbs" allows user to coil their bones and muscles like springs, giving them heightened resistance to drawback, knock-back, or kickback to any of their attacks. They can also launch her limbs outward around 5 feet from her body, and recall them back. It can also be used to jump high altitudes, easily covering small skyscrapers InASingleBound. [[spoiler:Luz steals this Quirk after [[HeadCrushing killing him.]]


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** The "Super Strength" Quirk originally belonging to Thomas. It gives the user superhuman levels of strength, relative to their own physical body’s strength. The stronger they were before having the Quirk, the stronger they are with the Quirk. This will of course continue to grow as the user becomes stronger, and has no set limit. [[spoiler:This the first Quirk Luz steals from after killing the original via AttackOnTheHeart with VibrationManipulation.]]
** Ronny Armstrong also has a similar Quirk, too.
* SuperToughness: Shock Absorption originally from [[GentleGiant Stanley Richardson]]. This Quirk allows the user to tank great force without any drawback to the person’s physical body in a single blow. However, it can be worn down by the use of repeated, constant action applied at a constant rate, I.E. fire. [[spoiler:Stanley gives his power to Luz out of guilt for not stopping Kennedy murdering their teammates]].


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* TeleportationWithDrawbacks: Warping is a Quirk [[spoiler:Luz steals]] from Charlie. While useful it has drawbacks as all quirks do. Warping can only bring people to and away from the user, and in the case of the latter, only to people the user knows. It can also cause a severe case of tonsillitis to the user, and the slime produced while using it is noted to stink like hell. However, the user doesn't need to know anyone's exact location to use it.


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* VictoryByEndurance: Stamina Negation is Quirk that allows Luz to negate all Stamina depletion, and essentially allow her to do this in her fights. She can never grow tired, although this doesn’t negate the need for sleep.


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* WolverineClaws: Spear Fingers originally belonging to Darlene. A Quirk that allows the user to turn her fingers sharp and pointed like spears, and fire them toward people like extendable pole-arms from a distance of 25 meters. [[spoiler: Luz steals this Quirk before [[YourHeadAsplode killing her]], avenging Julia's murder by her hands.]]
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This fanfic can be read [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/14146275/1/All-For-Luz-The-Owl-House-x-My-Hero-Academia here]] on Platform/FanFictionDotNet, [[https://www.wattpad.com/story/323839388-all-for-luz-the-owl-house-x-mha here]] on Platform/{{Wattpad}}, Quotev [[https://www.quotev.com/story/15248168/All-For-Luz-The-Owl-House-x-My-Hero-Academia/1 here]] and [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/42252129/chapters/106089384 here]] on Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn.

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This fanfic can be read [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/14146275/1/All-For-Luz-The-Owl-House-x-My-Hero-Academia here]] on Platform/FanFictionDotNet, [[https://www.wattpad.com/story/323839388-all-for-luz-the-owl-house-x-mha here]] on Platform/{{Wattpad}}, Quotev [[https://www.quotev.com/story/15248168/All-For-Luz-The-Owl-House-x-My-Hero-Academia/1 here]] and [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/42252129/chapters/106089384 here]] on Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn.
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** AFateWorseThanDeath: Luz believes being rendered brain dead by her PowerParasite Quirk counts as this.

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* YouMonster: Luz sees All For One as this through and through, and there was nothing he could say, do, or change about himself in his [[SpiritAdvisor vestige form]] to make her think otherwise. [[spoiler:The witches on the Boiling Isles don't disagree.]]

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* YouMonster: Luz sees All For One as this through and through, and there was nothing he could say, do, or change about himself in his [[SpiritAdvisor vestige form]] to make her think otherwise. [[spoiler:The [[spoiler:Most of the witches on the Boiling Isles don't disagree.]]
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* CriticalHesitationBlunder: Thomas's moment of indecision whether to be one to kill Luz or not costs him his life.

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* CriticalHesitationBlunder: Thomas's [[spoiler:Thomas's moment of indecision whether to be the one to kill Luz or not costs him his life.life as she strikes first.]]

