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* ArtificialFamilyMember: Eien sees all of her creations as her children, and they see her as their mother.
* ArtificialHumans: Sinatra is an artificial organic entity created by Eien after she studied the genetic code of the Orks and Eldars with the goal of creating her own species capable of manipulating warp energy on her terms while still maintaining a connection to the Yggdrasil Network.

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* ArtificialFamilyMember: Eien sees all of her creations as her children, and in turn they see her as their mother.
* ArtificialHumans: Sinatra is an artificial organic entity created by Eien after she studied the genetic code of the Orks and Eldars Aeldari with the goal of creating her own species capable of manipulating warp energy on her terms while still maintaining a connection to the Yggdrasil Network.



* TheAssimilator: Any technology assimilated by her goo will allow Eien to recreate it and attempt to make it more efficient than the original.

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* TheAssimilator: Any technology assimilated by her goo will allow Eien to recreate it and even attempt to make it more efficient than the original.



* BenevolentAI: While Eien is technically herself the BrainUploading of a “real-life” human into the Yggdrasil Network, she herself more or less considers herself to be an [=A.I.=] along with having others treat herself as such in the story. She is also both the story’s heroine and BigGood.

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* BenevolentAI: While Eien is technically herself the BrainUploading of a “real-life” human into the Yggdrasil Network, she herself more or less considers herself to be an [=A.I.=] along with having others treat herself her as such in the story. She Eien is also both the story’s heroine and BigGood.



* BewareTheSuperman: A recurrent theme in the story is Inquisitor Thrax, Captain Titus and the other members of the Imperial forces being repeatedly terrified by Eien’s exponentially increasing strength, intelligence, and power. Titus himself even shudders when contemplating the sheer devastation Eien could unleash if she went up against the forces of the Imperium, with him even noting that calling it anything other than [[CurbStompBattle “wholesale slaughter”]] would be downright disingenuous.

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* BewareTheSuperman: A recurrent theme in the story is Inquisitor Thrax, Captain Titus and the other members of the Imperial forces being repeatedly terrified by Eien’s exponentially increasing strength, intelligence, strength and power. intelligence. Titus himself even shudders when contemplating the sheer devastation Eien could unleash if she went up against the forces of the Imperium, with him even noting that calling it the inevitable result anything other than [[CurbStompBattle “wholesale slaughter”]] would be downright disingenuous.



** More significantly, Eien's Siphons can consume Warp energy and convert it into mass to be integrated into the Yggdrasil Network, which Eien eventually realizes can be used to effectively wipe a Warp entity "stuck" in realspace from existence, with her [[spoiler:specifically using both her Siphons and the Khalkotauroi to ''wipe a Greater Daemon of Slannesh from reality'']].

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** More significantly, Eien's Siphons can consume Warp energy and convert it into mass to be integrated into the Yggdrasil Network, which Eien eventually realizes can be used to effectively wipe erase a Warp entity "stuck" in realspace from existence, with her [[spoiler:specifically using both her Siphons and the Khalkotauroi to ''wipe a Greater Daemon of Slannesh from reality'']].




* DramaPreservingHandicap: To prevent Eien from simply curbstomping all of her opponents effortlessly, here it's made clear that while her Mother Goo forms ''can'' assimilate any form of matter into themselves to create more weapons and attack forms, assimilating either non-metals or non-carbon-based lifeforms are far less efficient in terms of production, helping limit Eien's mass economy (as an example, WordOfGod has claimed that Eien consuming a tall, healthy tree would only provide enough mass for just the ''head'' of a Goblin chassis). Furthermore, her nanites can still be outright destroyed (primarily with extreme heat/cold) unless sufficiently protected.
* EldritchLocation: The Yggdrasil Network, which Eien describes as basically being an analogue to the Immaterium for artificial intelligences. Most notably, the Yggdrasil Network is actually in part a PocketDimension, with Eien being able to store the surplus mass created by her goo here for use elsewhere at another time.
* EnemyMine: The main plot of the fanfic revolves around the Imperial forces on the planet of Exalus (both those who are the survivors of the crash of the ''Incorruptus'', Inquisitor Thrax's cruiser, and the planet's pre-existing Imperial Guard regiment & associated forces) forming an alliance with Eien against the Chaos, Ork, Aeldari and Drukhari forces on the planet. [[spoiler:Later on, a successful armistice between the Craftworld Aeldari and Necron forces (specifically the latter under the control of Nemesor Anckm'rab) is established between the Imperials and Eien so the latter two can focus on the Orks, Drukhari and Chaos]].
* EurekaMoment: After repeatedly struggling to grow her mass economy, the Edge Program gives Eien a plan to finally fix it without resorting to strip-mining the entirety of Exalus: Her proteans can brave the oceans of the planet and consume metallic ores & mineral veins on the ocean floor. Just after this, Eien starts to become far more confident in her abilities, the deployment of Goo forces and the experiments she is performing on the Goo itself.

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\n* DramaPreservingHandicap: To prevent Eien from simply curbstomping all of her opponents effortlessly, here it's made clear that while her Mother Goo forms ''can'' assimilate any form of matter into themselves to create more weapons and attack forms, assimilating either non-metals or non-carbon-based lifeforms are far less efficient in terms of production, helping limit Eien's mass economy (as an example, WordOfGod has claimed that Eien consuming a tall, healthy tree would only provide enough mass for just the ''head'' of a Goblin chassis). Furthermore, her nanites can still be outright destroyed (primarily with extreme heat/cold) heat/cold and/or acid) unless sufficiently protected.
* EldritchLocation: The Yggdrasil Network, which Eien describes as basically being an analogue to the Immaterium for artificial intelligences. Most notably, the Yggdrasil Network is actually in part a physical PocketDimension, with Eien being able to store the surplus mass created by her goo here for use elsewhere at another time.
* EnemyMine: The main plot of the fanfic revolves around the Imperial forces on the planet of Exalus (both those who are the survivors of the crash of the ''Incorruptus'', Inquisitor Thrax's cruiser, and the planet's pre-existing Imperial Guard regiment & associated forces) forming an alliance with Eien against the Chaos, Ork, Aeldari and Drukhari forces on the planet. [[spoiler:Later on, a successful armistice between both the Craftworld Aeldari and Necron forces (specifically the latter under the control of Nemesor Anckm'rab) is established between with the Imperials and Eien so the latter two can focus on the Orks, Drukhari and Chaos]].
* EurekaMoment: After repeatedly struggling to grow her mass economy, the Edge Program gives Eien a plan to finally fix it without resorting to strip-mining the entirety of Exalus: Her proteans can brave the oceans of the planet and consume metallic ores & ores, mineral veins and volcanic vents on the ocean floor. Just after Following this, Eien starts to become far more confident in her abilities, the deployment of Goo forces and the experiments she is performing on the Goo itself.



* ExtremeOmnivore: Downplayed; Eien's nanomachine proteans can consume any matter and convert it into mass for use by the Grey Goo, but are most efficient in mass conversion with metals and (to a slightly lesser extent) carbon-based lifeforms. Additionally, through her Siphons Eien can convert energy into more mass for her "children" to use.

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* ExtremeOmnivore: Downplayed; Eien's nanomachine proteans can consume any matter and convert it into mass for use by the Grey Goo, but are most efficient in mass conversion with metals and (to a slightly lesser extent) carbon-based lifeforms. Additionally, through her Her Siphons play this trope straighter in that Eien can convert energy into more mass for her "children" to use.



* GreaterScopeParagon: An ambiguously canon omake where the Grey Goo always existed in the world of Warhammer [=40K=] reveals that the Pathfinder Project is actually responsible for most of the inhabited worlds in the modern Imperium, as when it was exploring the galaxy far prior to the Dark Age of Technology and discovered the Milky Way to have been mostly scoured of life thanks to the lingering after-effects of the War in Heaven, ancient humanity re-tasked the Pathfinder Project to serve as a “sower of life”, terraforming countless once-inhabitable planets back into a life-sustaining state.

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* GreaterScopeParagon: An ambiguously canon omake where the Grey Goo always existed in the world of Warhammer [=40K=] reveals that the Pathfinder Project is actually responsible for most of the inhabited worlds in the modern Imperium, as Imperium. To further clarify, when it was exploring the galaxy far prior to the Dark Age of Technology and discovered the Milky Way to have been mostly scoured of life thanks to the lingering after-effects of the War in Heaven, ancient humanity re-tasked the Pathfinder Project to serve as a “sower of life”, terraforming countless once-inhabitable planets back into a life-sustaining state.



* HumanoidAbomination: Eien is a cluster of humanoid nanomachines with a completely gooey body; after an upgrade she ended up gaining a more solid form along with legs and a completely gray skin tone.

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* HumanoidAbomination: Eien is a cluster of humanoid nanomachines with a completely gooey body; after an upgrade she ended up gaining a more solid form along with actual legs and a completely gray skin tone.



* StatingTheSimpleSolution: At one point, after she learns her Siphons can devour Warp energy & convert it into mass for the Yggdrasil Network, Eien contemplates simply creating a massive rocket laden with Siphons, launching it into geostationary orbit, and then devouring the Warpstorm surrounding the planet from the inside-out so she can just escape and not get bothered by the Imperials & other forces. However, [[SubvertedTrope she then quickly dismisses this option]] upon realizing that this would take an incredibly long period of time where she would have to be constantly guarding the rocket/satellite from enemy attack, and that if she tried to just speed the process along by having the Siphons create more Mother Goos and protean masses to make even more Siphons, the protean masses would be unprotected when created by the Siphons and would quickly freeze into an inoperable state thanks to the vacuum of space.

