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* OrganTheft: A female sound ninja tells her comrades not to damage Hinata's eyes, they're worth quite a lot of money. Later on a ROOT operative hesitates to kill Hinate when presented with an opportunity to take her byakugan.

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* OrganTheft: A female sound ninja tells her comrades not to damage Hinata's eyes, they're worth quite a lot of money. Later on a ROOT operative hesitates to kill Hinate Hinata when presented with an opportunity to take her byakugan.



* PowerTattoo: Ed has a variety of arrays tattooed onto his body in the case his automail is destroyed or stolen. It is alluded to that these tatoos were originally a part of the human sacrific ritual on the Promised Day. Edward has since learned to use them in ways unrelated to their original function, though using them in this way is implied to carry some inherent risk.

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* PowerTattoo: Ed has a variety of arrays tattooed onto his body in the case his automail is destroyed or stolen. It is alluded to that these tatoos were originally a part of the human sacrific ritual on the Promised Day. Edward has since learned to use them in ways unrelated to their original function, though using them in like this way is implied to carry some inherent risk.

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* PowerTattoo: Ed has a variety of arrays tattooed onto his body in the case his automail is destroyed or stolen.

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* PowerTattoo: Ed has a variety of arrays tattooed onto his body in the case his automail is destroyed or stolen. It is alluded to that these tatoos were originally a part of the human sacrific ritual on the Promised Day. Edward has since learned to use them in ways unrelated to their original function, though using them in this way is implied to carry some inherent risk.
* [[spoiler: Roy Mustang is shown to have the very same tatoos as Edward. Hinata also ends up having tatoos forcibly applied to her by Pride when they are down in the tunnle system together. ]]
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* YouCanTalk: Ed's first encounter with talking Nin-Animals ends with a dramatic freakout, which involves him tripping over a dog and passing out on the floor of a vet clinic. Even afterwards Edward doesn't seem entirely sure what to make of the talking animals in the {{Naruto}} Universe; Especailly when the closest point of reference Edward has for talking animals up to this point are human-based chimera, like Nina. Ed does manage to square the talking animals into his worldview, much the same way he does with ninjutsu and everything else he doesn't understand about the shinobi world at this point--which is to say, [[GivingUpOnLogic he mostly avoids thinking about it too hard. ]]

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* YouCanTalk: Ed's first encounter with talking Nin-Animals ends with a dramatic freakout, which involves him tripping over a dog and passing out on the floor of a vet clinic. Even afterwards Edward doesn't seem entirely sure what to make of the talking animals in the {{Naruto}} Universe; Especailly when the closest point of reference Edward has for talking animals up to this point are human-based chimera, like Nina. Ed does sorta manage to square the talking animals into his worldview, much the same way he does with ninjutsu and everything else he doesn't understand about the shinobi world at this point--which is to say, [[GivingUpOnLogic he mostly avoids thinking about it too hard. ]]
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* YouCanTalk: Ed's first encounter with Nin AnimalCompanions ends with a dramatic freakout, which involves him tripping over a dog and passing out on the floor of a vet clinic. Even afterwards Edward doesn't seem entirely sure what to make of the talking animals in the Naruto Universe; Especailly when the closest point of reference Edward has for talking animals up to this point are human-based chimera, like Nina. While Ed does manage to square the talking animals into his worldview, he does so
mostly avoids thinking about it too hard.

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* YouCanTalk: Ed's first encounter with Nin AnimalCompanions talking Nin-Animals ends with a dramatic freakout, which involves him tripping over a dog and passing out on the floor of a vet clinic. Even afterwards Edward doesn't seem entirely sure what to make of the talking animals in the Naruto {{Naruto}} Universe; Especailly when the closest point of reference Edward has for talking animals up to this point are human-based chimera, like Nina. While Ed does manage to square the talking animals into his worldview, much the same way he does so
with ninjutsu and everything else he doesn't understand about the shinobi world at this point--which is to say, [[GivingUpOnLogic he mostly avoids thinking about it too hard.
hard. ]]
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* DisabledSnarker: Ed is the obvious example. In their discussion of Lee's own injury and potential disabliliry Ed notes that Lee doesn't nearly have the necessary sass to qualify for that position.

