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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6038980/1/Points_of_Familiarity Points of Familiarity]]'' by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1211674/Charles_Bhepin Charles Bhepin]] is a crossover fic between ''Anime/NeonGenesisEvangelion'' and ''LightNovel/TheFamiliarOfZero'', wherein Louise summons a [[HumanoidAbomination post-Third-Impact]] Shinji Ikari as her familiar.
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6038980/1/Points_of_Familiarity Points of Familiarity]]'' by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1211674/Charles_Bhepin Charles Bhepin]] is a crossover fic between ''Anime/NeonGenesisEvangelion'' and ''LightNovel/TheFamiliarOfZero'', ''Literature/TheFamiliarOfZero'', wherein Louise summons a [[HumanoidAbomination post-Third-Impact]] Shinji Ikari as her familiar.
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!!See ''Anime/NeonGenesisEvangelion'' and ''LightNovel/TheFamiliarOfZero'' for the tropes of those respective universes.
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* AntiHero: Shinji has a spectacular number of issues.
* AristocratsAreEvil:
** Siesta believes this about nobles in general.
** Count Mott actually is.
* TheAtoner: Shinji.
* BeehiveBarrier: The AT-Field
* TheBerserker: Shinji in combat, if he lets himself.
* BadassBoast: This is a Bhepin fic. Badass Boasts are guaranteed.
* BloodMagic: The production of the [[spoiler:Masks]].
* ChefOfIron: Shinji.
* ChildSoldier: Tabitha's background, apparently.
* AristocratsAreEvil:
** Siesta believes this about nobles in general.
** Count Mott actually is.
* TheAtoner: Shinji.
* BeehiveBarrier: The AT-Field
* TheBerserker: Shinji in combat, if he lets himself.
* BadassBoast: This is a Bhepin fic. Badass Boasts are guaranteed.
* BloodMagic: The production of the [[spoiler:Masks]].
* ChefOfIron: Shinji.
* ChildSoldier: Tabitha's background, apparently.
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* DeadFic
* DeathSeeker: Shinji
* EccentricMentor: Old Osmond, apparently.
* DeathSeeker: Shinji
* EccentricMentor: Old Osmond, apparently.
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*
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* KnifeNut
* MagicVersusScience / {{Magitek}}: The mysterious faction of "Sasaki" and Roland.
* MaskOfPower: Worn during the "assault" on Count Mott.
* MindHive: The Well of Souls.
* MagicVersusScience / {{Magitek}}: The mysterious faction of "Sasaki" and Roland.
* MaskOfPower: Worn during the "assault" on Count Mott.
* MindHive: The Well of Souls.
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* WouldHitAGirl: Neither Shinji nor certain ... personages within the Well of Souls take kindly to Kirche's attempts at seduction.
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** "''PROGRAM LOAD: [[FistOfTheNorthStar Hokuto Shin Ke-]]''" for one.
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** "''PROGRAM LOAD: [[FistOfTheNorthStar [[Manga/FistOfTheNorthStar Hokuto Shin Ke-]]''" for one.
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** [[{{Hellsing}} "Yes, my Master."]]
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** [[{{Hellsing}} [[Manga/{{Hellsing}} "Yes, my Master."]]
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** [[{{Tsukihime}} 'This chair this chair this chair.']]
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** [[{{Tsukihime}} [[VisualNovel/{{Tsukihime}} 'This chair this chair this chair.']]
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* {{Badass}}: Tabitha challenges Shinji, then proceeds to battle him to a savage draw, because she did not take kindly to him hitting Kirche for ''any'' reason.
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** Roland has a [[GhostInTheShell thermoptic cloak]].
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** Roland has a [[GhostInTheShell [[Franchise/GhostInTheShell thermoptic cloak]].
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* TakeThat: To ''FullmetalAlchemist'': "They have the Philosopher's Stone as a basic lesson. EquivalentExchange my ass!"
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* TakeThat: To ''FullmetalAlchemist'': ''Manga/FullmetalAlchemist'': "They have the Philosopher's Stone as a basic lesson. EquivalentExchange my ass!"
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6038980/1/Points_of_Familiarity Points of Familiarity]]'' by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1211674/Charles_Bhepin Charles Bhepin]] is a crossover fic between ''Anime/NeonGenesisEvangelion'' and ''LightNovel/ZeroNoTsukaima'', wherein Louise summons a [[HumanoidAbomination post-Third-Impact]] Shinji Ikari as her familiar.