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* StatingTheSimpleSolution: At one point, after she learns her Siphons can devour Warp energy & convert it into mass for the Yggdrasil Network, Eien contemplates simply creating a massive rocket laden with Siphons, launching it into geostationary orbit, and then devouring the Warpstorm surrounding the planet from the inside-out so she can just escape and not get bothered by the Imperials & other forces. However, [[SubvertedTrope she then then]] [[SimpleSolutionWontWork quickly dismisses this option]] upon realizing that this would take an incredibly long period of time where she would have to be constantly guarding the rocket/satellite from enemy attack, and that if she tried to just speed the process along by having the Siphons create more Mother Goos and protean masses to make even more Siphons, the protean masses would be unprotected when created by the Siphons and would quickly freeze into an inoperable state thanks to the vacuum of space.


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* TaughtByExperience: One of the many advantages of the Yggdrasil Network is that it effectively grants the Goo consciousnesses with RessurectiveImmortality, with then being reborn into new physical forms after their previous deaths. As such, this lets them all become significantly more dangerous over time, as death simply becomes a learning experience and they all gain a better understanding of how to make war.

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** The intelligence of most of Eien's "children" is also a bit of a grey area. While Sinatra and Ronus are clearly both sapient and sentient on par with humans, most of the other Goo consciousnesses simply "sing" to each other and Eien for communication and seem to be on the surface fairly simple-minded, closer to properly trained {{Attack Animal}}s then "people". Complicating matters is how it's implied that they're less "dumb animals" and more, as purely artificial lifeforms, simply operate under BlueAndOrangeMorality. Additionally, there are also minor asides where the Goo consciousnesses seem to showcase higher thinking, most notably in how some of the "smarter" Goo consciousnesses outright worship Eien as a demigoddess.

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** The intelligence of most of Eien's "children" is also a bit of a grey area. While Sinatra and Ronus are clearly both sapient and sentient on par with humans, they are not a good basis for comparison since Ronus was originally a [[ArtificialIntelligence Man of Iron]] with human-level intellect, and Sinatra is an [[ArtificialHumans Artificial Humanoid]] explicitly intended by Eien to have human-level sapience & sentience. Meanwhile, most of the other Goo consciousnesses simply "sing" to each other and Eien for communication and seem to be on the surface fairly simple-minded, closer to properly trained {{Attack Animal}}s then "people". Complicating matters is how it's implied that they're less "dumb animals" and more, as purely artificial lifeforms, simply operate under BlueAndOrangeMorality.BlueAndOrangeMorality and do not see the need to act otherwise. Additionally, there are also minor asides where the Goo consciousnesses seem to showcase higher thinking, most notably in how some of the "smarter" Goo consciousnesses outright worship Eien as a demigoddess.



* ArtificialHumans: Sinatra is an artificial organic entity created by Eien after she studied the genetic code of the Orks and Eldars with the goal of creating her own species capable of manipulating warp energy on her terms.
* AssholeVictim: Invoked by Eien, who notes that the invasive experiments she is performing to explore PsychicPowers are horrifying and barbaric... but as she is performing said experiments on three captured ''[[RapePillageAndBurn Drukhari]]'', she feels absolutely no guilt in inflicting upon them just a shred of the hideous agony they themselves have forced upon countless other innocent people.

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* ArtificialHumans: Sinatra is an artificial organic entity created by Eien after she studied the genetic code of the Orks and Eldars with the goal of creating her own species capable of manipulating warp energy on her terms.
terms while still maintaining a connection to the Yggdrasil Network.
* AssholeVictim: Invoked by Eien, who notes that the invasive experiments she is performing to explore PsychicPowers are horrifying and barbaric... but as she is performing said experiments on three captured ''[[RapePillageAndBurn Drukhari]]'', she feels absolutely no guilt in inflicting upon them just a shred of the hideous agony they themselves have forced upon countless other innocent people.



* BerserkButton: Anything that displeases Eien will enrage her children to the point that the Myrmidons will want to shoot the target for instigating it.

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* BerserkButton: Anything that displeases Eien will enrage her children children, to the point that the Myrmidons will want to shoot the wipe said target for instigating it.from existence.



* BoldlyComing: PlayedForLaughs in a non-canon omake set many years after the end of the fanfic's storyline, where some quick thinking by Titus (along with a telepathic "bit of inspiration" from [[WebAnimation/IfTheEmperorHadATextToSpeechDevice the TTS-Emperor]]) to convince the Goo to leave an Imperial world leads to him and Eien sleeping together. While [[SexualKarma both deeply enjoyed themselves]], the Imperium's dogmatic FantasticRacism and Eien's own ProperlyParanoid mindset leaves the two of them immensely embarrassed & and feeling quite awkward after the whole situation is over and done with... though [[NotSoAboveItAll that doesn't stop them]] [[AllMenArePerverts from eagerly]] [[AllWomenAreLustful going at it again]] after resting up.

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* BoldlyComing: PlayedForLaughs in a non-canon omake set many years after the end of the fanfic's storyline, where some quick thinking by Titus (along with a telepathic "bit of inspiration" from [[WebAnimation/IfTheEmperorHadATextToSpeechDevice the TTS-Emperor]]) to convince the Goo to leave an Imperial world leads to him and Eien sleeping together. While [[SexualKarma both deeply enjoyed themselves]], the Imperium's dogmatic FantasticRacism and Eien's own ProperlyParanoid mindset leaves the two of them immensely embarrassed & and feeling quite awkward after the whole situation is over and done with... though [[NotSoAboveItAll that doesn't stop them]] [[AllMenArePerverts from eagerly]] [[AllWomenAreLustful going at it again]] after resting up.up for a bit.



* GreaterScopeParagon: An ambiguously canon omake where the Grey Goo always existed in the world of Warhammer [=40K=] reveals that the Pathfinder Project is actually responsible for most of the inhabited worlds in the modern Imperium, as when it was exploring the galaxy far prior to the Dark Age of Technology and discovered the Milky Way to have been mostly scoured of life thanks to the lingering after-effects of the War in Heaven, ancient humanity re-tasked the Pathfinder Project to serve as a “sower of life”, terraforming countless once-inhabitable planets back into a life-sustaining state.



* MidSeasonUpgrade: The Edge Program functionally serves as this for the Grey Goo.

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* MidSeasonUpgrade: The Edge Program functionally serves as this for the Grey Goo.Goo, greatly improving the mobility and melee abilities of all gooforms.



* NothingIsScarier: The Shroud in a nutshell.

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* NothingIsScarier: The Shroud in a nutshell. Even when only seeing a hologram of the Shroud, a highly skilled Aeldari psyker finds themselves screaming and almost clawing at their eyes over how the Shroud “looks like nothing”.

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** After undergoing the Edge Program, Eien discovers that her new humanoid form looks quite similar to that of Nikusa from VideoGame/FridayNightFunkin.

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** After undergoing the Edge Program, Eien discovers that her new humanoid form looks quite similar to that of Nikusa from VideoGame/FridayNightFunkin. ''VideoGame/FridayNightFunkin''.
** Eien specifically notes that she is taking inspiration from the Protoss of ''VideoGame/{{Starcraft}}'' fame when designing the [[AlienHair bio-mechanical head extensions]] for Sinatra that will allow her to connect to the Yggdrasil Network.
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** After undergoing the Edge Program, Eien discovers that her new humanoid form looks quite similar to that of Nikusa from VideoGame/FridayNightFunkin.

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%% * BenevolentAI:BenevolentAI: While Eien is technically herself the BrainUploading of a “real-life” human into the Yggdrasil Network, she herself more or less considers herself to be an [=A.I.=] along with having others treat herself as such in the story. She is also both the story’s heroine and BigGood.



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%% * BewareTheSuperman:BewareTheSuperman: A recurrent theme in the story is Inquisitor Thrax, Captain Titus and the other members of the Imperial forces being repeatedly terrified by Eien’s exponentially increasing strength, intelligence, and power. Titus himself even shudders when contemplating the sheer devastation Eien could unleash if she went up against the forces of the Imperium, with him even noting that calling it anything other than [[CurbStompBattle “wholesale slaughter”]] would be downright disingenuous.



* EldritchLocation: The Yggdrasil Network, which Eien describes as basically being an analogue to the Immaterium for artificial intelligences.
* EnemyMine: The main plot of the fanfic revolves around the Imperial forces on the planet of Exalus (both those who are the survivors of the crash of the ''Incorruptus'', Inquisitor Thrax's cruiser, and the planet's pre-existing Imperial Guard regiment & associated forces) forming an alliance with Eien against the Chaos, Ork and Aeldari forces on the planet. [[spoiler:Later on, a successful armistice between the Craftworld Aeldari and Necron forces (specifically the latter under the control of Nemesor Anckm'rab) is established between the Imperials and Eien so the latter two can focus on the Orks, Drukhari and Chaos]].

