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* ThisLoserIsYou: According to WordOfGod, Jericho's tendency toward prolifically murderous rampages is a (''[[BlackComedy very, very dark]]'') parody of Western RPG player characters, who tend to rack up an improbable body count over the course of things.
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* BadSamaritan: Jericho suspects this of Lyra—“ but the idea is subverted. “
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* BadSamaritan: Jericho suspects this of Lyra—“ Lyra — but the idea is subverted. “subverted.
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* BlackComedy: '''''Yes.''''' If anything, listing this trope here is an understatement worthy of monument.
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* BadassBoast:
--> "But be thou warned, he of House Sânge: I have been before challenged by gods and demons, warriors and champions, kings of ponies, titanic animals the likes of which your pea-sized brain can’t even comprehend. All have challenged me once.
-->"Once. (...)
-->"Just be now aware that you can’t cause me any real pain; I have been dealing with agony and pain for so long now that pain is practically an old friend of mine."
--> "But be thou warned, he of House Sânge: I have been before challenged by gods and demons, warriors and champions, kings of ponies, titanic animals the likes of which your pea-sized brain can’t even comprehend. All have challenged me once.
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-->"Just be now aware that you can’t cause me any real pain; I have been dealing with agony and pain for so long now that pain is practically an old friend of mine."
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** Also almost anything to do with the skinwalker
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* GoshDangItToHeck: subverted.
--> "Listen here," I bellowed without warning, "you gosh darn little pencil-pricked, own-mother-sodomizing, mouth-breathing, pen-pushing, slack-jawed, jelly-and-blue-balled, drooling aristocratic dickball, son of a filthy, rotten whore of a mare who was nevertheless well-respected in her small community!"
--> "Listen here," I bellowed without warning, "you gosh darn little pencil-pricked, own-mother-sodomizing, mouth-breathing, pen-pushing, slack-jawed, jelly-and-blue-balled, drooling aristocratic dickball, son of a filthy, rotten whore of a mare who was nevertheless well-respected in her small community!"
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** Avoiding-A-Fate-Worse-Than-Death Or Limb Decision: Jericho tries biting his arm off to escape [[spoiler:the Cherrypillar]]
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** However, the more details the story gives about the religion, the less Christian it seems. Like how they believe that [[[=NameOfCain=] Kain]] to be a dark hero. Or, for one interesting example:
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** However, the more details the story gives about the religion, the less Christian it seems. Like how they believe that [[[=NameOfCain=] [[NameOfCain Kain]] to be a dark hero. Or, for one interesting example:
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* [[[=NameofCain=] Name Of Kane]]. Kane himself, of course. And Jericho's middle name.
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* [[[=NameofCain=] [[NameOfCain Name Of Kane]]. Kane himself, of course. And Jericho's middle name.
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** However, the more details the story gives about the religion, the less Christian it seems. Like how they believe that [[NameOfCain Kain]] to be a dark hero. Or, for one interesting example:
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** However, the more details the story gives about the religion, the less Christian it seems. Like how they believe that [[NameOfCain [[[=NameOfCain=] Kain]] to be a dark hero. Or, for one interesting example:
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* [[NameofCain Name Of Kane]]. Kane himself, of course. And Jericho's middle name.
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* [[NameofCain [[[=NameofCain=] Name Of Kane]]. Kane himself, of course. And Jericho's middle name.
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* WhiteHairedPrettyBoy: Possibly. Jericho is never ever described (WordOfGod says the author never will), but the fan-art cover depicts a pony that seems to be Jericho.
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* WhiteHairedPrettyBoy: Played with. Jericho's hair is so blond that it looks white.
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* AnArmAndALeg: [[EyeScream eye]], [[DePower horn]], and [[LifeOrLimbDecision foreleg]]. [[spoiler:Jericho]] has not been having a fun time of it.
* ArcWords: Three words, “That Government Boy”.
