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* {{Angrish}} [[spoiler: Future Cell]] does this a LOT when he's losing.
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* {{Angrish}} {{Angrish}}: [[spoiler: Future Cell]] does this a LOT when he's losing.
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* CrackPairing: [[spoiler: Launch and Future Broli hook up at the end of Season 3!]]
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* CrackPairing: [[spoiler: [[invoked]][[spoiler: Launch and Future Broli hook up at the end of Season 3!]]
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* IronWoobie: Future Trunks, who hails from a [[CrapsackWorld doomed alternate universe]] where [[DeaderThanDead literally ALL the heroes are dead]]. He rarely, if ever complains about this fact.
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* JerkassWoobie: [[invoked]] Kaji is presented as this.
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* FunctionalAddict: Some of Ignai's conversation implies that all Arcosians are addicted to wine, as it's a big part of their culture - to the point that his former comrades couldn't function without alcohol in their system. He invented a machine to address this problem & "restore social balance".
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* TheExile: Kaji, of course.
* {{Exposition}}: Loads and loads of it.
* {{Exposition}}: Loads and loads of it.
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* TheExile: Kaji, of course.
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* EstablishingCharacterMoment: The first lines introducing Kaji in the Arcos Special Chapter have him scowling, & annoyed at having to wait. The next paragraph is a flashback detailing the [[CurbstompBattle brutal]] NoHoldsBarredBeatdown he gave to a fellow soldier. Similarly, the other Arcosians are introduced in ways that reflect their personalities.
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* RageBreakingPoint: [[HairTriggerTemper Kaji's]] story begins with a flashback to another soldier egging him on and insulting him. He wouldn't have succeeded in getting to Kaji, [[TrashTalk if he hadn't first implied that Kaji didn't deserve his rank, and then]] [[TryingToCatchMeFightingDirty attacked his weak points.]] [[DisproportionateRetribution Also, Kaji probably wouldn't have beaten him to death.]]
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Also (I thought this article looked familiar) replacing ampersands with the word \"and\". It\'s only three letters.
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* AbsentMindedProfessor: Dr. Briefs, at times, & Professor Ignai, almost all the time.
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* AliensAreBastards: Played straight, subverted, & generally turned on its ear with the Arcosians - turns out they have every reason to be wary of other races.
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* DarkAndTroubledPast: It would be an understatement to say that Kaji has one, what with [[DoomedHometown his home destroyed by the Saiyans]] [[WarIsHell at the beginning of their war,]] [[HandicappedBadass leaving him with a limp &]] [[ScarsAreForever some very prominent scars]].
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* DarkAndTroubledPast: It would be an understatement to say that Kaji has one, what with [[DoomedHometown his home destroyed by the Saiyans]] [[WarIsHell at the beginning of their war,]] [[HandicappedBadass leaving him with a limp &]] and]] [[ScarsAreForever some very prominent scars]].
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* DyingRace: Arcosians came from [[JustBeforeTheEnd a dying planet]], settled on a new one, & then promptly had a war with the Saiyans, severely reducing their population. They're understandably a bit xenophobic.
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* FoolishSiblingResponsibleSibling: [[TheComicallySerious Hagala]] & [[ThePrankster Hufeh]], to emphasize their SiblingYinYang personalities & appearances.
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* HairTriggerTemper: Kaji. His default personality is annoyed, & his moods only get less friendly. Of course, [[SurroundedByIdiots he has to constantly deal with Hufeh's shenanigans]], which would test anyone's patience.
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* TheNicknamer: Hufeh delights in giving his more serious brother demeaning, insulting nicknames, & also seems to have a nickname for everyone else in the group...except [[HairTriggerTemper Kaji,]] of course.
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* OvershadowedByAwesome: In the Arcos Special Chapter, Kaji references this when he compares himself to Frieza. He's fairly strong for his age, & has the military rank to prove it - but when your leaders can blow up planets, you don't look so strong in comparison.
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* OvershadowedByAwesome: In the Arcos Special Chapter, Kaji references this when he compares himself to Frieza. He's fairly strong for his age, & and has the military rank to prove it - but when your leaders can blow up planets, you don't look so strong in comparison.
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* PersonOfMassDestruction: [[YouShouldKnowThisAlready This is a DBZ fic.]] The only ones who are not explicitly people of mass destruction are the non-combatants (like Bulma), & the general populace of whatever planet the story arc is focusing on.
* PoisonousCaptive: A rare heroic example in Cell, who is helpless other than his sharp wit & even sharper tongue at the hands of [[spoiler: Future Cell]], who thinks that he has effectively neutralized the biggest threat to his plans by incapacitating Cell.
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* PersonOfMassDestruction: [[YouShouldKnowThisAlready This is a DBZ fic.]] The only ones who are not explicitly people of mass destruction are the non-combatants (like Bulma), & and the general populace of whatever planet the story arc is focusing on.
* PoisonousCaptive: A rare heroic example in Cell, who is helpless other than his sharp wit& and even sharper tongue at the hands of [[spoiler: Future Cell]], who thinks that he has effectively neutralized the biggest threat to his plans by incapacitating Cell.
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* ThePrankster: Hufeh is first introduced when he locks Kaji in a room & then nearly gets killed [[DisproportionateRetribution when the latter breaks the door down and almost kills him.]] Later, Hagala explains that his brother's antics are what got them on the expedition team in the first place.