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* DramaPreservingHandicap: To prevent Eien from simply curbstomping all of her opponents effortlessly, here it's made clear that while her Mother Goo forms ''can'' assimilate any form of matter into themselves to create more weapons and attack forms, assimilating either non-metals or non-carbon-based lifeforms are far less efficient in terms of production, helping limit Eien's mass economy (as an example, WordOfGod has claimed that Eien consuming a tall, healthy tree would only provide enough mass for just the ''head'' of a Goblin chassis). Furthermore, her nanites can still be outright destroyed (primarily with extreme heat/cold) unless sufficiently protected.
* EldritchLocation: The Yggdrasil Network, which Eien describes as basically being an analogue to the Immaterium for artificial intelligences.
intelligences. Most notably, the Yggdrasil Network is actually in part a PocketDimension, with Eien being able to store the surplus mass created by her goo here for use elsewhere at another time.
* EnemyMine: The main plot of the fanfic revolves around the Imperial forces on the planet of Exalus (both those who are the survivors of the crash of the ''Incorruptus'', Inquisitor Thrax's cruiser, and the planet's pre-existing Imperial Guard regiment & associated forces) forming an alliance with Eien against the Chaos, Ork and Ork, Aeldari and Drukhari forces on the planet. [[spoiler:Later on, a successful armistice between the Craftworld Aeldari and Necron forces (specifically the latter under the control of Nemesor Anckm'rab) is established between the Imperials and Eien so the latter two can focus on the Orks, Drukhari and Chaos]].



* IntraFranchiseCrossover: The main Ork forces found across the planet of Exalus are actually led by Grimgor Ironhide, Azhag the Slaughterer, Grom the Paunch, Wurzzag da Great Green Prophet, and Skarsnik -- all of whom are originally from ''[[TabletopGame/{{Warhammer}} Warhammer Fantasy Battles]]'' and have been re-imagined to properly fit into the [=40K=] universe. Various elements from previous ''[=40K=]'' editions are also used here, such as the Squats being a recognized abhuman strain under the authority of the Imperium.

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* IntraFranchiseCrossover: The main Ork forces found across the planet of Exalus are actually led by Grimgor Ironhide, Azhag the Slaughterer, Grom the Paunch, Wurzzag da Great Green Prophet, and Skarsnik -- all of whom are originally from ''[[TabletopGame/{{Warhammer}} Warhammer Fantasy Battles]]'' and have been re-imagined to properly fit into the [=40K=] universe. Various elements from previous ''[=40K=]'' editions are also used here, such as the Squats being a recognized abhuman strain under the authority of the Imperium.



* MindHive: How the Yggdrasil Network seems to work (at least in part).



* NecessaryDrawback: To prevent Eien from simply curbstomping all of her opponents effortlessly, here it's made clear that while her Mother Goo forms ''can'' assimilate any form of matter into themselves to create more weapons and attack forms, assimilating either non-metals or non-carbon-based lifeforms are far less efficient in terms of production, helping limit Eien's mass economy (as an example, WordOfGod has claimed that Eien consuming a tall, healthy tree would only provide enough mass for just the ''head'' of a Goblin chassis). Furthermore, her nanites can still be outright destroyed (primarily with extreme heat/cold) unless sufficiently protected.



* OurSoulsAreDifferent: Within the Yggdrasil Network, new goo consciousnesses are constantly generated that when fully formed become stars that float down from the central 'tree' akin to leaves; when these developed Soul Stars sink into the 'sea' they are actively controlling a morph or frame within the Materium. When Warlock Alune nearly had her soul sucked into a siphon, she glimpsed the network because of that, and has started calling Eien "Ishara Orlosa" (which loosely translates to "Mother of Soul Stars" in the modern Aeldari language).
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* OurSoulsAreDifferent: Within the Yggdrasil Network, new goo consciousnesses are constantly generated that develop their own souls and when fully formed become stars that float down from the central 'tree' akin to leaves; when these developed Soul Stars sink into the 'sea' they are actively controlling a morph or frame within the Materium. When Warlock Alune nearly had her soul sucked into a siphon, she glimpsed the network because of that, and has started calling Eien "Ishara Orlosa" (which loosely translates to "Mother of Soul Stars" in the modern Aeldari language).
%% * OutsideContextProblem:OutsideContextProblem: Eien, the Yggdrasil Network and the Grey Goo as a whole all serve as this to the universe of [=40K=].
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* AmbiguousGenderIdentity: While the fanfic is ostensibly a self-insert, Eien is unsure of what exactly their gender identity was prior to being isekaied into the ''Warhammer 40,000'' universe (with her earlier on musing that she finds it hard to adjust to being referred to as a woman). However, the author of the fic and Eien herself InUniverse (along with all of the other characters) refer to her almost explicitly with feminine pronouns.

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* AmbiguousGenderIdentity: While the fanfic is ostensibly a self-insert, Eien is unsure of what exactly their gender identity was prior to being isekaied "isekaied" into the ''Warhammer 40,000'' universe (with her earlier on musing that she finds it hard to adjust to being referred to as a woman). However, the author of the fic and Eien herself InUniverse (along with all of the other characters) refer to her almost explicitly with feminine pronouns.



** The intelligence of most of Eien’s “children” is also a bit of a grey area. While Sinatra and Ronus are clearly both sapient and sentient on par with humans, most of the other Goo consciousnesses simply “sing” to each other and Eien for communication and seem to be on the surface fairly simple-minded, closer to properly trained {{Attack Animal}}s then “people”. Complicating matters is how it’s implied that they’re less “dumb animals” and more, as purely artificial lifeforms, simply operate under BlueAndOrangeMorality. Additionally, there are also minor asides where the Goo consciousnesses seem to shod higher thinking, most notably in how some of the “smarter” Goo consciousnesses outright worship Eien as a demigoddess.
* AndIMustScream: The Puppeteer Proteans can take control of organic lifeforms, but in the process leave their consciousness completely self-aware and unable to do anything but watch as the Puppeteer controls their body. Eien outright lampshades how horrifying this is, and how much worse it is that she actually isn’t more freaked out about it.
* AntiMagic: Goo Siphons effectively function as this, as they can transmute Warp energy into mass for the Yggdrasil Network. This means using any form of Warp sorcery on a Siphon will only make the rest of the Goo even stronger.
* ArtificialFamilyMember: Eien sees all of her creations as her children and they see her as their mother.

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** The intelligence of most of Eien’s “children” Eien's "children" is also a bit of a grey area. While Sinatra and Ronus are clearly both sapient and sentient on par with humans, most of the other Goo consciousnesses simply “sing” "sing" to each other and Eien for communication and seem to be on the surface fairly simple-minded, closer to properly trained {{Attack Animal}}s then “people”. "people". Complicating matters is how it’s it's implied that they’re they're less “dumb animals” "dumb animals" and more, as purely artificial lifeforms, simply operate under BlueAndOrangeMorality. Additionally, there are also minor asides where the Goo consciousnesses seem to shod showcase higher thinking, most notably in how some of the “smarter” "smarter" Goo consciousnesses outright worship Eien as a demigoddess.
* AndIMustScream: The Puppeteer Proteans can take control of organic lifeforms, but in the process leave their consciousness completely self-aware and unable to do anything but watch as the Puppeteer controls their body. Eien outright lampshades how horrifying this is, and how much worse it is that she actually isn’t ''isn't'' more freaked out about it.
* AntiMagic: Goo Siphons effectively function as this, as they can transmute Warp energy into mass for the Yggdrasil Network.Goo mass. This means using any form of Warp sorcery on a Siphon will only make the rest of the Goo even stronger.
* ArtificialFamilyMember: Eien sees all of her creations as her children children, and they see her as their mother.



* AssholeVictim: Invoked by Eien, who notes that the invasive experiments she is performing to explore PsychicPowers are horrifying and barbaric… but as she is performing said experiments on the Drukhari, she feels absolutely no guilt in inflicting upon them just a shred of the hideous agony they have forced upon countless innocent people.

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* AssholeVictim: Invoked by Eien, who notes that the invasive experiments she is performing to explore PsychicPowers are horrifying and barbaric… barbaric... but as she is performing said experiments on the Drukhari, three captured ''[[RapePillageAndBurn Drukhari]]'', she feels absolutely no guilt in inflicting upon them just a shred of the hideous agony they themselves have forced upon countless other innocent people.



* BoldlyComing: PlayedForLaughs in a non-canon omake set many years after the end of the storyline, where some quick thinking by Titus to convince the Goo to leave an Imperial world leads to him and Eien sleeping together. While [[SexualKarma both deeply enjoyed themselves]], the Imperium's dogmatic FantasticRacism and Eien's own ProperlyParanoid mindset leaves the two of them immensely embarrassed & and feeling quite awkward after the whole situation is over and done with… though [[NotSoAboveItAll that doesn’t stop them]] [[AllMenArePerverts from eagerly]] [[AllWomenAreLustful going at it again]] after resting up.
* BrainUploading: How Eien was essentially added to the Yggdrasil Network, having her consciousness snatched from her life on Earth at the point of death and then being placed as the main governing consciousness of the Pathfinder Project.

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* BoldlyComing: PlayedForLaughs in a non-canon omake set many years after the end of the fanfic's storyline, where some quick thinking by Titus (along with a telepathic "bit of inspiration" from [[WebAnimation/IfTheEmperorHadATextToSpeechDevice the TTS-Emperor]]) to convince the Goo to leave an Imperial world leads to him and Eien sleeping together. While [[SexualKarma both deeply enjoyed themselves]], the Imperium's dogmatic FantasticRacism and Eien's own ProperlyParanoid mindset leaves the two of them immensely embarrassed & and feeling quite awkward after the whole situation is over and done with… with... though [[NotSoAboveItAll that doesn’t doesn't stop them]] [[AllMenArePerverts from eagerly]] [[AllWomenAreLustful going at it again]] after resting up.
* BrainUploading: How Eien was essentially added to the Yggdrasil Network, having her human consciousness snatched from her life on Earth at the point of death and then being placed as the main governing consciousness of the Pathfinder Project.



