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* Polyamory: [[spoiler:After Temari and Sakura kiss, followed by the two of them kissing Takeo each, the three come to realize they each have feelings for one another and decide to make it all official.]]
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* Polyamory: {{Polyamory}}: [[spoiler:After Temari and Sakura kiss, followed by the two of them kissing Takeo each, the three come to realize they each have feelings for one another and decide to make it all official.]]
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** [[MyCountryRightOrWrong Zabuza, Kisame, and Juzo have not defected and are still loyal to Kirigakure]].
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* AnguishedDeclarationOfLove: [[spoiler:When the Fourth Shinobi War is starting and Konoha is readying orders for their troops, Takeo finds Sakura, who is glad he's still in Konoha. As the two embrace and Takeo sees a messenger holding his mission details, Takeo takes this moment to say he loves her, to which she says she loves him back.]]
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* AnguishedDeclarationOfLove: [[spoiler:When the Fourth Great Shinobi War is starting and Konoha is readying orders for their troops, Takeo finds Sakura, who is glad he's still in Konoha. As the two embrace and Takeo sees a messenger holding his mission details, Takeo takes this moment to say he loves her, to which she says she loves him back.]]]]
* AnimalJingoism: Takeo, with his otter summons, fights against an Iwa-nin named [[OriginalCharacter Toi Sangaku]], who has beaver summons. Both kinds of summons are semiaquatic mammals, and the former has been known to eat the latter.
* AnimalJingoism: Takeo, with his otter summons, fights against an Iwa-nin named [[OriginalCharacter Toi Sangaku]], who has beaver summons. Both kinds of summons are semiaquatic mammals, and the former has been known to eat the latter.
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* AscendedMeme: [[OriginalCharacter Naomi, originally deemed Herzo]], was supposed to be only a one-off Jonin during Takeo's mission in Ame, but was meme'd into existence by the chat. A lot of hype surrounded the character, but this ended up being Naomi's undoing as although the reveal was well received, the character ended up being quite disappointing to interact with.
* BadDate: Takeo and Umeni's first, and only, date. What starts out as awkward small talk turns into a disaster waiting to happen as Takeo notices Umeni's henge and decides to use one as well, aging himself to his mid-20s. Thankfully ends on a bittersweet note, as Umeni gets a laugh out of the situation and the two decide that they are [[LetsJustBeFriends better as friends]].
* BarBrawl: A [[AlcoholInducedIdiocy drunk Neji]] convinces Rock Lee to drink with him during a gettogether of the other members of the Jonin Bootcamp. This brings out Lee's [[DrunkenMaster violent and inebriated side]] and he fights the remaining attendants. The resulting clash brings down the walls of the bar and the whole place becomes completely demolished.
* BatmanGambit: The Konoha delegation planned to kill Juzo with one of these during the treaty signing with Noodles. After Sugishi notifies the rest of her animosity with Juzo, they planned for her to taunt the Swordsmen and then retire from the rest of the group, planning on Juzo to follow her and strike first, letting her [[spoiler:[[KillingInSelfDefense kill him in self-defense]]]].
* BattleInTheRain: A rare nonviolent variation. During the Ame diplomatic meeting, Takeo plays against Shoichi Tsuchiya in a game of Shogi, who is considered one of the best in the whole village. As they are about to begin, heavy rain starts happening, so the two play underneath an awning while onlookers watch.
* BazaarOfTheBizarre: Suna has a large winding indoor marketplace, teeming with life and all kinds of wares.
* BadDate: Takeo and Umeni's first, and only, date. What starts out as awkward small talk turns into a disaster waiting to happen as Takeo notices Umeni's henge and decides to use one as well, aging himself to his mid-20s. Thankfully ends on a bittersweet note, as Umeni gets a laugh out of the situation and the two decide that they are [[LetsJustBeFriends better as friends]].
* BarBrawl: A [[AlcoholInducedIdiocy drunk Neji]] convinces Rock Lee to drink with him during a gettogether of the other members of the Jonin Bootcamp. This brings out Lee's [[DrunkenMaster violent and inebriated side]] and he fights the remaining attendants. The resulting clash brings down the walls of the bar and the whole place becomes completely demolished.
* BatmanGambit: The Konoha delegation planned to kill Juzo with one of these during the treaty signing with Noodles. After Sugishi notifies the rest of her animosity with Juzo, they planned for her to taunt the Swordsmen and then retire from the rest of the group, planning on Juzo to follow her and strike first, letting her [[spoiler:[[KillingInSelfDefense kill him in self-defense]]]].
* BattleInTheRain: A rare nonviolent variation. During the Ame diplomatic meeting, Takeo plays against Shoichi Tsuchiya in a game of Shogi, who is considered one of the best in the whole village. As they are about to begin, heavy rain starts happening, so the two play underneath an awning while onlookers watch.
* BazaarOfTheBizarre: Suna has a large winding indoor marketplace, teeming with life and all kinds of wares.
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* AscendedMeme: [[OriginalCharacter Naomi, originally deemed Herzo]], was supposed to be only a one-off Jonin jonin during Takeo's mission in Ame, but was meme'd into existence by the chat. A lot of hype surrounded the character, but this ended up being Naomi's undoing as although the reveal was well received, the character ended up being quite disappointing to interact with.
* AttackPatternAlpha: Team Sonoda, an Iwa genin team, has a formation called 'Heavenly Crane', where the two girls in the genin team trap the target physically in quicksand, the jonin-sensei traps the target mentally with a genjutsu, and the boy in the genin team Body Flickers up a makeshift ramp made of Earth Release and descends upon the target with a Lightning Release. [[spoiler:Their intended target, Takeo, had already previously trapped them in a genjutsu of his own, so their attack had only hit an illusion of him.]]
* BadDate: Takeo and Umeni's first, and only, date. What startsout as awkward small talk turns into a disaster waiting to happen as Takeo notices Umeni's henge and decides to use one as well, aging himself to his mid-20s. Thankfully ends on a bittersweet note, as Umeni gets a laugh out of the situation and the two decide that they are [[LetsJustBeFriends better as friends]].
* BarBrawl: A [[AlcoholInducedIdiocy drunk Neji]] convinces Rock Lee to drink with him during agettogether get-together of the other members of the Jonin Bootcamp. This brings out Lee's [[DrunkenMaster violent and inebriated side]] and he fights the remaining attendants. The resulting clash brings down the walls of the bar and the whole place becomes completely demolished.
* BatmanGambit: The Konoha delegation planned tokill Juzo [[spoiler:kill Juzo]] with one of these during the treaty signing with Noodles. After Sugishi notifies the rest of the Konoha-nin of her animosity with Juzo, him, they planned for her to taunt the Swordsmen him and then retire from the rest of the group, planning on Juzo her target to follow her and strike first, letting her [[spoiler:[[KillingInSelfDefense kill him in self-defense]]]].
* BattleInTheRain: A rare nonviolentvariation.example. During the Ame diplomatic meeting, Takeo plays against Shoichi Tsuchiya in a game of Shogi, who is considered one of the best in the whole village. As they are about to begin, heavy rain starts happening, so the two play underneath an awning while onlookers watch.
* BazaarOfTheBizarre: Suna has a large winding indoor marketplace, teeming with life and all kinds of wares. During his first visit to Sunagakure, Takeo buys a black shawl and some local cuisine for himself, as well as some wood carving tools for his father.
* AttackPatternAlpha: Team Sonoda, an Iwa genin team, has a formation called 'Heavenly Crane', where the two girls in the genin team trap the target physically in quicksand, the jonin-sensei traps the target mentally with a genjutsu, and the boy in the genin team Body Flickers up a makeshift ramp made of Earth Release and descends upon the target with a Lightning Release. [[spoiler:Their intended target, Takeo, had already previously trapped them in a genjutsu of his own, so their attack had only hit an illusion of him.]]
* BadDate: Takeo and Umeni's first, and only, date. What starts
* BarBrawl: A [[AlcoholInducedIdiocy drunk Neji]] convinces Rock Lee to drink with him during a
* BatmanGambit: The Konoha delegation planned to
* BattleInTheRain: A rare nonviolent
* BazaarOfTheBizarre: Suna has a large winding indoor marketplace, teeming with life and all kinds of wares. During his first visit to Sunagakure, Takeo buys a black shawl and some local cuisine for himself, as well as some wood carving tools for his father.