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* DisabledSnarker: Ed is the obvious example. In their discussion of Lee's own injury and potential disabliliry disability Ed notes that Lee doesn't nearly have the necessary sass to qualify for that position.



** [[spoiler: Edward and Tayuya are seemingly on their way to becoming this. Or at the very least, FriendlyEnemies. The two of them end up in adjoining cells of a Root stronghold--presumably, to intimidate them with the sound of the other screaming. Instead, [[BirdsOfAFeather Tayuya and Ed discover a kindred spirit in their former enemy.]] In the midst of being tortured [[VolleyingInsults (and trash talking each other)]], they find themselves forging a FriendlyRivalry and [[VitriolicBestBuds sense of camaraderie.]] Due to their budding... [[OddFriendship unconventional]] friendship, Ed and Tayuya's proximity to each other ends up ''bolstering'' their resistance, rather than tearing it down. ]]

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** [[spoiler: Edward and Tayuya are seemingly on their way to becoming this. Or at the very least, FriendlyEnemies. The two of them end up in adjoining cells of a Root stronghold--presumably, ROOT's stronghold--presumably to intimidate them with the sound of the other screaming. Instead, [[BirdsOfAFeather Tayuya and Ed discover a kindred spirit in their former enemy.]] In the midst of being tortured [[VolleyingInsults (and trash talking each other)]], they find themselves forging a FriendlyRivalry and [[VitriolicBestBuds sense of camaraderie.]] Due to their budding... [[OddFriendship unconventional]] friendship, Ed and Tayuya's proximity to each other ends up ''bolstering'' their resistance, rather than tearing it down. ]]



* OrganTheft: A female sound ninja tells her comrades not to damage Hinata's eyes, they're worth quite a lot of money. Later on a ROOT operative hesitates to kill Hinate when presented with a potential opportunity to take her byakugan.

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* OrganTheft: A female sound ninja tells her comrades not to damage Hinata's eyes, they're worth quite a lot of money. Later on a ROOT operative hesitates to kill Hinate when presented with a potential an opportunity to take her byakugan.



* YouCanTalk: Ed's first encounter with Nin AnimalCompanions ends with him moving back in surprise, tripping over a dog, and pass out on the floor of a vet clinic.

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* YouCanTalk: Ed's first encounter with Nin AnimalCompanions ends with a dramatic freakout, which involves him moving back in surprise, tripping over a dog, dog and pass passing out on the floor of a vet clinic.clinic. Even afterwards Edward doesn't seem entirely sure what to make of the talking animals in the Naruto Universe; Especailly when the closest point of reference Edward has for talking animals up to this point are human-based chimera, like Nina. While Ed does manage to square the talking animals into his worldview, he does so
mostly avoids thinking about it too hard.

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** [[spoiler: The note on Hinata's medical chart. The detail that the the charts and papers are kept on a clipboard hooked to the end of a patient's hospital bed is noted as far back as chapter 13. In chapter 18 such a clipboard is used by Hinata and Pride to communicate in writing when Pride interrogates her after she's lost her tounge encountering Truth. Rather than confirm Konoha and Pride's assumption that Ed has been taken to the Village Hidden in the Sound, she sends Pride after Danzo. The message that Hinata writes resurfaces again when the Leaf Village investigates Hinata's disappearance; Tipping off Tsunade about Danzo's involvement and giving her the evidence she needs to begin mobilizing against him more actively. ]]

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** [[spoiler: The note on Hinata's medical chart. The detail that the the charts and papers are kept on a clipboard hooked to the end of a patient's hospital bed is noted as far back as chapter 13. In chapter 18 such a clipboard is used by Hinata and Pride to communicate in writing when Pride interrogates her after she's she has lost her tounge encountering Truth. Rather than confirm Konoha and Pride's assumption that Ed has been taken to the Village Hidden in the Sound, she sends Pride after Danzo. The message that Hinata writes resurfaces again when the Leaf Village investigates Hinata's disappearance; Tipping off Tsunade about Danzo's involvement and giving her the evidence she needs to begin mobilizing against him more actively. ]]
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* OrganTheft: A female sound ninja tells her comrades not to damage Hinata's eyes, they're worth quite a lot of money.

