Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 19 (click to see context) from:
!!This fanfics provides examples of:
to:
!!These fanfics
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 19 (click to see context) from:
!!This fanfic provides examples of:
to:
!!This fanfic fanfics provides examples of:of:
[[folder:Fate: Zero Sanity]]
[[folder:Fate: Zero Sanity]]
Changed line(s) 108,110 (click to see context) from:
----
!!Fate: OSG provides examples of:
!!Fate: OSG provides examples of:
to:
!!Fate: OSG provides examples of:
[[folder:Fate: OSG]]
Changed line(s) 138,140 (click to see context) from:
----
!!The true sequel, Fate: Stay Nightmare, provides examples of:
!!The true sequel, Fate: Stay Nightmare, provides examples of:
to:
!!The true sequel, Fate: Stay Nightmare, provides examples of:
[[folder:Fate/stay Nightmare]]
Added DiffLines:
[[/folder]]
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 71 (click to see context) from:
** [[spoiler:Caster gives Saber is scarf before he dies as a token of their friendship. Saber still has it when the sequel happens ten years later.]]
to:
** [[spoiler:Caster gives Saber is his scarf before he dies as a token of their friendship. Saber still has it when the sequel happens ten years later.]]
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 69 (click to see context) from:
* MementoMacGuffin: After he saves her, [[Manga/{{Hellsing}} Avenger]] gives [[spoiler: [[KidHero Rin]] his [[HandCannon Casull]] in the form of a [[MagicalAccessory silver cross]] because she managed to impress him with her [[LittleMissBadass courage]].]]
to:
* MementoMacGuffin: MementoMacGuffin:
** After he saves her, [[Manga/{{Hellsing}} Avenger]] gives [[spoiler: [[KidHero Rin]] his [[HandCannon Casull]] in the form of a [[MagicalAccessory silver cross]] because she managed to impress him with her [[LittleMissBadass courage]].]]
** [[spoiler:Caster gives Saber is scarf before he dies as a token of their friendship. Saber still has it when the sequel happens ten years later.]]
** After he saves her, [[Manga/{{Hellsing}} Avenger]] gives [[spoiler: [[KidHero Rin]] his [[HandCannon Casull]] in the form of a [[MagicalAccessory silver cross]] because she managed to impress him with her [[LittleMissBadass courage]].]]
** [[spoiler:Caster gives Saber is scarf before he dies as a token of their friendship. Saber still has it when the sequel happens ten years later.]]
Changed line(s) 101 (click to see context) from:
* WorthyOpponent: Saber is this to many Servants, notably [[FriendlyEnemy Berserker]] and Caster. [[spoiler:Archer even says this about Saber and Berserker [[GracefulLoser before dying.]]]]
to:
* WorthyOpponent: WorthyOpponent:
** Saber is this to many Servants, notably [[FriendlyEnemy Berserker]] and Caster. [[spoiler:Archer even says this about Saber and Berserker [[GracefulLoser before dying.]]]]]]]]
** Avenger's entire wish is to find one of these. [[spoiler:He gets his wish in the form of Lancer.]]
** Saber is this to many Servants, notably [[FriendlyEnemy Berserker]] and Caster. [[spoiler:Archer even says this about Saber and Berserker [[GracefulLoser before dying.
** Avenger's entire wish is to find one of these. [[spoiler:He gets his wish in the form of Lancer.]]
* DarkerAndEdgier: Compared to the first fic, where none of the Servants really hate one another. In this fic, there are multiple Servants literally howling for other Servants blood.
Changed line(s) 144 (click to see context) from:
* TeethClenchedTeamwork: It's quite obvious that while their Masters are cooperating, Avenger and Caster don't get along well.
to:
* TeethClenchedTeamwork: It's quite obvious that while their Masters are cooperating, Avenger and Caster [[spoiler:[[Manga/FairyTail Future Rogue]]]] don't get along well.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 131 (click to see context) from:
* StormOfBlades: One of Lambda-11's and [[spoiler: [[PuellaMagiMadokaMagica Sayaka Miki's]]]] favored tactics in battle. [[spoiler: Makes sense then that the latter's soul [[BackFromTheDead restarted]] the former's body.]]
to:
* StormOfBlades: One of Lambda-11's and [[spoiler: [[PuellaMagiMadokaMagica [[Anime/PuellaMagiMadokaMagica Sayaka Miki's]]]] favored tactics in battle. [[spoiler: Makes sense then that the latter's soul [[BackFromTheDead restarted]] the former's body.]]
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 130 (click to see context) from:
* ShoutOut: Both parts of Lambda-11's cover name: Noel Valenzuela, are references to both the BlazBlue character of the same name, [[spoiler: who is technically her younger sister]], and her English voice actress, CristinaValenzuela.
to:
* ShoutOut: Both parts of Lambda-11's cover name: Noel Valenzuela, are references to both the BlazBlue ''VideoGame/BlazBlue'' character of the same name, [[spoiler: who is technically her younger sister]], and her English voice actress, CristinaValenzuela.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 16,17 (click to see context) from:
A true sequel, officially called Fate: Stay Nightmare, tells the story of the Fifth Holy Grail War and of the [[EvilPlan machinations]] of the Grail to be truly reborn. And this time, it has every intentions of doing so, going so far as to summon '''[[UpToEleven 15]]''' Servants to the battlefield. It can be found [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10658926/1/Fate-Stay-Nightmare here.]]
to:
A true sequel, officially called Fate: Stay Nightmare, tells the story of the Fifth Holy Grail War and of the [[EvilPlan machinations]] of the Grail to be truly reborn. And this time, it has every intentions of doing so, going so far as to summon '''[[UpToEleven 15]]''' Servants (the original eight plus the new classes of Beast, Saver, Ruler, Defender, Conqueror, Slayer and Fallen) to the battlefield. It can be found [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10658926/1/Fate-Stay-Nightmare here.]]