** More significantly, Eine's Siphons can consume Warp energy and convert it into mass to be integrated into the Yggdrasil Network, which Eien eventually realizes can be used to effectively wipe a Warp entity "stuck" in realspace from existence, with her [[spoiler:specifically using both her Siphons and the Khalkotauroi to ''wipe a Greater Daemon of Slannesh from reality'']].

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** More significantly, Eine's Eien's Siphons can consume Warp energy and convert it into mass to be integrated into the Yggdrasil Network, which Eien eventually realizes can be used to effectively wipe a Warp entity "stuck" in realspace from existence, with her [[spoiler:specifically using both her Siphons and the Khalkotauroi to ''wipe a Greater Daemon of Slannesh from reality'']].



* EurekaMoment: After repeatedly struggling to grow her mass economy, the Edge Program gives Eien a plan to finally fix it without resorting to strip-mining the entirety of Exalus: Her proteans can brave the oceans of the planet and consume metallic ores & mineral veins on the ocean floor. Just after this, Eien starts to become far more confident in both her abilities and the experiments she is performing on the Goo itself.

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* EurekaMoment: After repeatedly struggling to grow her mass economy, the Edge Program gives Eien a plan to finally fix it without resorting to strip-mining the entirety of Exalus: Her proteans can brave the oceans of the planet and consume metallic ores & mineral veins on the ocean floor. Just after this, Eien starts to become far more confident in both her abilities abilities, the deployment of Goo forces and the experiments she is performing on the Goo itself.



* ExtremeOmnivore: Downplayed; Eien’s nanomachine proteans can consume any matter and convert it into mass for use by the Grey Goo, but are most efficient in mass conversion with metals and (to a slightly lesser extent) carbon-based lifeforms. Additionally, through her Siphons Eien can convert energy into more mass for her “children” to use.

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* ExtremeOmnivore: Downplayed; Eien’s Eien's nanomachine proteans can consume any matter and convert it into mass for use by the Grey Goo, but are most efficient in mass conversion with metals and (to a slightly lesser extent) carbon-based lifeforms. Additionally, through her Siphons Eien can convert energy into more mass for her “children” "children" to use.



* GreenSkinnedSpaceBabe: Following the Edge Program's implementation, Eien's default form is that of a gorgeous, curvy young human woman with white hair, silver skin, grey-blue clothing and glowing blue eyes.

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* GreenSkinnedSpaceBabe: Following the Edge Program's implementation, Eien's default form is that of a gorgeous, curvy young human woman with white hair, silver silvery-grey skin, grey-blue clothing and glowing blue eyes.



* HumanoidAbomination: Eien is a cluster of humanoid nanomachines with a completely gooey body after an upgrade she ended up gaining a more solid form along with legs and a completely gray skin tone.

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* HumanoidAbomination: Eien is a cluster of humanoid nanomachines with a completely gooey body body; after an upgrade she ended up gaining a more solid form along with legs and a completely gray skin tone.



** The Khalkotauroi are named after [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Khalkotauroi the Colchis Bulls]] (specifically in reference to how the Khalkotauroi's [[EyeBeam Volcano Lasers]] is based after the Colchis Bulls' fire-breath).

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** The Khalkotauroi are named after [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Khalkotauroi the Colchis Bulls]] (specifically in reference to how the Khalkotauroi's [[EyeBeam Volcano Lasers]] is are based after the Colchis Bulls' fire-breath).



* NecessaryDrawback: To prevent Eien from simply curbstomping all of her opponents effortlessly, here it's made clear that while her Mother Goo forms ''can'' assimilate any form of matter into themselves to create more weapons and attack forms, assimilating either non-metals or non-carbon-based lifeforms are far less efficient in terms of production, helping limit Eien's mass economy (as an example, WordOfGod has claimed that Eien consuming an old, healthy tree would only provide enough mass for just the head of a Goblin chassis). Furthermore, her nanites can still be outright destroyed (primarily with extreme heat/cold) unless sufficiently protected.

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* NecessaryDrawback: To prevent Eien from simply curbstomping all of her opponents effortlessly, here it's made clear that while her Mother Goo forms ''can'' assimilate any form of matter into themselves to create more weapons and attack forms, assimilating either non-metals or non-carbon-based lifeforms are far less efficient in terms of production, helping limit Eien's mass economy (as an example, WordOfGod has claimed that Eien consuming an old, a tall, healthy tree would only provide enough mass for just the head ''head'' of a Goblin chassis). Furthermore, her nanites can still be outright destroyed (primarily with extreme heat/cold) unless sufficiently protected.



* PuppeteerParasite: The Puppeteer Protean is a goo created specifically to control the puppets that form Eien's machine army and are also capable of taking full control of the body of organic beings.

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* PuppeteerParasite: The Puppeteer Protean is a goo created specifically to control the puppets that form the bulk of Eien's new machine army army, and are also capable of taking full control of the body bodies of organic beings.



* RobotDog: Hunters are quadrupeds specialized in combat, assassination and infiltration that are hardly seen on the battlefield due to their stealthy abilities. They also resemble a mechanical version of a wolf-cougar hybrid.

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* RobotDog: Hunters are quadrupeds specialized in combat, assassination and infiltration that are hardly ever visibly seen on the battlefield due to their stealthy advanced stealth abilities. They also resemble a mechanical version of a wolf-cougar hybrid.



* UniversallyBelovedLeader: Eien is universally loved by all of her children and even Ronus, a Man of Iron, only showed admiration for meeting her and continues to worship her after joining the Yggdrasil Network.

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* UniversallyBelovedLeader: Eien is universally loved beloved by all of her children and even Ronus, a Man of Iron, only showed admiration for meeting her and continues to worship her after joining the Yggdrasil Network.
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** On whether or not the Grey Goo and other respective factions previously existed in the [=40K=] universe or not. As the story goes on, while Eien initially assumed that she and the Goo are completely alien to [=40K=], she gradually gods herself confronted with evidence that muddies the waters a fair bit.

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** On whether or not the Grey Goo and other respective factions previously existed in the [=40K=] universe or not. As the story goes on, while Eien initially assumed that she and the Goo are completely alien to [=40K=], she gradually gods finds herself confronted with evidence that muddies the waters a fair bit.



* OurSoulsAreDifferent: Within the Yggdrasil Network, new goo consciousnesses are constantly generated that when fully formed become stars that float down from the central 'tree' akin to leaves, when these developed Soul Stars sink into the 'sea' they are actively controlling a morph or frame within the Materium, when Warlock Alune nearly had her soul sucked into a siphon, she glimpsed the network because of that, she started calling Eien "Ishara Orlosa" which loosely translates to "Mother of Soul Stars" in the modern Aeldari language.

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* OurSoulsAreDifferent: Within the Yggdrasil Network, new goo consciousnesses are constantly generated that when fully formed become stars that float down from the central 'tree' akin to leaves, leaves; when these developed Soul Stars sink into the 'sea' they are actively controlling a morph or frame within the Materium, when Materium. When Warlock Alune nearly had her soul sucked into a siphon, she glimpsed the network because of that, she and has started calling Eien "Ishara Orlosa" which (which loosely translates to "Mother of Soul Stars" in the modern Aeldari language.language).



* PragmaticVillainy: Due to the fact that he is completely surrounded by enemies and the Warp storm prevents him from calling for backup, Inquisitor Thrax has no problem allying himself with an abominable intelligence to survive. He is also planning to recruit Engineer Tiki so that her talent is not wasted and also to prevent her from being killed on charges of techno-heresy, preventing Eien from recruiting her.

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* PragmaticVillainy: Due to the fact that he is completely surrounded by enemies and the Warp storm prevents him from calling for backup, Inquisitor Thrax has no problem allying himself with an amiable abominable intelligence to survive. He is also planning to recruit Engineer Tiki so that her talent is not wasted and also to prevent her from being killed on charges of techno-heresy, preventing Eien from recruiting her.



** According to Eien, the makeshift PoweredArmor suits created by Engineer Tiki for the Imperial Guard forces look similar to the [=T-60=] Power Armor suits from the ''VideoGame/{{Fallout}}'' series.

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** According to Eien, the makeshift PoweredArmor suits created by Engineer Tiki for the Imperial Guard forces look incredibly similar to the [=T-60=] Power Armor suits from the ''VideoGame/{{Fallout}}'' series.



* StatingTheSimpleSolution: At one point, after she learns her Siphons can devour Warp energy & convert it into mass for the Yggdrasil Network, Eien contemplates simply creating a massive rocket laden with Siphons, launching it into geostationary orbit, and then devouring the Warpstorm surrounding the planet from the inside-out so she can just escape and not get bothered by the Imperials & other forces. However, she then quickly dismisses this option upon realizing that this would take an incredibly long period of time where she would have to be constantly guarding the rocket/satellite from enemy attack, and that if she tried to just speed the process along by having the Siphons create more Mother Goos and protean masses to make even more Siphons, the protean masses would be unprotected when created by the Siphons and would quickly freeze into an inoperable state thanks to the vacuum of space.

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* StatingTheSimpleSolution: At one point, after she learns her Siphons can devour Warp energy & convert it into mass for the Yggdrasil Network, Eien contemplates simply creating a massive rocket laden with Siphons, launching it into geostationary orbit, and then devouring the Warpstorm surrounding the planet from the inside-out so she can just escape and not get bothered by the Imperials & other forces. However, [[SubvertedTrope she then quickly dismisses this option option]] upon realizing that this would take an incredibly long period of time where she would have to be constantly guarding the rocket/satellite from enemy attack, and that if she tried to just speed the process along by having the Siphons create more Mother Goos and protean masses to make even more Siphons, the protean masses would be unprotected when created by the Siphons and would quickly freeze into an inoperable state thanks to the vacuum of space.

