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* FiveBadBand
** BigBad: Nightshade.
** TheDragon: Stratus.
** TheEvilGenius: Charger.
** TheBrute: Blueball Blitz.
** TheDarkChick: Starry Skies.
** BigBad: Nightshade.
** TheDragon: Stratus.
** TheEvilGenius: Charger.
** TheBrute: Blueball Blitz.
** TheDarkChick: Starry Skies.
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* CreatorBacklash: On June 7, 2012, YoorPorick, the creator of the Shadowbolt Characters featured in this fic, made a comment on his homepage saying that he discredits the story and the way his Shadowbolts were used in it.
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* RideTheLightning: Blueball Blitz can fly so fast that everything goes into slow motion as if the whole world around her had come to a complete stop.
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* RideTheLightning: Blueball Blitz can fly so fast that she can literally make herself look like a bolt of lightning. Doing this also causes everything goes to go into slow motion as if the whole world around her had come to a complete stop.
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%%* BribeBackfire: Starry Skies.
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* CompetitionFreak: Nightshade's spartan treatment by her mother caused her to turn into a highly aggressive athlete that cannot accept anything less than success.
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* AntiHero: The Shadowbolts.
* AxCrazy: Blueball Blitz.
* BribeBackfire: Starry Skies.
* AxCrazy: Blueball Blitz.
* BribeBackfire: Starry Skies.
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* MrViceGuy: Charger.
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* VasquezAlwaysDies
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* MrViceGuy: Charger.
* NeverGetsAnyEasier: Stratus knows this all too well. [[spoiler:Charger learns it, too.]]
* NeverGetsAnyEasier: Stratus knows this all too well. [[spoiler:Charger learns it, too.]]
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* MrViceGuy: Charger.
* NeverGetsAnyEasier:ItNeverGetsAnyEasier: Stratus knows this all too well. [[spoiler:Charger learns it, too.]]]]
MrViceGuy: Charger.
* NeverGetsAnyEasier:
MrViceGuy: Charger.
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* AxCrazy: Blueball Blitz.
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* NeverGetsAnyEasier: Stratus knows this all too well. [[spoiler:Charger learns it, too.]]
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* RabidCop: Stratus often injured criminals more than he had to when making arrests.
* RevengeBeforeReason: Nightshade wouldn't have formed the Shadowbolts otherwise.
* RevengeBeforeReason: Nightshade wouldn't have formed the Shadowbolts otherwise.
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* VillainProtagonistVillainProtagonist
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** BigBad: Nightshade
** TheDragon: Stratus
** TheEvilGenius: Charger
** TheBrute: Blueball Blitz
** TheDarkChick: Starry Skies
* GirlWithPsychoWeapon: Bluebell
* HeroKiller: The Shadowbolts' main goal throughout the story is to get their revenge on the Wonderbolts
* MrViceGuy: Charger
* PsychoElectro: Bluebell
* RideTheLightning: Bluebell
** TheDragon: Stratus
** TheEvilGenius: Charger
** TheBrute: Blueball Blitz
** TheDarkChick: Starry Skies
* GirlWithPsychoWeapon: Bluebell
* HeroKiller: The Shadowbolts' main goal throughout the story is to get their revenge on the Wonderbolts
* MrViceGuy: Charger
* PsychoElectro: Bluebell
* RideTheLightning: Bluebell
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** BigBad: Nightshade
Nightshade.
** TheDragon:Stratus
Stratus.
** TheEvilGenius:Charger
Charger.
** TheBrute: BlueballBlitz
Blitz.
** TheDarkChick: StarrySkies
Skies.
* GirlWithPsychoWeapon:Bluebell
Blueball.
* HeroKiller: The Shadowbolts' main goal throughout the story is to get their revenge on theWonderbolts
Wonderbolts. [[spoiler: They succeed.]]
* MrViceGuy:Charger
Charger.
* PsychoElectro:Bluebell
Blueball Blitz.
* RideTheLightning:BluebellBlueball Blitz.
** TheDragon:
** TheEvilGenius:
** TheBrute: Blueball
** TheDarkChick: Starry
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* HeroKiller: The Shadowbolts' main goal throughout the story is to get their revenge on the
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* ShockAndAwe: Blueball
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* ShockAndAwe: BlueballBlueball Blitz.
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* CreatorBacklash: On June 7, 2012, YoorPorick, the creator of the Shadowbolt Characters featured in this fic, made a comment on his homepage saying that he discredits the story and the way his Shadowbolts were used in it.
