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** TheSmartGuy: they all fill this role.
** TagalongKid: Near
** TagalongKid: Near
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* HyperAwareness: How L, Light, and the Wammys kids' investigative skills are portrayed.
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* HyperAwareness: How L, Light, and the Wammys kids' genius and investigative skills are portrayed.
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* PatchworkFic: L is just L (though maybe fused with his more ActionHero-like ''Film/LChangeTheWorld'' counterpart), an innocent!Light ([[MindScrew maybe]]), teenage Mello and Matt that appear from the second arc of the ''DeathNote'' anime and manga, B and [[spoiler: A]] are from ''LightNovel/AnotherNote'', and the pink angel crepe van is from the alternate continuity movie ''Film/LChangeTheWorld''.
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* PatchworkFic: L is just L (though maybe fused with his more ActionHero-like ''Film/LChangeTheWorld'' counterpart), an innocent!Light ([[MindScrew maybe]]), teenage Mello and Matt that appear from the second arc of the ''DeathNote'' ''Manga/DeathNote'' anime and manga, B and [[spoiler: A]] are from ''LightNovel/AnotherNote'', and the pink angel crepe van is from the alternate continuity movie ''Film/LChangeTheWorld''.
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6234636/1/ Point of Succession]]'' by Jedi Master Bag is an [[AlternateUniverseFic AU]] ''DeathNote'' [[FanFiction Fan Fic]]. Beyond Birthday has escaped prison and is out for [[RoaringRampageOfRevenge revenge]] -- but not for the reasons L thinks.
When Beyond abducts Mello from Wammy's House, L is forced to rely on the expertise of [[TheProfiler the criminal profiler]] that knows him best; a mysterious and troubled young man known as Light Yagami.
When Beyond abducts Mello from Wammy's House, L is forced to rely on the expertise of [[TheProfiler the criminal profiler]] that knows him best; a mysterious and troubled young man known as Light Yagami.
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6234636/1/ Point of Succession]]'' by Jedi Master Bag is an [[AlternateUniverseFic AU]] ''DeathNote'' ''Manga/DeathNote'' [[FanFiction Fan Fic]]. Beyond Birthday has escaped prison and is out for [[RoaringRampageOfRevenge revenge]] -- but not for the reasons L thinks.
When Beyond abducts Mello from Wammy's House, L is forced to rely on the expertise of [[TheProfiler the criminal profiler]]that who knows him best; a mysterious and troubled young man known as Light Yagami.
When Beyond abducts Mello from Wammy's House, L is forced to rely on the expertise of [[TheProfiler the criminal profiler]]
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* PatchworkFic: L is just L (though maybe fused with his more ActionHero-like ''Film/LChangeTheWorld'' counterpart), an innocent!Light ([[MindScrew maybe]]), teenage Mello and Matt that appear from the second arc of the ''DeathNote'' anime and manga, B and [[spoiler: A]] are from ''Literature/AnotherNote'', ''LightNovel/AnotherNote'', and the pink angel crepe van is from the alternate continuity movie Film/LChangeTheWorld.''Film/LChangeTheWorld''.
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* NotGoodWithRejection: Beyond. There's the implication that he's killing people because [[FoeYay he wants attention]].
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* CriticalPsychoanalysisFailure: Pretty much everone with BB. Like TheJoker, BB isn't so much insane as he is "[[CrazySane super]] [[TheUnfettered sane]]" and [[InfectiousInsanity anyone who tries to get into his head will regret it.]]
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* TermsOfEndangerment: Beyond is quite TheNickNamer and comes up with creepy names [[FoeYay for those near and dear to his heart]] such as "Darling!," "Little Dear," "Mr. Twelve," and "Sweetie Jam." [[spoiler: A, Mello, L, and Light]] respectively.
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* TermsOfEndangerment: Beyond is quite TheNickNamer and comes up with creepy names [[FoeYay for those near and dear to his heart]] such as "Darling!," "Little Dear," "Mr. Twelve," "[[FridgeBrilliance Mr. Twelve,]]" and "Sweetie Jam." [[spoiler: A, Mello, L, and Light]] respectively.
