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* ContrivedCoincidence: See TheStationsOfTheCanon on this page.
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* ContrivedCoincidence: The circumstances which cause Suzaku to pilot the Lancelot. See TheStationsOfTheCanon on this page.TheStationsOfTheCanon.
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* GunsAkimbo: Darlton uses this with ''machine guns'' in Ch.26 to invoke [[MoreDakka More Dakka]].
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* GunsAkimbo: Darlton uses this with ''machine guns'' in Ch.26 to invoke [[MoreDakka More Dakka]].
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* [[KnightTemplarBigBrother Knight Templar Big Sister]]: When Lelouch's is presumed missing or dead after his transportation is shot down, Cornelia launches a sudden attack that [[NiceJobBreakingItHero has diplomatic reprecussions]]. She is then seen torturing a prisoner to get information on Lelouch's possible whereabouts...when it's clear the prisoner knows nothing. The whole time she's in a TranquilFury.
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** And he seems to be returning the favor.
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* ForegoneConclusion: To a point. Many of the {{Fictional Document}}s are from decades in the future, and show that Lelouch (as the Black Prince) is both considered historically relevant and a inspiration for fiction. They also suggest that a lot of the things that went on "behind the scenes" in the present have become public knowledge. (For example, the trashy romance novel actually implies that in the future, everyone knows about Kallen's [[YourTerroristsAreOurFreedomFighters terrorist/rebellion]] activities). On the other hand, they give the implication that Lelouch [[DoomedByCanon is not alive when those documents were written]], with the earliest future document being from 2026. It is of course possible that we are only supposed to ''[[[[RedHerring think]]'' that.
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* ForegoneConclusion: To a point. Many of the {{Fictional Document}}s are from decades in the future, and show that Lelouch (as the Black Prince) is both considered historically relevant and a inspiration for fiction. They also suggest that a lot of the things that went on "behind the scenes" in the present have become public knowledge. (For example, the trashy romance novel actually implies that in the future, everyone knows about Kallen's [[YourTerroristsAreOurFreedomFighters terrorist/rebellion]] activities). On the other hand, they give the implication that Lelouch [[DoomedByCanon is not alive when those documents were written]], with the earliest future document being from 2026. It is of course possible that we are only supposed to ''[[[[RedHerring ''[[RedHerring think]]'' that.
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* OCStandIn: ''Several''. The two that come to mind are Darlton's adopted son Claudio, and Kewell's sister Marika, but many other characters overlooked by canon have expanded roles; [[AscendedExtra even established characters are given more history and backstory]]. [[TropesAreNotBad And the story is better for it]].
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* OCStandIn: ''Several''. The two that come to mind are Darlton's adopted son Claudio, and Kewell's sister Marika, but many other characters overlooked by canon have expanded roles; [[AscendedExtra even established characters are given more history and backstory]]. [[TropesAreNotBad And the story fanfic is better for it]].
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* ForegoneConclusion: To a point. Many of the FictionalDocuments are from decades in the future, and show that Lelouch (as the Black Prince) is both considered historically relevant and a inspiration for fiction. They suggest that a lot of the things that went on "behind the scenes" in the present have become public knowledge. (For example, the trashy romance novel actually implies that in the future, everyone knows about Kallen's [[YourTerroristsAreOurFreedomFighters terrorist/rebellion]] activities). On the other hand, they give the implication that Lelouch is not alive when those documents were written. The earliest future document is from 2026. [[DoomedByCanon Do the math]].
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* ForegoneConclusion: To a point. Many of the FictionalDocuments {{Fictional Document}}s are from decades in the future, and show that Lelouch (as the Black Prince) is both considered historically relevant and a inspiration for fiction. They also suggest that a lot of the things that went on "behind the scenes" in the present have become public knowledge. (For example, the trashy romance novel actually implies that in the future, everyone knows about Kallen's [[YourTerroristsAreOurFreedomFighters terrorist/rebellion]] activities). On the other hand, they give the implication that Lelouch [[DoomedByCanon is not alive when those documents were written. The written]], with the earliest future document is being from 2026. [[DoomedByCanon Do the math]].It is of course possible that we are only supposed to ''[[[[RedHerring think]]'' that.
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** At this point its safe to say that a good portion of the cast are {{Ascended Extra}}s and {{OC Stand In}}s. On the other hand,this might change as [[SpotlightStealingSquad more characters from the canon storyline show up]].
* FalseFlagOperation: Played with: Lelouch has Jeremiah steal supplies from his jealous superiors using captured Panzer Hummels, who are then "driven off" by Black Knights reinforcements.
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* TheStationsOfTheCanon: Seems to be played with. WordOfGod has stated that Lelouch in this fic arrives in Japan at about the same time as the actual series begins (thus potentially setting him up to encounter C.C.), while Suzaku still manages FallingIntoTheCockpit of the SuperPrototype, albeit in different fashion. However, the ramifications of these events may prove to [[OffTheRails have a different result]].
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** One of the guests at Clovis' party is San Francisco 49ers quarterback [[Eyeshield21 Shin Seijuro]].
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* OCStandIn: ''Several''. The two that come to mind are Darlton's adopted son Claudio, and Kewell's sister Marika, but many other characters overlooked by canon have expanded roles; [[AscendedExtra even established characters are given more history and backstory]]. [[TropesAreNotBad And the story is better for it]].
