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* In chapter two of The Public Life of Sweetie Belle, Diamond Tiara says that Sweetie Belle should be glad that [[spoiler: Rarity is dead]] causing Sweetie Belle to go berserk and she nearly kills her in the assault and it is only called off because Silver Spoon runs to get an authority figure. In chapter seven of Broken Blossom, Diamond Tiara once again does something cruel to Sweetie Belle with the same results: Sweetie Belle begins beating up Diamond Tiara and is only stopped because Silver Spoon ran to get an authority figure.
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* IronicEcho: In chapter two of The Public Life of Sweetie Belle, Diamond Tiara says that Sweetie Belle should be glad that [[spoiler: Rarity is dead]] causing Sweetie Belle to go berserk and she nearly kills her in the assault and it is only called off because Silver Spoon runs to get an authority figure. In chapter seven of Broken Blossom, Diamond Tiara once again does something cruel to Sweetie Belle with the same results: Sweetie Belle begins beating up Diamond Tiara and is only stopped because Silver Spoon ran to get an authority figure.
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* MomaBear: MommaBear: Sweetie Belle when Diamond Tiara threatens Blossom.
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* IronicEcho: In chapter two of The Public Life of Sweetie Belle, Diamond Tiara says that Sweetie Belle should be glad that [[spoiler: Rarity is dead]] causing Sweetie Belle to go berserk and she nearly kills her in the assault and it is only called off because Silver Spoon runs to get an authority figure. In chapter seven of Broken Blossom, Diamond Tiara once again does something cruel to Sweetie Belle with the same results: Sweetie Belle begins beating up Diamond Tiara and is only stopped because Silver Spoon ran to get an authority figure.
* MomaBear: Sweetie Belle when Diamond Tiara threatens Blossom.
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* DespairEventHorizon: [[spoiler: Rarity when she it hits her that she's going to be executed after botching her murder of Iron Will]]
--> [[spoiler: '''Rarity''': Oh my. I...I...I'm going to die.]]
--> [[spoiler: '''Rarity''': Oh my. I...I...I'm going to die.]]
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* DespairEventHorizon: [[spoiler: Rarity when she it hits her that she's going to be executed after botching her murder of Iron Will]]
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The final story in the trilogy, and the one that is currently ongoing, is ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/81010/broken-blossom Broken Blossom]]'' and once again it picks up pretty much where the preceding book left off. Blossom is left alone to deal with the fallout that came from the ending of The Public Life of Sweetie Belle and it details her life under the watchful eye of the Royal Sisters.
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The final story in the trilogy, and the one that is currently ongoing, is ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/81010/broken-blossom Broken Blossom]]'' and once again it picks up pretty much where the preceding book left off. Blossom is left alone to deal with the fallout that came from the ending of The Public Life of Sweetie Belle and it details her life under the watchful eye eyes of the Royal Sisters.
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* BigScrewedUpFamily: As of the third book Rarity, Sweetie Belle, and Blossom [[spoiler: have all committed at least one murder]]
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* BigScrewedUpFamily: As of the third book Rarity, Sweetie Belle, and Blossom [[spoiler: have all committed at least one murder]]
* HappilyAdopted: Averted with Blossom. She most certainly doesn't want to be in the care of the Royal Sisters.
* HappilyAdopted: Averted with Blossom. She most certainly doesn't want to be in the care of the Royal Sisters.
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* sympatheticMurderer: Rarity but more in the second half.
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* sympatheticMurderer: SympatheticMurderer: Rarity but more in the second half.
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* SecretKeeper: By the end of chapter 23, [[Sweetie Belle, Twilight, Princess Luna, and Applejack]] all know about Rarity's secret activities but are keeping it a secret.
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* SecretKeeper: By the end of chapter 23, [[Sweetie [[spoiler: Sweetie Belle, Twilight, Princess Luna, and Applejack]] all know about Rarity's secret activities but are keeping it a secret.
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* EveryonehasStandards: Rarity has a short list of ponies that she will NEVER kill for any reason.
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* EveryonehasStandards: EvenEvilHasStandards: Rarity has a short list of ponies that she will NEVER kill for any reason.
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* BullyHunter: If you are mean to Rarity's friends and family, don't expect to see your next birthday.
