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* TheFellowshipHasEnded: While they still bear the Elements of Harmony, the Mane Six have become quite distant in the 20-year TimeSkip since Luna's return. Specifically, the augmentation debate seems to have split them down the middle: On the pro-aug side, Twilight is running Sparkle Industries with Rarity as her secretary, and Pinkie Pie works for Sugarcube Corner Co., which now specializes in nutritional supplements for augs. On the other side, Applejack is implied to be running the anti-aug Apple Corps, Rainbow Dash is apparently one of AJ's supporters, and Fluttershy (who Twilight apparently hasn't seen in years) is an anti-aug activist.
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* TheFellowshipHasEnded: While they still bear the Elements of Harmony, the Mane Six have become quite distant in the 20-year TimeSkip since Luna's return. Specifically, the augmentation debate seems to have split them down the middle: middle:
** On the pro-augside, side:
*** Twilight is running SparkleIndustries with Industries.
*** Rarityas her secretary, and is Twilight's secretary.
*** Pinkie Pie works for Sugarcube Corner Co., which now specializes in nutritional supplements foraugs. augs.
** On theother side, anti-aug side:
*** Applejack isimplied to be running the an anti-aug organization called the Apple Corps, Corps.
*** Rainbow Dash is apparently one of AJ's supporters, and is likely her right-hoof mare (judging by how Colgate briefly compares RD's position to Rarity's).
*** Fluttershy(who Twilight apparently hasn't seen in years) is an anti-aug activist.
** On the pro-aug
*** Twilight is running Sparkle
*** Rarity
*** Pinkie Pie works for Sugarcube Corner Co., which now specializes in nutritional supplements for
** On the
*** Applejack is
*** Rainbow Dash is apparently one of AJ's supporters, and is likely her right-hoof mare (judging by how Colgate briefly compares RD's position to Rarity's).
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* CrapsaccharineWorld: Friendship may still be magic in Equestria, but after 20 years of unprecedented political change, a war, rapid technological advancement, and a population explosion, it's not the SugarBowl that it used to be.
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* CrapsaccharineWorld: Friendship may still be magic in Equestria, but after 20 years of unprecedented political change, a war, war with the griffons, rapid technological advancement, and a population explosion, it's not the SugarBowl that it used to be.
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* CrapsaccharineWorld: Friendship may still be magic in Equestria, but after 20 years of unprecedented political change, a war, rapid technological advancement, and a population explosion, it's not the SugarBowl that it used to be.
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* TheFellowshipHasEnded: While they still bear the Elements of Harmony, the Mane Six have become quite distant in the 20-year TimeSkip since Luna's return. Specifically, the augmentation debate seems to have split them down the middle: On the pro-aug side, Twilight is running Sparkle Industries with Rarity as her secretary, and Pinkie Pie works for Sugarcube Corner Co., which now specializes in nutritional supplements for augs. On the other side, Applejack is implied to be running the anti-aug Apple Corps, and Fluttershy (who Twilight apparently hasn't seen in years) is an anti-aug activist. Rainbow Dash is unaccounted for thus far.
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* TheFellowshipHasEnded: While they still bear the Elements of Harmony, the Mane Six have become quite distant in the 20-year TimeSkip since Luna's return. Specifically, the augmentation debate seems to have split them down the middle: On the pro-aug side, Twilight is running Sparkle Industries with Rarity as her secretary, and Pinkie Pie works for Sugarcube Corner Co., which now specializes in nutritional supplements for augs. On the other side, Applejack is implied to be running the anti-aug Apple Corps, Rainbow Dash is apparently one of AJ's supporters, and Fluttershy (who Twilight apparently hasn't seen in years) is an anti-aug activist. Rainbow Dash is unaccounted for thus far.
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* GreatOffscreenWar: A war with the griffon nation took place during the 20-year TimeSkip, during which the augmentation movement began.
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* [[WeCanRebuildHim We Can Rebuild Her]]: You can see the pattern by this point.
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* [[WeCanRebuildHim We Can Rebuild Her]]: You can see Just like Adam Jensen, Bon Bon is outfitted with all manner of augments after being nearly killed. Notably, those augments included a prototype unicorn horn aug, effectively changing her race. Even the pattern by this narration refers to her as a unicorn and not an earth pony after that point.
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A {{Crossover}} between ''VideoGame/DeusExHumanRevolution'' and ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' by [[http://www.fimfiction.net/user/Melon%20Hunter Melon Hunter]].
