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''[[https://web.archive.org/web/20120410143001/http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7762530/1/StarKits_PRophec_2_The_Two_Sibinglgs StarKits PRophec 2: The Two Sibinglgs]]'' is a sequel to the famed ''Literature/WarriorCats'' TrollFic, ''Fanfic/StarkitsProphecy''. It was co-written by xdark.rosesx and her new 'boyfriend' Tomas; however, it was deleted from FF.net before being completed.
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!! Relevant tropes:
* TheAce: Firepaw, apparently the most attractive apprentice in the forest.
* AmazingTechnicolourWildlife: Some of the warriors have bizarre fur colours like green, blue, or pink.
* AmbiguousGender: Quite a few cats in the allegiances don't have their gender specified.
* AndThatsTerrible:
--> '''[=FirePaw=]:''' "Riverclan is holding her HOSTAGE!"
--> '''[=AngelPaw=]:''' "THAT'S TERRIBLE!"
* ArtisticLicenseBiology: Crimsonkit is a '''black''' cat (definitely not an albino) and yet, has red eyes.
%%* BeigeProse: Just as guilty of it as the [[Fanfic/StarkitsProphecy original]].
* BigNo: Crimsonpaw, after her new mentor was revealed to be [[spoiler:Marijuanaskin]].
* BuxomIsBetter: {{Implied}} with [=EarthBlue=].
-->'''[=EarthBlue=]:''' A beautiful she-cat with a buxom personality
* CaptainObvious: When Lightningstrike remarks about how special it is that [[spoiler: Angelpaw]] was assigned [[spoiler: Rainstar herself]] as a mentor.
%% * ChickMagnet: [=FirePaw=], because of his good looks.
* CutShort: Stopped updating after the Valentine's Day special ([[CallBack much like how the original ended after a Christmas Episode]]), and seeing as it's been almost a ''decade'' as of the time of writing, it most likely will never update again.
* DarknessVonGothickName: The names of pretty much every Shadowclan cat; special mentions for Losthope, Depressedheart, and Ravennight.
%%* DamselInDistress: [[spoiler: Crimsonpaw.]]
* DepartmentOfRedundancyDepartment:
** Pawstep's apprentice name would have been Paw'''paw'''.
** Starburn, should he become leader, will be called Star'''star'''.
* DreamingOfThingsToCome: Pawstep receives a prophecy from [=StarClan=] by conversing with the [=StarClan=] cats in a dream.
* DenserAndWackier: As a whole, it's an even more obvious TrollFic than the original ''Fanfic/StarkitsProphecy'', with NonstandardCharacterDesign and very... unfortunate names for many characters abound.
* DrugsAreBad: Attempted with the character of Marijuanaskin. He has no hair because of his drug addiction. He is also said to be unfit to mentor [[spoiler: Crimsonpaw]] because of his addiction.
* {{Emoticon}}: One actually appears in a sentence that Angelkit speaks.
%% * TheHero: Chapter 2 leads us to believe that the cats filling this role in the story will be Angelkit and Crimsonkit.
* HappilyAdopted: Angelkit and Crimsonkit, by Moontree.
* ItWasADarkAndStormyNight: Used word for word in the first sentence of chapter one.
%%* LoveAtFirstSight: Angelpaw and Firepaw
%%* LuminescentBlush: Angelpaw, after she saw Firepaw
* MeaningfulName: Almost all of the cast have names with clear meanings. It's explicitly stated that Angelkit got her name because of her white fur, and Crimsonkit because of her [[TechnicolourEyes red eyes]].
%% * MusicalThemeNaming: Cats in [=RiverClan=]
* NamesToRunAwayFromReallyFast: Darknesspaw. His description literally calls him evil.
%% * NebulousEvilOrganisation: [=RiverClan=]
* NonStandardCharacterDesign: There's at least ''one'' in each clan, excluding [=ThunderClan=] ([[AmazingTechnicolorWildlife because pretty much all of them have technicolor fur]]).
** In [=RiverClan=], we have Melodypaw, a young green she-cat with green eyes.
** In [=ShadowClan=], we have Bloodpaw, a blood-colored she-cat with vein-colored eyes.
** In [=WindClan=], we have Crowpaw, a blue tom with blue eyes.
** And, finally, in [=MapleClan=], we have Butterflypaw, who may be the oddest of all. They have pink fur, butterfly wings, and yellow eyes.