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* BullyHunter: If you are mean to Rarity's friends and family, don't expect to see your next birthday. Or the end of the next week for that matter.
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* Battle Trophy: Rarity keeps the hides, manes, and tails of memorable victims and she even moves on to two cut off faces and a set of hooves.
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The sequel, ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/50848/the-public-life-of-sweetie-belle The Public Life of Sweetie Belle]]'' picks up right where The secret Life of Rarity leaves off but from Sweetie Belle's perspective. She is forced to deal with the fallout of Rarity's actions. Many ponies around town suspect that she will follow in the hoofsteps of her sister, despite the fact that she shows no desire to do so. The story spans about twenty-five years and results in Sweetie Belle eventually having a daughter out of wedlock named Joyous Blossom. Much like her mother, Blossom, as she is called, is under suspicion that she will follow in Rarity's hoofsteps but once again she shows no desire to do so, even when confronted with bullies.
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The sequel, ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/50848/the-public-life-of-sweetie-belle The Public Life of Sweetie Belle]]'' picks up right where The secret Secret Life of Rarity leaves off but from Sweetie Belle's perspective. She is forced to deal with the fallout of Rarity's actions. Many ponies around town suspect that she will follow in the hoofsteps of her sister, despite the fact that she shows no desire to do so. The story spans about twenty-five years and results in Sweetie Belle eventually having a daughter out of wedlock named Joyous Blossom. Much like her mother, Blossom, as she is called, is under suspicion that she will follow in Rarity's hoofsteps but once again she shows no desire to do so, even when confronted with bullies.
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* AlLJustADream: The opening of chapter [[spoiler: 6]]. Subverted in Chapter [[spoiler: 10]].
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* AlLJustADream: AllJustADream: The opening of chapter [[spoiler: 6]]. Subverted in Chapter [[spoiler: 10]].
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* AlLJustADream: The opening of chapter [[spoiler: 6]]. Subverted in Chapter [[spoiler: 10]].
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* IJustWantTobeNormal: Rarity does occasionally regret what she does, particularly in the second half of the story when things spiral out of her control.
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* IJustWantTobeNormal: IJustWantToBeNormal: Rarity does occasionally regret what she does, particularly in the second half of the story when things spiral out of her control.
* SanitySlippage
* TranquilizerDart: Rarity's preferred method of getting her victims into her basement.
* VillainProtagonist: Rarity.
* WhatIfTheBabyIsLikeMe: Rarity is constantly worried that Sweetie Belle has the urges to kill that Rarity has.
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* WouldHurtAChild: WouldntHurtAChild: Rarity has killed roughly eight foals by claims this after she hits a certain age. Not that that stops her when the end of the story.situation calls for it.
* TookALevelInJerkass: Diamond Tiara. She was cruel to Sweetie Belle in the show and the second chapter, really cruel, but she took it to a whole new level when she had her daughter put a newspaper article about Rarity in Blossom's schoolbook.
* WhatIfTheBabyIsLikeMe: Sweetie Belle is slightly nervous that Blossom might have the homicidal tendencies of her aunt.
* WhatIfTheBabyIsLikeMe: Sweetie Belle is slightly nervous that Blossom might have the homicidal tendencies of her aunt.
* ChildProdigy: Blossom.
* IronicEcho: Diamond Tiara has her daughter plant a newspaper article about Rarity on Blossom's desk, but is torn apart when the tables are turned.
* BigScrewedUpFamily: As of the third book Rarity, Sweetie Belle, and Blossom [[spoiler: have all committed at least one murder]]
* IronicEcho: Diamond Tiara has her daughter plant a newspaper article about Rarity on Blossom's desk, but is torn apart when the tables are turned.
* BigScrewedUpFamily: As of the third book Rarity, Sweetie Belle, and Blossom [[spoiler: have all committed at least one murder]]
* ItRunsInTheFamily: Blossom has the white coat of her mother, aunt, and grandfather as well as Rarity's blue eyes and her mane is a combination of the colors of her mother and aunt. [[spoiler: Oh, and all three of them have committed murder]].
