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* GroinAttack: During their downtime, Rin accidentally hits a ball into Ryuji's groin to which she apologies for while Ann can't help but laugh.
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* RealityEnsues: In all of the above mentioned beatdowns, Rin was not in a position to continue moving afterwards in the immediate aftermath. For the gymnastics assault, she spent months in the hospital. For Kamoshida and Kaneshiro, she needed some amateur medical attention from her fellow Phantom Thieves and took at least a day before attempting to return to the metaverse.
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** As with canon, Kamoshida attempted to force Ann to having relations with him before Rin convinced her not give into his demands. Kamoshida attempted to rape [[spoiler:Makoto]] and then Rin due to her interference. He then attempted to rape [[spoiler:Rin]]. It is implied he tried doing it to Yoshizawa before Rin interrupted their conversation. His shadow attempting to rape [[spoiler:Rin]] was another reason for Ryuji's awakening.
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** As with canon, Kamoshida attempted to force Ann to having relations with him before Rin convinced her not give into his demands. Kamoshida attempted to rape [[spoiler:Makoto]] and then Rin due to her interference. [[spoiler:Makoto]]. He then attempted to rape [[spoiler:Rin]].[[spoiler:Rin]] due to her interference. It is implied he tried doing it to Yoshizawa before Rin interrupted their conversation. His shadow attempting to rape [[spoiler:Rin]] was another reason for Ryuji's awakening.
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* MomentKiller: [[spoiler:Morgana kills a moment between Rin and Makoto in Chapter 54.]]
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* MomentKiller: [[spoiler:Morgana Quite a few moments between Rin and Makoto are ruined during the story by others.
** Morgana kills a moment between Rin and Makoto in Chapter54.54.
** [[spoiler:Akechi and later Sae interrupt moments between Rin and Makoto in Chapter 87.]]
** Morgana kills a moment between Rin and Makoto in Chapter
** [[spoiler:Akechi and later Sae interrupt moments between Rin and Makoto in Chapter 87.]]
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* WouldHitAGirl: Kamoshida does not hesitate to beat Rin to a bloody pulp, and neither do Kaneshiro's men.
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* AdaptationalJerkass: Sae Niijima is far more hostile towards Rin in this story than in the game because she knows Rin and Makoto are friends.
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* AdaptationalJerkass: Sae Niijima is far more hostile towards Rin in this story than in the game because she knows Rin and Makoto are friends. Subverted at the end of sixth arc where she does warm up to her.
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A retelling of ''VideoGame/Persona5'' with a female protagonist written by [[https://archiveofourown.org/users/RSturman/pseuds/RSturman RSturman]]. Similar to Persona 3 Portable, there are some changes due to the different gender of the protagonist, but there are more alterations in this story by comparison. The author credits Dowdz of [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/11310144/chapters/25310778 Crimson]] fame for providing inspiration for the story.
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A retelling of ''VideoGame/Persona5'' with a female protagonist written by [[https://archiveofourown.org/users/RSturman/pseuds/RSturman RSturman]]. Similar to Persona 3 Portable, there are some changes due to the different gender of the protagonist, but there are more alterations in this story by comparison. The author credits Dowdz of [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/11310144/chapters/25310778 Crimson]] ''Fanfic/CrimsonAU'' fame for providing inspiration for the story.
As of 12/02/2020, the story is currently ongoing at fifty-six chapters with updates several times a week. It can be read [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/26140624/chapters/63597073 org/works/26140624 here]].
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* AdaptationalNiceGuy: Makoto Niijima is generally a good person in canon, but she is far less hostile towards Rin partly because they met and befriended each other prior to Makoto being recruited by Principal Kobakawa to investigation the Phantom Thieves.
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* AdaptationalNiceGuy: Makoto Niijima is generally a good person in canon, but she is far less hostile towards Rin partly because they met and befriended each other prior to Makoto being recruited by Principal Kobakawa to investigation investigate the Phantom Thieves.
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* LoveRevelationEpiphany: [[spoiler:Rin and Makoto]] experience this in Chapter 54, but the moment is ruined by Morgana. They both privately reflect on it to confirm their feelings.
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* AngerBornOfWorry: Rin has a tendency to cause Makoto to experience this, especially in Chapter Fifty-Two.
* ArmorPiercingSlap: Makoto gives one to Rin in Chapter Fifty-Two following the battle with Futaba's cognition of her mother because she nearly got herself killed to protect her friends.
