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''A Boy and His Dog'', or by its full title, ''A Brash Outspoken Youth and his Destructive Oversoul Giant'', is a ''Manga/{{Bleach}}'' ForWantOfANail fanfiction by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/230134/Lethargy Lethargy]].
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''A Boy and His Dog'', or by its full title, ''A Brash Outspoken Youth and his Destructive Oversoul Giant'', is a ''Manga/{{Bleach}}'' ForWantOfANail WhatIf fanfiction by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/230134/Lethargy Lethargy]].
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* ExactWords: Komamura has his lieutenant Iba promise to watch over Ichigo when he arrives to the Soul Society. Of course, both of them expected that Ichigo would arrive after his death rather than invade to rescue his mentor from execution.
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* ExactWords: Komamura has his lieutenant Iba promise to watch over Ichigo when he arrives to the Soul Society. Of course, both of them expected that Ichigo would arrive after his death rather than invade to rescue his mentor from execution.execution, though that doesn't stop Iba from helping him.
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* TheChewToy: Kon becomes a ''literal'' chew toy for Komamaru.
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* TheChewToy: Kon becomes a ''literal'' chew toy for Komamaru.Komamura.
* ExactWords: Komamura has his lieutenant Iba promise to watch over Ichigo when he arrives to the Soul Society. Of course, both of them expected that Ichigo would arrive after his death rather than invade to rescue his mentor from execution.
* ExactWords: Komamura has his lieutenant Iba promise to watch over Ichigo when he arrives to the Soul Society. Of course, both of them expected that Ichigo would arrive after his death rather than invade to rescue his mentor from execution.
* RulesLawyer: Komamura doesn't intend to tell the Soul Society that Isshin Kurosaki is the missing Captain Shiba since he is off duty and that responsibility is towards his substitute Ichigo.
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* UnusuallyUninterestingSight: Orihime doesn't react when Sergei/Komamura talk while healing heal, though justified since she's a {{Cloudcuckoolander}} and she just unlocked her powers, along with facing exhaustion.
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* BadassTeacher: Komamura to Ichigo, as expected from the captain.
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* BadassTeacher: Komamura to Ichigo, as expected from the captain. Alongside explaining Ichigo's role as a Soul Reaper, he also has him contact his Zanpakuto spirit to access his true power.
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* TheChewToy: Kon becomes a ''literal'' chew toy for Komamaru.
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To avoid over curious rookies and to allow Rukia Kuchiki to help her sick captain, Captain Sajin Komamaru offers to take over her mission to the Living World. There, he meets Ichigo Kurosaki, and when the latter's family is attacked by a hollow, Komamaru gives his powers to Ichigo. With his powers drained, he picks Ichigo as his substitute and becomes the brash youth's mentor.
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To avoid over curious rookies and to allow Rukia Kuchiki to help her sick captain, Captain Sajin Komamaru Komamura offers to take over her mission to the Living World. There, he meets Ichigo Kurosaki, and when the latter's family is attacked by a hollow, Komamaru Komamura gives his powers to Ichigo. With his powers drained, he picks Ichigo as his substitute and becomes the brash youth's mentor.
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* AdaptationalBadass: Thanks to Komamaru's training, Ichigo made contact with his Zanpakto spirit before Kisuke's training, allowing him to escape the Shattershaft before the hollowfication and his powers undivided.
* AdaptationalEarlyAppearance: Captain Tosen and Lieutenant Hisagi are sent to bring back Komamaru for trial.
* BadassTeacher: Komamaru to Ichigo, as expected from the captain.
* BaitAndSwitchComment: Ichigo asks that if werewolves like Komamaru are in the Soul Society, is the same true for vampires.
* AdaptationalEarlyAppearance: Captain Tosen and Lieutenant Hisagi are sent to bring back Komamaru for trial.
* BadassTeacher: Komamaru to Ichigo, as expected from the captain.
* BaitAndSwitchComment: Ichigo asks that if werewolves like Komamaru are in the Soul Society, is the same true for vampires.
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* AdaptationalBadass: Thanks to Komamaru's Komamura's training, Ichigo made contact with his Zanpakto Zanpakuto spirit before Kisuke's training, allowing him to escape the Shattershaft before the hollowfication and his powers undivided.
* AdaptationalEarlyAppearance: Captain Tosen and Lieutenant Hisagi are sent to bring backKomamaru Komamura for trial.
* BadassTeacher:Komamaru Komamura to Ichigo, as expected from the captain.
* BaitAndSwitchComment: Ichigo asks that if werewolves likeKomamaru Komamura are in the Soul Society, is the same true for vampires.
* AdaptationalEarlyAppearance: Captain Tosen and Lieutenant Hisagi are sent to bring back
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* BaitAndSwitchComment: Ichigo asks that if werewolves like
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* AGodIAmNot: Komamaru tells Ichigo that while Soul Reapers may live for centuries and are far stronger than humans, they are not gods and are suspectable to death. [[spoiler: In the author's notes, Ichigo recites the same fact to Aizen at the end of their fight in the Karakura War.]]
