History FanFic / Hakumei

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A {{Naruto}} ForWantOfANail that takes the WhatIf of [[RightWingMilitiaFanatic Danzo's bastardry]] taken to its LogicalExtreme. Danzo kills TheLeader of the Leaf Village and in the following ReignOfTerror takes over. Unfortunately, he didn't count on six neglected children witnessing him in the act. As the kids escape with secrets given by the dying Hokage, aided and abetted by one of the ANBU, they pick up other lost children... and a force that will be the twilight of its enemies is born.

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A {{Naruto}} ''Manga/{{Naruto}}'' ForWantOfANail that takes the WhatIf of [[RightWingMilitiaFanatic Danzo's bastardry]] taken to its LogicalExtreme. Danzo kills TheLeader of the Leaf Village and in the following ReignOfTerror takes over. Unfortunately, he didn't count on six neglected children witnessing him in the act. As the kids escape with secrets given by the dying Hokage, aided and abetted by one of the ANBU, they pick up other lost children... and a force that will be the twilight of its enemies is born.


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18th Feb '16 12:43:46 PM qazwsx
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** Isaribi[[spoiler:, Kakashi and Shino]] during the Wave arc and the Inuzuka clan.

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** Isaribi[[spoiler:, Kakashi Isaribi, [[spoiler:Kakashi and Shino]] during the Wave arc and the Inuzuka clan.



** Sasuke still has an avenger complex waiting to be triggerd despite not seeing his whole clan get killed or being mind-raped by Itachi.

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** Sasuke still has an avenger complex waiting to be triggerd triggered despite not seeing his whole clan get killed or being mind-raped by Itachi.



* SadisticChoice: Yumi imposes one on Sasuke when she [[spoiler:brings his mother into the street to convince him to stay in Konoha]]. It stalls him, right up until [[spoiler:[[BigDamnHeroes Hiashi]] [[spoiler:shows up]].

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* SadisticChoice: Yumi imposes one on Sasuke when she [[spoiler:brings his mother into the street to convince him to stay in Konoha]]. It stalls him, right up until [[spoiler:[[BigDamnHeroes Hiashi]] [[spoiler:shows Hiashi]] shows up]].
9th Oct '15 6:41:11 PM Berrenta
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* ImprobableAge: Naruto and co. successfully escape a very large village with very important information, collect three other strangers, two of whom are three years older than they are, and live on their own for at least a year, all at the tender ages of six or seven. Then again, [[CombatMedic Tsunade]] notes that [[DeconstructedTrope the kids have various amounts of ailments when she finds them]] and, well, [[InstantAwesomeJustAddNinja they're ninja-in-training]].

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* ImprobableAge: Naruto and co. successfully escape a very large village with very important information, collect three other strangers, two of whom are three years older than they are, and live on their own for at least a year, all at the tender ages of six or seven. Then again, [[CombatMedic Tsunade]] notes that [[DeconstructedTrope the kids have various amounts of ailments when she finds them]] and, well, [[InstantAwesomeJustAddNinja [[GratuitousNinja they're ninja-in-training]].
10th Sep '15 3:49:54 PM HighCrate
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* CompetitiveBalance:
** FragileSpeedster: Hinata relies more on her eyes, speed and poisons to fight.
** GlassCannon: Sasuke and Haku. Kimimaro is something of a "Glass Bruiser" since he does have high attack, defense and speed but his physical stamina is low.
** GlacierWaif: Gaara and Sakura are both relatively fast but both are more known for their offensive power.
** JackOfAllStats: Sai has none of the above, both good and bad.
** LightningBruiser: Naruto and Neji only lack the bad.
** StoneWall: Gaara as well because of his sand wall.

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* CompetitiveBalance:
** FragileSpeedster: Hinata relies more on her eyes, speed and poisons to fight.
** GlassCannon: Sasuke and Haku. Kimimaro is something of a "Glass Bruiser" since he does have high attack, defense and speed but his physical stamina is low.
** GlacierWaif: Gaara and Sakura are both relatively fast but both are more known for their offensive power.
** JackOfAllStats: Sai has none of the above, both good and bad.
** LightningBruiser: Naruto and Neji only lack the bad.
** StoneWall: Gaara as well because of his sand wall.
%%* CompetitiveBalance:
29th Aug '15 11:33:31 AM Pastykake
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* BittersweetEnding: [[spoiler:To the Invasion arc. The Kinen/Hakumei rebellion might have been able to defeat Danzou and his allies had things gone according to plan... but the addition of the Sand/Sound Invasion on the same day turned the whole thing into a MeleeATrois, and the extra enemies combined with some mistaken assumptions about Danzou's own plans mean that the best the heroes can do is retreat before they're wiped out. At the same time, it is noted that Konoha's reputation has taken a massive hit with Hakumei revealing their identities, the village has itself taken significant losses due to the three-way battle, and the invasion has shown that Konoha ''can'' be attacked, and has permanently destroyed the village's image of military superiority. This combined with the defection of Jiraiya and Tsunade leaves the village much worse off than it was at the beginning of the invasion. Not to mention the population is going to be rather unhappy with Danzou for hiding and keeping his own skin safe while people were dying.]]
* BloodKnight: Zabuza, Sasuke, Sakura and Neji all love hurting things. Zabuza and Sakura especially.

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* BittersweetEnding: [[spoiler:To To the Invasion [[spoiler:Invasion]] arc. The Kinen/Hakumei rebellion [[spoiler:Kinen/Hakumei rebellion]] might have been able to defeat Danzou [[spoiler:Danzou]] and his allies had things gone according to plan... but the addition of the [[spoiler:the Sand/Sound Invasion invasion]] on the same day turned turns the whole thing into a MeleeATrois, and the extra enemies combined with some mistaken assumptions about Danzou's [[spoiler:Danzou]]'s own plans mean that the best the heroes can do is retreat before they're wiped out. At the same time, it is noted that Konoha's reputation has taken a massive hit with Hakumei revealing their identities, the village some of Hakumei's members' identities being revealed, [[spoiler:the village]] has itself taken significant losses due to the three-way battle, and the invasion [[spoiler:the invasion]] has shown that Konoha ''can'' be attacked, and has permanently destroyed the village's image of military superiority. This combined with the defection of Jiraiya and Tsunade leaves the village much worse off than it was at the beginning of the invasion. Not to mention arc. Plus, the population is going to be rather unhappy with Danzou [[spoiler:Danzou]] for hiding and keeping his own skin safe while people were dying.]]
dying.
* BloodKnight: Zabuza, Sasuke, Sakura and Neji all love hurting things. Zabuza and Sakura especially.all enjoy battle. Zabuza, in particular, is happiest when he's on a killing spree. %%Neji's not a Blood Knight; he's itching to fight at the bridge because it's Hakumei's first fight against a serious opponent and he wants to test himself, not for the the sake of fighting, and after that it's only because he didn't get to fight at the bridge. Once he gets a fight in against someone, he's fine.