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%% * ActionGirl:ActionGirl: While Eien is mostly tasked with serving as a commander far away from the frontlines, she can still personally kick plenty of ass whenever necessary as seen in her assisting in the capture of a Keeper of Secrets.



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%% * TheAloner:TheAloner: A common thread and source of angst for Eien is her struggling to deal with the fact that, thanks to the rabid FantasticRacism and EvilVsEvil state of the rest of the Milky Way, she and her children are well and truly alone among the powers of the galaxy. This is somewhat alleviated later on with Sinatra and Ronus, but even then that only goes so far.



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** The intelligence of most of Eien’s “children” is also a bit of a grey area. While Sinatra and Ronus are clearly both sapient and sentient on par with humans, most of the other Goo consciousnesses simply “sing” to each other and Eien for communication and seem to be on the surface fairly simple-minded, closer to properly trained {{Attack Animal}}s then “people”. Complicating matters is how it’s implied that they’re less “dumb animals” and more, as purely artificial lifeforms, simply operate under BlueAndOrangeMorality. Additionally, there are also minor asides where the Goo consciousnesses seem to shod higher thinking, most notably in how some of the “smarter” Goo consciousnesses outright worship Eien as a demigoddess.
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* AntiMagic:AntiMagic: Goo Siphons effectively function as this, as they can transmute Warp energy into mass for the Yggdrasil Network. This means using any form of Warp sorcery on a Siphon will only make the rest of the Goo even stronger.



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%% * AssholeVictim:AssholeVictim: Invoked by Eien, who notes that the invasive experiments she is performing to explore PsychicPowers are horrifying and barbaric… but as she is performing said experiments on the Drukhari, she feels absolutely no guilt in inflicting upon them just a shred of the hideous agony they have forced upon countless innocent people.



* BoldlyComing: PlayedForLaughs in a non-canon omake set many years after the end of the storyline, where some quick thinking by Titus to convince the Goo to leave an Imperial world leads to him and Eien sleeping together. While [[SexualKarma both deeply enjoyed themselves]], the Imperium's dogmatic FantasticRacism and Eien's own ProperlyParanoid mindset leaves the both of them immensely embarrassed after the whole situation is over and done with.
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* BoldlyComing: PlayedForLaughs in a non-canon omake set many years after the end of the storyline, where some quick thinking by Titus to convince the Goo to leave an Imperial world leads to him and Eien sleeping together. While [[SexualKarma both deeply enjoyed themselves]], the Imperium's dogmatic FantasticRacism and Eien's own ProperlyParanoid mindset leaves the both two of them immensely embarrassed & and feeling quite awkward after the whole situation is over and done with.
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* BrainUploading:BrainUploading: How Eien was essentially added to the Yggdrasil Network, having her consciousness snatched from her life on Earth at the point of death and then being placed as the main governing consciousness of the Pathfinder Project.



** The only known way to permanently kill one of the Goo lifeforms is via the Shroud. While their physical forms can certainly be destroyed, their souls simply retreat back into the Yggdrasil Network to await being placed back into another form.

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** The only known way to permanently kill one of the Goo lifeforms is via the Shroud. While Otherwise, while their physical forms can certainly be destroyed, their souls simply retreat back into the Yggdrasil Network to await being placed back into another form.



* EurekaMoment: After repeatedly struggling to grow her mass economy, the Edge Program gives Eien a plan to finally fix it without resorting to strip-mining the entire planet: Her proteans can brave the oceans of the planet and consume metallic ores & mineral veins on the ocean floor. Just after this, Eien starts to become far more confident in both her abilities and the experiments she is performing on the Goo itself.

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* EurekaMoment: After repeatedly struggling to grow her mass economy, the Edge Program gives Eien a plan to finally fix it without resorting to strip-mining the entire planet: entirety of Exalus: Her proteans can brave the oceans of the planet and consume metallic ores & mineral veins on the ocean floor. Just after this, Eien starts to become far more confident in both her abilities and the experiments she is performing on the Goo itself.



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* GreenSkinnedSpaceBabe: Following the Edge Program's implementation, Eien's default form is that of a gorgeous and curvy young human woman with both silver skin and clothing made entirely out of nanomachines.
* HeroicSacrifice: While Eien doesn't remember all of the explicit details, apparently her last act in her pre-''[=40K=]'' life was jumping in front of a runaway truck to save two kids.

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* GreenSkinnedSpaceBabe: Following the Edge Program's implementation, Eien's default form is that of a gorgeous and gorgeous, curvy young human woman with both white hair, silver skin and skin, grey-blue clothing made entirely out of nanomachines.
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* HeroicSacrifice: While Eien doesn't remember all of the explicit details, apparently her last act in her pre-''[=40K=]'' life was jumping in front of a runaway truck to save two kids.children.



* IKnowMortalKombat: Eien's skill in battle tactics and strategy is based around her vestigial memories of her previous life on Earth, where they were apparently a rabid strategy gamer.

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* IKnowMortalKombat: Eien's skill in battle tactics and strategy is largely based around her vestigial memories of her previous life on Earth, where they were she was apparently a rabid strategy gamer.



* MamaBear: Nemesor Anckm'rab's attempt to touch one of the souls of Eien's children caused her to threaten to atomize him and then scatter his ashes across the cosmos.

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* MamaBear: Nemesor Anckm'rab's attempt to touch one of the souls of Eien's children caused causes her to threaten to atomize him and then scatter his ashes across the cosmos.



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%% * MidSeasonUpgrade:MidSeasonUpgrade: The Edge Program functionally serves as this for the Grey Goo.



* NecessaryDrawback: To prevent Eien from simply curbstomping all of her opponents effortlessly, here it's made clear that while her Mother Goo forms ''can'' assimilate any form of matter into themselves to create more weapons and attack forms, assimilating either non-metals or non-carbon-based lifeforms are far less efficient in terms of production, helping limit Eien's mass economy. Furthermore, her nanites can still be outright destroyed (primarily with extreme heat/cold) unless sufficiently protected.
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* NecessaryDrawback: To prevent Eien from simply curbstomping all of her opponents effortlessly, here it's made clear that while her Mother Goo forms ''can'' assimilate any form of matter into themselves to create more weapons and attack forms, assimilating either non-metals or non-carbon-based lifeforms are far less efficient in terms of production, helping limit Eien's mass economy.economy (as an example, WordOfGod has claimed that Eien consuming an old, healthy tree would only provide enough mass for just the head of a Goblin chassis). Furthermore, her nanites can still be outright destroyed (primarily with extreme heat/cold) unless sufficiently protected.
%% * NiceGirl:NiceGirl: Sarcasm, short temper and understandable paranoia aside, Eien is a remarkably kind and well-adjusted person who is helping the Imperials on Exalus not just out of EnemyMine logic, but also out of ChronicHeroSyndrome (even showing pity to the miserable plights of the Aeldari & Necrons). Furthermore, Eien is very protective of and gently maternal towards the numerous Grey Goo lifeforms that make up her children, and ultimately desires to make the galaxy a safer place for them.



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* PaintingTheMedium: When Eien possesses one of her Khalkotauroi to taunt Ner'isa Ur'ces in Low Gothic (a language both Aizaun and El'dathar can't understand), the Necron Nemesor and Aeldari Knight of Vaul "hear" her dialogue as wingdings.

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* PaintingTheMedium: When Eien possesses one of her Khalkotauroi to taunt Ner'isa Ur'ces in Low Gothic (a language both Aizaun and El'dathar can't understand), the text depicts the Necron Nemesor and Aeldari Knight of Vaul "hear" "hearing" her dialogue as wingdings.



* PragmaticVillainy: Due to the fact that he is completely surrounded by enemies and the warp storm prevents him from calling for backup, Inquisitor Thrax has no problem allying himself with an abominable intelligence to survive. He is also planning to recruit Engineer Tiki so that her talent is not wasted and also to prevent her from being killed on charges of techno-heresy, preventing Eien from recruiting her.

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* PragmaticVillainy: Due to the fact that he is completely surrounded by enemies and the warp Warp storm prevents him from calling for backup, Inquisitor Thrax has no problem allying himself with an abominable intelligence to survive. He is also planning to recruit Engineer Tiki so that her talent is not wasted and also to prevent her from being killed on charges of techno-heresy, preventing Eien from recruiting her.


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* DeaderThanDead: The only known way to permanently kill one of the Goo lifeforms is via the Shroud. While their physical forms can certainly be destroyed, their Souls simply retreat back into the Yggdrasil Network to await being placed back into another form.

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** More significantly, Eine's Siphons can consume Warp energy and convert it into mass to be integrated into the Yggdrasil Network, which Eien eventually realizes can be used to effectively wipe a Warp entity "stuck" in realspace from existence, with her [[spoiler:specifically using both her Siphons and the Khalkotauroi to ''wipe a Greater Daemon of Slannesh from reality'']].



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* EnemyMine: The main plot of the fanfic revolves around the Imperial forces on the planet of Exalus (both those who are the survivors of the crash of the Incorruptus, Inquisitor Thrax’s cruiser, and the planet’s pre-existing Imperial Guard regiment & associated forces) forming an alliance with Eien against the Chaos, Ork and Aeldari forces on the planet. [[spoiler:Later on, a successful armistice between the Craftworld Aeldari and Necron forces (specifically the latter under the control of Nemesor Anckm'rab) is established between the Imperials and Eien so the latter two can focus on the Orks, Drukhari and Chaos]].

