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The authors have stated this will be the title of the third book. They plan on having it begin late 2015 and early 2016, and it will most likely conclude in mid-2016 if they continue publishing on a weekly basis.
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Publication for Book One began on January 1st, 2015 and is set to conclude during May 2015 with a total of nineteen chapters.
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{{Book One - Healing}}
After living with the Red Lotus for fourteen years, Korra never forgot about her meeting with Asami Sato and what she said about Republic City. After eventually receiving a brief vision of Aang, Korra decides to runaway from the Red Lotus compound to find this Republic City, so she can locate Asami Sato and Aang. Shortly after her arrival in Republic City, Korra has encounters with people that will forever change her life.
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After living with the Red Lotus for fourteen years, Korra never forgot about her meeting with Asami Sato and what she said about Republic City. After eventually receiving a brief vision of Aang, Korra decides to runaway from the Red Lotus compound to find this Republic City, so she can locate Asami Sato and Aang. Shortly after her arrival in Republic City, Korra has encounters with people that will forever change her life.
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* CombatPragmatist: The fighting ideology that Zaheer promotes, Korra is initially opposed to the practice as a child but by the time she is an adult she also practices it. [[spoiler: Asami later realizes that she won't be able to defeat Zaheer in a fair fight so she also adopt this approach.]]
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* CombatPragmatist: The fighting ideology that Zaheer promotes, Korra is initially opposed to the practice as a child but by the time she is an adult she also practices it. [[spoiler: Asami later realizes that she won't be able to defeat Zaheer in a fair fight so she also adopt adopts this approach.]]
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* CombatPragmatist: The fighting ideology that Zaheer promotes, Korra is initially opposed to the practice as a child but by the time she is an adult she also practices it. [[spoiler: Asami later realizes that she won't be able to defeat Zaheer in a fair fight so she also adopt this approach.]]
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* GoodIsNotSoft: Team Avatar has this approach.
** [[spoiler:Mako]] is willing to resort to torture via firebending to obtain information if it'sneeded.needed.
** [[spoiler: Asami, who was initially opposed to the trope becomes a CombatPragmatist to better fight against Zaheer.]]
** [[spoiler: Korra and her friends are willing to use lethal force against the Red Lotus in the final battle. Korra in particular kills P'Li and Ghazan.]]
* [[HoistByHisOwnPetard Hoist By Their Own Petard]]: [[spoiler: The overall fate of the Red Lotus, their teachings have made Korra an extremely skilled and powerful fighter. During the final fight, Korra uses her teacher's own techniques against them in order to defeat them.]]
** [[spoiler:Mako]] is willing to resort to torture via firebending to obtain information if it's
** [[spoiler: Asami, who was initially opposed to the trope becomes a CombatPragmatist to better fight against Zaheer.]]
** [[spoiler: Korra and her friends are willing to use lethal force against the Red Lotus in the final battle. Korra in particular kills P'Li and Ghazan.]]
* [[HoistByHisOwnPetard Hoist By Their Own Petard]]: [[spoiler: The overall fate of the Red Lotus, their teachings have made Korra an extremely skilled and powerful fighter. During the final fight, Korra uses her teacher's own techniques against them in order to defeat them.]]
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For the second time in two centuries, the Avatar is lost, their fate unknown. Asami Sato realizes a girl she met years before in the far North might be the person the world needs, and a young woman named Korra begins to rebel against her guardians; the Red Lotus. The fic intends to explore areas that the canon left open, and has several changes, the most obvious being that Korra was captured by the Red Lotus when she was five three years old.
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For the second time in two centuries, the Avatar is lost, their fate unknown. Asami Sato realizes a girl she met years before in the far North might be the person the world needs, and a young woman named Korra begins to rebel against her guardians; the Red Lotus. The fic intends to explore areas that the canon left open, and has several changes, the most obvious being that Korra was captured by the Red Lotus when she was three five years old.
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** Unalaq apparently has AdaptationalHeroism.
** Kya joined the United Forces and is now a General.
** Mako and Bolin both still worked for the Triads when the main story started.
** Unalaq apparently has AdaptationalHeroism.
** Kya joined the United Forces and is now a General.
** Mako and Bolin both still worked for the Triads when the main story started.
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* TheCaligula: The Earth Queen in the story is perhaps even more of a tyrant than in canon. Refugees flee from her regime in the Earth Kingdom in droves, and the economies of the other nations are stretched thin trying to accomodate them.
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For the second time in two centuries, the Avatar is lost, their fate unknown. Asami Sato realizes a girl she met years before in the far North might be the person the world needs, and a young woman named Korra begins to rebel against her guardians; the Red Lotus. The fic intends to explore areas that the canon left open, and has several changes, the most obvious being that Korra was captured by the Red Lotus when she was 4.
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* AdultFear: Tonraq and Senna go through this ever since Korra was kidnapped. [[spoiler:Eventually, the Red Lotus use this to their advantage to get Tonraq and Senna to willingly become their prisoners during Chapter Sixteen by promising they would have a chance to see their daughter again.]]
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* TokenGoodTeammate: Ghazan is the nicest of the Lotus members towards Korra, befitting with his canon status. [[spoiler: Not that it stops him from trying to kill her on Zaheer's orders.]]
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* AdaptationalBadass: Confirmed by the author that Korra's training by the Red Lotus has made her more dangerous than she is in canon. Korra is also able to [[spoiler: air-bend]] quite sooner than she can in canon. Her first pro-bending match is also a CurbStompBattle instead of initially struggling with the sport.canon.
