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* PrimeSuspect: In-story example, Poland gets blamed early on for the attack on Russia, while Hungary and Austria are pretty obvious suspects for Switzerland’s murder.
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* ShoutOut / SincerestFormOfFlattery: While the authoresses didn't explicitly state that they took inspiration from ''VisualNovel/HigurashiWhenTheyCry'', they have said that they have watched it in some author's notes (or the profile; forgot which one). It even has started into an odds border that they have not included kills from [[UminekoNoNakuKoroni Umineko]] yet. Some kills and/or events taken directly from ''Higurashi'' (as of now) are:

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* ShoutOut / SincerestFormOfFlattery: While the authoresses didn't explicitly state that they took inspiration from ''VisualNovel/HigurashiWhenTheyCry'', they have said that they have watched it in some author's notes (or the profile; forgot which one). It even has started into an odds border that they have not included kills from [[UminekoNoNakuKoroni [[VisualNovel/UminekoWhenTheyCry Umineko]] yet. Some kills and/or events taken directly from ''Higurashi'' (as of now) are:
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The new description did nothing to actually describe what fic was and just bashed it. Reverting it to the old one with some changes.


This story is an unfortunate one. It had heaps of potential yet it fell short due to poor writing and poor execution. The story became predictable and out of character for most characters. This story tried too hard for the shock factor that it forgot important plot points. For Example, the story often forgets important plot points, such as several murders in favor for pointless romance that only distracted from the plot. The story seemed to do anything to dwindle from the main plot points, thus when we do get some form of plot progression, it feels like connivence the musical. The Authors have repeatedly stated that they do find the romance more interesting than the plot, thus putting way too much time into the B plot rather than the A Plot. So it makes you wonder if the whole premise was only thought of in order to force a romance between the two leads.

Since it's initial release, the story was reviewed twice by two different Tumblr Blogs (Both of which, are now inactive.) Since these reviews, the backlash behind the story began to grow. This is argued to be why the fic had been deleted in late 2014. Since then, a rewrite of the story has surfaced by popular demand. The author of this story (Nine Stupid Little Killers) is the mod of one the blogs who reviews the original fic. The story has been receiving positive reviews.


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This story is an unfortunate one. It had heaps of potential yet it fell A short due to poor writing summarization: In a somewhat altered universe, all seems peaceful until a nation-killer rises, shocking all the countries of the world into a paranoid hysteria. [[YouMeddlingKids Italy, Germany and poor execution. The story became predictable Japan]] team up to solve the case, while America hides some shady secrets about his home life with his boss and out of character for most characters. This story tried too hard brother, China is forced to face a destructive force beyond his denial, and England and Japan attempt to keep their fellow countries sane despite their own inner demons. Nevertheless, as the world begins to crumble around them, it may prove difficult for the shock factor that it forgot important plot points. For Example, nations to keep both their lives and reason as [[BigBad faceless villain Black]] and his devoted seven followers start the story often forgets important plot points, such as several murders in favor for pointless romance that only distracted from process of the plot. The story seemed to do anything to dwindle from the main plot points, thus world’s end.

Although it was popular
when we do get some form of plot progression, first released, it feels like connivence was eventually criticized for the musical. The Authors have repeatedly stated that they do find poorer plotting it gained and the perceived over-emphasis on the romance more interesting than the plot, thus putting way too much time into the B plot rather than the A Plot. So it makes you wonder if the whole premise was only thought of in order to force a romance between the two leads.

Since it's initial release, the story was reviewed twice by two different Tumblr Blogs (Both of which, are now inactive.) Since these reviews, the backlash behind the story began to grow.
later on. This is argued may have contributed to be why the fic had been deleted its deletion in late 2014. Since then, a rewrite of the story has surfaced It was rewritten by popular demand. The author of this story (Nine Stupid Little Killers) is the a mod of one of the blogs who reviews reviewed the original fic. The story has been receiving positive reviews.

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A short summarization: In a somewhat altered universe, all seems peaceful until a nation-killer rises, shocking all the countries of the world into a paranoid hysteria. [[YouMeddlingKids Italy, Germany and Japan]] team up to solve the case, while America hides some shady secrets about his home life with his boss and brother, China is forced to face a destructive force beyond his denial, and England and Japan attempt to keep their fellow countries sane despite their own inner demons. Nevertheless, as the world begins to crumble around them, it may prove difficult for the nations to keep both their lives and reason as [[BigBad faceless villain Black]] and his devoted seven followers start the process of the world’s end.

Despite the bucket-loads of NightmareFuel here due to extreme amounts of gore and violence, it's truly a work of art, and is now all but exhalted in the [[Webcomic/AxisPowersHetalia Hetalia]] fandom as a brilliantly written mystery that keeps its readers on their toes.

Unfortunately, as of late 2014, the story has been deleted.