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* ScrewedUpFamily: As of the third book Rarity, Sweetie Belle, and Blossom [[spoiler: have all committed at least one murder]]
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The original story, ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/40334/the-secret-life-of-rarity The Secret Life of Rarity]]'', is the book in the series that follows Rarity and her actions from the time she begins killing, and why, until the beginning events of its sequel. It is so far the longest book in the series, clocking in at roughly 137,000 words and twenty-seven chapters. It is also by far the most violent story in the entire series as it is the one that details Rarity's murders, leaving little to the imagination. Rarity's preferred method of murder is with the use of various sharp knives and she is quite skilled with them. Eventually though she begins to lose what little sanity she has left and she begins to betray even her own twisted set of morals. The story ends with [[spoiler: her execution by lethal injection after she is finally caught by the royal guards.]]
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The original story, ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/40334/the-secret-life-of-rarity The Secret Life of Rarity]]'', is the book in the series that follows Rarity and her actions from the time she begins killing, and why, until the beginning events of its sequel. It is so far the longest book in the series, clocking in at roughly 137,000 words and twenty-seven chapters. It is also by far the most violent story in the entire series as it is the one that details Rarity's murders, leaving little to the imagination. Rarity's preferred method of murder is with the use of various sharp knives and she is quite skilled with them. Eventually though she begins to lose what little sanity she has left and she begins to betray even her own twisted set of morals. The story ends with [[spoiler: her execution by lethal injection after she is finally caught by the royal guards.]]
* OhCrap: The moment that Rarity realizes that [[spoiler: she was caught committing a murder in broad daylight]]
* ScoundrelCode: Rarity promises to never hurt Sweetie Belle the other five members of the Mane Six or foals.
* SecretKeeper: By the end of chapter 23, [[Sweetie Belle, Twilight, Princess Luna, and Applejack]] all know about Rarity's secret activities but are keeping it a secret.
* SerialKiller: Rarity. The first one in Equestria in over 300 years.
* SecretKeeper: By the end of chapter 23, [[Sweetie Belle, Twilight, Princess Luna, and Applejack]] all know about Rarity's secret activities but are keeping it a secret.
* SerialKiller: Rarity. The first one in Equestria in over 300 years.
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* sympatheticMurderer: Rarity but more in the second half.
* SympathyForTheDevil: [[spoiler: Twilight]] has this when she finds out that Rarity is a serialkillerkiller.
* SympathyForTheDevil: [[spoiler: Twilight]] has this when she finds out that Rarity is a serial
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* DisposingOfABody: rarity finds herself unsure of how to dispose of her original kills. She settles on the Everfree forest which becomes her defacto dumping grounds.
* Don'tSneakUpOnMeLikeThat: Rarity is in her basement planning a kill and [[spoiler: Sweetie Belle]] comes up behind her and startles her.
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* DisposingOfABody: rarity Rarity finds herself unsure of how to dispose of her original kills. She settles on the Everfree forest which becomes her defacto dumping grounds.
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* KarmicDeath [[spoiler: Rarity snaps off the horns of the unicorns she kills. After she is caught, her horn is removed before she is executed]].
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* KnifeNut: Rarity to the point where she imports knives from outside Equestria.
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* ManipulativeBastard: Rarity will sometimes exemplify this to get her victims into Carousel Boutique so she can kill them.
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* ItsAllMyFault: [[spoiler: Sweetie Belle says this when ponies find her and Blossom next to the foals that Blossom murdered.]]
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* CreepySouvenir: Rarity's kill trophies.
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*DaylightHorror: Rarity's kill of [[spoiler: Iron Will]] takes place in the daytime and leaves her out in the open covered in blood.
* DisposingOfABody: rarity finds herself unsure of how to dispose of her original kills. She settles on the Everfree forest which becomes her defacto dumping grounds.
* Don'tSneakUpOnMeLikeThat: Rarity is in her basement planning a kill and [[spoiler: Sweetie Belle]] comes up behind her and startles her.
* DisposingOfABody: rarity finds herself unsure of how to dispose of her original kills. She settles on the Everfree forest which becomes her defacto dumping grounds.
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* Battle Trophy: Rarity keeps the hides, manes, and tails of memorable victims and she even moves on to two cut off faces and a set of hooves.