* ArcWords: Three words, “That Government Boy”.
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* AnArmAndALeg: [[EyeScream eye]], [[DePower horn]], and [[LifeOrLimbDecision foreleg]]. [[spoiler:Jericho]] has not been having [[AllMenArePerverts All Stallions Are Perverts]]: Played with. He is actually more annoyed by nudity than anything else.
--> A little pony in my head assured me I didn’t have afun time of it.
* ArcWords: Three words, “That Government Boy”.dirty mind, just a sexy imagination.
--> A little pony in my head assured me I didn’t have a
* ArcWords: Three words, “That Government Boy”.
* AnArmAndALeg: [[EyeScream eye]], [[DePower horn]], and [[LifeOrLimbDecision foreleg]]. [[spoiler:Jericho]] has not been having a fun time of it.
* AntiVillain: [[spoiler:A lot of what Duke Elkington does, he does for the good of Equestria.]]
* ApocalypticLog: Surprisingly given the setting, but also downplayed. The most exact events of what's going on are told from a little girl's diary, and so it's not explicit at all what's going on. While it's not a normal example of an apocalyptic log, since the end hasn't technically happened in them, they do tell a story of things getting worse, but, at the times Jericho arrives, the dark events ''aren’t over yet''.
* ArcWords: Three words, “That Government Boy”.
* AntiVillain: [[spoiler:A lot of what Duke Elkington does, he does for the good of Equestria.]]
* ApocalypticLog: Surprisingly given the setting, but also downplayed. The most exact events of what's going on are told from a little girl's diary, and so it's not explicit at all what's going on. While it's not a normal example of an apocalyptic log, since the end hasn't technically happened in them, they do tell a story of things getting worse, but, at the times Jericho arrives, the dark events ''aren’t over yet''.
* ArcWords: Three words, “That Government Boy”.
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* ApocalypticLog: Surprisingly given the setting, but also downplayed. The most exact events of what's going on are told from a little girl's diary, and so it's not explicit at all what's going on. While it's not a normal example of an apocalyptic log, since the end hasn't technically happened in them, they do tell a story of things getting worse, but, at the times Jericho arrives, the dark events ''aren’t over yet''.
* [[AllMenArePerverts All Stallions Are Perverts]]: Played with. He is actually more annoyed by nudity than anything else.
--> A little pony in my head assured me I didn’t have a dirty mind, just a sexy imagination.
* [[AManIsAlwaysEager A Stallion Is Always Eager]]: averted
* AntiVillain: [[spoiler:A lot of what Duke Elkington does, he does for the good of Equestria.]]
* [[AllMenArePerverts All Stallions Are Perverts]]: Played with. He is actually more annoyed by nudity than anything else.
--> A little pony in my head assured me I didn’t have a dirty mind, just a sexy imagination.
* [[AManIsAlwaysEager A Stallion Is Always Eager]]: averted
* AntiVillain: [[spoiler:A lot of what Duke Elkington does, he does for the good of Equestria.]]
* ArtificialLimbs: [[spoiler:Jericho]] gets a skinwalker's limb grafted in the place of his own lost one
* [[AManIsAlwaysEager A Stallion Is Always Eager]]: averted
* [[AManIsAlwaysEager A Stallion Is Always Eager]]: averted
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* YourDaysAreNumbered: [[spoiler:due to Jericho's blood poisoning]]
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* YourDaysAreNumbered: [[spoiler:due poor Jericho. At first it was due to Jericho's blood poisoning]]
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* ForgetsToEat: Jericho. WordOfGod, this started out as the author lampeshading the lack of eating scenes. And then the Author deconstructed this trope; Jericho almost dies because of this. In fact, the only way to get Jericho to remember to eat is for him to be borderline dying.
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* ForgetsToEat: Jericho. WordOfGod, this started out as the author lampeshading lampshading the lack of eating scenes. And then the Author deconstructed this trope; Jericho almost dies because of this. In fact, the only way to get Jericho to remember to eat is for him to be borderline dying.