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* OrganTheft: A female sound ninja tells her comrades not to damage Hinata's eyes, they're worth quite a lot of money. Later on a ROOT operative hesitates to kill Hinate when presented with a potential opportunity to take her byakugan.
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** [[spoiler The armored doll that Naruto gets for Edward.]]
** [[spoiler The note on Hinata's medical chart. The detail that the the charts and papers are kept on a clipboard hooked to the end of a patient's hospital bed is noted as far back as chapter 13. In chapter 18 such a clipboard is used by Hinata and Pride to communicate in writing when Pride interrogates her after she's lost her tounge encountering Truth. Rather than confirm Konoha and Pride's assumption that Ed has been taken to the Village Hidden in the Sound, she sends Pride after Danzo. The message that Hinata writes resurfaces again when the Leaf Village investigates Hinata's disappearance; Tipping off Tsunade about Danzo's involvement and giving her the evidence she needs to begin mobilizing against him more actively. ]]

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** [[spoiler [[spoiler: The armored doll that Naruto gets for Edward.]]
** [[spoiler [[spoiler: The note on Hinata's medical chart. The detail that the the charts and papers are kept on a clipboard hooked to the end of a patient's hospital bed is noted as far back as chapter 13. In chapter 18 such a clipboard is used by Hinata and Pride to communicate in writing when Pride interrogates her after she's lost her tounge encountering Truth. Rather than confirm Konoha and Pride's assumption that Ed has been taken to the Village Hidden in the Sound, she sends Pride after Danzo. The message that Hinata writes resurfaces again when the Leaf Village investigates Hinata's disappearance; Tipping off Tsunade about Danzo's involvement and giving her the evidence she needs to begin mobilizing against him more actively. ]]
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** [[spoiler The armored doll that Naruto gets for Edward.]]
** [[spoiler The note on Hinata's medical chart. The detail that the the charts and papers are kept on a clipboard hooked to the end of a patient's hospital bed is noted as far back as chapter 13. In chapter 18 such a clipboard is used by Hinata and Pride to communicate in writing when Pride interrogates her after she's lost her tounge encountering Truth. Rather than confirm Konoha and Pride's assumption that Ed has been taken to the Village Hidden in the Sound, she sends Pride after Danzo. The message that Hinata writes resurfaces again when the Leaf Village investigates Hinata's disappearance; Tipping off Tsunade about Danzo's involvement and giving her the evidence she needs to begin mobilizing against him more actively. ]]


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* DisabledSnarker: Ed is the obvious example. In their discussion of Lee's own injury and potential disabliliry Ed notes that Lee doesn't nearly have the necessary sass to qualify for that position.
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* ClosedCircle: [[spoiler:Ed can't just walk away from Konoha and get the hell away from all other ninja madness because, to show Tsunade how much Danzo cares about her decision to give Ed DiplomaticImpunity (read: jack shit), ROOT places a Caged Bird Seal on Ed that will give him borderline-fatal levels of pain if he so much as gets close to the town's limits, let alone tries to cross them. When Tsunade confronts Danzo about it, he just (rather smugly) tells her that he was able to convince everybody else that Ed was a WildCard too dangerous to allow to leave for the good of Konoha.]]

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* ClosedCircle: [[spoiler:Ed can't just walk away from Konoha and get the hell away from all other the ninja madness because, to show Tsunade how much Danzo cares about her decision to give Ed DiplomaticImpunity (read: jack shit), ROOT places a Caged Bird Seal on Ed that will give him borderline-fatal levels of pain if he so much as gets close to the town's limits, let alone tries to cross them. When Tsunade confronts Danzo about it, he just (rather smugly) tells her that he was able to convince everybody else that Ed was a WildCard too dangerous to allow to leave for the good of Konoha.]]
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* ClosedCircle: [[spoiler:Ed can't just walk away from Konoha and get the hell away from ROOT because, to show Tsunade how much they care about her decision to give Ed DiplomaticImpunity (read: jack shit), ROOT places a Caged Bird Seal on him that will give him borderline-fatal levels of pain if he so much as gets close to the town's limits, let alone tries to cross them. When Tsunade confronts Danzo about it, he just (and rather smugly) tells her that he was able to convince everybody else that Ed was a WildCard too dangerous to allow to leave.]]

