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** And now we have [[spoiler: Renji, described as a hodge-podge creature seemingly composed of patchworks of fur, skin, and bare muscle, with a half-flesh/half-skull "face."]] Oh, and apparently [[spoiler: his]] every movement makes it look like [[spoiler: he's]] in pain.

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** And now we have [[spoiler: Renji, described as a hodge-podge creature seemingly composed of patchworks of fur, skin, scales, and bare muscle, with a half-flesh/half-skull "face."]] Oh, and apparently [[spoiler: his]] every movement makes it look like [[spoiler: he's]] in pain. [[spoiler: Byakuya]] only recognizes [[spoiler: him]] because [[spoiler: he already killed a Hollowfied Rukia]].
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** And now we have [[spoiler: Renji, described as a hodge-podge creature seemingly composed of patchworks of fur, skin, and bare muscle, with a half-flesh/half-skull "face."]] Oh, and apparently [[spoiler: his]] every movement makes it look like [[spoiler: he's]] in pain.
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* HeroicBSOD: [[spoiler: Hisagi, to the point where his zanpakutou has to ''take over his body'' for a while just to keep him alive.]]


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* MeaningfulName: Kage ("shadow"), one of the [[{{Ninja}} Onmitsukidou]].
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** [[spoiler: Pantera]] is becoming this as of the latest chapters.

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** [[spoiler: Pantera]] is becoming this as of the latest chapters. [[spoiler: And now Suzumushi is talking to Nanao, who isn't even her wielder...]]
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* DualTonfas: Takano Dan's shikai.
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---> “Lots and lots,” Orihime said. She kept on trying to add two and two together and getting the wrong answer. “But it’s very pretty,” she added, in case she’d hurt Ise’s feelings.

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---> “Lots and lots,” lots,” Orihime said. She kept on trying to add two and two together and getting the wrong answer. “But it’s very pretty,” she added, in case she’d hurt Ise’s feelings.



* WarIsHell: This fic is ''not'' shy about the physical and mental costs of fighting a near-hopeless war. People die- not just in HeroicSacrifices, but in foolish ones, or just because they're not good enough fighters for the situation they're in- or even just from sheer bad luck. Those captured by the enemy are tortured and experimented on with very few exceptions. And even the survivors- even the ones who are alive and still trying to fight- are worn down by everything that's happened. Ukitake, Iba, and Soi Fong may be [[HandicappedBadass Handicapped Badasses]], but their injuries have a very real cost, in day to day life as well as in battle. And the psychological costs of the war are pretty clear too, looking at [[BreakTheCutie Orihime]], [[BreakTheBadass Hisagi,]] and many others- they may be soldiering on now, but only just, and when the war is over they'll still have these things to deal with.

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* WarIsHell: This fic is ''not'' shy about the physical and mental costs of fighting a near-hopeless war. People die- not just in HeroicSacrifices, but in foolish ones, or just because they're not good enough fighters for the situation they're in- or even just from sheer bad luck. Those captured by the enemy are tortured and experimented on with very few exceptions. And even the survivors- even the ones who are alive and still trying to fight- are worn down by everything that's happened. Ukitake, Iba, and Soi Fong may be [[HandicappedBadass Handicapped Badasses]], but their injuries have a very real cost, in day to day life as well as in battle. And the psychological costs of the war are pretty clear too, looking at just as stark. [[BreakTheCutie Orihime]], [[BreakTheBadass Hisagi,]] [[MilesToGoBeforeISleep Ukitake,]] [[spoiler: ReverseMole Hisagi]] and many others- they may be others who've lost friends or [[DirtyBusiness done things they're not proud of]] are soldiering on now, for now- but only just, some of them have come perilously close to breaking, and when even assuming a given person makes it through the war is over war, that doesn't mean they'll still have these things to deal with.be all right.
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---> “Lots and lots,” Orihime said. She kept on trying to add two and two together and getting the wrong answer. “But it’s very pretty,” she added, in case she’d hurt Ise’s feelings.

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---> “Lots and lots,” lots,” Orihime said. She kept on trying to add two and two together and getting the wrong answer. “But it’s very pretty,” she added, in case she’d hurt Ise’s feelings.