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* AnArmAndALeg: [[EyeScream eye]], [[DePower horn]], and [[LifeOrLimbDecision foreleg]]. [[spoiler:Jericho]] has not been having a fun time of it.
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* AwesomeMcCoolname: Jericho
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* DeadpanSnarker: Jericho.
** And Lauren.
** And Lauren.
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* Determinator: Jericho. The Author as well
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* FirstPersonSmartass: Even Jericho's own thoughts mock him; his own thoughts could easily be mistaking for an MST!
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* InnerMonologue: Jericho. All. The. Time. In a reference to [[IJustWantToBeBadass the above]], he humorously lampshaded it
--> '' 'I need to cut these [[LeaningOnTheFourthWall inner monologues]] short; otherwise, I'm just standing here like a retard – the exact opposite of the dark, brooding anti-hero I'm aiming for!' ''
--> '' 'I need to cut these [[LeaningOnTheFourthWall inner monologues]] short; otherwise, I'm just standing here like a retard – the exact opposite of the dark, brooding anti-hero I'm aiming for!' ''
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* MeaningfulName: Jericho is Canaanite for "moon", the same meaning as Princess Luna's name.
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* SociopathicHero: Jericho. So very much.
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* SeeTheInvisible: by pouring pink paint over them, naturally
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* CollapsingLair: the demon's
* {{Metaphorgotten}}: ''all the damn time''
* OverdrawnAtTheBloodBank: lampshaded
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* SarcasticConfession: played with; although the rest of it is obviously fake, the first and last statements are completely accurate
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* SarcasticConfession: played with; although the rest of it is supporting details are obviously fake, the first and last main statements are completely accurate
--> “Oh, you can tell by my equicidal demeanor, incoherence, and plethora of weapons that I, in fact, am the Butcher of Songnam.”
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* TheButcher: Jericho gets called the Butcher of Songnam, for the very good reason of having killed so many people there
* TheButcher: Jericho gets called the Butcher of Songnam, for the very good reason of having killed so many people there
* UnfortunateNames: seriously, "Gluepony"
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* AwesomeMcCoolname: Jerichp
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* AwesomeMcCoolname: JerichpJericho
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* EyeScream: courtesy of an explosive rune, and described in ''explicit'' detail. [[spoiler:And then Jericho has to cut through his optic nerve and sew his eyelid shut.]]
* MoodWhiplash: due to the [[FirstPersonSmartass tone]] of the narration; the situation can be genuinely horrifying, then Jericho makes some off-the-wall observation
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* WeaponForIntimidation: Subverted them lampshaded when the Baron of Sleepy Oaks brandishes a knife at Jericho, Jericho isn't intimidated in the slightest.
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* WeaponForIntimidation: Subverted them then lampshaded when the Baron of Sleepy Oaks brandishes a knife at Jericho, Jericho isn't intimidated in the slightest.
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* WellIntentionedExtremist: possibly ElkingtonElkington
* WhamEpisode: chapters 15 and 16, the latter of which is the end of the first act. [[spoiler:Jericho kills the entire town of Sleepy Oaks, breaking the Code by killing a child; then in the next chapter we meet the demon, the demon gets killed, and Jericho loses his horn (and an eye) in an explosion.]]
* WhamEpisode: chapters 15 and 16, the latter of which is the end of the first act. [[spoiler:Jericho kills the entire town of Sleepy Oaks, breaking the Code by killing a child; then in the next chapter we meet the demon, the demon gets killed, and Jericho loses his horn (and an eye) in an explosion.]]
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* CaptainErsatz: Cards resembles a smaller, more fragile [[Fanfic/FalloutEquestriaProjectHorizons Black Jack.]]
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* CaptainErsatz: Cards resembles a smaller, more fragile [[Fanfic/FalloutEquestriaProjectHorizons Black Jack.Blackjack.]]