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A group of terrorists known as the Shadowbolts are confronted with old grudges, past loves, and even their own morals as they set out to destroy the Wonderbolts and anypony who gets in their way.
''A Dark Sky'' is a fanfic by [=MetalHooves=], starring a quintet of characters from [[http://4.bp.blogspot.com/-ynAk3EYEUCk/Th4uf5D_KaI/AAAAAAAAIB8/bUilLegz25U/s1600/20962+-+artist+YoorPorick+oc+original_characters+pooryorick+shadowbolts.png a piece of fan art by YoorPorick.]] It can be read [[http://www.equestriadaily.com/2011/07/story-dark-sky.html here.]]
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! ''A Dark Sky'' provides examples of:
''A Dark Sky'' is a fanfic by [=MetalHooves=], starring a quintet of characters from [[http://4.bp.blogspot.com/-ynAk3EYEUCk/Th4uf5D_KaI/AAAAAAAAIB8/bUilLegz25U/s1600/20962+-+artist+YoorPorick+oc+original_characters+pooryorick+shadowbolts.png a piece of fan art by YoorPorick.]] It can be read [[http://www.equestriadaily.com/2011/07/story-dark-sky.html here.]]
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! ''A Dark Sky'' provides examples of:
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* BigBad: Nightshade.
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* GirlWithPsychoWeapon: Blueball Blitz.
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* MrViceGuy: Charger.
* PsychoElectro: Blueball Blitz.
* RideTheLightning: Blueball Blitz.
* ScrewTheRulesIHaveMoney: Starry Skies.
* ShockAndAwe: Blueball Blitz.
* StreetSmart: Charger.
* VasquezAlwaysDies
* HeroKiller
* MrViceGuy: Charger.
* PsychoElectro: Blueball Blitz.
* RideTheLightning: Blueball Blitz.
* ScrewTheRulesIHaveMoney: Starry Skies.
* ShockAndAwe: Blueball Blitz.
* StreetSmart: Charger.
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* FiveBadBand
** BigBad: Nightshade
** TheDragon: Stratus
** TheEvilGenius: Charger
** TheBrute: Blueball Blitz
** TheDarkChick: Starry Skies
* GirlWithPsychoWeapon:Blueball Blitz.
Bluebell
*HeroKiller
HeroKiller: The Shadowbolts' main goal throughout the story is to get their revenge on the Wonderbolts
* MrViceGuy:Charger.
Charger
* PsychoElectro:Blueball Blitz.
Bluebell
* RideTheLightning:Blueball Blitz.
Bluebell
* ScrewTheRulesIHaveMoney: StarrySkies.
Skies' hatred of the Wonderbolts is fueled by their refusal to accept her father's money for a spot on the team.
* ShockAndAwe:Blueball Blitz.
Blueball
* StreetSmart:Charger.
Charger, as a former drug-dealer.
*VasquezAlwaysDiesVasquezAlwaysDies
* VillainProtagonist
** BigBad: Nightshade
** TheDragon: Stratus
** TheEvilGenius: Charger
** TheBrute: Blueball Blitz
** TheDarkChick: Starry Skies
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* PsychoElectro:
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* ScrewTheRulesIHaveMoney: Starry
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* TooCoolToLive: Blueball Blitz and Nightshade.
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* BribeBackfireBribeBackfire: Starry Skies.
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* RideTheLightning: Blueball Blitz.
* ScrewTheRulesIHaveMoney: Starry Skies.
* ShockAndAwe: Blueball Blitz.
* StreetSmart: Charger.
* ScrewTheRulesIHaveMoney: Starry Skies.
* ShockAndAwe: Blueball Blitz.
* StreetSmart: Charger.
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* AntiHero: The Shadowbolts.
* BigBad: Nightshade.
* CuteAndPsycho: Blueball Blitz.
* GirlWithPsychoWeapon: Blueball Blitz.
* HeroKiller
* MrViceGuy: Charger.
* PsychoElectro: Blueball Blitz.
* TooCoolToLive: Blueball Blitz and Nightshade.
* VasquezAlwaysDies:
* BigBad: Nightshade.
* CuteAndPsycho: Blueball Blitz.
* GirlWithPsychoWeapon: Blueball Blitz.
* HeroKiller
* MrViceGuy: Charger.
* PsychoElectro: Blueball Blitz.
* TooCoolToLive: Blueball Blitz and Nightshade.
* VasquezAlwaysDies: