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* [[HundredPercentHeroismRating 99% Heroism Rating]]: Once they all learn that Lero's going to rescue the Cutie Mark Crusaders, Lero is given gifts, praise, well-wishing, free meals, everypony admires him... with the singularly notable exception of [[FantasticRacism Honeydew.]]
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* MyFriendsAndZoidberg: The band of heroes intent on rescuing the crusaders are comprised of all the adult members of Herd Bellerophon… and Princess Luna.
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* MyFriendsAndZoidberg: The band of heroes intent on who unite to rescuing the crusaders abducted Cutie Mark Crusaders are comprised of all the adult members of Herd Bellerophon… and Princess Luna.
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* DeterminedDefeatist: Lero.
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* DeterminedDefeatist: Lero. Lero, after Luna convinces him to lead her into the realm of the Fae.
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* DeterminedDefeatist: Lero.
* MindControlMusic: Such a mesmerizing melody Silk plays…
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* MindControlMusic: Such a mesmerizing melody Silk plays…
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* RoaringRampageOfRescue: What Princess Luna intends to do, once she's on the other side of the Hedge.
--> '''Princess Luna''': So let me tell you this, human: I will not allow some foul abominations to enter into my home and snatch my subjects away to become their playthings! Least of all, the sisters of the mares who saved me from my own darkness! I will go into their lands, into the heart of their power, and make them know that Equestria is off-limits to their schemes! They will know to fear Us and Our power! I will send them a message, one that will last a thousand of their lifetimes, that they may never trespass into Our kingdom and that no incursion of theirs shall ever go unpunished!
--> '''Princess Luna''': So let me tell you this, human: I will not allow some foul abominations to enter into my home and snatch my subjects away to become their playthings! Least of all, the sisters of the mares who saved me from my own darkness! I will go into their lands, into the heart of their power, and make them know that Equestria is off-limits to their schemes! They will know to fear Us and Our power! I will send them a message, one that will last a thousand of their lifetimes, that they may never trespass into Our kingdom and that no incursion of theirs shall ever go unpunished!
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* DeclarationOfProtection: Rarity towards Lero, Rainbow Dash towards Lero, and Princess Luna towards all the ponies she rules.
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* DeclarationOfProtection: Rarity towards Lero, Rainbow Dash towards Lero, and Princess Luna towards all the ponies she rules.
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* DeclarationOfProtection: Rarity towards Lero, Rainbow Dash towards Lero, and Princess Luna towards all the ponies she rules.
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* DeclarationOfProtection: Rarity towards Lero, Rainbow Dash towards Lero, and Princess Luna towards all the ponies she rules.
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* LetterMotif: Lero, Lyra, Luna, The Lost, The Lady.
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* WouldHurtAChild: Lero.
--> Apple Bloom was about to say something when it happened. The walking stick came down and struck the yellow filly across her face with a harsh crack, knocking her to the ground before a hand latched itself around her small throat.
--> Apple Bloom was about to say something when it happened. The walking stick came down and struck the yellow filly across her face with a harsh crack, knocking her to the ground before a hand latched itself around her small throat.
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* WouldHurtAChild: Lero.
--> Apple Bloom was about to say something when it happened. The walking stick came down and struck the yellow filly across her face with a harsh crack, knocking her to the ground before a hand latched itself around her small throat.
--> Apple Bloom was about to say something when it happened. The walking stick came down and struck the yellow filly across her face with a harsh crack, knocking her to the ground before a hand latched itself around her small throat.
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* TrappedInAnotherWorld: Lero Michealides' situation to begin with, but he warns his traveling companions that this may befall them as well.
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* TrappedInAnotherWorld: Lero Michealides' situation to begin with, with as a resident of Equestria, but he warns his traveling companions that this may befall them as well.well, once they pass beyond the Hedge.
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* TrappedInAnotherWorld: Lero Michealides' situation to begin with, but he warns his traveling companions that this may befall them as well.
--> '''Lero''': This will probably be a one-way trip.
--> '''Lyra''': Now you're just making this sound fun.
--> '''Lero''': This will probably be a one-way trip.
--> '''Lyra''': Now you're just making this sound fun.
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* SpellMyNameWithAThe: Seems to be something of a naming convention among the Far! There's The Lady, The Messenger, The Lost, The Silken Harpist, The Dollmaker...
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* SpellMyNameWithAThe: Seems to be something of a naming convention among the Far! Fae! There's The Lady, The Messenger, The Lost, The Silken Harpist, The Dollmaker...
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* SpellMyNameWithAThe: A good number, so far! The Lady, The Messenger... and most recently, 'The Lost.'
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* SpellMyNameWithAThe: A good number, so far! SpellMyNameWithAThe: Seems to be something of a naming convention among the Far! There's The Lady, The Messenger... and most recently, 'The Lost.' Messenger, The Lost, The Silken Harpist, The Dollmaker...
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* [[EnfantTerrible Les Enfants Terribles]]: The ‘Cutie Mark Crusaders’ are quite the sociopaths.
