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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5661129/1/Cutting_Loose Cutting Loose]]'' is a ForWantOfANail ''Manga/{{Naruto}}'' Fanfic written by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1623010/Chengar_Qordath Chengar Qordath]], although it seems to be on hiatus as it hasn't been updated since October 2011. The basic premise revolves around Naruto becoming friends with Tenten while still at the Academy, and ultimately graduating a year earlier than he did in canon and joining Team Gai in Neji's place.
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5661129/1/Cutting_Loose Cutting Loose]]'' is a ForWantOfANail ''Manga/{{Naruto}}'' Fanfic written by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1623010/Chengar_Qordath Chengar Qordath]], although it seems to be on hiatus as [[DeadFic it hasn't been updated since October 2011.2011]]. The basic premise revolves around Naruto becoming friends with Tenten while still at the Academy, and ultimately graduating a year earlier than he did in canon and joining Team Gai in Neji's place.
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* TheGenericGuy: Masaru's the most ordinary character in the story so far, hands down. [[TropesAreNotBad It's handled rather well, though]].
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* TheGenericGuy: Masaru's the most ordinary character in the story so far, hands down. [[TropesAreNotBad [[Administrivia/TropesAreTools It's handled rather well, though]].
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* [[spoiler:DyingAsYourself]]: [[spoiler:Yagura]]
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* [[spoiler:DyingAsYourself]]: DyingAsYourself: [[spoiler:Yagura]]
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* BeautyIsNeverTarnished: Averted. The first time Maeko is seen after becoming a genin, she has a nasty scar on her face.
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* TooDumbToLive: Maeko frequently shoots her mouth or does stupid things which are liable to get her killed, such as refusing to increase her skills in areas she's actually ''good at'', out of some sense of self-entitlement and {{Pride}}. It takes [[TheReasonYouSuckSpeech Masaru viciously chewing her out]] [[spoiler: after Neji almost dies saving her]] for her to finally recognise this, and even now she's going to need time to grow out of it.
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* TooDumbToLive: Maeko frequently shoots her mouth or does stupid things which are liable to get her killed, such as talking smack about the Kazekage ''while in Suna'' or refusing to increase her skills in areas she's actually ''good at'', out of some sense of self-entitlement and {{Pride}}. It takes [[TheReasonYouSuckSpeech Masaru viciously chewing her out]] [[spoiler: after Neji almost dies saving her]] for her to finally recognise this, and even now she's going to need time to grow out of it.
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* CurbStompBattle: Naruto vs Sasuke after the latter insists the former use Kyuubi's chakra. Naruto takes him out before Sasuke even finishes his sentence.
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* DisabilityImmunity: Due to Saki's partially melted knees, she's in too much pain for genjutsu to take hold.
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* BrokenPedestal: Naruto initially looked up to Yagura for being a jinchuuriki who reached the rank of kage. Then he learned what the man's been up to.
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* SelectiveObliviousness: Naruto blatantly ignores any rumors or reports about the Bloody Mist, claiming it's due to prejudice against jinchuuriki. Unfortunately for him, he learns that it's all true after finding a Kiri team on an official mission to wipe out a village.
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* ScareEmStraight: When Tenten and Lee follow Naruto on a mission they're not authorized for, the Jounin explain that legally they're now rogue ninja and as they know, the punishment for such is summary execution. They're sent back to Konoha as a "show of leniency" and Kurenai remarks the two will probably be on punishment duty for a few months.
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* DontAskJustRun: In her apology letter, Yugito tells Naruto to simply flee if he ever sees someone wearing a black robe with red clouds on it.