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* ClosedCircle: [[spoiler:Ed can't just walk away from Konoha and get the hell away from ROOT all other ninja madness because, to show Tsunade how much they care Danzo cares about her decision to give Ed DiplomaticImpunity (read: jack shit), ROOT places a Caged Bird Seal on him Ed that will give him borderline-fatal levels of pain if he so much as gets close to the town's limits, let alone tries to cross them. When Tsunade confronts Danzo about it, he just (and rather (rather smugly) tells her that he was able to convince everybody else that Ed was a WildCard too dangerous to allow to leave.leave for the good of Konoha.]]

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* ClosedCircle: [[spoiler:Ed can't just walk away from Konoha and get the hell away from ROOT because, to show Tsunade how much they care about her decision to give Ed DiplomaticImpunity (read: jack shit), ROOT places a Caged Bird Seal on him that will give him borderline-fatal levels of pain if he so much as gets close to the town's limits, let alone tries to cross them. When Tsunade confronts Danzo about it, he just (and rather smugly) tells her that he was able to convince everybody else that Ed was a WildCard too dangerous to allow to leave.]]



* SymbolSwearing: [[WordofGod Used to avoid bumping the rating up from T to M over language.]]
* SympatheticInspectorAntagonist

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* SymbolSwearing: [[WordofGod Used to avoid bumping the rating up from T to M over language.]]
]] Ed's got quite the potty mouth, and he ain't alone.
* SympatheticInspectorAntagonistSympatheticInspectorAntagonist: Konoha T&I, and the other Ninja. Some are JustFollowingOrders, the others believe that whatever they can learn from Ed would be of usefulness in the future (Mr. Elric having pretty much showcased himself to be a pretty powerful WildCard), and a few are just annoyed that Ed has humiliated them repeatedly with his acts of defiance-slash-mass destruction. Danzo tosses the "sympathetic" part out the window [[EstablishingCharacterMoment from his first second on screen]] and never looks back.



* [[spoiler: ThereIsAnother: The "Al Doll" would indicate such. However, exactly who sent it is a mystery, and while Ed initially takes this as a sign that his brother is alive and searching for him, his conversation with the shinigami has led him to believe otherwise. The question of whether it is intended as a [[TheLastManHeardAKnock message]] or as a trap has yet to be answered.]]

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* [[spoiler: ThereIsAnother: The [[spoiler:The "Al Doll" would indicate such. However, exactly who sent it is a mystery, and while Ed initially takes this as a sign that his brother is alive and searching for him, his conversation with the shinigami has led him to believe otherwise. The question of whether it is intended as a [[TheLastManHeardAKnock message]] or as a trap has yet to be answered.]]
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Edward Elric of ''Manga/FullmetalAlchemist'' is somehow dropped into the world of ''{{Naruto}}'' like a rock into a pond and tries to cope with it, with hysterical results. The fic starts in the "Search For Tsunade" {{story arc}}, and almost immediately during the encounter with Naruto and two Akatsuki members, Itachi and Kisame. After that, Edward is promptly arrested and sent to the Interrogation Department, where HilarityEnsues.

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Edward Elric of ''Manga/FullmetalAlchemist'' is somehow dropped into the world of ''{{Naruto}}'' ''Manga/{{Naruto}}'' like a rock into a pond and tries to cope with it, with hysterical results. The fic starts in the "Search For Tsunade" {{story arc}}, and almost immediately during the encounter with Naruto and two Akatsuki members, Itachi and Kisame. After that, Edward is promptly arrested and sent to the Interrogation Department, where HilarityEnsues.