* OneParagraphChapter: Well, they're a bit longer than a single paragraph, but they're still all incredibly short (around 100 words long).
* ParentalAbandonment: Angelkit and her sister, Crimsonkit, [[spoiler: with both their parents dead.]]
* ParentalFavoritism: Uglykit's name should explain everything.
* ParentalNeglect: Moontree's kits, Uglykit, Stonekit, and Pinekit are completely forgotten and not mentioned.
* ParentalSubstitute: Moontree to Crimsonkit and Angelkit.
* PointOfView: The story is usually told in third person, but changes to first person halfway through Chapter 4. And then it changes back yet again.
%% * RedEyesTakeWarning: Seemingly {{Subverted}} with Crimsonkit.
%% * RougeAnglesOfSatin: Although lessened by the addition of an editor (Tomas).
* TalkingInYourDreams: Pawstep has a dream conversation with the [=StarClan=] cats.
* ThemeNaming: Cats in [=WindClan=] are named after birds and other things related to the sky.
%%* {{Sequel}}: Duh.
%%* TechnicolourEyes: Almost every single cat listed in the allegiances.
%%* TheUnfavourite: Crimsonpaw, at least to Rainstar.
%%* UnfortunateNames: Marijuanaskin
* ValentinesDayEpisodes: Chapter 4 [[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin THE VALENTINS]] [[RougeAnglesOfSatin DAY SPECAIL!]]
%%* WantonCrueltyToTheCommonComma: Surprisingly, only the author's note.
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!! Relevant tropes:
* TheAce: Firepaw, apparently the most attractive apprentice in the forest.
* AmazingTechnicolourWildlife: Some of the warriors have bizarre fur colours like green, blue, or pink.
* AmbiguousGender: Quite a few cats in the allegiances don't have their gender specified.
* AndThatsTerrible:
--> '''[=FirePaw=]:''' "Riverclan is holding her HOSTAGE!"
--> '''[=AngelPaw=]:''' "THAT'S TERRIBLE!"
* ArtisticLicenseBiology: Crimsonkit is a '''black''' cat (definitely not an albino) and yet, has red eyes.
%%* BeigeProse: Just as guilty of it as the [[Fanfic/StarkitsProphecy original]].
* BigNo: Crimsonpaw, after her new mentor was revealed to be [[spoiler:Marijuanaskin]].
* BuxomIsBetter: {{Implied}} with [=EarthBlue=].
-->'''[=EarthBlue=]:''' A beautiful she-cat with a buxom personality
* CaptainObvious: When Lightningstrike remarks about how special it is that [[spoiler: Angelpaw]] was assigned [[spoiler: Rainstar herself]] as a mentor.
%% * ChickMagnet: [=FirePaw=], because of his good looks.
* CutShort: Stopped updating after the Valentine's Day special ([[CallBack much like how the original ended after a Christmas Episode]]), and seeing as it's been almost a ''decade'' as of the time of writing, it most likely will never update again.
* DarknessVonGothickName: The names of pretty much every Shadowclan cat; special mentions for Losthope, Depressedheart, and Ravennight.
%%* DamselInDistress: [[spoiler: Crimsonpaw.]]
* DepartmentOfRedundancyDepartment:
** Pawstep's apprentice name would have been Paw'''paw'''.
** Starburn, should he become leader, will be called Star'''star'''.
* DreamingOfThingsToCome: Pawstep receives a prophecy from [=StarClan=] by conversing with the [=StarClan=] cats in a dream.
* DenserAndWackier: As a whole, it's an even more obvious TrollFic than the original ''Fanfic/StarkitsProphecy'', with NonstandardCharacterDesign and very... unfortunate names for many characters abound.
* DrugsAreBad: Attempted with the character of Marijuanaskin. He has no hair because of his drug addiction. He is also said to be unfit to mentor [[spoiler: Crimsonpaw]] because of his addiction.
* {{Emoticon}}: One actually appears in a sentence that Angelkit speaks.
%% * TheHero: Chapter 2 leads us to believe that the cats filling this role in the story will be Angelkit and Crimsonkit.
* HappilyAdopted: Angelkit and Crimsonkit, by Moontree.
