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* BigBad: General Zod ([[spoiler: who's been posing as Prince Blueblood]]) in the first arc, {{Brainiac}} and [[LexLuthor Alexander Silversmith]] share this role in the second arc.

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* BigBad: General Zod ([[spoiler: who's been posing as Prince Blueblood]]) in the first arc, {{Brainiac}} and [[LexLuthor [[ComicBook/LexLuthor Alexander Silversmith]] share this role in the second arc.



* CorruptCorporateExecutive: Silversmith. He is an {{Expy}} of LexLuthor, after all.

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* CorruptCorporateExecutive: Silversmith. He is an {{Expy}} of LexLuthor, ComicBook/LexLuthor, after all.
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* {{Expy}}: Scootaloo seems kinda similar to JimmyOlsen with her friendship with Supermare/Rainbow Dash, asked by RD to do tasks, and extremely excitable in her presence.

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* {{Expy}}: Scootaloo seems kinda similar to JimmyOlsen ComicBook/JimmyOlsen with her friendship with Supermare/Rainbow Dash, asked by RD to do tasks, and extremely excitable in her presence.
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* ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/164183/a-dark-knight-over-trottingham A Dark Knight Over Trottingham]]'': Blueblood has lived in the shadow of his parents' murder for some time. But when his life is thrown out of balance once again, he will begin a journey that shall make him a legend. [[{{Batman}} A Dark Knight]]. In Progress.

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* ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/164183/a-dark-knight-over-trottingham A Dark Knight Over Trottingham]]'': Blueblood has lived in the shadow of his parents' murder for some time. But when his life is thrown out of balance once again, he will begin a journey that shall make him a legend. [[{{Batman}} [[Franchise/{{Batman}} A Dark Knight]]. In Progress.



* StealthHiBye: Batpony (the local {{Batman}} {{expy}}) does this several times to Rainbow Dash in their multipart side story crossover.

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* StealthHiBye: Batpony (the local {{Batman}} Franchise/{{Batman}} {{expy}}) does this several times to Rainbow Dash in their multipart side story crossover.
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** The first side story is one long shout out to CalvinAndHobbes, with Rainbow pretending to be a superhero and trying to vanquish her enemy "Mom Lady".

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** The first side story is one long shout out to CalvinAndHobbes, ComicStrip/CalvinAndHobbes, with Rainbow pretending to be a superhero and trying to vanquish her enemy "Mom Lady".
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* TheDon: The griffon known as the Falcon controls all the crime in Trottingham.

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* TheDon: The griffon known as the Falcon controls all the crime in Trottingham. Most likely a ShoutOut to Carmine Falcone, the last Don of Gotham before the advent of supervillainy.

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* TheSnackIsMoreInteresting: Blueblood doesn't take the board meeting very seriously, focusing on solving a Rubik's Cube instead.

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* TheSnackIsMoreInteresting: Blueblood doesn't take the board meeting very seriously, focusing on solving a Rubik's Cube instead.instead.
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*** It takes actually seeing Shining recharge his ring to make her believe.


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* {{Jerkass}}: Sinestro, as per usual.
* MythologyGag: The scene where Shining and Sinestro save a collapsing bridge full of ponies, with Sinestro berating Shining's poor form, is based on a similar scene between Sinestro and Hal Jordan in the first Comicbook/{{New 52}} GL story arc.
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* DeadpanSnarker: Pennyworth, Blueblood's butler.
* TheDon: The griffon known as the Falcon controls all the crime in Trottingham.
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* ForegoneConclusion: Being as it starts seven years before ''Mare of Steel'', we know it's only a matter of time before [[spoiler: Zod kidnaps and replaces Blueblood]].

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* ForegoneConclusion: Being as it starts seven years before ''Mare of Steel'', we know it's only a matter of time before [[spoiler: Zod kidnaps and replaces Blueblood]].Blueblood. In fact, we see what appears to be Zod orchestrating it in chapter 2]].
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* ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/48490/mare-of-steel Mare of Steel]]'': The story that started the universe. After returning home from a meteor shower, Rainbow Dash finds a green rock that makes her violently ill when she touches it. Later, she begins a journey to discover just who she is and what her place in Equestria is, becoming the hero [[{{Superman}} Supermare]]. Complete.

