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* AnAxToGrind: Granny Smith wields an enchanted hoofaxe called ''Aconitum''.


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** Norric can [[ShoutOut/ToShakespeare quote Shakesmare]] from memory.


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** Played straight with Pupa. She allies with Applejack's group to stop Chrysalis' invasion of Gildesdale, with the promise of then allying against Cetus.


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* FusionDance: The Pegasus Pilgrim and the Changeling Pupa were fused together by Pupa's sister Cocoon to save both of them.


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* GiantMook: Behemoth-type Changelings.


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* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: Applejack nearly slips into a HeroicBSOD the first time she kills, and Granny has to talk her down.
* MySpeciesDothProtestTooMuch: Pupa believes that Changelings and ponies can live in peace.


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** How Applejack kills the Behemoth Changeling Veraxi.


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** Applejack's group visits the town of [[Series/DoctorWho Gallopfrey, whose ecology causes red grass and silver-leafed trees]].


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* ThemeNaming: Chrysalis' sisters are named Cocoon and Pupa.


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** Granny agrees.
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* TheLancer: Scorpio to Libra, Piro to Blair.


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** TheLancer
** SarcasticDevotee
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* ThePowerOfCreation: One of the Element of Generosity's abilities to create anything from thought.
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** Thanks to various conversations between the Guards and their thoughts when the story's from their POV, by the time their true nature and DarkSecret is revealed early on in Act 2, the more attentive readers are probably capable to piecing it all together already.



* KnightOfCerebus: There was always hints at a darker plot, right from the beginning, but for a time it's hidden under the fairly light events of the story. Then, just as we find out the Guards' backstory and true purpose, Cetus shows up and things go to Hell.

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* KnightOfCerebus: There was always hints at a darker plot, right from the beginning, but for a time most of Act 1 it's hidden under the fairly light events of the story. Then, early on in Act 2, just as we find out the Guards' backstory and true purpose, Cetus shows up and things go to Hell.


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* ShootTheDog: When Cetus first reveals herself, Luna and Shining Armor try to kill her, despite the fact that [[spoiler: she's possessing Rarity]]. Shining actually points out that everyone else will be upset with them, but Luna views it as a necessary evil.
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* BigWhat: There's a joint one from the other girls when Twilight tells them about the Guards being assigned. All together, it's loud enough to knock her back into a wall.

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* BigWhat: There's a joint one from the other girls when Twilight tells them about the Guards being assigned. All together, it's loud enough to knock her back into a wall.


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* GaleForceSound: The BigWhat listed above is strong enough to send Twilight flying into a wall.
** When Ras is delivering Ophiuchus' WhatTheHellHero speech to Vigil, it blows back his mane and tail.
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* DarkestHour: Starting in Chapter 22 and cemented in Chapter 23. [[spoiler: Cetus defeats Celestia, seals her essence in the sun, and takes her body, while Nightmare Moon/Eclipse is extracted from Luna and placed into Rarity. Between the two of them, they kill Elo, Grovi, and Strauss, while curbstomping the other Echoes and Mane Six. Then Luna has to scatter them and their few other allies across the world to keep them safe until the time is right.]]

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* DarkestHour: Starting in Chapter 22 21, gets worse in Chapter 22, and cemented in Chapter 23. [[spoiler: Cetus defeats Celestia, seals her essence in the sun, and takes her body, while Nightmare Moon/Eclipse is extracted from Luna and placed into Rarity. Between the two of them, they kill Elo, Grovi, and Strauss, while curbstomping the other Echoes and Mane Six. Then Luna has to scatter them and their few other allies across the world to keep them safe until the time is right.]]



* DemolitionsExpert: Capricorn and Norric.



* JerkassFacade: Twilight comes to this conclusion about Scorpio and Piro -- they act like bitter cynics to hide how hurt they are by everything they've been through.



* TheLancer: Scorpio to Libra, Piro to Blair.



** Norric grew up in [[FanFic/ItsADangerousBusinessGoingOutYourDoor Glidesdale]].

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** Norric grew up in [[FanFic/ItsADangerousBusinessGoingOutYourDoor Glidesdale]].Gildesdale]].



** And those chapters were immediately preceded by Chapter 21, in which we first find out that Cetus is [[spoiler: possessing Rarity]].

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** And those chapters were immediately preceded by Chapter 21, 20, in which we first find out that Cetus is [[spoiler: possessing Rarity]].
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* WarIsHell: Universally agreed upon by the members of the Order.
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** Most of the Guards qualify as well, to varying degrees.