The world is in flux; new ideals, groups and technologies permeate every level of society in this age of discovery. The field of augmentation has allowed ponies to improve themselves in ways that were unthinkable a generation ago. Yet, for every benefit, there is an inverse. A griffon civil war rages on the borders, feeding the profits of mercenary companies. Rising populations have forced the rich and poor ever further apart. Harmony is dying. Mortally wounded after a fatal attack on her laboratory, an earth pony researcher is augmented against her will and sent out into a chaotic world in search of answers. But as her quest unravels this chain of events, she discovers an ancient conspiracy that will shake Equestria to its very core. Found [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/20987/Deus-Ex%3A-Equine-Revolution here]]
The world is in flux; new ideals, groups and technologies permeate every level of society in this age of discovery. The field of augmentation has allowed ponies to improve themselves in ways that were unthinkable a generation ago. Yet, for every benefit, there is an inverse. A griffon civil war rages on the borders, feeding the profits of mercenary companies. Rising populations have forced the rich and poor ever further apart. Harmony is dying. Mortally wounded after a fatal attack on her laboratory, an earth pony researcher is augmented against her will and sent out into a chaotic world in search of answers. But as her quest unravels this chain of events, she discovers an ancient conspiracy that will shake Equestria to its very core. Found [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/20987/Deus-Ex%3A-Equine-Revolution here]]
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The world is in flux; new ideals, groups and technologies permeate every level of society in this age of discovery. The field of augmentation has allowed ponies to improve themselves in ways that were unthinkable a generation ago. Yet, for every benefit, there is an inverse. A griffon civil war rages on the borders, feeding the profits of mercenary companies. Rising populations have forced the rich and poor ever further apart. Harmony is dying. Mortally wounded after a fatal attack on her laboratory, an earth pony researcher is augmented against her will and sent out into a chaotic world in search of answers. But as her quest unravels this chain of events, she discovers an ancient conspiracy that will shake Equestria to its very
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* AbdicateTheThrone: At some point during the TimeSkip, Twilight Sparkle renounced her status as princess in order to run her aug company.
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In chapter 8 (or chapter 7, if you don\'t count the prologue), there were several key lines of exposition that canonized season 3.
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* FusionFic: We're still in Equestria, and everything that happened in ''Friendship is Magic'' (up to about the end of season 2) is canon, but the setting has gained the trappings of ''Human Revolution'', and follows a very similar (though not identical) story. As seen in the Expy example above, the characters from the show also parallel ''Human Revolution'''s characters.
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* FusionFic: We're still in Equestria, and everything that happened in ''Friendship is Magic'' (up to about and including the end of season 2) 3) is canon, but the setting has gained the trappings of ''Human Revolution'', and follows a very similar (though not identical) story. As seen in the Expy example above, the characters from the show also parallel ''Human Revolution'''s characters.
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* ArtificialLimbs: All four of Bon Bon's legs, her eyes, and some internal organs. Twilight has an old-fashioned (magically animated) wooden foreleg.
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* ArtificialLimbs: Very common given the setting.
** All four of Bon Bon's legs, her eyes, and some internalorgans. organs.
** Twilight has an old-fashioned (magically animated) woodenforeleg.foreleg.
** Trixie has a glass eye that she enchanted with a scrying spell after she rejected an aug eye.
** All four of Bon Bon's legs, her eyes, and some internal
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** Trixie has a glass eye that she enchanted with a scrying spell after she rejected an aug eye.
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A {{Crossover}} between VideoGame/DeusExHumanRevolution and MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic by [[http://www.fimfiction.net/user/Melon%20Hunter Melon Hunter]].
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A {{Crossover}} between VideoGame/DeusExHumanRevolution ''VideoGame/DeusExHumanRevolution'' and MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' by [[http://www.fimfiction.net/user/Melon%20Hunter Melon Hunter]].
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* ContinuityNod: Several times to earlier events in FriendshipIsMagic. One of the more prominent examples so far is when Bon Bon and Twilight discuss the appearance of an enemy agent dressed as [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS2E8TheMysteriousMareDoWell Mare Do Well]]. The events and moral of the episode are touched upon, and there's even a [[SincerityMode very classy and well-used]] reference to the episode's more controversial elements.
