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* Achilles'sHeel: Andy has coulrophobia. The Queen tries to take advantage of this by summoning Saggit the Dark Clown and sending him to duel Andy with a deck that has an advantage over his.
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* Achilles'sHeel: Andy has coulrophobia. The Queen tries to take advantage of this by summoning Saggit the Dark Clown and sending him to duel Andy with a deck that has an advantage over his.
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* GhostPirate: Cortez, as well as the monsters in his deck in the remake.
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* GhostPirate: Cortez, as well as the monsters in his deck in the remake.
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* Hero's Weakness: Andy has coulrophobia. The Queen tries to take advantage of this by summoning Saggit the Dark Clown and sending him to duel Andy with a deck that has an advantage over his.
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* BigGood: Merlow, (called Merlee in the original, changed because that was actually the name of a female character in the video game), a wizard who has a bad stuttering problem, except when he talks about serious matters. He is an enemy of the Shadow Queen, and tries to help the protagonists. According to the Queen, his real name is Adrian, and she considers him enough of a threat to deal with personally. In the remake, the card Noble Knight Artorigus (which the Queen does not like for some reason and has made illegal to own on Arcadia) is important to him.
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* Old Wise Man: Merlow, (called Merlee in the original, changed because that was actually the name of a female character in the video game), a wizard who has a bad stuttering problem, except when he talks about serious matters. He is an enemy of the Shadow Queen, and tries to help the protagonists. According to the Queen, his real name is Adrian, and she considers him enough of a threat to deal with personally. In the remake, the card Noble Knight Artorigus (which the Queen does not like for some reason and has made illegal to own on Arcadia) is important to him.
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* Old Wise Man: Merlow, (called Merlee in the original, changed because that was actually the name of a female character in the video game), a wizard who has a bad stuttering problem, except when he talks about serious matters. He is an enemy of the Shadow Queen, and tries to help the protagonists. According to the Queen, his real name is Adrian, and she considers him enough of a threat to deal with personally. In the remake, the card Noble Knight Artorigus (which the Queen does not like for some reason and has made illegal to own on Arcadia) is important to him.
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* Hero's Weakness: Andy has coulrophobia. The Queen tries to take advantage of this by summoning Saggit the Dark Clown and sending him to duel Andy with a deck that has an advantage over his.
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* AuthorCatchphrase: "What? No!"
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* [[DarkIsNotEvil Dark Is Not]] ObviouslyEvil: Vladmir the Shadow Spawn of Darkness. Among the Spawn, and most of the Queen's servants, he's the nicest of the bunch. Although he still wants to defeat our heroes and free the Queen.
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* [[DarkIsNotEvil Dark Is Not]] ObviouslyEvil: Vladmir Vladmir, the Shadow Spawn of Darkness. Among the Spawn, and most of the Queen's servants, he's the nicest of the bunch. Although he still wants to defeat our heroes and free the Queen.
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* GenerationXerox: Variation in that the protagonists' decks reflect the Three Heroes:
** Original: Stan's ancestor was a master sorcerer, and Stan uses a Dark Magician deck. Fran's ancestor was a warrior woman, and Fran uses an Amazon deck. Andy ancestor was a master of dragons, and Andy uses a dragon deck.
** Remake: Stan's ancestor was a master sorcerer, and Stan uses an XZY deck focusing on the Gagaga monsters, especially Gagaga Magician. Fran's ancestor was a tamer of unicorns and other animals, and Fran uses a Unicorn Synchro deck. Andy's ancestor was a master of dragons, and Andy uses a dragon Fusion deck.
** Original: Stan's ancestor was a master sorcerer, and Stan uses a Dark Magician deck. Fran's ancestor was a warrior woman, and Fran uses an Amazon deck. Andy ancestor was a master of dragons, and Andy uses a dragon deck.
** Remake: Stan's ancestor was a master sorcerer, and Stan uses an XZY deck focusing on the Gagaga monsters, especially Gagaga Magician. Fran's ancestor was a tamer of unicorns and other animals, and Fran uses a Unicorn Synchro deck. Andy's ancestor was a master of dragons, and Andy uses a dragon Fusion deck.
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* ShoutOut: Cortez's backstory is nearly identical to that of Gold Roger from ''Manga/OnePiece''. Cyber Commander freely admits this.
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* {{Fanboy}}: In the original, Stan uses a Dark Magician deck to emulate his idol, Yugi Moto.
* {{Fangirl}}: Diana is a comicbook fanatic who cosplays as WonderWoman.
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* EmotionBomb: In the remake, Vladmir emits an aura that fills people with fear, which makes his opponents hesitate and make mistakes.