* WarIsHell

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* WarIsHellWarIsHell: This fic is ''not'' shy about the physical and mental costs of fighting a near-hopeless war. People die- not just in HeroicSacrifices, but in foolish ones, or just because they're not good enough fighters for the situation they're in- or even just from sheer bad luck. Those captured by the enemy are tortured and experimented on with very few exceptions. And even the survivors- even the ones who are alive and still trying to fight- are worn down by everything that's happened. Ukitake, Iba, and Soi Fong may be [[HandicappedBadass Handicapped Badasses]], but their injuries have a very real cost, in day to day life as well as in battle. And the psychological costs of the war are pretty clear too, looking at [[BreakTheCutie Orihime]], [[BreakTheBadass Hisagi,]] and many others- they may be soldiering on now, but only just, and when the war is over they'll still have these things to deal with.
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* TragicKeepsake: Rangiku's necklace for Momo, Yumichika's scarf for Ikkaku. At first. [[spoiler: The necklace ends up being a key element in the Rangiku impersonation scheme... and as for the scarf, well, Yumichika's alive, so it's no longer tragic. [[AnyoneCanDie For now, anyway]].]]
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* YouHaveFailedMe: Aizen and Gin just LOVE this, each in his own way. Sometimes it [[TheDogBitesBack backfires]].

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* YouHaveFailedMe: Aizen and Gin just LOVE this, each in his own way. Sometimes it [[TheDogBitesBack backfires]].backfires]].
* ZeroApprovalGambit: [[spoiler: Hisagi]] sets one in motion by orders of his superiors, 'betraying' Soul Society to gain a potential chance to save it later (and a less-than-potential chance to be executed for war crimes anyway if that even succeeds).
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** Mayuri's plans for the one afternoon look like: 1) Commit a terrible atrocity. 2) Commit another terrible atrocity. 3) Have a nice cup of tea.

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** Mayuri's plans for the one afternoon look like: 1) Commit a terrible atrocity. 2) Commit another terrible atrocity. 3) Have a nice cup of tea.
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** Mayuri's plans for the one afternoon look like: 1) Commit a terrible atrocity. 2) Commit another terrible atrocity. 3) Have a nice cup of tea.
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Temporarily moved HONF back to the YMMV page, mostly because that red dot on the main page looks really annoying. Maybe it will be sensible to make an entire separate Nightmare page for this story - what do you think?


* HighOctaneNightmareFuel: [[TorturedAbomination Hollowfied Shinigami]], [[EatenAlive re-opened Hollow Pits,]] [[HeroicBSOD most]] [[StepfordSmiler of]] [[BrokenAce the]] [[BreakTheCutie characters']] [[VillainousBreakdown states]] [[ICannotSelfTerminate of]] [[MindRape mind]], the state of the [[CrapsackWorld universe in general]], and on top of it all it [[MoralEventHorizon somehow]] ''[[BeyondTheImpossible keeps]]'' ''[[TearJerker getting]]'' '''''[[ItGotWorse worse.]]'''''
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** That's your justification? '''Read at least half of this page.''' DarkerAndEdgier is putting it ''[[{{Understatement}} mildly.]]''

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** That's your justification? '''Read at least half of this page.''' DarkerAndEdgier is putting it ''[[{{Understatement}} mildly.]]''''mildly.''

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* TheUnintelligible: [[TearJerker See "Tortured Abomination."]]
* TorturedAbomination: Hollowfied Shinigami. Special mention goes to [[spoiler: Hitsugaya]], who got broken so badly that he's left as a [[spoiler: "jumble of icy wings and cruel claws" that can't even talk, [[TheBlank nor does he have a face.]] Momo]] [[TearJerker was not amused.]]


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* TheUnintelligible: [[TearJerker See "Tortured Abomination."]]


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* TorturedAbomination: Hollowfied Shinigami. Special mention goes to [[spoiler: Hitsugaya]], who got broken so badly that he's left as a [[spoiler: "jumble of icy wings and cruel claws" that can't even talk, [[TheBlank nor does he have a face.]] Momo]] [[TearJerker was not amused.]]
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** [[spoiler: His Zanpakuto, housed elsewhere, has also tried this. Constantly. [[AndIMustScream And still can't die.]]]]