* BreadEggsMilkSquick: Rarity is a popular fashion designer, a respected member of Ponyville, a loving daughter and sister, a wielder of an Element of Harmony and Equestria's deadliest serial killer.
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* BrokenPedestal: Sweetie Belle with Rarity.
--> I need to stop it, Twilight. I need to stop lying to myself about what kind of mare my sister really was. She was a serial killer, Twilight. She kidnapped, tortured, and murdered dozens of ponies. After her death I...I guess I still kind of saw her as a victim in all of this. I felt like I needed to protect her reputation, even if she might not have deserved it. Heck, she didn't deserve it. Not at all as a matter of fact.
* BrokenPedestal: Sweetie Belle with Rarity.
--> I need to stop it, Twilight. I need to stop lying to myself about what kind of mare my sister really was. She was a serial killer, Twilight. She kidnapped, tortured, and murdered dozens of ponies. After her death I...I guess I still kind of saw her as a victim in all of this. I felt like I needed to protect her reputation, even if she might not have deserved it. Heck, she didn't deserve it. Not at all as a matter of fact.
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* ScrewedUpFamily: As of the third book Rarity, Sweetie Belle, and Blossom [[spoiler: have all committed at least one murder]]
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* NoodleIncident: Whenever Rarity reminisces about past kills that the readers haven't been privy to.
* HappilyAdopted: Scootaloo by Rainbow Dash after the events of the original story reveal why she's an orphan.
* JerkassRealization: Rarity appears to Sweetie Belle and apologizes to her for ruining her life.
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* OrwellianRetcon: Sweetie Belle tells Blossom that she had an aunt Rarity who [[spoiler: died before she was born]] but doesn't get more specific than that.
* TakingTheHeat: [[spoiler: Sweetie Belle takes the blame after Blossom kills Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon's daughters]]
* TearsOfRemorse: Shed by Rarity when she appears to Sweetie Belle.
* WhyDidYouMakeMeHitYou: When Barley Brewer attacks Sweetie Belle, she panics and slices his cheek open with a bread knife.
* TakingTheHeat: [[spoiler: Sweetie Belle takes the blame after Blossom kills Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon's daughters]]
* TearsOfRemorse: Shed by Rarity when she appears to Sweetie Belle.
* WhyDidYouMakeMeHitYou: When Barley Brewer attacks Sweetie Belle, she panics and slices his cheek open with a bread knife.
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* HappilyAdopted: Averted with Blossom. She most certainly doesn't want to be in the care of the Royal Sisters.
* ParentalSubstitute: Shining Armor is shaping up to be a sort of father figure to Blossom.
* ParentalSubstitute: Shining Armor is shaping up to be a sort of father figure to Blossom.
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The original story, ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/40334/the-secret-life-of-rarity The Secret Life of Rarity]]'', is the book in the series that follows Rarity and her actions from the time she begins killing, and why, until the beginning events of its sequel. it It is so far the longest book in the series, clocking in at roughly 137,000 words and twenty-seven chapters. It is also by far the most violent story in the entire series as it is the one that details Rarity's murders, leaving little to the imagination. Rarity's preferred method of murder is with the use of various sharp knives and she is quite skilled with them. Eventually though she begins to lose what little sanity she has left and she begins to betray even her own twisted set of morals. The story ends with [[spoiler: her execution by lethal injection after she is finally caught by the royal guards.]]
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The original story, ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/40334/the-secret-life-of-rarity The Secret Life of Rarity]]'', is the story book in the series that follows Rarity and her actions from the time she begins killing, and why, until the beginning events of its sequel. it is so far the longest book in the series, clocking in at roughly 137,000 words and twenty-seven chapters. It is also by far the most violent story in the entire series as it is the one that details Rarity's murders, leaving little to the imagination. Rarity's preferred method of murder is with the use of various sharp knives and she is quite skilled with them. Eventually though she begins to lose what little sanity she has left and she begins to betray even her own twisted set of morals. The story ends with [[spoiler: her execution by lethal injection after she is finally caught by the royal guards.]]
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* CoolBigSis: Sweetie Belle thinks that Rarity is one.
* CharacterDevelopment: After [[spoiler: nearly killing Twilight]], Sweetie Belle finally realizes and comes to terms with the fact that her sister was an evil pony.