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* SmallNameBigEgo: Leopold thinks he's one of the smartest beings in existence. He's very well read, but not nearly as clever as he thinks he is.
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* SunglassesAtNight: Vladmir. Justified in that he has light-sensitive eyes.
* SunglassesAtNight: Vladmir. Justified in that he has light-sensitive eyes.
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* SmallNameBigEgo: Leopold thinks he's one of the smartest beings in existence. He's very well read, but not nearly as clever as he thinks he is.
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* DangerouslyGenreSavvy: The Shadow Queen reviews footage of previous duels like Yugi, Joey, and Kaiba's struggles against Dartz and his henchmen to learn from the bad guys' mistakes. Also, to increase her chances of victory, she loans cards to ordinary people, because this causes them to count as working for her, meaning these ordinary people would break the curse if they were to beat Stan, Fran, and Andy.
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* MadeOfIron: Stan, Fran, and Andy amaze everyone with how much punishment they can take in a Shadow Game.
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** When her children ask why she didn't acquire copies of The Seal of Orichalcos, she says that since it drives its users insane, she's not going to risk it.
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[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2532621/1/YuGiOh_The_Thousand_Year_Door Yu-Gi-Oh! The Thousand Year Door]] is a fanfiction written by Cyber Commander. A remake of the fic, using updated rules and info, which is in progress, can be found [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8130614/1/Yu_Gi_Oh_The_Thousand_Year_Door_Redux here]]. Although it takes place in the Yugioh world, virtually every character is a OC of some kind. The entire plot references ''VideoGame/PaperMarioTheThousandYearDoor'' and a few other ''Franchise/SuperMarioBros'' games, and several characters, artifacts and spells from the games appear as characters or cards.
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[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2532621/1/YuGiOh_The_Thousand_Year_Door Yu-Gi-Oh! The Thousand Year Door]] is a fanfiction written by Cyber Commander. A remake of the fic, using updated rules and info, which is in progress, can be found [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8130614/1/Yu_Gi_Oh_The_Thousand_Year_Door_Redux here]]. Although it takes place in the Yugioh world, virtually every character is a OC of some kind. The entire plot references ''VideoGame/PaperMarioTheThousandYearDoor'' and a few other ''Franchise/SuperMarioBros'' games, and several games. Several characters, artifacts artifacts, and spells from the Mario games appear as characters or cards.
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* TakenForGranite:
** Leopold can turn people to stone.
** At one point, Andy gets abducted and turned to metal.
** Leopold can turn people to stone.
** At one point, Andy gets abducted and turned to metal.
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[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2532621/1/YuGiOh_The_Thousand_Year_Door Yu-Gi-Oh! The Thousand Year Door]] is a fanfiction written by Cyber Commander. A remake of the fic, using updated rules and info, which is in progress, can be found [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8130614/1/Yu_Gi_Oh_The_Thousand_Year_Door_Redux here]]. Although it takes place in the Yugioh world, virtually every character is a OC of some kind. The entire plot references ''VideoGame/PaperMarioTheThousandYearDoor'' and a few other ''Franchise/SuperMarioBros'' games.
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[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2532621/1/YuGiOh_The_Thousand_Year_Door Yu-Gi-Oh! The Thousand Year Door]] is a fanfiction written by Cyber Commander. A remake of the fic, using updated rules and info, which is in progress, can be found [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8130614/1/Yu_Gi_Oh_The_Thousand_Year_Door_Redux here]]. Although it takes place in the Yugioh world, virtually every character is a OC of some kind. The entire plot references ''VideoGame/PaperMarioTheThousandYearDoor'' and a few other ''Franchise/SuperMarioBros'' games.
games, and several characters, artifacts and spells from the games appear as characters or cards.
** Leopold does not like being called Leo.
* TheBully[=/=]ScrewTheRulesIHaveSupernaturalPowers: The Shadow Spawn, except for Vladmir, enjoy terrorizing people with their powers. Like most bullies, they are shocked when Stan, Francesca, and Andy stand up to them.
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* DoNotCallMePaul: The Shadow Queen does not like being called by her original name, "[[spoiler: Josephine]]".
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* DoNotCallMePaul: The Shadow Queen does not like being called by her original name, "[[spoiler: Josephine]]". She explains that the name doesn't belong to her anymore.
* DumbMuscle: Lord Crump.
* {{Fangirl}}: Diana is a comicbook fanatic who cosplays as WonderWoman.