Added DiffLines:
* AscendedExtra: [[spoiler: Mordred]] was originally just [[spoiler: an illusion created by Zero!Assassin for a trap that Saber sprung.]] Here, [[spoiler: she's the new Servant Avenger]].
* BackToBackBadasses: Saber and Saver team up to fight Berserker as Shirou and Rin are coming back from the Church.
* {{Badass}}: Every Servant, canon or otherwise, as expected, but several do stand out.
* BigDamnHeroes: Once again, a staple of Maka and Soul.
** Both [[spoiler: Fake!]]Assassin and Avenger pull this off one after another against Berserker. [[spoiler: Of course, Avenger's reasons were far more [[OnlyICanKillHim personal]] towards Saber]].
* DeadpanSnarker: Fallen just ''loves'' pissing off [[HairTriggerTemper Avenger]].
* BackToBackBadasses: Saber and Saver team up to fight Berserker as Shirou and Rin are coming back from the Church.
* {{Badass}}: Every Servant, canon or otherwise, as expected, but several do stand out.
* BigDamnHeroes: Once again, a staple of Maka and Soul.
** Both [[spoiler: Fake!]]Assassin and Avenger pull this off one after another against Berserker. [[spoiler: Of course, Avenger's reasons were far more [[OnlyICanKillHim personal]] towards Saber]].
* DeadpanSnarker: Fallen just ''loves'' pissing off [[HairTriggerTemper Avenger]].
Added DiffLines:
* TeethClenchedTeamwork: It's quite obvious that while their Masters are cooperating, Avenger and Caster don't get along well.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* ArmorPiercingQuestion: After seeing Lancer's memories, Kayneth asks him why he wanted a family despite being so rich and powerful. Lancer tells him his reasons and asks Kayneth what does he truly want to wish for.
Added DiffLines:
* DefrostingTheIceQueen: Lancer helps Kayneth becomes less bigoted and arrogant, evenly causing Kayneth to show his softer side to Sola-Ui.
Added DiffLines:
* FakingTheDead: Zouken makes Tokiomi believe [[spoiler: that he killed Sakura]] when the latter attempts to kill him after Kariya tells what really happening to Sakura.
Added DiffLines:
** Caster literally disarms Uryuu, refusing to let the man to be his master while Avenger kills him.
Added DiffLines:
** Lancer and Kayneth try to make Sola-Ui breakfast, despite being bad at it.
Added DiffLines:
* SelflessWish: Maka and Soul planned to use their wish to give Kariya a new body.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 84 (click to see context) from:
* RedHerring: In terms of who would be the next villain. After disposing of [[spoiler: Archer]] and establishing himself as the resident MagnificentBastard of the war, one might be led to believe that [[spoiler: Assassin]] would survive and continue on his path in the Fifth War. [[spoiler: Nope! He's killed off by Berserker, who ''does'' survive to the next war.]] However, the story does set up who will be major antagonist, just not in that obvious way.
to:
* RedHerring: In terms of who would be the next villain. After disposing of [[spoiler: Archer]] and establishing himself as the resident MagnificentBastard of the war, one might be led to believe that [[spoiler: Assassin]] would survive and continue on his path in the Fifth War. [[spoiler: Nope! He's killed off by Berserker, who ''does'' survive to the next war.]] However, the story does set up who will be the major antagonist, just not in that obvious way.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 83 (click to see context) from:
** Subverted with [[spoiler: [[EquippableAlly Soul]]]], one of the genuinely good guys.
to:
** Subverted with [[spoiler: [[EquippableAlly Soul]]]], one of the genuinely good guys. guys.
* RedHerring: In terms of who would be the next villain. After disposing of [[spoiler: Archer]] and establishing himself as the resident MagnificentBastard of the war, one might be led to believe that [[spoiler: Assassin]] would survive and continue on his path in the Fifth War. [[spoiler: Nope! He's killed off by Berserker, who ''does'' survive to the next war.]] However, the story does set up who will be major antagonist, just not in that obvious way.
* RedHerring: In terms of who would be the next villain. After disposing of [[spoiler: Archer]] and establishing himself as the resident MagnificentBastard of the war, one might be led to believe that [[spoiler: Assassin]] would survive and continue on his path in the Fifth War. [[spoiler: Nope! He's killed off by Berserker, who ''does'' survive to the next war.]] However, the story does set up who will be major antagonist, just not in that obvious way.
