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Set presumably after the events of ''RWBY'', Yang finds herself in the ''Warhammer 40,000'' universe.
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Set presumably after the events of ''RWBY'', Yang Xiao Long finds herself in the ''Warhammer 40,000'' universe.
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* GorgeousGorgon: Magos Ada Prexius. A stunning beauty of the Raven Hair, Ivory Skin-type, with needle hands and mecha-centipede legs. Yang's narration has rather nice things to say about her until she sees the RedRightHand that comes part and parcel with being of the Adeptus Mechanicus.
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* GorgeousGorgon: Magos Ada Prexius. A stunning beauty of the [[RavenHairIvorySkin Raven Hair, Hair Ivory Skin-type, Skin-type]], with needle hands and mecha-centipede legs. Yang's narration has rather nice things to say about her until she sees the RedRightHand that comes part and parcel with being of the Adeptus Mechanicus.
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Up To Eleven is being dewicked.
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* BloodKnight: Yang as per canon. Her reaction to seeing four [[SuperSoldier traitor marines]] is to grin and challenge them all to a fight.
** Turned UpToEleven when [[spoiler:she falls to Chaos in Chapter 41 and, under Khorne's influence, massacre an entire Chaos Cultist stronghold by herself, [[BloodKnight enjoying it the whole time]].]]
** Turned UpToEleven when [[spoiler:she falls to Chaos in Chapter 41 and, under Khorne's influence, massacre an entire Chaos Cultist stronghold by herself, [[BloodKnight enjoying it the whole time]].]]
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* BloodKnight: Yang as per canon. Her reaction to seeing four [[SuperSoldier traitor marines]] is to grin and challenge them all to a fight.
**fight. Turned UpToEleven up to eleven when [[spoiler:she falls to Chaos in Chapter 41 and, under Khorne's influence, massacre an entire Chaos Cultist stronghold by herself, [[BloodKnight enjoying it the whole time]].]]
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** Chapter 10:[[spoiler:Yang is betrayed by her friend Ros who accuses her of being a Psyker. To clear her name, Yang surrenders herself to the The Lady Inquisitor, who turns out to be none other than ''Weiss Schnee''!]]
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** Chapter 10:[[spoiler:Yang is betrayed by her friend Ros who accuses her of being a Psyker. To clear her name, Yang surrenders herself to the The Lady Inquisitor, who turns out to be none other than ''Weiss Schnee''!]]
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** While Yang has managed to acclimate to the the Woadian regiment rather well, she's still put off about the extreme xenophobia. She's learned not to voice that out loud, though.
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** While Yang has managed to acclimate to the the Woadian regiment rather well, she's still put off about the extreme xenophobia. She's learned not to voice that out loud, though.
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* RousingSpeech: Ros gives one before the first battle the Imperial Gaurd participates. While Yang is impressed she managed to boost the morale of the regiment, she is disturbed at how xenophobic it is.
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* RousingSpeech: Ros gives one before the first battle the Imperial Gaurd Guard participates. While Yang is impressed she managed to boost the morale of the regiment, she is disturbed at how xenophobic it is.
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''A World Of Bloody Evolution'' is a ''WebAnimation/{{RWBY}}''/''TabletopGame/Warhammer40000'' crossover fanfic by Red Rum Sprinkles.
Set presumably after the events of RWBY, Yang finds herself in the Warhammer 40,000 Universe.
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''A World Of of Bloody Evolution'' is a ''WebAnimation/{{RWBY}}''/''TabletopGame/Warhammer40000'' crossover fanfic by Red Rum Sprinkles.
Set presumably after the events ofRWBY, ''RWBY'', Yang finds herself in the Warhammer 40,000 Universe.
''Warhammer 40,000'' universe.
Set presumably after the events of
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* ActionGirl: Yang, obviously, as well as Ros and all the other members of the Imperial Guard. The Lady Inquisitor is one too.
* TheAlcoholic
** Yang becomes this after Ruby died. [[spoiler:She gets killed for it.]]
* TheAlcoholic
** Yang becomes this after Ruby died. [[spoiler:She gets killed for it.]]
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** Then this becomes subverted [[spoiler:when Weiss meets Ohma, who is so impossibly beautiful that Weiss can't help but be entranced by her and mentally noted how soft she is, her generous hips and her long legs, and constantly getting caught in her eyes]].
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** Then this becomes subverted [[spoiler:when Weiss meets Ohma, who is so impossibly beautiful that Weiss can't help but be entranced by her and mentally noted how soft she is, her generous hips and hips, heaving breasts covered by GodivaHair, her long legs, and constantly getting caught in her eyes]].