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* ThePrankster: Hufeh is first introduced when he locks Kaji in a room & and then nearly gets killed [[DisproportionateRetribution when the latter breaks the door down and almost kills him.]] Later, Hagala explains that his brother's antics are what got them on the expedition team in the first place.
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* ProudWarriorRaceGuy: All the Saiyans, & Cell by proxy, because of his [[LegoGenetics biological heritage]].
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* TokenEvilTeammate: Cell is a mild example at first, & later Broli is introduced in this role.
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* ViewersAreGeniuses: The author, American Vigor, loads an already good fanfiction with virtual science/math/physics porn to appeal to some genius fans who love debating about how things like ki & magic work in the DBZ universe.
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* TokenEvilTeammate: Cell is a mild example at first, & and later Broli is introduced in this role.
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* DyingRace: Arcosians came from [[JustBeforeTheEnd a dying planet]], settled on a new one, & [[ItGotWorse then promptly had a war with the Saiyans]], severely reducing their population. They're understandably a bit xenophobic.
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* DyingRace: Arcosians came from [[JustBeforeTheEnd a dying planet]], settled on a new one, & [[ItGotWorse then promptly had a war with the Saiyans]], Saiyans, severely reducing their population. They're understandably a bit xenophobic.
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* TheNicknamer: Hufeh delights in giving his more serious brother demeaning, insulting nicknames, & also seems to have a nickname for everyone else in the group...except [[HairTriggerTemper Kaji,]] of course.
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* CrouchingMoronHiddenBadass: WordOfGod says that [[ThePrankster Hufeh]] is this. He's second only to [[TheLeader Kaji]] [[LightningBruiser in the speed department,]] [[FatBastard despite how he looks.]]
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* ReassignedToAntarctica: Or, in Kaji's case, given the choice between a perpetual jungle trek...[[TheUriahGambit or]] [[PlaceWorseThanDeath PRAML.]]
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* FiveManBand: Kaji's patrol consists of [[TheLeader Kaji himself]], [[TheLancer Hagala]], [[TheSmartGuy Ignai]], [[TheBigGuy Hufeh]], and [[TheChick Kataba]].
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* FoolishSiblingResponsibleSibling: [[TheComicallySerious Hagala]] & [[ThePrankster Hufeh]], to emphasize their SiblingYinYang personalities.
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* ThePrankster: Hufeh is first introduced when he locks Kaji in a room & then nearly gets killed [[DisproportionateRetribution when the latter breaks the door down and almost kills him.]] Later, Hagala explains that his brother's antics are what got them on the expedition team in the first place.
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* PerpetualFrowner: Kaji displays the "angry and angsty" variety, [[FrozenFace but he can't really help it.]]
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* OvershadowedByAwesome: In the Arcos Special Chapter, Kaji references this when he compares himself to Frieza. He's fairly strong for his age, & has the military rank to prove it - but when your leaders can blow up planets, you don't look so strong in comparison.
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* HairTriggerTemper: Kaji. His default personality is annoyed, & his moods only get less friendly.
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* DarkAndTroubledPast: It would be an understatement to say that Kaji has one, what with [[DoomedHometown his home destroyed by the Saiyans]] [[WarIsHell at the beginning of their war,]] [[leaving him with a HandicappedBadass limp &]] [[ScarsAreForever some very prominent scars]].
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* DarkAndTroubledPast: It would be an understatement to say that Kaji has one, what with [[DoomedHometown his home destroyed by the Saiyans]] [[WarIsHell at the beginning of their war,]] [[leaving [[HandicappedBadass leaving him with a HandicappedBadass limp &]] [[ScarsAreForever some very prominent scars]].
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* DarkAndTroubledPast: It would be an understatement to say that Kaji has one, what with [[DoomedHometown his home destroyed by the Saiyans]] [[WarIsHell at the beginning of their war]], leaving him with a [[HandicappedBadass limp &]] [[ScarsAreForever some very prominent scars]].
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* DarkAndTroubledPast: It would be an understatement to say that Kaji has one, what with [[DoomedHometown his home destroyed by the Saiyans]] [[WarIsHell at the beginning of their war]], leaving war,]] [[leaving him with a [[HandicappedBadass HandicappedBadass limp &]] [[ScarsAreForever some very prominent scars]].
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* DarkAndTroubledPast: It would be an understatement to say that Kaji has one, what with [[DoomedHometown his home destroyed by the Saiyans]] [[WarIsHell at the beginning of their war]], leaving him with a limp & [[ScarsAreForever some very prominent scars]].
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* DarkAndTroubledPast: It would be an understatement to say that Kaji has one, what with [[DoomedHometown his home destroyed by the Saiyans]] [[WarIsHell at the beginning of their war]], leaving him with a [[HandicappedBadass limp & &]] [[ScarsAreForever some very prominent scars]].
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* AbsentMindedProfessor: Dr. Briefs, at times, & Professor Ignai, almost all the time.
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* ViewersAreGeniuses: The author, Davidstarlingm, American Vigor, loads an already good fanfiction with virtual science/math/physics porn to appeal to some genius fans who love debating about how things like ki & magic work in the DBZ universe.