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* [[EnfantTerrible Les Enfants Terribles]]: The ‘Cutie Cutie Mark Crusaders’ Crusaders' fetches are quite the little sociopaths.
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* DealWithTheDevil: The pact Lero forms with The Lady: in exchange for a cure to the Swap, he will re-enter the Lady’s service on the day of his first daughter’s seventh birthday. For the record, Herd Bellerophon’s still hasn’t figured out how a human man and his pony sweethearts can conceive a child.
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* DealWithTheDevil: The pact Lero forms with The Lady: in exchange for a cure to the Swap, he will re-enter the Lady’s service on the day of his first daughter’s seventh birthday. For the record, Herd Bellerophon’s Bellerophon still hasn’t figured out how a human man and his pony sweethearts can conceive a child.
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* {{Interquel}}: Into The Hedge takes place at some point during Chapter 25 and 26 in Divided Rainbow.
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* {{Interquel}}: Into The Hedge takes place at some point during between Chapter 25 and 26 in Divided Rainbow.
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-> The Lost looked at her. Pinkie and Applejack were both sharing that same hopeful expression. He wanted to lie. God, he wanted to lie so badly. Just tell them that their sisters were dead and gone and spare them both the horrible truth of the matter. Just let them remember their sisters as who they were, just a bunch of cheerful fillies trying to get their cutie marks. But…
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* FateWorseThanDeath: The Lost does not think favorably of The Cutie Mark Crusaders' prospects in The Fae's world.
--> “So, ma sister,” breathed Pinkie Pie, “she… she’s alive?”
-> The Lost looked at her. Pinkie and Applejack were both sharing that same hopeful expression. He wanted to lie. God, he wanted to lie so badly. Just tell them that their sisters were dead and gone and spare them both the horrible truth of the matter. Just let them remember their sisters as who they were, just a bunch of cheerful fillies trying to get their cutie marks. But…
--> “Maybe,” he said. “There is a very good chance that all three of them are still alive.”
--> “So, ma sister,” breathed Pinkie Pie, “she… she’s alive?”
-> The Lost looked at her. Pinkie and Applejack were both sharing that same hopeful expression. He wanted to lie. God, he wanted to lie so badly. Just tell them that their sisters were dead and gone and spare them both the horrible truth of the matter. Just let them remember their sisters as who they were, just a bunch of cheerful fillies trying to get their cutie marks. But…
--> “Maybe,” he said. “There is a very good chance that all three of them are still alive.”
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--> The only thing that mattered to her right then was hitting that sister-killing thing over and over until she was pounding wet chunks of bone into the ground.
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* GoodIsNotNice: The Lost. Although just as loving and protective of his friends and family as normal Lero, you do NOT want to get on his bad side.
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* GoodIsNotNice: The Lost. Although just as loving and protective of his friends and family as normal Lero, you do NOT want to get on his bad side.
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* JekyllAndHyde: Averted. While there's a much sharper, harder edge to The Lost's personality than the normal Lero, he seems to be firmly on the side of good.
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* JekyllAndHyde: Averted. While there's a much sharper, harder edge to The Lost's personality than the normal Lero, he seems to be firmly on the side of good.good; and he retains all the same memories of everyone in Equestria as Lero has.
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* XMeetsY: Divided Rainbow meets Changeling: The Lost.
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* XMeetsY: [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/98472/divided-rainbow Divided Rainbow Rainbow]] meets [[TabletopGame/ChangelingTheLost Changeling: The Lost.]]
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--> Apple Bloom was about to say something when it happened. The walking stick came down and struck the yellow filly across her face with a harsh crack, knocking her to the ground before a hand latched itself around her small throat.
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* XMeetsY: Divided Rainbow meets Changeling: The Lost.
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* JekyllAndHyde: Averted.
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* JekyllAndHyde: Averted. While there's a much sharper, harder edge to The Lost's personality than the normal Lero, he seems to be firmly on the side of good.
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* JekyllAndHyde: Averted.
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* RepressedMemories: Lero had a very dark past with the Fae.
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* RepressedMemories: Lero had a very dark past with the Fae.The Lost. He embodies everything Bellerophon Michaelides sought to forget about his time in The Lady's world.
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* JackBauerInterrogationTechnique: It's heavily implied that The Lost does this to Scootaloo and Sweetie Belle's fetches, when he sends everyone else at the house ahead to Sugarcube Corner.
--> The Lost paused. “You put up a silencing spell around the library, didn’t you, Princess?”
--> Luna knew where this was going. “Aye, We did.”
--> “Put one up on the basement too, if you’d please.” He opened the door. The faint sound of clattering chains came up from the basement. “I may be quite loud when I ask them.”
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* SpeakOfTheDevil: The Lady.
--> “Never. Speak. That. Name.” he warned. “It only attracts her attention.”
--> “Never. Speak. That. Name.” he warned. “It only attracts her attention.”
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* SpellMyNameWithAThe: The Lady and The Messenger.
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* SpellMyNameWithAThe: A good number, so far! The Lady Lady, The Messenger... and The Messenger.most recently, 'The Lost.'
