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* IJustWantToHaveFriends - Lupin's loneliness caused by death of his best friends so long ago & his condition explain why he bonds to Finrod so quickly. At one point he compares Finrod calling him friend to chocolate after an encounter with a Dementor.
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* MistakenAge - Finrod guesses that Hermione is [[YoungerThanTheyLook sixteen]]. [[WeAreAsMayflies Given the differences in the ageing processes of Elves and men it's understandable ]]
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* TimeDissonance - As expected with Immortal Elves and Humans
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* BritishAccents - Snape's original North Yorkshire accent comes through when he's stressed despite his attempts to suppress it.
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* BritishAccents - Snape's original North Yorkshire accent comes through when he's stressed despite his attempts to suppress it. At one point acts as a plot point keeping the other characters in the dark.
* DeadpanSnarker - Sirius
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* TheWoobie - Hermione
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* DramaticIrony - the reader knows the AwfulTruth about the BookWithinABook long before the main characters
* RealisticDictionIsUnrealistic - Finrod after having mastered English. Especially when trying to convince people about something. Taken UpToEleven after TheReveal when even the other character's [[LampshadeHanging notice]]. The former is somewhat [[JustifiedTrope justified]] in that Finrod has had centuries of experience as leader. There is some [[JustifiedTrope justification]] for the latter part in {{Canon}} in that Elves are supposedly very good at mimicking different kinds of speech in foreign languages but tend naturally to an [[AntiquatedLinguistics archaic]] sounding type and with the [[AwfulTruth truth out]] Finrod might revert to this
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* RealisticDictionIsUnrealistic TheWoobie - Finrod after having mastered English. Especially when trying to convince people about something. Taken UpToEleven after TheReveal when even the other character's [[LampshadeHanging notice]]. The former is somewhat [[JustifiedTrope justified]] in that Finrod has had centuries of experience as leader. There is some [[JustifiedTrope justification]] for the latter part in {{Canon}} in that Elves are supposedly very good at mimicking different kinds of speech in foreign languages but tend naturally to an [[AntiquatedLinguistics archaic]] sounding type and with the [[AwfulTruth truth out]] Finrod might revert to thisHermione
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* EntertaininglyWrong - They assume Trelawney's prediction refers to Beren and Luthien.
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* GettingCrapPastTheRadar - a throwaway sentence has Madam Pomfrey treating "an attractive fifth year" who has been hexed to have a bunny tail. Lupin wonders if a certain [[ShoutOut muggle]] [[Playboy magazine ]] is circulating at Hogwarts
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* ADayInTheLimelight - For Lupin and Finrod both secondary characters in their stories.
* FishOutofTemporalWater - Coming from a ostensibly MedievalStasis Finrod is fascinated by more modern technology such as plumbing (more so than he is by magic infact).
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* MagicAIsMagicA - Subverted. Unlike many this author remembers that The Harry Potter & Silmarillion "magic" run on very different rules. The wizards aren't quite sure how to classify Finrod
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* PrettyBoy - Unsurprisingly being an elf, Finrod. Snape says he'd make the young [[TallDarkAndHandsome Sirius]] [[EstrogenBrigadeBait Black ]], [[WhiteHairedPrettyBoy Lucius Malfoy ]] and [[TallDarkAndHandsome Tom Riddle ]] look plain.
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* PrettyBoy - Unsurprisingly being an elf, Finrod. Snape says he'd make the young [[TallDarkAndHandsome Sirius]] [[EstrogenBrigadeBait Black ]], [[WhiteHairedPrettyBoy Lucius ]] [[SharpDressedMan Malfoy ]] and [[TallDarkAndHandsome Tom ]] [[HotAsHell Riddle ]] look plain.
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* ArbitrarySkepticism - Finrod finds Lupin's disbelief in Trelawney's divination to be this. Then he meets her...
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* AudioErotica - Finrod's voice
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* Screw Destiny - Averted. [[spoiler:Finrod]] accepts his both prior to and during the story
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* Screw Destiny ScrewDestiny - Averted. [[spoiler:Finrod]] accepts his both prior to and during the story
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* FixFic - [[spoiler:Hermione's]] actions which end up [[spoiler:summoning Finrod]] are something of a meta-twist on an attempt to do this and a SelfInsertFic
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* FixFic - [[spoiler:Hermione's]] actions which end up [[spoiler:summoning Finrod]] cause the situation are something of a meta-twist on an attempt to do this and a SelfInsertFic
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* PerverseSexualLust - While not sexual (given the character's age)[[spoiler:Hermione's]] reaction to [[spoiler:Finrod]] when reading can definitely be taken as a crush.
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* PerverseSexualLust - While not sexual (given the character's age)[[spoiler:Hermione's]] age) Hermione's reaction to [[spoiler:Finrod]] when reading can definitely be taken as a crush.