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* CaptainErsatz: Cards resembles a smaller, more fragile [[FalloutEquestriaProjectHorizons Black Jack.]]
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* Adorkable: [[ButtMonkey Cards]], [[BornUnlucky Cards]], ''[[TheWoobie Cards!]]'' So much so that even ''[[SociopathicHero Jericho]]'' seems to think so, who, oddly enough, may also qualify for this trope.
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* Adorkable: {{Adorkable}}: [[ButtMonkey Cards]], [[BornUnlucky Cards]], ''[[TheWoobie Cards!]]'' So much so that even ''[[SociopathicHero Jericho]]'' seems to think so, who, oddly enough, may also qualify for this trope.
* CodeOfHonour: Jericho's is simple: "Harm not Children. Commit not Rape."
* FamilyUnfriendlyDeath: [[spoiler:the Baron]]
* InfantImmortality: [[spoiler:Nope. Every stallion, mare, and ''foal'' in Sleepy Oaks gets killed.]]
* OneManArmy: Jericho
* OOCIsSeriousBusiness: when Jericho stops being able to find everything funny after [[spoiler:killing the filly]]
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--> This was the mythical motherland, Equestria, where Princesses Celestia and Luna—fallen Luna — fallen angels, as many back home said—ruled.said — ruled.
* RapeIsASpecialKindOfEvil: one of only two things Jericho's Code prohibits, the other being harming children.
* RapeIsASpecialKindOfEvil: one of only two things Jericho's Code prohibits, the other being harming children.
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* WouldNotHurtAChild: half of Jericho's Code. [[spoiler:And breaking it in Sleepy Oaks is a Very Big Deal.]]
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* AntiVillain: [[spoiler:A lot of what Elkington does, he does for the good of Equestria.]]
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* AntiVillain: [[spoiler:A lot of what Duke Elkington does, he does for the good of Equestria.]]
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* StalkerWithACrush: [[spoiler:Elkington [[spoiler:Duke Elkington towards Celestia, although far less creepy than the norm.]]
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* StalkerWithACrush:[[spoiler:Elkington StalkerWithACrush: [[spoiler:Elkington towards Celestia, although far less creepy than the norm.]]
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* ButtMonkey: [[TheWoobie Cards.]] Jericho to an extent, but Cards most definitely. Unlike most cases this is ''not'' [[PlayedForLaughs played for laughs.]]
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* AntiVillain: [[spoiler:A lot of Elkington's atrocities are done for the good of Equestria.]]
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* AntiVillain: [[spoiler:A lot of Elkington's atrocities are done what Elkington does, he does for the good of Equestria.]]
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* Adorkable: [[ButtMonkey Cards]], [[BornUnlucky Cards]], ''[[TheWoobie Cards!]]'' So much so that even ''[[SociopathicHero Jericho]]'' seems to think so, who, oddly enough, may also qualify.
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* Adorkable: [[ButtMonkey Cards]], [[BornUnlucky Cards]], ''[[TheWoobie Cards!]]'' So much so that even ''[[SociopathicHero Jericho]]'' seems to think so. Oddly so, who, oddly enough, Jericho himself, may also qualify.
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* Adorkable: [[ButtMonkey Cards]], [[TheWoobie [[BornUnlucky Cards]], ''[[BornUnlucky ''[[TheWoobie Cards!]]'' So much so that even ''[[SociopathicHero Jericho]]'' thinks seems to think so. Oddly enough, Jericho himself, may also qualify.
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* Adorkable: [[ButtMonkey Cards]], [[TheWoobie Cards]], [["BornUnlucky Cards!"]] ''[[BornUnlucky Cards!]]'' So much so that even [["SociopathicHero Jericho"]] ''[[SociopathicHero Jericho]]'' thinks so. Oddly enough, Jericho himself, may also qualify.