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* ContinuityNod: Several times to earlier events in FriendshipIsMagic.''Friendship is Magic''. One of the more prominent examples so far is when Bon Bon and Twilight discuss the appearance of an enemy agent dressed as [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS2E8TheMysteriousMareDoWell Mare Do Well]]. The events and moral of the episode are touched upon, and there's even a [[SincerityMode very classy and well-used]] reference to the episode's more controversial elements.
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* FusionFic: We're still in Equestria, and everything that happened in FriendshipIsMagic ''Friendship is Magic'' (up to about the end of season 2) is canon, but the setting has gained the trappings of ''Human Revolution'', and follows a very similar (though not identical) story. As seen in the Expy example above, the characters from the show also parallel ''Human Revolution'''s characters.
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* WhateverMancy: Neuromancy, the stand-in for [[VideoGame/DeusExHumanRevolution Neuropozyne]] and possibly a shout out to [[{{Neuromancer}} William Gibson]]
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* WhateverMancy: Neuromancy, the stand-in for [[VideoGame/DeusExHumanRevolution Neuropozyne]] and possibly a shout out to [[{{Neuromancer}} William Gibson]]Gibson]].
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* FusionFic: We're still in Equestria, but the setting now has the trappings of ''Human Revolution'', and follows a very similar (though not identical) story. As seen in the Expy example above, the characters from the show also parallel the ''Human Revolution'' characters.
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* FusionFic: We're still in Equestria, and everything that happened in FriendshipIsMagic (up to about the end of season 2) is canon, but the setting now has gained the trappings of ''Human Revolution'', and follows a very similar (though not identical) story. As seen in the Expy example above, the characters from the show also parallel the ''Human Revolution'' Revolution'''s characters.
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* CrapsaccharineWorld: Friendship may still be magic in Equestria, but after 20 years of unprecedented political change, rapid technological advancement, and a population explosion, it's not the SugarBowl that it used to be.
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* BadassLongcoat: To cover up her Augs
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* BadassLongcoat: To Bon Bon, to cover up her Augs
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* FusionFic: We're still in Equestria, but the setting now has the trappings of ''Human Revolution'', and follows a very similar (though not identical) story. As seen in the Expy example above, the characters from the show also parallel the ''Human Revolution'' characters.
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* ContinuityNod: Several times to earlier events in FriendshipIsMagic. One of the more prominent examples so far is when Bon Bon and Twilight discuss the appearance of an enemy agent dressed as [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS2E8TheMysteriousMareDoWell Mare Do Well]]. The events and moral of the episode are discussed, and there's even a [[SincerityMode very classy and well-used]] reference to the episode's more controversial elements.
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* ContinuityNod: Several times to earlier events in FriendshipIsMagic. One of the more prominent examples so far is when Bon Bon and Twilight discuss the appearance of an enemy agent dressed as [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS2E8TheMysteriousMareDoWell Mare Do Well]]. The events and moral of the episode are discussed, touched upon, and there's even a [[SincerityMode very classy and well-used]] reference to the episode's more controversial elements.
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* ContinuityNod: Several times to earlier events in FriendshipIsMagic. One of the more prominent examples so far is when Bon Bon and Twilight discuss the appearance of an enemy agent dressed as [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS2E8TheMysteriousMareDoWell Mare Do Well]]. The events and moral of the episode are discussed, and there's even a [[SincerityMode very classy and well-used]] reference to the episode's more controversial elements.
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* FusionFic: We're still in Equestria, but the setting now has the trappings of ''Human Revolution'', and follows a similar (though not identical) story. As seen in the Expy example above, the characters from the show also parallel the ''Human Revolution'' characters.
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A {{Crossover}} between VideoGame/DeusExHumanRevolution MyLittlePony crossover.and MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic by [[http://www.fimfiction.net/user/Melon%20Hunter Melon Hunter]].
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!!This fanfic contains examples of:
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* TheFellowshipHasEnded: While they still bear the Elements of Harmony, the Mane Six have become quite distant in the 20-year TimeSkip since Luna's return. Specifically, the augmentation debate seems to have split them down the middle: On the pro-aug side, Twilight is running Sparkle Industries with Rarity as her secretary, and Pinkie Pie works for Sugarcube Corner Co., which now specializes in nutritional supplements for augs. On the other side, Applejack is implied to be running the anti-aug Apple Corps, and Fluttershy (who Twilight apparently hasn't seen in years) is an anti-aug activist. Rainbow Dash is unaccounted for thus far.
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* TimeSkip: The story takes place 20 years after Nightmare Moon's defeat and the return of Princess Luna.
