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-->He was now the lead remaining jonin. \\
He made some quick maths in his head. The support forces had already lost more than half their numbers, along with numerous wounded still left on the ground. What little news they had of the situation in the village wasn't pointing toward victory, more like the same thing as here. \\
It was clear. They'd lost. \\
They'd thought the Leaf weak, but it had only been an act. It was clear they'd been prepared for the invasion. \\
Therefore, as a loyal Sand ninja, Otokaze had only a single option. \\
"Stop!" he yelled. "Sand forces, stand down!" \\
It took a moment, but the fighting slowed then stopped. Surprisingly, the Konoha shinobi in those weird masks also stopped, though still keeping ready for combat. He'd been prepared if they tried to profit from the opening, but they hadn't. \\
There was no visible leader, so he turned to the clone right before him. "Who speaks for your group?" \\
The ninja said nothing, clapping his hands and snapping his fingers in various ways. He then disappeared, another clone having taken his place. This one had spiky hair going from yellow to red as it rose, along with a rainbow crown. His mask was half green and half red, cut diagonally, and he had a visibly fake bushy beard. \\
"Talk," he said in a gruff voice. \\
"I would negotiate the Sand forces' surrender," Otokaze said, gritting his teeth. He hated what he was doing, but he had no other choice; if the Sand forces here didn't return at all, Sunagakure was done. There were small clans and lesser villages who wouldn't miss the opportunity, so he needed to preserve whatever Sand forces he could. \\
The crowned ninja made more of these bizarre had signs. "Drop weapons. You'll be bound and blinded, then led to separate holding points," he then explained. \\
Otokaze gulped. "How about... our wounded?" \\
The Konoha ninja looked around. There were more than twenty fallen Sand ninja in sight, and more hidden being the mass of Konoha Shinobi. "Who are your medics?" \\
"Sand Medics, raise hands!" Otokaze ordered, and about a dozen hands went up. \\
The shinobi opposite him nodded. "Five guards to each medic. Everyone healed is to be bound and blinded. We'll let the medics work as soon as everyone else is secured." Ninja behind him started moving, five for each medical ninja. \\
"I accept your terms," the Sand jonin said, reaching down. He unclipped his belt, letting it drop, then pushed both his hands together toward the man in front of him. It was better terms than what he expected; most villages would have left the wounded to die, if they hadn't finished them off right then. Konoha today had proved its reputation handily. It was the strongest, and still the most decent.\\

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-->He was now the lead remaining jonin. \\
He made some quick maths in his head. The support forces had already lost more than half their numbers, along with numerous wounded still left on the ground. What little news they had of the situation in the village wasn't pointing toward victory, more like the same thing as here. \\
It was clear. They'd lost. \\
--> They'd thought the Leaf weak, but it had only been an act. It was clear they'd been prepared for the invasion. \\\nTherefore, as a loyal Sand ninja, Otokaze had only a single option. \\\n"Stop!" he yelled. "Sand forces, stand down!" \\\nIt took a moment, but the fighting slowed then stopped. Surprisingly, the Konoha shinobi in those weird masks also stopped, though still keeping ready for combat. He'd been prepared if they tried to profit from the opening, but they hadn't. \\\nThere was no visible leader, so he turned to the clone right before him. "Who speaks for your group?" \\\nThe ninja said nothing, clapping his hands and snapping his fingers in various ways. He then disappeared, another clone having taken his place. This one had spiky hair going from yellow to red as it rose, along with a rainbow crown. His mask was half green and half red, cut diagonally, and he had a visibly fake bushy beard. \\\n"Talk," he said in a gruff voice. \\\n"I would negotiate the Sand forces' surrender," Otokaze said, gritting his teeth. He hated what he was doing, but he had no other choice; if the Sand forces here didn't return at all, Sunagakure was done. There were small clans and lesser villages who wouldn't miss the opportunity, so he needed to preserve whatever Sand forces he could. \\\nThe crowned ninja made more of these bizarre had signs. "Drop weapons. You'll be bound and blinded, then led to separate holding points," he then explained. \\\nOtokaze gulped. "How about... our wounded?" \\\nThe Konoha ninja looked around. There were more than twenty fallen Sand ninja in sight, and more hidden being the mass of Konoha Shinobi. "Who are your medics?" \\\n"Sand Medics, raise hands!" Otokaze ordered, and about a dozen hands went up. \\\nThe shinobi opposite him nodded. "Five guards to each medic. Everyone healed is to be bound and blinded. We'll let the medics work as soon as everyone else is secured." Ninja behind him started moving, five for each medical ninja. \\\n"I accept your terms," the Sand jonin said, reaching down. He unclipped his belt, letting it drop, then pushed both his hands together toward the man in front of him. It was better terms than what he expected; most villages would have left the wounded to die, if they hadn't finished them off right then. Konoha today had proved its reputation handily. It was the strongest, and still the most decent.\\\n
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* FluffyTheTerrible: The ultra-secret, anti-invasion, ANBU division which devastated the Sand-Sound Invasion is called 'Doukeshi,' which means...'clown.' Makes sense though when you see their outfits
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* EnergyAbsorption: One forbidden technique allows the user to drain chakra from other sources. Ordinarily only those of the Akado bloodline can safely use it, but it's a game-changer for shadow clones, who don't have to worry about ruining their chakra coils, and can now persist indefinitely. It's also handy in combat.