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* BewareTheNiceOnes: Pastor Domenico is nice man of god, however, the Wittebanes deliberately sending their daughter to their death makes angry enough to ask Luz avenge Julia for him, something the girl is willing to oblige.



* DudeNotFunny: Dr. Rodriquez jokingly calls Luz a weapon of war and SuperSoldier [[spoiler:after talking about footage of her killing twenty people her age in self-defence]]. This didn't make Camila happy in the slightest.



* EvenEvilHasLovedOnes: [[spoiler:Luz notes that the 20 murderous kids were never going to see their parents thanks to her killing them in her rampage.]]



* FreakOut: Not long after she wakes up from her coma, Luz has a panic attack [[spoiler:after having flashbacks of all the horrible things she witnessed at the Death Camp]]. This occurs in front of her distressed mother as she is hurried out of her hospital by the doctors trying to sedate her.



* HalfTheManHeUsedToBe: [[spoiler:Luz narrowly becomes after nearly imploding with the blowback of having too many Quirks, thanks to her HealingFactor]].

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* HalfTheManHeUsedToBe: [[spoiler:Luz narrowly becomes after nearly imploding with the blowback of having too many Quirks, she only survives thanks to her HealingFactor]].



* HeroicBSOD: Camila became shell-shocked when she hears about Luz's experience at the Death Camp.
* HeroicSafeMode: Luz appears to like this in the MentalWorld as she comes to terms with fact [[spoiler:she's a killer now]]. She comes out of it not long after she wakes up and has a panic attack.



* * InternalReveal: In chapter 6, Luz reveals to her team that her Quirk is [[PowerParasite All For One]] and allows her to give and take Quirks from others. They take this better than she expected.

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** In chapter 13, Camila finds out what happened to Luz at summer camp. She doesn't take it well that it was turned into a Death Camp run by her State's governor.
** Pastor Domenico reveals to Luz that Julia's parents disowned her for being a lesbian, much to their disgust.
* ItCanThink: Luz's "Super Regeneration" seemed to know what the doctor's performing surgery on her were doing and avoided getting in our way while healing.



* LetUsNeverSpeakOfThisAgain: Shigaraki pretty much tells Luz this after seeing her cringed reaction for using the phrase "spill the tea".



* LockedOutOfTheLoop: [[spoiler:The Wittebanes made sure their disowned daughter, Julia, knew nothing about their connection with Governor Rodger Maxwell, so that she would die in the Death Camp.]]



** MeaningfulRename: [[spoiler:In chapter 25, :All For One renames Luz Noceda as Toshiko Shigaraki, meaning "Clever Child of Death" due seeing her as a ChildProdigy with his power that has racked up a body count.]].

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** [[spoiler:Julia goes through a posthumous one. Her surname is changed from Wittebane to Delmisso, her mother's maiden name, signalling her parents have disowned her, even after her death.]]
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[[spoiler:In chapter 25, :All For One renames Luz Noceda as Toshiko Shigaraki, meaning "Clever Child of Death" due seeing her as a ChildProdigy with his power that has racked up a body count.]].



* NewsTravelsFast: Camera footage of Luz's RoaringRampageOfRevenge leaked online and has gone viral on many social media websites.



* NoOneCouldSurviveThat: [[spoiler:Everyone has this thought when they witness Luz get blown to pieces... until her HealingFactor kicks in.]]

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* NoOneCouldSurviveThat: NoOneCouldSurviveThat:
** One of the doctors stated that, by all accounts, Luz should be dead after being ripped in half, [[spoiler:including her heart]]. He chalks it up due to her miracle HealingFactor.
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[[spoiler:Everyone has this thought when they witness Luz get blown to pieces... until her HealingFactor kicks in.]]



* NotEnoughToBury: Julia's funeral was a closed casket, for obvious reasons. In fact, it's later revealed that not all the dead kids came back in body bags, but urns because the condition of their bodies was so severe that it wouldn’t have been right to show the parents ''that''.



* OpenMindedParent:
** Despite being a religious woman, Camila didn't have Luz baptized as a baby, much to her own mother's chagrin, because she wanted Luz to make that choice, and not force her to go to church.
** Pastor Domenico is a grandparent version of this. He doesn't discriminate against gay people (even though he admits understand or know much about them.) He also sees children gaining Quirks as a gift from God, with his own grandson being one of them.