-->“I suppose we can do this your way, little clone,” Zemblani said. "Prepare to meet 'thy' doom!"
-->“Dark and sinister mare,” Elo answered. “Have at thee.”

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-->“I --->“I suppose we can do this your way, [[spoiler: little clone,” clone]],” Zemblani said. "Prepare to meet 'thy' doom!"
-->“Dark --->“Dark and sinister mare,” Elo answered. “Have at thee.
*** Speaking of Elo, he was the result of an affair between members of rival families [[Theatre/RomeoAndJuliet Mont'hequ and Gallopulet]].
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* NamedWeapons: Used for weapons of a magical nature. Most of them have some kind of association with their respective owners.

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* NamedWeapons: Used for weapons of a magical nature. Most of them have some kind of association with their respective owners.

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* DualWielding: Tendoncutter [[spoiler: both past and present]] wield the Cardinal Blades, a quartet of longswords that he keeps on him at all times. He uses a spell to keep the concealed most of the time.
** Luna/Nightmare Moon fight with ''Perigee'' and ''Apogee,'' a very powerful pair of enchanted short swords.

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* DualWielding: Tendoncutter [[spoiler: both past and present]] wield with the Cardinal Blades, a quartet of longswords that he keeps on him at all times. He uses a spell to keep the concealed most of the time.
although it's technically quad-wielding.
** Luna/Nightmare Moon fight with ''Perigee'' and ''Apogee,'' a very powerful pair of enchanted short swords.''Apogee.''


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* NamedWeapons: Used for weapons of a magical nature. Most of them have some kind of association with their respective owners.
** Celestia's ''Nova,'' Luna's ''Perigee'' and ''Apogee,'' Tendoncutter's ''Cardinal Blades,'' Granny's ''Aconitum.''
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* DualWielding: Cancer and Ace are proficient with up to ''four'' blades with their telekinesis.
** Luna/Nightmare Moon also fight with ''Perigee'' and ''Apogee,'' and pair of enchanted short swords.

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* DualWielding: Cancer Tendoncutter [[spoiler: both past and Ace are proficient with up present]] wield the Cardinal Blades, a quartet of longswords that he keeps on him at all times. He uses a spell to ''four'' blades with their telekinesis.
keep the concealed most of the time.
** Luna/Nightmare Moon also fight with ''Perigee'' and ''Apogee,'' and a very powerful pair of enchanted short swords.
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** During the War of the Sun and Moon, whenever Luna/Nightmare Moon had to resort to physical combat, she fought with a pair of enchanted blades.

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** During the War of the Sun and Moon, whenever Luna/Nightmare Moon had to resort to physical combat, she fought also fight with a ''Perigee'' and ''Apogee,'' and pair of enchanted blades.short swords.
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* {{Unobtainium}}: There's constant reference to Lunarium, a magical metal that's implied to be ''very'' strong.

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* {{Unobtainium}}: There's constant reference to Lunarium, a the magical metal that's of the moon itself. It's implied to be ''very'' strong.
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* CoolBigSis: In addition to Applejack and Rarity to Applebloom and Sweetie Belle, Rainbow Dash acts like this to Fluttershy (them having been raised together). Her one real interaction with Spike also has her kind of acting the same way with him.


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* OneDegreeOfSeparation: Rarity comments at one point how growing up in a small town like Ponyville means everyone pretty much knows everyone else through at least one other pony.
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** During the War of the Sun and Moon, whenever Luna/Nightmare Moon had to resort to physical combat, she fought with a pair of enchanted blades.


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* [[HumanoidAbomination Equineoid Abomination]]: What Nightmare Moon's corruption of the UndyingLoyalty ability turned her army into -- only vaguely pony-like creatures, completely mindless and with ResurrectiveImmortality.
** Cetus and Eclipse also qualify.


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* {{Unobtainium}}: There's constant reference to Lunarium, a magical metal that's implied to be ''very'' strong.
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** Both [[spoiler: Harmony and Discord]] also have multiple names.
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** Heck, the only reason she became Zecora's apprentice in the first place was to learn how to help the sick.


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* MagicMusic: Hinted to be part of Pinkie's third Element power.
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* AncientTradition: Of a sort. After the War of the Sun and Moon, Aries wanted to use his boon from the Princess to acquire the Symbol of Loyalty as his clan's crest. Celestia refused on the grounds of wanting the Symbols of the Elements to be lost to history, but Aries still memorized the Symbol, and his descendants have passed it down in secret ever since. One of them, after some debate, gives it to Twilight for her thesis spell.


