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* AscendedToCarnivorism: Esteem indulges in eating meat, which is an anathema to most ponies.

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* MindHive: Celestia can split her mind into at least three separate consciousnesses, each able to concentrate on a different train of thought. [[spoiler: Twilight also acquires this skill after being freed of Nihilus.]]

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** According to the author, all of the mane six will take multiple levels in badass, yes even Fluttershy.

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* AGodAmI: Said by Luna, before her fight against Nihilus in Cloudsdale.
** After the same fight, Nihilus wonders [[spoiler:what defeating a god makes her]]

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* AddedAlliterativeAppeal: Nihilus Nyx Naught

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* AddedAlliterativeAppeal: Nihilus ~~Nyx~~ Nix Naught

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Dec 19th 2011 at 10:09:47 PM

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* BadassPrincess: Celestia and Luna both qualify.

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* BloodIsTheNewBlack: Esteem "spreads" a helpless pony all over himself and Rarity. Then he apologizes for not considering that the color doesn't go with her mane, like it does his.

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* DidYouJustPunchOutCthulhu: [[spoiler: Rainbow Dash kicks Titan's avatar in the face. It doesn't do much, but it distracts it long enough for Rarity to slice it in half with her blade.]]

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* DarkIsNotEvil: Luna, especially in later chapters
* DidYouJustPunchOutCthulhu: [[spoiler: Rainbow Dash kicks Titan's avatar in the face. It doesn't do much, but it distracts it long enough for ~~Rarity~~ Luna to slice it in half with her blade.]]

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* FightingFromTheInside: Dash struggles with Wrong, trying to resist it's control over her. It doesn't go well.

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* FightingFromTheInside: Dash struggles with ~~Wrong,~~ the Insanity, trying to resist it's control over her. It doesn't go well.

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* HealingFactor: All Earth Ponies [[spoiler: and Fluttershy ]] seem to possess this in varying degrees, Applejack's in particular seems to be rather powerful.

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* HealingFactor: All Earth Ponies [[spoiler: and Fluttershy ]] seem to possess this in varying degrees, Applejack's in particular seems to be rather ~~powerful.~~ powerful.
* HellishPupils: Nihilus gets a glowing red iris around a slitted pupil where [[spoiler: Esteem drove the sliver through her eye]].

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* [[MasterSwordsman Master Bladecaster]]: Esteem. As he notes that Rarity is the strongest bladecaster he's ever met other than himself, Rarity may fit this trope as well.

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* MindRape: The Insanity does this to Rainbow Dash whenever she even thinks about resisting one of Nihilus's orders.

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* WeCanRuleTogether: Esteem tries this with Rarity. She refuses and proceeds to [[CallingTheOldManOut call him out]].

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* WeCanRuleTogether: Esteem tries this with Rarity. She refuses and proceeds to [[CallingTheOldManOut call him ~~out]].~~out]].
* [[WorldsMostBeautifulWoman Worlds Most Beautiful Mare]]: Terra.

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[[quoteright:280:http://static.tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pub/images/Nihilus_Wrong-2_7986.jpg]]
[[caption-width-right:280:“You will not call me Twilight. My name is Nihilus.”]]

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* OminousFloatingCastle: Nihilus' floating citadel

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* Hammerspace: Twilight/Nihilus' null-space

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* ~~Hammerspace:~~ {{Hammerspace}}: Twilight/Nihilus' null-space

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* AxeCrazy: Nihilus in spades. Wrong!Dash also

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* AxeCrazy: Nihilus in ~~spades. Wrong!Dash also~~spades, Wrong as well.

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* [[spoiler: DisneyDeath: Fluttershy ]]

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* ~~[[spoiler: DisneyDeath:~~ DisneyDeath:[[spoiler: Fluttershy ]]

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* Hammerspace: Twilight/Nihilus' null-space

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* ColdBloodedTorture: [[spoiler: Inflicted on the depowered Celestia by [[EvilMatriarch Terra]], her own mother.]]

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* DidYouJustPunchOutCthulhu: [[spoiler: Rainbow Dash kicks Titan's avatar in the face. It doesn't do much, but it distracts it long enough for Rarity to slice it in half with her blade.]]

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* MightyGlacier: Applejack

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* TreacherousAdvisor: General Esteem was this to Celestia.

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* TreacherousAdvisor: General Esteem was this to ~~Celestia.~~Celestia.
* WeCanRuleTogether: Esteem tries this with Rarity. She refuses and proceeds to [[CallingTheOldManOut call him out]].

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* BrainwashResidue: [[spoiler: Although Dash is freed from Nihilus' mind control, she's still subconsciously compelled to obey Twilight Sparkle.]]

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* SocialDarwinist: Titan and his disciple [[spoiler:Esteem.]]
* TreacherousAdvisor: General Esteem was this to Celestia.