* CassandraTruth: No one really believes Gaara when he talks about the monster eating his mind whenever he sleeps until they learn about the Kyuubi in Naruto and Gaara expresses his relief and joy that he's not alone in his situation. In the Chunin exams, Ino uses her Mind Transfer Jutsu on Gaara to try to cheat and the audience discovers that Shukaku is literally gnawing on Gaara's mind, which Ino finds extremely ncomfortable.

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* CassandraTruth: No one really believes Gaara when he talks about the monster eating his mind whenever he sleeps until they learn about the Kyuubi in Naruto and Gaara expresses his relief and joy that he's not alone in his situation. In the Chunin exams, Ino uses her Mind Transfer Jutsu on Gaara to try to cheat and the audience discovers that Shukaku is literally ''literally'' gnawing on Gaara's mind, which Ino finds extremely ncomfortable.uncomfortable.
29th Aug '15 10:48:21 AM Pastykake
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The fic itself is complete. A SequelSeries has recently started, ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11457678/1/ Hakumei: Kakumei]]'', picking up where the series left off three years later.

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The fic itself is complete. A SequelSeries has recently started, sequel started in August 2015, ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11457678/1/ Hakumei: Kakumei]]'', picking picks up where three years after the series left off three years later.off.



* CassandraTruth: No one really believes Gaara when he talks about the monster eating his brain whenever he sleeps until they learn about the Kyuubi in Naruto and Gaara expresses his relief and joy that he's not alone in his situation.

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* CassandraTruth: No one really believes Gaara when he talks about the monster eating his brain mind whenever he sleeps until they learn about the Kyuubi in Naruto and Gaara expresses his relief and joy that he's not alone in his situation.situation. In the Chunin exams, Ino uses her Mind Transfer Jutsu on Gaara to try to cheat and the audience discovers that Shukaku is literally gnawing on Gaara's mind, which Ino finds extremely ncomfortable.



* DesignatedGirlFight: Sakura vs Yumi. [[spoiler:Yumi wins but only because Sakura's undercover and can't use her more powerful, flashy techniques.]] Hinata vs Matsuri could count, except [[CurbStompBattle it wasn't a fight.]]

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* DeathByAdaptation: The Third Hokage dies earlier in this adaptation than he does in canon.
* DesignatedGirlFight: Sakura vs Yumi. [[spoiler:Yumi wins but presumably only because Sakura's undercover and can't use her more powerful, flashy techniques.]] Hinata vs Matsuri could count, except [[CurbStompBattle it wasn't isn't a fight.]] fight]].



* DrowningMySorrows: After the 3rd Hokage's death, Gekkou Hayate tells Iruka that Naruto, Sasuke, Sakura, Hinata and Neji are all missing, presumed "kidnapped by the Rock nin that assassinated the Sandaime." He then silently changes his plans for the evening to "get black-out drunk."

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* DrowningMySorrows: After the 3rd Hokage's death, Gekkou Hayate tells Iruka that Naruto, Sasuke, Sakura, Hinata and Neji are all missing, presumed "kidnapped by the Rock nin that assassinated the Sandaime." He Iruka then silently changes his plans for the evening to "get black-out drunk."



** DishingOutDirt: Gaara, of course, attacks using sand, and it's shown that for his powers, "sand" includes any kind of dirt. Also, one of [[spoiler:Yumi]]'s elemental affinities is earth.
** ExtraOreDinary: [[spoiler:Yumi.]]
** AnIcePerson: Haku.
** MakingASplash: Mist nin, Kakashi and [[spoiler:Itachi]].
** PlayingWithFire: The Uchiha.

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** DishingOutDirt: Gaara, of course, attacks using sand, and it's shown that for his powers, powers "sand" includes any kind of dirt. Also, one of [[spoiler:Yumi]]'s elemental affinities is earth.
** ExtraOreDinary: [[spoiler:Yumi.]]
[[spoiler:Yumi]] uses ninjutsu that manipulate metal.
** AnIcePerson: Haku.
Haku uses ice attacks due to his kekkei genkai.
** MakingASplash: Mist nin, Kakashi ninja, Kakashi, and [[spoiler:Itachi]].
[[spoiler:Itachi]] are seen using water attacks.
** PlayingWithFire: The Uchiha.Sasuke, Yumi, and in theory all Uchiha have an affinity for fire.



** Naruto and Konohamaru's relationship is the same despite Naruto being supposedly a foreign ninja.

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** Naruto and Konohamaru's relationship interaction is almost exactly the same despite Naruto being supposedly a foreign ninja.ninja when the meet.



-->"A. True. Ninja. Is. Always. Growing," [[spoiler: Kimimaro]] said between punches, "Always. Learning. Stronger. Techniques. And. Never. Allowing. Themselves. To. Stop."

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-->"A.--->''"A. True. Ninja. Is. Always. Growing," [[spoiler: Kimimaro]] said between punches, "Always. Learning. Stronger. Techniques. And. Never. Allowing. Themselves. To. Stop.""''
* ReignOfTerror: Danzo runs the Village Hidden in the Leaves ''[[RightWingMilitiaFanatic his]]'' way: a police state at home and backstabbing everyone he can get away with abroad. He replaces the regular ANBU with his ROOT forces and has them out in the open, and gives the Uchiha clan's Military Police nearly total free reign to do whatever they want. leaving the villagers living in a state of constant fear. Konoha's international reputation goes in the dumpster due to his "betray everyone before they can betray us" frenzy.



* SadisticChoice: Yumi imposes one on Sasuke [[spoiler:when she brings his mother into the street to convince him to stay in Konoha. It stalls him, right up until [[BigDamnHeroes Hiashi shows up]].]]

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* SadisticChoice: Yumi imposes one on Sasuke [[spoiler:when when she brings [[spoiler:brings his mother into the street to convince him to stay in Konoha. Konoha]]. It stalls him, right up until [[BigDamnHeroes Hiashi shows [[spoiler:[[BigDamnHeroes Hiashi]] [[spoiler:shows up]].]]



* ShoutOut: To, of all things, ''WesternAnimation/{{Ratatouille}}''.
** Anime/{{Digimon Tamers}}, Haku's surname is Akiyama and his pseudonym is Ryo.

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* ShoutOut: ShoutOut:
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To, of all things, ''WesternAnimation/{{Ratatouille}}''.
** To Anime/{{Digimon Tamers}}, Tamers}}: Haku's surname is Akiyama and his pseudonym is Ryo.Ryou.



* SilkHidingSteel: Hinata. Hanabi is trying to be this.
* SnarkKnight: Zabuza.
* SpannerInTheWorks: Hakumei is this [[spoiler:to the Invasion arc. While they don't win (for reasons explained in Bittersweet Ending), four out of nine of its members were seen and recognized as the children that Konoha originally went to war to save. This means that not only will it get out that Konoha utterly failed to achieve its directives but their resources didn't even get their info right.]] Thus [[spoiler:Konoha]]'s reputation takes a dive.
* TheStationsOfTheCanon: Granted, the events of the stations happen much differently, but the Wave and Chunin exam arcs take up almost the entirety of part 2. Because those events were much different, it would be damn hard to follow the stations coming next, so ultimately averted.
* StepfordSmiler: Sai at the beginning. He still does the fake smiling thing but now mostly when he's angry and [[InvisibleToNormals doesn't want a normal person to notice.]]
* SternTeacher: While she does her share of mothering them, Tsunade has high standards for Hakumei and very firmly guides them.