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* BettyAndVeronica: Sakura, as Betty, and Temari, as Veronica, are both vying for Takeo. Sakura has known Takeo since the Academy, both even taking advanced classes. She also sees Takeo as an inspiration for shinobi born to civilians, and follows his example by training as hard as he does. Temari met Takeo when he first came to Suna, and acted as his guide. She fell for his kind-heartedness, such as him bonding with her brother, Gaara, when no one else would. The two kunoichi would do their best to win Takeo over to their side, [[spoiler: only to fall for each other as well when they got to know one another, personally.]]
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* BettyAndVeronica: Sakura, as Betty, and Temari, as Veronica, are both vying for Takeo. Sakura has known Takeo since the Academy, both even taking advanced classes. She also sees Takeo as an inspiration for shinobi born to civilians, and follows his example by training as hard as he does. Temari met Takeo when he first came to Suna, and acted as his guide. She fell for his kind-heartedness, such as him bonding with her brother, Gaara, when no one else would. The two kunoichi would do did their best to win Takeo over to their side, [[spoiler: [[spoiler:[[{{Polyamory}} only to fall for each other as well when they got to know one another, personally.another]].]]
* TheCavalry: [[spoiler:In an effort to put down a [[RoaringRampageOfRevenge rampaging Han in Tailed Beast Mode]],]] the Hokage Gaurd Platoon teleported away from the battlefield to find reinforcements. At first, they don't succeed and the Hokage orders them to keep searching. Their second attempt is a tremendous success, as they bring [[spoiler:Rasa Sabaku, the Fourth Kazekage,]] to the battlefield.
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* ChefOfIron: Boira, a personal summon of Sugishi, is a chef that wields a sword.
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* ChefOfIron: Boira, a personal summon of Sugishi, is a chef that who wields a sword.
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* CollateralDamage: Takeo's portion on halting Ame's metalworking was destroying a mine. For this task, he sent Water Clones with explosive tags inside to collapse it from within, as well as flooding it with a charged Exploding Water Colliding Wave directly into its opening. However, while some of the civilian miners retreated, more than half remained and sought shelter deeper in the mines, the latter dying from Takeo's demolition. That being said, Takeo was unbothered by this fact, only noting that [[IDidWhatIHadToDo it was simply unfortunate]] before moving on.
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* CollateralDamage: Takeo's portion on in halting Ame's metalworking was destroying a mine. For this task, he sent Water Clones with explosive tags inside to collapse it from within, as well as flooding it with a charged Exploding Water Colliding Wave directly into its opening. However, while some of the civilian miners retreated, more than half remained and sought shelter deeper in the mines, the latter dying from Takeo's demolition. That being said, Takeo was unbothered by this fact, only noting that [[IDidWhatIHadToDo it was simply unfortunate]] before moving on.
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* CombatCommentator: Kakashi, and briefly Takeo, take on this role, with added whimsical speech, during their airborne assault against [[spoiler:the Ame defectors.]]
* CommonalityConnection: Both Sakura and Temari bond over feeling [[OvershadowedByAwesome overshadowed by their teammates]] during their time in Ame. Sakura remarks how being on the same team as [[MesACrowd Naruto]] and [[TheGift Sasuke]], who both have flashier skills, ends with her being overlooked most of all out of the three. Temari empathizes and tells of how [[MarionetteMaster Kankuro has revolutionized puppetry]] and won the Suna Chunin Exams and [[SealedInsideAPersonShapedCan Gaara, being a Jinchuuriki,]] has his own unique abilities that set him apart from everyone.
* CommonalityConnection: Both Sakura and Temari bond over feeling [[OvershadowedByAwesome overshadowed by their teammates]] during their time in Ame. Sakura remarks how being on the same team as [[MesACrowd Naruto]] and [[TheGift Sasuke]], who both have flashier skills, ends with her being overlooked most of all out of the three. Temari empathizes and tells of how [[MarionetteMaster Kankuro has revolutionized puppetry]] and won the Suna Chunin Exams and [[SealedInsideAPersonShapedCan Gaara, being a Jinchuuriki,]] has his own unique abilities that set him apart from everyone.
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* CombatCommentator: Kakashi, and briefly Takeo, take Kakashi takes on this role, with added whimsical speech, during their airborne assault against [[spoiler:the Ame defectors.]]
]] [[ItsRainingMen When he jumps down to finish the fight on land]], Takeo takes over this role in his stead.
* CommonalityConnection: Both Sakura and Temari bond over feeling [[OvershadowedByAwesome overshadowed by their teammates]] during their time in Ame. Sakura remarks how being on the same team as [[MesACrowd Naruto]] and [[TheGift Sasuke]], who both have flashier skills, ends with her being overlooked most of all out of the three. Temari empathizes and tells of how [[MarionetteMaster Kankuro has revolutionized puppetry]]and won as well as [[spoiler:won the Suna Chunin Exams Exams]] and [[SealedInsideAPersonShapedCan Gaara, being a Jinchuuriki,]] has his own unique abilities that set him apart from everyone.
* CommonalityConnection: Both Sakura and Temari bond over feeling [[OvershadowedByAwesome overshadowed by their teammates]] during their time in Ame. Sakura remarks how being on the same team as [[MesACrowd Naruto]] and [[TheGift Sasuke]], who both have flashier skills, ends with her being overlooked most of all out of the three. Temari empathizes and tells of how [[MarionetteMaster Kankuro has revolutionized puppetry]]
* DeadPersonImpersonation: Takeo conjures an illusion of Tobirama Senju with a genjutsu, and uses this mirage to assault [[spoiler:Akatsuchi]] while they are in the Cloying Bog. Thanks to some interactions with Danzo, Takeo is able to produce an accurate portrayal.
* DeathByAdaptation:
** [[spoiler:Orochimaru and Kabuto both die during the assault on Otogakure]]
** [[spoiler:Akatsuchi dies during his fight against Takeo during the Fourth Great Shinobi War.]]
** [[spoiler:Orochimaru and Kabuto both die during the assault on Otogakure]]
** [[spoiler:Akatsuchi dies during his fight against Takeo during the Fourth Great Shinobi War.]]
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* DisasterDominoes: A chain of these are set off that eventually lead to the total destruction of all of [[spoiler:Orochimaru]]'s plans. Kakashi was assigned to teach an advanced Nature Release course in the Genin Academy as a condition for being able to instruct the future Team 7. As a result of this, Kakashi realizes how far he has to go as a mentor and seeks guidance from other teachers in Konoha, primarily Gai. Gai encourages him in ways to care and instruct his students, which in turn encourages Kakashi to train obsessively in order to better protect said students. Due to this training, Kakashi is far more prepared once the Chunin Exams take place, and is subsequently able to take [[spoiler:Orochimaru]] unaware and sever his arm from his body. Said ninja's weakened state makes them unable to interfere as severely in the Chunin Exams which means that Konoha has more fieldable S-ranks available once the [[spoiler:Fourth Great Shinobi War]] breaks out, and are fully capable of sending a squad of eight of their greatest shinobi to [[spoiler:Oto]] in order to slaughter the village's entire population, [[spoiler:Orochimaru]] included, down to the last man.
* EscortMission: The second part of the Suna Chunin Exams is an escort mission, where some teams have to escort mock caravans and other teams have to raid and attack those same caravans.
* EscortMission: The second part of the Suna Chunin Exams is an escort mission, where some teams have to escort mock caravans and other teams have to raid and attack those same caravans.
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* DiesDifferentlyInAdaptation:
** The Third Raikage, A, still died during the Third Great Shinobi War, but the battle was different. Instead of fighting a force of ten thousand shinobi single-handedly for three consecutive days and nights, he and 12 of his jonin were ambushed in a trap consisting of Hiruzen, Minato, Sakumo, and a group of Anbu. The only survivors of this battle were the named Konoha shinobi.
** The Ame Orphans, Nagato, Konan, and Yahiko, [[spoiler:all die together during the Amegakure Civil War instead of separately throughout the series.]]
** Juzo doesn't die from Yagura, but is instead [[spoiler:[[KillingInSelfDefense killed by Sugishi when the Swordsman strikes first]].]]
** While he still dies to a bunch of Konoha shinobi, here [[spoiler:Kakuzu dies to Takeo, Sugishi, Kurenai, Shikamaru, and Shino.]]
** [[spoiler:Itachi doesn't die after battling Sasuke and succumbing to his disease, but instead gets assimilated as Orochimaru's newest body.]]
** The Sound 4 don't die during an invasion of Konoha that was a mission from Otogakure, but instead during [[spoiler:an invasion of Otogakure that was a mission from Konoha.]]
** [[spoiler:Onoki doesn't get to die from old age, instead meeting his end during the Fourth Great Shinobi War at the hands of Hiruzen and Takeo.]]