** AnIcePerson: Maria can do this too.
* OurZombiesAreDifferent: Cortez's deck in ''Redux'' is a ghost pirate deck. The monsters in it are all Water attribute Zombies, something rare for the Zombie type. His deck in the original was a standard Zombie deck.
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* OurZombiesAreDifferent: Cortez's deck in ''Redux'' is a ghost pirate deck. The monsters in it are all Water attribute Zombies, something rare for the Zombie type. His deck in the original was a standard Zombie deck.
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* LightIsNotGood: Melisa, the Shadow Spawn of Light.
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* LightIsNotGood: Melisa, Melissa, the Shadow Spawn of Light.
* PirateGirl: Maria wears this outfit when she confronts the protagonists the first time.
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* PragmaticVillainy: Some of the Shadow Queen's minions actually try to kill Stan, Fran, and Andy outright. The Shadow Queen saves them, since if they were to die without being defeated in a fair contest, she would be trapped ''forever''.
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* PragmaticVillainy: Some of the Shadow Queen's minions actually try to kill Stan, Fran, and Andy outright. The Shadow Queen saves them, since if they were to die without being defeated in a fair contest, she would be trapped ''forever''. This is also why she does not tolerate her minions cheating: if they cheat, it's no longer a ''fair'' contest.
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** Melisa is Sloth. She is a slacker who gets others to wait on her.
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** Melisa Melissa is Sloth. She is a slacker who gets others to wait on her.
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* OurZombiesAreDifferent: Cortez's deck in ''Redux'' is a ghost pirate deck. The monsters in it are all Water attribute Zombies, something rare for the Zombie type.
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* OurZombiesAreDifferent: Cortez's deck in ''Redux'' is a ghost pirate deck. The monsters in it are all Water attribute Zombies, something rare for the Zombie type.
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One Thousand years ago, an evil sorceress known as the Shadow Queen attempted to TakeOverTheWorld. Fortunately, [[TheChosenOne Three legendary heroes]] fought the Shadow Queen in the Palace of Shadows and won. However, seeing as they couldn't kill her, they did the next best thing: they cursed her, preventing her from leaving the Palace forever.
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One Thousand years ago, an evil immortal sorceress known as the Shadow Queen attempted to TakeOverTheWorld. Fortunately, [[TheChosenOne Three legendary heroes]] fought the Shadow Queen in the Palace of Shadows and won. However, seeing as they couldn't kill her, they did the next best thing: they cursed her, preventing her from leaving the Palace forever.
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** In the remake, Kurtis hates the Djinn monsters, because they do not resemble ''actual'' djinns at all, which he takes as an insult to his heritage (his father was a djinn).
** Francesca hates perverts and men who think women are inferior.
** Do not call Ruklamba the Spirit King a Spirit
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* CurseEscapeClause: As mentioned above, if the Queen or anyone working for her, whether they want to or not, defeats Stan, Fran, and Andy in a fair contest, the spell is lifted and the Queen can leave.
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** As mentioned above, if the Queen or anyone working for her, whether they want to or not, defeats Stan, Fran, and Andy in a fair contest, the spell is lifted and the Queen can leave.
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* EvenEvilHasStandards: Vladmir. He surprises Andy, Fran, and Stan with his lack of threats. Not only does he also pay for lunch, he gave a pretty good tip.
** Ruklamba calls out the Queen for not letting him use Ojama Delta Thunder!![[note]]Ojama Delta Thunder!! is an anime only spell that can only be activated when Ojama's Yellow, Green, and Black are on the field. WHen cast, it deals 500 damage to the opponent for every card in their hand and on their field. Then to add insult to injury, the caster can send a Ojama Delta Hurricane!! from their hand or deck to wipe toe opponents field. It's pretty broken[[/note]]. Her logic is that since her cover is that of a tournament, she has to use the rules of one, and that means using the Forbiden/Limited list.
** Ruklamba calls out the Queen for not letting him use Ojama Delta Thunder!![[note]]Ojama Delta Thunder!! is an anime only spell that can only be activated when Ojama's Yellow, Green, and Black are on the field. WHen cast, it deals 500 damage to the opponent for every card in their hand and on their field. Then to add insult to injury, the caster can send a Ojama Delta Hurricane!! from their hand or deck to wipe toe opponents field. It's pretty broken[[/note]]. Her logic is that since her cover is that of a tournament, she has to use the rules of one, and that means using the Forbiden/Limited list.
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* EvenEvilHasStandards: {{Fanboy}}: In the original, Stan uses a Dark Magician deck to emulate his idol, Yugi Moto.
* EvenEvilHasStandards:
** Vladmir. He surprises Andy, Fran, and Stan with his lack of threats. Not only does he also pay for lunch, he gave a pretty good tip.