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* %%* SilkHidingSteel: Hinata. Hanabi is trying to be this.
* SnarkKnight: %%* TheSnarkKnight: Zabuza.
* SpannerInTheWorks: Hakumei is this [[spoiler:to to the Invasion arc. While they [[spoiler:Sand/Sound invasion]]. Although [[spoiler:they don't win the fight]] (for reasons explained in Bittersweet Ending), four out of nine of its members were seen and are recognized as the children that Konoha originally went to war to save. This means that not only will it get out that Konoha utterly failed to achieve its directives but their resources didn't even get their info right.]] Thus [[spoiler:Konoha]]'s Thus, Konoha's reputation takes a dive.
* SparedByTheAdaptation: Kimimaro's terminal illness is caught early and cured by Tsunade. The Uchiha clan don't get massacred because Danzo secures their loyalty to him after he takes over. Haku joins the kids and avoids getting picked up by Zabuza, so he doesn't die on the bridge with him. Zabuza doesn't die on the bridge, either, for that matter.
* TheStationsOfTheCanon: Granted, the events of the stations happen much differently, but the Wave and Chunin exam Exam arcs take up almost the entirety of part 2. Because those events were are much different, it would be damn damned hard to follow the stations coming next, so ultimately averted.
* StepfordSmiler: Sai at the beginning. He still does the fake smiling thing thing, but now mostly when he's angry and [[InvisibleToNormals doesn't want a normal person to notice.]]
notice]].
* SternTeacher: While Although she does her share of mothering them, Tsunade has high standards for Hakumei and very firmly guides them.



--> This little chick was a little too sure of herself for him. He actually liked shy girls. Particularly when they were younger than him. Zabuza blinked as the thought occurred to him. Somehow...that didn't sound right...

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--> This -->''This little chick was a little too sure of herself for him. He actually liked shy girls. Particularly when they were younger than him. Zabuza blinked as the thought occurred to him. Somehow...that didn't sound right...''



* TeenSuperSpy: Being the GoodCounterpart to Akatsuki, Hakumei becomes a group of these. [[BadassAdorable Damn proficient ones too.]]

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* TeenSuperSpy: Being the GoodCounterpart to Akatsuki, Hakumei becomes a group of these. [[BadassAdorable Damn Damned proficient ones ones, too.]]



* ThatManIsDead: [[spoiler: Sasuke when confronting his mother.]]
--> I won't be coming home again. It's too late. This is my life now. I...am not [[spoiler: Uchiha Sasuke. My name is Arashi no Sasuke. The one who will break the power of the Uchiha clan]]
* ThemeNaming: The two Hakumei girls become “Hinata of the Lunar Eclipse” and “Sakura of the Solar Eclipse”.
** More subtly: "Hakumei" means "twilight". Since two of the group are jinchuuriki, [[FridgeBrilliance Hakumei is almost certainly going to end up fighting against Akatsuki- "daybreak".]]

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* ThatManIsDead: [[spoiler: Sasuke [[spoiler:Sasuke]] when confronting his mother.]]
--> I
[[spoiler:his mother]].
-->''"I
won't be coming home again. It's too late. This is my life now. I...am not [[spoiler: Uchiha Sasuke. [[spoiler:Uchiha Sasuke]]. My name is Arashi [[spoiler:Arashi no Sasuke. Sasuke]]. The one who will break the power of the [[spoiler:the Uchiha clan]]
clan]]."''
* ThemeNaming: ThemeNaming:
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The two Hakumei girls become “Hinata of the Lunar Eclipse” and “Sakura of the Solar Eclipse”.
** More subtly: "Hakumei" subtly:''Hakumei'' means "twilight". Since Seeing as two of the group are jinchuuriki, [[FridgeBrilliance Hakumei is almost certainly going to end up fighting against Akatsuki- "daybreak".]]Akatsuki ("daybreak")]].



** The group that gives the fic its name. Tsunade calls them the "Mudpuppies" when she's not calling them "Hakumei."

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** The group that gives the fic its name. Tsunade calls them the "Mudpuppies" "assorted mudpuppies" when she's not calling them "Hakumei."



** Zabuza muses the hakumei's bond with each other is similar to the bond the seven swordsman once had.
* {{Tsundere}}: Tsunade, Anko and Zabuza are Type A. Sakura [[CharacterDevelopment developed]] from a ShrinkingViolet to a Type A.

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** Zabuza muses the hakumei's that Hakumei's bond with each other is similar to the bond the seven swordsman Seven Swordsmen once had.
* {{Tsundere}}: Tsunade, Anko Anko, and Zabuza are Type A. Sakura [[CharacterDevelopment developed]] develops]] from a ShrinkingViolet to a Type A.



* UnwittingInstigatorOfDoom: Dammit, [[spoiler:Konohamaru]]!!
** Mikage Satoshi is this for the entire invasion. [[WhatAnIdiot THE ENTIRE INVASION.]]
* WellDoneSonGuy: Sasuke's case of this leads eventually to enough frustration he runs away. [[spoiler: Returning as a member of Hakumei gives him an outsider's perspective that makes him wonder why he wanted the parental approval in the first place.]]
* WhipItGood: Yumi, whose element allows her to control it.

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* UnwittingInstigatorOfDoom: Dammit, [[spoiler:Konohamaru]]!!
UnwittingInstigatorOfDoom:
** Mikage Satoshi is this for [[spoiler:Konohamaru]] runs to tell Danzo that some of Hakumei's members are the entire invasion. kids who disappeared six years earlier, not understanding that Danzo is the bad guy.
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[[WhatAnIdiot THE ENTIRE INVASION.]]
Mikage Satoshi]] gives the signal to start the Sand/Sound invasion way too early. To be fair to him, though, someone ''did'' trip on the stairs at just the right place (which was the signal for him to give his signal).
* WellDoneSonGuy: Sasuke's case of this leads eventually to enough frustration that he runs away. [[spoiler: Returning as a member of Hakumei gives him an outsider's perspective on his family that makes him wonder why he wanted the parental approval in the first place.]]
place.
* WhipItGood: Yumi, whose Yumi's element allows her to control it.the metal whip she uses.



* YouAreWhatYouHate: [[spoiler: Both Sasuke and Itachi hate what the Uchiha clan has become. Both of them have stated that they are planning to destroy it.]]

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* YouAreWhatYouHate: [[spoiler: Both Sasuke [[spoiler:Sasuke]] and Itachi [[spoiler:Itachi]] hate what the Uchiha [[spoiler:Uchiha]] clan has have become. Both of them have stated state that they are planning plan to destroy it.]]



** Gaara while he's fighting on the Hokage monument.
** [PapaWolf Hiashi]] [[spoiler:while covering Hakumei's retreat.]]

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** Gaara while he's fighting on holds back the majority of Danzo's counterattack forces with a little help from the Nara clan at the Hokage monument.
** [PapaWolf [[PapaWolf Hiashi]] [[spoiler:while covering Hakumei's holds off the entire Uchiha clan to cover [[spoiler:Hakumei and Kinen]]'s retreat.]]
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* AllTheOtherReindeer: Naruto and Sakura when they were in Konoha, Gaara when he was still in Suna, Rock Lee for being unable to mold chakra and Tenten later on for being a foreign-born Konoha nin. As a result, Ten-Ten is trying desperately to fit in.
* AmazonChaser: [[spoiler:Despite the fact that he beat her,]] Neji thinks this of Tenten.

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* AllTheOtherReindeer: Naruto and Sakura when they were in Konoha, Gaara when he was still in Suna, Rock Lee for being unable to mold chakra chakra, and {{implied|Trope}} for Tenten later on for being a foreign-born Konoha nin. As a result, Ten-Ten Tenten is trying desperately to fit in.
* AmazonChaser: [[spoiler:Despite Despite the fact that he [[spoiler:he beat her,]] her]], Neji thinks this of Tenten.



* AngerBornOfWorry: After nearly crushing Naruto's lungs in a BearHug, Iruka demands to know where the hell he's been for the past 6 years. [[NoIndoorVoice Loudly.]]

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* AngerBornOfWorry: After nearly crushing Naruto's lungs in a BearHug, Iruka demands to know where the hell he's been for the past 6 six years. [[NoIndoorVoice Loudly.]]



* ArrangedMarriage: The important clans practice these. [[spoiler: Itachi and Yumi were arranged to marry each other. Neither was thrilled with the idea. Yumi in fact was in a relationship with Shisui.]]
%%* AxCrazy: Zabuza, Anko, Yumi and Sora.

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* ArrangedMarriage: The important clans practice these. [[spoiler: Itachi [[spoiler:Itachi]] and Yumi [[spoiler:Yumi]] were arranged to marry each other. Neither was thrilled with the idea. Yumi [[spoiler:Yumi]] in fact was in a relationship with Shisui.]]
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[[spoiler:Shisui]].
*
AxCrazy: Zabuza, Anko, Yumi is incredibly violent, and Sora.her mental instability comes to the fore when she sees [[spoiler:Itachi]]. Sora has apparently been driven mad by a combination of the Kyuubi's influence and Danzou's personal training, and the scene of one of his fights in the Forest of Death later makes even [[TheStoic Kimimaro]] feel sick.



** Hakumei and Kinen also pull this off.

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** Neji comes in to help Gai against a large group of opponents.
** Hakumei and Kinen also pull this off.in general, metaphorically.



* BadassCrew-- Starts out as a FiveManBand with [[TheLeader Naruto]], [[TheLancer Sasuke]], [[TheSmartGuy Sakura]], [[TheBigGuy Neji]], [[TheHeart Hinata]]. Later Sai joins. Then they add a power trio with another SmartGuy in "closet evil genius" Haku and two much more powerful [[BigGuy Big Guys]] in Gaara and Kimimaro.

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* BadassCrew-- BadassCrew: Starts out as a FiveManBand with [[TheLeader Naruto]], [[TheLancer Sasuke]], [[TheSmartGuy Sakura]], [[TheBigGuy Neji]], [[TheHeart Hinata]]. Later Sai joins. Then they add a power trio with another SmartGuy in "closet evil genius" Haku and two much more powerful [[BigGuy Big Guys]] in Gaara and Kimimaro.



* BadassLongcoat: In Part Two, the Hakumei uniform includes a white sleeveless coat with blue flames on the bottom, modeled on (but not identical to) the one worn by the Yondaime Hokage.
* BatDeduction: Using just [[spoiler:the fact that Hinata and Neji are alive]], [[spoiler:Hiashi]] is able to correctly conclude that a) [[spoiler:the rest of the kids are also alive]] and b) Konoha done fucked up.
* BattleStrip: Kimimaro. Apparently removing bones through a shirt is awkward...

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* BadassLongcoat: In Part Two, the The uniform Hakumei uniform eventually develop includes a white sleeveless coat with blue flames on the bottom, modeled on (but not identical to) the one worn by the Yondaime Fourth Hokage.
* BatDeduction: Using just [[spoiler:the the fact that Hinata [[spoiler:Hinata and Neji are alive]], [[spoiler:Hiashi]] is able to correctly conclude that a) [[spoiler:the rest of the kids are also alive]] and b) Konoha done fucked up.
* BattleStrip: Kimimaro. Apparently removing Kimimaro shrugs out of his shirt when he has to fight seriously because clothes get in the way of bones through a shirt is awkward...pushing out of his skin.



* BerserkButton: Haku being mistaken for a girl annoys him most of the time, but when it's used insultingly...

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* BerserkButton: BerserkButton:
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Haku being mistaken for a girl annoys him most of the time, but when it's used insultingly...the pressure builds up over time until every once in a while he snaps and attacks the current offender.
** Sasuke is usually calm, but whenever another member of Hakumei gets gravely injured he goes into "Avenger mode", which is described as a state of berserker rage but apparently isn't a mindless one.



** [[spoiler: Itachi feels this way about Sasuke... it's just that he couldn't ''find'' him for a few years.]]

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** [[spoiler: Itachi feels this way about Sasuke... Sasuke, it's just that he couldn't can't ''find'' him him[[spoiler: for a few years.]] years]].



* BigBrotherWorship: Both Sasuke and Hanabi.

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* BigBrotherWorship: Both Sasuke and Hanabi.worships his big brother Itachi. Hanabi looks up to her big sister Hinata almost as strongly.



** [[spoiler:Zabuza to Yugito Ni on behalf of [[DeclarationOfProtection Naruto]].]]

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** [[spoiler:Zabuza [[spoiler:Zabuza]] to Yugito Ni [[spoiler:Yugito Ni]] on behalf of [[DeclarationOfProtection Naruto]].]]



%%* BigGood: Tsunade and Jiraiya.
* BigScrewedUpFamily: The Kekkei Genkai families in general. The Uchihas are violent and generally unpleasand. The Hyuugas are extremely prideful and enslave their own relatives. The Kaguyas are bloodthirsty nutcases. Two out of three have been shown to be affected by the disease known as Tainted Blood, which is hinted to be caused partly by inbreeding.

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%%* * BigGood: Tsunade and Jiraiya.
Jiraiya are the strongest good guys, and they train the main protagonists.
* BigScrewedUpFamily: The Kekkei Genkai families in general. The Uchihas are violent and generally unpleasand.unpleasant (and supposedly cursed). The Hyuugas are extremely prideful and enslave their own relatives. The Kaguyas are bloodthirsty nutcases. Two out of three have been shown to be affected by the disease known as Tainted Blood, which is hinted to be caused partly by inbreeding.



* BodyDouble: [[spoiler: During the Chuunin Exams, Danzou has Uchiha Fugaku pose as him. Fugaku does not survive the experience.]]