* ArmorPiercingSlap: Makoto gives one to Rin in Chapter Fifty-Two following the battle with Futaba's cognition of her mother because she nearly got herself killed to protect her friends.
* BothSidesHaveAPoint: In Chapter Fifty-Two, Rin was right that she needed to do what she did to protect the Phantom Thieves, but Makoto was right that Rin was reckless and nearly got herself killed as a result.
* MysteriousPast: In Chapter Fifty-Three, Chihaya reveals that she used her fortune telling to find out that Rin is forgetting something important, but she has no idea what that possibly could be.
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** In Chapter Thirty Two, Thirty-Two, Rin and Makoto are both captured by Kaneshiro's men, and she gets far worse treatment than Makoto.
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* NotWhatItLooksLike: In Chapter 51, Sojiro sees Rin and Makoto return to Leblanc, and he assumes they 'spent a long time alone' with each other. It takes Makoto to convince him that was not the case.
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* WouldHitAGirl: Kamoshida does not hesitate to beat Rin to a bloody pulp, and neither do Kaneshiro's men.
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* ParentalAbandoment: The parental issues the Phantom Thieves have in the original game is the same in this story, but it is more pronounced with Rin. Even before she was falsely arrested, she hardly saw her parents. She can barely remember the last time she interacted with them.
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* ParentalAbandoment: ParentalAbandonment: The parental issues the Phantom Thieves have in the original game is the same in this story, but it is more pronounced with Rin. Even before she was falsely arrested, she hardly saw her parents. She can barely remember the last time she interacted with them.
* ParentalNeglect: Along with ParentalAbandonment, they never really took care of Rin before the incident with Shido. According to Rin, she never could do anything to please them.
* ParentalNeglect: Along with ParentalAbandonment, they never really took care of Rin before the incident with Shido. According to Rin, she never could do anything to please them.
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* ShipperOnDeck: Kaneshiro is a twisted deconstruction of this trope. While he had Rin and Makoto in his custody, he seemed mildly amused by how protective Rin and Makoto were of each other. In the real world, he sent Makoto pictures of the room he planned on putting her and Rin in as well as a bunch of photos of Rin being stalked to get a rise out of her. He also calls Rin to get a rise out of her in regards to Makoto's safety. In his cognition, he depicts the two of them in his designated room making out while hopped up on drugs and alcohol.
** In Chapter 47, Sojiro is a more healthy depiction of a Shipper on deck for Rin and Makoto.
** In Chapter 47, Sojiro is a more healthy depiction of a Shipper on deck for Rin and Makoto.
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* StalkerWithACrush: When Makoto in investigating the Phantom Thieves, she also appears to be developing affection of Rin even if she doesn't admit it.
* StalkerWithoutACrush: Kaneshiro has Rin and Makoto stalked prior to his change of heart.
* StalkerWithoutACrush: Kaneshiro has Rin and Makoto stalked prior to his change of heart.
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** As with canon, Kamoshida attempted to force Ann to having relations with him before Rin convinced her not give into his demands. Kamoshida attempted to rape [[spoiler:Makoto]] and then Rin due to her interference. He then attempted to rape [[spoiler:Rin]]. It is implied he tried doing it to Yoshizawa before Rin interrupted their conversation.
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** As with canon, Kamoshida attempted to force Ann to having relations with him before Rin convinced her not give into his demands. Kamoshida attempted to rape [[spoiler:Makoto]] and then Rin due to her interference. He then attempted to rape [[spoiler:Rin]]. It is implied he tried doing it to Yoshizawa before Rin interrupted their conversation. His shadow attempting to rape [[spoiler:Rin]] was another reason for Ryuji's awakening.
* ButNotTooForeign: Ann and Rin both have a quarter of Western blood. In Rin's case, she has British blood in her.
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* HeroicDepreciation: HeroicSelfDeprecation: Downplayed. Rin doesn't deny her accomplishments or intelligence, but she does downplay them, or she indicates someone, such as Makoto, is better than her.
* MythologyGag: The fact that Rin has British blood in her might be a reference to how Ann pretends to have British blood during Shido's Palace.
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* RapesIsASpecialKindOfEvil: It goes without saying that Kamoshida's actions against Shiho and what he attempted to do to Ann, [[spoiler:Makoto, and Rin]] make the Phantom Thieves hate him far more than other targets. Kaneshiro is a close second.
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* RapesIsASpecialKindOfEvil: ParentalAbandoment: The parental issues the Phantom Thieves have in the original game is the same in this story, but it is more pronounced with Rin. Even before she was falsely arrested, she hardly saw her parents. She can barely remember the last time she interacted with them.
* RapeIsASpecialKindOfEvil: It goes without saying that Kamoshida's actions against Shiho and what he attempted to do to Ann, [[spoiler:Makoto, and Rin]] make the Phantom Thieves hate him far more than other targets. Kaneshiro is a close second.
* RapeIsASpecialKindOfEvil: It goes without saying that Kamoshida's actions against Shiho and what he attempted to do to Ann, [[spoiler:Makoto, and Rin]] make the Phantom Thieves hate him far more than other targets. Kaneshiro is a close second.
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* AdaptationalEarlyAppearance: While Makoto can make cameo appearances during Kamoshida's arc, she doesn't make her true debut during the Madarame Arc. In this story, her first appearance is in Chapter 10, and it is prior to the Phantom Thieves stealing Kamoshida's treasure.
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* AdaptationalEarlyAppearance: While Makoto can make cameo appearances during Kamoshida's arc, she doesn't make her true debut during until the Madarame Arc. In this story, her first appearance is in Chapter 10, and it is prior to the Phantom Thieves stealing Kamoshida's treasure.
* AdaptationalNiceGuy: Makoto Niijima is generally a good person in canon, but she is far less hostile towards Rin partly because they met and befriended each other prior to Makoto being recruited by Principal Kobakawa to investigation the Phantom Thieves.
* AlwaysSomeoneBetter: When Makoto joins the group, Rin makes it clear she views Makoto as being superior to her in intelligence.
* AlwaysSomeoneBetter: When Makoto joins the group, Rin makes it clear she views Makoto as being superior to her in intelligence.
* BerserkButton: Rin loses it when Ryuji indicates he cares more about making the Phantom Thieves popular rather than actually helping people. They make up later.
* CannotSpitItOut: Subverted. Rin originally didn't have any intention of revealing the fact that she occasionally hears voices or experiences hallucinations until Morgana witnessed her having an episode. She eventually tells Ryuji and Ann after they celebrated their first victory as Phantom Thieves, and she tells the later additions of Yusuke and Makoto.
* CannotSpitItOut: Subverted. Rin originally didn't have any intention of revealing the fact that she occasionally hears voices or experiences hallucinations until Morgana witnessed her having an episode. She eventually tells Ryuji and Ann after they celebrated their first victory as Phantom Thieves, and she tells the later additions of Yusuke and Makoto.
* HeroicDepreciation: Downplayed. Rin doesn't deny her accomplishments or intelligence, but she does downplay them, or she indicates someone, such as Makoto, is better than her.
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* NoHoldsBarredBeatdown: As of Chapter 47, Rin has been subjected no less than four of them. Chronologically speaking, the first one occurs prior to her obtaining a criminal record.
** In her backstory, she was assaulted by her former gymnastic team members, so she could be eliminated from being chosen as a representative.
** In her backstory, she was assaulted by her former gymnastic team members, so she could be eliminated from being chosen as a representative.
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** In her backstory, she was assaulted by her former gymnastic team members, so she could be eliminated from being chosen as a representative. It resulted her in being in the hospital for months.
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* ThrowingOffTheDisability: Subverted. At times, Rin believes she has overcome the voices and hallucinations. However, in Chapter 30, she has a near relapse when Makoto inadvertently triggers an episode. Afterwards, Rin once again believes she has overcome this issue. However, it is unlikely that is the case.
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A retelling of Persona 5 ''VideoGame/Persona5'' with a female protagonist written by [[https://archiveofourown.org/users/RSturman/pseuds/RSturman RSturman]]. Similar to Persona 3 Portable, there are some changes due to the different gender of the protagonist, but there are more alterations in this story by comparison. The author credits Dowdz of [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/11310144/chapters/25310778 Crimson]] fame for providing inspiration for the story.
* GenderFlip: The premise of this story is the idea of a female protagonist.
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* HeroicBSOD: It is played seriously and for laughs.
** It is played for laughs in Chapter 22 when Yusuke blackmails Rin and Anne into posing nude for him in exchange for Ryuji not getting sued. Rin's reaction is far worse than Anne's was in either canon or thisstory.story.
** It is serious in Chapter 42 when Rin's former gymnastics team meets her and her friends.
** It is played for laughs in Chapter 22 when Yusuke blackmails Rin and Anne into posing nude for him in exchange for Ryuji not getting sued. Rin's reaction is far worse than Anne's was in either canon or this
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comparison. The author credits Dowdz of [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/11310144/chapters/25310778 Crimson]] fame for providing inspiration for the story.
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* GroinAttack: During their downtime, Rin accidentally hits a ball into Ryuji's groin to which she apologies for while Ann can't help but laugh.
* HealingFactor: Some of the injuries Rin receives are rather major. While the way they are portrayed are somewhat realistic and she does receive medical attention, she seems to fully recover from them in record time.
* HeroicBSOD: It is played for laughs in Chapter 22 when Yusuke blackmails Rin and Anne into posing nude for him in exchange for Ryuji not getting sued. Rin's reaction is far worse than Anne's was in either canon or this story.
* MajorInjuryUnderreaction: For a majority of the injuries Rin suffers throughout the story, she takes it in stride for the most part. Some of the characters, especially Morgana have expressed concern regarding this.
* HealingFactor: Some of the injuries Rin receives are rather major. While the way they are portrayed are somewhat realistic and she does receive medical attention, she seems to fully recover from them in record time.
* HeroicBSOD: It is played for laughs in Chapter 22 when Yusuke blackmails Rin and Anne into posing nude for him in exchange for Ryuji not getting sued. Rin's reaction is far worse than Anne's was in either canon or this story.
* MajorInjuryUnderreaction: For a majority of the injuries Rin suffers throughout the story, she takes it in stride for the most part. Some of the characters, especially Morgana have expressed concern regarding this.
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* DisabledInTheAdaptation: Rin has severe mental issues that are reoccurring throughout the story. It gets to the point she hears voices and even suffers hallucinations. While Ren does have some trauma that is highlighted in the game, it is small by comparison.
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* SpannerInTheWorks: Kamoshida lampshades that Rin has prevented him from having his way with multiple female students.
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** Kamoshida is conderable worse than in canon.
* AttemptedRape: Several antagonists are guilty of this.
** As with canon, Kamoshida attempted to force Ann to having relations with him before Rin convinced her not give into his demands. Kamoshida attempted to rape [[spoiler:Makoto]] and then Rin due to her interference. He then attempted to rape [[spoiler:Rin]]. It is implied he tried doing it to Yoshizawa before Rin interrupted their conversation.
** Kaneshiro orders his men to rape Rin and Makoto, but they are stopped by the timely arrival of the other Phantom Thieves.
* AttemptedRape: Several antagonists are guilty of this.
** As with canon, Kamoshida attempted to force Ann to having relations with him before Rin convinced her not give into his demands. Kamoshida attempted to rape [[spoiler:Makoto]] and then Rin due to her interference. He then attempted to rape [[spoiler:Rin]]. It is implied he tried doing it to Yoshizawa before Rin interrupted their conversation.
** Kaneshiro orders his men to rape Rin and Makoto, but they are stopped by the timely arrival of the other Phantom Thieves.
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* AdatpationalEarlyAppearance: While Makoto can make cameo appearances during Kamoshida's arc, she doesn't make her true debut during the Madarame Arc. In this story, her first appearance is in Chapter 10, and it is prior to the Phantom Thieves stealing Kamoshida's treasure.
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* NoHoldsBarBeatdown: As of Chapter 47, Rin has been subjected no less than four of them. Chronologically speaking, the first one occurs prior to her obtaining a criminal record.
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* NoHoldsBarBeatdown: NoHoldsBarredBeatdown: As of Chapter 47, Rin has been subjected no less than four of them. Chronologically speaking, the first one occurs prior to her obtaining a criminal record.
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* AdaptationalJerkass: Sae Niijima is far more hostile towards Rin in this story than in the game because she knows Rin and Makoto are friends.
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* RealityEnsues: In all of the above mentioned beatdowns, Rin was not in a position to continue moving afterwards in the immediate aftermath. For the gymnastics assault, she spent months in the hospital. For Kamoshida and Kaneshiro, she needed some armature medical attention from her fellow Phantom Thieves and took at least a day before attempting to return to the metaverse.
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Rin Kurusu was falsely charged with assault and thrown into a new start as a criminal in the big city against her will. With a haunted past following her and a previous life of solitude, she hopes to make the most of a new start. However as soon as she arrives she is thrust into a game of fate as a Trickster and a Phantom Thief. With the help of her new friends and fellow Phantom Thieves she fights against the distortions and herself to find her true self again.
A retelling of Persona 5 with a female protagonist. Similar to Persona 3 Portable, there are some changes due to the different gender of the protagonist, but there are more alterations in this story by comparison.
The story is currently ongoing at forty seven chapters with updates several times a week.
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!!Tropes found in this fanfiction:
* AdaptationalBadass: In this story, Rin is already an experienced athlete in gymnastics, and she is able to utilize her abilities both in the real world and the Metaverse. She also takes far more beatings than Ren did in canon, and she is no worse for wear.
* AdatpationalEarlyAppearance: While Makoto can make cameo appearances during Kamoshida's arc, she doesn't make her true debut during the Madarame Arc. In this story, her first appearance is in Chapter 10, and it is prior to the Phantom Thieves stealing Kamoshida's treasure.
* AdaptationalExpansion: Makoto's character arc is expanded upon due to her making an earlier debut.
* AdaptationalIntelligence: While Ren can become extremely intelligent in the game and eventually get the top score in class, Rin is able to get the top spot in both the midterm and final exam of the first semester.
* BadassInDistress: In Chapter 32, both Rin and Makoto are subjected to this when they are captured by Kaneshiro's men with Rin getting far worse treatment.
* CrushBlush: Both Rin and Makoto are prone to this, but it is unknown either of them understand their feelings for each other extend beyond friendship.
* ForcedToWatch: During Chapter 32, Makoto is unable to prevent Rin's injuries at the hands of Kaneshiro's men.
* NoHoldsBarBeatdown: As of Chapter 47, Rin has been subjected no less than four of them. Chronologically speaking, the first one occurs prior to her obtaining a criminal record.
** In her backstory, she was assaulted by her former gymnastic team members, so she could be eliminated from being chosen as a representative.
** In Chapter Ten, Rin was beaten by Kamoshida after she prevents him from [[spoiler:raping Makoto]].
** In Chapter Thirty Two, Rin and Makoto are both captured by Kaneshiro's men, and she gets far worse treatment than Makoto.
** As with the canon game, Rin is subjected to this by the corrupt police before she is interrogated by Sae Niijima.
* WouldHitAGirl: Kamoshida does not hesitate to beat Rin to a bloody pulp, and neither do Kaneshiro's men.
A retelling of Persona 5 with a female protagonist. Similar to Persona 3 Portable, there are some changes due to the different gender of the protagonist, but there are more alterations in this story by comparison.
The story is currently ongoing at forty seven chapters with updates several times a week.
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!!Tropes found in this fanfiction:
* AdaptationalBadass: In this story, Rin is already an experienced athlete in gymnastics, and she is able to utilize her abilities both in the real world and the Metaverse. She also takes far more beatings than Ren did in canon, and she is no worse for wear.
* AdatpationalEarlyAppearance: While Makoto can make cameo appearances during Kamoshida's arc, she doesn't make her true debut during the Madarame Arc. In this story, her first appearance is in Chapter 10, and it is prior to the Phantom Thieves stealing Kamoshida's treasure.
* AdaptationalExpansion: Makoto's character arc is expanded upon due to her making an earlier debut.
* AdaptationalIntelligence: While Ren can become extremely intelligent in the game and eventually get the top score in class, Rin is able to get the top spot in both the midterm and final exam of the first semester.
* BadassInDistress: In Chapter 32, both Rin and Makoto are subjected to this when they are captured by Kaneshiro's men with Rin getting far worse treatment.
* CrushBlush: Both Rin and Makoto are prone to this, but it is unknown either of them understand their feelings for each other extend beyond friendship.
* ForcedToWatch: During Chapter 32, Makoto is unable to prevent Rin's injuries at the hands of Kaneshiro's men.
* NoHoldsBarBeatdown: As of Chapter 47, Rin has been subjected no less than four of them. Chronologically speaking, the first one occurs prior to her obtaining a criminal record.
** In her backstory, she was assaulted by her former gymnastic team members, so she could be eliminated from being chosen as a representative.
** In Chapter Ten, Rin was beaten by Kamoshida after she prevents him from [[spoiler:raping Makoto]].
** In Chapter Thirty Two, Rin and Makoto are both captured by Kaneshiro's men, and she gets far worse treatment than Makoto.
** As with the canon game, Rin is subjected to this by the corrupt police before she is interrogated by Sae Niijima.
* WouldHitAGirl: Kamoshida does not hesitate to beat Rin to a bloody pulp, and neither do Kaneshiro's men.