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* DarkerAndEdgier: Throughout the course of the story the reader learns of what a CrapsackWorld this fic takes place in. Also shown with the characters, the Red Lotus have already crossed the MoralEventHorizon by assassinating several royal heirs and kidnapping Korra as a child, eventually the heroes adopt a GoodIsNotSoft approach to problems.
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* CurbStompBattle: There are a few in the story. Perhaps most notable is that anyone who tries to fight Korra, and is not one of her Red Lotus mentors, tends to end up on the receiving end of this.
* DarkerAndEdgier: Throughout the course of the story the reader learns of what a CrapsackWorld this fic takes place in. Also shown with the characters, the Red Lotus have already crossed the MoralEventHorizon by assassinating several royal heirs and kidnapping Korra as a child,eventually the heroes adopt also have a GoodIsNotSoft approach to problems.
* DarkerAndEdgier: Throughout the course of the story the reader learns of what a CrapsackWorld this fic takes place in. Also shown with the characters, the Red Lotus have already crossed the MoralEventHorizon by assassinating several royal heirs and kidnapping Korra as a child,
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* TokenGoodTeammate: Ghazan is the nicest of the Lotus members towards Korra, befitting with his canon status. [[spoiler: Not that it stops him from trying to kill her on Zaheer's orders.]]
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* AdaptationalBadass: Confirmed by the author that Korra's training by the Red Lotus has made her more dangerous than she is in canon. Korra is also able to [[spoiler: air-bend]] quite sooner than her canon counterpart.she can in canon. Her first pro-bending match is also a CurbStompBattle instead of initially struggling with the sport.
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* SadistTeacher: Ming Hua is this, but she uses [[BoomHeadshot the nearby otter-penguins]] instead of Korra...
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* BadassFamily: The Fire Nation Royal Family, including BadassGrandpa when the elderly Zuko, Azula, and Mai along with Izumi and Iroh deliver a CurbStompBattle to the Red Lotus when they attempt to assassinate Iroh.
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* CrazyPrepared: Zaheer, this is even lampshaded by Ming Hua.
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* GoodIsNotSoft: [[spoiler:Mako]] is willing to resort to torture via firebending to obtain information if it's needed.
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The fic can be found [[http://archiveofourown.org/works/3086882/chapters/6690701 here]] or [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10939076/1/The-Saga-of-Avatar-Korra here]].
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The fic can be found [[http://archiveofourown.org/works/3086882/chapters/6690701 here]] or [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10939076/1/The-Saga-of-Avatar-Korra here]].here]].
* EvenEvilHasStandards: The Red Lotus kidnapped a great deal of children to search for the Avatar. When they left, the kids had blankets and supplies for several more days.
* ForWantOfANail: While the biggest change is that Korra was kidnapped, there are apparently several other "nails" that have yet to appear.
* InSpiteOfANail: Korra still runs away from her guardians and has [[AnimalCompanion Naga.]]
* NotSoDifferent: P'li has an attack of this briefly when she realizes the Red Lotus was acting very similarly to the warlord that captured her as a child, but rationalizes it.
* SadistTeacher: Ming Hua is this, but she uses [[BoomHeadshot the nearby otter-penguins]] instead of Korra...
* SpiritAdvisor: Aang is trying to do this, but he has yet to truly connect to Korra.
* TokenGoodTeammate: Ghazan is the nicest of the Lotus members towards Korra, befitting with his canon status.
* TykeBomb: The Red Lotus intended to do this to Korra. It wasn't (entirely) successful.
* EvenEvilHasStandards: The Red Lotus kidnapped a great deal of children to search for the Avatar. When they left, the kids had blankets and supplies for several more days.
* ForWantOfANail: While the biggest change is that Korra was kidnapped, there are apparently several other "nails" that have yet to appear.
* InSpiteOfANail: Korra still runs away from her guardians and has [[AnimalCompanion Naga.]]
* NotSoDifferent: P'li has an attack of this briefly when she realizes the Red Lotus was acting very similarly to the warlord that captured her as a child, but rationalizes it.
* SadistTeacher: Ming Hua is this, but she uses [[BoomHeadshot the nearby otter-penguins]] instead of Korra...
* SpiritAdvisor: Aang is trying to do this, but he has yet to truly connect to Korra.
* TokenGoodTeammate: Ghazan is the nicest of the Lotus members towards Korra, befitting with his canon status.
* TykeBomb: The Red Lotus intended to do this to Korra. It wasn't (entirely) successful.
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For the second time in two centuries, the Avatar is lost, their fate unknown. Asami Sato realizes a girl she met years before in the far North might be the person the world needs, and a young woman named Korra begins to rebel against her guardians; the Red Lotus. The fic intends to explore areas that the canon left open, and has several changes, the most obvious being that Korra was captured by the Red Lotus when she was 4.
The fic is a collaboration between Puffie/Danseru_Kun for story building, and Sanctum_C for editing.
The fic can be found [[http://archiveofourown.org/works/3086882/chapters/6690701 here]] or [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10939076/1/The-Saga-of-Avatar-Korra here]].
The fic is a collaboration between Puffie/Danseru_Kun for story building, and Sanctum_C for editing.
The fic can be found [[http://archiveofourown.org/works/3086882/chapters/6690701 here]] or [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10939076/1/The-Saga-of-Avatar-Korra here]].
