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* BadSanta: The villain is actually a sorcerer code named [=SantaH0H0H0=], who dresses up like Santa and can emulate his powers.
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* BadSanta: The villain is actually a sorcerer code named [=SantaH0H0H0=], who dresses up like Santa and can emulate his powers. He's gone off the deep end and is a villain.
* BagOfKidnapping: Santa captures girls and stuffs them into his sack.
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* DirtyOldMan: The villain hits on several girls.
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* DirtyOldMan: The villain hits on several girls.girls and kidnaps them while planning to make them his sex slaves.
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* TemptingFate: When the villain is defeated and Accelerator and Last Order leave, Touma is happy that he made it though a battle without having to go to the hospital and thinks his luck is finally turning around. Unfortunately, when he turns around, he finds that all the kidnapped girls were rendered naked and they angrily beat him up.
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* BagOfHolding: Santa's sack.
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* BagOfHolding: Santa's sack.sack is able to hold all the girls he kidnapped as well as all his items.
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* EmbarrassingNickname: The villain gives these to each of his kidnapped girls: Glutton (Index), Loli (Komoe), Big Sis (Kaori), Spear Girl (Itsuwa), Pikachu (Mikoto), Also Pikachu (Misaka 10032), Lesbian (Kuroko), Miko (Himegami), and Imaginary the Big Breasted Reindeer (Hyoka).
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* EmbarrassingNickname: The villain gives these to each of his kidnapped girls: Glutton (Index), Loli (Komoe), Big Sis (Kaori), Spear Girl (Itsuwa), Pikachu (Mikoto), Also Pikachu (Misaka 10032), Lesbian (Kuroko), Miko (Himegami), and Imaginary the Big Breasted Reindeer (Hyoka).(Hyouka).
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* KnowWhenToFoldEm: After the villain defeats several girls and then confronts Himegami, she surrenders and goes into his sack without a fight, since she can't fight.
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* KnowWhenToFoldEm: After the villain defeats several girls and then confronts Himegami, she surrenders and goes into his sack without a fight, resisting, since she can't fight.
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* UnprovokedPervertPayback: Touma's defeat of Santa causes all the girls' outfits vanish, leaving them naked. The girls proceed to beat the crap out of Touma.
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* UnprovokedPervertPayback: Touma's defeat of Santa causes all the girls' outfits to vanish, leaving them naked. The girls proceed to beat the crap out of Touma.
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Simply Santa didn't want to mess with PETA\º
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Simply Santa didn't want to mess with PETA\ºPETA\\
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-->"Let's settle this you imposter," Touma yelled.\º
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-->"Let's settle this you imposter," Touma yelled.\º\\
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* UnprovokedPervertRevenge: Touma's defeat of Santa causes all the girls' outfits vanish, leaving them naked. The girls proceed to beat the crap out of Touma.
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* UnprovokedPervertRevenge: UnprovokedPervertPayback: Touma's defeat of Santa causes all the girls' outfits vanish, leaving them naked. The girls proceed to beat the crap out of Touma.
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A {{One Shot|Fic}} poem fic of ''LightNovel/ACertainMagicalIndex'' by Franchise. It can be read [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6594253/1/A_Certain_Crazy_Christmas_Special here]].
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A {{One Shot|Fic}} poem fic of ''LightNovel/ACertainMagicalIndex'' ''Literature/ACertainMagicalIndex'' by Franchise. It can be read [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6594253/1/A_Certain_Crazy_Christmas_Special here]].
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-->Accelerator stared in confusion at the fat man, "You have no idea who the hell I am, do you?" he finally asked.
-->Santa growled back, "So what if I don't boy. My magical power over Christmas makes me invincible during this time of year. All these other people here already tried to stop me and failed. What makes you think that you will be any different?"
-->The white haired boy let out an evil laugh. "Christmas? You think the power of Christmas is anywhere close to my abilities? You're even more stupid then you look. Go call Halloween, Easter, and Arbour Day to come give you some backup. That way you might be able to survive for a couple of minutes. Then again I'm not that patient so guess what fatso? You better watch out and you better start to cry. Pout all you want, I'll tell you why. Because…"
-->"Santa Accelerator is coming to take you out yelled Misaka as Misaka finishes the badass boast."
-->Santa growled back, "So what if I don't boy. My magical power over Christmas makes me invincible during this time of year. All these other people here already tried to stop me and failed. What makes you think that you will be any different?"
-->The white haired boy let out an evil laugh. "Christmas? You think the power of Christmas is anywhere close to my abilities? You're even more stupid then you look. Go call Halloween, Easter, and Arbour Day to come give you some backup. That way you might be able to survive for a couple of minutes. Then again I'm not that patient so guess what fatso? You better watch out and you better start to cry. Pout all you want, I'll tell you why. Because…"
-->"Santa Accelerator is coming to take you out yelled Misaka as Misaka finishes the badass boast."
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-->Accelerator stared in confusion at the fat man, "You have no idea who the hell I am, do you?" he finally asked.
-->Santaasked.\\
Santa growled back, "So what if I don't boy. My magical power over Christmas makes me invincible during this time of year. All these other people here already tried to stop me and failed. What makes you think that you will be anydifferent?"
-->Thedifferent?"\\
The white haired boy let out an evil laugh. "Christmas? You think the power of Christmas is anywhere close to my abilities? You're even more stupid then you look. Go call Halloween, Easter, and Arbour Day to come give you some backup. That way you might be able to survive for a couple of minutes. Then again I'm not that patient so guess what fatso? You better watch out and you better start to cry. Pout all you want, I'll tell you why.Because…"
-->"SantaBecause..."\\
"Santa Accelerator is coming to take you out yelled Misaka as Misaka finishes the badass boast."