** Ruklamba calls out the Queen for not letting him use Ojama Delta Thunder!![[note]]Ojama Delta Thunder!! is an anime only spell that can only be activated when Ojama's Yellow, Green, and Black are on the field.WHen When cast, it deals 500 damage to the opponent for every card in their hand and on their field. Then to add insult to injury, the caster can send discard a Ojama Delta Hurricane!! from their hand or deck to wipe toe out the opponents field. It's pretty broken[[/note]]. Her logic is that since her cover is that of a tournament, she has to use the rules of one, and that means using the Forbiden/Limited list. Forbidden/Limited list.
* IdiosyncraticEpisodeNaming: In ''Redux'', each chapter is named after a card in the game, which has been a part of Cyber Commander's works since ''Yu-Gi-Oh! Dark Messiah''. The original story did not have theme naming because it came before ''Dark Messiah''.
* EvenEvilHasStandards:
** Vladmir. He surprises Andy, Fran, and Stan with his lack of threats. Not only does he also pay for lunch, he gave a pretty good tip.
** Ruklamba calls out the Queen for not letting him use Ojama Delta Thunder!![[note]]Ojama Delta Thunder!! is an anime only spell that can only be activated when Ojama's Yellow, Green, and Black are on the field.
* IdiosyncraticEpisodeNaming: In ''Redux'', each chapter is named after a card in the game, which has been a part of Cyber Commander's works since ''Yu-Gi-Oh! Dark Messiah''. The original story did not have theme naming because it came before ''Dark Messiah''.
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* ThemeNaming: Each chapter is named after a card in the game, which has been a part of Cyber Commander's works since ''Yu gi oh! Dark Messiah" but this is only present in ''Redux''. The origional story did not have theme nameing becuase it came before ''Dark Messiah''.
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* EvenEvilHasStandards: Vladmir. He surprises Andy, Fran, and Stan with his lack of threats.
** He not only pays for lunch, he gave a pretty good tip.
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* EvenEvilHasStandards: Vladmir. He surprises Andy, Fran, and Stan with his lack of threats.
** He notthreats. Not only pays does he also pay for lunch, he gave a pretty good tip.tip.
** Ruklamba calls out the Queen for not letting him use Ojama Delta Thunder!![[note]]Ojama Delta Thunder!! is an anime only spell that can only be activated when Ojama's Yellow, Green, and Black are on the field. WHen cast, it deals 500 damage to the opponent for every card in their hand and on their field. Then to add insult to injury, the caster can send a Ojama Delta Hurricane!! from their hand or deck to wipe toe opponents field. It's pretty broken[[/note]]. Her logic is that since her cover is that of a tournament, she has to use the rules of one, and that means using the Forbiden/Limited list.
* ImAHumanitarian: Ruklamba is implied to eat humans, though he doesn't like them raw.
** He not
** Ruklamba calls out the Queen for not letting him use Ojama Delta Thunder!![[note]]Ojama Delta Thunder!! is an anime only spell that can only be activated when Ojama's Yellow, Green, and Black are on the field. WHen cast, it deals 500 damage to the opponent for every card in their hand and on their field. Then to add insult to injury, the caster can send a Ojama Delta Hurricane!! from their hand or deck to wipe toe opponents field. It's pretty broken[[/note]]. Her logic is that since her cover is that of a tournament, she has to use the rules of one, and that means using the Forbiden/Limited list.
* ImAHumanitarian: Ruklamba is implied to eat humans, though he doesn't like them raw.
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* BlowYouAway: Kurtus, the Shadow Spawn of Wind.
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* [[DarkIsNotEvil Dark Is Not]] ObviouslyEvil: Vladmir the Shadow Spawn of Darkness. Amoung the Spawn, and most of the Queen's servants, he's the nicest of the bunch. Although he still wants to defeat our heroes and free the Queen.
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* [[DarkIsNotEvil Dark Is Not]] ObviouslyEvil: Vladmir the Shadow Spawn of Darkness. Amoung Among the Spawn, and most of the Queen's servants, he's the nicest of the bunch. Although he still wants to defeat our heroes and free the Queen.
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** Kurtus is Lust. Any woman with a good body is one he wants. He's really fixated on Mai Kujaku/Mai Valentine.
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** Kurtus Kurtis is Lust. Any woman with a good body is one he wants. He's really fixated on Mai Kujaku/Mai Valentine.
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** Leopold is Pride. He won't admit that he has his flaws, and firmly believes that he is the best amoungst his siblings.