** He also gets Naruto start thinking more carefully when he teaches him not to wave his cash filled wallet around. As a result, Naruto’s money isn’t taken off him and spent by Jiraiya at the festival, the way it was in {{Naruto}} canon. Instead, Naruto spends his money at a ringtoss game, where he tries to win something ''"cool"'' for Ed. [[spoiler: [[ChekhovsGun The prize Naruto ends up winning at the ringtoss is far more pertinent to the plot than the narration initially lets on.]] ]]

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** He also gets Naruto start thinking more carefully when he teaches him not to wave his cash filled wallet around. As a result, Naruto’s money isn’t taken off him and spent by Jiraiya at the festival, the way it was in {{Naruto}} ''Manga/{{Naruto}}'' canon. Instead, Naruto spends his money at a ringtoss game, where he tries to win something ''"cool"'' for Ed. [[spoiler: [[ChekhovsGun The prize Naruto ends up winning at the ringtoss is far more pertinent to the plot than the narration initially lets on.]] ]]
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* CreepyChild: Gaara. Despite him no longer being the AxCrazy SerialKiller he was during the Chunnin Exams. With his HeelFaceTurn being as recent as it is, his siblings are still noticeably wary of him. Something like cannibalism is seen a welcome subject change ''out'' of awkward conversational territory to him, and he doesn't seem to realize that others might feel otherwise.
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*NoSocialSkills: ''Gaara.'' He's still trying working out how to interact with others post HeelFaceTurn. Now that he's no longer just sand-coffin-ing everyone he dislikes, he's having to learn the ins and outs of social niceties all over again. And it's ''hilarious''.
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* WorldOfSnark

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* WorldOfSnarkWorldOfSnark: The whole story is chalk full of smart and snappy dialogue.
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* SymbolSwearing: [[WordofGod Used to avoid bumping the rating up from T to M just over language. Later on as the story became darker, it was debated by reviewers whether the story deserved an M rating on it's own merits, but it was ultimately decided that

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* SymbolSwearing: [[WordofGod Used to avoid bumping the rating up from T to M just over language. Later on as the story became darker, it was debated by reviewers whether the story deserved an M rating on it's own merits, but it was ultimately decided that language.]]
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* EvilDetectingDog: The dog at the vet's is "[[LivingLieDetector very good at sniffing out lies,]]" and interrogates Ed when he brings in an injured Nin-bird.

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* EvilDetectingDog: The dog at the vet's is "[[LivingLieDetector very good at sniffing out lies,]]" and interrogates Ed when he brings in an injured Nin-bird. Fortunately for Ed, it's less good at sniffing out which true admissions have been misconstrued.



** While not really a original body part, Konoha researchers borrowed [[ArtificialLimbs Ed's automail arm]] without permission, and aren't particularly keen on returning it. Not entirely surprising given the prevalence of, and the attitudes toward this trope regarding actual organs in Naruto cannon.

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** While not really a original body part, Konoha researchers borrowed [[ArtificialLimbs Ed's automail arm]] without permission, and aren't particularly keen on returning it. Not entirely surprising given the prevalence of, and the attitudes toward this trope regarding actual organs in Naruto cannon.canon.



* ReasonableAuthorityFigure: Jiraiya and Tsunade.

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* ReasonableAuthorityFigure: Jiraiya and Tsunade. Gai too, [[LargeHam in his own way.]]



* SymbolSwearing

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** Edward's ''third'' attempt at pulling this is similarly unsuccessful. Ed pretends to take a shower and while the water is running he tries to escape out the window. He is caught almost immediately, but pretends to be offended that they would watch him in the shower. Neji points out that he ''wasn't'' in the shower, but continuing in such escape attempts is a great way to end up being supervised in the bathroom. [[ArsonMurderandJaywalking Also, he should stop wasting water.]]