* ItWasADarkAndStormyNight: Used word for word in the first sentence of chapter one.
%%* LoveAtFirstSight: Angelpaw and Firepaw
%%* LuminescentBlush: Angelpaw, after she saw Firepaw
* MeaningfulName: Almost all of the cast have names with clear meanings. It's explicitly stated that Angelkit got her name because of her white fur, and Crimsonkit because of her [[TechnicolourEyes red eyes]].
%% * MusicalThemeNaming: Cats in [=RiverClan=]
* NamesToRunAwayFromReallyFast: Darknesspaw. His description literally calls him evil.
%% * NebulousEvilOrganisation: [=RiverClan=]
* NonStandardCharacterDesign: There's at least ''one'' in each clan, excluding [=ThunderClan=] ([[AmazingTechnicolorWildlife because pretty much all of them have technicolor fur]]).
** In [=RiverClan=], we have Melodypaw, a young green she-cat with green eyes.
** In [=ShadowClan=], we have Bloodpaw, a blood-colored she-cat with vein-colored eyes.
** In [=WindClan=], we have Crowpaw, a blue tom with blue eyes.
** And, finally, in [=MapleClan=], we have Butterflypaw, who may be the oddest of all. They have pink fur, butterfly wings, and yellow eyes.
* OneParagraphChapter: Well, they're a bit longer than a single paragraph, but they're still all incredibly short (around 100 words long).
* ParentalAbandonment: Angelkit and her sister, Crimsonkit, [[spoiler: with both their parents dead.]]
* ParentalFavoritism: Uglykit's name should explain everything.
* ParentalNeglect: Moontree's kits, Uglykit, Stonekit, and Pinekit are completely forgotten and not mentioned.
* ParentalSubstitute: Moontree to Crimsonkit and Angelkit.
* PointOfView: The story is usually told in third person, but changes to first person halfway through Chapter 4. And then it changes back yet again.
%% * RedEyesTakeWarning: Seemingly {{Subverted}} with Crimsonkit.
%% * RougeAnglesOfSatin: Although lessened by the addition of an editor (Tomas).
* TalkingInYourDreams: Pawstep has a dream conversation with the [=StarClan=] cats.
* ThemeNaming: Cats in [=WindClan=] are named after birds and other things related to the sky.
%%* {{Sequel}}: Duh.
%%* TechnicolourEyes: Almost every single cat listed in the allegiances.
%%* TheUnfavourite: Crimsonpaw, at least to Rainstar.
%%* UnfortunateNames: Marijuanaskin
* ValentinesDayEpisodes: Chapter 4 [[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin THE VALENTINS]] [[RougeAnglesOfSatin DAY SPECAIL!]]
%%* WantonCrueltyToTheCommonComma: Surprisingly, only the author's note.
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!! Relevant tropes:
* TheAce: Firepaw, apparently the most attractive apprentice in the forest.
* AmazingTechnicolourWildlife: Some of the warriors have bizarre fur colours like green, blue, or pink.
* AmbiguousGender: Quite a few cats in the allegiances don't have their gender specified.
* AndThatsTerrible:
--> '''[=FirePaw=]:''' "Riverclan is holding her HOSTAGE!"
--> '''[=AngelPaw=]:''' "THAT'S TERRIBLE!"
* ArtisticLicenseBiology: Crimsonkit is a '''black''' cat (definitely not an albino) and yet, has red eyes.
%%* BeigeProse: Just as guilty of it as the [[Fanfic/StarkitsProphecy original]].
* BigNo: Crimsonpaw, after her new mentor was revealed to be [[spoiler:Marijuanaskin]].
* BuxomIsBetter: {{Implied}} with [=EarthBlue=].
-->'''[=EarthBlue=]:''' A beautiful she-cat with a buxom personality
* CaptainObvious: When Lightningstrike remarks about how special it is that [[spoiler: Angelpaw]] was assigned [[spoiler: Rainstar herself]] as a mentor.
%% * ChickMagnet: [=FirePaw=], because of his good looks.
* CutShort: Stopped updating after the Valentine's Day special ([[CallBack much like how the original ended after a Christmas Episode]]), and seeing as it's been almost a ''decade'' as of the time of writing, it most likely will never update again.