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6038980/1/Points_of_Familiarity Points of Familiarity]]'' by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1211674/Charles_Bhepin Charles Bhepin]] is a crossover fic between ''Anime/NeonGenesisEvangelion'' and ''LightNovel/ZeroNoTsukaima'', ''LightNovel/TheFamiliarOfZero'', wherein Louise summons a [[HumanoidAbomination post-Third-Impact]] Shinji Ikari as her familiar.
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!!See ''Anime/NeonGenesisEvangelion'' and ''LightNovel/ZeroNoTsukaima'' for the tropes of those respective universes.
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!!See ''Anime/NeonGenesisEvangelion'' and ''LightNovel/ZeroNoTsukaima'' ''LightNovel/TheFamiliarOfZero'' for the tropes of those respective universes.
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As of chapter 6, Bhepin has declared the fic dead, spoiled the rest of this version of the story, and started work on a [[http://forums.spacebattles.com/showthread.php?t=209481 rewrite]], titled ''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7620797/1/Surrogate_of_Zero Surrogate of Zero]]'', promising "[[WordOfGod A smaller scope, a tighter narrative, less innuendo.]]" Discussion threads for ''Surrogate'' at Spacebattles.com can be found [[http://forums.spacebattles.com/showthread.php?t=209481 here]] and [[http://forums.spacebattles.com/showthread.php?t=212364 here]].
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As of chapter 6, Bhepin has declared the fic dead, spoiled the rest of this version of the story, and started work on a [[http://forums.spacebattles.com/showthread.php?t=209481 rewrite]], titled ''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7620797/1/Surrogate_of_Zero Surrogate of Zero]]'', promising "[[WordOfGod A smaller scope, a tighter narrative, less innuendo.]]" Discussion threads for ''Surrogate'' at Spacebattles.com can be found [[http://forums.spacebattles.com/showthread.php?t=209481 here]] and [[http://forums.spacebattles.com/showthread.php?t=212364 here]].
''Fanfic/SurrogateOfZero''.
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!!''Surrogate of Zero'' provides examples of the following:
* AlienNonInterferenceClause: It's first {{defied|Trope}} when Asuka tells Shinji to ask Louise for details about Halkeginian magic, and then {{discussed|Trope}} later in dialogue between Asuka and Shinji, and [[spoiler:Asuka and Rei]].
* AnimalsHateHim: {{ZigZagg|ingTrope}}ed. Kirche's fire lizard is afraid of Shinji, but Tabitha's dragon just bites his head and slobbers on him in nothing more than apparent curiosity.
* AristocratsAreEvil: The commoners generally see the nobles as this, especially when they think that Louise stole Shinji away from his prior life to be her familiar.
* BodySurf: [[spoiler:Rei]] emerges through Shinji and comes close to [[spoiler:"tanging" Siesta before she's stopped by Asuka]].
* CanisLatinicus: Asuka refers to Shinji as ''Shinjicus Ikaricus Inepticus'', Louise as ''Louise-la-Vallieries Tsunderis Jailbaitus'', and Tabitha as ''Tabithas Neotenus Badasseri''.
* CurbStompBattle: Shinji utterly dominates [[spoiler:Guiche]] in their duel.
* DeathByChildbirth: Just as in ''Points'', although the details are still unknown. What's established is that [[spoiler:it was a girl. Also, the baby's skeleton is referred to as "hand-sized", and Asuka calls her "aborted" at one point, hinting that Asuka may have died from a miscarriage]].
* ExpositionBeam: Shinji gives Louise, Colbert, Osmond, and Longueville an idea of his past and what he had to deal with by having them each relive [[spoiler:his experience of piloting Unit 01 against Sachiel]].
* EyeScream: The experience of [[spoiler:Sachiel impaling Unit 01's head through its eye]] is described in detail during the ExpositionBeam scene. Also, see YourMindMakesItReal below.
* FirstPersonSmartass: Asuka's narration frequently drifts into this, especially when she and Shinji are "talking" directly to each other. That said, no one is safe from her snark (except Tabitha, to some extent).
* GodGuise: In order to cover up his AT-field tricks, Shinji sets up Asuka as a goddess of war, [[spoiler:her skull]] being a holy relic that gives its wielder power. The intro to ch. 6 is a discussion between [[spoiler:Asuka and Rei]] about expanding the "pantheon."
* GrievousHarmWithABody [=/=] OneHitKO: Shinji and [[spoiler:Guiche]]'s duel ends with Shinji [[spoiler:beaning Guiche with Asuka's skull]].
* HumanoidAbomination [=/=] MindHive: Shinji is, as labeled by Asuka, ''Homo Apotheosis'': the embodiment of the Well of Souls created in Third Impact. In other words, he's an Angel.
* ImprovisedWeapon: Asuka describes [[spoiler:her skull]] as this during Shinji's duel.
* InteractiveNarrator:
** Asuka's narration sits on both sides of the fourth wall--it's not only a foundation of the story, Shinji hears most (if not all) of it in his head.
** [[spoiler:Rei]] tries to be this but is rebuffed by Asuka. However, the two of them do converse "behind the scenes" about certain issues.
* LighterAndSofter: ''Surrogate'' is much more comedic in tone than ''Points'', although the fundamental seriousness is still present.
* MementoMacguffin: [[spoiler:Asuka's skull.]] For Shinji, it's a reminder of what he's lost, a sentimental token of their relationship, and a potent weapon. [[spoiler:It later becomes a way for Longueville to get access to the school's Vault once Shinji turns it over to the school.]]
* MindlinkMates: Shinji and Asuka, as a result of [[spoiler:her soul having rejoined the Well of Souls after her second death]].
* MisterSeahorse: A ''very'' odd take. Some of Shinji's behaviors lead Asuka to note that by [[spoiler:taking their unborn daughter's soul into himself]], he's made himself metaphysically pregnant.
* NoSell: Neither Shinji nor [[spoiler:Asuka's skull]] are affected by Halkegenian magic in the slightest, aside from Shinji acquiring the runes on his hand as part of the familiar binding spell.
* RapeIsASpecialKindOfEvil: Guiche has no love lost for Count Mott, primarily because of his predatory ways.
-->[...] don't you dare compare a Gramont to a Mott! Someone who forces himself onto a woman is scum! Though there are those who despise the well-earned reputation of the Gramont, never have we taken liberties with a woman without her willing consent! To us, the face of Mott is the face of the enemy!
* ShoutOut: Bpen continues his penchant for them, but he takes it a step further by having Shinji {{lampshade|Hanging}} their use in Asuka's narration, which she [[JustifiedTrope defends]] as a means of helping make sense of their circumstances.
** [[Series/{{Batman}} nananananana Asukaaah!]]
** [[Franchise/StarTrek He is off to explore new worlds, new civilizations, [...]]]
** [[Series/BattlestarGalacticaClassic "By your command, Mistress."]]
** A familiar in one of Louise's classes is described by Asuka as a [[TabletopGame/DungeonsAndDragons Beholderkin]].
** Asuka compares a possibility of Shinji going to rescue Siesta to [[Franchise/SuperMarioBros Mario]].
* TragicKeepsake: When Shinji goes to Halkegenia, he takes two of these with him: [[spoiler:the skulls of Asuka and their baby, the former of which Shinji transforms into an Angelic core in his body]].
* YourMindMakesItReal: Because of the ExpositionBeam[=/=]EyeScream above, Louise, Osmond, Colbert, and Longueville all bleed from their right eyes as a side effect.
* AlienNonInterferenceClause: It's first {{defied|Trope}} when Asuka tells Shinji to ask Louise for details about Halkeginian magic, and then {{discussed|Trope}} later in dialogue between Asuka and Shinji, and [[spoiler:Asuka and Rei]].
* AnimalsHateHim: {{ZigZagg|ingTrope}}ed. Kirche's fire lizard is afraid of Shinji, but Tabitha's dragon just bites his head and slobbers on him in nothing more than apparent curiosity.
* AristocratsAreEvil: The commoners generally see the nobles as this, especially when they think that Louise stole Shinji away from his prior life to be her familiar.
* BodySurf: [[spoiler:Rei]] emerges through Shinji and comes close to [[spoiler:"tanging" Siesta before she's stopped by Asuka]].
* CanisLatinicus: Asuka refers to Shinji as ''Shinjicus Ikaricus Inepticus'', Louise as ''Louise-la-Vallieries Tsunderis Jailbaitus'', and Tabitha as ''Tabithas Neotenus Badasseri''.
* CurbStompBattle: Shinji utterly dominates [[spoiler:Guiche]] in their duel.
* DeathByChildbirth: Just as in ''Points'', although the details are still unknown. What's established is that [[spoiler:it was a girl. Also, the baby's skeleton is referred to as "hand-sized", and Asuka calls her "aborted" at one point, hinting that Asuka may have died from a miscarriage]].
* ExpositionBeam: Shinji gives Louise, Colbert, Osmond, and Longueville an idea of his past and what he had to deal with by having them each relive [[spoiler:his experience of piloting Unit 01 against Sachiel]].
* EyeScream: The experience of [[spoiler:Sachiel impaling Unit 01's head through its eye]] is described in detail during the ExpositionBeam scene. Also, see YourMindMakesItReal below.
* FirstPersonSmartass: Asuka's narration frequently drifts into this, especially when she and Shinji are "talking" directly to each other. That said, no one is safe from her snark (except Tabitha, to some extent).
* GodGuise: In order to cover up his AT-field tricks, Shinji sets up Asuka as a goddess of war, [[spoiler:her skull]] being a holy relic that gives its wielder power. The intro to ch. 6 is a discussion between [[spoiler:Asuka and Rei]] about expanding the "pantheon."
* GrievousHarmWithABody [=/=] OneHitKO: Shinji and [[spoiler:Guiche]]'s duel ends with Shinji [[spoiler:beaning Guiche with Asuka's skull]].
* HumanoidAbomination [=/=] MindHive: Shinji is, as labeled by Asuka, ''Homo Apotheosis'': the embodiment of the Well of Souls created in Third Impact. In other words, he's an Angel.
* ImprovisedWeapon: Asuka describes [[spoiler:her skull]] as this during Shinji's duel.
* InteractiveNarrator:
** Asuka's narration sits on both sides of the fourth wall--it's not only a foundation of the story, Shinji hears most (if not all) of it in his head.
** [[spoiler:Rei]] tries to be this but is rebuffed by Asuka. However, the two of them do converse "behind the scenes" about certain issues.
* LighterAndSofter: ''Surrogate'' is much more comedic in tone than ''Points'', although the fundamental seriousness is still present.
* MementoMacguffin: [[spoiler:Asuka's skull.]] For Shinji, it's a reminder of what he's lost, a sentimental token of their relationship, and a potent weapon. [[spoiler:It later becomes a way for Longueville to get access to the school's Vault once Shinji turns it over to the school.]]
* MindlinkMates: Shinji and Asuka, as a result of [[spoiler:her soul having rejoined the Well of Souls after her second death]].
* MisterSeahorse: A ''very'' odd take. Some of Shinji's behaviors lead Asuka to note that by [[spoiler:taking their unborn daughter's soul into himself]], he's made himself metaphysically pregnant.
* NoSell: Neither Shinji nor [[spoiler:Asuka's skull]] are affected by Halkegenian magic in the slightest, aside from Shinji acquiring the runes on his hand as part of the familiar binding spell.
* RapeIsASpecialKindOfEvil: Guiche has no love lost for Count Mott, primarily because of his predatory ways.
-->[...] don't you dare compare a Gramont to a Mott! Someone who forces himself onto a woman is scum! Though there are those who despise the well-earned reputation of the Gramont, never have we taken liberties with a woman without her willing consent! To us, the face of Mott is the face of the enemy!
* ShoutOut: Bpen continues his penchant for them, but he takes it a step further by having Shinji {{lampshade|Hanging}} their use in Asuka's narration, which she [[JustifiedTrope defends]] as a means of helping make sense of their circumstances.
** [[Series/{{Batman}} nananananana Asukaaah!]]
** [[Franchise/StarTrek He is off to explore new worlds, new civilizations, [...]]]
** [[Series/BattlestarGalacticaClassic "By your command, Mistress."]]
** A familiar in one of Louise's classes is described by Asuka as a [[TabletopGame/DungeonsAndDragons Beholderkin]].
** Asuka compares a possibility of Shinji going to rescue Siesta to [[Franchise/SuperMarioBros Mario]].
* TragicKeepsake: When Shinji goes to Halkegenia, he takes two of these with him: [[spoiler:the skulls of Asuka and their baby, the former of which Shinji transforms into an Angelic core in his body]].