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* EnergyAbsorption: One forbidden technique allows the user to drain chakra from other sources. Ordinarily only those of the Akado bloodline can safely use it, but it's a game-changer for shadow clones, who don't have to worry about ruining their chakra coils, and can now persist indefinitely. It's also handy in combat.combat, perfect for taking people alive.


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* GoodIsNotSoft:
** How Konoha is considered in the aftermath of the failed Sand-Sound Invasion, especially after Naruto’s clones created an army out of nowhere.
-->He was now the lead remaining jonin. \\
He made some quick maths in his head. The support forces had already lost more than half their numbers, along with numerous wounded still left on the ground. What little news they had of the situation in the village wasn't pointing toward victory, more like the same thing as here. \\
It was clear. They'd lost. \\
They'd thought the Leaf weak, but it had only been an act. It was clear they'd been prepared for the invasion. \\
Therefore, as a loyal Sand ninja, Otokaze had only a single option. \\
"Stop!" he yelled. "Sand forces, stand down!" \\
It took a moment, but the fighting slowed then stopped. Surprisingly, the Konoha shinobi in those weird masks also stopped, though still keeping ready for combat. He'd been prepared if they tried to profit from the opening, but they hadn't. \\
There was no visible leader, so he turned to the clone right before him. "Who speaks for your group?" \\
The ninja said nothing, clapping his hands and snapping his fingers in various ways. He then disappeared, another clone having taken his place. This one had spiky hair going from yellow to red as it rose, along with a rainbow crown. His mask was half green and half red, cut diagonally, and he had a visibly fake bushy beard. \\
"Talk," he said in a gruff voice. \\
"I would negotiate the Sand forces' surrender," Otokaze said, gritting his teeth. He hated what he was doing, but he had no other choice; if the Sand forces here didn't return at all, Sunagakure was done. There were small clans and lesser villages who wouldn't miss the opportunity, so he needed to preserve whatever Sand forces he could. \\
The crowned ninja made more of these bizarre had signs. "Drop weapons. You'll be bound and blinded, then led to separate holding points," he then explained. \\
Otokaze gulped. "How about... our wounded?" \\
The Konoha ninja looked around. There were more than twenty fallen Sand ninja in sight, and more hidden being the mass of Konoha Shinobi. "Who are your medics?" \\
"Sand Medics, raise hands!" Otokaze ordered, and about a dozen hands went up. \\
The shinobi opposite him nodded. "Five guards to each medic. Everyone healed is to be bound and blinded. We'll let the medics work as soon as everyone else is secured." Ninja behind him started moving, five for each medical ninja. \\
"I accept your terms," the Sand jonin said, reaching down. He unclipped his belt, letting it drop, then pushed both his hands together toward the man in front of him. It was better terms than what he expected; most villages would have left the wounded to die, if they hadn't finished them off right then. Konoha today had proved its reputation handily. It was the strongest, and still the most decent.\\
** As kind and helpful as Naruto is, he is not afraid to kill or outright execute if necessary.
** The Third Hokage cares deeply for his people, and is quite kind to Naruto. However you do ''not'' want him angry with you.