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* BodyDouble: [[spoiler: During the Chuunin Exams, Danzou [[spoiler:Danzou]] has Uchiha Fugaku [[spoiler:Uchiha Fugaku]] pose as him. Fugaku does not survive the experience.]]him.



%%* BrattyHalfPint[=/=]MouthyKid: Inari and Konohamaru.

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%%* * BrattyHalfPint[=/=]MouthyKid: Inari gets told off for acting like he has the worst life in the world. Konohamaru meets Naruto and Konohamaru.doesn't stop pestering Naruto to train him. Even when he tries to help, he mostly just gets in the way or unwittingly makes things worse.



* CainAndAbel: Expected for Uchiha brothers, averted for Itachi and Sasuke. Their father is somewhat disturbed that Itachi ''didn't'' try to kill his younger brother at birth. DysfunctionJunction, much?
** Also averted for the Hyuuga sisters and their cousin.
* CastSpeciation: Hinata's Tenshi Byakugan serves to give her a different powerset than Neji's, rather than the canonical situation where their abilities are basically the same but he's better at using them. Also, the three medics- aside from all having completely different fighting styles- end up with different medical specialties; for example, Haku focuses on medical herbs rather than using chakra to heal.

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* CainAndAbel: CainAndAbel:
**
Expected in-universe for Uchiha brothers, averted for Itachi and Sasuke. Their father is was somewhat disturbed that Itachi ''didn't'' try to kill his younger brother at birth. DysfunctionJunction, much?
** Also averted Averted for the Hyuuga sisters and their cousin.
cousin, despite the latter's initial condition of slavery to the former and the former's long separation.
* CassandraTruth: No one really believes Gaara when he talks about the monster eating his brain whenever he sleeps until they learn about the Kyuubi in Naruto and Gaara expresses his relief and joy that he's not alone in his situation.
* CastSpeciation: Hinata's Tenshi Byakugan serves to give her a different powerset than Neji's, rather than the canonical situation where their abilities are basically the same but he's better at using them. Also, the three medics- medics, aside from all having completely different fighting styles- styles, end up with different medical specialties; for example, Haku focuses on medical medicinal herbs rather than using chakra to heal.



* ChekhovsSkill: [[spoiler:Hinata removing Neji's Caged Bird seal gets a CallBack when Jiraiya asks her to do the same to the seal on [[BrainwashedAndCrazy Orochimaru's brain]].]]

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* ChekhovsSkill: [[spoiler:Hinata Hinata removing Neji's Caged Bird seal in the very first scene gets a CallBack Call Back when Jiraiya asks her to do the same to the seal on [[BrainwashedAndCrazy Orochimaru's [[spoiler:Orochimaru's brain]].]]



* ChickMagnet: The Uchiha brothers as usual. Sasuke fears fangirls. [[HilarityEnsues Sure enough, they always find him.]]

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* ChickMagnet: The Uchiha brothers as usual. Sasuke fears fangirls. [[HilarityEnsues [[PlayedForLaughs Sure enough, they always find him.]]him]].



* CurbStompBattle: [[spoiler: In the Chuunin Exams, every time a Hakumei member faces an actual genin. Against other fake genin, things are more complicated.]]

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* CurbStompBattle: [[spoiler: In the Chuunin Exams, every time a Hakumei member faces an actual genin.genin and isn't taking a dive. Against other fake genin, things are more complicated.]]



** Sakura isn't. She's deadly, and she's a healer, but so far there doesn't seem to be an overlap.



* DiscardAndDraw: [[spoiler: After Hinata awakens the Tenshi Byakugan, she is no longer able to use normal Byakugan.]]
** Akatsuki does this too. [[spoiler:Itachi defects and links up with Hakumei and the three reunited Sannin, while Yumi Uchiha looks set to take his place]].

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* DiscardAndDraw: [[spoiler: After Hinata awakens the Tenshi Byakugan, she is no longer able to use normal Byakugan.]]
** Akatsuki does this too. [[spoiler:Itachi defects and links up with Hakumei and the three reunited Sannin, while Yumi Uchiha looks set to take his place]].



* DrowningMySorrows: After the 3rd Hokage's death, [[spoiler:Gekkou Hayate tells Iruka that Naruto, Sasuke, Sakura, Hinata and Neji are all missing, presumed "kidnapped by the Rock nin that assassinated the Sandaime." He then silently changes his plans for the evening to "get black-out drunk."]]
* DualWielding: Yumi with kunai.
* DudeLooksLikeALady: This is becoming a sore spot with Haku. [[spoiler: He and Deidara bond over it in the omakes.]]
* DramaticUnmask: [[spoiler: During their battle, Yumi breaks Sasuke's mask with her whip, revealing his active Sharingan.]]
* EarlyBirdCameo: Konan and Zabuza in Chapter 3. Zabuza doesn't appear again until Chapter 11, and Konan hasn't yet reappeared.

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* DrowningMySorrows: After the 3rd Hokage's death, [[spoiler:Gekkou Gekkou Hayate tells Iruka that Naruto, Sasuke, Sakura, Hinata and Neji are all missing, presumed "kidnapped by the Rock nin that assassinated the Sandaime." He then silently changes his plans for the evening to "get black-out drunk."]]
"
* DualWielding: Yumi with kunai.
dual-wields kunai in a style that is noted to look like it's meant for dual-wielding swords.
* DudeLooksLikeALady: This is becoming becomes a sore spot with Haku. [[spoiler: He and Deidara bond over it in the omakes.]]
an omake.
* DramaticUnmask: [[spoiler: During their battle, Yumi [[spoiler:Yumi]] breaks Sasuke's [[spoiler:Sasuke]]'s mask with her whip, revealing his active Sharingan.]]
face and [[spoiler:active Sharingan]].
* EarlyBirdCameo: Konan and Zabuza in Chapter 3. Zabuza doesn't appear again until Chapter 11, and Konan hasn't yet reappeared.doesn't reappear.



** DishingOutDirt: Gaara, obviously. [[spoiler:Yumi too.]]

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** DishingOutDirt: Gaara, obviously. [[spoiler:Yumi too.]]of course, attacks using sand, and it's shown that for his powers, "sand" includes any kind of dirt. Also, one of [[spoiler:Yumi]]'s elemental affinities is earth.



%%* EnemyMine

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%%* EnemyMine* EnemyMine: During the invansion/rebellion, the joint Sound/Sand forces and Kinen/Hakumei all agree on taking out any ROOT nearby befoore attacking each other.



* EvilFormerFriend: Technically she's been dead for 13 years but [[spoiler:Kushina and [[LadyMacbeth Mikoto]]]] were once thick as thieves. Yumi invokes this by [[spoiler:killing Inuzuka Hana to gain the Mangekyou Sharingan]]. [[spoiler:Kiba]] sees Naruto as this.
* EvilMatriarch: Mikoto Uchiha, [[spoiler:during the confrontation Sasuke suspects that she only wants him back for political reasons. Her latter conversation with Hiashi confirms it.]]
* ExtremeOmnivore: Sai for awhile after they escaped Konoha.
* FluffyTheTerrible: Naruto dubs the Nine Tails and One Tail "Fuzzy Wuzzy" and "Sandy Wandy" after the rest of the group finds out about them.