** [[spoiler: Instead of dying from having the Five-Tails extracted from his body, Han meets his end against a combined effort from Takeo, his otter summons, Hiruzen, Baki, Kurenai, Shikamaru, and Rasa.]]
* DisasterDominoes: A chain of these are set off that eventuallylead leads to the total destruction of all of [[spoiler:Orochimaru]]'s plans. Kakashi was assigned to teach an advanced Nature Release course in the Genin Academy as a condition for being able to instruct the future Team 7. As a result of this, Kakashi realizes how far he has to go as a mentor and seeks guidance from other teachers in Konoha, primarily Gai. Gai encourages him in ways to care and instruct his students, which in turn encourages Kakashi to train obsessively in order to better protect said students. Due to this training, Kakashi is far more prepared once the Chunin Exams take place, and is subsequently able to take [[spoiler:Orochimaru]] unaware and sever his arm from his body. Said ninja's weakened state makes them unable to interfere as severely in the Chunin Exams which means that Konoha has more fieldable S-ranks available once the [[spoiler:Fourth Great Shinobi War]] breaks out, and are fully capable of sending a squad of eight of their greatest shinobi to [[spoiler:Oto]] in order to slaughter the village's entire population, [[spoiler:Orochimaru]] included, down to the last man.
*EscortMission: EscortMission:
** The very first C-rank mission of Team 24 was escorting a trading caravan to the Land of Tea. Unfortunately, the genin team was ambushed by nukenin, and the battle saw Totagi poisoned and in need of immediate emergency healing.
**The second part of the Suna Chunin Exams is an escort mission, where some teams have to escort mock caravans and other teams have to raid and attack those same caravans.
** The Third Raikage, A, still died during the Third Great Shinobi War, but the battle was different. Instead of fighting a force of ten thousand shinobi single-handedly for three consecutive days and nights, he and 12 of his jonin were ambushed in a trap consisting of Hiruzen, Minato, Sakumo, and a group of Anbu. The only survivors of this battle were the named Konoha shinobi.
** The Ame Orphans, Nagato, Konan, and Yahiko, [[spoiler:all die together during the Amegakure Civil War instead of separately throughout the series.]]
** Juzo doesn't die from Yagura, but is instead [[spoiler:[[KillingInSelfDefense killed by Sugishi when the Swordsman strikes first]].]]
** While he still dies to a bunch of Konoha shinobi, here [[spoiler:Kakuzu dies to Takeo, Sugishi, Kurenai, Shikamaru, and Shino.]]
** [[spoiler:Itachi doesn't die after battling Sasuke and succumbing to his disease, but instead gets assimilated as Orochimaru's newest body.]]
** The Sound 4 don't die during an invasion of Konoha that was a mission from Otogakure, but instead during [[spoiler:an invasion of Otogakure that was a mission from Konoha.]]
** [[spoiler:Onoki doesn't get to die from old age, instead meeting his end during the Fourth Great Shinobi War at the hands of Hiruzen and Takeo.]]
** [[spoiler: Instead of dying from having the Five-Tails extracted from his body, Han meets his end against a combined effort from Takeo, his otter summons, Hiruzen, Baki, Kurenai, Shikamaru, and Rasa.]]
* DisasterDominoes: A chain of these are set off that eventually
*
** The very first C-rank mission of Team 24 was escorting a trading caravan to the Land of Tea. Unfortunately, the genin team was ambushed by nukenin, and the battle saw Totagi poisoned and in need of immediate emergency healing.
**The second part of the Suna Chunin Exams is an escort mission, where some teams have to escort mock caravans and other teams have to raid and attack those same caravans.
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* FestivalEpisode: Takeo and Sakura have a date during Konoha's midwinter festival. The celebration is mainly civilian, so the two shinobi both enjoy time away from their usual group. During the festival, they both take in the sights, enjoy delicious food, [[DanceOfRomance dance together]], and have their first kiss together under dozens of sky lanterns.
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* FestivalEpisode: Takeo and Sakura have a date during Konoha's midwinter festival. The celebration is mainly civilian, so the two shinobi both enjoy time away from their usual group. During the festival, they both take in the sights, enjoy delicious food, [[DanceOfRomance dance together]], and have their [[OfficialKiss first kiss together together]] under dozens of sky lanterns.
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* FishPeople: Otogakure has a large population of aquatic horrors that bare a resemblance to humans, ranging in all forms, as a result of Orochimaru's experiment [[spoiler: on people.]]
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* FishPeople: Otogakure has a large population of aquatic horrors that bare a resemblance to humans, horrors, ranging in all forms, as a result of Orochimaru's experiment experiments [[spoiler: on people.]]
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*** Jiraiya: No longer into Tsunade, because apparently Jiraiya said the wrong thing at the wrong time and was [[GroinAttack HIT WITH A GOD BLOW TO THE NUTS]] courtesy of Tsunade. Had she aimed better, she would have [[CripplingCastration blown his balls off, literally]].
*** Orchimaru: [[spoiler: [[AnArmAndALeg Lost an arm]], still hasn't recovered it, why? BECAUSE HE'S TOO ATTACHED TO '''ITACHI UCHIHA'S''' BODY, AND YES, HE HAS THE [[RedEyesTakeWarning SHARIGAN]].]]
** The Ame Trio get [[spoiler: punched, killed, wiped out and scattered, and FINALLY, get put on spikes by Hanzo the salamander. How did this happen? No Obito, no Obito means no manipulating Akatsuki to be whittled down one by one, so this would mean that they would be successful this time. NOPE, Hanzo get's motivated to finally get back on to the scene as an active shinobi.]]
*** [[spoiler: This then results in the second iteration of the Akatsuki to have never even been created, and so its members are out in the wind. Some of their locations and fates have already been confirmed. Nagato and Konan's heads are mounted on spikes outside ame. Itachi is dead and assimilated into Orochimaru. Kabuto and Orochimaru are on their own in Otogakure. Kisame is loyal to Kiri. Kakuzu lived as a bounty hunter until he was killed. Juzo was loyal to Kiri, until Sugishi killed him. The Zetsus don't exist. The ones who are yet to be comfirmed are Sasori, Deidara, and Hidan.]]
*** Orchimaru: [[spoiler: [[AnArmAndALeg Lost an arm]], still hasn't recovered it, why? BECAUSE HE'S TOO ATTACHED TO '''ITACHI UCHIHA'S''' BODY, AND YES, HE HAS THE [[RedEyesTakeWarning SHARIGAN]].]]
** The Ame Trio get [[spoiler: punched, killed, wiped out and scattered, and FINALLY, get put on spikes by Hanzo the salamander. How did this happen? No Obito, no Obito means no manipulating Akatsuki to be whittled down one by one, so this would mean that they would be successful this time. NOPE, Hanzo get's motivated to finally get back on to the scene as an active shinobi.]]
*** [[spoiler: This then results in the second iteration of the Akatsuki to have never even been created, and so its members are out in the wind. Some of their locations and fates have already been confirmed. Nagato and Konan's heads are mounted on spikes outside ame. Itachi is dead and assimilated into Orochimaru. Kabuto and Orochimaru are on their own in Otogakure. Kisame is loyal to Kiri. Kakuzu lived as a bounty hunter until he was killed. Juzo was loyal to Kiri, until Sugishi killed him. The Zetsus don't exist. The ones who are yet to be comfirmed are Sasori, Deidara, and Hidan.]]
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*** Jiraiya: No longer into Tsunade, because apparently Jiraiya said the wrong thing at the wrong time and was [[GroinAttack HIT WITH A GOD BLOW TO THE NUTS]] hit with a blow to the nuts]] courtesy of Tsunade. Had she aimed better, she would have [[CripplingCastration blown his balls off, literally]].
*** Orchimaru: [[spoiler: [[AnArmAndALeg Lost an arm]], still hasn't recovered it, why?BECAUSE HE'S TOO ATTACHED TO '''ITACHI UCHIHA'S''' BODY, AND YES, HE HAS THE because he is too attached to Itachi's body, and yes, he has the [[RedEyesTakeWarning SHARIGAN]].Sharingan]].]]
** The Ame Trio get [[spoiler: punched, killed, wipedout out, and scattered, and FINALLY, finally, get put on spikes by Hanzo the salamander.Salamander. How did this happen? No Obito, no Obito means no manipulating Akatsuki to be whittled down one by one, so this would mean that they would be successful this time. NOPE, Nope, Hanzo get's gets motivated to finally get back on to the scene as an active shinobi.]]