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** Edward's ''third'' attempt at pulling this is similarly unsuccessful. Ed pretends to take a shower and while the water is running he tries to escape out the window. He is caught almost immediately, but pretends to be offended that they would watch him in the shower. Neji points out that he ''wasn't'' in the shower, but continuing in such escape attempts is a great way to end up being supervised in the bathroom. [[ArsonMurderandJaywalking Also, he should stop wasting water.]]
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** Edward's ''third'' attempt at pulling this is similarly unsuccessful. Ed pretends to take a shower, and while the water is running, tries to escape out the window. He is caught almost immediately but pretends to be offended that they would be watching him in the shower. Neji points out that he ''wasn't'' in the shower, but continuing in such escape attempts is a good way to end up being supervised in the bathroom. [[ArsonMurderandJaywalking It's also a waste of water.]]

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** Edward's ''third'' attempt at pulling this is similarly unsuccessful. Ed pretends to take a shower, shower and while the water is running, running he tries to escape out the window. He is caught almost immediately immediately, but pretends to be offended that they would be watching watch him in the shower. Neji points out that he ''wasn't'' in the shower, but continuing in such escape attempts is a good great way to end up being supervised in the bathroom. [[ArsonMurderandJaywalking It's also a waste of Also, he should stop wasting water.]]
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** Edward's ''third'' attempt at pulling this is similarly unsuccessful. Ed pretends to take a shower and while the water is running, tries to escape out the window. He is caught almost immediately but pretends to be offended that they would watch him in the shower. Neji points out that he wasn't in the shower, but if Ed wants to be supervised in the bathroom he should continue this behavior. [[ArsonMurderandJaywalking And Tenten takes issue with the waste of water.]]

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** Edward's ''third'' attempt at pulling this is similarly unsuccessful. Ed pretends to take a shower shower, and while the water is running, tries to escape out the window. He is caught almost immediately but pretends to be offended that they would watch be watching him in the shower. Neji points out that he wasn't ''wasn't'' in the shower, but if Ed wants continuing in such escape attempts is a good way to be end up being supervised in the bathroom he should continue this behavior. bathroom. [[ArsonMurderandJaywalking And Tenten takes issue with the It's also a waste of water.]]

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** [[SubvertedTrope Edward's second attempt is less successful.]] Ed pretends to take a shower and while the water is running, tries to escape out the window. He is caught almost immediately but pretends to be offended that they would watch him in the shower. Neji points out that he wasn't in the shower, but if Ed wants to be supervised in the bathroom he should continue this behavior. [[ArsonMurderandJaywalking Also he should stop wasting water.]]

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** [[SubvertedTrope Edward's second attempt invoking this trope is less successful.]] Thanks to Shino's bugs.
**Edward's ''third'' attempt at pulling this is similarly unsuccessful.
Ed pretends to take a shower and while the water is running, tries to escape out the window. He is caught almost immediately but pretends to be offended that they would watch him in the shower. Neji points out that he wasn't in the shower, but if Ed wants to be supervised in the bathroom he should continue this behavior. [[ArsonMurderandJaywalking Also he should stop wasting And Tenten takes issue with the waste of water.]]
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** He also gets Naruto start thinking more carefully when he teaches him not to wave his cash filled wallet around.

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** He also gets Naruto start thinking more carefully when he teaches him not to wave his cash filled wallet around. As a result, Naruto’s money isn’t taken off him and spent by Jiraiya at the festival, the way it was in {{Naruto}} canon. Instead, Naruto spends his money at a ringtoss game, where he tries to win something ''"cool"'' for Ed. [[spoiler: [[ChekhovsGun The prize Naruto ends up winning at the ringtoss is far more pertinent to the plot than the narration initially lets on.]] ]]
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** [[spoiler: Edward and Tayuya are seemingly on their way to becoming this. Or at the very least, FriendlyEnemies. The two of them end up in adjoining cells of a Root stronghold--presumably, to intimidate them with the sound of the other screaming. [[BirdsOfAFeather Instead, Tayuya and Ed discover a kindred spirit in their former enemy;]] And in the midst of being tortured, the they find themselves forging a FriendlyRivalry and [[VitriolicBestBuds sense of camaraderie]] with each other. Their proximity to each other ends up building their resistance, rather than tearing it down. ]]

