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* ContinuityPorn: The firs half of the fic is a detailed novelization of Carol Danvers' life, covering the first three deaces of existence of the character and delving deeply into the ''Marvel Universe'' mythos.
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* ContinuityPorn: The firs first half of the fic is a detailed novelization novelisation of Carol Danvers' life, covering the first three deaces of existence decades of the character character's history and delving deeply into the ''Marvel Universe'' mythos.
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* CutHisHeartOutWithASpoon: Deathbird's threats usually include promises of ripping off eyes, tongue or face.
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* CutHisHeartOutWithASpoon: Deathbird's threats usually include promises of ripping off eyes, tongue tongues or face.faces.
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* EasilyForgiven: Carol finds galling that everything Rogue had to do to be forgiven by her friends was to knock on the X-Mansion's door and say she was sorry.
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* EasilyForgiven: Carol finds it galling that everything Rogue had to do to be forgiven by her friends was to knock on the X-Mansion's door and say she was sorry.
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* HeroesWantRedHeads: As she is visited by Cyclops and Phoenix after being hospitalized, Carol notes the only women Scott Summers ever got married to were redheads.
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* InterspeciesRomance: Warbird (human, since this was written prior to the half-Kree retcon) and Gladiator (Shi'ar)… which, considering who [[ComicBook/{{Supergirl}} both]] [[Franchise/{{Superman}} characters]] are expies from, is ironic.
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* InterspeciesRomance: Warbird (human, since this was written prior to the half-Kree retcon) and Gladiator (Shi'ar)… which, considering who [[ComicBook/{{Supergirl}} both]] [[Franchise/{{Superman}} [[ComicBook/{{Superman}} characters]] are expies from, is ironic.
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* NinetiesAntiHero: Lampshaded by Captain America, who after ''ComicBook/OperationGalacticStorm'' -a ''Franchise/TheAvengers'' storyline published in 1992- expresses concern about the rise of a new breed of heroes who appear completely unconcerned with killing.
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* NinetiesAntiHero: Lampshaded by Captain America, who after ''ComicBook/OperationGalacticStorm'' -a ''Franchise/TheAvengers'' ''ComicBook/TheAvengers'' storyline published in 1992- expresses concern about the rise of a new breed of heroes who appear completely unconcerned with killing.
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* ReformedButRejected: The Franchise/XMen reluctantly agree to give just-reformed ComicBook/{{Rogue}} a chance, but Carol refuses to. It took a long while for Carol to accept Rogue wasn't the villain who ruined her life anymore, and even so Carol knew they would never be close.
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* ReformedButRejected: The Franchise/XMen ComicBook/XMen reluctantly agree to give just-reformed ComicBook/{{Rogue}} a chance, but Carol refuses to. It took a long while for Carol to accept Rogue wasn't the villain who ruined her life anymore, and even so Carol knew they would never be close.
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''A Prize for Three Empires'' is a novelization of the life of ComicBook/CarolDanvers before her transformation into the new ''ComicBook/{{CaptainMarvel|MarvelComics}}'', written by Creator/{{DarkMark}}.
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''A Prize for Three Empires'' is a novelization of the life of ComicBook/CarolDanvers before her transformation into the new ''ComicBook/{{CaptainMarvel|MarvelComics}}'', ''ComicBook/{{Captain Marvel|MarvelComics}}'', written by Creator/{{DarkMark}}.
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''A Prize for Three Empires'' is a novelization of the life of ComicBook/CarolDanvers before her transformation into the new ''ComicBook/CaptainMarvel|MarvelComics'', written by Creator/{{DarkMark}}.
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''A Prize for Three Empires'' is a novelization of the life of ComicBook/CarolDanvers before her transformation into the new ''ComicBook/CaptainMarvel|MarvelComics'', ''ComicBook/{{CaptainMarvel|MarvelComics}}'', written by Creator/{{DarkMark}}.
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''A Prize for Three Empires'' is a novelization of the life of ComicBook/CarolDanvers before her transformation into the new ''ComicBook/{{CaptainMarvel|MarvelComics}}'', written by Creator/{{DarkMark}}.
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''A Prize for Three Empires'' is a novelization of the life of ComicBook/CarolDanvers before her transformation into the new ''ComicBook/{{CaptainMarvel|MarvelComics}}'', ''ComicBook/CaptainMarvel|MarvelComics'', written by Creator/{{DarkMark}}.
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* ArmorPiercingSlap: Carol slaps Thor when he, still unaware that Carol was raped, tries to commiserate with her for Marcus's death.
-->Thor laid a surprisingly gentle hand on her bare shoulder, his palm callused from the use of his hammer. "Be not ashamed of thy womanly tears, Carol," he said. "Thou hast lost the one thou didst love."\\
"NO!" she shouted, and whirled and slapped the god of thunder on his cheek. He gaped, uncomprehending.