*** [[spoiler: This then results in the second iteration of the Akatsukito have having never even been created, and so its members are out in the wind. Some of their locations and fates have already been confirmed. Nagato and Konan's heads are mounted on spikes outside ame. Itachi is dead and assimilated into Orochimaru. Kabuto and Orochimaru are on their own in Otogakure. Kisame is loyal to Kiri. Kakuzu lived as a bounty hunter until he was killed. Juzo was loyal to Kiri, until Sugishi killed him. The Zetsus don't exist. The ones who are yet to be comfirmed are Sasori, Deidara, and Hidan.]]
*** Orchimaru: [[spoiler: [[AnArmAndALeg Lost an arm]], still hasn't recovered it, why?
** The Ame Trio get [[spoiler: punched, killed, wiped
*** [[spoiler: This then results in the second iteration of the Akatsuki
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** [[WrestlerInAllOfUs Takeo does it again]] to Sutsu. As the two have their fight at Fight Night, Takeo dominates throughout it. As a finisher, Takeo sets up Sutsu for a powerbomb, which he's eager to use, much to Sutsu's panic. The end result is a Sutsu-shaped crater with the guy being buried a foot deep from head to ass.
* HeroOfAnotherStory: While Takeo is having his adventures, Jiraiya has been busy fixing any problems that could face Konoha. So far he's fixed Gaara's seal before the Jinchuuriki was ever met, reported on the aftermath of Ame's civil war, and located and fought [[spoiler:Orochimaru, revealing he is in the possession of the Sharingan.]]
* HeroicSecondWind: Takeo gets one during his spar against Sasuke when the two were still attending the Academy. After initially being overwhelmed by Sasuke's greater agility and specialized taijutsu, Takeo manages to create some distance and ready himself as he starts to really enjoy this fight. After Takeo's Syrup Field clashes with Sasuke's Great Fireball, the resulting steam puts Takeo in the perfect position to sneak around from behind and catch him in another Syrup Field, [[StickySituation leaving the Last Uchiha incapacitated]] and winning Takeo the spar.
* HeroOfAnotherStory: While Takeo is having his adventures, Jiraiya has been busy fixing any problems that could face Konoha. So far he's fixed Gaara's seal before the Jinchuuriki was ever met, reported on the aftermath of Ame's civil war, and located and fought [[spoiler:Orochimaru, revealing he is in the possession of the Sharingan.]]
* HeroicSecondWind: Takeo gets one during his spar against Sasuke when the two were still attending the Academy. After initially being overwhelmed by Sasuke's greater agility and specialized taijutsu, Takeo manages to create some distance and ready himself as he starts to really enjoy this fight. After Takeo's Syrup Field clashes with Sasuke's Great Fireball, the resulting steam puts Takeo in the perfect position to sneak around from behind and catch him in another Syrup Field, [[StickySituation leaving the Last Uchiha incapacitated]] and winning Takeo the spar.
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** [[WrestlerInAllOfUs Takeo does it again]] to Sutsu. As the two have their fight at Fight Night, Takeo dominates throughout it. As a finisher, Takeo sets up Sutsu for a powerbomb, which he's eager to use, much to Sutsu's panic. The end result is a Sutsu-shaped crater with the guy being buried a foot deep from head to ass.
* HeadInTheSandManagement: Averted by [[OriginalCharacter Yoshiaki Ando]], village leader of Yugakure, who after hearing a report from one of his chunin that [[spoiler: Kumo is attacking Frost, he immediately checks his village's files and finds that Kumo had been attending to their village more frequently as of late, and puts it together that they will be next when the assault on Frost is finished. His immediate response is to write a request for help from Konoha.]]
* HeroOfAnotherStory: While Takeo is having his adventures, Jiraiya has been busy fixing any problems that could face Konoha. So far he's fixed Gaara's seal before the Jinchuuriki was ever met, reported on the aftermath of Ame's civil war, and located and fought [[spoiler:Orochimaru, revealing that he is in the possession of the Sharingan.]]
* HeroicSecondWind: Takeo gets one during his spar against Sasuke when the two were still attending the Academy. After initially being overwhelmed by Sasuke's greater agility and specialized taijutsu, Takeo manages to create some distance and ready himself as he starts toreally enjoy this fight. After Takeo's Syrup Field clashes with Sasuke's Great Fireball, the resulting steam puts Takeo in the perfect position to sneak around from behind and catch him in another Syrup Field, [[StickySituation leaving the Last Uchiha incapacitated]] and winning Takeo the spar.
* HeadInTheSandManagement: Averted by [[OriginalCharacter Yoshiaki Ando]], village leader of Yugakure, who after hearing a report from one of his chunin that [[spoiler: Kumo is attacking Frost, he immediately checks his village's files and finds that Kumo had been attending to their village more frequently as of late, and puts it together that they will be next when the assault on Frost is finished. His immediate response is to write a request for help from Konoha.]]
* HeroOfAnotherStory: While Takeo is having his adventures, Jiraiya has been busy fixing any problems that could face Konoha. So far he's fixed Gaara's seal before the Jinchuuriki was ever met, reported on the aftermath of Ame's civil war, and located and fought [[spoiler:Orochimaru, revealing that he is in the possession of the Sharingan.]]
* HeroicSecondWind: Takeo gets one during his spar against Sasuke when the two were still attending the Academy. After initially being overwhelmed by Sasuke's greater agility and specialized taijutsu, Takeo manages to create some distance and ready himself as he starts to
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* HoneyTrap: Kumo managed to get one of their own kunoichi pregnant with a Hyuuga bastard while at Hot Springs. She was immediately caught and killed by Konoha, leading to more tension between the two.
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* HoneyTrap: Kumo managed to get one of their own kunoichi pregnant with a Hyuuga bastard while at Hot Springs. She was immediately caught and killed by Konoha, leading to more tension between the two.
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* InLoveWithYourCarnage: Kisame was really turned on by seeing Sugishi carrying [[spoiler:the dead body of Juzo.]] Takeo's realization of this leaves him so disturbed, that the next hour for him passes in a blur.
* InSpiteOfANail: Just as many are the changes, are the many things that stay the same.
** The canon teams and their sensei's are still the same, just merely added ones.
* InSpiteOfANail: Just as many are the changes, are the many things that stay the same.
** The canon teams and their sensei's are still the same, just merely added ones.
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* InLoveWithYourCarnage: Kisame was really turned on by seeing Sugishi carrying [[spoiler:the dead body of Juzo.]] Takeo's realization of this leaves him so disturbed, that the next hour for him passes in a blur.
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* InSpiteOfANail: Just as there are manyare the changes, there are the just as many things that stay the same.
** The canon teams and theirsensei's senseis are still the same, just merely added ones.
* InSpiteOfANail: Just as there are many
** The canon teams and their
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* InadequateInheritor: When Hiruzen gives command of Konoha to Shikaku Nara while the former goes to Ame on a diplomatic mission, it is noted that Shikaku doesn't have the raw power to be a Hokage nor has he improved since the time of the Fourth.
* TheInfiltration: Their last mission on the border has Sugishi and Takeo go undercover in Ame to gather intel and cause destruction. When they make it through under false identities, Sugishi gets a job as a singer in a shinobi bar while Takeo becomes a janitor at Ame's Academy, with each position being prime for collecting intel. When a civil war breaks out, the two use this opportunity to cause damage. Takeo manages to kill many enemy shinobi while in a fight at a hospital, and Sugishi brings down Hanzo's tower.
* TheInfiltration: Their last mission on the border has Sugishi and Takeo go undercover in Ame to gather intel and cause destruction. When they make it through under false identities, Sugishi gets a job as a singer in a shinobi bar while Takeo becomes a janitor at Ame's Academy, with each position being prime for collecting intel. When a civil war breaks out, the two use this opportunity to cause damage. Takeo manages to kill many enemy shinobi while in a fight at a hospital, and Sugishi brings down Hanzo's tower.
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* InadequateInheritor: When Hiruzen gives command of Konoha to Shikaku Nara while the former goes to Ame on a diplomatic mission, it is noted that Shikaku doesn't have the raw power to be a Hokage nor has he improved since the time of the Fourth.
Fourth Hokage.
* TheInfiltration: Their last mission on the border has Sugishi and Takeo go undercover in Ame to gather intel and cause destruction. When they make it through under false identities, Sugishi gets a job as a singer in a shinobi bar while Takeo becomes a janitor at Ame's Academy, with each position being prime for collecting intel. When acivil war {{CivilWar}} breaks out, the two use this opportunity to cause damage. Takeo manages to kill many enemy shinobi while in a fight at a hospital, and Sugishi brings down Hanzo's tower.tower.
* InstantWinCondition: If two natural 100s are ever rolled in a single round of combat, the fight is automatically won. So far, this has happened [[spoiler:twice, the first was against Sasuke while he and Takeo were still in the Academy and the second was against Akatsuchi during the battle at Iwa's Great Dam.]]
* TheInfiltration: Their last mission on the border has Sugishi and Takeo go undercover in Ame to gather intel and cause destruction. When they make it through under false identities, Sugishi gets a job as a singer in a shinobi bar while Takeo becomes a janitor at Ame's Academy, with each position being prime for collecting intel. When a
* InstantWinCondition: If two natural 100s are ever rolled in a single round of combat, the fight is automatically won. So far, this has happened [[spoiler:twice, the first was against Sasuke while he and Takeo were still in the Academy and the second was against Akatsuchi during the battle at Iwa's Great Dam.]]
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* IntimateTelecommunications: Temari, trying to win back Takeo from Sakura, sent him an [[BoobsAndButtPose arousing photo of herself]] to him in a letter, asking what he thought of it. Wanting to be honest, Takeo revealed this to Sakura, and she decided to respond to this with her own message to Temari. She [[MaleGaze took her own seductive photo]], giving a copy to Takeo, and sent another copy to Temari, with the message that she can keep sending more pictures like that, and that for every photo she sends, Sakura will send one to her to compare.
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* IntimateTelecommunications: Temari, trying to win back Takeo from Sakura, sent him an [[BoobsAndButtPose arousing photo of herself]] to him in a letter, asking what he thought of it. Wanting to be honest, Takeo revealed this to Sakura, and she decided to respond to this with her own message to Temari. She [[MaleGaze took her own seductive photo]], giving a copy to Takeo, and sent another copy to Temari, with the message that she can keep sending more pictures like that, and that for every photo she sends, Sakura will send one to her to compare.
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* LoveAtFirstPunch: Sasuke manages a win in a close fight against Tenten during the Suna Chunin Exam, which he does in an "interesting fashion". Whatever it was, both become attracted to the other and [[OfficialCouple begin dating]].
* ManaShield: The Chakra Pelt is a secret technique of the otters. It basically acts as a full body cloak of chakra that acts as a shield. Taru teaches this to Takeo to further his learning of the Shell Shattering Fist.
* ManaShield: The Chakra Pelt is a secret technique of the otters. It basically acts as a full body cloak of chakra that acts as a shield. Taru teaches this to Takeo to further his learning of the Shell Shattering Fist.
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* LoveAtFirstPunch: Sasuke manages a win in a close fight against Tenten during the Suna Chunin Exam, which he does in an "interesting fashion". Whatever it was, both become became attracted to the other and [[OfficialCouple begin dating]].
* ManaShield: The Chakra Pelt is a secret technique of the otters. Itbasically acts as a full body full-body cloak of chakra that acts as a shield. Taru teaches this to Takeo to further his learning of the Shell Shattering Fist.
* ManaShield: The Chakra Pelt is a secret technique of the otters. It
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* MeanBoss: Hayama Shirakumo proved to be this during Takeo and Sugishi's border duty. [[UngratefulBastard He was generally unimpressed with having the two instead of the full chunin squad]] as he wanted, despite the pair being extremely skilled. He was especially unimpressed with Takeo, seeing him as untested. When Takeo proves his prowess after coming back from Ame and recounts what happened, Shirakumo's face was actually reddening.
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* MeanBoss: Hayama Shirakumo proved to be this during Takeo and Sugishi's border duty. [[UngratefulBastard He was generally unimpressed with having the two instead of the full chunin squad]] as he wanted, despite the pair being extremely skilled. He was especially unimpressed with Takeo, seeing him as untested. When Takeo proves his prowess after coming back from Ame and recounts what happened, Shirakumo's face was actually reddening.
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** Yari means spear, which is his weapon of choice.
* MeetTheInLaws: Temari introduces Takeo to her father, introducing him as her boyfriend. [[spoiler:She then introduces him to Sakura, saying she is dating her as well, and that the two Konoha-nin are dating each other too.]] Takeo notices how [[StunnedSilence even the Kazekage was stunned]] by this.
* MeetTheInLaws: Temari introduces Takeo to her father, introducing him as her boyfriend. [[spoiler:She then introduces him to Sakura, saying she is dating her as well, and that the two Konoha-nin are dating each other too.]] Takeo notices how [[StunnedSilence even the Kazekage was stunned]] by this.
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** Yari means spear, which is his [[WeaponSpecialization weapon of choice.
choice]].
* MeetTheInLaws: Temari introduces Takeo to her father, introducing him as her boyfriend.[[spoiler:She [[spoiler:[[{{Polyamory}} She then introduces him to Sakura, saying she is dating her as well, and that the two Konoha-nin are dating each other too.too]].]] Takeo notices how [[StunnedSilence even the Kazekage was stunned]] by this.
* MeetTheInLaws: Temari introduces Takeo to her father, introducing him as her boyfriend.
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* NeckSnap: During his assault on the Ame hospital, Takeo gets into a Taijutsu battle against a tokubetsu jonin. He manages to get the upper hand and put her in a blood choke, and from there applies enough force to snap her neck.
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* NeckSnap: During his assault on the Ame hospital, Takeo gets into a Taijutsu battle against a tokubetsu jonin. He manages managed to get the upper hand and put her in a blood choke, and from there applies applied enough force to snap her neck.
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* OutSick: Hanzo's current state was mostly unknown. He was still alive and in control of Ame but his well-being was contentious, with many of his own shinobi not knowing the details. After the [[CivilWar civil war]], Hanzo was thriving again and ready to fight.
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* OutSick: Hanzo's current state was mostly unknown. He was still alive and in control of Ame but his well-being was contentious, with many of his own shinobi not knowing the details. After the [[CivilWar civil war]], {{CivilWar}}, Hanzo was thriving again and ready to fight.
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* {{Polyamory}}: [[spoiler:After Temari and Sakura kiss, followed by the two of them kissing Takeo each, the three come to realize they each have feelings for one another and decide to make it all official.]]
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* {{Polyamory}}: Polyamory: [[spoiler:After Temari and Sakura kiss, followed by the two of them kissing Takeo each, the three come to realize they each have feelings for one another and decide to make it all official.]]
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** Takeo, Shikamaru, Lee, Temari and Gaara are promoted to chunin following the Konoha Chunin Exams
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** Takeo, Shikamaru, Lee, Temari Temari, and Gaara are promoted to chunin following the Konoha Chunin Exams
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** At least Takeo, Sasuke, and Neji have been given a [[FieldPromotion field promotion]] to jonin following [[spoiler: Konoha preparing to enter the Fourth Shinobi War.]]
* RareRandomDrop: Sezaki is having a hard time finding Takeo's Bin-Go card, as not only is it rare, the card packs are in low print.
* RareRandomDrop: Sezaki is having a hard time finding Takeo's Bin-Go card, as not only is it rare, the card packs are in low print.
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** At least Takeo, Sasuke, Neji, Shikamaru, and Neji Shino have been given a [[FieldPromotion field promotion]] to jonin following [[spoiler: Konoha preparing to enter the Fourth Great Shinobi War.]]
* RareRandomDrop: Sezaki is having a hard time finding Takeo's Bin-Go card, as not only is it rare, but the card packs are in low print.
* RareRandomDrop: Sezaki is having a hard time finding Takeo's Bin-Go card, as not only is it rare, but the card packs are in low print.
* RoaringRampageOfRevenge: As soon as [[spoiler:Han]] sees that the Hokage and Takeo have not only survived but [[spoiler:killed Onoki]], he immediately goes [[spoiler:into his Tailed Beast Mode]] and starts to go berserk.
-->[[spoiler:'''Han''']]: ... I failed? I failed... [[spoiler:Kokuo]], we take our revenge.
-->[[spoiler:'''Han''']]: ... I failed? I failed... [[spoiler:Kokuo]], we take our revenge.
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* SideBet: Konoha's jonin sensei decide to have a bet on whose student makes it the furthest in the Chunin Exams. The winner gets three nights of free drinks from the losers. [[spoiler: Hoheto wins the bet with Takeo.]]
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* SideBet: Konoha's jonin sensei decide to have a bet on whose student makes it the furthest in the Chunin Exams. The Exams, with the winner gets getting three nights of free drinks from the losers. [[spoiler: Hoheto wins the bet with Takeo.]]