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* ClarkesThirdLaw: [[spoiler:Ohma even quotes the very line in regards to what she can do, such as being able to have a psychic conversation with Weiss despite being ''a machine''. And it isn't an exaggeration: compared to her, other STCs look like the early ''Mechanicus'']].
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* ClarkesThirdLaw: [[spoiler:Ohma even quotes the very line in regards to what she can do, such as being able to have a psychic conversation with Weiss despite being ''a machine''. And it isn't an exaggeration: compared to her, other STCs [=STCs=] look like the early ''Mechanicus'']].
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** Chapter 90 and 92: [[spoiler:The Chariot is finally found, and Weiss discovers that it isn't a Capital ship-building STC; It's an ''Artificial Intelligence'' created to combat ''the Men of Iron''. Furthermore, it turns out that it is also an STC, but is far better than a fully intact STC: it is ''the final Standard Template Construct'', created at the end of the Men of Iron uprising, with ''millennia'' more technological development than the other earlier, "primitive" STCs, in addition to technology invented during the War against the Men of Iron. And it is capable of manifesting ''any of these technology''.]]
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** Chapter 90 and 92: [[spoiler:The Chariot is finally found, and Weiss discovers that it isn't a Capital ship-building STC; [=STC=]; It's an ''Artificial Intelligence'' created to combat ''the Men of Iron''. Furthermore, it turns out that it is also an STC, [=STC=], but is far better than a fully intact STC: [=STC=]: it is ''the final Standard Template Construct'', created at the end of the Men of Iron uprising, with ''millennia'' more technological development than the other earlier, "primitive" STCs, [=STCs=], in addition to technology invented during the War against the Men of Iron. And it is capable of manifesting ''any of these technology''.]]
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* ClarkesThirdLaw: [[spoiler:Ohma even quotes the very line in regards to what she can do, such as being able to have a psychic conversation with Weiss despite being ''a machine''. And it isn't an exaggeration: compared to her, other STCs look like the early ''Mechanicus'']].
* HideYourOtherness: Knowing that the Cult Mechanicus will sooner declare her Heretek and destroy her then actually accept her, [[spoiler:Ohma decides to disguise her moblie terminal body as a false aspirant under Magos Tyrham to let her explore the galaxy and learn all she can about the Imperium, so that when she returns to her main body she will better know how to help Humanity. She choses the name Artisan Inferiosa Ohma Polendina]].
* HunterOfHisOwnKind: [[spoiler:Japheth-Series-Zero-One-Omega, also know as Ohma, the [[RedBaron final Standard Template Construct]]. She is an AI with the knowledge of all technology from the Dark Age of Technology that was created to combat the Men of Iron. And '''she won'''.]]
* IdenticalStranger: [[spoiler:Ohma's terminal avatar looks incredibly like Penny Polendina, right down to her orange hair, bright green eyes, and freckled face on impossibly realistic synthskin. Ohma herself states that, though she has no evidence of Penny being involved in her construction, seeing the resemblance to Penny in Weiss' memories and the pattern of Humans from Remnant ending up in the 40K universe, she doesn't dismiss the probability.]]
* HunterOfHisOwnKind: [[spoiler:Japheth-Series-Zero-One-Omega, also know as Ohma, the [[RedBaron final Standard Template Construct]]. She is an AI with the knowledge of all technology from the Dark Age of Technology that was created to combat the Men of Iron. And '''she won'''.]]
* IdenticalStranger: [[spoiler:Ohma's terminal avatar looks incredibly like Penny Polendina, right down to her orange hair, bright green eyes, and freckled face on impossibly realistic synthskin. Ohma herself states that, though she has no evidence of Penny being involved in her construction, seeing the resemblance to Penny in Weiss' memories and the pattern of Humans from Remnant ending up in the 40K universe, she doesn't dismiss the probability.]]
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* OddFriendship: Yang, the thrill-seeking BloodKnight, and Amat, the stoic [[ColdSniper Vindicare Assassin]]. Even when he explains that his purpose is to kill her should she fall to Chaos, she's surprisingly chill about the whole thing and proceeds to interact with him. [[spoiler:Indeed, they become closer after he actually shoots her due to her nearly going over due to the Dark Eldar attack, particularly when she starts sharing her food after finding out that he's never eaten anything other than protein gel his whole life.]]
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* OddFriendship: Yang, the thrill-seeking BloodKnight, and Amat, the stoic [[ColdSniper Vindicare Assassin]]. Even when he explains that his purpose is to kill her should she fall to Chaos, she's surprisingly chill about the whole thing and proceeds to interact with him. [[spoiler:Indeed, they become closer after he actually shoots her due to her nearly going over due to the Dark Eldar attack, particularly when she starts sharing her food after finding out that he's never eaten anything other than protein gel his whole life. She eventually confesses feelings for him and they become a couple.]]