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* XMeetsY: ''Manga/DeathNote'' in the style of ''{{Dexter}}'' or ''CriminalMinds''.
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* TermsOfEndangerment: Beyond is quite TheNickNamer and comes up with creepy names for those near and dear to his heart such as "Darling!," "Little Dear," "Mr. Twelve," and "Sweetie Jam." [[spoiler: A, Mello, L, and Light]] respectively.
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* TermsOfEndangerment: Beyond is quite TheNickNamer and comes up with creepy names [[FoeYay for those near and dear to his heart heart]] such as "Darling!," "Little Dear," "Mr. Twelve," and "Sweetie Jam." [[spoiler: A, Mello, L, and Light]] respectively.
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* TermsOfEndangerment: Beyond is quite TheNickNamer and comes up with creepy names for those near and dear to his heart such as Darling!, Little Dear, Mr. Twelve, and Sweetie Jam. [[spoiler: A, Mello, L, and Light]] respectively.
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* TermsOfEndangerment: Beyond is quite TheNickNamer and comes up with creepy names for those near and dear to his heart such as Darling!, Little Dear, Mr. Twelve, "Darling!," "Little Dear," "Mr. Twelve," and Sweetie Jam. "Sweetie Jam." [[spoiler: A, Mello, L, and Light]] respectively.
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* TermsOfEndangerment: Beyond is quite TheNickNamer and comes up with creepy names for those near and dear to his heart such as Darling! Mr. Twelve, and Sweetie Jam. [[spoiler: A, L, and Light]] respectively.
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* TermsOfEndangerment: Beyond is quite TheNickNamer and comes up with creepy names for those near and dear to his heart such as Darling! Darling!, Little Dear, Mr. Twelve, and Sweetie Jam. [[spoiler: A, Mello, L, and Light]] respectively.
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* TermsOfEndangerment: Beyond is quite TheNickNamer and comes up with creepy names for those near and dear to his heart: Darling! Mr. Twelve, and Sweetie Jam. [[spoiler: A, L, and Light]] respectively.
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* TermsOfEndangerment: Beyond is quite TheNickNamer and comes up with creepy names for those near and dear to his heart: heart such as Darling! Mr. Twelve, and Sweetie Jam. [[spoiler: A, L, and Light]] respectively.
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* ReluctantPsycho: Light is implied to be one. [[MindRape After several sessions of talking with B]] [[BreakTheCutie Light seems to realize that there might be something fundamentally flawed with his own psychology]]:
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* ReluctantPsycho: Light is implied to be one. [[MindRape After several sessions of While talking with B]] [[BreakTheCutie Light he seems to realize that there might be something fundamentally flawed with his own psychology]]:
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--> '''Beyond:''' [[FoeYay I think we could.]] [[FlawExploitation And never get bored.]] You aren't a boring individual [[spoiler: Sweetie Jam]], despite what you try so hard to show the world. And me, [[AxCrazy I know I'm not boring.]]
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--> '''Beyond:''' [[FoeYay [[HannibalLecture I think we could.]] [[FlawExploitation And never get bored.]] You aren't a boring individual [[spoiler: Sweetie Jam]], [[StepfordSmiler despite what you try so hard to show the world. world.]] And me, [[AxCrazy I know I'm not boring.]]
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--> '''Beyond:''' [[FoeYay I think we could.]] [[FlawExploitation And never get bored.]] You aren't a boring individual [[spoiler: Sweetie Jam]], despite what you try so hard to show the world. And me, I know I'm not boring.
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--> '''Beyond:''' [[FoeYay I think we could.]] [[FlawExploitation And never get bored.]] You aren't a boring individual [[spoiler: Sweetie Jam]], despite what you try so hard to show the world. And me, [[AxCrazy I know I'm not boring.]]
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--> '''Beyond:''' [[FoeYay I think we could. could.]] [[FlawExploitation And never get bored.]] You aren't a boring individual [[spoiler: Sweetie Jam]], despite what you try so hard to show the world. And me, I know I'm not boring.