* PrematurelyGreyHaired: Luz's hair starts to turn white like Shigaraki's due to the [[DiseaseBleach stress]] and PTSD of the DeadlyGame she survived. [[spoiler:By the end of chapter 17, her hair turns almost completely white]].

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* PrecisionFStrike: The Pastor refers to Julia's AbusiveParents as "damnable bastards".
* PrematurelyGreyHaired: Luz's hair starts to turn white like Shigaraki's due to the [[DiseaseBleach stress]] and PTSD of the DeadlyGame she survived. [[spoiler:By the end of chapter 17, 23, her hair turns almost completely white]].


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** Pastor Domenico informs Luz that the Wittebanes not only knew about the DeadlyGame that Governor Maxwell set up but actively helped him and plan to bring back their witch hunting ways across the country, using superhumans as scapegoats.
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** Julia Wittebane's whole community abandoned her to the streets all because she awakened a superpower.

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* FanArt: One of the reviewers, CMR Rosa, commissioned a whole ''gallery folder'' for character pictures from this story [[https://www.deviantart.com/crsto20/gallery/90584648/fanfiction-all-for-luz here]].
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** [[spoiler: Surprisingly, Odalia seems a much more better parent than her real life counterpart, caring for Amity’s health]].

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** [[spoiler: Surprisingly, Odalia seems a much more better parent than her real life counterpart, caring for Amity’s mental and emotional health]].

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* AdaptationalNiceGirl: [[spoiler: Surprisingly, Odalia seems a much more better parent than her real life counterpart, caring for Amity’s health]].

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[[spoiler: Surprisingly, Odalia seems a much more better parent than her real life counterpart, caring for Amity’s health]].health]].
** Downplayed for All For One. He claims he locked up his brother not out of cruelty, but to in a misguided attempt to protect him from the outside elements, due to his poor immune system. All For One was genuinely distraught when LaResistance busted him because Yoichi died not long afterwards, due to exposure to the elements and lack of blood clotting. He flat out admits to himself that he didn’t care about the power that claiming One For All would give him, only that it was his brother's Quirk. He also made a genuine effort to comfort Luz when she had an emotional breakdown after the Battle of Gravesfield.
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--> '''[[TheCorruptor Shigaraki]]''': '''''Yes! Noceda, feed your anger! Feed your rage! Allow it to overcome you! Allow your emotions to take center stage! Find those who killed your friends, and do unto them that which they did to you!'''''

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--> '''[[TheCorruptor Shigaraki]]''': '''''Yes! Noceda, feed '''''Yes, Luz! Show them the real you. The one that you had buried for so long! You allowed them to control you for years, allowed them to tell you that you cannot be, or who you want to be! Let that anger boil to the top and flow over! Let it be one with you, let it become you. Unleash it! Unleash your anger! Feed your rage! Allow it to overcome you! Allow your emotions to take center stage! Find true self upon those who killed your friends, that took, and took, and took from you! You are above them all, and will forever be! They toyed with you, made you their plaything, and when they were done playing with you they discarded you and threw you into this camp and left you to rot! I’ve told you this before, so it bears not repeating, but you should not allow them to get away with this! This is all their fault! Let the anger you’ve let sit for years rise. Here, in this domain, you are free to do whatever you please! Do unto them that which what they did to you!'''''you! Show them how they messed up! Show them what happens when you toy with God! Luz Noceda, do what you know you have to, and KILL THEM ALL!'''''
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** When Counsellor Johnson laments that the Death Camp plan isn't right, Governor Maxwell simply just shrugs and tells him what's right and what's wrong doesn't matter in the end, [[MyCountryRightOrWrong when learning how to serve your nation]].

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** When Counsellor Johnson laments that the Death Camp plan EvilPlan isn't right, Governor Maxwell simply just shrugs and tells him what's right and what's wrong doesn't matter in the end, [[MyCountryRightOrWrong when learning how to serve your nation]].
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[[caption-width-right:400:''"A power of The Chosen One… yeah, if they’re a villain…"'']]

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