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The story picks up where the single-player campaign of ''Portal 2'' ends, with Chell on the surface wondering what comes next and SelfDemonstrating/{{GLaDOS}} prepping Atlas and P-Body for co-op testing. Unfortunately, a malfunctioning portal gun (which Wheatley had previously "repaired" with [[DuctTapeForEverything duct tape]]) creates an "uber-portal" that pulls the entire Enrichment Center, Chell included, into another dimension... namely, Equestria.
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The story picks up where the single-player campaign of ''Portal 2'' ''VideoGame/{{Portal 2}}'' ends, with Chell on the surface wondering what comes next and SelfDemonstrating/{{GLaDOS}} prepping Atlas and P-Body for co-op testing. Unfortunately, a malfunctioning portal gun (which Wheatley had previously "repaired" with [[DuctTapeForEverything duct tape]]) creates an "uber-portal" that pulls the entire Enrichment Center, Chell included, into another dimension... namely, Equestria.
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* ShoutOut: When [=GLaDOS=] was giving Pinkie Pie her BreakTheCutie moment, she states that the only reason her friends were there was because they were worried she is only a few steps away from becoming a serial killer. One who bakes her victims into FanFic/{{Cupcakes}}.
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* ShoutOut: When [=GLaDOS=] was giving Pinkie Pie her BreakTheCutie moment, she states that the only reason her friends were there was because they were worried she is only a few steps away from becoming a serial killer. One who bakes her victims into FanFic/{{Cupcakes}}.FanFic/{{cupcakes}}.
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* BreakTheCutie: [=GLaDOS=] manages to do this to most of the main cast.
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* BreakTheCutie: [=GLaDOS=] manages to do does this to most of the main cast.cast.
* BreakingSpeech: [=GLaDOS=] uses her brain-scanning technology to pick up on the ponies' insecurities (such as Rainbow Dash's fear of failure, Rarity's obession with her appearance, and Pinkie Pie's fears of being abandoned by her friends) and prey on them, in the name of "psychological stress-testing".
* BreakingSpeech: [=GLaDOS=] uses her brain-scanning technology to pick up on the ponies' insecurities (such as Rainbow Dash's fear of failure, Rarity's obession with her appearance, and Pinkie Pie's fears of being abandoned by her friends) and prey on them, in the name of "psychological stress-testing".
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* HannibalLecture: [=GLaDOS=] uses her brain-scanning technology to pick up on the ponies' insecurities (such as Rainbow Dash's fear of failure, Rarity's obession with her appearance, and Pinkie Pie's fears of being abandoned by her friends) and prey on them, in the name of "psychological stress-testing".
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* WhenLifeGivesYouLemons:
-->'''[=GLaDOS=]''': Life has been giving me lemons... and by letting you go I tried to make lemonade. A simple, sweet answer. Now... now I’m going to take life’s lemons, turn them into combustible lemons, and then burn you alive with them. Just like Cave Johnson would do... now that was a smart human.”
-->'''[=GLaDOS=]''': Life has been giving me lemons... and by letting you go I tried to make lemonade. A simple, sweet answer. Now... now I’m going to take life’s lemons, turn them into combustible lemons, and then burn you alive with them. Just like Cave Johnson would do... now that was a smart human.”
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-->'''[=GLaDOS=]''': Life has been giving me lemons... and by letting you go I tried to make lemonade. A simple, sweet answer. Now... now I’m going to take life’s lemons, turn them into combustible lemons, and then burn you alive with them. Just like Cave Johnson would do... now that was a smart human.”
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-->'''GLaDOS''': Life has been giving me lemons... and by letting you go I tried to make lemonade. A simple, sweet answer. Now... now I’m going to take life’s lemons, turn them into combustible lemons, and then burn you alive with them. Just like Cave Johnson would do... now that was a smart human.”
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-->'''GLaDOS''': Life has been giving me lemons... and by letting you go I tried to make lemonade. A simple, sweet answer. Now... now I’m going to take life’s lemons, turn them into combustible lemons, and then burn you alive with them. Just like Cave Johnson would do... now that was a smart human.”
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It can be read [[http://www.equestriadaily.com/2011/05/story-better-living-through-science-and.html here]].
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It can be read [[http://www.equestriadaily.com/2011/05/story-better-living-through-science-and.html here]].
here]] (EQ Daily) and [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/22535/Better-Living-Through-Science-and-Ponies here]] (FIM Fiction).
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-->"Wa..war....warning. Warning, destination universe imposing critical changes to basic structure of both organic and inorganic systems. Changes occurring primarily in hardware, minor changes detected in data... physical change is resulting in... oh you’ve GOT to be kidding me."
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*WaxingLyrical: [[spoiler:[=GLaDOS=]' final lines are a variation of her "Still Alive" song.]]
*YouAreFat: Given who's doing the taunt, this was a gimmie. Amusingly, [[spoiler:Celestia turns this back on her, it seems to stick later. When [=GLaDOS=] reveals her WingedUnicorn battle body, Chell thinks it looks thin to be somewhat anorexic.]]