Changed line(s) 114 (click to see context) from:
* JerkWithAHeartOfGold: This is Shinji's new personality. While he's still quite abrasive and smug, Shirou notes that it's more out of genuine confidence in his abilities than general [[{{Jerkass}} jerkassry]], and there are moments when he acts like a genuine NiceGuy, helping Shirou during his [[TrainingFromHell exercises]] in the early days and having a surprisingly honest heart-to-heart talk with Shirou about how he felt about [[ConvientlyAnOrphan the]] [[ZombieApocalypse events]] that brought him here.
to:
* JerkWithAHeartOfGold: This is Shinji's new personality. While he's still quite abrasive and smug, Shirou notes that it's more out of genuine confidence in his abilities than general [[{{Jerkass}} jerkassry]], and there are moments when he acts like a genuine NiceGuy, helping Shirou during his [[TrainingFromHell exercises]] in the early days and having a surprisingly honest heart-to-heart talk with Shirou about how he felt about [[ConvientlyAnOrphan [[ConvenientlyAnOrphan the]] [[ZombieApocalypse events]] that brought him here.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
** The lengths each goes to is different however. Rider obviously calls her out on it and stomps on her beliefs. Avenger and Lancer are on his side, but they don't take their words to that extreme. Assassin seems more neutral than anything else. Berserker, Caster and [[spoiler: Soul]] ''do'' appreciate the meaning behind it, but they feel that her method just isn't the right way to go about it.
** In fact, the last two actually come to Saber's side when Rider accuses her of being unworthy of kingship, smashing their fists on the table to interupt him and with [[spoiler: Soul]] [[TranquilFury calmly]] telling Rider to stop it.
** In fact, the last two actually come to Saber's side when Rider accuses her of being unworthy of kingship, smashing their fists on the table to interupt him and with [[spoiler: Soul]] [[TranquilFury calmly]] telling Rider to stop it.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 103 (click to see context) from:
* {{Determinator}}: Shirou's still one. When he mock-battled Lambda, he refused to surrender despite her [[Cyborg superior]] [[StormOfBlades abilities]] and kept going until he had his blade at her neck from sheer willpower. [[InTheBack He got taken down by a sneak attack from behind]] not long afterwards, but still '''damn'''.
to:
* {{Determinator}}: Shirou's still one. When he mock-battled Lambda, he refused to surrender despite her [[Cyborg [[{{Cyborg}} superior]] [[StormOfBlades abilities]] and kept going until he had his blade at her neck from sheer willpower. [[InTheBack He got taken down by a sneak attack from behind]] not long afterwards, but still '''damn'''.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* {{Determinator}}: Shirou's still one. When he mock-battled Lambda, he refused to surrender despite her [[Cyborg superior]] [[StormOfBlades abilities]] and kept going until he had his blade at her neck from sheer willpower. [[InTheBack He got taken down by a sneak attack from behind]] not long afterwards, but still '''damn'''.
Added DiffLines:
* FriendsWithBenefits: How Edgar defines his relationship with [[ShapeshiftingSeducer Chryssie]], though he admits that he would be lying if he said they didn't feel something resembling true love for each other.
Added DiffLines:
* ShoutOut: Both parts of Lambda-11's cover name: Noel Valenzuela, are references to both the BlazBlue character of the same name, [[spoiler: who is technically her younger sister]], and her English voice actress, CristinaValenzuela.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 107 (click to see context) from:
* HealingHands: [[VideoGame/BlazBlue Lambda-11]] has these, an ability she didn't have in her canon. [[spoiler: There's a [[EmptyShell reason]] for [[MergerOfSouls this]].]]
to:
* [[GhostMemory Ghost/]]GeneticMemory: [[VideoGame/BlazBlue Lambda]] has both of these, of both her former life and that of [[spoiler: Sayaka's due to her [[LivingMemory echo]] fusing with her.]] She doesn't get overwhelmed by them, they just come to her in flashes whenever she registers a trigger for either set.
* HealingHands: [[VideoGame/BlazBlue Lambda-11]] has these, an ability she didn't have in her canon. [[spoiler: There's a [[EmptyShell reason]]for [[LivingMemory for]] [[MergerOfSouls this]].]]
* HealingHands: [[VideoGame/BlazBlue Lambda-11]] has these, an ability she didn't have in her canon. [[spoiler: There's a [[EmptyShell reason]]
Changed line(s) 109,110 (click to see context) from:
* JerkWithAHeartOfGold: This is Shinji's new personality. While he's still quite abrasive and smug, Shirou notes that it's more out of genuine confidence in his abilities than general [[{{Jerkass}} jerkassry]], and there are moments when he acts like a NiceGuy, having a surprisingly honest heart-to-heart talk with Shirou about how he felt about [[ConvientlyAnOrphan the]] [[ZombieApocalypse events]] that brought him here.
* NotQuiteDead: [[spoiler: Sayaka, after she became a [[EldritchAbomination Witch]] and was destroyed, actually had her body and Grief Seed preserved under OSG headquarters. Edgar's been trying to find a way to bring her back ever since, but he's noticed that there are occasionally hints that she's not quite as gone from the world as one might think.]]
* NotQuiteDead: [[spoiler: Sayaka, after she became a [[EldritchAbomination Witch]] and was destroyed, actually had her body and Grief Seed preserved under OSG headquarters. Edgar's been trying to find a way to bring her back ever since, but he's noticed that there are occasionally hints that she's not quite as gone from the world as one might think.]]
to:
* JerkWithAHeartOfGold: This is Shinji's new personality. While he's still quite abrasive and smug, Shirou notes that it's more out of genuine confidence in his abilities than general [[{{Jerkass}} jerkassry]], and there are moments when he acts like a genuine NiceGuy, helping Shirou during his [[TrainingFromHell exercises]] in the early days and having a surprisingly honest heart-to-heart talk with Shirou about how he felt about [[ConvientlyAnOrphan the]] [[ZombieApocalypse events]] that brought him here.