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* WhateverMancy: Neuromancy, the stand-in for [[DeusExHumanRevolution Neuropozyne]] and possibly a shout out to [[{{Neuromancer}} William Gibson]]
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* WhateverMancy: Neuromancy, the stand-in for [[DeusExHumanRevolution [[VideoGame/DeusExHumanRevolution Neuropozyne]] and possibly a shout out to [[{{Neuromancer}} William Gibson]]
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DeusExHumanRevolution/MyLittlePony crossover.
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DeusExHumanRevolution/MyLittlePony crossover.
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* MedievalStasis: Said to have been the case before Luna's return.
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* TechnicalPacifist: Bon bon seems to be going for the "pacifist" achievement.
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[[caption-width-right:208:She never asked for this.]]
[[caption-width-right:208:She never asked for this.]]
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* {{Expy}}: In the same fashion as FalloutEquestria, here MLP characters assume the general role of Human Revolution characters.
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* {{Expy}}: In the same fashion as FalloutEquestria, here MLP characters loosely assume the general role of Human Revolution characters.
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* Expy: In the same fashion as FalloutEquestria, here MLP characters assume the general role of Human Revolution characters.
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* Expy: {{Expy}}: In the same fashion as FalloutEquestria, here MLP characters assume the general role of Human Revolution characters.
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* Expy: In the same fashion as FalloutEquestria, here MLP characters assume the general role of Human Revolution characters.
**Bon Bon to Adam Jensen
**Lyra to Megan Reed
**Colgate to Francis Pritchard
**Twilight Sparkle to David Sarif
**Rarity to Athene Margoulis
**Applejack to William Taggart
**Luna to Hugh Darrow
**An unknown mare to Robert Page
**Bon Bon to Adam Jensen
**Lyra to Megan Reed
**Colgate to Francis Pritchard
**Twilight Sparkle to David Sarif
**Rarity to Athene Margoulis
**Applejack to William Taggart
**Luna to Hugh Darrow
**An unknown mare to Robert Page
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* [[WeCanRebuildHim We Can Rebuild Her]]: You can see the pattern by this point.
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* [[WeCanRebuildHim We Can Rebuild Her]]: You can see the pattern by this point.point.
* WhateverMancy: Neuromancy, the stand-in for [[DeusExHumanRevolution Neuropozyne]] and possibly a shout out to [[{{Neuromancer}} William Gibson]]
* WhateverMancy: Neuromancy, the stand-in for [[DeusExHumanRevolution Neuropozyne]] and possibly a shout out to [[{{Neuromancer}} William Gibson]]
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The world is in flux; new ideals, groups and technologies permeate every level of society in this age of discovery. The field of augmentation has allowed ponies to improve themselves in ways that were unthinkable a generation ago. Yet, for every benefit, there is an inverse. A griffon civil war rages on the borders, feeding the profits of mercenary companies. Rising populations have forced the rich and poor ever further apart. Harmony is dying. Mortally wounded after a fatal attack on her laboratory, an earth pony researcher is augmented against her will and sent out into a chaotic world in search of answers. But as her quest unravels this chain of events, she discovers an ancient conspiracy that will shake Equestria to its very core. Found [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/20987/Deus-Ex%3A-Equine-Revolution here]]
* ArtificialLimbs: All four of Bon Bon's legs, her eyes, and some internal organs. Twilight has an old-fashioned (magically animated) wooden foreleg.
* BadassLongcoat: To cover up her Augs
* ElectronicTelepathy: Technically it's actual telepathy, but it still requires an implant to use.
* {{Magitek}}: Augs, powered by "neuromancy".
* SunglassesAtNight: A foal asks Bon Bon why she's wearing sunglasses indoors and early in the morning.
* [[WeCanRebuildHim We Can Rebuild Her]]: You can see the pattern by this point.
* ArtificialLimbs: All four of Bon Bon's legs, her eyes, and some internal organs. Twilight has an old-fashioned (magically animated) wooden foreleg.
* BadassLongcoat: To cover up her Augs
* ElectronicTelepathy: Technically it's actual telepathy, but it still requires an implant to use.
* {{Magitek}}: Augs, powered by "neuromancy".
* SunglassesAtNight: A foal asks Bon Bon why she's wearing sunglasses indoors and early in the morning.
* [[WeCanRebuildHim We Can Rebuild Her]]: You can see the pattern by this point.