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* EvilFormerFriend: Technically she's been dead for 13 years but [[spoiler:Kushina and [[LadyMacbeth Mikoto]]]] were once thick as thieves. Yumi invokes this by [[spoiler:killing Inuzuka Hana to gain the Mangekyou Sharingan]]. [[spoiler:Kiba]] sees Naruto as this.
this when he learns that Naruto is working to take down the current Konoha regime.
* EvilMatriarch: Mikoto Uchiha, [[spoiler:during Uchiha. During the confrontation confrontation, Sasuke suspects that she only wants him back for political reasons. Her latter later conversation with Hiashi confirms it.]]
it.
* ExtremeOmnivore: Sai for awhile develops this when the kids are homeless fugitives after they escaped escaping Konoha.
* FluffyTheTerrible: Naruto dubs the Nine Tails Nine-Tailed Fox and One Tail One-Tailed Tanuki "Fuzzy Wuzzy" and "Sandy Wandy" after the rest of the group finds find out about them.



* AFriendInNeed: Hakumei will gladly abandon their mission to rescue either [[TrueCompanions their teammates]] or [[ChronicHeroSyndrome innocents.]] [[spoiler:This is seen when Naruto is interrogated by Ibiki, who is in Kinen, luckily and when Sasuke is cornered by his mother and the Uchiha as Hakumei escapes Konoha.]]

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* AFriendInNeed: Hakumei will gladly abandon their mission to rescue either [[TrueCompanions their teammates]] or [[ChronicHeroSyndrome innocents.]] [[spoiler:This This is seen when Naruto [[spoiler:Naruto is interrogated by Ibiki, who Ibiki (who, luckily, is in Kinen, luckily Kinen)]] and when Sasuke is cornered by his [[spoiler:his mother and the Uchiha Uchiha]] as Hakumei escapes escape Konoha.]]



%%* GoodParents: Tenten's foster father.
* TheGreatOffscreenWar: By the sequel, Konoha conquered Sand and Iwa, leaving Kumo as the last major country while Mizu is still recovering.

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%%* * GoodParents: Tenten's foster father.
father is apparently the only one who didn't treat her poorly for being a foreigner before he brought her foster mother around.
* TheGreatOffscreenWar: By the sequel, Konoha conquered the Sand and Iwa, Rock villages, leaving Kumo the Hidden Cloud as the last major country village while Mizu the Mist is still recovering.recovering from another revolution.



* HeKnowsTooMuch: The reason why the kids had to leave Konoha in the first place. Later on, Hakumei considers killing [[spoiler:Shino]] when they realize [[spoiler:he]] has put two and two together.

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* HeKnowsTooMuch: The reason why the kids had have to leave Konoha in the first place. place: they know Danzou will kill them for having witnessed the actual circumstances of the Third Hokage's death. Later on, some members of Hakumei considers consider killing [[spoiler:Shino]] when they realize [[spoiler:he]] he has put two and two together.



* HeroicBystander: Rock Lee (Danzo instates laws that prevent him from attending the Ninja Academy) and the proprietor of Ichiraku's ([[CrowningMomentOfAwesome who manages to clock some]] ''[[CrowningMomentOfAwesome utterly surprised]]'' [[CrowningMomentOfAwesome Sand and Sound ninja)]].
* HeroicBSOD: [[spoiler: Both Sasuke and Hinata in chapter 32. Hinata, because of Hiashi's death. Sasuke, because, despite him declaring a blood feud against the Uchiha clan, he still hesitated in front of his mother. Naruto helps Hinata get over it. Sasuke determines that he will never hesitate again, and that the next time he meets his family, he will destroy them.]]
* HeroicSacrifice: [[spoiler:Hiashi]]. See "You Shall Not Pass."
* ICallHerVera: Don't touch Zabuza's sword.
* [[IHaveNoSon I Have No Daughter or Nephew]]: Hyuuga Hiashi disowns Hinata and Neji [[spoiler: after Hinata removes Neji's [[RestrainingBolt Caged Bird Seal]]]].
** And then he goes and [[spoiler: [[SubvertedTrope attacks Yumi in order to allow Hakumei to retreat.]]]]
* IKnowYouKnowIKnow: Since Hakumei is undercover during the Chuunin exams, there's a lot of this going on.

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* HeroicBystander: Rock Lee (Danzo instates laws that prevent him from attending the Ninja Academy) and the proprietor of Ichiraku's Ichiraku Ramen ([[CrowningMomentOfAwesome who manages to clock some]] ''[[CrowningMomentOfAwesome utterly surprised]]'' [[CrowningMomentOfAwesome Sand and Sound ninja)]].
ninja with his ladle)]].
* HeroicBSOD: [[spoiler: Both Sasuke [[spoiler:Sasuke]] and Hinata [[spoiler:Hinata]] in chapter 32. Hinata, [[spoiler:Hinata]]'s is because of Hiashi's death. Sasuke, because, [[spoiler:Hiashi's death]]. [[spoiler:Sasuke]]'s is because despite him declaring having declared a blood feud against the [[spoiler:the Uchiha clan, clan]], he still hesitated in front of his mother. [[spoiler:his mother]]. Naruto helps Hinata [[spoiler:Hinata]] get over it. Sasuke [[spoiler:Sasuke]] determines that he will never hesitate again, and that the next time he meets his family, [[spoiler:his family]], he will destroy them.]]
them.
* HeroicSacrifice: [[spoiler:Hiashi]]. See "You You Shall Not Pass."
Pass below.
* ICallHerVera: Don't touch Zabuza's sword.
Zabuza refers to his sword as female, though name is explicitly given.
* [[IHaveNoSon I Have No Daughter or Nephew]]: IHaveNoSon: Hyuuga Hiashi disowns Hinata and Neji [[spoiler: after Hinata removes Neji's [[RestrainingBolt Caged Bird Seal]]]].
** And then he goes and [[spoiler: [[SubvertedTrope attacks Yumi in order to allow Hakumei to retreat.]]]]
seal]].
* IKnowYouKnowIKnow: Since Hakumei is are undercover during the Chuunin exams, there's a lot of this going on.



* ImprobableAge: Naruto and co. successfully escape a very large village with very important information, collect three other strangers, two of which are three years older than they are and live on their own for at least a year, all at the tender ages of six or seven. Then again, [[CombatMedic Tsunade]] herself notes that [[DeconstructedTrope the kids have various amounts of ailments when she finds them]] and well, [[InstantAwesomeJustAddNinja ninja]].
* InSpiteOfANail: Not too many things, but Gaara gets the same nickname as in canon, and [[spoiler: Itachi still becomes a missing ninja]] despite the changes that have occurred by then.