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* [[TailorMadePrison Tailor-made Prison]]: The Palace of Shadow, thanks to the spell the Three Heroes put on her.
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* [[TailorMadePrison Tailor-made Prison]]: TailorMadePrison: The Palace of Shadow, thanks to the spell the Three Heroes put on her.
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* PragmaticVillainy: Some of the Shadow Queen's minions actually try to kill Stan, Fran, and Andy outright. The Shadow Queen saves them, since if they were to die without being defeated in a fair contest, she would be trapped ''forever''.
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[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2532621/1/YuGiOh_The_Thousand_Year_Door Yu-Gi-Oh! The Thousand Year Door]] is a fanfiction written by Cyber Commander. A remake of the fic, which is in progress, can be found [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8130614/1/Yu_Gi_Oh_The_Thousand_Year_Door_Redux here]]. Although it takes place in the Yugioh world, virtually every character is a OC of some kind. The entire plot references ''VideoGame/PaperMarioTheThousandYearDoor''.
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[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2532621/1/YuGiOh_The_Thousand_Year_Door Yu-Gi-Oh! The Thousand Year Door]] is a fanfiction written by Cyber Commander. A remake of the fic, using updated rules and info, which is in progress, can be found [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8130614/1/Yu_Gi_Oh_The_Thousand_Year_Door_Redux here]]. Although it takes place in the Yugioh world, virtually every character is a OC of some kind. The entire plot references ''VideoGame/PaperMarioTheThousandYearDoor''.
''VideoGame/PaperMarioTheThousandYearDoor'' and a few other ''Franchise/SuperMarioBros'' games.
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However, the Queen eventually found an escape clause: if she or anyone working for her (willingly nor not) beat the heirs of each hero in a fair contest, the curse would be lifted.
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Cut forward to the present day. Three duelists, Stanley Mason, Francesca Benedict, and Andy Markova, each receive invitations to a duel monsters tournament on Monster Island (Arcadia in the remake). However, they quickly learn of the evil behind the Thousand Year Door, and fight to make sure the Queen doesn't leave it's unholy doors.
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During her imprisonment, she separately lured six males (all masters of an element) to her palace and sired children with them, [[YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefulness killing the fathers after conception]]. These children became the Shadow Spawn, masters of the six elements and her top enforcers.
Cut forward to the present day. Three duelists, Stanley Mason, Francesca Benedict, and Andy Markova, each receive invitations to a duel monsters tournament on Monster Island (Arcadia in the remake). However, they quickly learn of the evil behind the Thousand Year Door, and fight to make sure the Queen doesn't leaveit's its unholy doors.
Cut forward to the present day. Three duelists, Stanley Mason, Francesca Benedict, and Andy Markova, each receive invitations to a duel monsters tournament on Monster Island (Arcadia in the remake). However, they quickly learn of the evil behind the Thousand Year Door, and fight to make sure the Queen doesn't leave
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* [[DarkIsNotEvil Dark Is Not]] ObviouslyEvil: Vladmir the Shadow Spawn of Darkness. Amoung the Spawn, and most of the Queen's sevarts, he's the nicest of the bunch. Although he still wants to defeat our heroes and free the Queen.
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* [[DarkIsNotEvil Dark Is Not]] ObviouslyEvil: Vladmir the Shadow Spawn of Darkness. Amoung the Spawn, and most of the Queen's sevarts, servants, he's the nicest of the bunch. Although he still wants to defeat our heroes and free the Queen.
* DoNotCallMePaul: The Shadow Queen does not like being called by her original name, "[[spoiler: Josephine]]".
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** Leopold is Pride. He won't admit that he has his flaws, and firmly belives that he is the best amoungst his siblings.
** Maria is Wrath.
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** Leopold is Pride. He won't admit that he has his flaws, and firmly belives believes that he is the best amoungst his siblings.
** Maria is Wrath. She has a horrible temper and would probably try to murder an opponent outright if she where not forbidden to by her mother.
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* [[TailorMadePrison Tailor-made Prision]]: The Palace of Shadow, thanks to the spell the Three Heroes put on her.
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[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2532621/1/YuGiOh_The_Thousand_Year_Door Yu-Gi-Oh! The Thousand Year Door]] is a fanfiction written by Cyber Commander. A remake of the fic ,which is in progress, can be found [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8130614/1/Yu_Gi_Oh_The_Thousand_Year_Door_Redux here]]. Although it takes place in the Yugioh world, virtually every character is a OC of some kind.
One Thousand years ago, an evil sorceress known as the Shadow Queen attempted to TakeOverTheWorld. Fortunetly, [[TheChosenOne Three legendary heroes]] fought the Shadow Queen in the Palace of Shadows and won. However, seeing as they couldn't kill her, they did the next best thing: they cursed her, preventing her from leaving the Palace forever.
