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** Twilight got annoyed with [[BloodKnight Feist]], so she sent him to... [[EightBitTheater hurt, to learn some manners there]].

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** Twilight got annoyed with [[BloodKnight Feist]], so she sent him to... [[EightBitTheater [[WebComic/EightBitTheater hurt, to learn some manners there]].

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** Also, after Zeitgeist Stardust decides to land his private jet in the middle of Ponyville on a whim:

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** Also, after Zeitgeist Stardust decides to land his private jet airship in the middle of Ponyville on a whim:whim [[spoiler: or so we think]]:


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--> '''Rainbow Dash''': ''"Rich people are weird..."''
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** Also, after Zeitgeist Stardust decides to land his private jet in the middle of Ponyville on a whim:
--> '''Rainbow Dash''': ''"You're doing all this for a suit?"''
--> '''Zeitgeist''': ''"Yes. It's going to be a nice suit."''

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** Tirac is 1-km long by 700+ meters tall while the Equine Elementals are of similar proportions, but the cake goes to Calcipher who lives up to his title by being over a mile (1.6km) ''tall''. Oh, and they're all MadeOfIndestructium

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** Tirac is 1-km long by 700+ meters tall while the Equine Elementals are of similar proportions, but the cake goes to Calcipher who lives up to his title by being over a mile (1.6km) ''tall''. Oh, and they're all MadeOfIndestructiumMadeOfIndestructium .
* LargeHam: David Tennant's NoIndoorVoice would synch up perfectly with much of the dialogue. However, the introduction of Tirac in a speaking role quickly and deftly establishes [[HamToHamCombat who is the hammiest of them all]]. Tirac's old school villain hamminess is even [[LampshadeHanging lampshaded]] by [[DeadpanSnarker Spike]] who says
--> ''Y’know, when I heard that ‘The Demon God Tirac’ was loose I was kinda expecting something more, I dunno, sinister and menacing! I really wasn’t expecting some mugging [[DidYouJustFlipOffCthulhu chucklehead]] crooning clichés like a Saturday morning cartoon villain!”
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* MushroomSamba: Chapter 2 opens with Sweetie Belle and Applebloom relating their sisters' stories to Scootaloo. Scoots asks if they were tasting mushrooms...[[NoodleIncident again...]]
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The long-awaited sequel to the ''Series/DoctorWho''[=/=]''MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' crossover ''TimeLordsAndTerror''

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The long-awaited sequel to the ''Series/DoctorWho''[=/=]''MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' ''Series/DoctorWho''[=/=]''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' crossover ''TimeLordsAndTerror''



* CrapsackWorld: The Doctor Universe compared to the Equestria one. Where his leans toward monstrosities, war, and destruction; Equestria is hell bent on goodness, love, and the [[MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic Magic of Friendship]]. It's starting to freak the Doctor out a little.

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* CrapsackWorld: The Doctor Universe compared to the Equestria one. Where his leans toward monstrosities, war, and destruction; Equestria is hell bent on goodness, love, and the [[MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic [[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic Magic of Friendship]]. It's starting to freak the Doctor out a little.



** To MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic

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** To MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicWesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic
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* [[DudeShesLikeInAComa Brony, He's like... In A Coma]]: Applejack kept looking for excuses to give the Doctor [[IfYouKnowWhatIMean CPR]] after he was knocked out. Rainbow Dash didn't let her.

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* [[DudeShesLikeInAComa Brony, He's like... In A Coma]]: Applejack kept looking for excuses to give the Doctor [[IfYouKnowWhatIMean CPR]] CPR after he was knocked out. Rainbow Dash didn't let her.



* InterspeciesRomance: "Equestrianism", which its somewhat accepted, since several Diamond dogs would not mind [[IfYouKnowWhatIMean riding]] Rarity or Fluttershy and there seems to be a small cup of this between Zeitgeist and Litigia. When two of the guards coarsely joke about it in front of a distraught Twilight in chapter 5, she takes it...less than gracefully.

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* InterspeciesRomance: "Equestrianism", which its somewhat accepted, since several Diamond dogs would not mind [[IfYouKnowWhatIMean riding]] riding Rarity or Fluttershy and there seems to be a small cup of this between Zeitgeist and Litigia. When two of the guards coarsely joke about it in front of a distraught Twilight in chapter 5, she takes it...less than gracefully.
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had nothing to do with the trope mentioned


* CompoundInterestTimeTravelGambit: [[spoiler: Tirac basically gives The Doctor a step-by-step guide of how he defeated him 500,000 years ago, thus giving The Doctor a head start on when and how he has to defeat him [[TimeTravelTenseTrouble in his future in Equestria's past.]] ]]

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** WordOfGod is that the pony universe is so much less Crapsacky then The Doctors because [[spoiler: Terra and Radian]] have spent the millennia since the war against Tirac striving to reduce the evilness of all sentient races so as to make it harder for Tirac to find willing followers should he ever get free.