'''WARNING''': Since the story does revolve around murder and mystery, '''spoilers''' run rampant here.

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A This story is an unfortunate one. It had heaps of potential yet it fell short summarization: In a somewhat altered universe, all seems peaceful until a nation-killer rises, shocking all the countries of the world into a paranoid hysteria. [[YouMeddlingKids Italy, Germany due to poor writing and Japan]] team up to solve the case, while America hides some shady secrets about his home life with his boss poor execution. The story became predictable and brother, China is forced to face a destructive force beyond his denial, and England and Japan attempt to keep their fellow countries sane despite their own inner demons. Nevertheless, as the world begins to crumble around them, it may prove difficult out of character for most characters. This story tried too hard for the nations to keep both their lives and reason as [[BigBad faceless villain Black]] and his devoted seven followers start shock factor that it forgot important plot points. For Example, the process of story often forgets important plot points, such as several murders in favor for pointless romance that only distracted from the world’s end.

Despite
plot. The story seemed to do anything to dwindle from the bucket-loads main plot points, thus when we do get some form of NightmareFuel here due plot progression, it feels like connivence the musical. The Authors have repeatedly stated that they do find the romance more interesting than the plot, thus putting way too much time into the B plot rather than the A Plot. So it makes you wonder if the whole premise was only thought of in order to extreme amounts of gore and violence, force a romance between the two leads.

Since
it's truly a work initial release, the story was reviewed twice by two different Tumblr Blogs (Both of art, and is which, are now all but exhalted in inactive.) Since these reviews, the [[Webcomic/AxisPowersHetalia Hetalia]] fandom as a brilliantly written mystery that keeps its readers on their toes.

Unfortunately, as of
backlash behind the story began to grow. This is argued to be why the fic had been deleted in late 2014, 2014. Since then, a rewrite of the story has surfaced by popular demand. The author of this story (Nine Stupid Little Killers) is the mod of one the blogs who reviews the original fic. The story has been deleted.

'''WARNING''': Since
receiving positive reviews.


WARNING: Spoilers for
the story does revolve do run around murder and mystery, '''spoilers''' run rampant here.
here, if you really want to know them...
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* ShoutOut / SincerestFormOfFlattery: While the authoresses didn't explicitly state that they took inspiration from HigurashiNoNakuKoroNi, they have said that they have watched it in some author's notes (or the profile; forgot which one). It even has started into an odds border that they have not included kills from [[UminekoNoNakuKoroni Umineko]] yet. Some kills and/or events taken directly from ''Higurashi'' (as of now) are:

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* ShoutOut / SincerestFormOfFlattery: While the authoresses didn't explicitly state that they took inspiration from HigurashiNoNakuKoroNi, ''VisualNovel/HigurashiWhenTheyCry'', they have said that they have watched it in some author's notes (or the profile; forgot which one). It even has started into an odds border that they have not included kills from [[UminekoNoNakuKoroni Umineko]] yet. Some kills and/or events taken directly from ''Higurashi'' (as of now) are:
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Unfortunately, as of late 2014, the story has been deleted.
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5073300/1/Seven_Little_Killers Seven Little Killers]]'' is a ''AxisPowersHetalia'' fanfiction written by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1937905/Lucky_Angel135 Lucky-Angel135]] (a collaboration between [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1491188/luckystars135 luckystars135]] and [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1159839/AngelWhoIsNotASerialKiller AngelWhoIsNotASerialKiller]]) that plays as a [[DarkFic dark]] murder mystery [[SlashFic romance]].

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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5073300/1/Seven_Little_Killers Seven Little Killers]]'' is a ''AxisPowersHetalia'' ''Webcomic/AxisPowersHetalia'' fanfiction written by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1937905/Lucky_Angel135 Lucky-Angel135]] (a collaboration between [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1491188/luckystars135 luckystars135]] and [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1159839/AngelWhoIsNotASerialKiller AngelWhoIsNotASerialKiller]]) that plays as a [[DarkFic dark]] murder mystery [[SlashFic romance]].



Despite the bucket-loads of NightmareFuel here due to extreme amounts of gore and violence, it's truly a work of art, and is now all but exhalted in the [[AxisPowersHetalia Hetalia]] fandom as a brilliantly written mystery that keeps its readers on their toes.

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Despite the bucket-loads of NightmareFuel here due to extreme amounts of gore and violence, it's truly a work of art, and is now all but exhalted in the [[AxisPowersHetalia [[Webcomic/AxisPowersHetalia Hetalia]] fandom as a brilliantly written mystery that keeps its readers on their toes.
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* [[spoiler: TheUnreveal: The first suspect for Blue is America, which the reader dismisses as too obvious. America ''is'' Blue.]]