* DarknessVonGothickName: The names of pretty much every Shadowclan cat; special mentions for Losthope, Depressedheart, and Ravennight.
%%* DamselInDistress: [[spoiler: Crimsonpaw.]]
* DepartmentOfRedundancyDepartment:
** Pawstep's apprentice name would have been Paw'''paw'''.
** Starburn, should he become leader, will be called Star'''star'''.
* DreamingOfThingsToCome: Pawstep receives a prophecy from [=StarClan=] by conversing with the [=StarClan=] cats in a dream.
* DenserAndWackier: As a whole, it's an even more obvious TrollFic than the original ''Fanfic/StarkitsProphecy'', with NonstandardCharacterDesign and very... unfortunate names for many characters abound.
* DrugsAreBad: Attempted with the character of Marijuanaskin. He has no hair because of his drug addiction. He is also said to be unfit to mentor [[spoiler: Crimsonpaw]] because of his addiction.
* {{Emoticon}}: One actually appears in a sentence that Angelkit speaks.
%% * TheHero: Chapter 2 leads us to believe that the cats filling this role in the story will be Angelkit and Crimsonkit.
* HappilyAdopted: Angelkit and Crimsonkit, by Moontree.
* ItWasADarkAndStormyNight: Used word for word in the first sentence of chapter one.
%%* LoveAtFirstSight: Angelpaw and Firepaw
%%* LuminescentBlush: Angelpaw, after she saw Firepaw
* MeaningfulName: Almost all of the cast have names with clear meanings. It's explicitly stated that Angelkit got her name because of her white fur, and Crimsonkit because of her [[TechnicolourEyes red eyes]].
%% * MusicalThemeNaming: Cats in [=RiverClan=]
* NamesToRunAwayFromReallyFast: Darknesspaw. His description literally calls him evil.
%% * NebulousEvilOrganisation: [=RiverClan=]
* NonStandardCharacterDesign: There's at least ''one'' in each clan, excluding [=ThunderClan=] ([[AmazingTechnicolorWildlife because pretty much all of them have technicolor fur]]).
** In [=RiverClan=], we have Melodypaw, a young green she-cat with green eyes.
** In [=ShadowClan=], we have Bloodpaw, a blood-colored she-cat with vein-colored eyes.
** In [=WindClan=], we have Crowpaw, a blue tom with blue eyes.
** And, finally, in [=MapleClan=], we have Butterflypaw, who may be the oddest of all. They have pink fur, butterfly wings, and yellow eyes.
* OneParagraphChapter: Well, they're a bit longer than a single paragraph, but they're still all incredibly short (around 100 words long).
* ParentalAbandonment: Angelkit and her sister, Crimsonkit, [[spoiler: with both their parents dead.]]
* ParentalFavoritism: Uglykit's name should explain everything.
* ParentalNeglect: Moontree's kits, Uglykit, Stonekit, and Pinekit are completely forgotten and not mentioned.
* ParentalSubstitute: Moontree to Crimsonkit and Angelkit.
* PointOfView: The story is usually told in third person, but changes to first person halfway through Chapter 4. And then it changes back yet again.
%% * RedEyesTakeWarning: Seemingly {{Subverted}} with Crimsonkit.
%% * RougeAnglesOfSatin: Although lessened by the addition of an editor (Tomas).
* TalkingInYourDreams: Pawstep has a dream conversation with the [=StarClan=] cats.
* ThemeNaming: Cats in [=WindClan=] are named after birds and other things related to the sky.
%%* {{Sequel}}: Duh.
%%* TechnicolourEyes: Almost every single cat listed in the allegiances.
%%* TheUnfavourite: Crimsonpaw, at least to Rainstar.
%%* UnfortunateNames: Marijuanaskin
* ValentinesDayEpisodes: Chapter 4 [[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin THE VALENTINS]] [[RougeAnglesOfSatin DAY SPECAIL!]]
%%* WantonCrueltyToTheCommonComma: Surprisingly, only the author's note.
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* AmazingTechnicolourWildlife: Some of the warriors.
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* AmazingTechnicolourWildlife: Some of the warriors.warriors have bizarre fur colours like green, blue, or pink.
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* ChickMagnet: [=FirePaw=], because of his good looks.