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* ImprobableAge: Naruto and co. successfully escape a very large village with very important information, collect three other strangers, two of which whom are three years older than they are are, and live on their own for at least a year, all at the tender ages of six or seven. Then again, [[CombatMedic Tsunade]] herself notes that [[DeconstructedTrope the kids have various amounts of ailments when she finds them]] and and, well, [[InstantAwesomeJustAddNinja ninja]].
they're ninja-in-training]].
* InSpiteOfANail: Not too many things, but InSpiteOfANail:
**
Gaara gets the same nickname as in canon, and [[spoiler: canon.
**
Itachi still becomes a missing ninja]] goes rogue despite the changes that have occurred by then. then.
** Sasuke still has an avenger complex waiting to be triggerd despite not seeing his whole clan get killed or being mind-raped by Itachi.
** Naruto and Konohamaru's relationship is the same despite Naruto being supposedly a foreign ninja.



-->'''Tsunade''': My, what pretty little...''(recognizes Naruto's whiskers, Gaara's eye rings, Hinata & Neji's eyes, Sakura's pink hair)''...chil...dren...''(flops into her seat)'' I NEED A DRINK. NOW.\\

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-->'''Tsunade''': My, what pretty little...''(recognizes ''[recognizes Naruto's whiskers, Gaara's eye rings, Hinata & Neji's eyes, Sakura's pink hair)''...hair]''...chil...dren...''(flops ''[flops into her seat)'' seat]'' I NEED A DRINK. NOW.\\



* IOweYouMyLife: Hakumei believes in calling in any and all [[BigDamnHeroes life-preserving favors]] they've been presented with.

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* IOweYouMyLife: Hakumei believes believe in calling in any and all [[BigDamnHeroes life-preserving favors]] they've been presented with.



* ItsPersonal: Sasuke always disliked Yumi, but when [[spoiler: she nearly kills Sakura in the Chuunin Exams]] he declares a blood feud against her clan. [[spoiler: Which is also ''his'' clan.]]

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* ItsPersonal: Sasuke always disliked Yumi, but when [[spoiler: she nearly [[spoiler:nearly kills Sakura in the Chuunin Exams]] he declares a blood feud against her clan. [[spoiler: Which is also ''his'' clan.]]



* JerkWithAHeartOfGold: Zabuza would rather be fighting... but given the chance to honestly help, he can be talked/ guilted into it. Also, Kiba.
* JumpingOffTheSlipperySlope: [[spoiler: In Chapter 32, Yumi murders Hana in order to unlock her Mangekyou Sharingan.]]
* KickTheDog: Sora during his match against Dosu. Yumi, whenever she talks.
* KickTheMoralityPet: AsYouKnow, gaining the Mangekyou Sharingan means killing the person closest to you. [[spoiler:Hana Inuzuka is pretty much the only living person in-story that Yumi is comparatively nice that isn't an Uchiha. [[JumpingOffTheSlipperySlope So...]]]]

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* JerkWithAHeartOfGold: Zabuza would rather be fighting... but given the chance to honestly help, he can be talked/ guilted talked/guilted into it. Also, Kiba.
Kiba has been raised on Danzou's propaganda, but deep down his heart's in the right place.
* JumpingOffTheSlipperySlope: [[spoiler: In Chapter 32, Yumi [[spoiler:Yumi murders Hana in order to unlock her Mangekyou Sharingan.]]
* KickTheDog: Sora during his tries to kill Dosu in their preliminary match against Dosu. Yumi, even after the match is called. Yumi does it pretty much whenever she talks.
* KickTheMoralityPet: AsYouKnow, gaining the Mangekyou Sharingan means killing the person closest to you. [[spoiler:Hana Inuzuka Inuzuka]] is pretty much the only living person in-story that Yumi is comparatively nice that isn't an Uchiha. [[JumpingOffTheSlipperySlope So...]]]]]]



* LaResistance: Kinen.

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* LaResistance: Kinen.Kinen, to Danzou's regime.



* LivingEmotionalCrutch: Naruto, Sasuke and Hinata are this to Iruka, Itachi and [[spoiler:Hiashi]] respectively, since the former's absence brings about drastic changes in the latter's lives i.e. Iruka becomes bitter and jaded, Itachi falls out of favor with his family and [[spoiler:Hiashi]] [[DespairEventHorizon gives up on the world.]]

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* LivingEmotionalCrutch: Naruto, Sasuke and Hinata are this to Iruka, Itachi and [[spoiler:Hiashi]] [[spoiler:Hiashi]], respectively, since as the former's absence brings about drastic changes in the latter's lives lives; i.e. , Iruka becomes bitter and jaded, Itachi falls out of favor with his family family, and [[spoiler:Hiashi]] [[DespairEventHorizon gives up on the world.]]world]].



* MeleeATrois: [[spoiler: The Kinen/Hakumei rebellion? It's on the same day as the Sound/Sand Invasion.]] Cue a three-way battle between [[spoiler: the rebels, the invaders, and Danzo's forces.]] Things get messy ''fast'' [[spoiler: and because no one was planning for this, no one wins. All three sides take losses, but Hakumei and the exposed members of LaResistance have to cut and run, leaving Danzou still in power.]]
* MyMasterRightOrWrong: The Inuzuka clan is loyal to Danzo simply because he's the Hokage. They're pretty decent people- they just don't question orders that seem to come from a legitimate authority.

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* MeleeATrois: [[spoiler: The Kinen/Hakumei rebellion? [[spoiler:Kinen/Hakumei rebellion]]? It's on the same day as the Sound/Sand Invasion.]] Invasion. Cue a three-way battle between [[spoiler: the rebels, the invaders, and Danzo's forces.]] forces]]. Things get messy ''fast'' [[spoiler: quickly, and because no one was planning planned for this, no [[spoiler:no one wins. wins]]. All three sides take losses, but Hakumei [[spoiler:Hakumei and the exposed members of LaResistance have to cut and run, leaving Danzou still in power.]]
* TheMole: [[spoiler:Ibiki]] is a member of Kinen, but he acts loyal to Danzo because his position is too important to Kinen's survival for him to be able to afford rebelling openly.
* MyMasterRightOrWrong: The Inuzuka clan is are loyal to Danzo simply because he's the Hokage. They're pretty decent people- people, but due to their animal pack mentality they just don't question orders that seem to come from a legitimate authority.



* NiceJobBreakingItHero: Good working running straight to Danzo, [[spoiler: ''Konohamaru'']].
* TheNicknamer: Tsunade gave the nine members of Hakumei their distinctive names.
* NightmareFuelStationAttendant: Kimimaro likes telling weird stories. And reanimating his bones while they're away from his body.

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* NiceJobBreakingItHero: Good working work running straight to Danzo, Danzo with Hakumei's identities, [[spoiler: ''Konohamaru'']].
* TheNicknamer: Tsunade gave gives the nine members of Hakumei their distinctive names.
* NightmareFuelStationAttendant: Kimimaro likes telling weird stories. And stories, and reanimating his bones while they're away from not in his body.body, and freaking people out in general.



* PapaWolf: You will be missed, [[spoiler:Hiashi]].

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* PapaWolf: You will be missed, [[spoiler:Hiashi]].[[spoiler:Hiashi]] faces off against the entire Uchiha clan to protect his children.