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** [[spoiler: Edward and Tayuya are seemingly on their way to becoming this. Or at the very least, FriendlyEnemies. The two of them end up in adjoining cells of a Root stronghold--presumably, to intimidate them with the sound of the other screaming. Instead, [[BirdsOfAFeather Instead, Tayuya and Ed discover a kindred spirit in their former enemy;]] And in enemy.]] In the midst of being tortured, the tortured [[VolleyingInsults (and trash talking each other)]], they find themselves forging a FriendlyRivalry and [[VitriolicBestBuds sense of camaraderie]] with each other. Their camaraderie.]] Due to their budding... [[OddFriendship unconventional]] friendship, Ed and Tayuya's proximity to each other ends up building ''bolstering'' their resistance, rather than tearing it down. ]]
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** [[spoiler: Edward and Tayuya are seemingly on their way to becoming this. Or at the very least, FriendlyEnemies. The two of them end up in adjoining cells of a Root stronghold--presumably, to intimidate the both of them with the sound of the other screaming. [[BirdsOfAFeather Instead, Tayuya and Ed discover a kindred spirit in their former enemy;]] And in the midst of being tortured, the they find themselves forging a FriendlyRivalry and [[VitriolicBestBuds sense of camaraderie]] with each other. So their proximity to each other ends up building their resistance, rather than tearing it down. ]]

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** [[spoiler: Edward and Tayuya are seemingly on their way to becoming this. Or at the very least, FriendlyEnemies. The two of them end up in adjoining cells of a Root stronghold--presumably, to intimidate the both of them with the sound of the other screaming. [[BirdsOfAFeather Instead, Tayuya and Ed discover a kindred spirit in their former enemy;]] And in the midst of being tortured, the they find themselves forging a FriendlyRivalry and [[VitriolicBestBuds sense of camaraderie]] with each other. So their Their proximity to each other ends up building their resistance, rather than tearing it down. ]]
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** [[spoiler: Edward and Tayuya are seemingly on their way to becoming this. Or at the very least, FriendlyEnemies. The two of them end up in adjoining cells of a Root stronghold--presumably, to intimidate the both of them with the sound of the other screaming. [[BirdsOfAFeather Instead, Tayuya and Ed discover a kindred spirit in their former enemy;]] And in the midst of being tortured, the they find themselves forging a FriendlyRivalry and [[VitriolicBestBuds sense of camaraderie]] with each other. So their proximity to each other ends up building their resistance, rather than tearing it down. ]]
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* InspectorJavertInspectorJavert: Ibiki, because Ed simply refuses to break and humiliates him constantly by breaking out and causing chaos all over Konoha because he refuses to be captured again. Played with by Danzo because him playing this card is so he can have easy access to Ed's secrets (most importantly to him the knowledge of how to use Alchemy) if and when Ed tells them all.
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** Ino (with some [[StopHelpingMe "help" from Naruto]]) also tries to charm Edward for information to pass on to Sasuke. She hasn't improved from when she tried to seduce Neji during the Chunin exams and the whole thing becomes awkward very quickly.

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** Ino (with some [[StopHelpingMe [[UnwantedAssistance "help" from Naruto]]) also tries to charm Edward for information to pass on to Sasuke. She hasn't improved from when she tried to seduce Neji during the Chunin exams and the whole thing becomes awkward very quickly.
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* TheSpook: Edward himself, from Konoha's perspective anyway. [[OutsideContextVillain No one knows what he is, where he is from, or what he is capable of.]] It doesn't help that Konoha is feeling very vulnerable and is still unorganized and undermanned after Orochimaru's invasion.

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* TheSpook: Edward himself, from Konoha's perspective anyway. [[OutsideContextVillain [[OutsideContextProblem No one knows what he is, where he is from, or what he is capable of.]] It doesn't help that Konoha is feeling very vulnerable and is still unorganized and undermanned after Orochimaru's invasion.
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* EyeScream: Ed's use of flame alchemy not only left Sasuke with an embarrassing case of artificial sunburn, the explosion also left him temporarily blind.

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* EyeScream: Ed's use of flame alchemy not only left Sasuke with an embarrassing case of artificial sunburn, the explosion also left him [[DownplayedTrope temporarily blind.]]

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