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*HighOctaneNightmareFuel: [[TorturedAbomination Hollowfied Shinigami]], [[EatenAlive re-opened Hollow Pits,]] [[HeroicBSOD most]] [[StepfordSmiler of]] [[BrokenAce the]] [[BreakTheCutie characters']] [[VillainousBreakdown states]] [[ICannotSelfTerminate of]] [[MindRape mind]], the state of the [[CrapsackWorld universe in general]], and on top of it all it [[MoralEventHorizon somehow]] ''[[BeyondTheImpossible keeps]]'' ''[[TearJerker getting]]'' '''''[[ItGotWorse worse.]]'''''


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** [[spoiler: Senbonzakura, observed by Kazeshini as he keeps trying and failing to kill himself.]]
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* ColdBloodedTorture: Going through [[spoiler: Aizen's]] old office reveals that a lot more was done to the captives besides putting the Hogyoku to them. If one didn't know any better, his research notes could very well be describing '''lab rats.''' Even worse for the audience, this is found out after [[spoiler: we have seen at least four of [[TorturedAbomination the "subjects"]] killed.]]
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* TorturedAbomination: Hollowfied Shinigami. Special mention goes to [[spoiler: Hitsugaya]], who got broken so badly that he's left as a [[spoiler: "jumble of icy wings and cruel claws" that can't even talk. Momo]] [[TearJerker was not amused.]]

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* TorturedAbomination: Hollowfied Shinigami. Special mention goes to [[spoiler: Hitsugaya]], who got broken so badly that he's left as a [[spoiler: "jumble of icy wings and cruel claws" that can't even talk. talk, [[TheBlank nor does he have a face.]] Momo]] [[TearJerker was not amused.]]
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* TheUnintelligible: [[TearJerker See "Tortured Abomination."]]
* TorturedAbomination: Hollowfied Shinigami. Special mention goes to [[spoiler: Hitsugaya]], who got broken so badly that he's left as a [[spoiler: "jumble of icy wings and cruel claws" that can't even talk. Momo]] [[TearJerker was not amused.]]
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* ThisIsSomethingHeHasGotToDoHimself: It is understood that Ikkaku will fight [[spoiler: Yumichika]] alone, despite the fact that the fic usually avoids one-on-one duels. (By the time it actually happens, everyone else is busy fighting another opponent, so Ikkaku’s personal fight actually makes their lives easier by removing the second antagonist.)

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* ThisIsSomethingHeHasGotToDoHimself: ThisIsSomethingHesGotToDoHimself: It is understood that Ikkaku will fight [[spoiler: Yumichika]] alone, despite the fact that the fic usually avoids one-on-one duels. (By the time it actually happens, everyone else is busy fighting another opponent, so Ikkaku’s personal fight actually makes their lives easier by removing the second antagonist.)
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* ThisIsSomethingHeHasGotToDoHimself: It is understood that Ikkaku will fight [[spoiler: Yumichika]] alone, despite the fact that the fic usually avoids one-on-one duels. (By the time it actually happens, everyone else is busy fighting another opponent, so Ikkaku’s personal fight actually makes their lives easier by removing the second antagonist.)
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Editing for who was in control of the body at that point...


* MercyKill: [[spoiler: Hisagi to Nemu, Byakuya to Rukia.]]

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* MercyKill: [[spoiler: Hisagi Kazeshini to Nemu, Byakuya to Rukia.]]

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* LeeroyJenkins: Grimmjow will abandon whatever he is supposed to be doing if he suspects there is a fight availible elsewhere. Ikkaku [[spoiler: and Yumichika]] are able to resist the urge, due to CharacterDevelopment.