* YourMindMakesItReal: Because of the ExpositionBeam[=/=]EyeScream above, Louise, Osmond, Colbert, and Longueville all bleed from their right eyes as a side effect.
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* EyeScream: Louise, Osmond, Colbert, and Miss Longueville get to experience [[spoiler:Sachiel putting out Unit 01's eye]] thanks to the memory of it happening to Shinji. Also, see YourMindMakesItReal below.
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* ExpositionBeam: Shinji gives Louise, Colbert, Osmond, and Longueville an idea of his past and what he had to deal with by having them each relive [[spoiler:his experience of piloting Unit 01 against Sachiel]].
* EyeScream:Louise, Osmond, Colbert, and Miss Longueville get to The experience of [[spoiler:Sachiel putting out impaling Unit 01's head through its eye]] thanks to is described in detail during the memory of it happening to Shinji.ExpositionBeam scene. Also, see YourMindMakesItReal below.
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* YourMindMakesItReal: Because of the EyeScream above, Louise, Osmond, Colbert, and Longueville all bleed from their right eyes as a side effect.
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* YourMindMakesItReal: Because of the EyeScream ExpositionBeam[=/=]EyeScream above, Louise, Osmond, Colbert, and Longueville all bleed from their right eyes as a side effect.
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* GrievousHarmWithABody [=/=] OneHitKO: Shinji and [[spoiler:Guiche]]'s duel ends with Shinji [[spoiler:beaning Guiche with Asuka's skull]].
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* AnimalsHateHim: {{ZigZagg|ingTrope}}ed. Kirche's fire lizard is afraid of Shinji, but Tabitha's just bites his head and slobbers on him in nothing more than apparent curiosity.
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* AnimalsHateHim: {{ZigZagg|ingTrope}}ed. Kirche's fire lizard is afraid of Shinji, but Tabitha's dragon just bites his head and slobbers on him in nothing more than apparent curiosity.
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* FirstPersonSmartass: Asuka's narration frequently drifts into this.
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* FirstPersonSmartass: Asuka's narration frequently drifts into this.this, especially when she and Shinji are "talking" directly to each other. That said, no one is safe from her snark (except Tabitha, to some extent).
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* AlienNonInterferenceClause: It's first {{defied|Trope}} when Asuka tells Shinji to ask Louise for details about Halkeginian magic, and then {{discussed|Trope}} later in [[spoiler:Asuka and Rei's dialogue]].
* AnimalsHateHim: {{ZigZagg|ingTrope}}ed. Kirche's fire lizard acts fearful of Shinji, but Tabitha's just bites his head and slobbers on him in nothing more than apparent curiosity.
* AnimalsHateHim: {{ZigZagg|ingTrope}}ed. Kirche's fire lizard acts fearful of Shinji, but Tabitha's just bites his head and slobbers on him in nothing more than apparent curiosity.
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* AlienNonInterferenceClause: It's first {{defied|Trope}} when Asuka tells Shinji to ask Louise for details about Halkeginian magic, and then {{discussed|Trope}} later in dialogue between Asuka and Shinji, and [[spoiler:Asuka and Rei's dialogue]].
Rei]].
* AnimalsHateHim: {{ZigZagg|ingTrope}}ed. Kirche's fire lizardacts fearful is afraid of Shinji, but Tabitha's just bites his head and slobbers on him in nothing more than apparent curiosity.
* AnimalsHateHim: {{ZigZagg|ingTrope}}ed. Kirche's fire lizard
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* DeathByChildbirth: Just as in ''Points'', although the details are still unknown. What's established is that [[spoiler:the skeleton of the baby is referred to as "hand-sized", hinting that Asuka may have died from a miscarriage.]]
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* DeathByChildbirth: Just as in ''Points'', although the details are still unknown. What's established is that [[spoiler:the [[spoiler:it was a girl. Also, the baby's skeleton of the baby is referred to as "hand-sized", and Asuka calls her "aborted" at one point, hinting that Asuka may have died from a miscarriage.]]miscarriage]].
