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* RhetoricalQuestionBlunder: Marca, again.
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* RhetoricalQuestionBlunder: Marca, again.all the time.
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* RhetoricalQuestionBlunder: Marca, again.
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* AdvantageBall: Tom usually holds this, although he occasionally passes it to Marca.
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* TransEqualsGay: Played straight but defied.
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* TransEqualsGay: Played straight but defied.Defied
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* TransEqualsGay: Subverted and defied.
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* TransEqualsGay: Subverted and Played straight but defied.
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* TransEqualsGay: Subverted and defied.
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* What!easureIsANonHuman: Tom's friends are not sentimental about, for instance, House elves. Tom himself takes this approach to everyone, even other wizards, regardless of blood status.
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* What!easureIsANonHuman: WhatMeasureIsANonHuman: Tom's friends are not sentimental about, for instance, House elves. Tom himself takes this approach to everyone, even other wizards, regardless of blood status.
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* YouGottaHaveBlueHair: Jana.
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* YouGottaHaveBlueHair: Jana.Jana.
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Tom Riddle's Schooldays is an ongoing fanfiction set in the Harry Potter universe, about [[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin Tom Riddle jr.'s time as a student at Hogwarts]]. Of seven planned installments, the first two, "Year 1: Silver Blood" and "Year 2: Fathomless Fears", can be found [[http://tomriddlesschooldays.com here]].
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Tom Riddle's Schooldays is an ongoing fanfiction set in the Harry Potter universe, about [[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin Tom Riddle jr.'s time as a student at Hogwarts]]. Of seven planned installments, the first two, three, "Year 1: Silver Blood" and Blood", "Year 2: Fathomless Fears", and "Year 3: Masquerade" can be found [[http://tomriddlesschooldays.com here]].
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* What!easureIsANonHuman: Tom's friends are not sentimental about, for instance, House elves. Tom himself takes this approach to everyone, even other wizards, regardless of blood status.
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* BlindIdiotTranslation: The Perevodal Glass translates things word-for-word literally.
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* BlindIdiotTranslation: The Perevodal Glass translates things word-for-word literally.word-for-word.
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* WouldHitAGirl: Tom happily uses vicious tactics against Jana in their duels.
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* BlindIdiotTranslation: The Prervodal Perevodal Glass translates things word-for-word literally.
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** Belinda means "bright serpent". Bright in the color sense, not the mind sense. Brightly colored snakes are supposed to be the most venomous.
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** Belinda means "bright serpent". Bright in the color sense, not the mind sense. Brightly colored snakes are supposed to be the most venomous.
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-->-- '''Professor Slughorn''', ''teaching his students that it's only a transgression if you get caught''
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-->-- '''Professor Slughorn''', ''teaching teaching his students that it's only a transgression if you get caught''
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-->-- '''Professor Slughorn'''
Slughorn''', ''teaching his students that it's only a transgression if you get caught''
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** Also {{Subverted}}, as before he learned of magic he had assumed he was the only one in the world who could do that.
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** Also {{Subverted}}, {{Inverted}}, as before he learned of magic he had assumed he was the only one in the world who could do that.
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* DisproportionateRetribution: Belinda to Jana. Trying to [[spoiler:put someone in permanent coma]] is not commensurate to the crime of being made replacement Seeker.
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* DisproportionateRetribution: Belinda to Jana. Trying to [[spoiler:put someone in permanent coma]] is not hardly commensurate to the crime of being made replacement Seeker.
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* IfItsYouItsOkay: While there's no prejudice against different sexualities, there is quite a lot of pressure to get married and have children, especially on Purebloods, so for a gay person the spouse pretty much has to be this.
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-> ''“Many of the things you do here at Hogwarts can earn you House points if you do them well enough, and any transgressions can lose points from the House. So make sure to play by the rules at all times – and donʼt get caught doing anything you shouldnʼt.”''
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-->-- '''Professor Slughorn'''
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** Also {{Subverted}}, as before he learned of magic he had assumed he was the only one in the world who could do that.
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* IThoughtEveryoneCouldDoThat: Tom is at first confused that things he can do magically don't come naturally to the other children.
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* UnreliableNarrator: The way Tom thinks about Dumbledore, you'd think the man was pure evil.
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* AmbiguousDisorder: Marca. Tom. Even Belinda.
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* ConvenientlyCoherentThoughts: Mostly {{Averted}}. Tom almost only hears relevant thoughts when he and the other person are focused on the same task.
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* AntiHero: Tom, doing [[MindScrew good and "selfless" things for selfish reasons]].