One Thousand years ago, an evil sorceress known as the Shadow Queen attempted to TakeOverTheWorld. Fortunetly, [[TheChosenOne Three legendary heroes]] fought the Shadow Queen in the Palace of Shadows and won. However, seeing as they couldn't kill her, they did the next best thing: they cursed her, preventing her from leaving the Palace forever.
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[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2532621/1/YuGiOh_The_Thousand_Year_Door Yu-Gi-Oh! The Thousand Year Door]] is a fanfiction written by Cyber Commander. A remake of the fic ,which fic, which is in progress, can be found [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8130614/1/Yu_Gi_Oh_The_Thousand_Year_Door_Redux here]]. Although it takes place in the Yugioh world, virtually every character is a OC of some kind.
kind. The entire plot references ''VideoGame/PaperMarioTheThousandYearDoor''.
One Thousand years ago, an evil sorceress known as the Shadow Queen attempted to TakeOverTheWorld.Fortunetly, Fortunately, [[TheChosenOne Three legendary heroes]] fought the Shadow Queen in the Palace of Shadows and won. However, seeing as they couldn't kill her, they did the next best thing: they cursed her, preventing her from leaving the Palace forever.
One Thousand years ago, an evil sorceress known as the Shadow Queen attempted to TakeOverTheWorld.
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Cut forward to the present day. Three duelists, Stanley Masion, Francesca Benedict, and Andy Markova, each recieve invitations to a duel monsters tournament on Monster Island (Arcadia in the remake). However, they quickly learn of the evil behind the Thousand Year Door, and fight to make sure the Queen doesn't leave it's unholy doors.
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Cut forward to the present day. Three duelists, Stanley Masion, Mason, Francesca Benedict, and Andy Markova, each recieve receive invitations to a duel monsters tournament on Monster Island (Arcadia in the remake). However, they quickly learn of the evil behind the Thousand Year Door, and fight to make sure the Queen doesn't leave it's unholy doors.
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* Cameo: In the remake, [[SuperMarioRPG Cloaker, Domino, and Smithy.]]
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* Cameo: {{Cameo}}: In the remake, [[SuperMarioRPG Cloaker, Domino, and Smithy.]]
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** Cortez also has one for stealing for the curse he recieved for stealing from the Queen. He has to guard his treasure forever as a ghost, and can't pass on until he is beaten in battle, and he can't intentionally lose or else it doesn't count.
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** Cortez also has one for stealing for the curse he recieved received for stealing from the Queen. He has to guard his treasure forever as a ghost, and can't pass on until he is beaten in battle, and he can't intentionally lose or else it doesn't count.
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* EvenEvilHasStandards: Vladmir. He suprises Andy, Fran, and Stan with his lack of threats.
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* EvenEvilHasStandards: Vladmir. He suprises surprises Andy, Fran, and Stan with his lack of threats.
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** In the remake, Stan, Fran, and Andy's decks also form a power trio of the three cards that go into the Extra deck: Stan's [[YuGIOHZexal Xyz's]], Fran's [[YuGiOh5Ds Unicorn Synchros]], and Andy's Fusion Dragons.
* SevenDeadlySins: Each of the
** Melisa is Sloth, as she is a slacker who gets others to wait on her.
* SevenDeadlySins: Each of the
** Melisa is Sloth, as she is a slacker who gets others to wait on her.
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** In the remake, Stan, Fran, and Andy's decks also form a power trio of the three cards that go into the Extra deck: Stan's [[YuGIOHZexal [[YuGiOhZexal Xyz's]], Fran's [[YuGiOh5Ds Unicorn Synchros]], and Andy's Fusion Dragons.
* SevenDeadlySins: Each ofthe
the Shadow Spawn and their mother.
** Melisa isSloth, as she Sloth. She is a slacker who gets others to wait on her.
* SevenDeadlySins: Each of
** Melisa is
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** The Shadow Queen is Gluttony. Not only does she ingulge in fine food, but she also ingulges is trivalities and the like.
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** The Shadow Queen is Gluttony. Not only does she ingulge indulge in fine food, but she also ingulges indulges is trivalities trivialities and the like.
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* OurZombiesAreDifferent: Cortez's deck in ''Redux'' is a ghost pirate deck. The monsters in it are all Water attribute Zombies, something rare for the Zombie type.
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** Cortez also has one for stealing for the curse he recieved for stealing from the Queen. He has to guard his treasure forever as a ghost, and can't pass on until he is beaten in battle, and he can't intentionally lose or else it doesn't count.