* ChildrenAreInnocent: Blossom until she finds out about her aunt Rarity.
* ChildrenAreInnocent: Blossom until she finds out about her aunt Rarity.
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*NotSoStoic: Both Princess Celestia and Princess Luna begin crying due to the events of the ending. Celestia in particular is inconsolable.
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*TearJerker: In chapter one when Blossom first is given a room in the royal palace to live in, she finds a large stuffed pony and turns it into a doppelganger of her mother which she uses to make believe that her mother is holding her in her forelegs while she sleeps.
*NotSoStoic: Both Princess Celestia and Princess Luna begin crying due to the events of the ending. Celestia in particular is inconsolable.
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*TearJerker: In chapter one when Blossom first is given a room in the royal palace to live in, she finds a large stuffed pony and turns it into a doppelganger of her mother which she uses to make believe that her mother is holding her in her forelegs while she sleeps.
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* BullyHunter: If you are mean to Rarity's friends and family, don't expect to see your next birthday.
* SympathyForTheDevil: [[spoiler: Twilight]] has this when she finds out that Rarity is a serial killer
* WoobieDestroyerOfWorlds: Rarity. She starts because she was forced to commit an accidental self-defense murder and gets a taste for it. By the end of the story she hates that she has no power over her addiction and it's to the point where she doesn't even enjoy killing anymore. Not like she used to anyway.
* BerserkButton: Sweetie Belle when Diamond Tiara insults Rarity.
* BewareTheNiceOnes: Blossom is an extremely happy, friendly, and kind pony who never wants to hurt anybody and is absolutely terrified at the notion of becoming like her aunt. [[spoiler: When she's pushed too far by Fire Ruby and Golden Necklace, she violently kills them both.]]
* BewareTheNiceOnes: Blossom is an extremely happy, friendly, and kind pony who never wants to hurt anybody and is absolutely terrified at the notion of becoming like her aunt. [[spoiler: When she's pushed too far by Fire Ruby and Golden Necklace, she violently kills them both.]]
* BloodFromTheMouth: After Diamond Tiara insults Rarity, Sweetie Belle nearly beats her to a pulp.
* DarkSecret: Sweetie Belle definitely doesn't want Blossom to find out that her aunt was a serial killer and she especially doesn't want her (or anybody else for that matter) to find out [[spoiler: that she participated in one of Rarity's kills and was even the one to do the actual killing.]]
* DarkSecret: Sweetie Belle definitely doesn't want Blossom to find out that her aunt was a serial killer and she especially doesn't want her (or anybody else for that matter) to find out [[spoiler: that she participated in one of Rarity's kills and was even the one to do the actual killing.]]
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* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: Sweetie Belle defends herself from an assault by a mad parent of a foal she scared but instantly regrets it. Also, she straps Twilight down to a table and tells her that she's going to kill her but experiences this trope when Twilight dejectedly asks her to make it quick.
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* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: Sweetie Belle defends herself from an assault by a mad parent of a foal she scared but instantly regrets it. Also, she straps Twilight down to a table and tells her that she's going to kill her but experiences this trope when Twilight dejectedly asks her to make it quick.quick.
* NoHoldsBarredBeatdown: see BloodFromTheMouth
* NoHoldsBarredBeatdown: see BloodFromTheMouth
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* StrappedToAnOperatingTable: How Rarity keeps her victims secured in her basement.
* WakingUpElsewhere: What happens to Rarity's victims after she drugs them.
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* YoureInsane: Rarity's victims say this so often she creates a poster to show her victims things they shouldn't bother saying down in her basement because she's 'heard it all before'.
* AloneWithThePsycho: Twilight finds herself on the receiving end of a psychotic Sweetie Belle and it almost costs her her life.
* FaceOfAnAngelMindOfADemon: A significant portion of the town suspects Sweetie Belle of this.
* IdiotBall: One of Blossom's classmates exemplifies this and it allows for the events that lead to the DownerEnding.
* IdiotBall: One of Blossom's classmates exemplifies this and it allows for the events that lead to the DownerEnding.
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* WhamChapter: When [[spoiler: LuredIntoATrap: Blossom by Golden Necklace and Fire Ruby.
* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: SweetieBelle's worst fears come true Belle defends herself from an assault by a mad parent of a foal she scared but instantly regrets it. Also, she straps Twilight down to a table and Blossom murders two classmates]]tells her that she's going to kill her but experiences this trope when Twilight dejectedly asks her to make it quick.
* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: Sweetie
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* LackofEmpathy: Rarity for her victims. An example is when [[spoiler: Trixie]] tells Rarity her back story and Rarity truly could not care less.
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* AdultFear: Sweetie Belle fears that her daughter Blossom will turn out like Rarity.
* BittersweetEnding: [[spoiler: Neither Blossom nor Sweetie Belle (who took the fall for her daughter) is executed for the murders but Sweetie Belle's horn is surgically removed and she's sent to be institutionalized for the rest of her life.]]
* IronicEcho: Near the end of the story [[spoiler: Sweetie Belle's fears come true when her daughter Blossom kills two school bullies in the same way that Rarity killed her first victims and for the same reason]]
* KickTheDog: The happy and innocent Blossom has no idea that her aunt was the deadliest serial killer in history; something that Diamond Tiara and her daughter are more than willing to fix.
* WhamChapter: When [[spoiler: Sweetie Belle's worst fears come true and Blossom murders two classmates]]
* BittersweetEnding: [[spoiler: Neither Blossom nor Sweetie Belle (who took the fall for her daughter) is executed for the murders but Sweetie Belle's horn is surgically removed and she's sent to be institutionalized for the rest of her life.]]
* IronicEcho: Near the end of the story [[spoiler: Sweetie Belle's fears come true when her daughter Blossom kills two school bullies in the same way that Rarity killed her first victims and for the same reason]]
* KickTheDog: The happy and innocent Blossom has no idea that her aunt was the deadliest serial killer in history; something that Diamond Tiara and her daughter are more than willing to fix.
* WhamChapter: When [[spoiler: Sweetie Belle's worst fears come true and Blossom murders two classmates]]
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* BrutalHonesty: Rarity never hides what she's going to do to her victims.
--> '''Krissy''': Are you gonna kill me?
--> '''Rarity''': Of course I am, darling. What am I supposed to do, just let you go?
--> '''Krissy''': Are you gonna kill me?
--> '''Rarity''': Of course I am, darling. What am I supposed to do, just let you go?
* EveryonehasStandards: Rarity has a short list of ponies that she will NEVER kill for any reason.
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* XMeetsY: The story has often been compared to the TV show Dexter.
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* XMeetsY: The story has often been compared to the TV show Dexter.Dexter.
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!! The Public Life of Sweetie Belle contains examples of:
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* DespairEventHorizon: [[spoiler: Rarity when she it hits her that she's going to be executed after botching her murder of Iron Will]]
--> [[spoiler: '''Rarity''': Oh my. I...I...I'm going to die.]]
--> [[spoiler: '''Rarity''': Oh my. I...I...I'm going to die.]]
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* EyeScream: Rarity cuts the eyelid off of one of her victims then begins scratching the exposed eyeball with the tip of her knife.
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* HollywoodAcid: After slicing [[spoiler: Flim]] open, she pours some in his chest cavity.
* InfantImmortality: Averted. See WouldHurtAChild
* InfantImmortality: Averted. See WouldHurtAChild
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* KnightTemplar: Slightly averted as Rarity frequently casually states that she's going to pony hell (Tartarus) but beyond that she feels that she's doing the community and her friends a favor by killing nasty ponies.
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* DarkerAndEdgier
* DisproportionateRetribution: While a lot of the ponies she kills are definitely jerks, they definitely don't deserve what Rarity does to them.
* DrivenToVillainy: Rarity's first kill was completely self-defense. However she got such a rush from it that she just kept on going.
* [[spoiler: DownerEnding: Surprisingly enough, Rarity's execution is one of the most heartbreaking moments in the story]]
* DrivenToVillainy: Rarity's first kill was completely self-defense. However she got such a rush from it that she just kept on going.
* [[spoiler: DownerEnding: Surprisingly enough, Rarity's execution is one of the most heartbreaking moments in the story]]
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* instantSedation: Rarity has a set of syringes that contain a drug that almost instantly knocks out her victims for transport to her basement.