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* DepartmentOfRedundancyDepartment: Pawstep's apprentice name would have been Paw'''paw'''.
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* DepartmentOfRedundancyDepartment: DepartmentOfRedundancyDepartment:
** Pawstep's apprentice name would have been Paw'''paw'''.
** Pawstep's apprentice name would have been Paw'''paw'''.
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* DreamingOfThingsToCome:
** Pawstep will be receiving a prophecy from [=StarClan=]
** Pawstep will be receiving a prophecy from [=StarClan=]
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* DreamingOfThingsToCome:
**DreamingOfThingsToCome: Pawstep will be receiving receives a prophecy from [=StarClan=][=StarClan=] by conversing with the [=StarClan=] cats in a dream.
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** TalkingInYourDreams: By conversing with the [=StarClan=] cats.
* DrugsAreBad: Attempted with the character of Marijuanaskin. He has no hair because of his drug addiction.
** He is also said to be unfit to mentor [[spoiler: Crimsonpaw]] because of his addiction.
* DrugsAreBad: Attempted with the character of Marijuanaskin. He has no hair because of his drug addiction.
** He is also said to be unfit to mentor [[spoiler: Crimsonpaw]] because of his addiction.
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* {{The Hero}}es: Chapter 2 leads us to believe that the cats filling this role in the story will be Angelkit and Crimsonkit.
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%% * {{The Hero}}es: TheHero: Chapter 2 leads us to believe that the cats filling this role in the story will be Angelkit and Crimsonkit.
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* MeaningfulName: Almost all of the cast.
** Explicitly mentioned: Angelkit got her name because of her white fur, and Crimsonkit because of her [[TechnicolourEyes red eyes]].
** Explicitly mentioned: Angelkit got her name because of her white fur, and Crimsonkit because of her [[TechnicolourEyes red eyes]].
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* MeaningfulName: Almost all of the cast.
** Explicitly mentioned:cast have names with clear meanings. It's explicitly stated that Angelkit got her name because of her white fur, and Crimsonkit because of her [[TechnicolourEyes red eyes]].eyes]].
%% * MusicalThemeNaming: Cats in [=RiverClan=]
** Explicitly mentioned:
%% * MusicalThemeNaming: Cats in [=RiverClan=]
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%% * NebulousEvilOrganisation: [=RiverClan=]
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* RedEyesTakeWarning: Seemingly {{Subverted}} with Crimsonkit.
* RougeAnglesOfSatin: Although lessened by the addition of an editor (Tomas).
* ThemeNaming:
** Cats in [=WindClan=] are named after birds and other things related to the sky.
** MusicalThemeNaming: Cats in [=RiverClan=]
* RougeAnglesOfSatin: Although lessened by the addition of an editor (Tomas).
* ThemeNaming:
** Cats in [=WindClan=] are named after birds and other things related to the sky.
** MusicalThemeNaming: Cats in [=RiverClan=]
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%% * RedEyesTakeWarning: Seemingly {{Subverted}} with Crimsonkit.
%% * RougeAnglesOfSatin: Although lessened by the addition of an editor (Tomas).
*ThemeNaming:
**TalkingInYourDreams: Pawstep has a dream conversation with the [=StarClan=] cats.
* ThemeNaming: Cats in [=WindClan=] are named after birds and other things related to thesky.
** MusicalThemeNaming: Cats in [=RiverClan=]sky.
%% * RougeAnglesOfSatin: Although lessened by the addition of an editor (Tomas).
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* ThemeNaming: Cats in [=WindClan=] are named after birds and other things related to the
** MusicalThemeNaming: Cats in [=RiverClan=]
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* EverythingsBetterWithLlamas: Implied with [=StrollLlama=].
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* AwesomeMcCoolname: Sexybeast and Strolllama.
* BeigeProse: Just as guilty of it as the [[Fanfic/StarkitsProphecy original]].
* BeigeProse: Just as guilty of it as the [[Fanfic/StarkitsProphecy original]].
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* DamselInDistress: [[spoiler: Crimsonpaw.]]
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* LoveAtFirstSight: Angelpaw and Firepaw
* LuminescentBlush: Angelpaw, after she saw Firepaw
* LuminescentBlush: Angelpaw, after she saw Firepaw
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* {{Sequel}}: Duh.