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* [[spoiler: TheUnreveal: The first suspect for Blue is America, which the reader dismisses as too obvious. America ''is'' Blue.But Blue is America.]]
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* [[spoiler: TheUnreveal: The first suspect for Blue is America, which the reader dismisses as too obvious. America ''is'' Blue.]]
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** Also averted with [[spoiler: ''all'' of America's states]].
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** [[spoiler: America]] seems to believe he'll achieve this with [[spoiler: Canada]], and as of this last chapter, it may very well be the case. As [[spoiler: Canada]] was dying, he ''did'' say he saw [[spoiler: his brother]]...
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** [[spoiler: Denmark being forced to kill Norway using his own axe.]]
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* AnyoneCanDie: Holy ''god''. NO KIDDING. Switzerland dies in the first chapter, and things get much, much worse. Fast.

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* AnyoneCanDie: Holy ''god''. NO KIDDING. Switzerland [[spoiler: Switzerland]] dies in the first chapter, and things get much, much worse. Fast.

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* [[spoiler: BetterToDieThanBeKilled: Canada invokes this when he refuses Black's help when he's drowning to death in the falls.]]



** [[TheSixthRanger The Ninth Ranger:]] [[spoiler: Orange]]

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** [[TheSixthRanger The Ninth Ranger:]] [[spoiler: Orange]]Orange [[note]]Tenth if you count Blue!America and Blue!Canada as two separate killers.[[/note]]]]



* YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefulness: [[spoiler: Poor Canada gets this from America and Black.]]

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* YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefulness: [[spoiler: Poor Canada gets this from America and Black.]]

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*** [[spoiler: Heck, they even quote the game at the end of the first Blind Chapter of the Blue Arc.]]

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*** ** [[spoiler: The question Blue asks Vietnam and his subsequent reaction is suspiciously similar to the one Takano asks Satoko in Minagoroshi-hen.]]
-->[[spoiler: Blue (to Vietnam): ''What is the difference between a toad and a frog?]]
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[[spoiler: Heck, they even quote the game at the end of the first Blind Chapter of the Blue Arc.]]
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-->'"Someone. Please solve this case. It's a pathetic and heartbreaking case. So please..."'

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-->'"Someone.-->[[spoiler: ''"Someone. Please solve this case. It's a pathetic and heartbreaking case. So please..."'"'']]
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-->"Someone. Please solve this case. It's a pathetic and heartbreaking case. So please..."

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-->"Someone.-->'"Someone. Please solve this case. It's a pathetic and heartbreaking case. So please...""'
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*** [[spoiler: Heck, they even quote the game at the end of the first Blind Chapter of the Blue Arc.]]
-->"Someone. Please solve this case. It's a pathetic and heartbreaking case. So please..."
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* [[WhatTheHellHero What The Hell, Hero?]]: [[spoiler: America]]. Just…[[spoiler: America]].

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* [[WhatTheHellHero What The Hell, Hero?]]: [[spoiler: America]]. Just…[[spoiler: America]].


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* {{Woobie Destroyer of Worlds}}: [[spoiler: America especially when you consider how bad his mental state is.]]
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** [[spoiler: Averted with Nussia.]]

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* InfantImmortality: Surprisingly, none of the micronations are dead yet.



* ThemeNaming: Every chapter is named after a publicly known serial killer, respectively.

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* ThemeNaming: Every chapter in the Blue arc is named after a publicly known serial killer, respectively.while those in the Yellow arc are named after torture devices.

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* SpotTheImposter: Japan unable to tell the difference between [[spoiler: America and Canada.]]



* YourDaysAreNumbered: Everyone, although [[spoiler: America, Russia and China]] were targeted specifically [[spoiler: for being the “Big Three”]].
* SpotTheImposter: Japan unable to tell the difference between [[spoiler: America and Canada.]]

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* YourDaysAreNumbered: Everyone, although [[spoiler: America, Russia and China]] were targeted specifically [[spoiler: for being the “Big Three”]].
* SpotTheImposter: Japan unable to tell the difference between [[spoiler: America and Canada.]]
Three”]].
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* CorruptTheCutie: [[spoiler: [[IncrediblyLamePun Oh, Canada… Stick America in here too. And I'll bet we'll see more. As of Chapter 43, England is now firmly in that pile.]]]]

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* CorruptTheCutie: [[spoiler: [[IncrediblyLamePun Oh, Canada… Canada…]] Stick America in here too. And I'll bet we'll see more. As of Chapter 43, England is now firmly in that pile.]]]]]]
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* [[spoiler: AngstySurvivingTwin: Italy and America.]]
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** Well, unless some of them are acting or faked their deaths...
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** [[spoiler:Ukraine/Orange was convinced to kill Lithuania and Russia by Yellow.]]
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** What? No love for [[spoiler:Ukraine]]? Though, admittedly, [[spoiler:her slow breaking/corruption took place offscreen. See chapters 40-42 for the [[SarcasmMode resultant fun]].]]

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