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** [[spoiler:Even after confessing how much she hates Rainbow Dash for opening her eyes to what she's done while under Loyalty's control, Scootaloo tells Rainbow that she will ''never'' give up on her. It's at this moment that she transforms into the new abstract of Loyalty.]]

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** [[spoiler:Scootaloo and Sweetie Belle]] have one when Twilight frees them from the abstracts' enchantments.



-->"You know…normally I’d enjoy dissecting your emotions like a frog and rebuilding you into a more polite pony but even immortals have time limits."

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-->"You know…normally I’d know...normally I'd enjoy dissecting your emotions like a frog and rebuilding you into a more polite pony but even immortals have time limits."


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* RedemptionPromotion: [[spoiler:After being freed from Loyalty's control and talking Rainbow Dash out of her HeroicBSOD over Cloudsdale's destruction, Scootaloo becomes the new Loyalty]].

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* AGodAmI: [[spoiler:Loyalty]] in ''The Abundance'' is shown to be this in spades. One can assume that [[spoiler:the other Abstracts]] are as well.


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* CainAndAbel: Twilight in Chapter 2 attacks her brother, Shining Armor, at the wedding, because he leaves her at the rehearsal.


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* AGodAmI: [[spoiler:Loyalty]] in ''The Abundance'' is shown to be this in spades. One can assume that [[spoiler:the other Abstracts]] are as well.
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* HeelFaceTurn: [[spoiler:Honesty, if his word is anything to go by.]]

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* MotiveRant: [[spoiler:The Elemental Abstracts]] give a ''ton'' of these in ''Abundance'', most notably [[spoiler:Loyalty]].
* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: [[spoiler:Rainbow Dash]] has one of these moments after breaking free of her possession in ''The Abundance.]]

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* MercyKill: [[spoiler:This is how Shining Armor words Faith's decision to destroy Cloudsdale to keep Loyalty from bastardizing it by making it a part of him.]]
* MotiveRant: [[spoiler:The Elemental Abstracts]] give a ''ton'' of these in ''Abundance'', ''The Abundance'', most notably [[spoiler:Loyalty]].
* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: [[spoiler:Rainbow Dash]] has one of these moments after breaking free of her possession in ''The Abundance.]]Abundance''.



** The plotline of ''TheAbundance'' has several to ''Theatre/LesMiserables''. Including a scene that was ultimately removed in which the prisoners would have sung ''Do You Hear The People Sing''.

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** The plotline of ''TheAbundance'' ''The Abundance'' has several to ''Theatre/LesMiserables''. Including a scene that was ultimately removed in which the prisoners would have sung ''Do You Hear The People Sing''.



** [[spoiler:Twilight is furious with Faith for destroying Cloudsdale, seemingly without a second thought, when Loyalty tries to merge with it. Shining Armor quickly turns this on her head for failing to understand the emotional turmoil Faith is going through for killing his brother and being hated by his truest friend for it.]]

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** [[spoiler:Twilight is furious with Faith for destroying Cloudsdale, seemingly without a second thought, when Loyalty tries to merge with it. Shining Armor quickly turns this on her head for failing to understand the emotional turmoil Faith is going through for killing his brother and being hated by his truest friend for it.something so petty as the destruction of a city.]]

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** [[spoiler:Faith demonstrates his extremity when he destroys Cloudsdale while a dying Loyalty tries to merge a part of his essence, mainly to ensure Loyalty never returns, but also to keep his brother from turning the city from a beacon of hope into a powerful weapon. [[WhatTheHellHero The members of the resistance who don't realize his intentions are less than pleased with him, needless to say]].]]



** [[spoiler:Twilight is furious when Faith destroys Cloudsdale, seemingly without a second thought, when Loyalty tries to merge with it. Shining Armor quickly turns this on her head for failing to understand the emotional turmoil Faith is going through for killing his brother and being hated by his truest friend for it.]]