** EvenBetterSequel: According to the author.
* TechnicolourEyes: Almost every single cat listed in the allegiances.
* TrollFic
* TheUnfavourite: Crimsonpaw, at least to Rainstar.
* UnfortunateNames: Marijuanaskin
** EvenBetterSequel: According to the author.
* TechnicolourEyes: Almost every single cat listed in the allegiances.
* TrollFic
* TheUnfavourite: Crimsonpaw, at least to Rainstar.
* UnfortunateNames: Marijuanaskin
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* WantonCrueltyToTheCommonComma: Surprisingly, only the author's note.
* YouKeepUsingThatWord: The author, to '''inconceivable''' levels. "Vein-coloured eyes", "brown eyes like flying debris", and "Amber sunset eyes", anyone?
* YouKeepUsingThatWord: The author, to '''inconceivable''' levels. "Vein-coloured eyes", "brown eyes like flying debris", and "Amber sunset eyes", anyone?
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* YouKeepUsingThatWord: The author, to '''inconceivable''' levels. "Vein-coloured eyes", "brown eyes like flying debris", and "Amber sunset eyes", anyone?
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* DenserAndWackier: As a whole, it's an even more obvious TrollFic than the original Fanfic/StarkitsProphecy, with NonstandardCharacterDesign and very... unfortunate names for many characters abound.
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* DenserAndWackier: As a whole, it's an even more obvious TrollFic than the original Fanfic/StarkitsProphecy, ''Fanfic/StarkitsProphecy'', with NonstandardCharacterDesign and very... unfortunate names for many characters abound.
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* DearNegativeReader:
-->'''[=In Chapter 4=]:''' "AN': STOMP GLAMMING THE STORY GUYZ ID YOU FONT LIEK IT YOU SONT HAVE TO READF IT GAH I BEHT YOURE ALL STANISTS WHO DONNT LIKE JWSUS."
-->'''[=In Chapter 4=]:''' "AN': STOMP GLAMMING THE STORY GUYZ ID YOU FONT LIEK IT YOU SONT HAVE TO READF IT GAH I BEHT YOURE ALL STANISTS WHO DONNT LIKE JWSUS."
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* DenserandWackier: DenserAndWackier: As a whole, it's an even more obvious TrollFic than the original Fanfic/StarkitsProphecy, with NonstandardCharacterDesign and very... unfortunate names for many characters abound.
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* BeigeProse: Just as guilty of it as the [[Fanfic/StarkitsProphcy original]].
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* BeigeProse: Just as guilty of it as the [[Fanfic/StarkitsProphcy [[Fanfic/StarkitsProphecy original]].
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* NonStandardCharacterDesign: There's at least ''one'' in each clan, excluding [=ThunderClan=] ([[AmazingTechnicolorWildlife because pretty much all of them have technicolor fur).
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* NonStandardCharacterDesign: There's at least ''one'' in each clan, excluding [=ThunderClan=] ([[AmazingTechnicolorWildlife because pretty much all of them have technicolor fur).fur]]).
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* BeigeProse
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* BeigeProseBeigeProse: Just as guilty of it as the [[Fanfic/StarkitsProphcy original]].
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* CutShort: Stopped updating after the Valentine's Day special ([[CallBack much like how the original ended after a ChristmasEpisode]]), and seeing as it's been almost a ''decade'' as of the time of writing, it most likely will never update again.
* DarkerandEdgier: The names of pretty much every Shadowclan cat; special mentions for Losthope, Depressedheart, and Ravennight.
* DarkerandEdgier: The names of pretty much every Shadowclan cat; special mentions for Losthope, Depressedheart, and Ravennight.
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* CutShort: Stopped updating after the Valentine's Day special ([[CallBack much like how the original ended after a ChristmasEpisode]]), Christmas Episode]]), and seeing as it's been almost a ''decade'' as of the time of writing, it most likely will never update again.
*DarkerandEdgier: DarknessVonGothickName: The names of pretty much every Shadowclan cat; special mentions for Losthope, Depressedheart, and Ravennight.
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* OneParagraphChapter: Well, they're a bit longer than a single paragraph, they're still all incredibly short (around 100 words long).
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* OneParagraphChapter: Well, they're a bit longer than a single paragraph, but they're still all incredibly short (around 100 words long).