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* instantSedation: InstantSedation: Rarity has a set of syringes that contain a drug that almost instantly knocks out her victims for transport to her basement.basement.
* KillTheOnesYouLove: See TeamKiller
* ManOfWealthAndTaste: Rarity's passion is fashion and when she's not splattered in blood, she insists upon looking her best at all times. Also, her gem finding spell means that she is set up for life.
* KillTheOnesYouLove: See TeamKiller
* ManOfWealthAndTaste: Rarity's passion is fashion and when she's not splattered in blood, she insists upon looking her best at all times. Also, her gem finding spell means that she is set up for life.
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* StepfordSmiler: Rarity is a Type C
* TeamKiller: Rarity has a vision of killing [[spoiler: Twilight]] and even contemplates murdering [[spoiler: Fluttershy]]
* TortureCellar: Rarity's basement is where she does the majority of her killing. She likes to decorate it with the hides, manes, and tails of memorable victims.
* TongueTrauma: When Rarity kills one of her victims, a tomato vendor named Scarlet Tomato, she forces her mouth open and begins cutting it up with a razor.
* VileVillainSaccharineShow: Except for the beginning and the ending, the story takes place during the show to the point where Rarity decides to kill certain antagonists because of their actions in the specific episodes. The universe serial killer Rarity inhabits is essentially the one of the show itself.
* WhamLine: Whenever Rarity admits what she does.
* WillingSuspensionOfDisbelief: Much like how the story takes place during the show, if you took out the trait of serial killer, the Rarity in the story would be almost exactly identical to the character in the show itself. That is often cited as one of the things that makes the fic so effective. You as the reader have a much harder time pretending that the Rarity in the story isn't the Rarity in the show.
* WouldHurtAChild: Rarity has killed roughly eight foals by the end of the story.
* XMeetsY: The story has often been compared to the TV show Dexter.
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The final story in the trilogy, and the one that is currently ongoing, is ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/81010/broken-blossom Broken Blossom]]'' and once again it picks up pretty much where the preceding book left off.
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The final story in the trilogy, and the one that is currently ongoing, is ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/81010/broken-blossom Broken Blossom]]'' and once again it picks up pretty much where the preceding book left off. Blossom is left alone to deal with the fallout that came from the ending of The Public Life of Sweetie Belle and it details her life under the watchful eye of the Royal Sisters.
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* AssholeVictim: Once she meets the Mane six and becomes and Element of Harmony she decides to only kill ponies that she feels deserve to be killed. Over the course of the novel she kills series antagonists such as [[spoiler: Gilda the Griffin, The Great and Powerful Trixie, and the Flim Flam Brothers]] to name a few.
* AxCrazy: Rarity for sure. She isn't shy about violently killing her victims.
* ColdBloodedTorture: Rarity dislikes killing her victims in painless and humane ways. No, they need to suffer before they die and she makes sure that they do.
* CruelAndUnusualDeath
* DarkFic: This is not a story that anybody who wants to stick to fics that exemplify the light-hearted nature of the show should consider touching. This story is VERY disturbing.
* EnfantTerrible: Rarity's first kills at the age of eight. By thirteen she has killed twenty-six ponies, all while still living with her parents.
* EtTuBrute: Eventually ponies around her start to find out about her being a serial killer. None of them take it very well.
* FallenHero: Slightly subverted as Rarity was a serial killer for over ten years at least before she became and Element of Harmony.
* FlayingAlive: Rarity has a special sharpened vegetable peeler for this reason.
* GigglingVillain: Rarity after her murders of [[spoiler: Flim and Flam]]
* HeroKiller: see FallenHero
* instantSedation: Rarity has a set of syringes that contain a drug that almost instantly knocks out her victims for transport to her basement.
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!!The Secret Life of Rarity contains examples of:
* AssholeVictim: Once she meets the Mane six and becomes and Element of Harmony she decides to only kill ponies that she feels deserve to be killed. Over the course of the novel she kills series antagonists such as [[spoiler: Gilda the Griffin, The Great and Powerful Trixie, and the Flim Flam Brothers]] to name a few.
* AxCrazy: Rarity for sure. She isn't shy about violently killing her victims.