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* EvenEvilHasStandards: Vladmir. He suprises Andy, Fran, and Stan with his lack of threats.
** He not only pays for lunch, he gave a pretty good tip.
** He not only pays for lunch, he gave a pretty good tip.
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He made this clear on the Pokemasters Forum, where the story was originally posted.
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* OldShame: Cyber Commander has regretted his "extra" Dark Scorpion cards, since they completely miss the theme of the Dark Scorpions (FiveManBand), and the character of Wanda Underwood, as she's blatantly a repetitive, spiteful bashing of Weevil Underwood. He's since banned any other authors from using his Dark Scorpions and never used them again, and Wanda doesn't appear at all in the remake, her duels replaced with new characters.
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* lowYouAway: Kurtus, the Shadow Spawn of Wind.
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* lowYouAway: BigBad: The Shadow Queen.
* BlowYouAway: Kurtus, the Shadow Spawn of Wind.
* BlowYouAway: Kurtus, the Shadow Spawn of Wind.
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* LightIsNotGood: Melisa, the Shadow Spawn of Light..
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* TheDragon: Lord Grodus.
* LightIsNotGood: Melisa, the Shadow Spawn ofLight..Light.
* LightIsNotGood: Melisa, the Shadow Spawn of
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* lowYouAway: Kurtus, the Shadow Spawn of Wind.
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* [[DarkIsNotEvil Dark Is Not]] ObviouslyEvil: Vladmir. He is the Shadow Spawn of Darkness and he's the nicest of the six. Although he still wants to defeat our heroes.
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* [[DarkIsNotEvil Dark Is Not]] ObviouslyEvil: Vladmir. He is Vladmir the Shadow Spawn of Darkness Darkness. Amoung the Spawn, and most of the Queen's sevarts, he's the nicest of the six. bunch. Although he still wants to defeat our heroes.heroes and free the Queen.
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* LightIsNotGood: Melissa.
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* DishingOutDirt: Leopold, the Shadow Spawn of Earth.
* LightIsNotGood:Melissa.Melisa, the Shadow Spawn of Light..
* MakingASplash: Maria, the Shadow Spawn of Water.
* PlayingWithFire: Tyson, the Shadow Spawn of Fire.
* LightIsNotGood:
* MakingASplash: Maria, the Shadow Spawn of Water.
* PlayingWithFire: Tyson, the Shadow Spawn of Fire.
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* SevenDeadlySins: Each of the
** Melisa is Sloth, as she is a slacker who gets others to wait on her.
** Kurtus is Lust. Any woman with a good body is one he wants.
** Tyson is Greed. He steals power from anyone he can without getting caught.
** Leopold is Pride. He won't admit that he has his flaws, and firmly belives that he is the best amoungst his siblings.
** Maria is Wrath.
** Vladmir is Envy. He views anyone stronger than him as a rival, and seeks to be better than them.
***[[spoiler: He's also envious of the average duelist. They duel for fun; he duels to kill.]]
** The Shadow Queen is Gluttony. Not only does she ingulge in fine food, but she also ingulges is trivalities and the like.
** Melisa is Sloth, as she is a slacker who gets others to wait on her.
** Kurtus is Lust. Any woman with a good body is one he wants.
** Tyson is Greed. He steals power from anyone he can without getting caught.
** Leopold is Pride. He won't admit that he has his flaws, and firmly belives that he is the best amoungst his siblings.
** Maria is Wrath.
** Vladmir is Envy. He views anyone stronger than him as a rival, and seeks to be better than them.
***[[spoiler: He's also envious of the average duelist. They duel for fun; he duels to kill.]]
** The Shadow Queen is Gluttony. Not only does she ingulge in fine food, but she also ingulges is trivalities and the like.
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[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2532621/1/YuGiOh_The_Thousand_Year_Door Yu-Gi-Oh! The Thousand Year Door]] is a fanfiction written by Cyber Commander. A remake of the fic ,which is in progress, can be found [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8130614/1/Yu_Gi_Oh_The_Thousand_Year_Door_Redux here]]. Although it takes place in the Yugioh world, virtually every character is a OC of some kind.
One Thousand years ago, an evil sorceress known as the Shadow Queen attempted to TakeOverTheWorld. Fortunetly, [[TheChosenOne Three legendary heroes]] fought the Shadow Queen in the Palace of Shadows and won. However, seeing as they couldn't kill her, they did the next best thing: they cursed her, preventing her from leaving the Palace forever.