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* SureLetsGoWithThat: When a secret ANBU group plays a large role in foiling the Sand-Sound Invasion, everyone assumes that the Third Hokage is responsible for the creation of the 'Doukeshi.' Sarutobi honestly has no idea where they came from, but claims he was indeed responsible for creating them as a defense force, and keeping it classified from even his closest advisors. Takes him a little bit to find out Naruto is responsible.


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* TookALevelInBadass:
** Naruto obviously. It is worth noting though that of his genin team, all three versions of himself are making excellent progress. When he combines everything he has been learning though, he is terrifying. And that is without touching on the army he commands.
** With proper, supportive teaching, and a technique which suits her better, Hinata definitely becomes this. If she was not going to be promoted for her defeat of Neji during the Chunin Exams, the way she turned the medical ward into a meatgrinder against invaders targeting the patients would certainly have done it.
** Iruka is training with Naruto, and definitely improving into a dangerous fighter himself.
** Under Naruto's tutelage, the regular ninja who join the Doukeshi become far more dangerous than they already were.

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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/4573620/1/ A Drop of Poison]]'' is a ForWantOfANail ''Manga/{{Naruto}}'' fan fiction by [=AngelOfSnapdragons=]. When the traitor Mizuki strikes down Iruka, his shuriken is poisoned, causing Iruka to fall unconscious and miss Naruto's rescue, so Naruto doesn't get a field graduation from the Ninja Academy. However, with more time on his hands that evening, Naruto realises that some of his clones still have copies of the Scroll of Forbidden Techniques. Armed with a new appreciation of his shadow clones, and a determination to graduate, Naruto launches an epic secret campaign that will change Konoha forever.

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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/4573620/1/ A Drop of Poison]]'' is a ForWantOfANail ''Manga/{{Naruto}}'' fan fiction by [=AngelOfSnapdragons=]. [=AngelOfSnapdragons=].

When the traitor Mizuki strikes down Iruka, his shuriken is poisoned, causing Iruka to fall unconscious and miss Naruto's rescue, so rescue. As a result, Naruto doesn't get a field graduation from the Ninja Academy. However, with more time on his hands that evening, Naruto realises that some of his clones still have copies of the Scroll of Forbidden Techniques. Armed with a new appreciation of his shadow clones, clones and a determination to graduate, Naruto launches an epic secret campaign that will change Konoha forever.
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* SurvivorGuilt: Muremaru understandably feels this after [[spoiler: Kiritori pushes him out of harm's way and gets killed himself]]; Muremaru is more replaceable and feels that he should have been the one to face danger. Iruka tries to reassure him that [[spoiler: Kiritori]] probably felt the same way, and that there's no way to know if he really could have changed anything.

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* SurvivorGuilt: Muremaru understandably feels this after [[spoiler: Kiritori pushes him out of harm's way and gets killed himself]]; Muremaru is [[WhatMeasureIsANonUnique more replaceable replaceable]] and feels that he should have been the one to face danger. Iruka tries to reassure him that [[spoiler: Kiritori]] probably felt the same way, and that there's no way to know if he really could have changed anything.
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* HiveMind: Ebisu-sensei notices the unusual coordination and unity of Team 1 and is unnerved by it. The swarm isn't ''perfectly'' coordinated, but the combination of regular telepathic updates and the fact that they started as the same person means that they regularly SpeakInUnison, agree easily, etc.

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* SparedByTheAdaptation: With the swarm reaching the Land of Waves before the Leaf team gets there, Zabuza and Haku never have to fight them and are unharmed.