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* TheSpartanWay: This is the purpose of the Jonin Bootcamp, to train the members of Team 7, Team Guy, Shikamaru, Takeo, and Shino into the next elite fighting force to combat Konoha's enemies. They each have their own personalized regiments and are taught by jonins that they themselves are specialists in distinct fields.
* StudentAndMasterTeam: Sugishi and Takeo form this when the latter becomes the apprentice of the former and travel to Ame's border.
* StuffBlowingUp: The bridge Takeo blew up while he was traveling to Ame was utterly devastated, as if it never existed at all.
* StudentAndMasterTeam: Sugishi and Takeo form this when the latter becomes the apprentice of the former and travel to Ame's border.
* StuffBlowingUp: The bridge Takeo blew up while he was traveling to Ame was utterly devastated, as if it never existed at all.
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* SpareAMessenger: Hiruzen gives the order to Takeo to take out an [[spoiler:Iwa genin team and their jonin-sensei, but to leave one alive so that they can report back about the attack and with hopes that it would draw the Tsuchikage himself into the conflict and away from his defensive position.]]
* SparedByTheAdaptation:
** The Konoha Crush never happened, in part due to Hiruzen and Rasa coming to agreements beforehand. As such both Kages are still alive.
** Not only are both Zabuza and Haku alive, but they are also loyal to Yagura.
** Though he has yet to be encountered, Mangetsu is noted as still being alive.
* TheSpartanWay: This is the purpose of the Jonin Bootcamp, to train the members of Team 7, Team Guy, Shikamaru, Takeo, and Shino into the next elite fighting force to combat Konoha's enemies. They each havetheir own personalized regiments and are taught by jonins jonin that they themselves are specialists in distinct their own distinctive fields.
* StudentAndMasterTeam: Sugishi and Takeo form this when the latter becomes the apprentice of the former and both travel to Ame's border.
* StuffBlowingUp: The bridge Takeo blew up while he was traveling to Ame was utterlydevastated, devastated as if it never existed at all.
* SparedByTheAdaptation:
** The Konoha Crush never happened, in part due to Hiruzen and Rasa coming to agreements beforehand. As such both Kages are still alive.
** Not only are both Zabuza and Haku alive, but they are also loyal to Yagura.
** Though he has yet to be encountered, Mangetsu is noted as still being alive.
* TheSpartanWay: This is the purpose of the Jonin Bootcamp, to train the members of Team 7, Team Guy, Shikamaru, Takeo, and Shino into the next elite fighting force to combat Konoha's enemies. They each have
* StudentAndMasterTeam: Sugishi and Takeo form this when the latter becomes the apprentice of the former and both travel to Ame's border.
* StuffBlowingUp: The bridge Takeo blew up while he was traveling to Ame was utterly
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* SuccessionCrisis: Takeo notices that, when Hiruzen gives Shikaku overall command and makes Danzo his second in command, everyone else's reactions. Shikaku is unhappy but saw it coming, Danzo is irked at the decision, and Kakashi is gleeful that he wasn't given the position. And seeing as both of the loyal Sannin are absent from the meeting, this clues in Takeo to the fact that Konoha doesn't currently ''have'' a suitable candidate lined up to take up the mantle of Kage should Hiruzen pass.
* SwampsAreEvil: The swamps around Ame contain dangerous chakra beasts of all kinds as well as other dangers. This becomes subverted due to low encounter rolls, as when Sugishi and Takeo take a detour through it to Ame, they find no danger through their run and arrive back on the road safely.
* SwampsAreEvil: The swamps around Ame contain dangerous chakra beasts of all kinds as well as other dangers. This becomes subverted due to low encounter rolls, as when Sugishi and Takeo take a detour through it to Ame, they find no danger through their run and arrive back on the road safely.
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* StrippedToTheBone: All that remains of [[spoiler:Onoki]] following the combined assault Hiruzen's Great Konoha Guardian Dragon Technique and Takeo's Lightning Rod Sensor is a [[spoiler:child-sized]] skeleton atop a cooling glass spire.
* SuccessionCrisis: Takeo noticesthat, everyone else's reactions when Hiruzen gives Shikaku overall command and makes Danzo his second in command, everyone else's reactions.command. Shikaku is unhappy but saw it coming, Danzo is irked at the decision, and Kakashi is gleeful that he wasn't given the position. And seeing as both of the loyal Sannin are absent from the meeting, this clues in Takeo to the fact that Konoha doesn't currently ''have'' a suitable candidate lined up to take up the mantle of Kage Hokage should Hiruzen pass.
* SwampsAreEvil: The swamps around Ame containdangerous murderous chakra beasts of all kinds as well as other dangers. This becomes subverted due to low encounter rolls, as when Sugishi and Takeo take a detour through it to Ame, they find no danger through their run and arrive back on the road safely.
* SuccessionCrisis: Takeo notices
* SwampsAreEvil: The swamps around Ame contain
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* TrueCompanions: Team 24 is this as a whole. [[ChildhoodFriends Being friends since their Academy days]], the three have absolute faith in each other. Suro and Totagi don't let their failures over their own performances at the Chunin Exams stop them from cheering on Takeo as he continues forward. Takeo himself chooses to remain a member of Team 24 after his promotion, wanting at least one other to become a chunin before the team is disbanded. Kakashi notes that the three would have crushed the bell test due to their friendship, before their team was even formed.
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* TrueCompanions: Team 24 is this as a whole. [[ChildhoodFriends Being friends since their Academy days]], the three have absolute faith in each other. Suro and Totagi don't let their failures over their own performances at the Chunin Exams stop them from cheering on Takeo as he continues forward. Takeo himself chooses to remain a member of Team 24 after his promotion, wanting at least one other to become a chunin before the team is disbanded. Kakashi notes that the three would have crushed the bell test due to their friendship, friendship before their team was even formed.
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* WhamEpisode: [[spoiler: Chapter 24.5 has the official start to the Fourth Shinobi War, with Iwa leading a surprise attack on Taki, forcing many of their shinobi and Fuu into [[RunOrDie retreating from their home]], Kumo attacked the Land of Frost and [[TyrantTakesTheHelm subjugated them]], and [[MartialPacifist Hot Springs]] has requested Konoha for aid in the oncoming war.]]
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* WhamEpisode: [[spoiler: Chapter 24.5 has the official start to the Fourth Great Shinobi War, with Iwa leading a surprise attack on Taki, forcing many of their shinobi and Fuu into [[RunOrDie retreating from their home]], Kumo attacked the Land of Frost and [[TyrantTakesTheHelm subjugated them]], and [[MartialPacifist Hot Springs]] has requested Konoha for aid in the oncoming war.]]
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* ZergRush: This is Naruto's specialty thanks to the amount of Shadow Clones he can produce. One particular instance is when he lets loose an "Orange Tide" at the [[spoiler:Iwa Front during the war.]]
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* BladeOnAStick: Yari Yi, a personal summon of Sugishi, is a giant-sized otter that wields a spear in combat. His signature move is even called [[CallingYourAttacks "Great Spear"]].
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** Yari means spear, which is his [[BladeOnAStick weapon of choice]].
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** Yari means spear, which is his [[BladeOnAStick weapon of choice]].choice.
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* AntiClimax: The resolution of the initial Wave delegation mission ends with Utakata, who beforehand looked ready to fight, telling the group that Wave will accept a proper delegation at a later point. When this is accepted, Utakata disappears back into Wave behind his barrier of bubbles. Takeo sums up his and the other chunin’s thoughts.
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* AntiClimax: The resolution of the initial Wave delegation mission ends with Utakata, who beforehand looked ready to fight, telling the group that Wave will accept a proper delegation at a later point. When this is accepted, Utakata disappears back into Wave behind his barrier of bubbles. Takeo sums up his and the other chunin’s thoughts.chunin are somewhat disappointed.
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* GuiltFreeExterminationWar: [[spoiler: The Hokage sends a high strength taskforce under Jiraiya’s leadership to Otogakure to end Orochimaru, as he is both not at his best and his immense intellect and complete lack of morals could turn the balance against Konoha in the Fourth Great Shinobi War.]] [[spoiler: The assault on ends with Orochimaru and his entire village dead with no casualties for Konoha.]]
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* GuiltFreeExterminationWar: [[spoiler: The Hokage sends a high strength taskforce under Jiraiya’s leadership to Otogakure to end Orochimaru, as he is both not at his best and his immense intellect and complete lack of morals could turn the balance against Konoha in the Fourth Great Shinobi War.]] [[spoiler: The assault on Otogakure ends with Orochimaru and his entire village dead with no casualties for Konoha.]]