*YouAreFat: Given who's doing the taunt, this was a gimmie. Amusingly, [[spoiler:Celestia turns this back on her, it seems to stick later. When [=GLaDOS=] reveals her WingedUnicorn battle body, Chell thinks it looks thin to be somewhat anorexic.]]
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* GravitySucks: Possible example at the end where [[spoiler: Caroline causes a black hole to form and destroys the facility]]
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* GravitySucks: Possible example at the end where [[spoiler: Caroline causes a black hole to form and destroys the facility]]facility.]]
* IFellForHours: When the facility first gets sucked in, Atlas and P-Body spend long enough in freefall that they eventually stop panicking and just wait it out.
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* NoodleImplements: You never find out what [=GLaDOS=] did or said to Luna.
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* NoodleImplements: You never find out what [=GLaDOS=] did or said to Luna. Luna.
* OffscreenMomentOfAwesome: We don't get to see the Mane Six free the other ponies or take down the turrents or neurotoxin generators.
* OffscreenMomentOfAwesome: We don't get to see the Mane Six free the other ponies or take down the turrents or neurotoxin generators.
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* ReasonYouSuckSpeech: In a side story, [[{{Troll}} Celestia]] has a nice friendly chat with [[MyNameIsNotDurwood Gladys.]]
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* ReasonYouSuckSpeech: TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: In a side story, [[{{Troll}} Celestia]] has a nice friendly chat with [[MyNameIsNotDurwood Gladys.]]
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The story picks up where the single-player campaign of ''Portal 2'' ends, with Chell on the surface wondering what comes next and [=GLaDOS=] prepping Atlas and P-Body for co-op testing. Unfortunately, a malfunctioning portal gun (which Wheatley had previously "repaired" with [[DuctTapeForEverything duct tape]]) creates an "uber-portal" that pulls the entire Enrichment Center, Chell included, into another dimension... namely, Equestria.
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The story picks up where the single-player campaign of ''Portal 2'' ends, with Chell on the surface wondering what comes next and [=GLaDOS=] SelfDemonstrating/{{GLaDOS}} prepping Atlas and P-Body for co-op testing. Unfortunately, a malfunctioning portal gun (which Wheatley had previously "repaired" with [[DuctTapeForEverything duct tape]]) creates an "uber-portal" that pulls the entire Enrichment Center, Chell included, into another dimension... namely, Equestria.
* AirVentPassageway: Chell uses some vents to get back inside the Enrichment Center. Justified in that her small pony body fits better.
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* FisherKingdom: ANYTHING that is sufficiently intelligent is turned into a pony upon entering Equestria, even GLaDOS, Atlas and P-Body, who aren't human-like at all.
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* FisherKingdom: ANYTHING that is sufficiently intelligent is turned into a pony upon entering Equestria, even GLaDOS, [=GLaDOS=], Atlas and P-Body, who aren't human-like at all.
* {{Flanderization}}: [=GLaDOS=] is uncharacteristically bloodthirsty, as opposed to merely sarcastic and passive-aggressive. But given this is the third time Chell has tried to kill her, it could be chalked up to a form of VillainousBreakdown.
** [[WordOfGod Word of Fan Fic Writer]] states [[InvokedTrope that was exactly what they were going for]].
** [[WordOfGod Word of Fan Fic Writer]] states [[InvokedTrope that was exactly what they were going for]].
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* HarsherInHindsight: GLaDOS's statements that [[AllOfTheOtherReindeer everypony else]] thinks Ditzy/Derpy's retarded is lent support after the negative reactions to her appearance in The Last Roundup.
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** Even more HilariousInHindsight after almost the exact same thing happens in A Friend in Deed
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** Even more HilariousInHindsight after almost the exact same thing happens in A Friend in DeedDeed.
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* SilentProtagonist: Chell, naturally. Given more of an explaination that she has no vocal cords [[spoiler: as they were removed, most likely by [=GLaDOS=], for "science".]] [[spoiler:This gets averted at the end, thanks to a gift from Luna - a necklace that turns Chell's thoughts into speech.]]
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* SilentProtagonist: Chell, naturally. Given more of an explaination explanation that she has no vocal cords [[spoiler: as they were removed, most likely by [=GLaDOS=], for "science".]] [[spoiler:This "science". This gets averted at the end, thanks to a gift from Luna - a necklace that turns Chell's thoughts into speech.]]
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* DuctTapeForEverything: Wheatley repaired one of the portal guns with duct tape. Naturally, it [[AlternateDimension fails spectacularly]].
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* FisherKingdom: ANYTHING that is sufficiently intelligent is turned into a pony upon entering Equestria, even GLaDOS, Atlas and P-Body, who aren't human-like at all.
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* HarsherInHindsight: GLaDOS's statements that [[AllOfTheOtherReindeer everypony else]] thinks she's retarded is lent support after the negative reactions to her appearance in The Last Roundup.
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* HarsherInHindsight: GLaDOS's statements that [[AllOfTheOtherReindeer everypony else]] thinks she's Ditzy/Derpy's retarded is lent support after the negative reactions to her appearance in The Last Roundup.
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** WordOfGod states that this is because [[spoiler:[==GLaDOS==] never dies]].