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* CallingTheOldManOut: Rarity

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* HeroWithBadPublicity : Luna

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* ~~HeroWithBadPublicity :~~ HeroWithBadPublicity: Luna

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* IAmNotMyFather: Rarity

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* {{Mooks}} : The Puppets

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* ~~{{Mooks}} :~~ {{Mooks}}: The Puppets

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Dec 14th 2011 at 5:09:28 AM

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* ActionGirl: Rarity, Applejack, Rainbow Dash and Princess Luna Most notably, although Pinkie and Fluttershy have their moments as well

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* ~~ActionGirl:~~ [[ActionGirl Action Mares]]: Rarity, Applejack, Rainbow Dash and Princess Luna Most notably, although Pinkie and Fluttershy have their moments as well

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* Mook s : The Puppets

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* ~~Mook s~~ {{Mooks}} : The Puppets

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Dec 14th 2011 at 5:04:38 AM

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* Mooks : The Puppets

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* ~~Mooks~~ Mook s : The Puppets

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Dec 10th 2011 at 11:37:58 PM

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* Mooks: The Puppets

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* ~~Mooks:~~ Mooks : The Puppets

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Dec 10th 2011 at 11:37:25 PM

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* HealingFactor: All Earth Ponies [[Spoiler: and Fluttershy]] seem to possess this in varying degrees, Applejack's in particular seems to be rather powerful.

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* HealingFactor: All Earth Ponies ~~[[Spoiler:~~ [[spoiler: and ~~Fluttershy]]~~ Fluttershy ]] seem to possess this in varying degrees, Applejack's in particular seems to be rather powerful.

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* AirborneMook: The Pegasus Puppets

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* LadyOfWar: Rarity

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* HeroWithBadPublicity : Luna
* HealingFactor: All Earth Ponies [[Spoiler: and Fluttershy]] seem to possess this in varying degrees, Applejack's in particular seems to be rather powerful.
* LadyOfWar: ~~Rarity~~Rarity
* Mooks: The Puppets

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* CompleteMonster: Nihilus

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* Complete Monster: Nihilus

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* ~~Complete Monster:~~ CompleteMonster: Nihilus

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* Complete Monster: Nihilus

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Dec 9th 2011 at 4:29:53 PM

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* AndIMustScream: Twilight. She’s unable to stop her [[SuperpoweredEvilSide]], Nihilus from trying to kill her friends.

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* AndIMustScream: Twilight. She’s unable to stop her ~~[[SuperpoweredEvilSide]], Nihilus~~ {{SuperpoweredEvilSide}}, Nihilus, from trying to kill her friends.

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Nihilus\'s name was spelled wrong. Also made colon spacing more consistent.

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* ActionGirl: Rarity, Applejack, Rainbow Dash and Princess Luna Most notably, though, Pinkie and Fluttershy have their moments as well
* AbsurdlySharpBlade : Rarity’s blade, Vorpal
* AddedAlliterativeAppeal: Nihlius Nyx Naught
* AndIMustScream: Twilight. She’s unable to stop her [[SuperpoweredEvilSide]], Nihlius from trying to kill her friends.

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* ActionGirl: Rarity, Applejack, Rainbow Dash and Princess Luna Most notably, ~~though,~~ although Pinkie and Fluttershy have their moments as well
* ~~AbsurdlySharpBlade :~~ AbsurdlySharpBlade: Rarity’s blade, Vorpal
* AddedAlliterativeAppeal: ~~Nihlius~~ Nihilus Nyx Naught
* AndIMustScream: Twilight. She’s unable to stop her [[SuperpoweredEvilSide]], ~~Nihlius~~ Nihilus from trying to kill her friends.

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* AxeCrazy: Nihlius in spades. Wrong!Dash also
* BigBad : Titan
* BloodKnight: Nihlius and Esteem both fit this trope quite nicely
* BreakTheCutie : Pinkie Pie gets hit hard by this after [[spoiler: she thinks that Wrong!Dash supposedly kills Fluttershy]]
* TookALevelInBadass : Rarity is the most notable, though most of the mane cast take a few levels themselves
* TheChessmaster Celestia
* [[spoiler: DisneyDeath : Fluttershy ]]
* FightingFromTheInside : Dash struggles with Wrong, trying to resist it's control over her. It doesn't go well.
* LadyOfWar : Rarity

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* AxeCrazy: ~~Nihlius~~ Nihilus in spades. Wrong!Dash also
* ~~BigBad :~~ BigBad: Titan
* BloodKnight: ~~Nihlius~~ Nihilus and Esteem both fit this trope quite nicely
* ~~BreakTheCutie :~~ BreakTheCutie: Pinkie Pie gets hit hard by this after [[spoiler: she thinks that Wrong!Dash ~~supposedly kills~~ killed Fluttershy]]
* ~~TookALevelInBadass :~~ TookALevelInBadass: Rarity is the most notable, though most of the mane cast take a few levels themselves
* ~~TheChessmaster~~ TheChessmaster: Celestia
* [[spoiler: ~~DisneyDeath :~~ DisneyDeath: Fluttershy ]]
* ~~FightingFromTheInside :~~ FightingFromTheInside: Dash struggles with Wrong, trying to resist it's control over her. It doesn't go well.
* ~~LadyOfWar :~~ LadyOfWar: Rarity

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* LadyOfWar : Rarity

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* CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming : When Fluttershy comforts Twilight after she finds her way back to the Loyalist’s base.