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* HumanoidAbomination[=/=]MindHive: Shinji is, as labeled by Asuka, ''Homo Apotheosis'': the embodiment of the Well of Souls created in Third Impact. In other words, he's an Angel.
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* HumanoidAbomination[=/=]MindHive: HumanoidAbomination [=/=] MindHive: Shinji is, as labeled by Asuka, ''Homo Apotheosis'': the embodiment of the Well of Souls created in Third Impact. In other words, he's an Angel.
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* MisterSeahorse: A ''very'' odd take. Some of Shinji's behaviors lead Asuka to note that by [[spoiler:taking their unborn daughter's soul into himself]], he's made himself metaphysically pregnant.
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* LittleMissBadass: Asuka sees Tabitha as this almost immediate after Shinji first meets her.
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* CanisLatinicus: Asuka refers to Shinji as ''Shinjicus Ikaricus Inepticus'' and Louise as ''Louise-la-Vallieries Tsunderis Jailbaitus''.
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* CanisLatinicus: Asuka refers to Shinji as ''Shinjicus Ikaricus Inepticus'' and Inepticus'', Louise as ''Louise-la-Vallieries Tsunderis Jailbaitus''.Jailbaitus'', and Tabitha as ''Tabithas Neotenus Badasseri''.
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* RapeIsASpecialKindOfEvil: Guiche has no love lost for Count Mott, primarily because of his predatory ways.
-->[...] don't you dare compare a Gramont to a Mott! Someone who forces himself onto a woman is scum! Though there are those who despise the well-earned reputation of the Gramont, never have we taken liberties with a woman without her willing consent! To us, the face of Mott is the face of the enemy!
-->[...] don't you dare compare a Gramont to a Mott! Someone who forces himself onto a woman is scum! Though there are those who despise the well-earned reputation of the Gramont, never have we taken liberties with a woman without her willing consent! To us, the face of Mott is the face of the enemy!
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* GodGuise: In order to cover up his AT-field tricks, Shinji sets up Asuka as a goddess of war, [[spoiler:her skull]] being a holy relic that gives its wielder power. The intro to ch. 6 is a discussion between [[spoiler:Asuka and Rei]] about expanding the "pantheon."
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* HumanoidAbomination: Shinji is, as labeled by Asuka, ''Homo Apotheosis'': the embodiment of the Well of Souls created in Third Impact. In other words, he's an Angel.
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* AnimalsHateHim: {{ZigZagg|ingTrope}}ed. Kirche's fire lizard acts fearful of him, but Tabitha's just bites his head and slobbers on him in nothing more than apparent curiosity.
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* AnimalsHateHim: {{ZigZagg|ingTrope}}ed. Kirche's fire lizard acts fearful of him, Shinji, but Tabitha's just bites his head and slobbers on him in nothing more than apparent curiosity.
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* AnimalsHateHim: {{Zig-Zagg|ingTrope}}ed.{{ZigZagg|ingTrope}}ed. Kirche's fire lizard acts fearful of him, but Tabitha's just bites his head and slobbers on him in nothing more than apparent curiosity.
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* DeathByChildbirth: Just as in ''Points'', although the details are still unknown. What's established is that [[spoiler:the skeleton of the baby is hand-sized, hinting that Asuka may have died from a miscarriage.]]
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* DeathByChildbirth: Just as in ''Points'', although the details are still unknown. What's established is that [[spoiler:the skeleton of the baby is hand-sized, referred to as "hand-sized", hinting that Asuka may have died from a miscarriage.]]
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* MementoMacguffin: [[spoiler:Asuka's skull.]] For Shinji, it's a reminder of what he's lost, a sentimental token, and a potent weapon. [[spoiler:It later becomes a way for Longueville to get access to the school's Vault once Shinji turns it over to the school.]]
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* MementoMacguffin: [[spoiler:Asuka's skull.]] For Shinji, it's a reminder of what he's lost, a sentimental token, token of their relationship, and a potent weapon. [[spoiler:It later becomes a way for Longueville to get access to the school's Vault once Shinji turns it over to the school.]]
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** One of the familiars in Louise's class is described by Asuka as a [[TabletopGame/DungeonsAndDragons Beholderkin]].
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** One A familiar in one of the familiars in Louise's class classes is described by Asuka as a [[TabletopGame/DungeonsAndDragons Beholderkin]].