* MistakenForBadass: A sequence of events ends up giving timid Hanataro Yamada a reputation of a Soul Reaper able to match against members of the 11th Squad and brave enough to travel without his Zanpackto (in truth left behind because his work doesn't require fighting).
* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: Byakuya and Rukia both confront Aizen after the former deduced that the latter has not only faked his death but been masquerading as the Council 46. But in the ensuring fight, [[spoiler: Aizen uses his Zanpakto to make Byakuya think ''Rukia'' was Aizen, nearly giving his sister a killing blow and causing the tropes effect.]]
* NiceJobBreakingItHero: Komamaru stop Uryu from the using the Hollow Bait by biting his leg, with Kon catching it when he lets go. However, after Ichigo gives a speech of how while he's not afraid to take on the Quincy's challenge, he won't do it in Karakura Town where it'll put his sisters in danger. Kon then claps in applause... while still holding the Hollow Bait.
* TalkingAnimal: Because the Gigai Kisuke made for him was designed to look like a dog, Komamaru appears like one.
* MistakenForBadass: A sequence of events ends up giving timid Hanataro Yamada a reputation of a Soul Reaper able to match against members of the 11th Squad and brave enough to travel without his Zanpackto (in truth left behind because his work doesn't require fighting).
* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: Byakuya and Rukia both confront Aizen after the former deduced that the latter has not only faked his death but been masquerading as the Council 46. But in the ensuring fight, [[spoiler: Aizen uses his Zanpakto to make Byakuya think ''Rukia'' was Aizen, nearly giving his sister a killing blow and causing the tropes effect.]]
* NiceJobBreakingItHero: Komamaru stop Uryu from the using the Hollow Bait by biting his leg, with Kon catching it when he lets go. However, after Ichigo gives a speech of how while he's not afraid to take on the Quincy's challenge, he won't do it in Karakura Town where it'll put his sisters in danger. Kon then claps in applause... while still holding the Hollow Bait.
* TalkingAnimal: Because the Gigai Kisuke made for him was designed to look like a dog, Komamaru appears like one.
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* AGodIAmNot: Komamaru Komamura tells Ichigo that while Soul Reapers may live for centuries and are far stronger than humans, they are not gods and are suspectable susceptible to death. [[spoiler: In the author's notes, Ichigo recites the same fact to Aizen at the end of their fight in the Karakura War.]]
* MistakenForBadass: A sequence of events ends up giving timid Hanataro Yamada a reputation of a Soul Reaper able to match against members of the 11th Squad and brave enough to travel without hisZanpackto Zanpakuto (in truth left behind because his work doesn't require fighting).
* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: Byakuya and Rukia both confront Aizen after the former deduced that the latter has not only faked his death but been masquerading as the Council 46. But in the ensuring fight, [[spoiler: Aizen uses hisZanpakto Zanpakuto to make Byakuya think ''Rukia'' was Aizen, nearly giving his sister a killing blow and causing the tropes effect.]]
* NiceJobBreakingItHero:Komamaru Komamaura stop Uryu from the using the Hollow Bait by biting his leg, with Kon catching it when he lets go. However, after Ichigo gives a speech of how while he's not afraid to take on the Quincy's challenge, he won't do it in Karakura Town where it'll put his sisters in danger. Kon then claps in applause... while still holding the Hollow Bait.
* TalkingAnimal: Because the Gigai Kisuke made for him was designed to look like a dog,Komamaru Komamura appears like one.
* MistakenForBadass: A sequence of events ends up giving timid Hanataro Yamada a reputation of a Soul Reaper able to match against members of the 11th Squad and brave enough to travel without his
* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: Byakuya and Rukia both confront Aizen after the former deduced that the latter has not only faked his death but been masquerading as the Council 46. But in the ensuring fight, [[spoiler: Aizen uses his
* NiceJobBreakingItHero:
* TalkingAnimal: Because the Gigai Kisuke made for him was designed to look like a dog,
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* TalkingAnimal: Because the Gigai Kisuke made for him was designed to look like a dog, Komamaru appears like one.
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* MistakenForBadass: A sequence of events ends up giving timid Hanataro Yamada a reputation of a Soul Reaper able to match against members of the 11th Squad.
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* MistakenForBadass: A sequence of events ends up giving timid Hanataro Yamada a reputation of a Soul Reaper able to match against members of the 11th Squad.Squad and brave enough to travel without his Zanpackto (in truth left behind because his work doesn't require fighting).
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* MistakenForBadass: A sequence of events ends up giving timid Hanataro Yamada a reputation of a Soul Reaper able to match against members of the 11th Squad.
* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: Byakuya and Rukia both confront Aizen after the former deduced that the latter has not only faked his death but been masquerading as the Council 46. But in the ensuring fight, [[spoiler: Aizen uses his Zanpakto to make Byakuya think ''Rukia'' was Aizen, nearly giving his sister a killing blow and causing the tropes effect.]]
* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: Byakuya and Rukia both confront Aizen after the former deduced that the latter has not only faked his death but been masquerading as the Council 46. But in the ensuring fight, [[spoiler: Aizen uses his Zanpakto to make Byakuya think ''Rukia'' was Aizen, nearly giving his sister a killing blow and causing the tropes effect.]]
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''A Boy and His Dog'', or by its full title, ''A Brash Outspoken Youth and his Destructive Oversoul Giant'', is a ''Manga/Bleach'' ForWhatOfANail fanfiction by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/230134/Lethargy Lethargy]].
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''A Boy and His Dog'', or by its full title, ''A Brash Outspoken Youth and his Destructive Oversoul Giant'', is a ''Manga/Bleach'' ForWhatOfANail ''Manga/{{Bleach}}'' ForWantOfANail fanfiction by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/230134/Lethargy Lethargy]].
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* NiceJobBreakingItHero: Komamaru stop Uryu from the using the Hollow Bait by biting his leg, with Kon catching it when he lets go. However, after Ichigo gives a speech of how while he's not afraid to take on the Quincy's challenge, he won't do it in Karakura Town where it'll put his sisters in danger. Kon then claps in applause... while still holding the Hollow Bait.
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''A Boy and His Dog'', or by its full title, ''A Brash Outspoken Youth and his Destructive Oversoul Giant'', is a ''Manga/Bleach'' ForWhatOfANail fanfiction by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/230134/Lethargy Lethargy]].
To avoid over curious rookies and to allow Rukia Kuchiki to help her sick captain, Captain Sajin Komamaru offers to take over her mission to the Living World. There, he meets Ichigo Kurosaki, and when the latter's family is attacked by a hollow, Komamaru gives his powers to Ichigo. With his powers drained, he picks Ichigo as his substitute and becomes the brash youth's mentor.
The author ended at three chapters, finishing with a series of notes of how the final portion of the Soul Society Arc and war against Aizen would have gone done.
You can read it on Fanfiction.net at [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9909352/1/A-Boy-and-His-Dog here]]. The page requires WikiLove and any help will be appreciated.
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! A Boy and His Dog contains examples of:
* AdaptationalBadass: Thanks to Komamaru's training, Ichigo made contact with his Zanpakto spirit before Kisuke's training, allowing him to escape the Shattershaft before the hollowfication and his powers undivided.
* BadassTeacher: Komamaru to Ichigo, as expected from the captain.
* BaitAndSwitchComment: Ichigo asks that if werewolves like Komamaru are in the Soul Society, is the same true for vampires.
-->'''Ichigo''': ...So are they vampires in the Soul Society?\\
'''Komamaru''': Don't be ridiculous.\\
'''Ichigo''': That's a relief.\\
'''Komamaru''': Soul Society is for the dead. Vampires can't exist because they're immortal.
* AGodIAmNot: Komamaru tells Ichigo that while Soul Reapers may live for centuries and are far stronger than humans, they are not gods and are suspectable to death. [[spoiler: In the author's notes, Ichigo recites the same fact to Aizen at the end of their fight in the Karakura War.]]
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To avoid over curious rookies and to allow Rukia Kuchiki to help her sick captain, Captain Sajin Komamaru offers to take over her mission to the Living World. There, he meets Ichigo Kurosaki, and when the latter's family is attacked by a hollow, Komamaru gives his powers to Ichigo. With his powers drained, he picks Ichigo as his substitute and becomes the brash youth's mentor.
The author ended at three chapters, finishing with a series of notes of how the final portion of the Soul Society Arc and war against Aizen would have gone done.
You can read it on Fanfiction.net at [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9909352/1/A-Boy-and-His-Dog here]]. The page requires WikiLove and any help will be appreciated.
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! A Boy and His Dog contains examples of:
* AdaptationalBadass: Thanks to Komamaru's training, Ichigo made contact with his Zanpakto spirit before Kisuke's training, allowing him to escape the Shattershaft before the hollowfication and his powers undivided.
* BadassTeacher: Komamaru to Ichigo, as expected from the captain.
* BaitAndSwitchComment: Ichigo asks that if werewolves like Komamaru are in the Soul Society, is the same true for vampires.
-->'''Ichigo''': ...So are they vampires in the Soul Society?\\
'''Komamaru''': Don't be ridiculous.\\
'''Ichigo''': That's a relief.\\
'''Komamaru''': Soul Society is for the dead. Vampires can't exist because they're immortal.
* AGodIAmNot: Komamaru tells Ichigo that while Soul Reapers may live for centuries and are far stronger than humans, they are not gods and are suspectable to death. [[spoiler: In the author's notes, Ichigo recites the same fact to Aizen at the end of their fight in the Karakura War.]]
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