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** [[spoiler:Twilight is furious when with Faith destroys for destroying Cloudsdale, seemingly without a second thought, when Loyalty tries to merge with it. Shining Armor quickly turns this on her head for failing to understand the emotional turmoil Faith is going through for killing his brother and being hated by his truest friend for it.]]
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** [[spoiler:Twilight is furious when Faith destroys Cloudsdale, seemingly without a second thought, when Loyalty tries to merge with it. Shining Armor quickly turns this on her head for failing to understand the emotional turmoil Faith must be going through for killing his brother and being hated by his truest friend for it.]]

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** [[spoiler:Twilight is furious when Faith destroys Cloudsdale, seemingly without a second thought, when Loyalty tries to merge with it. Shining Armor quickly turns this on her head for failing to understand the emotional turmoil Faith must be is going through for killing his brother and being hated by his truest friend for it.]]

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* AndThatLittleGirlWasMe: While Twilight is fuming over [[spoiler:Faith's decision to destroy Cloudsdale to kill Loyalty]], Shining Armor draws comparisons between that and Twilight's freak-out at the wedding to hammer a bit of empathy for [[spoiler:Faith]] in her.



* TheAtoner: Spike. [[MyGreatestFailure ""The greatest mistake I've ever made was walking away from her last night. I am going to spend the rest of my life making it up to her" ]]

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* TheAtoner: Spike. [[MyGreatestFailure ""The "The greatest mistake I've ever made was walking away from her last night. I am going to spend the rest of my life making it up to her" her".]]
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** [[spoiler:Twilight is furious when Faith destroys Cloudsdale, seemingly without a second thought, when Loyalty tries to merge with it. Shining Armor quickly turns this on her head for failing to understand the emotional turmoil Faith must be going through for killing his brother and being hated by his truest friend for it.]]
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* WellIntentionedExtremist: [[spoiler:The Elemental Abstracts want to create a world free of war, suffering and misery. Unfortunately, their methods of achieving this are basically becoming the pony versions of [[NineteenEightyFour Big Brother]].]]

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* WellIntentionedExtremist: [[spoiler:The Elemental Abstracts want to create a world free of war, suffering and misery. Unfortunately, their methods of achieving this are basically becoming the pony versions of [[NineteenEightyFour [[Literature/NineteenEightyFour Big Brother]].]]
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** In ''Abundance'', [[spoiler:Spitfire is ''not'' happy about Twilight welcoming Rainbow back with open arms after everything she did while under Loyalty's control. She calms down after Flim gives her a heart to heart.]]

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** In ''Abundance'', [[spoiler:Spitfire is ''not'' happy about Twilight welcoming Rainbow back with open arms after everything she did while under Loyalty's control. She calms down after Flim gives explains to her a heart to heart.how selfish she's being.]]
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** In ''Abundance'', [[spoiler:Spitfire is ''not'' happy about Twilight welcoming Rainbow back with open arms after everything she did while under Loyalty's control. She calms down after Flim gives her a heart to heart.]

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** In ''Abundance'', [[spoiler:Spitfire is ''not'' happy about Twilight welcoming Rainbow back with open arms after everything she did while under Loyalty's control. She calms down after Flim gives her a heart to heart.]]]
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** In ''Abundance'', [[spoiler:Spitfire is ''not'' happy about Twilight welcoming Rainbow back with open arms after everything she did while under Loyalty's control. She calms down after Flim gives her a heart to heart.]

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* AntiVillain: [[spoiler:Kindness]]

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* AntiVillain: [[spoiler:Kindness]][[spoiler:Kindness, and to a lesser extent, Loyalty.]]



* BigDamnHeroes: Twilight's friend's ''think'' they're this when they interrupt [[spoiler:Twilight's ascension.]]
** Played straight in the sequel, with [[spoiler:Trixie, Faith, and the other prisoners arriving to turn the tide of the Battle of Cloudsdale in the Queen's CoolAirship.]]



** Inverted in regards to [[spoiler:Spitfire and Rainbow Dash]] in ''The Abundance.''



* CrowningMomentOfAwesome: [[spoiler: In The Abundance, Loyalty drops Dinky Hooves and the Doctor to their deaths. At the very last moment, Derpy Hooves (who has spent the entire story nearly comatose because of the kidnapping of her daughter, breaks the SOUND BARRIER and performs the Sonic Rainboom in order to save them. This is followed by most of the rebellion, led by Rainbow Dash, cheering her as flies over head.]]

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* CrowningMomentOfAwesome: [[spoiler: In The Abundance, Loyalty drops Dinky Hooves CoolAirship: [[spoiler:The Queens have had one made in ''The Abundance'', which is apparently powerful enough to turn the tide of the war when Trixie and the Doctor to their deaths. At the very last moment, Derpy Hooves (who has spent the entire story nearly comatose because of the kidnapping of her daughter, breaks the SOUND BARRIER and performs the Sonic Rainboom in order to save them. This is followed by most of the rebellion, led by Rainbow Dash, cheering her as flies over head.rebellion steal it.]]



* DarkIsNotEvil: Twilight and [[spoiler:Doubt]] advocate this.

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* DarkIsNotEvil: Twilight and [[spoiler:Doubt]] advocate this. One subplot of ''The Abundance'' is them attempting to convince [[spoiler:the other Abstracts]] of this.



** And again, the title of ''The Abundance'' is Foreshadowing. Not only does it symbolize the overabundance of Harmony as a result of the Queens, [[spoiler:it is also the name of the CoolAirship that will turn the tide of the war.]]



** [[spoiler:Happens again a few chapters later, when Faith responds to Loyalty's goads by simply zapping him with magic.]]



** [[spoiler:The Abstract Loyalty]] has the ability to induce this in ''The Abundance.''

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** [[spoiler:The Abstract Loyalty]] has the ability to induce something like this in ''The Abundance.'''' [[spoiler:It's really more along the lines of Undying Blind Obedience.]]



** [[spoiler: Doubt's]] complains about Celestia forgetting about him and turning him into the creature he is now (after her helped her save Equestria) is one of these.

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** [[spoiler: Doubt's]] complains complaints about Celestia forgetting about him and turning him into the creature he is now (after her helped her save Equestria) is one of these.
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* TheAtoner: Spike. ""The greatest mistake I've ever made was walking away from her last night. I am going to spend the rest of my life making it up to her"

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* TheAtoner: Spike. [[MyGreatestFailure ""The greatest mistake I've ever made was walking away from her last night. I am going to spend the rest of my life making it up to her"her" ]]
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* TheAtoner: Spike. ""The greatest mistake I've ever made was walking away from her last night. I am going to spend the rest of my life making it up to her"
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** [[spoiler:However, the Battle of Cloudsdale casts this into doubt, at least in regards to Loyalty. As Twilight points out, his motivation seems to be less a desire to bring "Harmony" to the world and more a temper tantrum that the mortal ponies ''dared'' to decide to live by their own laws instead of blindly obeying the Abstracts.]]
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* CrowningMomentOfAwesome: [[spoiler: In The Abundance, Loyalty drops Dinky Hooves and the Doctor to their deaths. At the very last moment, Derpy Hooves (who has spent the entire story nearly comatose because of the kidnapping of her daughter, breaks the SOUND BARRIER and performs the Sonic Rainboom in order to save them. This is followed by most of the rebellion, led by Rainbow Dash, cheering her as flies over head.]]
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** The plotline of ''TheAbundance'' has several to ''LesMiserables''. Including a scene that was ultimately removed in which the prisoners would have sung ''Do You Hear The People Sing''.

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** The plotline of ''TheAbundance'' has several to ''LesMiserables''.''Theatre/LesMiserables''. Including a scene that was ultimately removed in which the prisoners would have sung ''Do You Hear The People Sing''.
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* ShutUpHannibal: In ''Abundance'', [[spoiler:Loyalty gives a big speech about how the Abstracts are responsible for the defeats of Nightmare Moon and Discord, not the Mane Six, and how he and his fellow Abstracts alone are the ones who should rule and dictate what is and isn't "Harmony". Twilight responds by basically calling him a child.]]
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* BiggerBad: [[spoiler:The Original Doubt]] in ''The Abundance.''


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* ChekhovsGun: [[spoiler:Cadance's temporary crossing of the DespairEventHorizon]] in ''Faith and Doubt.'' ''The Abundance'' reveals that this incident [[spoiler:allowed the original Doubt to take control of her.]]
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* OhCrap: Everyone present at the wedding in chapter two of ''Faith and Doubt,'' when Twilight [[spoiler:temporarily blinds Celestia and attacks Chrysalis-as-Cadance. It's this moment when they collectively realize that this is Twilight very angry and very broken, and not just drunkenly ranting.]]
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* SequelEscalation: ''The Abundance'' to ''Faith and Doubt.'' From a very personal story centering around a hurt Twilight, to [[spoiler:battling ''the physical embodiments of the concepts of the Elements of Harmony'' for the fate of all of Equestria.]]
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** The plotline of ''TheAbundance'' has several to ''LesMiserables''. Including a scene that was ultimately removed in which the prisoners would have sung ''Do You Hear The People Sing''.

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* AGodAmI: [[spoiler:Loyalty]] in ''The Abundance'' is shown to be this in spades. One can assume that [[spoiler:the other Abstracts]] are as well.



* AxCrazy: Averted in regards to Twilight, unlike many other fics. ''Faith and Doubt'' goes out of it's way many times to show that Twilight is very much in control, just very angry and unsure.
** Played straight in regards to [[spoiler:the original Doubt.]]



** Played straight in ''The Abundance'' by the rest of the Mane Six being possessed by the Abstracts, [[spoiler:and by the original Doubt possessing Cadence.]]



** Abstract-Possessed Pinkie gets one in ''The Abundance'', showing how manipulative she has become.



* GoForTheEye: Twilight vs Celestia, the de facto Sun Goddess. [[spoiler: Extra {{Irony}} in that Twilight renders said sun goddess BlindedByTheLight.]]

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* GoForTheEye: Twilight vs Celestia, the de facto Sun Goddess. [[spoiler: Extra {{Irony}} in that Twilight renders said sun goddess temporarily BlindedByTheLight.]]



* MotiveRant: [[spoiler:The Elemental Abstracts]] give a ''ton'' of these in ''Abundance''.

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* MotiveRant: [[spoiler:The Elemental Abstracts]] give a ''ton'' of these in ''Abundance''.''Abundance'', most notably [[spoiler:Loyalty]].
* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: [[spoiler:Rainbow Dash]] has one of these moments after breaking free of her possession in ''The Abundance.]]



** Twilight gives one to [[spoiler: Rainbow Dash]] in Chapter 8.

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** Twilight gives one to [[spoiler: Rainbow Dash]] in Chapter 8.8, [[spoiler:and again to her Abstract-Possessed self in ''The Abundance'', which leads to a HeelFaceTurn on Rainbow's part.]]


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** [[spoiler:The Abstract Loyalty]] has the ability to induce this in ''The Abundance.''

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* [[EtTuBrute Et Tu, Friends?]]: Twilight at the beginning sees herself as the victim of this when all her friends walk out on her for accusing Cadence as evil.

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* [[EtTuBrute Et Tu, Friends?]]: Twilight at the beginning sees herself as the victim of this when all her friends walk out on her for accusing Cadence as evil. Hammered home when she decides to embrace her dark powers and proves her friends how right she was.
** Twilight's parents felt this way when they (correctly) accuses Princess Celestia and the other Mane 6 for the way they treated their daughter.



* TheScrappy: Invoked. The author openly stated in the beginning that she considers Shining Armor getting away with his JerkAss behavior in part 1 of the season finale, even with the brainwashing, was an "injustice", and openly criticized [=DarkLink22=] for "going easy" on him in ''Post Nupitals''. She has since mellowed out, but its still evident Shining has a ''long'' way to go in her eyes.

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* TheScrappy: Invoked. The author openly stated in the beginning that she considers Shining Armor getting away with his JerkAss OutOfCharacter behavior in part 1 of the season finale, even with the brainwashing, was an "injustice", and openly criticized [=DarkLink22=] for "going easy" on him in ''Post Nupitals''. She has since mellowed out, but its still evident Shining has a ''long'' way to go in her eyes.



* WoobieDestroyerOfWorlds: Doubt, and he's attracted to Twilight because of this.

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* WoobieDestroyerOfWorlds: Doubt, and he's attracted to Twilight because of this.this.
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* BerserkButton: [[spoiler:Don't call the ''real'' Doubt crazy.]]
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* TheScrappy: Invoked. The author openly stated in the beginning that she considers Shining Armor getting away with his JerkAss behavior in part 1 of the season finale, even with the brainwashing, was an "injustice", and openly criticized [=DarkLink22=] for "going easy" on him in ''Post Nupitals''. She has since mellowed out, but its still evident Shining has a ''long'' way to go in her eyes.
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** By-the-by, said beat was "[[MichaelJackson Beat It]]".
** Let's see... Chapter 19 being titled "[[spoiler:[[MeaningfulName Not Today]]]]", River Song's "Everybody knows that everybody dies" speech being quoted in the beginning [[spoiler: and end]] of said chapter, Twilight quoting the Doctor's [[spoiler: "This is it! You and me, one last hurdle!"]] line... ...[[SarcasmMode Yeah, it maybe be just me, but I think the author liked]] "[[Recap/DoctorWhoNSS4E9ForestOfTheDead Forest of the Dead]]".

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** By-the-by, By the way, said beat was "[[MichaelJackson Beat It]]".
** Let's see... Chapter 19 is a big ShoutOut to ''Series/DoctorWho'', what with being titled "[[spoiler:[[MeaningfulName Not Today]]]]", River Song's "Everybody knows that everybody dies" speech being quoted in the beginning [[spoiler: and end]] of said chapter, and Twilight quoting the Doctor's [[spoiler: "This is it! You and me, one last hurdle!"]] line... ...[[SarcasmMode Yeah, it maybe be just me, but I think the line. The author liked]] must've liked "[[Recap/DoctorWhoNSS4E9ForestOfTheDead Forest of the Dead]]".

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Faith and Doubt is followed by ''FanFic/TheAbundance'', which deals with the aftermath of the first story and shows the dark side to harmony

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Faith and Doubt is followed by ''FanFic/TheAbundance'', ''The Abundance'', which deals with the aftermath of the first story and shows the dark side to harmony



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* TheChessMaster: Doubt can be seen as one, as he moves Twilight into the position of becoming an alicorn and giving him a physical alicorn form himself.
** [[spoiler: Faith, in Fanfic/TheAbundance, is even more of a chessmaster, manipulating characters to get his way. WordOfGod has stated the story is a massive chess came pitting Twilight and Faith against the first Doubt]]

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* TheChessMaster: TheChessmaster: Doubt can be seen as one, as he moves Twilight into the position of becoming an alicorn and giving him a physical alicorn form himself.
** [[spoiler: Faith, in Fanfic/TheAbundance, ''The Abundance'', is even more of a chessmaster, manipulating characters to get his way. WordOfGod has stated the story is a massive chess came pitting Twilight and Faith against the first Doubt]]



* MotiveRant: [[spoiler:The Elemental Abstracts]] give a ''ton'' of these in ''Abundance''.



* MotiveRant: [[spoiler:The Elemental Abstracts]] give a ''ton'' of these in ''Abundance''.

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