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* SingleTargetSexuality: [[spoiler:[[http://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/posts/3384114 By word of God]], Weiss is ''Rosesexual''.]]
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* SingleTargetSexuality: SingleTargetSexuality:
** [[spoiler:[[http://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/posts/3384114 By word of God]], Weiss is ''Rosesexual''.]]]]
** Then this becomes subverted [[spoiler:when Weiss meets Ohma, who is so impossibly beautiful that Weiss can't help but be entranced by her and mentally noted how soft she is, her generous hips and her long legs, and constantly getting caught in her eyes]].
** [[spoiler:[[http://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/posts/3384114 By word of God]], Weiss is ''Rosesexual''.
** Then this becomes subverted [[spoiler:when Weiss meets Ohma, who is so impossibly beautiful that Weiss can't help but be entranced by her and mentally noted how soft she is, her generous hips and her long legs, and constantly getting caught in her eyes]].
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** Chapter 55: [[spoiler:The Chariot of Salvation Josephus is searching for is an intact Standard Template Construct capable of building capitol warships of a higher technology tier than anything the Imperium currently has. Additionally, the fate of the galaxy is tied to Yang, and she needs go to the Black Library.]]
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** Chapter 55: [[spoiler:The Chariot of Salvation Josephus is searching for is an intact Standard Template Construct capable of building capitol Capital warships of a higher technology tier such advanced technolgy than anything the Imperium currently has.has or has knowledge about from the Dark Age of Technology. Additionally, the fate of the galaxy is tied to Yang, and she needs go to the Black Library.]]
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** Chapter 90 and 92: [[spoiler:The Chariot is finally found, and Weiss discovers that it isn't a Capital ship-building STC; It's an ''Artificial Intelligence'' created to combat ''the Men of Iron''. Furthermore, it turns out that it is also an STC, but is far better than a fully intact STC: it is ''the final Standard Template Construct'', created at the end of the Men of Iron uprising, with ''millennia'' more technological development than the other earlier, "primitive" STCs, in addition to technology invented during the War against the Men of Iron. And it is capable of manifesting ''any of these technology''.]]
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''A World Of Bloody Evolution'' is a WebAnimation/{{RWBY}}/TabletopGame/{{Warhammer40000}} crossover fanfic by Red Rum Sprinkles.
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''A World Of Bloody Evolution'' is a WebAnimation/{{RWBY}}/TabletopGame/{{Warhammer40000}} ''WebAnimation/{{RWBY}}''/''TabletopGame/Warhammer40000'' crossover fanfic by Red Rum Sprinkles.Sprinkles.
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The fanfic can read [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10855163/1/ here]], [[http://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/a-world-of-bloody-evolution-rwby-warhammer40k.323170/ here]] and [[http://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/a-world-of-bloody-evolution-rwbyxwarhammer40k.13259/ here]]
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The fanfic can read in [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10855163/1/ here]], FF.net]], [[http://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/a-world-of-bloody-evolution-rwby-warhammer40k.323170/ here]] Space Battles]] and [[http://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/a-world-of-bloody-evolution-rwbyxwarhammer40k.13259/ here]]
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Dewicking per TRS decision.
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* BiTheWay: Yang has apparently slept with both men and women, though she prefers men.
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* NecessaryEvil: NecessarilyEvil:
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** Chapter 88: [[spoiler: During the final battle against Josephus, Yang becomes a Living Saint]].
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* CanonDiscontinuity: As this fanfic was written before Volume 3 of WebAnimation/{{RWBY}} aired, the events that lead to this fanfic are different from canon, such as [[spoiler:Pyrrha's death happening several years later than in the series, and Yang not losing her right arm to Adam.]]
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* CanonDiscontinuity: As CanonDiscontinuity:
**As this fanfic was written before Volume 3 of WebAnimation/{{RWBY}} aired, the events that lead to this fanfic are different from canon, such as [[spoiler:Pyrrha's death happening several years later than in the series, and Yang not losing her right arm to Adam.]]]]
**Additionally, the author began the story back in 2014, back before the Gathering Storm event progressed the storyline of the 40k universe. The author has stated that they're not following newer canon if it interferes with the story they're telling
**As this fanfic was written before Volume 3 of WebAnimation/{{RWBY}} aired, the events that lead to this fanfic are different from canon, such as [[spoiler:Pyrrha's death happening several years later than in the series, and Yang not losing her right arm to Adam.