** Ninja Puffs,

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** Ninja Puffs, Puffs cereal.
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* TheGreatOffscreenWar: By the sequel, Konoha conquered Sand, and was now setting its sights on Iwa.

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* TheGreatOffscreenWar: By the sequel, Konoha conquered Sand, Sand and was now setting its sights on Iwa.Iwa, leaving Kumo as the last major country while Mizu is still recovering.
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* [[spoiler:BittersweetEnding: To the Invasion arc. The Kinen/Hakumei rebellion might have been able to defeat Danzou and his allies had things gone according to plan... but the addition of the Sand/Sound Invasion on the same day turned the whole thing into a MeleeATrois, and the extra enemies combined with some mistaken assumptions about Danzou's own plans mean that the best the heroes can do is retreat before they're wiped out. At the same time, it is noted that Konoha's reputation has taken a massive hit with Hakumei revealing their identities, the village has itself taken significant losses due to the three-way battle, and the invasion has shown that Konoha ''can'' be attacked, and has permanently destroyed the village's image of military superiority. This combined with the defection of Jiraiya and Tsunade leaves the village much worse off than it was at the beginning of the invasion. Not to mention the population is going to be rather unhappy with Danzou for hiding and keeping his own skin safe while people were dying.]]

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* [[spoiler:BittersweetEnding: To BittersweetEnding: [[spoiler:To the Invasion arc. The Kinen/Hakumei rebellion might have been able to defeat Danzou and his allies had things gone according to plan... but the addition of the Sand/Sound Invasion on the same day turned the whole thing into a MeleeATrois, and the extra enemies combined with some mistaken assumptions about Danzou's own plans mean that the best the heroes can do is retreat before they're wiped out. At the same time, it is noted that Konoha's reputation has taken a massive hit with Hakumei revealing their identities, the village has itself taken significant losses due to the three-way battle, and the invasion has shown that Konoha ''can'' be attacked, and has permanently destroyed the village's image of military superiority. This combined with the defection of Jiraiya and Tsunade leaves the village much worse off than it was at the beginning of the invasion. Not to mention the population is going to be rather unhappy with Danzou for hiding and keeping his own skin safe while people were dying.]]



** Haku's medical abilties rely on herbs and chemicals; he also uses drugs and poisons in battle.

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** Haku's medical abilties abilities rely on herbs and chemicals; he also uses drugs and poisons in battle.



** [[spoiler: Kimimaro to Kiba]] during their match in the preliminaries.

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** [[spoiler: Kimimaro to Kiba]] Kiba during their match in the preliminaries.



* [[spoiler:TellMeAboutMyFather: Naruto learns about his family and his condition early on thanks to Tsunade.]]

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* [[spoiler:TellMeAboutMyFather: TellMeAboutMyFather: Naruto learns about his family and his condition early on thanks to Tsunade.]]



%%* UnwittingInstigatorOfDoom: Dammit, [[spoiler:Konohamaru]]!!
%%** Mikage Satoshi is this for the entire invasion. [[WhatAnIdiot THE ENTIRE INVASION.]]
%%* WarriorTherapist: Hinata to Matsuri.

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%%* * UnwittingInstigatorOfDoom: Dammit, [[spoiler:Konohamaru]]!!
%%** ** Mikage Satoshi is this for the entire invasion. [[WhatAnIdiot THE ENTIRE INVASION.]]
%%* WarriorTherapist: Hinata to Matsuri.
]]



%%* WhipItGood: Yumi.

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%%* * WhipItGood: Yumi.Yumi, whose element allows her to control it.



** [[spoiler:[[PapaWolf Hiashi]] while covering Hakumei's retreat.]]

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** [[spoiler:[[PapaWolf [PapaWolf Hiashi]] while [[spoiler:while covering Hakumei's retreat.]]
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* TheGreatOffscreenWar: It's mentioned early in part II that Konoha conquered Iwa, and was now setting its sights on Kumo.

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* TheGreatOffscreenWar: It's mentioned early in part II that By the sequel, Konoha conquered Iwa, Sand, and was now setting its sights on Kumo.Iwa.



%%* IdiotHero: Kiba.



%%* KickTheDog: Sora during his match against Dosu. Yumi, whenever she talks.

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%%* * KickTheDog: Sora during his match against Dosu. Yumi, whenever she talks.



%%* LargeHam: Konohamaru.
%%* LaResistance: Kinen.

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%%* LargeHam: Konohamaru.
%%*
* LaResistance: Kinen.



%%* LittleMissBadass: Sakura, Hinata, Isaribi and Yumi.



%%* MinoredInAssKicking: Haku and Hinata.



%%* NiceJobBreakingItHero: Good working running straight to Danzo, [[spoiler: ''Konohamaru'']].

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%%* * NiceJobBreakingItHero: Good working running straight to Danzo, [[spoiler: ''Konohamaru'']].



* OhCrap: The kids when, after escaping Danzo, [[spoiler:Itachi]] finds them escaping Konoha in a merchant's cart. [[spoiler:[[PetTheDog He gives a scroll to Sasuke]] and sends them on their way.]]

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* OhCrap: The kids when, after escaping Danzo, [[spoiler:Itachi]] finds them escaping Konoha in a merchant's cart. [[spoiler:[[PetTheDog [[PetTheDog He gives a scroll to Sasuke]] and sends them on their way.]]



%%* PapaWolf: You will be missed, [[spoiler:Hiashi]].

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%%* * PapaWolf: You will be missed, [[spoiler:Hiashi]].



* [[spoiler:ParentsAsPeople: As it turns out, the reason why Hiashi disowned both Hinata and Neji is that Hinata is too gentle for the village elders to ever allow her to be clan leader and she would need protection, something that Neji could provide. [[FridgeLogic Why he decided this when they were 6 and 7 years old is anyone's guess]] but for once, he wasn't motivated by spite.]]

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* [[spoiler:ParentsAsPeople: As ParentsAsPeople: [[spoiler:As it turns out, the reason why Hiashi disowned both Hinata and Neji is that Hinata is too gentle for the village elders to ever allow her to be clan leader and she would need protection, something that Neji could provide. [[FridgeLogic Why he decided this when they were 6 and 7 years old is anyone's guess]] but for once, he wasn't motivated by spite.]]



%%* PsychoExGirlfriend: [[spoiler: As it turns out, Yumi is Itachi's former fiancee.]]



%%* TheRival: Kiba and Kimimaro, Yumi, Sakura and Sasuke[[spoiler:, Zabuza and Kisame]].

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%%* * TheRival: Kiba and to Kimimaro, Yumi, Yumi to Sakura and Sasuke[[spoiler:, Sasuke, and Zabuza and Kisame]].to Kisame.



%%* SilkHidingSteel: Hinata. Hanabi is trying to be this.
%%* SnarkKnight: Zabuza.

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%%* * SilkHidingSteel: Hinata. Hanabi is trying to be this.
%%* * SnarkKnight: Zabuza.



%%* TheSquadette: Sakura and Hinata.
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