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With the swarm reaching the Land of Waves before the Leaf team gets there, Zabuza and Haku never have to fight them and are unharmed.unharmed.
** The swarm is able to breach Orochimaru's barrier during the Sand invasion, interrupting his fight with the Sandaime and forcing him to retreat.
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--> '''Gaara''': I see. Defence and offence at the same time.
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* InternalReveal: "The Prank", with disguised Naruto clones performing long-term infiltration of the Academy and various other roles, is gradually revealed to relevant parties.
** Iruka finds out pretty much immediately, and helps with the initial setup.
** The Hokage discovers it [[spoiler: when he simultaneously field-promotes Naruto and both clone students after their contributions to thwarting the Sand Invasion]].
** Jiraiya finds out pretty much immediately once he's actually in town, although that takes a while.
** Tsunade [[spoiler: can easily recognise clones, being a medical expert, and makes Naruto come clean]].
** Ebisu [[spoiler: knows something is up when Muremaru takes a fireball without injury, and demands answers]].
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* ThisIsADrill: Gaara's taijutsu is very mechanical and uninspired, but aided by creating sand gauntlets that make his arms unusually tough. Then Naruto does some brainstorming with him, and they strike on the idea of having his gauntlets ''spin'', fast enough to disintegrate thrown rocks (or, more relevantly, an attacker's hands) on contact.

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* ThisIsADrill: Gaara's taijutsu is very mechanical and uninspired, but aided by creating sand gauntlets that make his arms unusually tough. Then Naruto does some brainstorming with him, and they strike on the idea of having his gauntlets ''spin'', fast enough to disintegrate thrown rocks (or, more relevantly, [[CollisionDamage an attacker's hands) hands]]) on contact.
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* ThisIsADrill: Gaara's taijutsu is very mechanical and uninspired, but aided by creating sand gauntlets that make his arms unusually tough. Then Naruto does some brainstorming with him, and they strike on the idea of having his gauntlets ''spin'', fast enough to disintegrate thrown rocks (or, more relevantly, an attacker's hands) on contact.
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* ImmunityDisability: Gaara's instinctive sand control gives him automatic armour even when sleeping, by wrapping himself in sand. Unfortunately, it also means he can't use shadow clones, because his clones instinctively surround themselves in sand, which is enough interference to burst them.
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* ColdBloodedTorture: Shiruba makes use of this [[spoiler: on Shippou]], partly to compel obedience, but mostly because he's sadistic and vengeful.
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* InTheBack: Tora doesn't mess around when dealing with [[spoiler: Gin Shippou's kidnapper]], stabbing him through the heart before he can turn around.

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* ShapeshiftingSquick: Jiraiya is immediately in lust when he sees Hiruzen's new secretary who is practically the spitting image of his first Icha Icha book. Only to be immediately disgusted when Hiruzen gleefully tells him that the "secretary" is a disguised Naruto Shadow Clone. (Although he also had an intermediate reaction of "Tsunade will kill me slowly
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* ShapeshiftingSquick: Jiraiya is immediately in lust when he sees Hiruzen's new secretary who is practically the spitting image of his first Icha Icha book. Only to be immediately disgusted when Hiruzen gleefully tells him that the "secretary" is a disguised Naruto Shadow Clone. (Although he also had an intermediate reaction of "Tsunade will kill me slowly
slowly and painfully if she ever sees this.")

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* ShapeshiftingSquick: Jiraiya is immediately in lust when he sees Hiruzen's new secretary who is practically the spitting image of his first Icha Icha book. Only to be immediately disgusted when Hiruzen gleefully tells him that the "secretary" is a disgused Naruto Shadow Clone.

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* ShapeshiftingSquick: Jiraiya is immediately in lust when he sees Hiruzen's new secretary who is practically the spitting image of his first Icha Icha book. Only to be immediately disgusted when Hiruzen gleefully tells him that the "secretary" is a disgused disguised Naruto Shadow Clone.Clone. (Although he also had an intermediate reaction of "Tsunade will kill me slowly
and painfully if she ever sees this.")
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** Special mention goes to ''Akiraka Jigokuhi'', "evident hellfire", which is at the same time same enough that Naruto himself uses it, and yet even more dangerous than other forbidden techniques if it goes wrong. ''Saishuu Houden'' would injure or kill the user, but a charged-up hellfire sphere could torch the whole area.