* LivingMemory: 'Echoes' appear to be on the surface ghosts, but are actually facsimiles of living beings created by magic or intense emotions, which possess fractured memories of the original, but are self-aware and capable of interacting with others. However, anyone who sees or interacts with them eventually forgets all about them, essentially making them an UnPerson. [[spoiler: An echo was created upon Sayaka's corruption into a Witch and subsequent destruction, wandering around the halls of OSG for almost two decades before eventually finding an new [[EmptyShell body]] to inhabit... which ended up being Lambda-11's.]]
* NotQuiteDead: [[spoiler: Sayaka, after she became a [[EldritchAbomination Witch]] and was destroyed, actually had her body and Grief Seed preserved under OSG headquarters. Edgar's been trying to find a way to bring her back ever since, but he's noticed that there are occasionally hints that she's not quite as gone from the world as one might think.]] ]]
* LivingMemory: 'Echoes' appear to be on the surface ghosts, but are actually facsimiles of living beings created by magic or intense emotions, which possess fractured memories of the original, but are self-aware and capable of interacting with others. However, anyone who sees or interacts with them eventually forgets all about them, essentially making them an UnPerson. [[spoiler: An echo was created upon Sayaka's corruption into a Witch and subsequent destruction, wandering around the halls of OSG for almost two decades before eventually finding an new [[EmptyShell body]] to inhabit... which ended up being Lambda-11's.]]
* NotQuiteDead: [[spoiler: Sayaka, after she became a [[EldritchAbomination Witch]] and was destroyed, actually had her body and Grief Seed preserved under OSG headquarters. Edgar's been trying to find a way to bring her back ever since, but he's noticed that there are occasionally hints that she's not quite as gone from the world as one might think.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
* DisconnectedByDeath: [[spoiler: Sayaka's]] last conversation with Edgar took place over the phone, desperately telling him what had happened to her and asking whether or not Kiritsugu got his birthday present. When he tells her he did, she gratefully thanks him before being disconnected. [[spoiler: This having been because her [[SoulJar Soul Gem]] was almost fully corrupted, she didn't die... [[FateWorseThanDeath though that might]] [[AndIMustScream have been preferable to the end result]].]]
Changed line(s) 108 (click to see context) from:
* JerkWithAHeartOfGold: This is Shinji's new personality. While he's still quite abrasive and smug, Shirou notes that it's more out of genuine confidence in his abilities than general [[{{Jerkass}} jerkassry]], and there are moments when he acts like a NiceGuy, having a surprisingly honest heart-to-heart talk with Shirou about how he felt about the [[ZombieApocalypse events]] that brought him here.
to:
* JerkWithAHeartOfGold: This is Shinji's new personality. While he's still quite abrasive and smug, Shirou notes that it's more out of genuine confidence in his abilities than general [[{{Jerkass}} jerkassry]], and there are moments when he acts like a NiceGuy, having a surprisingly honest heart-to-heart talk with Shirou about how he felt about the [[ConvientlyAnOrphan the]] [[ZombieApocalypse events]] that brought him here.here.
* NotQuiteDead: [[spoiler: Sayaka, after she became a [[EldritchAbomination Witch]] and was destroyed, actually had her body and Grief Seed preserved under OSG headquarters. Edgar's been trying to find a way to bring her back ever since, but he's noticed that there are occasionally hints that she's not quite as gone from the world as one might think.]]
* NotQuiteDead: [[spoiler: Sayaka, after she became a [[EldritchAbomination Witch]] and was destroyed, actually had her body and Grief Seed preserved under OSG headquarters. Edgar's been trying to find a way to bring her back ever since, but he's noticed that there are occasionally hints that she's not quite as gone from the world as one might think.]]
Added DiffLines:
* TragicKeepsake: Shirou's cutlass, which he received on his first day at OSG headquarters, actually belonged to Kiritsugu before he cut ties with the group, leaving it behind. [[spoiler: It turns out it was one to him as well: It was Sayaka's last gift to him for his birthday before she went on a mission. She didn't come back... [[CameBackWrong not the same way, at least]].]]
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
* BerserkButton: PlayedForLaughs with Shirou. His major one appears to be anytime someone claims not to like his [[SupremeChef cooking]]. When pressed, he's scary enough to freak ''[[{{Badass}} Edgar]]'' out.
Changed line(s) 100 (click to see context) from:
** [[CastingAShadow Edgar]] vs. [[RealityWarper Zeltrech]]. Edgar describes it as getting the crap beat out of him, but attempts to justify it by [[WorfHadTheFlu tired from previous battles and a little emotionally high-strung]].
to:
** [[CastingAShadow Edgar]] vs. [[RealityWarper Zeltrech]]. Edgar describes it as getting the crap beat out of him, but attempts to justify it by being [[WorfHadTheFlu tired from previous battles and a little emotionally high-strung]].high-strung]].
* DeathByFlashback: The last two chapters are spent with Edgar telling Shirou and Lambda about [[spoiler: Sayaka Miki]], Kiritsugu's former partner in the OSG and whose death ultimately caused him to break from the group.
* DeathByFlashback: The last two chapters are spent with Edgar telling Shirou and Lambda about [[spoiler: Sayaka Miki]], Kiritsugu's former partner in the OSG and whose death ultimately caused him to break from the group.