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** WordOfGod is that the pony universe is so much less Crapsacky then The Doctors because [[spoiler: Terra and Radian]] have spent the millennia since the war against Tirac striving to reduce the evilness of all sentient races so as to make it harder for Tirac to find willing followers should he ever get free.
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* CompoundInterestTimeTravelGambit
** Please Explain.

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* CompoundInterestTimeTravelGambit
** Please Explain.
CompoundInterestTimeTravelGambit: [[spoiler: Tirac basically gives The Doctor a step-by-step guide of how he defeated him 500,000 years ago, thus giving The Doctor a head start on when and how he has to defeat him [[TimeTravelTenseTrouble in his future in Equestria's past.]] ]]
* CompletelyMissingThePoint: After Fire Dazzler is confronted by two thugs to [[spoiler: help them dragon-nap Spike]] he wallows in self-pity before being motivated by the TARDIS.
-->'''TARDIS''': ''You know what you must do.''
-->'''Fire Dazzler''': Who...who said that?
-->'''TARDIS''': ''You know what you must do...to ease your soul.''
-->'''Fire Dazzler''': Are you my conscience?
-->'''TARDIS''': ''[[FlatWhat What.]]''
-->'''Fire Dazzler''': Ease my soul, eh? You're right. [[INeedAFreakingDrink I need a drink!]]
-->'''TARDIS''': ''...[[StarTrek p'tagh...]]''



* FlatWhat: One from [[spoiler: [[BigBad Tirac]] ]] while talking to [[DeadpanSnarker Spike]], and another from the ''TARDIS'' while talking to [[IdiotSavant Fire Dazzler]].



* [[spoiler: GenocideBackfire]]: It's a Doctor who Fic, what did you expect to happen?.

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* [[spoiler: GenocideBackfire]]: It's a Doctor who Fic, what did you expect to happen?. ** She succeeds in the end and the results...[[LethalChef aren't]] [[EldritchAbomination pretty]].


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* IdiotSavant: A milder case of this trope can be found in Fire Dazzler, one of the resort's more talented pyrotechnicians. Like all ponies he has the one area of expertise in which he absolutely excels, ''unlike'' all ponies he knowingly gets indebted to a pony mafia in order to purchase extremely unsafe/illegal chemicals for his light shows. His idiocy and irresponsibility are integral to the plot.
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** WordOfGod is that the pony universe is so much less Crapsacky then The Doctors because [[spoiler: Terra and Radian]] have spent the millennia since the war against Tirac striving to reduce the evilness of all sentient races so as to make it harder for Tirak to find willing followers should he ever get free.

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** WordOfGod is that the pony universe is so much less Crapsacky then The Doctors because [[spoiler: Terra and Radian]] have spent the millennia since the war against Tirac striving to reduce the evilness of all sentient races so as to make it harder for Tirak Tirac to find willing followers should he ever get free.
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** WordOfGod is that the pony universe is so much less Crapsacky then The Doctors because [[spoiler: Terra and Radion]] have spent the millennia since the war against Tirak striving to reduce the evilness of all sentient races so as to make it harder for Tirak to find willing followers should he ever get free.

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** WordOfGod is that the pony universe is so much less Crapsacky then The Doctors because [[spoiler: Terra and Radion]] Radian]] have spent the millennia since the war against Tirak Tirac striving to reduce the evilness of all sentient races so as to make it harder for Tirak to find willing followers should he ever get free.



* EvilIsPetty: But at least Tirak [[LampshadeHanging admits it.]]

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* EvilIsPetty: But at least Tirak Tirac [[LampshadeHanging admits it.]]
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* EvilIsPetty: But at least Tirak [[LampshadeHanging admits it.]]
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** Do anything to harm Spike and Twilight will ''annihilate'' you.