However, the Queen eventually found an escape clause: if she or anyone working for her (willingly nor not) beat the heirs of each hero in a fair contest, the curse would be lifted.
[[SeriousBusiness Naturally, she chooses Duel Monsters as her weapon of choice.]]
Cut forward to the present day. Three duelists, Stanley Masion, Francesca Benedict, and Andy Markova, each recieve invitations to a duel monsters tournament on Monster Island (Arcadia in the remake). However, they quickly learn of the evil behind the Thousand Year Door, and fight to make sure the Queen doesn't leave it's unholy doors.
!!This fanfic has the following examples:
* Cameo: In the remake, [[SuperMarioRPG Cloaker, Domino, and Smithy.]]
* CurseEscapeClause: As mentioned above, if the Queen or anyone working for her, whether they want to or not, defeats Stan, Fran, and Andy in a fair contest, the spell is lifted and the Queen can leave.
* [[DarkIsNotEvil Dark Is Not]] ObviouslyEvil: Vladmir. He is the Shadow Spawn of Darkness and he's the nicest of the six. Although he still wants to defeat our heroes.
* DealWithTheDevil: [[spoiler:The Shadow Queen made a deal with a nameless demon. She gives him her name, he gives her the power over shadows.]]
* LightIsNotGood: Melissa.
* PowerTrio: The Three Heroes and Stan, Fran, and Andy.
** In the remake, Stan, Fran, and Andy's decks also form a power trio of the three cards that go into the Extra deck: Stan's [[YuGIOHZexal Xyz's]], Fran's [[YuGiOh5Ds Unicorn Synchros]], and Andy's Fusion Dragons.
* [[TailorMadePrison Tailor-made Prision]]: The Palace of Shadow, thanks to the spell the Three Heroes put on her.
* ThisIsForEmphasisBitch:
-->'"I'm waiting, [[spoiler:Josephine]]!" he shouted, tapping his foot.'
-->'Cue Shadow Queen entering the room'
-->'"I told you, Noah…" snarled the Shadow Queen's voice. "You are not to call me that!"'
-->'"How about if I just call you a bitch instead?" asked Noah. "Is that better?"'
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One Thousand years ago, an evil sorceress known as the Shadow Queen attempted to TakeOverTheWorld. Fortunetly, [[TheChosenOne Three legendary heroes]] fought the Shadow Queen in the Palace of Shadows and won. However, seeing as they couldn't kill her, they did the next best thing: they cursed her, preventing her from leaving the Palace forever.
However, the Queen eventually found an escape clause: if she or anyone working for her (willingly nor not) beat the heirs of each hero in a fair contest, the curse would be lifted.
[[SeriousBusiness Naturally, she chooses Duel Monsters as her weapon of choice.]]
Cut forward to the present day. Three duelists, Stanley Masion, Francesca Benedict, and Andy Markova, each recieve invitations to a duel monsters tournament on Monster Island (Arcadia in the remake). However, they quickly learn of the evil behind the Thousand Year Door, and fight to make sure the Queen doesn't leave it's unholy doors.
!!This fanfic has the following examples:
* Cameo: In the remake, [[SuperMarioRPG Cloaker, Domino, and Smithy.]]
* CurseEscapeClause: As mentioned above, if the Queen or anyone working for her, whether they want to or not, defeats Stan, Fran, and Andy in a fair contest, the spell is lifted and the Queen can leave.
* [[DarkIsNotEvil Dark Is Not]] ObviouslyEvil: Vladmir. He is the Shadow Spawn of Darkness and he's the nicest of the six. Although he still wants to defeat our heroes.
* DealWithTheDevil: [[spoiler:The Shadow Queen made a deal with a nameless demon. She gives him her name, he gives her the power over shadows.]]
* LightIsNotGood: Melissa.
* PowerTrio: The Three Heroes and Stan, Fran, and Andy.
** In the remake, Stan, Fran, and Andy's decks also form a power trio of the three cards that go into the Extra deck: Stan's [[YuGIOHZexal Xyz's]], Fran's [[YuGiOh5Ds Unicorn Synchros]], and Andy's Fusion Dragons.
* [[TailorMadePrison Tailor-made Prision]]: The Palace of Shadow, thanks to the spell the Three Heroes put on her.
* ThisIsForEmphasisBitch:
-->'"I'm waiting, [[spoiler:Josephine]]!" he shouted, tapping his foot.'
-->'Cue Shadow Queen entering the room'
-->'"I told you, Noah…" snarled the Shadow Queen's voice. "You are not to call me that!"'
-->'"How about if I just call you a bitch instead?" asked Noah. "Is that better?"'
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[[/index]]