Changed line(s) 105 (click to see context) from:
* HowWeGotHere/ThisIsMyStory: Each chapter begins with [[TheLeader Edgar Silverstein]] writing down events from the past in his journal chronicling how he and the OSG got started.
to:
* HowWeGotHere/ThisIsMyStory: HowWeGotHere / ThisIsMyStory: Each chapter begins with [[TheLeader Edgar Silverstein]] writing down events from the past in his journal chronicling how he and the OSG got started.
* RelationshipUpgrade: Maka and Soul have apparently been dating by the time of this fic's events. [[spoiler: They eventually become engaged near the end as well.]]
Changed line(s) 111 (click to see context) from:
* StormOfBlades: One of [[spoiler: Lambda-11's]] and [[spoiler: [[PuellaMagiMadokaMagica Sayaka Miki's]]]] favored tactics in battle. [[spoiler: Makes sense then that the latter's soul [[BackFromTheDead restarted]] the former's body.]]
to:
* SexyMentor: Shirou's swordsmanship teacher is [[JoanOfArc Jeanne]] [[LightNovel/FateApocrypha d'Arc]]. However, she's already married or at least dating someone else in OSG.
* StormOfBlades: One of[[spoiler: Lambda-11's]] Lambda-11's and [[spoiler: [[PuellaMagiMadokaMagica Sayaka Miki's]]]] favored tactics in battle. [[spoiler: Makes sense then that the latter's soul [[BackFromTheDead restarted]] the former's body.]]]]
* SupremeChef: Shirou's cooking skills are already legendary by this point. Lambda-11 almost had a foodgasm when she first tasted it, and almost everyone at OSG eagerly anticipates when it's Shirou's turn to cook. 'Almost' meaning everyone but Edgar for some reason.
* StormOfBlades: One of
* SupremeChef: Shirou's cooking skills are already legendary by this point. Lambda-11 almost had a foodgasm when she first tasted it, and almost everyone at OSG eagerly anticipates when it's Shirou's turn to cook. 'Almost' meaning everyone but Edgar for some reason.
Changed line(s) 115 (click to see context) from:
* UpToEleven: As mentioned earlier, there are '''fifteen''' Servants duking it out in this Grail War. [[BiggerBad Angra Mainyu's]] appears to be of the opinion that the logical way to be revived in a war which requires the deaths of seven Servants is to create double that number to increase the chances.
to:
* UpToEleven: As mentioned earlier, there are '''fifteen''' Servants duking it out in this Grail War. [[BiggerBad Angra Mainyu's]] Mainyu]] appears to be of the opinion that the logical way to be revived in a war which requires the deaths of seven Servants is to create double that number to increase the chances.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* FirstPersonSmartass: In his journal entries, Edgar is quite snarky as he recalls those memories of his first years.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 105 (click to see context) from:
* JerkWithAHeartOfGold: This is Shinji's new personality. While he's still quite abrasive and smug, Shirou notes that it's more out of genuine confidence in his abilities than general [[Jerkass jerkassry]], and there are moments when he acts like a NiceGuy, having a surprisingly honest heart-to-heart talk with Shirou about how he felt about the [[ZombieApocalypse events]] that brought him here.
to:
* JerkWithAHeartOfGold: This is Shinji's new personality. While he's still quite abrasive and smug, Shirou notes that it's more out of genuine confidence in his abilities than general [[Jerkass [[{{Jerkass}} jerkassry]], and there are moments when he acts like a NiceGuy, having a surprisingly honest heart-to-heart talk with Shirou about how he felt about the [[ZombieApocalypse events]] that brought him here.
Changed line(s) 109 (click to see context) from:
* SadistTeacher: Harbinger is considered this by his trainees. One of the exercises he has them go through is called the [[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin 'Gut Crawl']], which consists of moving through a pipe filled with [[Squick cow intestines]] in the dark with all the sounds, sights, and smells you'd expect. He claims its because he wants them [[CrazyPrepared to be ready for anything when on the field.]]
to:
* SadistTeacher: Harbinger is considered this by his trainees. One of the exercises he has them go through is called the [[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin 'Gut Crawl']], which consists of moving through a pipe filled with [[Squick [[{{Squick}} cow intestines]] in the dark with all the sounds, sights, and smells you'd expect. He claims its because he wants them [[CrazyPrepared to be ready for anything when on the field.]]
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 99 (click to see context) from:
* CurbStompBattle: Raymond [[spoiler: [[Manga/{{Bleach}} (Coyote)]]]] Starrk vs. Merem Solomon's [[Kaiju Demon of the Right Leg]]. [[spoiler: The dog didn't have a chance in hell after the former used [[WaveMotionGun Cero]] [[BeamSpam Metralleta]].]]
to:
* CurbStompBattle: Raymond [[spoiler: [[Manga/{{Bleach}} (Coyote)]]]] Starrk vs. Merem Solomon's [[Kaiju [[{{Kaiju}} Demon of the Right Leg]]. [[spoiler: The dog didn't have a chance in hell after the former used [[WaveMotionGun Cero]] [[BeamSpam Metralleta]].]]
