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** Excolotis does it when Fluttershy is held hostage by Gryphons.
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* BilingualBonus: The gryphons all speak German.
** The names of various places are diret translations of actual places in the native language.
* DarkerAndEdgier: The blood flies in this story.
** The names of various places are diret translations of actual places in the native language.
* DarkerAndEdgier: The blood flies in this story.
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* MundaneUtility: Excolotis uses his skill with thrown weapons to win a game of darts.
* RealityEnsues: Being hit with a mace hurts. Doesn't matter where.
** Saving the world from Discord doesn't undo the psychological damage, as the Princesses found out.
* RealityEnsues: Being hit with a mace hurts. Doesn't matter where.
** Saving the world from Discord doesn't undo the psychological damage, as the Princesses found out.
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** Saving the world from Discord doesn't undo the psychological damage, as the Princesses found out.
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* BadAss: As Excolotis is the God of War, this is to be expected.
** Kind of ruined by him trying to fit into buildings built for smaller things.
** Kind of ruined by him trying to fit into buildings built for smaller things.
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** Excolotis does it when Fluttershy is held hostage by Gryphons.
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* BloodKnight: Excolotis shows shades of this, except without all the hacking people to death part.
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* BloodKnight: Excolotis shows shades of this, except without all the hacking people but it's hard to death part.tell as we never get to see things from his point of view...
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** Kind of ruined by him trying to fit into buildings built for smaller things.
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* LargeAndInCharge: Celestia shows signs of this, as in the show, though Excolotis is stated to be even larger than the princess, though just under Discord. Also differs from the fact that Excolotis doesn't seem to actually seem to give any orders except for a flashback seqence.
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* AintTooProudToBeg: Celestia pleads to Excolotis for help with her kingdom early on.
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* AintTooProudToBeg: Celestia pleads to Excolotis for help with her kingdom early
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* BreakingTheFourthWall: Pinkie Pie does this, delivering a message form the author and at one point addressing the readers directly.
* BewareTheNiceOnes: Pinkie Pie used to live in the middle of nowhere, far away from any guards or law enforcement in a world with countless dangers. As a result, she's used to death and the concept of killing.
* BloodKnight: Excolotis shows shades of this,exceptt except without all the hacking people to death part.
* BewareTheNiceOnes: Pinkie Pie used to live in the middle of nowhere, far away from any guards or law enforcement in a world with countless dangers. As a result, she's used to death and the concept of killing.
* BloodKnight: Excolotis shows shades of this,
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* Ain'tTooProudToBeg: Celestia pleads to Excolotis for help with her kingdom early on.
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* Ain'tTooProudToBeg: AintTooProudToBeg: Celestia pleads to Excolotis for help with her kingdom early on.
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''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/9916/I-am-War I am War]]'' is a ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' fanfic.
In it the Cutie Mark Crusaders discover the God of War Excolotis trapped in stone in an ancient abandoned cave far below the earth. Obviously they release him and discover that he's actually not that bad, at least, to them. From that point forwards Excolotis spends his time in Ponyville, getting used to new things and just going with it.
In it the Cutie Mark Crusaders discover the God of War Excolotis trapped in stone in an ancient abandoned cave far below the earth. Obviously they release him and discover that he's actually not that bad, at least, to them. From that point forwards Excolotis spends his time in Ponyville, getting used to new things and just going with it.
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''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/9916/I-am-War I am Am War]]'' is a ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' fanfic.
Init it, the Cutie Mark Crusaders discover the God of War Excolotis War, Excolotis, trapped in stone in an ancient abandoned cave far below the earth. Obviously Obviously, they release him and discover that he's actually not that bad, at least, least to them. From that point forwards forward, Excolotis spends his time in Ponyville, getting used to new things and just going with it.
it.
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!!This ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' FanFic contains examples of:
* BadAss: Being the God of War, this is to be expected.
* BadAss: Being the God of War, this is to be expected.
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!!This ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' FanFic ''My Little Pony: Friendship Is Magic'' fanfic contains examples of:
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* BadAss:Being As Excolotis is the God of War, this is to be expected.
* BadAss:
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** Saving the world from Discord doesn't undo the pshycological damage as the Princesses found out.
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** Saving the world from Discord doesn't undo the pshycological damage psychological damage, as the Princesses found out.out.
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''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/9916/I-am-War I am War]]'' is a ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' fanfic.
In it the Cutie Mark Crusaders discover the God of War Excolotis trapped in stone in an ancient abandoned cave far below the earth. Obviously they release him and discover that he's actually not that bad, at least, to them. From that point forwards Excolotis spends his time in Ponyville, getting used to new things and just going with it.
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!!This ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' FanFic contains examples of:
* BadAss: Being the God of War, this is to be expected.
* BilingualBonus: The gryphons all speak German.
* DarkerAndEdgier: The blood flies in this story.
* MundaneUtility: Excolotis uses his skill with thrown weapons to win a game of darts.
* RealityEnsues: Being hit with a mace hurts. Doesn't matter where.
** Saving the world from Discord doesn't undo the pshycological damage as the Princesses found out.
In it the Cutie Mark Crusaders discover the God of War Excolotis trapped in stone in an ancient abandoned cave far below the earth. Obviously they release him and discover that he's actually not that bad, at least, to them. From that point forwards Excolotis spends his time in Ponyville, getting used to new things and just going with it.
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!!This ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' FanFic contains examples of:
* BadAss: Being the God of War, this is to be expected.
* BilingualBonus: The gryphons all speak German.
* DarkerAndEdgier: The blood flies in this story.
* MundaneUtility: Excolotis uses his skill with thrown weapons to win a game of darts.
* RealityEnsues: Being hit with a mace hurts. Doesn't matter where.
** Saving the world from Discord doesn't undo the pshycological damage as the Princesses found out.