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* AlienNonInterferenceClause: {{Defied|Trope}} when Asuka tells Shinji to ask Louise for details about Halkeginian magic.
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* AlienNonInterferenceClause: {{Defied|Trope}} It's first {{defied|Trope}} when Asuka tells Shinji to ask Louise for details about Halkeginian magic.magic, and then {{discussed|Trope}} later in [[spoiler:Asuka and Rei's dialogue]].
* AristocratsAreEvil: The commoners generally see the nobles as this, especially when they think that Louise stole Shinji away from his prior life to be her familiar.
* BodySurf: [[spoiler:Rei]] emerges through Shinji and comes close to [[spoiler:"tanging" Siesta before she's stopped by Asuka]].
* AristocratsAreEvil: The commoners generally see the nobles as this, especially when they think that Louise stole Shinji away from his prior life to be her familiar.
* BodySurf: [[spoiler:Rei]] emerges through Shinji and comes close to [[spoiler:"tanging" Siesta before she's stopped by Asuka]].
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* MementoMacguffin: [[spoiler:Asuka's skull.]] For Shinji, it's a reminder of what he's lost and a potent weapon. [[spoiler:It later becomes a way for Longueville to get access to the school's Vault once Shinji turns it over to the school.]]
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* LighterAndSofter: ''Surrogate'' is much more comedic in tone than ''Points'', although the fundamental seriousness is still present.
* MementoMacguffin: [[spoiler:Asuka's skull.]] For Shinji, it's a reminder of what he'slost lost, a sentimental token, and a potent weapon. [[spoiler:It later becomes a way for Longueville to get access to the school's Vault once Shinji turns it over to the school.]]
* MementoMacguffin: [[spoiler:Asuka's skull.]] For Shinji, it's a reminder of what he's
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* ShoutOut:
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* ShoutOut: Bpen continues his penchant for them, but he takes it a step further by having Shinji {{lampshade|Hanging}} their use in Asuka's narration, which she [[JustifiedTrope defends]] as a means of helping make sense of their circumstances.
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:: Shinji {{lampshade|Hanging}}s the use of the Shout Outs, which Asuka defends as a means of helping make sense of their circumstances.
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* [[spoiler:DeathByChildbirth]]: It's strongly implied that the reason Shinji is completely alone before he's summoned is because [[spoiler:this happened to Asuka]].
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* [[spoiler:DeathByChildbirth]]: DeathByChildbirth: It's strongly implied that the reason Shinji is completely alone before he's summoned is because [[spoiler:this happened to Asuka]].
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* EyeScream: Not only do Louise, Osmond, Colbert, and Miss Longueville get to experience [[spoiler:Sachiel putting out Unit 01's eye]] thanks to the memory of it happening to Shinji, it causes them to bleed from their right eyes.
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* EyeScream: Not only do Louise, Osmond, Colbert, and Miss Longueville get to experience [[spoiler:Sachiel putting out Unit 01's eye]] thanks to the memory of it happening to Shinji, it causes them to bleed from their right eyes.Shinji. Also, see YourMindMakesItReal below.
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** Asuka's narration sits on both sides of the fourth wall--it's not only a foundation of the story, Shinji hears all of it in his head.
** [[spoiler:Rei]] tries to be this but is rebuffed by Asuka.
** [[spoiler:Rei]] tries to be this but is rebuffed by Asuka.
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** Asuka's narration sits on both sides of the fourth wall--it's not only a foundation of the story, Shinji hears all most (if not all) of it in his head.
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** [[spoiler:Rei]] tries to be this but is rebuffed by Asuka. However, the two of them do converse "behind the scenes" about certain issues.
** [[spoiler:Rei]] tries to be this but is rebuffed by Asuka. However, the two of them do converse "behind the scenes" about certain issues.
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* YourMindMakesItReal: Because of the EyeScream above, Louise, Osmond, Colbert, and Longueville all bleed from their right eyes as a side effect.
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* MementoMacguffin: [[spoiler:Asuka's skull.]] For Shinji, it's a reminder of what he's lost and a potent weapon.
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* MementoMacguffin: [[spoiler:Asuka's skull.]] For Shinji, it's a reminder of what he's lost and a potent weapon. [[spoiler:It later becomes a way for Longueville to get access to the school's Vault once Shinji turns it over to the school.]]