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* LesCollaborateurs: Gotei-13 is following orders of 'Ichimaru-sotaichou' at the beginning of the fic. One can only wonder what those orders actually are, because we know for sure they don't involve ''anything'' of common shinigami duties. Large part of Seireitei nobility also qualifies.
* LeeroyJenkins: Grimmjow will abandon whatever he is supposed to be doing if he suspects there is a fight availible available elsewhere. Ikkaku [[spoiler: and Yumichika]] are able to resist the urge, due to CharacterDevelopment.
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** Possibly the case of "Bleach canon meets realistic approach". When good guys don't just fight glorious one-on-one five-episodes-long battles for our entertainment, and bad guys don't just conveniently stand there and brag about their brilliant plans and general evilness until being properly defeated by good guys (again, for our entertainment), it becomes much harder to ignore that prolonged warfare is quite an ugly business. Not only [[WarIsHell war indeed is hell]] - it's a particularly unattractive and non-romantic hell. [[CatchPhrase And no one is safe.]]

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** Possibly the case of [[RealityEnsues "Bleach canon meets realistic approach".approach"]]. When good guys don't just fight glorious one-on-one five-episodes-long battles for our entertainment, and bad guys don't just conveniently stand there and brag about their brilliant plans and general evilness until being properly defeated by good guys (again, for our entertainment), it becomes much harder to ignore that prolonged warfare is quite an ugly business. Not only [[WarIsHell war indeed is hell]] - it's a particularly unattractive and non-romantic hell. [[CatchPhrase And no one is safe.]]

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* WhatWouldXDo: Iba considers and rejects Komamura, Zaraki, Ikkaku, Yumichika, and Renji’s probable solutions to a problem, before finding the right person to “ask”: his mom, former Vice-Captain of Third Division Iba Chikane. Who then “tells” him exactly what to do... and follows up by [[IWantGrandkids wanting to know how long it’ll be until he gets married and gives her some grandkids]].

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* WhatWouldXDo: Iba considers and rejects Komamura, Zaraki, Ikkaku, Yumichika, and Renji’s probable solutions to a problem, before finding the right person to “ask”: his mom, former Vice-Captain of Third Division Iba Chikane. Who then “tells” him exactly what to do... and follows up by [[IWantGrandkids wanting to know how long it’ll be until he gets married and gives her some grandkids]].grandkids]].
* YouHaveFailedMe: Aizen and Gin just LOVE this, each in his own way. Sometimes it [[TheDogBitesBack backfires]].
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* KickedUpstairs: Aizen got rid of traumatized and crazed (and thus uncontrollable) Gin... by giving him the whole Seireitei to play with.

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* DarkerAndEdgier: Than Bleach canon. That is to say, good guys actually die.

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* DarkerAndEdgier: Than Bleach canon. That is to say, good guys actually die.


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** Possibly the case of "Bleach canon meets realistic approach". When good guys don't just fight glorious one-on-one five-episodes-long battles for our entertainment, and bad guys don't just conveniently stand there and brag about their brilliant plans and general evilness until being properly defeated by good guys (again, for our entertainment), it becomes much harder to ignore that prolonged warfare is quite an ugly business. Not only [[WarIsHell war indeed is hell]] - it's a particularly unattractive and non-romantic hell. [[CatchPhrase And no one is safe.]]
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* PsychopathicManChild / TheUnfettered: All Hollowfied shinigami seen so far are the mixture of this (with varying proportions). They are very simple-minded and often childish (just look at [[spoiler: Kira]]'s POV), perfectly obedient to orders of whatever master they have, regardless of how much of messy killing said orders involve; and, to add insult to injury, their personalities are reduced and condensed to whatever had been their greatest passion/desire in their previous lives (and, naturally, stripped of everything else). [[HighOctaneNightmareFuel Not]] [[TearJerker pretty]].
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* AlienGeometries / AsceticAesthetic: Las Noches has a mild version of this. Properly lampshaded:

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* AlienGeometries / AsceticAesthetic: Las Noches has a mild (or sometimes not so mild) version of this. Properly lampshaded:
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* AlienGeometries: Las Noches has a mild version of this. Properly lampshaded:

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* AlienGeometries: AlienGeometries / AsceticAesthetic: Las Noches has a mild version of this. Properly lampshaded:
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* TearJerker: And holy freaking ''HOW!!!''

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