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* EnemyMine: The main plot of the fanfic revolves around the Imperial forces on the planet of Exalus (both those who are the survivors of the crash of the Incorruptus, ''Incorruptus'', Inquisitor Thrax’s Thrax's cruiser, and the planet’s planet's pre-existing Imperial Guard regiment & associated forces) forming an alliance with Eien against the Chaos, Ork and Aeldari forces on the planet. [[spoiler:Later on, a successful armistice between the Craftworld Aeldari and Necron forces (specifically the latter under the control of Nemesor Anckm'rab) is established between the Imperials and Eien so the latter two can focus on the Orks, Drukhari and Chaos]].Chaos]].
* EurekaMoment: After repeatedly struggling to grow her mass economy, the Edge Program gives Eien a plan to finally fix it without resorting to strip-mining the entire planet: Her proteans can brave the oceans of the planet and consume metallic ores & mineral veins on the ocean floor. Just after this, Eien starts to become far more confident in both her abilities and the experiments she is performing on the Goo itself.



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%% * IKnowMortalKombat:IKnowMortalKombat: Eien's skill in battle tactics and strategy is based around her vestigial memories of her previous life on Earth, where they were apparently a rabid strategy gamer.



** According to Eien, the makeshift PoweredArmor suits created by Engineer Tiki for the Imperial Guard forces look similar to the [=T-60=] Power Armor suits from the VideoGame/{{Fallout}} series.

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* AmbiguousGenderIdentity: While the fanfic is ostensibly a self-insert, Eien is unsure of what exactly their gender identity was prior to being isekaied into the ''Warhammer 40,000'' universe. However, the author of the fic and Eien herself InUniverse (along with all of the other characters) refer to her almost explicitly with feminine pronouns.

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* AlwaysABiggerFish: At one point, Eien outright sneers at a Keeper of Secrets that the Silent Ones (a.k.a. The Shroud) are far more terrifying than anything the Chaos Gods could ever throw at her.
* AmbiguousGenderIdentity: While the fanfic is ostensibly a self-insert, Eien is unsure of what exactly their gender identity was prior to being isekaied into the ''Warhammer 40,000'' universe.universe (with her earlier on musing that she finds it hard to adjust to being referred to as a woman). However, the author of the fic and Eien herself InUniverse (along with all of the other characters) refer to her almost explicitly with feminine pronouns.



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* DeaderThanDead: The only known way to permanently kill one of the Goo lifeforms is via the Shroud.

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* DeaderThanDead: The only known way to permanently kill one of the Goo lifeforms is via the Shroud. While their physical forms can certainly be destroyed, their Souls simply retreat back into the Yggdrasil Network to await being placed back into another form.



* EvilVersusEvil:

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* EvilVersusEvil:EvilVersusEvil: The Orks and Chaos forces on Exalus actually spend more time fighting one another than they do the Imperials, Eien and Aeldari.



* NecessaryDrawback: To prevent Eien from simply curbstomping all of her opponents effortlessly, here it's made clear that while her Mother Goo forms ''can'' assimilate any form of matter into themselves to create more weapons and attack forms, assimilating either non-metals or non-carbon-based lifeforms are far less efficient in terms of production, helping limit Eien's mass economy.

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* NecessaryDrawback: To prevent Eien from simply curbstomping all of her opponents effortlessly, here it's made clear that while her Mother Goo forms ''can'' assimilate any form of matter into themselves to create more weapons and attack forms, assimilating either non-metals or non-carbon-based lifeforms are far less efficient in terms of production, helping limit Eien's mass economy. Furthermore, her nanites can still be outright destroyed (primarily with extreme heat/cold) unless sufficiently protected.



* RightForTheWrongReasons:



** The majority of the original Goo morphs Eien creates are based upon and named after chassis used by the Vex from ''VideoGame/{{Destiny}}'' (with the Puppeteer Proteans animating the chassis in a similar manner to how the Vex do).
** Meanwhile, the Khalkotauroi are based on the Mark [=X=] Sentinels from ''Film/XMenDaysOfFuturePast'', the Hecatoncheires are inspired by the Alpha Mimics from ''Film/EdgeOfTomorrow'', and the Hunters are heavily designed after Blade Wolf from ''VideoGame/MetalGearRisingRevengeance''.

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** The majority of the original Goo combat morphs Eien creates are based upon and (and named after after) chassis used by the Vex from ''VideoGame/{{Destiny}}'' (with the Puppeteer Proteans animating the chassis in a similar manner to how the Vex do).
** Meanwhile, the Khalkotauroi are based on the Mark [=X=] Sentinels from ''Film/XMenDaysOfFuturePast'', the Hecatoncheires are inspired by the Alpha Mimics from ''Film/EdgeOfTomorrow'', and the Hunters are heavily designed after to resemble Blade Wolf from ''VideoGame/MetalGearRisingRevengeance''.



* StatingTheSimpleSolution: At one point, after she learns her Siphons can devour Warp energy & convert it into mass for the Yggdrasil Network, Eien contemplates simply creating a massive rocket laden with Siphons, launching it into geostationary orbit, and then devouring the Warpstorm surrounding the planet from the inside-out so she can just escape and not get bothered by the Imperials & other forces. However, she then quickly dismisses this option upon realizing that this would take an incredibly long period of time where she would have to be constantly guarding the rocket/satellite from enemy attack, and that if she tried to just speed the process along by having the Siphons create more Mother Goos and protean masses to make even more Siphons, the protean masses would be unprotected when created by the Siphons and would quickly freeze into an inoperable state thanks to the vacuum of space.
* SureLetsGoWithThat:



* TimeAbyss:



* WeatherControlMachine: Eien has three specialized goo units that, when put together, are capable of creating a lightning storm which she uses to wreak havoc on the Drukhari.

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* WeatherControlMachine: Eien has three specialized goo units that, when put together, are capable of creating a lightning storm which she uses to wreak havoc on upon the Drukhari.

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* ArtificialHumans: Sinatra is an artificial organic created by Eien after she studied the genetic code of the Orks and Eldars with the goal of creating her own species capable of manipulating warp energy on her terms.

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* ArtificialHumans: Sinatra is an artificial organic entity created by Eien after she studied the genetic code of the Orks and Eldars with the goal of creating her own species capable of manipulating warp energy on her terms.



* EnemyMine: The main plot of the fanfic revolves around the Imperial forces on the planet of Exalus (both those who are the survivors of the crash of the Incorruptus, Inquisitor Thrax’s cruiser) forming an alliance with Eien against the Chaos, Ork and Aeldari forces on the planet. [[spoiler:Later on, a successful armistice between the Craftworld Aeldari and Necron forces (specifically the latter under the control of Nemesor Anckm'rab) is established between the Imperials and Eien so the latter two can focus on the Orks, Drukhari and Chaos]].

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* EnemyMine: The main plot of the fanfic revolves around the Imperial forces on the planet of Exalus (both those who are the survivors of the crash of the Incorruptus, Inquisitor Thrax’s cruiser) cruiser, and the planet’s pre-existing Imperial Guard regiment & associated forces) forming an alliance with Eien against the Chaos, Ork and Aeldari forces on the planet. [[spoiler:Later on, a successful armistice between the Craftworld Aeldari and Necron forces (specifically the latter under the control of Nemesor Anckm'rab) is established between the Imperials and Eien so the latter two can focus on the Orks, Drukhari and Chaos]].



* GadgeteerGenius:
* GodzillaThreshold:



* HorrifyingTheHorror: The Khalkotauroi are Eien's [[EliteArmy Elite Units]] who are capable of making a ''Keeper of Secrets'' run in desperation for their life.

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* HorrifyingTheHorror: The Khalkotauroi are Eien's [[EliteArmy Elite Units]] who Units]], and are so dangerous that they are capable of making a ''Keeper of Secrets'' run in desperation for their life.


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* AchievementsInIgnorance:
* ActionGirl:



* AmbiguousSituation:
* AndIMustScream:



* BenevolentAI:
* BenevolentPrecursors:



* BrainUploading:



* CrazyPrepared:
* CurbStompBattle:
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* EnemyMine:

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* EnemyMine:DeflectorShield:
* EldritchLocation:
* EnemyMine: The main plot of the fanfic revolves around the Imperial forces on the planet of Exalus (both those who are the survivors of the crash of the Incorruptus, Inquisitor Thrax’s cruiser) forming an alliance with Eien against the Chaos, Ork and Aeldari forces on the planet. [[spoiler:Later on, a successful armistice between the Craftworld Aeldari and Necron forces (specifically the latter under the control of Nemesor Anckm'rab) is established between the Imperials and Eien so the latter two can focus on the Orks, Drukhari and Chaos]].



* EvilLaugh:
* EvilVersusEvil:



* {{Foreshadowing}}:



* FrontlineGeneral:



* HigherTechSpecies:



* IKnowMortalKombat:



* IntraFranchiseCrossover: The main Ork foes being found across the planet of Exalus are actually led by Grimgor Ironhide, Azhag the Slaughterer, Grom the Paunch, Wurzzag da Great Green Prophet, and Skarsnik -- all of them originally from ''TabletopGame/{{Warhammer}} Fantasy Battles'' and have been re-imagined to properly fit into the [=40K=] universe. Various elements from previous ''[=40K=]'' editions are also used here, such as the Squats being a recognized abhuman strain under the authority of the Imperium.
* LighterAndSofter: While the fanfic ''does'' have its darker moments, it overall doesn't take itself too seriously.
* MamaBear: Anckm'rab's attempt to touch one of the souls of Eien's children caused her to threaten to atomize him and then scatter his ashes across the cosmos.

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* InstantExpert:
* IntraFranchiseCrossover: The main Ork foes being forces found across the planet of Exalus are actually led by Grimgor Ironhide, Azhag the Slaughterer, Grom the Paunch, Wurzzag da Great Green Prophet, and Skarsnik -- all of them whom are originally from ''TabletopGame/{{Warhammer}} ''[[TabletopGame/{{Warhammer}} Warhammer Fantasy Battles'' Battles]]'' and have been re-imagined to properly fit into the [=40K=] universe. Various elements from previous ''[=40K=]'' editions are also used here, such as the Squats being a recognized abhuman strain under the authority of the Imperium.
* {{Irony}}:
* LighterAndSofter: While the fanfic ''does'' have its darker moments, it overall doesn't take itself too seriously.
seriously and is more focused on humor, action and exploration of creative implementations of Goo technology in the world of [=40K=].
* {{Magitek}}:
* MamaBear: Nemesor Anckm'rab's attempt to touch one of the souls of Eien's children caused her to threaten to atomize him and then scatter his ashes across the cosmos.


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* SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome: When El'dathar of the Knights of Vaul attempts to talk to the modern Aeldari, their conversation initially goes nowhere since the Aeldari language has gone through several million years' worth of drift since the War In Heaven and both sound completely incomprehensible to the other.
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* NecessaryDrawback: To prevent Eien from simply curbstomping all of her opponents effortlessly, here it's made clear that while her Mother Goo forms ''can'' assimilate any form of matter into themselves to create more weapons and attack forms, assimilating non-metals is far less efficient in terms of production, helping limit Eien's mass economy.

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* NecessaryDrawback: To prevent Eien from simply curbstomping all of her opponents effortlessly, here it's made clear that while her Mother Goo forms ''can'' assimilate any form of matter into themselves to create more weapons and attack forms, assimilating either non-metals is or non-carbon-based lifeforms are far less efficient in terms of production, helping limit Eien's mass economy.

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* AmbiguousGenderIdentity: While the fanfic is ostensibly a self-insert, Eien is unsure of what exactly their gender identity was prior to being isekaied into the ''Warhammer 40,000'' universe. However, the author of the fic and Eien herself InUniverse (along with all of the other characters) refer to her almost explicitly with feminine pronouns.
* AntiMagic:



* TheAssimilator: Any technology assimilated by goo will allow Eien to recreate it and attempt to make it more efficient than the original.

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* AssholeVictim:
* TheAssimilator: Any technology assimilated by her goo will allow Eien to recreate it and attempt to make it more efficient than the original.



* CuriousAsAMonkey: Due to Sinatra being a goo consciousness who ended up gaining an organic body, she ended up becoming quite a curious person due to all sorts of new feelings she is feeling to the point that Eien has to restrain her to prevent her from getting hurt.
* EvenTheGirlsWantHer: Hospitable Sister Maria is trying very hard to avoid having impure thoughts about Eien due to the matriarch's rather 'gifted' appearance.
* FromASingleCell: As long as a single nanomachine can survive, Eien cannot be killed.
* HorrifyingTheHorror: The Khalkotauroi are Eien's [[EliteArmy Elite Army]] who are capable of making a Keeper of Secrets run in desperation for their life.

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* BewareTheSuperman:
* ContrivedCoincidence:
* CuriousAsAMonkey: Due to Sinatra being a goo consciousness who ended up gaining is given an organic body, she ended up becoming quite a curious person due to all sorts of new feelings she is feeling to the point that Eien has to restrain her to prevent her from getting hurt.
* DeaderThanDead: The only known way to permanently kill one of the Goo lifeforms is via the Shroud.
* EnemyMine:
*
EvenTheGirlsWantHer: Hospitable Sister Maria Maria, a member of the Sisters of Battle's Hospitaler Order, is trying very hard to avoid having impure thoughts about Eien due to the matriarch's rather 'gifted' appearance.
* ExtremeOmnivore:
* FishOutOfTemporalWater:
*
FromASingleCell: As long as a single nanomachine can survive, Eien -- and by extension, the souls of her "children" -- cannot be killed.
* HeroicSacrifice: While Eien doesn't remember all of the explicit details, apparently her last act in her pre-''[=40K=]'' life was jumping in front of a runaway truck to save two kids.
* HorrifyingTheHorror: The Khalkotauroi are Eien's [[EliteArmy Elite Army]] Units]] who are capable of making a Keeper ''Keeper of Secrets Secrets'' run in desperation for their life.



* ImmortalsFearDeath: When Ner'isa was finally captured by Eien, it showed that she was terrified to the point of begging the Imperials for help when Eien began using the siphons to give her a true death.

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* ImmortalsFearDeath: When Ner'isa was is finally captured by Eien, it showed that she was is terrified to the point of begging ''begging the Imperials for help help'' when Eien began using the siphons Siphons to give her a true death.death.
* IntraFranchiseCrossover: The main Ork foes being found across the planet of Exalus are actually led by Grimgor Ironhide, Azhag the Slaughterer, Grom the Paunch, Wurzzag da Great Green Prophet, and Skarsnik -- all of them originally from ''TabletopGame/{{Warhammer}} Fantasy Battles'' and have been re-imagined to properly fit into the [=40K=] universe. Various elements from previous ''[=40K=]'' editions are also used here, such as the Squats being a recognized abhuman strain under the authority of the Imperium.
* LighterAndSofter: While the fanfic ''does'' have its darker moments, it overall doesn't take itself too seriously.



* OurSoulsAreDifferent: Within the Yggdrasil network, new goo consciousnesses are constantly generated that when fully formed become stars that float down from the 'tree', when these developed Soul Stars sink into the 'sea' they are actively controlling a morph or frame within the materium, when Warlock Alune nearly had her soul sucked into a siphon, she glimpsed the network because of that, she started calling Eien: Ishara Orlosa which loosely translates to Mother of Soul Stars.
* PoorCommunicationKills: If Zalava had said from the start that the threat lurking in the Krakengar castle was Inquisitor Thrax and Eien would have helped instead of going to war because he wanted to drive the humans away from the only safe point they had on the planet.
* PragmaticVillainy: Due to the fact that he is completely surrounded by enemies and the warp storm prevents him from calling for backup, Inquisitor Thrax has no problem allying himself with an abominable intelligence to survive. He is also planning to recruit Engineer Tiki so that her talent is not wasted and also to prevent her from being killed on charges of heresy, preventing Eien from recruiting her.

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* MeaningfulName: Eien roughly translates to "eternity" in Japanese.
* MechanicalLifeforms:
* MechanicalAbomination:
* MidSeasonUpgrade:
* MythicalMotifs: With the exception of the Hunters, the vast majority of the Goo morphs are named after creatures/characters from Myth/ClassicalMythology.
** The Myrimdons (Eien's Space Marine-analogues) are named after [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Myrmidons the soldiers commanded by Achilles during the Trojan War]].
** The Khalkotauroi are named after [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Khalkotauroi the Colchis Bulls]] (specifically in reference to how the Khalkotauroi's [[EyeBeam Volcano Lasers]] is based after the Colchis Bulls' fire-breath).
** The Hecatoncheires are named after [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Hecatoncheires the ancient hundred-handed giant sons of Gaea and Ouranos]].
* NecessaryDrawback: To prevent Eien from simply curbstomping all of her opponents effortlessly, here it's made clear that while her Mother Goo forms ''can'' assimilate any form of matter into themselves to create more weapons and attack forms, assimilating non-metals is far less efficient in terms of production, helping limit Eien's mass economy.
* NiceGirl:
* NothingIsScarier:
* OurSoulsAreDifferent: Within the Yggdrasil network, Network, new goo consciousnesses are constantly generated that when fully formed become stars that float down from the 'tree', central 'tree' akin to leaves, when these developed Soul Stars sink into the 'sea' they are actively controlling a morph or frame within the materium, Materium, when Warlock Alune nearly had her soul sucked into a siphon, she glimpsed the network because of that, she started calling Eien: Ishara Orlosa Eien "Ishara Orlosa" which loosely translates to Mother "Mother of Soul Stars.
Stars" in the modern Aeldari language.
* OutsideContextProblem:
* PaintingTheMedium: When Eien possesses one of her Khalkotauroi to taunt Ner'isa Ur'ces in Low Gothic (a language both Aizaun and El'dathar can't understand), the Necron Nemesor and Aeldari Knight of Vaul "hear" her dialogue as wingdings.
* PoorCommunicationKills: If Farseer Zalava had said from the start that the threat lurking in the below Castle Krakengar castle was is a Greater Daemon of Slaanesh imprisoned within an inactive Blackstone Fortress, Inquisitor Thrax and Eien would have helped instead of going to war because he wanted to drive the humans away from the only safe point they had on the planet.
* PragmaticVillainy: Due to the fact that he is completely surrounded by enemies and the warp storm prevents him from calling for backup, Inquisitor Thrax has no problem allying himself with an abominable intelligence to survive. He is also planning to recruit Engineer Tiki so that her talent is not wasted and also to prevent her from being killed on charges of heresy, techno-heresy, preventing Eien from recruiting her.



* RobotDog: Hunters are quadrupeds specialized in combat, assassination and infiltration that are hardly seen on the battlefield due to their stealthy abilities.
* ShoutOut: All of the original Goo morphs Eien creates are based upon and named after chassis used by the Vex from ''VideoGame/{{Destiny}}''.
* ThankTheMaker: All of Eien's children revere her as if she were a goddess and call her the Great Machine Mother.
* UniversallyBelovedLeader: Eien is universally loved by all of her children and even Ronus, a Man of Iron, only showed admiration for meeting her.
* WeatherControlMachine: Eien has three specialized goo units that, when put together, are capable of creating a lightning storm which she uses to wreak havoc on the drukhari.

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* RobotDog: Hunters are quadrupeds specialized in combat, assassination and infiltration that are hardly seen on the battlefield due to their stealthy abilities.
abilities. They also resemble a mechanical version of a wolf-cougar hybrid.
* ShoutOut: All ShoutOut:
** The majority
of the original Goo morphs Eien creates are based upon and named after chassis used by the Vex from ''VideoGame/{{Destiny}}''.
''VideoGame/{{Destiny}}'' (with the Puppeteer Proteans animating the chassis in a similar manner to how the Vex do).
** Meanwhile, the Khalkotauroi are based on the Mark [=X=] Sentinels from ''Film/XMenDaysOfFuturePast'', the Hecatoncheires are inspired by the Alpha Mimics from ''Film/EdgeOfTomorrow'', and the Hunters are heavily designed after Blade Wolf from ''VideoGame/MetalGearRisingRevengeance''.
* SplitPersonalityMerge:
* SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome: When El'dathar of the Knights of Vaul attempts to talk to the modern Aeldari, their conversation initially goes nowhere since the Aeldari language has gone through several million years' worth of drift since the War In Heaven and both sound completely incomprehensible to the other.
* TeethClenchedTeamwork:
* ThankTheMaker: All of Eien's children revere her as if she were a goddess and call her the "the Great Machine Mother.
Mother".
* TimeyWimeyBall:
* UniversallyBelovedLeader: Eien is universally loved by all of her children and even Ronus, a Man of Iron, only showed admiration for meeting her.
her and continues to worship her after joining the Yggdrasil Network.
* WeatherControlMachine: Eien has three specialized goo units that, when put together, are capable of creating a lightning storm which she uses to wreak havoc on the drukhari.Drukhari.
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* HundredPercentAdorationRating: Eien is universally loved by all of her children and even Ronus, a Man of Iron, only showed admiration for meeting her.



* WeatherControlMachine: Eien has three specialized goo units that, when put together, are capable of creating a lightning storm which she used to wreak havoc on the drukhari.

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* UniversallyBelovedLeader: Eien is universally loved by all of her children and even Ronus, a Man of Iron, only showed admiration for meeting her.
* WeatherControlMachine: Eien has three specialized goo units that, when put together, are capable of creating a lightning storm which she used uses to wreak havoc on the drukhari.
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* WeatherControlMachine: Eien has three goo units that together are capable of creating a lightning storm which she used to wreak havoc on the Dark Eldar.

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* WeatherControlMachine: Eien has three specialized goo units that together that, when put together, are capable of creating a lightning storm which she used to wreak havoc on the Dark Eldar.drukhari.
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[[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/a-mother-goo-in-a-grimdark-world-grey-goo-si-x-warhammer-40k.966497/#post-78992540 A Mother Goo in a Grimdark World]] is a fanfic by [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/members/thekitchencalamity.501863/ TheKitchenCalamity]]. It is a crossover between ''VideoGame/GreyGoo2015'' and ''TabletopGame/Warhammer40000''.

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[[https://forums.''[[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/a-mother-goo-in-a-grimdark-world-grey-goo-si-x-warhammer-40k.966497/#post-78992540 A Mother Goo in a Grimdark World]] World]]'' is a fanfic by [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/members/thekitchencalamity.501863/ TheKitchenCalamity]]. It is a crossover between ''VideoGame/GreyGoo2015'' and ''TabletopGame/Warhammer40000''.



* PragmaticVillainy: Due to the fact that he is completely surrounded by enemies and the warp storm prevents him from calling for backup, Inquisitor Thrax has no problem allying himself with an abominable intelligence to survive.
*** He is also planning to recruit Engineer Tiki so that her talent is not wasted and also to prevent her from being killed on charges of heresy, preventing Eien from recruiting her.

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* PragmaticVillainy: Due to the fact that he is completely surrounded by enemies and the warp storm prevents him from calling for backup, Inquisitor Thrax has no problem allying himself with an abominable intelligence to survive.
***
survive. He is also planning to recruit Engineer Tiki so that her talent is not wasted and also to prevent her from being killed on charges of heresy, preventing Eien from recruiting her.



* WorthyOpponent: All of Zalava's interactions with Eien involve him showing enormous respect for her, even comparing her to Isha, the Eldar Goddess of Life and Harvest, and wishes that after the conflict is over they can maintain a friendly relationship.

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* WorthyOpponent: All of Zalava's interactions with Eien involve him showing enormous respect for her, even comparing her to Isha, the Eldar Goddess of Life and Harvest, and wishes that after the conflict is over they can maintain a friendly relationship.relationship.
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* ImmortalsFearDeath: When Ner'isa was finally captured by Eien, it showed that she was terrified to the point of begging the Imperials for help when Eien began using the siphons to give her a true death.
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* HundredPercentAdorationRating: Eien is universally loved by all of her children and even Ronus, an Iron Man, only showed admiration for meeting her.

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* HundredPercentAdorationRating: Eien is universally loved by all of her children and even Ronus, an Iron Man, a Man of Iron, only showed admiration for meeting her.



* TheAssimilator: Any technology assimilated by goo will allow Eien to recreate it and make it more efficient than the original.
* BerserkButton: Anything that displeases Eien will enrage her children to the point that the Myrmidons will want to shoot Farseer Zalava for instigating it.

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* TheAssimilator: Any technology assimilated by goo will allow Eien to recreate it and attempt to make it more efficient than the original.
* BerserkButton: Anything that displeases Eien will enrage her children to the point that the Myrmidons will want to shoot Farseer Zalava the target for instigating it.



* EvenTheGirlsWantHer: Hospitable Sister Maria is trying very hard to avoid having impure thoughts about Eien.

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* EvenTheGirlsWantHer: Hospitable Sister Maria is trying very hard to avoid having impure thoughts about Eien.Eien due to the matriarch's rather 'gifted' appearance.



* OurSoulsAreDifferent: Within the Yggdrasil network, new goo consciousnesses are constantly generated that when fully formed become stars in the sky, when Warlock Alune nearly had her soul sucked into a siphon, she glimpsed the network because of that, she started calling Eien for Ishara Orlosa who means mother of soul stars.
* PoorCommunicationKills: If Zalava had said from the start that the threat lurking in the krakengar castle was Inquisitor Thrax and Eien would have helped instead of going to war because he wanted to drive the humans away from the only safe point they had on the planet.

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* OurSoulsAreDifferent: Within the Yggdrasil network, new goo consciousnesses are constantly generated that when fully formed become stars in that float down from the sky, 'tree', when these developed Soul Stars sink into the 'sea' they are actively controlling a morph or frame within the materium, when Warlock Alune nearly had her soul sucked into a siphon, she glimpsed the network because of that, she started calling Eien for Eien: Ishara Orlosa who means mother which loosely translates to Mother of soul stars.
Soul Stars.
* PoorCommunicationKills: If Zalava had said from the start that the threat lurking in the krakengar Krakengar castle was Inquisitor Thrax and Eien would have helped instead of going to war because he wanted to drive the humans away from the only safe point they had on the planet.



* RobotDog: Hunters are quadrupeds specialized in combat, assassination and infiltration that are hardly seen on the battlefield due to their stealth mode.

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* RobotDog: Hunters are quadrupeds specialized in combat, assassination and infiltration that are hardly seen on the battlefield due to their stealth mode.stealthy abilities.



* ThankTheMaker: All of Eien's children revere her as if she were a goddess and call her the Great Mother Machine.
* WorthyOpponent: All of Zalava's interactions with Eien involve him showing enormous respect for her, even comparing her to Isha, the Eldar goddess of life and harvest, and wishes that after the conflict is over they can maintain a friendly relationship.

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* ThankTheMaker: All of Eien's children revere her as if she were a goddess and call her the Great Mother Machine.
Machine Mother.
* WorthyOpponent: All of Zalava's interactions with Eien involve him showing enormous respect for her, even comparing her to Isha, the Eldar goddess Goddess of life Life and harvest, Harvest, and wishes that after the conflict is over they can maintain a friendly relationship.
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I'm a Mother... actually that sounds very wrong. I'm a Mother Goo, and I thought I'd be facing the nearly extinct Hoomans, the four armed space Australian Beta, and the hungry hungry Shroud but NOPE! I'd rather face the Shroud than be anywhere near here!!! I'm in an Emperor be damned warpstorm covered planet, and am basically surrounded on all sides by every single fucking faction in the 40k-verse aside from the Tyranids... I'm fucked.

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I'm a Mother... actually that sounds very wrong. I'm A random human lived and died, and was then reincarnated into the universe of ''Warhammer 40K'' as a Mother Goo, and I thought I'd be facing the nearly extinct Hoomans, the four armed space Australian Beta, and the hungry hungry Shroud but NOPE! I'd rather face the Shroud than be anywhere near here!!! I'm in an Emperor be damned warpstorm covered planet, and am basically surrounded on all sides by every single fucking faction in the 40k-verse aside Goo from ''Grey Goo''. Will the Tyranids... I'm fucked.universe drive her insane, or will she eat everything that tries to kill her?
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* MamaBear: Anckm'rab's attempt to touch one of the souls of Eien's children caused her to threaten to atomize him and then scatter his ashes across the cosmos.

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