Changed line(s) 101 (click to see context) from:
* DrivenToSuicide: Contemplated by Edgar in the flashbacks, considering he had just lost his best chance of bringing his wife back to life and all his sacrifices for nothing. It was only the [[IGaveMyWord promise]] he made to his dying wife to live on that made him hesitate. Then [[Troll Zeltrech]] shows up...
to:
* DrivenToSuicide: Contemplated by Edgar in the flashbacks, considering he had just lost his best chance of bringing his wife back to life and all his sacrifices for nothing. It was only the [[IGaveMyWord promise]] he made to his dying wife to live on that made him hesitate. Then [[Troll [[{{Troll}} Zeltrech]] shows up...
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
* CurbStompBattle: Raymond [[spoiler: [[Manga/{{Bleach}} (Coyote)]]]] Starrk vs. Merem Solomon's [[Kaiju Demon of the Right Leg]]. [[spoiler: The dog didn't have a chance in hell after the former used [[WaveMotionGun Cero]] [[BeamSpam Metralleta]].]]
** [[CastingAShadow Edgar]] vs. [[RealityWarper Zeltrech]]. Edgar describes it as getting the crap beat out of him, but attempts to justify it by [[WorfHadTheFlu tired from previous battles and a little emotionally high-strung]].
* DrivenToSuicide: Contemplated by Edgar in the flashbacks, considering he had just lost his best chance of bringing his wife back to life and all his sacrifices for nothing. It was only the [[IGaveMyWord promise]] he made to his dying wife to live on that made him hesitate. Then [[Troll Zeltrech]] shows up...
** [[CastingAShadow Edgar]] vs. [[RealityWarper Zeltrech]]. Edgar describes it as getting the crap beat out of him, but attempts to justify it by [[WorfHadTheFlu tired from previous battles and a little emotionally high-strung]].
* DrivenToSuicide: Contemplated by Edgar in the flashbacks, considering he had just lost his best chance of bringing his wife back to life and all his sacrifices for nothing. It was only the [[IGaveMyWord promise]] he made to his dying wife to live on that made him hesitate. Then [[Troll Zeltrech]] shows up...
* PersonOfMassDestruction: In flashbacks, we get to see how deadly the normally [[BrilliantButLazy apathetic]] Raymond Starrk can be. [[spoiler: Not only did he match Edgar's [[SuperMode Shadow Form]] while fighting at his base power without too much effort, he utterly [[CurbStompBattle curb-stomped]] [[OurVampiresAreDifferent Merem Solomon's]] [[AttackOfTheFiftyFootWhatever Demon of the Right Leg]] when he activated his [[TheGunslinger Resurreccion]].]]
** Edgar describes the results of his first clash with Zeltrech to have destroyed the landscape they were fighting in.
** Edgar describes the results of his first clash with Zeltrech to have destroyed the landscape they were fighting in.
Changed line(s) 105 (click to see context) from:
* StormOfBlades: One of [[spoiler: Lambda-11's]] and [[spoiler: [[PuellaMagiMadokaMagica Sayaka Miki's]]]] favored tactics in battle. [[Makes sense then that the latter's soul [[BackFromTheDead restarted]] the former's body.]]
to:
* StormOfBlades: One of [[spoiler: Lambda-11's]] and [[spoiler: [[PuellaMagiMadokaMagica Sayaka Miki's]]]] favored tactics in battle. [[Makes [[spoiler: Makes sense then that the latter's soul [[BackFromTheDead restarted]] the former's body.]]
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 98,99 (click to see context) from:
* AdaptionalBadass: Due to growing up with [[spoiler: [[BadassNormal Maiya]], [[ActionGirl Maka]], and [[BigBrotherMentor Soul]]]], Shirou's quite a bit more adept at things like fighting than he ever was in canon at that age in the beginning. The fic proceeds to take it from there.
* Exposition: Really, the true reason this story exists is because the author felt the need to clarify some things about OSG and flesh out the characters more. It eventually grew from there.
* Exposition: Really, the true reason this story exists is because the author felt the need to clarify some things about OSG and flesh out the characters more. It eventually grew from there.
to:
* AdaptionalBadass: AdaptationalBadass: Due to growing up with [[spoiler: [[BadassNormal Maiya]], [[ActionGirl Maka]], and [[BigBrotherMentor Soul]]]], Shirou's quite a bit more adept at things like fighting than he ever was in canon at that age in the beginning. The fic proceeds to take it from there.
*Exposition: {{Exposition}}: Really, the true reason this story exists is because the author felt the need to clarify some things about OSG and flesh out the characters more. It eventually grew from there.there.
* HealingHands: [[VideoGame/BlazBlue Lambda-11]] has these, an ability she didn't have in her canon. [[spoiler: There's a [[EmptyShell reason]] for [[MergerOfSouls this]].]]
*
* HealingHands: [[VideoGame/BlazBlue Lambda-11]] has these, an ability she didn't have in her canon. [[spoiler: There's a [[EmptyShell reason]] for [[MergerOfSouls this]].]]
* JerkWithAHeartOfGold: This is Shinji's new personality. While he's still quite abrasive and smug, Shirou notes that it's more out of genuine confidence in his abilities than general [[Jerkass jerkassry]], and there are moments when he acts like a NiceGuy, having a surprisingly honest heart-to-heart talk with Shirou about how he felt about the [[ZombieApocalypse events]] that brought him here.