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* ReluctantPsycho: Light is implied to be one. [[MindRape After several sessions of talking with B]] [[BreakTheCutie Light comes to realize that there might be something fundamentally flawed with his own psychology...]]
--> '''Light:''' You knew this was a temporary arrangement. It's not like we could talk forever.
--> '''Beyond:''' I think we could. [[FlawExploitation And never get bored.]] You aren't a boring individual [[spoiler: Sweetie Jam]], despite what you try so hard to show the world. And me, I know I'm not boring.
--> '''Light:''' Don't be too sure hun, the killing people thing gets old real fast.
--> '''Beyond:''' How would you know?
--> '''Light:''' We all have fantasies. Some are just bloodier than others.
--> '''Light:''' You knew this was a temporary arrangement. It's not like we could talk forever.
--> '''Beyond:''' I think we could. [[FlawExploitation And never get bored.]] You aren't a boring individual [[spoiler: Sweetie Jam]], despite what you try so hard to show the world. And me, I know I'm not boring.
--> '''Light:''' Don't be too sure hun, the killing people thing gets old real fast.
--> '''Beyond:''' How would you know?
--> '''Light:''' We all have fantasies. Some are just bloodier than others.
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* TermsOfEndangerment: Beyond is quite TheNickNamer and comes up with creepy names for those near and dear to his heart: Darling! Mr. Twelve, and Sweetie Jam. [[spoiler: A, L, and Light]] respectively.
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* CrazyJealousGuy: Beyond is quite the {{Yandere}}.
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* StalkerWithACrush: B to L [[spoiler: at first. There are hints that perhaps he has transfered his obsession to a certain handsome, young psychologist that paid him a visit.]]
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* [[spoiler: RedHerringMole]]: [[spoiler: Light... [[OrIsIt maybe.]]]]
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* [[spoiler: RedHerringMole]]: [[spoiler: Light... [[OrIsIt [[MindScrew maybe.]]]]
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* GuileHero: L, Light, Matt, and Mello.
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* BatmanGambit: Light and Mr. Junko fake a scene where one of them pretends to be injured in order to confirm that Matt isn't a real cop because when they shout for help [[WhatTheHellHero he doesn't even stop to look.]]
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* BavarianFireDrill: Light engineers one in order to steal evidence for L’s investigation.
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* BavarianFireDrill: Matt impersonating a police officer. Also Light engineers one in order to steal evidence for L’s L's investigation.
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* CoolCar: L's team uses the pink angel crepe van seen in Film/LChangeTheWorld.
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* CoolCar: L's team uses the pink angel crepe van seen in Film/LChangeTheWorld. ''[[{{Film/LChangeTheWorld}} L: Change The WorLd]]''
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* ApocalypseMaiden – [[PlayingWithATrope Played with]] [[spoiler: Near is convinced that this is Light's role ever since L took a shine to him. It seems that Light is actually only a victim of Beyond but just how innocent... (or not) he is has yet to be seen.]]
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* ApocalypseMaiden – ApocalypseMaiden: [[PlayingWithATrope Played with]] [[spoiler: Near is convinced that this is Light's role ever since L took a shine to him. It seems that Light is actually only a victim of Beyond but just how innocent... (or not) he is has yet to be seen.]]
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* BriarPatching - [[spoiler: In order to get L to let him work with him Light tells L he doesn't want to work with him.]]
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* CuteAndPsycho – There is no Death Note / Kira doesn't seem to exist in this universe so Light is / was the WideEyedIdealist NiceGuy he would have been without it. However there are several hints suggesting that Light is less than stable... [[spoiler: [[CorruptTheCutie SOMETHING happened with Beyond. Something happened to estrange him from his family.]] And he has secrets—secrets which are apparently dire enough to keep hidden in a booby-trapped fake bottom desk drawer.]]