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** Do anything to harm Spike and Twilight will ''annihilate'' ''destroy'' you.
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** Do anything to harm Spike and Twilight will ''annihilate'' you.
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** WordOfGod is that the pony universe is so much less Crapsacky then The Doctors because [[spoiler: Terra and Radion]] have spent the millennia since the war against Tirak striving to reduce the evilness of all sentient races so as to make it harder for Tirak to find willing followers should he ever get free.
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** Please Explain.
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** Zecora refers using to using a [[FinalFantasy 'Phoenix Feather to make even the dead feel better.']]
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-->Twilight: Coming between me and Spike is...[[Understatement ''unwise.'']]

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-->Twilight: Coming between me and Spike is...[[Understatement ''unwise.'']] ''

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* MamaBear: Never stand between Twilight and Spike. Or you will regret it '''FOREEEEEVEEEER'''.

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* MamaBear: Never stand between Twilight and Spike. Or you will regret it '''FOREEEEEVEEEER'''. '''FOREEEEEVEEEER'''.
-->Twilight: Coming between me and Spike is...[[Understatement ''unwise.'']]
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** And then there's [[spoiler:Tirac]] who shows ponies and Diamond Dogs alike what [[UpToEleven real vengefullness is]].
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huh, seems there\'s an epilogue added. Sorry about that -_-

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** [[spoiler: Luckily for Tirac, Discord's familiar Screwball springs him.]]
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** [[spoiler: Luckily for Tirac, Discord's familiar Screwball springs him.]]
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* LeaningOnTheFourthWall: Pinkie Pie as expected can bend the the Universe to her will, and nobody, [[BeyondTheImpossible not even the doctor]] can hope to explain how she do this. This is also done by [[spoiler: Tirac]] while mocking Spike defiance:

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* LeaningOnTheFourthWall: Pinkie Pie as expected can bend the the Universe to her will, and nobody, [[BeyondTheImpossible not even the doctor]] can hope to explain how she do this. This is also done by [[spoiler: Tirac]] while mocking Spike Spike's defiance:



* {{Magitek}}: Equestria make's eberron look bad. Many of this inventions come from the Diamond Dogs apparently.

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* {{Magitek}}: Equestria make's eberron look bad.puts {{Eberron}} to shame. Many of this inventions come from the Diamond Dogs apparently.



* PrecisionFStrike: A very PG-13 one but it still counts nonetheless. Just after Twilight finished a monologue about how much fun she had with the Doctor and expresses a desire to continue their Adventures for a long time to come, the Doctor drops the bomb that he must leave them so he can stop a Mimponi Crusade from exterminating all life on Equestria. Twilight and her friends, [[ItMakesSenseInContext having 'eaten' several Mimponi officials]], cannot come with him lest they risk execution. Twilight's response after The Doctor takes his leave:

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* PrecisionFStrike: A very PG-13 one but it still counts nonetheless. Just after Twilight finished a monologue about how much fun she had with the Doctor and expresses a desire to continue their Adventures for a long time to come, the Doctor drops the bomb that he must leave them so he can stop a Mimponi Minponi Crusade from exterminating all life on Equestria. Twilight and her friends, [[ItMakesSenseInContext having 'eaten' several Mimponi Minponi officials]], cannot come with him lest they risk execution. Twilight's response after The Doctor takes his leave:



* TookALevelInBadass: Twilight Sparkle, from the one month with the Doctor, went from being a incredibly powerful but nice pony to and incredibly powerful but nice pony who ''knows'' how to use her power for... [[TroubleEntendre diplomacy]], [[spoiler: much the dismay of the diamond dogs and ''[[DidYouJustPunchOutCthulhu Tirac.]]'' ]]

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* TookALevelInBadass: Twilight Sparkle, from the one month with the Doctor, went from being a incredibly powerful but nice pony to and incredibly powerful but nice pony who ''knows'' how to use her power for... [[TroubleEntendre active diplomacy]], [[spoiler: much the dismay of the diamond dogs and ''[[DidYouJustPunchOutCthulhu Tirac.]]'' ]]



* VitriolicBestBuds: Type 2 between Litigia and Zeitgeist with a little of AwLookTheyReallyDoLoveEachOther. They insult, belittle and sometimes downright abuse the Boss/Secretary/Nanny relationship they had, but at the end of the day they are for each other through and through no matter what. Or as explained by Zeitgeist:

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* VitriolicBestBuds: Type 2 between Litigia and Zeitgeist with a little of AwLookTheyReallyDoLoveEachOther. They insult, belittle and sometimes downright abuse the Boss/Secretary/Nanny relationship they had, share, but at the end of the day they are for each other through and through no matter what. Or as explained by Zeitgeist:



* AWorldwidePunomenon: Equestria entire Universe. From the Centauri Republic being populated by actual ''centaurs'' to the Diamond Dogs being commanded by Zeitgeist Stardust. At difference of 12, it cracks the good Doctor to no end.