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''[[https://fiction.live/stories/A-leaf-of-the-tree-Naruto-Quest-/2Wqu5LepbujngvekH/home A Leaf of the Tree]]'' is an [[AudienceParticipation interactive]] a ''Manga/{{Naruto}}'' fanfiction [[AudienceParticipation quest]] written by [[https://fiction.live/user/thedave thedave]], a.k.a. [=TheDave=] or just Dave. This story was started on April 2021 and is still ongoing.
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** Kochi, Komaza, and Nejiri The genin of Team Otokaze, die during the [[HungryJungle Forest of Death stage of the Chunin Exams]], with it being reported by Hoheto to Takeo.
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** Kochi, Komaza, and Nejiri Nejiri, The genin of Team Otokaze, die during the [[HungryJungle Forest of Death stage of the Chunin Exams]], with it being reported by Hoheto to Takeo.
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--> '''[[PungeonMaster Asuma]]''': Yeah, sorry to burst your bubble, but we figured just waving wasn’t going to get a response.
--> '''Utakata (pleased)''': …That’s funny.
--> '''Utakata (pleased)''': …That’s funny.
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--> ''"We need to increase the number of, and strengthen the ability of, our answers to other villages’ heaviest hitters,” The Hokage breathes out heavily, his head leaning forwards for a moment, before he seems to find his resolve once more, his stare pinning you in place, “We need the next generation to step up and take their place amongst our strongest. Simply put, we need you."''
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* ImprovisedLightningRod: [[TricksterMentor Kakashi]] decides to give Takeo his first lesson in Lightning Release by demonstrating the Lighting Rod Jutsu… [[HarmlessElectrocution on Takeo]].
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* ImprovisedLightningRod: [[TricksterMentor Kakashi]] decides to give Takeo his first lesson in Lightning Release by demonstrating the Lighting Rod Jutsu… [[HarmlessElectrocution Jutsu…[[HarmlessElectrocution on Takeo]].
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--> '''Takeo''': Pitiful, right?
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--> '''Naomi''': Never leaving any survivors definitely helps.
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--> '''Takeo's Mother''': I won't have you becoming some kind of isolated pariah. You're going to go into the village and you're going to spend time with your friends. And you're picking up a new hobby as well! A proper one, not just training in disguise!
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** At least Takeo, Sasuke, and Neji have been given a [[FieldPromotion field promotion]] to join following [[spoiler: Konoha preparing to enter the Fourth Shinobi War.]]
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--> '''Takeo''': There's no guarantees for us. None. That was never a secret. What happened to your team is terrible, but it's not something you can change at this point. The only thing you can influence, is where you go from here. You were the only one to walk out of Suna alive and unharmed. Are you really going to insult their losses by living a half life? Because that's what giving up would be. They knew what your goals were going in, just as you knew what they wanted out of life. Of those 3 dreams for the future, two are impossible now. But yours isn't. And you owe it to them to make it a reality.
--> '''Kugi''': None of that is going to help either of them though.
--> '''Takeo''': No it won't. But it'll help you. And if you were a good team, then I believe that they'd both want that. And that will have to be good enough.
--> '''Kugi''': What if it isn't?
--> '''Takeo''': It'll have to be.
--> '''Kugi''': None of that is going to help either of them though.
--> '''Takeo''': No it won't. But it'll help you. And if you were a good team, then I believe that they'd both want that. And that will have to be good enough.
--> '''Kugi''': What if it isn't?
--> '''Takeo''': It'll have to be.
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--> ''Bridge? What bridge? You mean that single rock in the middle of the river?''
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--> ''(Before the fight)''
--> '''Takeo''': What’s up with the flying? Wanted to make your last fight a memorable one for the crowd?
--> '''Temari''': No, I was just looking if I could find you a good seat for when you’re not allowed in the competitors’ galleries anymore. I’d hate for you to miss my next two matches after all.
--> ''(During the fight)''
--> '''Takeo''': Aww, you getting tired already? I was just starting to feel that!
--> '''Temari''': Oh really, you were beginning to feel it? I’m supposed to ignore the scraps of clothes and the drops of blood I saw flying off of you then?
--> '''Takeo''': What, those little cuts? I’ve had papercuts that hurt worse!
--> '''Takeo''': What’s up with the flying? Wanted to make your last fight a memorable one for the crowd?
--> '''Temari''': No, I was just looking if I could find you a good seat for when you’re not allowed in the competitors’ galleries anymore. I’d hate for you to miss my next two matches after all.
--> ''(During the fight)''
--> '''Takeo''': Aww, you getting tired already? I was just starting to feel that!
--> '''Temari''': Oh really, you were beginning to feel it? I’m supposed to ignore the scraps of clothes and the drops of blood I saw flying off of you then?
--> '''Takeo''': What, those little cuts? I’ve had papercuts that hurt worse!
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* CombatCommentator: Kakashi, and briefly Takeo, take on this role, with added whimsical speech, during their airborne assault against [[spoiler:the Ame defectors.]]
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* CombatCommentator: Kakashi, and briefly Takeo, take on this role, with added whimsical speech, during their airborne assault against [[spoiler:the Ame defectors.]]
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* ForgivenButNotForgotten: Suro apologizes to Takeo for [[MomentOfWeakness hurting him after reacting negatively]] to both Totagi’s injuries and Takeo’s attempt at calming her down right after. Takeo forgives Suro and says they’re still friends, but clarifies that they will have a problem if it happens again.
* ForgivenButNotForgotten: Suro apologizes to Takeo for [[MomentOfWeakness hurting him after reacting negatively]] to both Totagi’s injuries and Takeo’s attempt at calming her down right after. Takeo forgives Suro and says they’re still friends, but clarifies that they will have a problem if it happens again.
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* GuiltFreeExterminationWar: [[spoiler: The Hokage sends a high strength taskforce under Jiraiya’s leadership to Otogakure to end Orochimaru, as he is both not at his best and his immense intellect and complete lack of morals could turn the balance against Konoha in the Fourth Great Shinobi War.]] [[spoiler: The assault on ends with Orochimaru and his entire village dead.]]
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* GuiltFreeExterminationWar: [[spoiler: The Hokage sends a high strength taskforce under Jiraiya’s leadership to Otogakure to end Orochimaru, as he is both not at his best and his immense intellect and complete lack of morals could turn the balance against Konoha in the Fourth Great Shinobi War.]] [[spoiler: The assault on ends with Orochimaru and his entire village dead.dead with no casualties for Konoha.]]
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* TheInfiltration: Their last mission on the border has Sugishi and Takeo go undercover in Ame to gather intel and cause destruction. When they make it through under false identities, Sugishi gets a job as a singer in a shinobi bar while Takeo becomes a janitor at Ame’s Academy, with each position being prime for collecting intel. When a civil war breaks out, the two use this opportunity to cause damage. Takeo manages to kill many enemy shinobi while in a fight at a hospital, and Sugishi brings down Hanzo’s tower.
* InSpiteOfANail: Just as many are the changes, are the many things that stay the same.
** The canon teams and their sensei's are still the same, just merely added ones.
** Team 7 still gets their respective teachers, even if some of their arsenal is missing or have new ones in their kit. Sakura is still with Tsunade, and far earlier, but has learned some earth jutsu on top of it. Naruto has trained with Jiraiya, and though the Rasengan wasn't mentioned he has signed the toad contract. Kakashi still teaches Sasuke, with much better results.
** The canon teams and their sensei's are still the same, just merely added ones.
** Team 7 still gets their respective teachers, even if some of their arsenal is missing or have new ones in their kit. Sakura is still with Tsunade, and far earlier, but has learned some earth jutsu on top of it. Naruto has trained with Jiraiya, and though the Rasengan wasn't mentioned he has signed the toad contract. Kakashi still teaches Sasuke, with much better results.
* TheInfiltration: Their last mission on the border has Sugishi and Takeo go undercover in Ame to gather intel and cause destruction. When they make it through under false identities, Sugishi gets a job as a singer in a shinobi bar while Takeo becomes a janitor at Ame’s Academy, with each position being prime for collecting intel. When a civil war breaks out, the two use this opportunity to cause damage. Takeo manages to kill many enemy shinobi while in a fight at a hospital, and Sugishi brings down Hanzo’s tower.
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* InSpiteOfANail: Just as many are the changes, are the many things that stay the same.
** The canon teams and their sensei's are still the same, just merely added ones.
** Team 7 still gets their respective teachers, even if some of their arsenal is missing or have new ones in their kit. Sakura is still with Tsunade, and far earlier, but has learned some earth jutsu on top of it. Naruto has trained with Jiraiya, and though the Rasengan wasn't mentioned he has signed the toad contract. Kakashi still teaches Sasuke, with much better results.