Changed line(s) 102 (click to see context) from:
* SadistTeacher: Harbinger is considered this by his trainees. One of the exercises he has them go through is called the 'Gut Crawl', which consists of moving through a pipe filled with [[Squick cow intestines]] in the dark with all the sounds, sights, and smells you'd expect. He claims its because he wants them [[CrazyPrepared to be ready for anything when on the field.]]
to:
* SadistTeacher: Harbinger is considered this by his trainees. One of the exercises he has them go through is called the [[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin 'Gut Crawl', Crawl']], which consists of moving through a pipe filled with [[Squick cow intestines]] in the dark with all the sounds, sights, and smells you'd expect. He claims its because he wants them [[CrazyPrepared to be ready for anything when on the field.]]
* StormOfBlades: One of [[spoiler: Lambda-11's]] and [[spoiler: [[PuellaMagiMadokaMagica Sayaka Miki's]]]] favored tactics in battle. [[Makes sense then that the latter's soul [[BackFromTheDead restarted]] the former's body.]]
* StormOfBlades: One of [[spoiler: Lambda-11's]] and [[spoiler: [[PuellaMagiMadokaMagica Sayaka Miki's]]]] favored tactics in battle. [[Makes sense then that the latter's soul [[BackFromTheDead restarted]] the former's body.]]
Changed line(s) 106 (click to see context) from:
* WhatCouldHaveBeen: This story was originally supposed to be the only
to:
* WhatCouldHaveBeen: This story was originally supposed UpToEleven: As mentioned earlier, there are '''fifteen''' Servants duking it out in this Grail War. [[BiggerBad Angra Mainyu's]] appears to be of the only opinion that the logical way to be revived in a war which requires the deaths of seven Servants is to create double that number to increase the chances.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 94 (click to see context) from:
* YouAreNotAlone: Combined with the above trope, Berserker and [[spoiler: Soul]] comfort Saber after the Servant banquet and tell her that they will stay by her no matter what. This event is the turning point where Saber starts to truly accept them both as friends.
to:
* YouAreNotAlone: Combined with the above trope, Berserker and [[spoiler: Soul]] comfort Saber after the Servant banquet and tell her that they will stay by her no matter what. This event is the turning point where Saber starts to truly accept them both as friends.friends.
----
!!Fate: OSG provides examples of:
* AdaptionalBadass: Due to growing up with [[spoiler: [[BadassNormal Maiya]], [[ActionGirl Maka]], and [[BigBrotherMentor Soul]]]], Shirou's quite a bit more adept at things like fighting than he ever was in canon at that age in the beginning. The fic proceeds to take it from there.
* Exposition: Really, the true reason this story exists is because the author felt the need to clarify some things about OSG and flesh out the characters more. It eventually grew from there.
* HowWeGotHere/ThisIsMyStory: Each chapter begins with [[TheLeader Edgar Silverstein]] writing down events from the past in his journal chronicling how he and the OSG got started.
* RefusalOfTheCall: In the flashbacks, it's made pretty obvious from near the beginning that Edgar had originally no intentions of creating OSG. It took some world traveling and a lot of prodding by [[RealityWarper Zeltrech]] before he finally accepted.
* SadistTeacher: Harbinger is considered this by his trainees. One of the exercises he has them go through is called the 'Gut Crawl', which consists of moving through a pipe filled with [[Squick cow intestines]] in the dark with all the sounds, sights, and smells you'd expect. He claims its because he wants them [[CrazyPrepared to be ready for anything when on the field.]]
----
!!The true sequel, Fate: Stay Nightmare, provides examples of:
* WhatCouldHaveBeen: This story was originally supposed to be the only
----
----
!!Fate: OSG provides examples of:
* AdaptionalBadass: Due to growing up with [[spoiler: [[BadassNormal Maiya]], [[ActionGirl Maka]], and [[BigBrotherMentor Soul]]]], Shirou's quite a bit more adept at things like fighting than he ever was in canon at that age in the beginning. The fic proceeds to take it from there.
* Exposition: Really, the true reason this story exists is because the author felt the need to clarify some things about OSG and flesh out the characters more. It eventually grew from there.
* HowWeGotHere/ThisIsMyStory: Each chapter begins with [[TheLeader Edgar Silverstein]] writing down events from the past in his journal chronicling how he and the OSG got started.
* RefusalOfTheCall: In the flashbacks, it's made pretty obvious from near the beginning that Edgar had originally no intentions of creating OSG. It took some world traveling and a lot of prodding by [[RealityWarper Zeltrech]] before he finally accepted.
* SadistTeacher: Harbinger is considered this by his trainees. One of the exercises he has them go through is called the 'Gut Crawl', which consists of moving through a pipe filled with [[Squick cow intestines]] in the dark with all the sounds, sights, and smells you'd expect. He claims its because he wants them [[CrazyPrepared to be ready for anything when on the field.]]
----
!!The true sequel, Fate: Stay Nightmare, provides examples of:
* WhatCouldHaveBeen: This story was originally supposed to be the only
----
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 16,17 (click to see context) from:
A true sequel, officially called Fate: Stay Nightmare, tells the story of the Fifth Holy Grail War and of the [[EvilPlan machinations]] of the Grail to be truly reborn. And this time, it has every intentions of doing so, going so far as to summon [[UpToEleven 15]] Servants to the battlefield. It can be found [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10658926/1/Fate-Stay-Nightmare here.]]
to:
A true sequel, officially called Fate: Stay Nightmare, tells the story of the Fifth Holy Grail War and of the [[EvilPlan machinations]] of the Grail to be truly reborn. And this time, it has every intentions of doing so, going so far as to summon [[UpToEleven 15]] '''[[UpToEleven 15]]''' Servants to the battlefield. It can be found [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10658926/1/Fate-Stay-Nightmare here.]]