-->Thor laid a surprisingly gentle hand on her bare shoulder, his palm callused from the use of his hammer. "Be not ashamed of thy womanly tears, Carol," he said. "Thou hast lost the one thou didst love."\\
"NO!" she shouted, and whirled and slapped the god of thunder on his cheek. He gaped, uncomprehending.
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* AdultFear: Joe and Marie know their daughter Carol leads a dangerous life and may get killed at any time. They also know she has been raped and mind-wiped at least once.
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''A Prize for Three Empires'' is a novelization of the life of ComicBook/CarolDanvers before her transformation into the new ''ComicBook/CaptainMarvel'', written by Creator/{{DarkMark}}.
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''A Prize for Three Empires'' is a novelization of the life of ComicBook/CarolDanvers before her transformation into the new ''ComicBook/CaptainMarvel'', ''ComicBook/{{CaptainMarvel|MarvelComics}}'', written by Creator/{{DarkMark}}.
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Dark Mark has also written ''Fanfic/HellsisterTrilogy'', ''Fanfic/KaraOfRokyn'', ''Fanfic/AVeryKaraChristmas'', ''Fanfic/AForceOfFour'', ''Fanfic/SupermanOf2499TheGreatConfrontation'', ''Fanfic/SupermanAndMan'', ''Fanfic/DanceWithTheDemons'', ''Fanfic/WithThisRingGreenLantern'', ''Fanfic/FuneralForAFlash'', ''Fanfic/TheVampireOfSteel'', ''Fanfic/TheUnfantasticAdventuresOfBizarroNo1'', ''Fanfic/HereThereBeMonsters'', ''Fanfic/XMen1970'', ''Fanfic/{{FIRE}}'', ''Fanfic/DevilsDiary'', ''Fanfic/EverybodysGottaLeaveSometime'' and ''Fanfic/MaybeTheLastArchieStory''.
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Dark Mark has also written ''Fanfic/HellsisterTrilogy'', ''Fanfic/KaraOfRokyn'', ''Fanfic/AVeryKaraChristmas'', ''Fanfic/AForceOfFour'', ''Fanfic/SupermanOf2499TheGreatConfrontation'', ''Fanfic/SupermanAndMan'', ''Fanfic/DanceWithTheDemons'', ''Fanfic/WithThisRingGreenLantern'', ''Fanfic/FuneralForAFlash'', ''Fanfic/TheVampireOfSteel'', ''Fanfic/TheUnfantasticAdventuresOfBizarroNo1'', ''Fanfic/HereThereBeMonsters'', ''Fanfic/XMen1970'', ''Fanfic/{{FIRE}}'', ''[[Fanfic/FireDarkMark FIRE!]]'', ''Fanfic/DevilsDiary'', ''Fanfic/EverybodysGottaLeaveSometime'' and ''Fanfic/MaybeTheLastArchieStory''.
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''A Prize for Three Empires'' is a novelization of the life of ComicBook/CarolDanvers before her transformation into the new ''ComicBook/CaptainMarvel'', written by Dark Mark.
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''A Prize for Three Empires'' is a novelization of the life of ComicBook/CarolDanvers before her transformation into the new ''ComicBook/CaptainMarvel'', written by Dark Mark.
Creator/{{DarkMark}}.
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Dark Mark has also written ''Fanfic/HellsisterTrilogy'', ''Fanfic/KaraOfRokyn'', ''Fanfic/AForceOfFour'', ''Fanfic/SupermanOf2499TheGreatConfrontation'', ''Fanfic/SupermanAndMan'', ''Fanfic/DanceWithTheDemons'', ''Fanfic/WithThisRingGreenLantern'', ''Fanfic/FuneralForAFlash'', ''Fanfic/TheVampireOfSteel'', ''Fanfic/TheUnfantasticAdventuresOfBizarroNo1'', ''Fanfic/HereThereBeMonsters'', ''Fanfic/XMen1970'', ''Fanfic/{{FIRE}}'', ''Fanfic/DevilsDiary'', ''Fanfic/EverybodysGottaLeaveSometime'' and ''Fanfic/MaybeTheLastArchieStory''.
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Dark Mark has also written ''Fanfic/HellsisterTrilogy'', ''Fanfic/KaraOfRokyn'', ''Fanfic/AVeryKaraChristmas'', ''Fanfic/AForceOfFour'', ''Fanfic/SupermanOf2499TheGreatConfrontation'', ''Fanfic/SupermanAndMan'', ''Fanfic/DanceWithTheDemons'', ''Fanfic/WithThisRingGreenLantern'', ''Fanfic/FuneralForAFlash'', ''Fanfic/TheVampireOfSteel'', ''Fanfic/TheUnfantasticAdventuresOfBizarroNo1'', ''Fanfic/HereThereBeMonsters'', ''Fanfic/XMen1970'', ''Fanfic/{{FIRE}}'', ''Fanfic/DevilsDiary'', ''Fanfic/EverybodysGottaLeaveSometime'' and ''Fanfic/MaybeTheLastArchieStory''.