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* ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/48490/mare-of-steel Mare of Steel]]'': The story that started the universe. After returning home from a meteor shower, Rainbow Dash finds a green rock that makes her violently ill when she touches it. Later, she begins a journey to discover just who she is and what her place in Equestria is, becoming the hero [[{{Superman}} Supermare]]. Complete.Complete, although a rewrite is scheduled.
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** Brainiac's VillainousBreakdown shares a line with [[MassEffect2 Harbinger]]

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** Brainiac's VillainousBreakdown shares a line with [[MassEffect2 [[VideoGame/MassEffect2 Harbinger]]
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* AbsurdlySharpBlade: [[spoiler:Deathstroke's sword can cut even ''Supermare'']].

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** Diana.


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*[[ActionGirl Action Mare]]: Diana.
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** Diana.
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** Brainiac's VillainousBreakdown shares a line with [[MassEffect2 Harbinger]]

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*DeceasedParentsAreTheBest: Rainbow's father Thunderhead died six years before the beginning of the story.



* DisappearedDad: Rainbow's father Thunderhead died six years before the beginning of the story.



* WhatCouldHaveBeen: WordOfGod is that originally, there wasn't going to be a whole series of stories, but rather just this one. It would have continued past the second arc to Rainbow Dash and the other Mane Six fighting off [[spoiler: Darkseid]], with the fallout causing Rainbow Dash to go into self-imposed exile. Then there would have been a TimeSkip, followed by adaptations of ''Film/SupermanReturns'', "Superman vs. [[NinetiesAntiHero the Elite]]", and ''TheDeathOfSuperman'' before finally finishing. However, the author was inspired to write a whole series of crossovers, so those plans were scrapped.
** The Red Kryptonite side story was supposed to also feature Twilight tinkering with ''Pink'' Kryptonite, but that was cut.
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* [[StealthSequel Stealth Prequel]]: Surprising enough, while this happens sideways to Mare of Steel, it turns out to be a secret origin story [[spoiler: for this world's version of DoctorFate]].
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* WeirdnessCensor: Soarin' is initially shocked to see Diana, an Earth Pony, fly under her own power, but quickly gets used to it, admitting that with all the weird stuff he's seen in such a short period of time, it's nothing to get worked up over.

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* WeirdnessCensor: WeirdnessCoupon: Soarin' is initially shocked to see Diana, an Earth Pony, fly under her own power, but quickly gets used to it, admitting that with all the weird stuff he's seen in such a short period of time, it's nothing to get worked up over.
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*YourCostumeNeedsWork: Twice; when dealing with Silversmith's mooks in Manehattan, one of them says that Rainbow is too short to be Supermare, and that the colors on her costume are wrong. Later, in the crossover side story with Batpony, another thug says that she's too thin and her mane is the wrong color.

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* {{Foreshadowing}}: In the first chapter of ''In Brightest Day'', Cadence mentions getting a letter from Twilight talking about a research assignment she's gotten to study some artifacts from the Canterlot archives. Flash-forward to a later published chapter of ''Princess of Themyscira'', which reveals that the artifacts in question are [[ComicBook/DoctorFate the Helmet of Nabu and Amulet of Anubis]], which WordOfGod states Twilight will don.

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* {{Foreshadowing}}: In the first chapter of ''In Brightest Day'', Cadence mentions getting a letter from Twilight talking about a research assignment she's gotten to study some artifacts from the Canterlot archives. Flash-forward to a later published chapter of ''Princess of Themyscira'', which reveals that the artifacts in question are [[ComicBook/DoctorFate the Helmet of Nabu and Amulet of Anubis]], which WordOfGod states Twilight will don.ends up donning at that story's climax, becoming DoctorFate.



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* AStormIsComing: As part of one of the sequel hooks, Athena warns Hippolyta that Ares' plan may have [[spoiler: given Apokolips the opportunity to restart the War in Heaven]].

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* AndTheAdventureContinues: After defeating Ares, Diana chooses to stay in Equestria and continue to act as its defender.



* EverybodyHatesHades: Subverted. Hades shows up, but outright refuses to aid Ares in his plans, not even when offered a way to ensure he gets plenty of souls for his domain (stating that everyone ends up there eventually anyway). In fact, the only way Ares gets any support from Tartarus is that Persephone tells him about the Alicorn Amulet's abilities, because she somehow thinks she's helping her husband out.