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* RealisticDictionIsUnrealistc - Finrod after having mastered English. Especially when trying to convince people about something. Taken UpToEleven after TheReveal when even the other character's [[LampshadeHanging notice]]. The former is somewhat [[JustifiedTrope justified]] in that Finrod has had centuries of experience as leader. There is some [[JustifiedTrope justification]] for the latter part in {{Canon}} in that Elves are supposedly very good at mimicking different kinds of speech in foreign languages but tend naturally to an [[AntiquatedLinguistics archaic]] sounding type and with the [[AwfulTruth truth out]] Finrod might revert to this
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* RealisticDictionIsUnrealistc RealisticDictionIsUnrealistic - Finrod after having mastered English. Especially when trying to convince people about something. Taken UpToEleven after TheReveal when even the other character's [[LampshadeHanging notice]]. The former is somewhat [[JustifiedTrope justified]] in that Finrod has had centuries of experience as leader. There is some [[JustifiedTrope justification]] for the latter part in {{Canon}} in that Elves are supposedly very good at mimicking different kinds of speech in foreign languages but tend naturally to an [[AntiquatedLinguistics archaic]] sounding type and with the [[AwfulTruth truth out]] Finrod might revert to this
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* GettingCrapPastTheRadar - a throwaway sentence has Madam Pomfrey treating "an attractive fifth year" who has been hexed to have a bunny tail. Lupin wonders if a certain [[ShoutOut muggle]] [[Playboy magazine]] is circulating at Hogwarts
* FixFic - [[spoiler:Hermione's]] actions which end up [[spoiler:summoning Finrod]] are something of a meta-twist on an attempt to do this and a SelfInsertFic
* FixFic - [[spoiler:Hermione's]] actions which end up [[spoiler:summoning Finrod]] are something of a meta-twist on an attempt to do this and a SelfInsertFic
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* Screw Destiny - Averted. [[spoiler:Finrod]]accepts his both prior to and during the story
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* RealisticDictionIsUnrealistc - Finrod after having mastered English. Especially when trying to convince people about something. Taken UpToEleven after TheReveal when even the other character's [[LampshadeHanging notice]]. The former is somewhat [[JustifiedTrope justified]] in that Finrod has had centuries of experience as leader. There is some [[JustifiedTrope justification]] for the latter part in {{Canon}} in that Elves are supposedly very good at mimicking different kinds of speech in foreign languages but tend naturally to an [[AntiquatedLinguistics archaic]] sounding type and with the [[AwfulTruth truth out]] Finrod might revert to this
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** PerverseSexualLust - While not sexual (given the character's age)[[spoiler:Hermione's]] reaction to [[spoiler:Finrod]] when reading can definitely be taken as a crush.
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* MindRape - Doesn't appear in story but Finrod is of the opinion that "assailing the mind was as bad as raping the body"
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* ShownTheirWork - Of Tolkien's Work. The difference in Elvish philosophy to Human is portrayed perfectly showing knowledge of [[AllThereInTheManual more than just even ]] [[TheHistoryOfMiddleEarth The Silmarillion ]]
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* ShownTheirWork - Of Tolkien's Work. The difference in Elvish philosophy to Human is portrayed perfectly showing knowledge of [[AllThereInTheManual more than just even ]] [[TheHistoryOfMiddleEarth just even ]] The Silmarillion ]]Silmarillion
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* JanitorImpersonationInfiltration - Not exactly this trope but Finrod impersonates Snape to get around the school without attracting students' notice. Although his disguise is physically perfect he wears a blue robe [[GlamourFailure]]. HilarityEnsues
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* JanitorImpersonationInfiltration - Not exactly this trope but Finrod impersonates Snape to get around the school without attracting students' notice. Although his disguise is physically perfect he wears a [[GlamourFailure blue robe [[GlamourFailure]].]]. HilarityEnsues
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* MagicAIsAMagicA - Subverted. Unlike many this author remembers that The Harry Potter & Silmarillion "magic" run on very different rules. The wizards aren't quite sure how to classify Finrod
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* BritishAccents - Snape's original North Yorkshire accent comes through when he's stresses despite his attempts to suppress it.
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* ContinuityNod quite JanitorImpersonationInfiltration - Not exactly this trope but Finrod impersonates Snape to get around the school without attracting students' notice. Although his disguise is physically perfect he wears a few, from both sources.blue robe [[GlamourFailure]]. HilarityEnsues
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* Telepathy - As in the Silmarillion, Finrod has some level of this, again allowing him to learn languages quickly
** It also allows him to notice both [[spoiler:Sirius & Wormtail in their animagus forms]] aren't quick what they seem
** It also allows him to notice both [[spoiler:Sirius & Wormtail in their animagus forms]] aren't quick what they seem
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* YouCan'tFightFate
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* GuiltByCoincidence-Being the only werewolf in the Castle, if Finrod wasn't able to testify otherwise, Lupin would have been taken to be the attacker. Snape is especially convinced he is
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* GuiltByCoincidence-Being the only werewolf in the Castle, if Finrod wasn't able to testify otherwise, Lupin would have been taken to be the attacker. Snape is especially convinced he isis.
*GuiltComplex - Lupin arguably has one of these.
*GuiltComplex - Lupin arguably has one of these.
*MagicAIsAMagicA - Subverted. Unlike many this author remembers that The Harry Potter & Silmarillion "magic" run on very different rules. The wizards aren't quite sure how to classify Finrod
**PerverseSexualLust - While not sexual (given the character's age)[[spoiler:Hermione's]] reaction to [[spoiler:Finrod]] when reading can definitely be taken as a crush.
*Screw Destiny - Averted. [[spoiler:Finrod]]accepts his both prior to and during the story
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**It also allows him to notice both [[spoiler:Sirius & Wormtail in their animagus forms]] aren't quick what they seem
*YouCan'tFightFate
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* CrowningMomentOfAwesome - Findrod facing a Dementor[[spoiler:, and destroying it easily]]
** Another one for the author for making this crazy idea work, even without any serious harm to the original plot.
* CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming - most of the fic, most notably, the whole ending.
** Finrods gift to Lupin [[spoiler:- a carved wooden statue of Padfoot]]
** Another one for the author for making this crazy idea work, even without any serious harm to the original plot.
* CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming - most of the fic, most notably, the whole ending.
** Finrods gift to Lupin [[spoiler:- a carved wooden statue of Padfoot]]
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** Another one for
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* Awful Truth AwfulTruth (refer to Book within A book)
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