** The canon teams and their sensei's are still the same, just merely added ones.
** Team 7 still gets their respective teachers, even if some of their arsenal is missing or have new ones in their kit. Sakura is still with Tsunade, and far earlier, but has learned some earth jutsu on top of it. Naruto has trained with Jiraiya, and though the Rasengan wasn't mentioned he has signed the toad contract. Kakashi still teaches Sasuke, with much better results.
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* ItOnlyWorksOnce: Sugishi explains to Takeo that [[spoiler:summoning Boss Yi]] was a one-off and it was only allowed to happen because Hige and Kotai insisted.
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* ItOnlyWorksOnce: Sugishi explains to Takeo that [[spoiler:summoning Boss Yi]] Yi against Hanzo]] was a one-off and it was only allowed to happen because Hige and Kotai insisted.
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* LookBehindYou: Suro pulls one of these on Naruto during the Suna Chunin Exams. She feigns shock and horror at something behind Naruto, and [[SuperGullible when he turns around to check]], she runs up to him and starts beating him down, [[spoiler:winning her the match.]]
* LookBehindYou: Suro pulls one of these on Naruto during the Suna Chunin Exams. She feigns shock and horror at something behind Naruto, and [[SuperGullible when he turns around to check]], she runs up to him and starts beating him down, [[spoiler:winning her the match.]]
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* OverTheTopSecret: Sugishi and Takeo’s report on what they experienced during their covert infiltration of Amegakure, which includes the inner workings of their shinobi and Academy teachings, a double black band with direct orders that it be personally given to the Hokage.
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* OverTheTopSecret: Sugishi and Takeo’s report on what they experienced during their covert infiltration of Amegakure, which includes the inner workings of their shinobi and Academy teachings, gets a double black band with direct orders that it be personally given to the Hokage.
* PoisonousPerson: Hanzo the Salamander and his granddaughter, Naomi, as they are holders of the salamander contract.
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* PoisonousPerson: Hanzo the Salamander and his granddaughter, Naomi, as they are holders of the salamander contract.
* RedEyesTakeWarning: [[spoiler:Orochimaru reveals he is in possession of the Sharingan.]]
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* RedEyesTakeWarning: [[spoiler:Orochimaru reveals he is in possession of the Sharingan.]]
* TheRevolutionWillNotBeCivilized: After Ame signs a treaty with the Konoha and Suna alliance, [[RebelLeader Mano]] and his followers rebelled. He slew his previous rival, Aika, and defected with his group. [[spoiler:[[DeathFromAbove They didn’t get far]].]]
* TheRevolutionWillNotBeCivilized: After Ame signs a treaty with the Konoha and Suna alliance, [[RebelLeader Mano]] and his followers rebelled. He slew his previous rival, Aika, and defected with his group. [[spoiler:[[DeathFromAbove They didn’t get far]].]]
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* AfterActionHealingDrama: Totagi gets beaten in the Suna Chunin Exams, and is left in a bad state. Both Takeo and Suro go with her to the hospital, where a waiting Hoheto informs them she’s going to make a full recovery after a few days of rest.
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* AfterActionHealingDrama: Totagi AfterActionHealingDrama:
** [[ButtMonkey Totagi]] gets poisoned by some missing-nin during Team 24's first C-rank, and is rushed to Suna to get treated. It takes her months to fully recover from the attack.
** [[IronButtMonkey Happens again to Totagi]], as she gets beaten in the Suna ChuninExams, Exams and is left in a bad state. Both Takeo and Suro go with her to the hospital, where a waiting Hoheto informs them she’s going to make a full recovery after a few days of rest. They still stay with her and miss out on seeing the conclusion of the exams.
** [[ButtMonkey Totagi]] gets poisoned by some missing-nin during Team 24's first C-rank, and is rushed to Suna to get treated. It takes her months to fully recover from the attack.
** [[IronButtMonkey Happens again to Totagi]], as she gets beaten in the Suna Chunin
* TheButcher: [[OriginalCharacter Nikuya Shinsato, the Red River Butcher]], is a genin from Tanigakure who got his name by slaughtering some bandits in a river, with their blood turning it red for a bit. [[WeaponSpecialization He has a preference for axes]] and [[DontYouDarePityMe hates the bigger villages looking down on his own]].
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* CatUpATree: As Takeo casually wanders around town, he comes across a young girl whose cat is up a tree, to which he is more than happy to help get down. [[{{Cliche}} He even notes how cliché of a setup this is]].
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* CatUpATree: As Takeo casually wanders around town, he comes across a young girl whose cat is up a tree, to which he is more than happy to help get down. [[{{Cliche}} He even notes how cliché of a setup this is]].
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* FestivalEpisode: Takeo and Sakura have a date during Konoha’s midwinter festival. The celebration is mainly civilian, so the two shinobi both enjoy time away from their usual group. During the festival, they both take in the sights, enjoy delicious food, dance together, and have their first kiss together under dozens of sky lanterns.
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* FestivalEpisode: Takeo and Sakura have a date during Konoha’s midwinter festival. The celebration is mainly civilian, so the two shinobi both enjoy time away from their usual group. During the festival, they both take in the sights, enjoy delicious food, [[DanceOfRomance dance together, together]], and have their first kiss together under dozens of sky lanterns.
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* FriendshipFavoritism: A friendly argument between Takeo and Totagi devolves into Takeo claiming he’ll form a new team between himself, Suro, and Taeko. Totagi asks if, between Takeo and herself, Suro would pick him over her. [[{{Touche}} Takeo can only concede to her point.]]
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* FriendshipFavoritism: A friendly argument between Takeo and Totagi devolves into Takeo claiming he’ll form a new team between himself, Suro, and Taeko.[[CanineCompanion Taeko]]. Totagi asks if, between Takeo and herself, Suro would pick him over her. [[{{Touche}} Takeo can only concede to her point.]]
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* KilledOffscreen: [[spoiler: Orochimaru and Kabuto are killed in a raid by Jiraiya, Tsunade, Kakashi and Guy, with it being reported while Takeo, Neji, Sasuke and Totagi are fighting the Sound Four.]]
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* KilledOffscreen: KilledOffscreen:
** Kochi, Komaza, and Nejiri The genin of Team Otokaze, die during the [[HungryJungle Forest of Death stage of the Chunin Exams]], with it being reported by Hoheto to Takeo.
** Aika Nakai gets killed by [[spoiler: Mano after the latter defects from Ame.]]
**[[spoiler: Orochimaru and Kabuto are killed in a raid by Jiraiya, Tsunade, Kakashi and Guy, with it being reported while Takeo, Neji, Sasuke and Totagi are fighting the Sound Four.]]
** Kochi, Komaza, and Nejiri The genin of Team Otokaze, die during the [[HungryJungle Forest of Death stage of the Chunin Exams]], with it being reported by Hoheto to Takeo.
** Aika Nakai gets killed by [[spoiler: Mano after the latter defects from Ame.]]
**[[spoiler: Orochimaru and Kabuto are killed in a raid by Jiraiya, Tsunade, Kakashi and Guy, with it being reported while Takeo, Neji, Sasuke and Totagi are fighting the Sound Four.]]
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* OverTheTopSecret: Sugishi and Takeo’s report on what they experienced during their infiltration that the report gets a double black band with direct orders that it be personally given to the Hokage.
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* OverTheTopSecret: Sugishi and Takeo’s report on what they experienced during their covert infiltration that of Amegakure, which includes the report gets inner workings of their shinobi and Academy teachings, a double black band with direct orders that it be personally given to the Hokage.
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* HungryJungle: The Forest of Death is full of beasts that are more than eager to kill and devour whatever they can. During the Konoha Chunin Exams, Team 24 is attacked by a [[BigCreepyCrawlies man-sized centipede]], a [[CatsAreMean leopard]], a [[PricklyPorcupine porcupine that can shoot its quills]], and a [[GiantSpider giant venomous spider]]. The latter manages to incapacitate Suro until she is healed by Totagi.
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* HungryJungle: The Forest of Death is full of beasts that are more than eager to kill and devour whatever they can. During the Konoha Chunin Exams, Team 24 is attacked by a [[BigCreepyCrawlies man-sized centipede]], a [[CatsAreMean leopard]], a [[PricklyPorcupine [[SpikeShooter porcupine that can shoot its quills]], and a [[GiantSpider giant venomous spider]]. The latter manages to incapacitate Suro until she is healed by Totagi.