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--->"[[WordOfGod Milner is not an original character,]] just a name I came up with for the [[{{Mook}} leader of Clovis' elite guards who Lelouch commands to die]] [[BeyondTheImpossible at the end of episode one]]".
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* ReasonableAuthorityFigure: Ironically, Clovis seems to come off as this for Area Eleven. The rest of the imperial family members related to Lelouch (and Lelouch himself) are also seen this way.
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* YouAreNotAlone: As an indication of how different the timeline is compared to canon, Cornelia and Euphemia are there to comfort Lelouch after Marianne's funeral. As time passes, we also see that Schneizel, Clovis and Cornelia's generals (who may as well be family) are solidly with Lelouch and actively help him whenever they can.
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* PapaWolf: You kill children and Darlton will fuck you up.
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** Several 40-something women hit on Lelouch repeatedly.
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** Kewel [[spoiler: singlehandedly stops the enemy advance and took out dozens more enemies by ordering fire to be drawn to him]].
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** One of the history info dumps ends up being a cram guide for an AP test.
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*** [[spoiler: Jeremiah is so emotional he pukes in disgust moments after leaving the room. He has a little sister.]]
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* AscendedMeme: Whole heartedly embraces Jeremiah's Orange-kun nick name. His family even grows oranges.
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* FourStarBadass: Darlton. [[XJustX Just]]...Darlton.
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* ContinuityNod: The PowerArmor Darlton uses in chapter 26 has a heavily-muscled frame and an overall design scheme similar to [[NightmareOfNunnally MasterAsia!Zero]].
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* HumanShield: Attempted. [[EpicFail Fails MASSIVELY]] in the face of Darlton's MoreDakka.
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*** Isn't it more the Pilgrim's Progress?
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* WildTeenParty: Jeremiah reminisces about one of these after [[spoiler: Kewell dies]], even [[LampshadeHanging noting]] that it was "just like the movies".
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* WildTeenParty: Jeremiah reminisces about one of these after [[spoiler: Kewell dies]], even [[LampshadeHanging noting]] that it was "just like the movies".movies".
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* {{Tsundere}}: Kallen, even more so than in canon, since she's caught between hatred of smug Brittanian royalty, grudging respect for him, and the uncomfortable fact that he's [[EstrogenBrigadeBait really, really hot]].
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* WhatDoYouMeanItsNotAwesome: Lelouch uses his strategic genius... to help the Army beat the Navy at football.
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* WhatDoYouMeanItsNotAwesome: Lelouch uses his strategic genius... to help the Army beat the Navy at football. And make lots of money betting on it.
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** Kallen's... poorly-planned... kidnapping/assassination attempt on Lulu. It hadn't occurred to her that [[spoiler:if you sneak up on someone in the shower, they will, in fact, be naked]].
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**One of Clovis' favorite quotes is [[SpiderMan "with great mojo comes great responsibility"]]
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**Diethard's co-anchor is named [[FamilyGuy Diane]].
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*FreudianExcuse: Chapter 23 implied Nina's racism stems from [[spoiler: her getting raped]].
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*BatheHerAndBringHerToMe: The beginning of chapter 23.
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* Shipping: Has broken out among reviewers, aided by the major changes to character relationships, with comments having been made supporting canon pairings ([[WillTheyOrWontThey Lelouch/Kallen]]), semi-canon ones ([[VictoriousChildhoodFriend Lelouch/Milly]]) and non-canon ones ([[RescueRomance Lelouch/Nina]], [[SubordinateExcuse Lelouch/Villetta]]), as well as the ever-popular [[TenchiSolution Lelouch/harem]].
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* Shipping: {{Shipping}}: Has broken out among reviewers, aided by the major changes to character relationships, with comments having been made supporting canon pairings ([[WillTheyOrWontThey Lelouch/Kallen]]), semi-canon ones ([[VictoriousChildhoodFriend Lelouch/Milly]]) and non-canon ones ([[RescueRomance Lelouch/Nina]], [[SubordinateExcuse Lelouch/Villetta]]), as well as the ever-popular [[TenchiSolution Lelouch/harem]].
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* Shipping: Has broken out among reviewers, aided by the major changes to character relationships, with comments having been made supporting canon pairings ([[WhenAJerkLovesATsundere ([[WillTheyOrWontThey Lelouch/Kallen]]), semi-canon ones ([[VictoriousChildhoodFriend Lelouch/Milly]]) and non-canon ones ([[RescueRomance Lelouch/Nina]], [[SubordinateExcuse Lelouch/Villetta]]), as well as the ever-popular [[TenchiSolution Lelouch/harem]].
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** The Zero battlesuit used in Chapter 26 has a number of features - radar in the helmet, slash harken grappling hooks, cape that stiffens to become a glider - evocative of a [[TheDarkKnightSaga certain movie series]] featuring a [[CrazyPrepared Crazy Prepared]] [[Batman hero]].
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** The Zero battlesuit used in Chapter 26 has a number of features - radar in the helmet, slash harken grappling hooks, cape that stiffens to become a glider - evocative of a [[TheDarkKnightSaga certain movie series]] featuring a [[CrazyPrepared Crazy Prepared]] [[Batman [[{{Batman}} hero]].
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***Hell, the whole chapter 26 is a shout out to ''The Dark Knight''.
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**Episode 26.
-->''Lesson 3: When using a human shield, grab a fat guy''.
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