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* CuteAndPsycho – CuteAndPsycho: There is no Death Note / and Kira doesn't seem to exist in this universe so Light is / was is/was the WideEyedIdealist NiceGuy he would have been without it. However there are several hints suggesting that Light is less than stable... stable- [[spoiler: [[CorruptTheCutie SOMETHING happened with Beyond. Something happened to estrange him from his family.]] And he has secrets—secrets which are apparently dire enough to keep hidden in a booby-trapped fake bottom desk drawer.]]
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** [[TheHero The]] ([[AntiHero Anti]])[[TheHero Hero]] and BigBrotherMentor – L
** TheLancer and TheSixthRanger - Light
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** TheSmartGuy – Near
** TheObiWan – Watari
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* GoodIsNotNice - Team L cares more about solving the case than for the victims / casualties of it-[[NominalImportance that is unless it is someone they know.]] ''[[WhatTheHellHero Beyond]]'' [[WhatTheHellHero calls them on it.]]
** TheLancer and TheSixthRanger - Light
** TheBigGuy and TheHeart – Matt
** TheSmartGuy – Near
** TheObiWan – Watari
* GenreShift: it's a ''DeathNote'' AU which is a straightforward detective / crime drama with (so far) no supernatural elements.
* GoodIsNotNice - Team L cares more about solving the case than for the victims / casualties of it-[[NominalImportance that is unless it is someone they know.]] ''[[WhatTheHellHero Beyond]]'' [[WhatTheHellHero calls them on it.]]
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** [[TheHero The]] ([[AntiHero Anti]])[[TheHero Hero]] and BigBrotherMentor – BigBrotherMentor: L
** TheLancer andTheSixthRanger - TheSixthRanger: Light
** TheBigGuy andTheHeart – TheHeart: Matt
**TheSmartGuy – TheSmartGuy: Near
**TheObiWan – TheObiWan: Watari
* GenreShift: it's a ''DeathNote'' AU which is a straightforwarddetective / crime detective/crime drama with (so far) no supernatural elements.
*GoodIsNotNice - GoodIsNotNice: Team L cares more about solving the case than for the victims / casualties victims/casualties of it-[[NominalImportance that is unless it is someone they know.]] ''[[WhatTheHellHero Beyond]]'' [[WhatTheHellHero calls them on it.]]
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* [[{{ptitlev7j92pykrb48}} If I Can't Have You]]: Beyond does not take rejection well...
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* LoveableRogue: Mr. Junko, Sayu’s fiancé [[spoiler: Subverted, he's TheMole.]]
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* LoveableRogue: Mr. Junko, Sayu’s Sayu's fiancé [[spoiler: Subverted, he's TheMole.]]
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* [[RoseHairedGirl Rose Haired Boy]] - Boy]]: Right before Mello was abducted, he had caused Matt to have a hair dye "accident" dying his hair an embarassing shade of bright pink. [[HeroicVow Matt has resolved he's not going to dye it back]] [[CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming until they've got Mello back.]]
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* SherlockScan: employed Employed by the Wammys and Light.
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* TearsOfBlood: [[spoiler: Beyond wants to see L in tears. When [[TheStoic L]] doesn’t oblige him, Beyond cuts up his face with a wine bottle.]]
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* TearsOfBlood: [[spoiler: Beyond wants to see L in tears. When [[TheStoic L]] doesn’t doesn't oblige him, Beyond cuts up his face with a wine bottle.]]
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* YouNeedToGetLaid - [[CrowningMomentOfFunny Sayu says this word for word when it seems Light is]] [[EroticEating overly-enjoying his coffee.]]
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* YouNeedToGetLaid - YouNeedToGetLaid: [[CrowningMomentOfFunny Sayu says this word for word when it seems Light is]] [[EroticEating overly-enjoying his coffee.]]
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* TheCombatPragmatist: Beyond Birthday, [[spoiler: to keep someone as clever as L from escaping or even moving he ties him up with barbed wire.]]
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* TheCombatPragmatist: CombatPragmatist: Beyond Birthday, [[spoiler: to keep someone as clever as L from escaping or even moving he ties him up with barbed wire.]]