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* AWorldwidePunomenon: Equestria entire Universe. From the Centauri Republic being populated by actual ''centaurs'' to the Diamond Dogs being commanded by Zeitgeist Stardust. At difference of 12, Stardust, and it cracks the good Doctor up to no end.
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* IfYouEverDoAnythingToHurtHer: In Chapter 2, when Fire Dazzler tells the Doctor he has gotten a crush on Twilight Sparkle,the Doctor decides to allow it, although he does give him this little warning.
--> '''The Doctor''': If you are indeed going to try and pursue a relationship with my good ''Dear'' friend Twilight, do take her feelings into consideration, she's a little...awkward socially. If you in some way...''Distress'' her, I will make you very, ''very'' sorry...'''''forever'''''. Compris?

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* IfYouEverDoAnythingToHurtHer: In Chapter 2, when Fire Dazzler tells the Doctor he has gotten a crush on Twilight Sparkle,the Sparkle, the Doctor decides to allow it, although he does give him this little warning.
--> '''The Doctor''': If you are indeed going to try and pursue a relationship with my good ''Dear'' good, ''dear'' friend Twilight, do take her feelings into consideration, she's a little...awkward little... awkward, socially. If you in some way...''Distress'' ''distress'' her, I will make you very, ''very'' sorry...sorry... '''''forever'''''. Compris?
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*IfYouEverDoAnythingToHurtHer: In Chapter 2, when Fire Dazzler tells the Doctor he has gotten a crush on Twilight Sparkle,the Doctor decides to allow it, although he does give him this little warning.
--> '''The Doctor''': If you are indeed going to try and pursue a relationship with my good ''Dear'' friend Twilight, do take her feelings into consideration, she's a little...awkward socially. If you in some way...''Distress'' her, I will make you very, ''very'' sorry...'''''forever'''''. Compris?

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* PrecisionFStrike: A very PG-13 one but still count nonetheless. Just after Twilight got a monologue of how much fun she had with the Doctor and how she desire to keep with their Adventures for a long time to come, the Doctor drop the bomb that he must leave them so he can help the Mimponi in a mission to avoid a war and he must do it alone. Twilight response:
-->'''Twilight''': ''“Crap.” Twilight said quietly''

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* PrecisionFStrike: A very PG-13 one but it still count counts nonetheless. Just after Twilight got finished a monologue of about how much fun she had with the Doctor and how she expresses a desire to keep with continue their Adventures for a long time to come, the Doctor drop drops the bomb that he must leave them so he can help the stop a Mimponi in a mission to avoid a war and he must do it alone. Crusade from exterminating all life on Equestria. Twilight response:
and her friends, [[ItMakesSenseInContext having 'eaten' several Mimponi officials]], cannot come with him lest they risk execution. Twilight's response after The Doctor takes his leave:
-->'''Twilight''': ''“Crap.” Twilight said quietly''“Crap.”



** Also, Spike, without any influence from the Doctor whatsoever, mixed with a level in genre savvy.

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** Also, Spike, without any influence from the Doctor whatsoever, mixed with a level level-up in genre savvy.


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** [[spoiler: Luckily for Tirac, Discord's familiar Screwball springs him.]]


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** There's a flavor of this between [[spoiler: Discord and Tirac]] in the epilogue.
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* SequelHook: [[https://docs.google.com/document/d/1GproQVgXI-7jEvEWWUOvYLd8oNVB1iUQ-AvBJcUE7Hc/edit?hl=en_US The epilogue]].
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* InterspeciesRomance: "Equestrianism", which its somewhat accepted, since several Diamond dogs would not mind [[IfYouKnowWhatImean riding]] Rarity or Fluttershy and there seems to be a small cup of this between Zeitgeist and Litigia. When two of the guards coarsely joke about it in front of a distraught Twilight in chapter 5, she takes it...less than gracefully.

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* InterspeciesRomance: "Equestrianism", which its somewhat accepted, since several Diamond dogs would not mind [[IfYouKnowWhatImean [[IfYouKnowWhatIMean riding]] Rarity or Fluttershy and there seems to be a small cup of this between Zeitgeist and Litigia. When two of the guards coarsely joke about it in front of a distraught Twilight in chapter 5, she takes it...less than gracefully.

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