-->Santa
Santa growled back, "So what if I don't boy. My magical power over Christmas makes me invincible during this time of year. All these other people here already tried to stop me and failed. What makes you think that you will be any
-->The
The white haired boy let out an evil laugh. "Christmas? You think the power of Christmas is anywhere close to my abilities? You're even more stupid then you look. Go call Halloween, Easter, and Arbour Day to come give you some backup. That way you might be able to survive for a couple of minutes. Then again I'm not that patient so guess what fatso? You better watch out and you better start to cry. Pout all you want, I'll tell you why.
-->"Santa
"Santa Accelerator is coming to take you out yelled Misaka as Misaka finishes the badass boast."
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-->One might ask why he did not use real reindeer
-->It probably would have been just as cool
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-->He was crazy but not that much of a fool
-->It probably would have been just as cool
-->Simply Santa didn't want to mess with PETA
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-->One might ask why he did not use real reindeer
-->Itreindeer\\
It probably would have been just ascool
-->Simplycool\\
Simply Santa didn't want to mess withPETA
-->HePETA\º
He was crazy but not that much of a fool
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It probably would have been just as
-->Simply
Simply Santa didn't want to mess with
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He was crazy but not that much of a fool
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-->"Let's settle this you imposter," Touma yelled.
-->Santa glared. "What did you just call me?"
-->"You heard me. You may have been assigned the name, you may have been mocked and ridiculed for it but you have done nothing to earn it! You don't bring happiness to good children by giving out presents; you do the complete opposite and steal for your own selfish gains. Face it magician. You are nothing but a crazy old coot hiding behind a facade. You are not Santa and I'm going to shatter the illusion that you have anything to do with this holiday!"
-->Santa glared. "What did you just call me?"
-->"You heard me. You may have been assigned the name, you may have been mocked and ridiculed for it but you have done nothing to earn it! You don't bring happiness to good children by giving out presents; you do the complete opposite and steal for your own selfish gains. Face it magician. You are nothing but a crazy old coot hiding behind a facade. You are not Santa and I'm going to shatter the illusion that you have anything to do with this holiday!"
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-->"Let's settle this you imposter," Touma yelled.
-->Santayelled.\º
Santa glared. "What did you just callme?"
-->"Youme?"\\
"You heard me. You may have been assigned the name, you may have been mocked and ridiculed for it but you have done nothing to earn it! You don't bring happiness to good children by giving out presents; you do the complete opposite and steal for your own selfish gains. Face it magician. You are nothing but a crazy old coot hiding behind a facade. You are not Santa and I'm going to shatter the illusion that you have anything to do with this holiday!"
-->Santa
Santa glared. "What did you just call
-->"You
"You heard me. You may have been assigned the name, you may have been mocked and ridiculed for it but you have done nothing to earn it! You don't bring happiness to good children by giving out presents; you do the complete opposite and steal for your own selfish gains. Face it magician. You are nothing but a crazy old coot hiding behind a facade. You are not Santa and I'm going to shatter the illusion that you have anything to do with this holiday!"
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* AdultFear: Index is kidnapped while Touma was in the next room cooking.
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* BadSanta: The villain is actually a sorcerer codenamed [=SantaH0H0H0=], who dresses up like Santa and can emulate his powers.
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* BadSanta: The villain is actually a sorcerer codenamed code named [=SantaH0H0H0=], who dresses up like Santa and can emulate his powers.
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* DangerWithADeadline: The villain's powers only work during Christmas time. Motoharu suggests simply staying clear of him until Christmas is over, but unfortunately that is not an option.
* DirtyOldMan: Thevillain.villain hits on several girls.
* DirtyOldMan: The
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* HourOfPower: The villain's powers only work during Christmas time. Motoharu suggests simply staying clear of him until Christmas is over, but unfortunately that is not an option.
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* HourOfPower: The villain's powers only work during Christmas time. Motoharu suggests simply staying clear of him until Christmas is over, but unfortunately that is not an option.KnowWhenToFoldEm: After the villain defeats several girls and then confronts Himegami, she surrenders and goes into his sack without a fight, since she can't fight.
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* SexySoakedShirt: Fukiyose Seiri falls in the snow, getting her white shirt wet. Naturally, Touma sees everything.
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* SexySoakedShirt: Seiri Fukiyose Seiri falls in the snow, getting her white shirt wet. Naturally, Touma sees everything.
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* TakingTheBullet: The villain knocks down a Christmas tree that almost falls on Mikoto. Touma shoves her out of the way and the tree falls on him, temporarily knocking him out.
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* TropicalEpilogue: The villain's endgame plan is to retreat to a tropical island with his kidnapped girls brainwashed into his slaves.
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A {{One Shot|Fic}} PoemFic of ''LightNovel/ACertainMagicalIndex'' by Franchise. It can be read [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6594253/1/A_Certain_Crazy_Christmas_Special here]].
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A {{One Shot|Fic}} PoemFic poem fic of ''LightNovel/ACertainMagicalIndex'' by Franchise. It can be read [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6594253/1/A_Certain_Crazy_Christmas_Special here]].
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* SpiderSense: Santa can sense the presence of children around the world. In battle he can anticipate [[{{Teleportation}} Kuroko's]] attacks.
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* SpiderSense: Santa can sense the presence of children around the world. In battle he can anticipate [[{{Teleportation}} Kuroko's]] attacks.[[WeaponizedTeleportation Kuroko's attacks]].
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A one-shot PoemFic of ''LightNovel/ACertainMagicalIndex'' by Franchise. It can be read [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6594253/1/A_Certain_Crazy_Christmas_Special here]].
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A one-shot {{One Shot|Fic}} PoemFic of ''LightNovel/ACertainMagicalIndex'' by Franchise. It can be read [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6594253/1/A_Certain_Crazy_Christmas_Special here]].