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* EverybodyHatesHades: Subverted. Hades shows up, but outright refuses to aid Ares in his plans, not even when offered a way to ensure he gets plenty of souls for his domain (stating that everyone ends up there eventually anyway). In fact, the only way Ares gets any support from Tartarus is that Persephone tells him about the Alicorn Amulet's abilities, because she somehow thinks she's helping her husband out. [[spoiler: As it turns out, she ''was'' helping -- she was counting on Ares failing and ending up sealed in Tartarus at Hades will, something he's been trying to get done for a long time.]]



* HoistByHisOwnPetard: [[spoiler: When the portal Ares opens to Tartarus is sealed, he ends up sucked inside.]]

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* HoistByHisOwnPetard: [[spoiler: When the portal Ares opens to Tartarus is sealed, he ends up sucked inside. And due to the rules of the Alicorn Amulet's magic, he's now bound to Hades' will, and the latter is keeping him prisoner.]]



* SealedEvilInACan: Ares' master plan is to unleash the army of demons created during the Olympians' war with the Titans, which were sealed away in Tartarus. [[spoiler: He succeeds, but Twilight/Nabu sends them back, and Ares himself ends up sealed with them when he's sucked into the closing portal.]]
* ShrinkingViolet: Persephone.

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* SealedEvilInACan: Ares' master plan is to unleash the army of demons created during the Olympians' war with the Titans, which were sealed away in Tartarus. [[spoiler: He succeeds, but Twilight/Nabu sends them back, and Ares himself ends up sealed with them when he's sucked into the closing portal.portal, and is let stuck as Hades' prisoner.]]
* SequelHook: Like ''Mare of Steel'', it has two, one for its own personal sequel, and one for the main JLE fic. The former is the penultimate scene showing Ares, [[spoiler: trapped in Tartarus]], setting up a potential VillainTeamUp with Circe. The latter is the last scene, where Athena informs Hippolyta that Ares' plan has resulted in [[spoiler: widening a crack in reality that can't be fully sealed, and that Apokolips can take advantage of]].
* ShrinkingViolet: Persephone. [[spoiler: Doesn't stop her from playing Ares like a fiddle.]]
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* ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/103936/the-princess-of-themyscira The Princess of Themyscira]]'': Soarin' washes ashore on a far away island, where he is found by [[WonderWoman Diana, Princess of Themyscira and Daughter of Hippolyta]]. Although initially hostile, Diana sees Soarin' as a means to leave Themyscira and explore the mortal realm, and with the manipulations of [[GodOfEvil Ares]] becoming apparent she may just get her chance. In Progress.

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* ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/103936/the-princess-of-themyscira The Princess of Themyscira]]'': Soarin' washes ashore on a far away island, where he is found by [[WonderWoman Diana, Princess of Themyscira and Daughter of Hippolyta]]. Although initially hostile, Diana sees Soarin' as a means to leave Themyscira and explore the mortal realm, and with the manipulations of [[GodOfEvil Ares]] becoming apparent she may just get her chance. In Progress.Complete.

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* BigDamnHeroes: Soarin' gets two moments. First, he saves Diana when Ares is about to kill her in their first fight, carrying her to safety. Then, at the climax, he manages to save her from being sucked into Tartarus [[spoiler: with Ares]], with her own lasso, no less.



* SealedEvilInACan: Ares master plan is to unleash the army of demons created during the Olympians' war with the Titans, which were sealed away in Tartarus. [[spoiler: He succeeds, but Twilight/Nabu sends them back, and Ares himself ends up sealed with them when he's sucked into the closing portal.]]

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* ScrewThisImOuttaHere: Officer Golden Star initially helps defend Manehattan from Ares' demonic army, but around the time Twilight shows up empowered by the Helmet of Nabu, she decides she's out of her depth and leaves the area.
* SealedEvilInACan: Ares Ares' master plan is to unleash the army of demons created during the Olympians' war with the Titans, which were sealed away in Tartarus. [[spoiler: He succeeds, but Twilight/Nabu sends them back, and Ares himself ends up sealed with them when he's sucked into the closing portal.]]
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* MyNameIsInigoMontoya: Diana has a moment like this during her final battle with Ares.


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* ShutUpHannibal: During the FinalBattle, Ares derides the mortal realm and asks why Diana is bothering to defend it. She responds by saying that while she may not have originally thought much of Equestria, she's seen enough good in the ponies there to believe in them, and she'll never stop defending them.