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** Megnii [[spoiler: (actually Gemini)]] had this for his brother Cyclone, due to Cyclone being a sickly and weak foal. Then Cyclone had a growth spurt and bulked up in their teenage years, and eventually convinced Megnii he didn't need his protection anymore; Megnii then entered the military to redirect his protective desires to the country as a whole.


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* HumblePie: Rainbow Dash is convinced for a time that her Guards can't protect her if they can't keep up with her, so puts them through TrainingFromHell to improve their speed. Esra finally gets fed up with this and challenges her to a combat match, which he wins, proving that in an actual fight, he ''can'' protect her. This knocks Dash down a few pegs.
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* MaleGaze: When Esra and Tastar first meet Fluttershy, they can't stop staring at her wings.

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* MaleGaze: When Esra and Tastar first meet see Fluttershy, they can't stop staring at her wings.
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* IHaveManyNames: Blair casually mentions at one point that Celestia (and presumably Luna as well) is known by other names and titles by other cultures.


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* JawDrop: Several throughout the story. It seems to be the author's favorite way of having characters express shock and surprise.


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* MaleGaze: When Esra and Tastar first meet Fluttershy, they can't stop staring at her wings.
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** Pinkie and Applejack have known each other since foalhood, due their grandmothers having ''also'' been friends since foalhood.

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** Pinkie and Applejack have known each other since foalhood, due to their grandmothers having ''also'' been friends since foalhood.
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** Pinkie and Applejack have known each other since foalhood, due their grandmothers having ''also'' been friends since foalhood.
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* NeckSnap: Eclipse breaks [[spoiler: Granny Smith]]'s neck. Fortunately, Applejack is able to use her "Rejection of Fate" ability to rewind time a few minutes and save her.

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* NeckSnap: Eclipse breaks [[spoiler: Granny Smith]]'s neck. Fortunately, Applejack is able to use her "Rejection of Fate" ability to rewind time a few minutes and save her.
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** Zemblani and Elo's pre-duel banter in Chapter 19 reference to the famous exchange between [[Literature/{{PeterPan}} Peter Pan and Captain Hook]]:

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** Zemblani and Elo's pre-duel banter in Chapter 19 reference to references the famous exchange between [[Literature/{{PeterPan}} Peter Pan and Captain Hook]]:
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* BargainWithHeaven: [[spoiler: Rarity's deal with Harmony.]] It's implied Celestia also had such an arrangement, though the details are not yet known.

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* BargainWithHeaven: [[spoiler: Rarity's deal and Celestia's respective deals with Harmony.]] It's implied Celestia also had such an arrangement, though the details are not yet known.]]
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** Zemblani and Elo's pre-duel banter in Chapter 19 includes a reference to the famous exchange between [[Literature/{{PeterPan}}Peter Pan and Captain Hook]]:

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** Zemblani and Elo's pre-duel banter in Chapter 19 includes a reference to the famous exchange between [[Literature/{{PeterPan}}Peter [[Literature/{{PeterPan}} Peter Pan and Captain Hook]]:

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** "Rarity" asks Grovi about an artifact from ''FanFic/TheFlightOfTheAlicorn'' while they're walking into Canterlot Castle in Chapter 21.

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** "Rarity" asks Grovi about an artifact from ''FanFic/TheFlightOfTheAlicorn'' while they're walking into Canterlot Castle in Chapter 21.21, and an airship by the name of 'Fancy Free' is seen from a distance in Chapter 27.



*** Also, an airship with the name 'Fancy Free' is seen in Chapter 27.



** Zemblani and Elo share an exchange that references the famous exchange between [[Literature/{{PeterPan}}Peter Pan and Captain Hook]]:
-->“I suppose we can do this your way, little clone,” Zemblani said. "Prepare to meet 'thy' doom."

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** Zemblani and Elo share an exchange that references Elo's pre-duel banter in Chapter 19 includes a reference to the famous exchange between [[Literature/{{PeterPan}}Peter Pan and Captain Hook]]:
-->“I suppose we can do this your way, little clone,” Zemblani said. "Prepare to meet 'thy' doom."doom!"
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*** Also, an airship with the name 'Fancy Free' is seen in Chapter 27.


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** Zemblani and Elo share an exchange that references the famous exchange between [[Literature/{{PeterPan}}Peter Pan and Captain Hook]]:
-->“I suppose we can do this your way, little clone,” Zemblani said. "Prepare to meet 'thy' doom."
-->“Dark and sinister mare,” Elo answered. “Have at thee.”
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** And of course, there's also Discord.
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* NoMrBondIExpectYouToDine: Played with. Eclipse pulls this on Rarity when [[spoiler: they're sharing a body]], so it's not like Rarity has any choice. Plus, it's not like Eclipse even needs the food herself.

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