* ColdBloodedTorture: Rarity dislikes killing her victims in painless and humane ways. No, they need to suffer before they die and she makes sure that they do.
* CruelAndUnusualDeath
* DarkFic: This is not a story that anybody who wants to stick to fics that exemplify the light-hearted nature of the show should consider touching. This story is VERY disturbing.
* EnfantTerrible: Rarity's first kills at the age of eight. By thirteen she has killed twenty-six ponies, all while still living with her parents.
* EtTuBrute: Eventually ponies around her start to find out about her being a serial killer. None of them take it very well.
* FallenHero: Slightly subverted as Rarity was a serial killer for over ten years at least before she became and Element of Harmony.
* FlayingAlive: Rarity has a special sharpened vegetable peeler for this reason.
* GigglingVillain: Rarity after her murders of [[spoiler: Flim and Flam]]
* HeroKiller: see FallenHero
* instantSedation: Rarity has a set of syringes that contain a drug that almost instantly knocks out her victims for transport to her basement.
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The Killer Rarityverse is a trilogy of novel-length WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic fanfiction stories by ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/user/BronyWriter BronyWriter]]'' that detail the life of Rarity as a violent serial killer and how that affects the ponies around her, particularly her her friends and family.
The original story, ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/40334/the-secret-life-of-rarity The Secret Life of Rarity]]'', is the story in the series that follows Rarity and her actions from the time she begins killing, and why, until the beginning events of its sequel. it is so far the longest book in the series, clocking in at roughly 137,000 words and twenty-seven chapters. It is also by far the most violent story in the entire series as it is the one that details Rarity's murders, leaving little to the imagination. Rarity's preferred method of murder is with the use of various sharp knives and she is quite skilled with them. Eventually though she begins to lose what little sanity she has left and she begins to betray even her own twisted set of morals. The story ends with [[spoiler: her execution by lethal injection after she is finally caught by the royal guards.]]
The sequel, ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/50848/the-public-life-of-sweetie-belle The Public Life of Sweetie Belle]]'' picks up right where The secret Life of Rarity leaves off but from Sweetie Belle's perspective. She is forced to deal with the fallout of Rarity's actions. Many ponies around town suspect that she will follow in the hoofsteps of her sister, despite the fact that she shows no desire to do so. The story spans about twenty-five years and results in Sweetie Belle eventually having a daughter out of wedlock named Joyous Blossom. Much like her mother, Blossom, as she is called, is under suspicion that she will follow in Rarity's hoofsteps but once again she shows no desire to do so, even when confronted with bullies.
The final story in the trilogy, and the one that is currently ongoing, is ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/81010/broken-blossom Broken Blossom]]'' and once again it picks up pretty much where the preceding book left off.
The original story, ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/40334/the-secret-life-of-rarity The Secret Life of Rarity]]'', is the story in the series that follows Rarity and her actions from the time she begins killing, and why, until the beginning events of its sequel. it is so far the longest book in the series, clocking in at roughly 137,000 words and twenty-seven chapters. It is also by far the most violent story in the entire series as it is the one that details Rarity's murders, leaving little to the imagination. Rarity's preferred method of murder is with the use of various sharp knives and she is quite skilled with them. Eventually though she begins to lose what little sanity she has left and she begins to betray even her own twisted set of morals. The story ends with [[spoiler: her execution by lethal injection after she is finally caught by the royal guards.]]
The sequel, ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/50848/the-public-life-of-sweetie-belle The Public Life of Sweetie Belle]]'' picks up right where The secret Life of Rarity leaves off but from Sweetie Belle's perspective. She is forced to deal with the fallout of Rarity's actions. Many ponies around town suspect that she will follow in the hoofsteps of her sister, despite the fact that she shows no desire to do so. The story spans about twenty-five years and results in Sweetie Belle eventually having a daughter out of wedlock named Joyous Blossom. Much like her mother, Blossom, as she is called, is under suspicion that she will follow in Rarity's hoofsteps but once again she shows no desire to do so, even when confronted with bullies.
The final story in the trilogy, and the one that is currently ongoing, is ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/81010/broken-blossom Broken Blossom]]'' and once again it picks up pretty much where the preceding book left off.