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 1 (click to see context) from:
--> "The Fourth Holy Grail War has begun. However, Angra Mainyu has decided to replace some of the Servants with more... [[ForWantOfANail interesting characters]]. Now, Servants, old and new, must battle for the Grail in a war unlike no other. Perhaps, for some, [[ScrewDestiny fate can be changed]]. Inspired by The Infamous Man's Fate: Zero Sense."
to:
--> "The Fourth Holy Grail War has begun. However, Angra Mainyu has decided to replace some of the Servants with more... [[ForWantOfANail interesting characters]]. Now, Servants, old and new, must battle for the Grail in a war unlike no other. Perhaps, for some, [[ScrewDestiny fate can be changed]]. Inspired by The Infamous Man's Fate: Zero Sense." [[OneOfUs (Now with its own page on TvTropes!)]]"
Added DiffLines:
A sidestory, entitled [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10390833/1/Fate-OSG Fate: OSG]], was written and completed not long afterwards, essentially taking place during the [[TimeSkip last five years between]] the Fourth and Fifth War, chronicling the adventures and some eailer CharacterDevelopment for [[TheHero Shirou Emiya]] as well as giving some backstory on the resident [[TheOmniscientCouncilofVagueness mystery group:]] [[FunWithAcronyms OSG]] and on the leader, [[TheMentor Edgar Silverstein]].
A true sequel, officially called Fate: Stay Nightmare, tells the story of the Fifth Holy Grail War and of the [[EvilPlan machinations]] of the Grail to be truly reborn. And this time, it has every intentions of doing so, going so far as to summon [[UpToEleven 15]] Servants to the battlefield. It can be found [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10658926/1/Fate-Stay-Nightmare here.]]
A true sequel, officially called Fate: Stay Nightmare, tells the story of the Fifth Holy Grail War and of the [[EvilPlan machinations]] of the Grail to be truly reborn. And this time, it has every intentions of doing so, going so far as to summon [[UpToEleven 15]] Servants to the battlefield. It can be found [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10658926/1/Fate-Stay-Nightmare here.]]
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 26 (click to see context) from:
* BashBrothers: Rider and Caster eventually partner up and continue in the this fashion through the Grail War [[spoiler:until Rider's death]].
to:
* BashBrothers: Rider and Caster eventually partner up and continue in the this fashion through throughout the Grail War [[spoiler:until Rider's death]].
Added DiffLines:
* CuteBruiser: Several Servants bring up the fact that for a Servant of Madness, Berserker is surprisingly small and [[SanityHasAdvantages sane.]]
Added DiffLines:
*SanityHasAdvantages: Berserker, the not-so-Mad Servant. While she does have [[PowerBornOfMadness Mad Enhancement]] (with it even tied to one of her Noble Phantasms) she spends most of the story perfectly sane.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
* DidYouJustPunchOutCthulhu: [[spoiler: Lancer killing Avenger, Saber, Berserker and Soul killing Archer.]]
*DidYouJustScamCthulhu: [[spoiler:Assassin]], did you just use a [[ButThouMust Command Seal]] on ''[[spoiler:[[WorldsStrongestMan ARCHER]]]]?!''
*DidYouJustScamCthulhu: [[spoiler:Assassin]], did you just use a [[ButThouMust Command Seal]] on ''[[spoiler:[[WorldsStrongestMan ARCHER]]]]?!''
Changed line(s) 55 (click to see context) from:
* Irony: Archer makes several comments on killing the other Servants. [[spoiler:Archer is the third Servant to die.]]
to:
* Irony: {{Irony}}: Archer makes several comments on killing the other Servants. [[spoiler:Archer is the third Servant to die.]]
Added DiffLines:
*LittleMissBadass: Rin goes off on her own to save her friend Kotone from a serial killer, [[spoiler: encounters Avenger, [[NervesOfSteel doesn't flinch in his presence]] and tries to help him fight Grand Fisher by shooting Fisher with Casull, one of Avenger's Noble Phastasms that even adults would find frighteningly large which ultimately breaks her wrist upon usage. By the end of their little adventure, Avenger is quite impressed with the young magus.]]
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* OutGambitted: [[spoiler:Archer]] believes that he is the Fourth Grail War's resident MagnificentBastard. He is gravely mistaken and ultimately taken advantage of by [[spoiler:Assassin]], the War's true MagnificentBastard, ending in [[spoiler:Archer's death via Saber and Berserker]].
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* BashBrothers: Rider and Caster eventually partner up and continue in the this fashion through the Grail War [[spoiler:until Rider's death]].
**LovelyAngels: Saber and Berserker, likewise [[spoiler:until Berserker is forced to kill Saber]].
**LovelyAngels: Saber and Berserker, likewise [[spoiler:until Berserker is forced to kill Saber]].
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
**[[spoiler:GoodFeelsGood: That said, he's genuinely happy when he does a good deed without any evil desires attached. Such as comforting Rin after Tokiomi's funeral.]]
Deleted line(s) 42 (click to see context) :
** FriendlyEnemy: They frequently team-up. [[spoiler:Berserker is devastated by Saber's death.]]
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* Irony: Archer makes several comments on killing the other Servants. [[spoiler:Archer is the third Servant to die.]]