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* WeCanRuleTogether: Ares offers Diana the chance to rule by his side as he conquers the world. She naturally refuses.
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*ForeverWar: [[BigBad Ares]] hopes to start one of these. He is a WarGod, after all.

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* ArtifactOfDoom: Apparently, the Alicorn Amulet can, in addition to being an AmplifierArtifact, also open a portal to Tartarus and summon the creatures there.

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* ArtifactOfDoom: Apparently, the The Alicorn Amulet can, in addition to being an AmplifierArtifact, also open a portal to Tartarus and summon the creatures there.



* BadassBoast:
** Diana's statement when facing down Ares' demonic army:
-->"Come, you spawns of hell! Come and face me, and I swear by Athena and the gods of Olympus that I shall send you back to the pit from whence you came!"
** Ares himself gets a villainous one during the climatic fight between him and Diana:
-->"Did you honestly think you could challenge me?! I am the God of War! I killed thousands during the War in Heaven! I drove Nightmare Moon from the steps of Olympus, and I broke the walls of Tartarus! Why do you not see that anything you do is pointless, Amazon?!"
* BadassNormal: Soarin' isn't a demigoddess, and he doesn't have magic at his disposal. But he fights Ares' demons alongside Diana and Twilight all the same.



* BigApplesauce: Soarin's side of the story starts in Manehattan, it's the first place that he visits with Diana, and it ends up being where Ares decides to unleash the demons of Tartarus.



** This also ends up being how Diana defeats Ares' master plan -- [[spoiler: rather than trying to remove the Alicorn Amulet from its position or figure out how to use it, she simply destroys it with her tiara]].



* EvilCannotComprehendGood: Ares seems honestly confused that Diana will fight for the mortal realm after being raised in a culture that hates it.
* HoistByHisOwnPetard: [[spoiler: When the portal Ares opens to Tartarus is sealed, he ends up sucked inside.]]



* NoHoldsBarredBeatdown: Both of Diana's fights with Ares are brutal.



* SealedEvilInACan: Ares master plan is to unleash the army of demons created during the Olympians' war with the Titans, which were sealed away in Tartarus. [[spoiler: He succeeds, but Twilight/Nabu sends them back, and Ares himself ends up sealed with them when he's sucked into the closing portal.]]



* TakingYouWithMe: [[spoiler: When Ares is being sucked into Tartarus, he tries to drag Diana in with him, but Soarin' saves her.]]



* VillainousBreakdown: Ares loses it when [[spoiler: the Alicorn Amulet is destroyed and his plan is ruined.]]




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** The effect is still active during their rematch in Manehattan; while still able to fight evenly, Diana slowly gets beaten down by Ares' superior might. [[spoiler: Twilight, empowered by the Helmet of Nabu, is able to fight him more evenly.]]
* YouShallNotPass: While Diana is fighting Ares in Manehattan, Twilight and Soarin' are tasked with keeping his army of demons from reaching the city proper.
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* GenderBender: This happens to Rainbow Dash in one side story, as a result of Red Kryptonite.
** AttractiveBentGender[=/=]StupidSexyFlanders: Thunderlane tries ''very'' hard not to be turned on by colt!Rainbow.


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* ItsAllAboutMe: Maxima more than demonstrates this during her guest appearance in one side story -- she doesn't care that her hoarding of food leaves her subjects starving, and doesn't care if her chosen mate loves her back.


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** The side story where Maxima shows up is partly based on her first appearance in the DCAU, complete with {{Lobo}} crashing her throne room at the end.


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** The Red Kryptonite side story was supposed to also feature Twilight tinkering with ''Pink'' Kryptonite, but that was cut.
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** ArbitrarySkepticism: This is despite Cadance having had tea withan alien superhero and being best friends with a demigoddess - which, oddly, is pointed out by ''Cadance herself'' beforehand when Shining says that he doesn't expect her to believe him.

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** ArbitrarySkepticism: This is despite Cadance having had tea withan with an alien superhero and being best friends with a demigoddess - which, oddly, is pointed out by ''Cadance herself'' beforehand when Shining says that he doesn't expect her to believe him.
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** ArbitrarySkepticism: This is despite Cadance having had tea withan alien superhero and being best friends with a demigoddess - which, oddly, is pointed out by ''Cadance herself'' beforehand when Shining says that he doesn't expect her to believe him.

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