**Additionally, the author began the story back in 2014, back before the Gathering Storm event progressed the storyline of the 40k universe. The author has stated that they're not following newer canon if it interferes with the story they're telling
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* PatronSaint: [[spoiler: During her battle with Josephus on White Horses, Yang reaches out to the Emperor and is granted Sainthood by him, allowing her to kill Josephus and is venerated as a Living Saint by the Imperial forces on the planet. She also [[HotWings gains wings made of warpflame]] and the ability to breathe fire.]]
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* HeelFaceTurn: The Boy King of Shao-la's uncle, [[spoiler:the Regent of Shao-la]], first resented his nephew for being chosen as king instead of him and ploted to assassinate him, but after the Boy King escaped several assassinations attempt, he came to the conclusion that his nephew was sent by the God-Emperor and decided to loyally serves him, looking at his past actions with shame. [[spoiler:He's the one that discovered that the Boy King was possessed by Chaos and hid his journal with incriminating evidence for the Lady Inquisitor to find before the now corrupted Boy Kind had him executed for treason.]]
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* HeelFaceTurn: The Boy King of Shao-la's uncle, [[spoiler:the Regent of Shao-la]], first resented his nephew for being chosen as king instead of him and ploted to assassinate him, but after the Boy King escaped several assassinations attempt, he came to the conclusion that his nephew was sent by the God-Emperor and decided to loyally serves him, looking at his past actions with shame. [[spoiler:He's the one that discovered that the Boy King was possessed by Chaos and hid his journal with incriminating evidence for the Lady Inquisitor to find before the now corrupted Boy Kind King had him executed for treason.]]
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* CurbStompBattle: Yang regularly dishes these out to any enemy who doesn't have Aura (which translates to almost everyone in the galaxy), but finds herself on the receiving end courtesy of a [[BossInMookClothing Rubric Marine.]]
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* CurbStompBattle: Yang regularly dishes these out to any enemy who doesn't have Aura (which translates to almost everyone in the galaxy), but finds herself on the receiving end courtesy of a [[BossInMookClothing Rubric Marine.]]
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** Chapter 73: [[spoiler: Just as Yang and her allies are about to leave the Black Library with Pyrrha and her Eldar husband along with the location of Chariot of Salvation, Ahriman finally discovers the Black Library]].
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** [[spoiler:Ros' reporting of Yang to The Lady Inquisitor]]. They're friends, but letting an unknowing and unprepared psyker [[spoiler:,which we learn Yang actually ''is'',]] just waltz around like that is just asking the Warp to eat you and the planet you're on.
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** [[spoiler:Ros' reporting of Yang to The Lady Inquisitor]]. They're friends, but letting an unknowing and unprepared psyker [[spoiler:,which [[spoiler: -- which we learn Yang actually ''is'',]] ''is'' -- ]] just waltz around like that is just asking the Warp to eat you and the planet you're on.
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** Chera, one of the Lady Inquisitor's EliteMooks, [[spoiler:finds it hard to believe that the world of Remnant where Weiss and Yang are from can be strong and peaceful despite the wolrd is located in a Chaos free universe and doesn't worships the God Emperor]].
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** Chera, one of the Lady Inquisitor's EliteMooks, [[spoiler:finds it hard to believe that the world of Remnant where Weiss and Yang are from can be located in a Chaos-free universe and strong and peaceful despite not worshipping the wolrd is located in a Chaos free universe and doesn't worships the God Emperor]].God-Emperor]].
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* HeroicSacrifice: The native guard of Shao-La, despite going up against forces that out number and out-tech them, hold the gate long enough for the Imperial Guard to reform. They do so with pride and a song on their lips.
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** The native guard of Shao-La, despite going up against forces thatout number outnumber and out-tech them, hold the gate long enough for the Imperial Guard to reform. They do so with pride and a song on their lips.
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** [[spoiler:Ira, Weiss' acolyte, sacrifices his own life to protect Weiss from a Culexus assassin]].
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** Chapter 67: [[spoiler: Yang, Amat, Weiss's Kasrkin bodyguards and their Eldar allies finally reach the Black Library and an attempt is made on Weiss by a Culexus assassin who is killed by the sacrifice of several Sisters of Battle and Weiss's apprentice Ira]].
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* CurbStompBattle: Yang regularly dishes these out to any enemy who doesn't have Aura, but finds herself on the receiving end courtesy of a [[BossInMookClothing Rubric Marine.]]
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* PunchPunchPunchUhOh: During an assault boarding of a Chaos-controlled frigate, Yang impales a Rubric Marine with her Power Sword. It replies by unleashing a CurbStompBattle on her.
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'''A World Of Bloody Evolution''' is a WebAnimation/{{RWBY}}/TabletopGame/{{Warhammer40000}} crossover fanfic by Red Rum Sprinkles.
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