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** Special mention goes to ''Akiraka Jigokuhi'', "evident hellfire", which is at the same time same safe enough that Naruto himself uses it, and yet even more dangerous than other forbidden techniques if it goes wrong. ''Saishuu Houden'' would injure or kill the user, but a charged-up hellfire sphere could torch the whole area.

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** The clones who enrol at the academy choose the names Ariko, "ant child", and Muremaru, "incarnate swarm".

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* ShapeshiftingSquick: Jiraiya is immediately in lust when he sees Hiruzen's new secretary who is practically the spitting image of his first Icha Icha book. Only to be immediately disgusted when Hiruzen gleefully tells him that the "secretary" is a disgused Naruto Shadow Clone.
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* CorporateWarfare: The clones' merchant network soon finds that the Konoha Merchant Council has a suspicious level of influence over local businesses, but they can work around it. Then they start to encounter [[spoiler: warehouse fires, stolen shipments, and even murdered suppliers]]. It really gets [[ItsPersonal personal]] after [[spoiler: Ichiraku Ramen is burnt down]].
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* NintendoHard: Naruto is asked to participate in setting up a trap evasion exercise for an academy class. No one gets out of it unmarked, whether they be student, teacher, trap-specialist jonin, or ANBU.
--> The first trap that caught Iruka was a simple step that did a slight clicking sound. The chūnin instantly jumped back, preparing himself for attack, but nothing came. He waited a minute, then rose again to start moving, only to find his sandals stuck to the floor, quick-drying glue having seeped from between the floorboards.\\
He had to abandon them there.\\
The chūnin suspected Naruto had hid the mission scroll downstairs, and the rising level of difficulty seemed to indicate he was right. He started getting more marks from close dodges and the like. By time he'd found the bookcase with the scroll, he'd had to catch a pair of eggs coming from both front and back simultaneously, he'd found the ink stamp with fail inscribed and had to block it, and had lost his socks to another glue trap, this one on the ceiling.\\
By now, he was truly paranoid. He verified every inch of the room before even approaching the scroll, and found nothing. He checked the scroll from every angle and found nothing. Only then did he grab it, prepared for the worst.\\
Nothing.\\
Finally, he sighed and went back through the door, only to fall through a pit trap that hadn't been there before. Worse, there was itching dust at the bottom.

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* FakeRealTurn: To hide their existence when helping fight the Sand Invasion, the swarm disguises themselves as a previously unknown ANBU branch, the Doukeshi. Afterward, the Hokage starts getting requests from ANBU members wanting to transfer to this exciting new unit. [[spoiler: He actually thinks it's a good idea; Naruto's combination of shadow clones with forbidden techniques has proven to be a highly effective strategy worth teaching to others, and the secretive ANBU won't think it's strange to have clones teaching them.]]

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To hide their existence when helping fight the Sand Invasion, the swarm disguises themselves as a previously unknown ANBU branch, the Doukeshi. Afterward, the Hokage starts getting requests from ANBU members wanting to transfer to this exciting new unit. [[spoiler: He actually thinks it's a good idea; Naruto's combination of shadow clones with forbidden techniques has proven to be a highly effective strategy worth teaching to others, and the secretive ANBU won't think it's strange to have clones teaching them.]]]]
** After restoring order [[spoiler: in Wave Country]], the clones keep the peace as supposed samurai mercenaries, the Torasen. Then the remaining non-evil soldiers in the area start asking to sign up...

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* DangerousForbiddenTechnique: Naruto copies down the entire scroll of them. Turns out that when you can churn out disposable copies of yourself, a lot of harmful or outright suicidal techniques become much more usable.

