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** The side story ''Parallel Invesigations'' they are expected to be main characters along with the [[{{NCIS}} Gibbs's Team]], [[JackieChanAdventures Section 13]], and several OCs.
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** [[spoiler: The side story has [[{{NCIS}} Team Gibbs]], [[JackieChanAdventures Section 13, along with Uncle and Tohru]] among others investigating the cause and perpetrators.]]
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** [[spoiler: The side story has [[{{NCIS}} [[Series/{{NCIS}} Team Gibbs]], [[JackieChanAdventures Section 13, along with Uncle and Tohru]] among others investigating the cause and perpetrators.]]
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--->'''Yuuno''': "Well, as it turns out, the guard appointed to us thought that [[YoungerThanTheyLook Chrono]] was... cute."
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* CutenessProximity: Seeing as Negi is - despite all his power and maturity - a cute little boy, Lindy and Momoko both can't resist the urge to fawn over and cuddle him, with Nanoha worrying if some of the things her mother is doing are "illegal". And Negi isn't the only one; when Yuuno and Chrono went to the US and were seen as 'unaccompanied minors', the security guard appointed to watch over them was female, and...
--->'''Yuuno''': "Well, as it turns out, the guard appointed to us thought that [[YoungerThanTheyLook Chrono]] was... cute."
--->'''Chrono''': "Stupid bitch tried to [[MarshmallowHell smother me]]!"
--->'''Yuuno''': "Well, as it turns out, the guard appointed to us thought that [[YoungerThanTheyLook Chrono]] was... cute."
--->'''Chrono''': "Stupid bitch tried to [[MarshmallowHell smother me]]!"
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* DemonicPossession: [[spoiler:Happens to Fate in Chapter 28]].
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* MegaCrossover: Originally just between Nanoha and Negima. Now includes JackieChanAdventures, {{Persona}}, StarTrek, TenhiMuyo, TokyoMewMew and most likely more to come.
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* PutOnABus: Chrono and Yuuno are unceremoniously shipped out to New York City in order to study Earth mages. To date, they've been mentioned only three times.
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* PutOnABus: Chrono and Yuuno are unceremoniously shipped out to New York City in order to study Earth mages. To date, they've been mentioned only three times. [[spoiler: And then they go missing after an attack.]]
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* SecretKeeper: Arf acted as this to Chamo regarding Negi's mage status, Chamo being capable of speech, and of the existence of mages on Earth, until Chamo finally blew his cover.
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* SecretKeeper: Arf acted as this to Chamo regarding Negi's mage status, Chamo being capable of speech, and of the existence of mages on Earth, until Chamo finally blew his cover.cover (On purpose, mind you).
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** In Chapter 26, [[TokyoMewMew Zakuro Fujiwara]] is shown singing on a talkshow with [[VideoGame/Persona4 Rise Kujikawa]]
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* Foreshadowing: Fate's skin is icy cold when Admiral Graham meets her in the hallway, even though the ship itself is quite warm.
* FridgeBrilliance: None of the girls recognize the Universal Greeting. It actually sounds rather differently, though somewhat similarly, in Japanese.
* FridgeBrilliance: None of the girls recognize the Universal Greeting. It actually sounds rather differently, though somewhat similarly, in Japanese.
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* Foreshadowing: {{Foreshadowing}}: Fate's skin is icy cold when Admiral Graham meets her in the hallway, even though the ship itself is quite warm.
* FridgeBrilliance: None of the girls recognize the Universal Greeting. It actually sounds rather differently, though somewhat similarly, in Japanese.warm.
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* YouAreNotAlone: It's officially the author's favorite trope. Invoked verbatim by Signum to [[spoiler: Hayate after her MindRape]] and by [[spoiler:Negi when he rescues her from said Mind Rape.
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* YouAreNotAlone: It's officially the author's favorite trope. Invoked verbatim by Signum to [[spoiler: Hayate after her MindRape]] and by [[spoiler:Negi when he rescues her from said Mind Rape.]]
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** A recipient of a Midoriya cake delivery ended up being the [[Manga/Mitsudomoe Marui girls]].
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** Chapter 6 begins with a description of Hayate making breakfast for her knights, in which HilarityEnsues when she "punishes" Vita. It ends with [[spoiler: Hayate being {{Mind Rape}}d into thinking her knights are dead and the city is destroyed. Also contains a ShoutOut to TheLionKing.]]
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** Chapter 6 begins with a description of Hayate making breakfast for her knights, in which HilarityEnsues when she "punishes" Vita. It ends with [[spoiler: Hayate being {{Mind Rape}}d into thinking her knights are dead and the city is destroyed. Also contains a ShoutOut to TheLionKing.Disney/TheLionKing.]]
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** Chapter 6, [[spoiler:Hayate has just been mind raped into seeing everything she loves die. Her cries for help are the same ones Simba from TheLionKing shout, word-for-word, after Mufasa dies.]]
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** Chapter 6, [[spoiler:Hayate has just been mind raped into seeing everything she loves die. Her cries for help are the same ones Simba from TheLionKing Disney/TheLionKing shout, word-for-word, after Mufasa dies.]]
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** In Chapter 26, [[TokyoMewMew Zakuro Fujiwara]] is shown singing on a talkshow with [[VideoGamePersona4 Rise Kujikawa]]
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** The side story ''Parallel Invesigations'' they are expected to be main characters along with the [[{{NCIS}} Gibbs's Team]], [[JackieChanAdventures Section 13]], and two OCs.
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* Foreshadowing: Fate is icy cold when Admiral Graham meets her in the hallway, even though the ship itself is quite warm.
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* TakeThat: In Chapter 23, it's shown that the Library Club used to pick apart books, anime, and cartoons for inaccuracies in their magic systems. ''TheInheritanceCycle'' is said to have one of the worst.
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* TakeThat: In Chapter 23, it's shown that the Library Club used to pick apart books, anime, and cartoons for inaccuracies in their magic systems. ''TheInheritanceCycle'' ''Literature/InheritanceCycle'' is said to have one of the worst.
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** [[TheWorldEndsWithYou Joshua]] likes drinking coffee with Fate (Averruncus).
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** [[TheWorldEndsWithYou [[VideoGame/TheWorldEndsWithYou Joshua]] likes drinking coffee with Fate (Averruncus).
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* PutOnABus: Chrono and Yunno are unceremoniously shipped out to New York City in order to study Earth mages. To date, they've been mentioned only three times.
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* WhamEpisode: [[spoiler: Yunno and Chrono have been attacked in New York and the Asura can't do a thing about it]]
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* YouAreNotAlone: It's officially the author's favorite trope. Invoked verbatim by Signum to [[spoiler: Hayate after her MindRape]] and by [[spoiler:Negi when he rescues her from said Mind Rape.]]
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** The side story ''Parallel Invesigations'' they are expected to be main characters along with the [[NCIS Gibbs's Team]], [[JackieChanAdventures Section 13]], and two OCs.
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* [[Series/StarTrekTheNextGeneration Data]] tries to greet the girls with the [[WesternAnimation/TransformersTheMovie Universal Greeting]].
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*** Picard later shows up. Yes, he's the captain of a ship called ''Enterprise''. He even has a Data with him.
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* CuddleBug: Konoka's mother has a tendency to hug people when she meets them for the first time.