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** Special mention goes to ''Akiraka Jigokuhi'', "evident hellfire", which is at the same time same enough that Naruto himself uses it, and yet even more dangerous than other forbidden techniques if it goes wrong. ''Saishuu Houden'' would injure or kill the user, but a charged-up hellfire sphere could torch the whole area.
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* HeroesPreferSwords: Naruto is in two minds about starting sword training, since he has important training to do in improving the capabilities of the shadow clone technique, but ultimately, swords are too cool for him to pass up. (It's actually a decent choice for his style; improving his skill at melee fighting will make the swarm that much more dangerous.)

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* MadScientist: Shukuen has been experimenting with splicing animal bodies and mechanical parts together, under Orochimaru's patronage. [[spoiler: When he captures Team 1, he takes Ebisu aside to perform experiments on his pain tolerance, and when the team escapes and disrupts his work, he transfers his mind into a giant cyborg/hybrid monster that they have a very hard time fighting.]]
* MagikarpPower: Naruto persuades the Konohamaru Corps to get serious about training their basics, by [[spoiler: trouncing Konohamaru with nothing but Kawarimi substitutions]]. When they're later ready to learn a new technique, he offers them... the Fire Candle, which makes a very small flame appear at the end of one's finger. Because it's the foundation of training control of fire.
--> '''Naruto''': Those who start with the Grand Fireball often burn their lips and tongue when they fail.



* MadScientist: Shukuen has been experimenting with splicing animal bodies and mechanical parts together, under Orochimaru's patronage. [[spoiler: When he captures Team 1, he takes Ebisu aside to perform experiments on his pain tolerance, and when the team escapes and disrupts his work, he transfers his mind into a giant cyborg/hybrid monster that they have a very hard time fighting.]]
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--> '''Bat''': I am wearing my regulation armor over a black suit, with my sword strapped at my back. [[spoiler:My mask is as usual half lime green and half hot pink, with a blue teardrop on the pink side and a purple star on the pink side, both below the eyes. My regulation poofy nose is in place, as are my exaggerated eyebrows. My multicolor wig is in proper position and still curly.]] Should I go into more detail?

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--> '''Bat''': I am wearing my regulation armor over a black suit, with my sword strapped at my back. [[spoiler:My mask is as usual half lime green and half hot pink, with a blue teardrop on the pink green side and a purple star on the pink side, both below the eyes. My regulation poofy nose is in place, as are my exaggerated eyebrows. My multicolor wig is in proper position and still curly.]] Should I go into more detail?
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* PerceptionFilter: Nanabo-oh teaches Naruto a genjutsu that makes an object appear perfectly normal to those affected, no matter how bizarre it is.
--> '''Bat''': I am wearing my regulation armor over a black suit, with my sword strapped at my back. [[spoiler:My mask is as usual half lime green and half hot pink, with a blue teardrop on the pink side and a purple star on the pink side, both below the eyes. My regulation poofy nose is in place, as are my exaggerated eyebrows. My multicolor wig is in proper position and still curly.]] Should I go into more detail?
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* SadistTeacher: Naruto faces several, particularly his maths teacher, who appears to have adjusted his whole teaching style so it will be easier to persecute Naruto (eg writing on the board instead of speaking aloud, so Naruto will miss out when standing in the corner facing the wall). Eventually, [[spoiler: it turns out that Naruto is only one target; there's a systematic attempt to push orphans or poor civilians out by falsifying their results, and they frequently wind up dead or missing afterward]].
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* SherlockScan: The Fashion Ninja teach Ariko (and by extension, all Narutos) about guessing someone's background by examining their clothing.
--> '''Nishi''': A peasant in his best clothes. This cut is quite out of fashion and he visibly isn't used to wearing them.\\
'''Mihoshi''': A successful merchant going to do something dirtying. While most of what he wears is old and used, he's wearing new fashionable sandals, and the bracelet he wears seems to be worth quite a bit.\\
'''Ariko''': How about this group?\\
'''Fumichi''': The girl... I'd say minor nobilty. She has a posture like she's used to getting her way and most non-nobles wouldn't let a child out to play with a pendant.
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* RaisedByDudes: The Konoha Fashion Ninjas assume that this is the reason Ariko knows nothing about fashion. They're not entirely wrong about Naruto's upbringing, since he did indeed have no mother figure.

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