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** WordOfGod states that this is because [[spoiler:[==GLaDOS==] [[spoiler:[=GLaDOS=] never dies]].
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* PityTheKidnapper: [[spoiler:When [=GLaDOS=] gets round to taunting Celestia, the princess verbally judo-masters her so thoroughly she is left alone in her test chamber.]]
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* PityTheKidnapper: [[spoiler:When [=GLaDOS=] gets round to taunting Celestia, [[spoiler:Celestia realizes, after her first conversation with [=GLaDOS=], that righteous indignation only amuses the princess evil AI. She immediately changes tack and verbally judo-masters [=GLaDOS=] into leaving her so thoroughly she is left alone in her test chamber.]]chamber -- [=GLaDOS=] has a great deal of trouble dealing with perceptive test subjects, especially those who can talk back.]]
** [[spoiler:VillainousBreakdown]]: '''[[spoiler:"SHUT UP. SHUT UP. SHUT UP. UP THE SHUT. I WILL KILL YOU RIGHT NOW IF YOU DON'T SHUT UP."]]'''
** [[spoiler:VillainousBreakdown]]: '''[[spoiler:"SHUT UP. SHUT UP. SHUT UP. UP THE SHUT. I WILL KILL YOU RIGHT NOW IF YOU DON'T SHUT UP."]]'''
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-->"Wa..war....warning. Warning, destination universe imposing critical changes to basic structure of both organic and inorganic systems. Changes occurring primarily in hardware, minor changes detected in data... physical change is resulting in... oh you’ve GOT to be kidding me."
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-->"Wa..war....warning. Warning, destination universe imposing critical changes to basic structure of both organic and inorganic systems. Changes occurring primarily in hardware, minor changes detected in data... physical change is resulting in... oh you’ve GOT to be kidding me."
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* HarsherInHindsight: GLaDOS's statements that [[AllOfTheOtherReindeer everypony else]] thinks she's retarded is lent support after the negative reactions to her appearance in The Last Roundup.
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** WordOfGod states that this is because [[spoiler:[==GLaDOS==] never dies]].
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* [[ActorAllusion Actress Allusion:]] Caroline's last name was never given in the games, but this story mentions it as [[=McLain=]], the same as her voice actress.
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* [[ActorAllusion Actress Allusion:]] Caroline's last name was never given in the games, but this story mentions it as [[=McLain=]], [=McLain=], the same as her voice actress.
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* PowerLimiter: [=GLaDOS=] devises a device that inhibits a unicorn's magical abilities. It's apparently powerful enough to render even Celestia and Luna (mostly) helpless.
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* PowerLimiter: [=GLaDOS=] devises a device designs devices that inhibits a unicorn's inhibit unicorns' magical abilities. It's abilities and prevents pegasi from using their wings. The first of these is apparently powerful enough to render even Celestia and Luna (mostly) helpless.
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* HeroicSacrifice / TakingYouWithMe: [[spoiler: Caroline]], blowing up the facility to end [=GLaDOS=] once and for all.
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* HeroicSacrifice / TakingYouWithMe: [[spoiler: Caroline]], blowing up the facility to end [=GLaDOS=] once and for all.all and help Chell escape. [[spoiler:It doesn't completely work, as a small part of [=GLaDOS=] survives.]]
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* SilentProtagonist: Chell, naturally. Given more of an explaination that she has no vocal cords [[spoiler: as they were removed, most likely by [=GLaDOS=], for "science".]] [[spoiler:This gets averted at the end, thanks to Luna.]]
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* SilentProtagonist: Chell, naturally. Given more of an explaination that she has no vocal cords [[spoiler: as they were removed, most likely by [=GLaDOS=], for "science".]] [[spoiler:This gets averted at the end, thanks to Luna.a gift from Luna - a necklace that turns Chell's thoughts into speech.]]
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* [[spoiler:OneWingedAngel: [=GLaDOS=] pulls this when Chell confronts her, using a robotic body based off of Celestia's. She was going to make it human, be she said she realized 'she doesn't like them very much', and when in Equestria...]]
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* [[spoiler:OneWingedAngel: [=GLaDOS=] OneWingedAngel: [[spoiler:[=GLaDOS=]]] pulls this when Chell [[spoiler:Chell confronts her, using a robotic body based off of Celestia's. Celestia's]]. She was going to [[spoiler:to make it human, be but]] she said she realized 'she doesn't like them very much', and [[spoiler:and when in Equestria...Equestria.]]
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-->Now the subject was asking her questions. Not the usual kind, either . . . “Where am I?” or “What are you doing to me?” or “Why would you take my leg?”
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[[http://www.equestriadaily.com/2011/07/map-of-equestria-and-portal-pony-mod.html Now getting it's own Portal 2 mod.]] You should see the work on how the people managed to piece together the basic layout of Ponyville. [[http://aurebesh.deviantart.com/gallery/31093498 It's really quite amazing.]]
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[[http://www.equestriadaily.com/2011/07/map-of-equestria-and-portal-pony-mod.html Now getting it's its own Portal 2 mod.]] You should see the work on how the people managed to piece together the basic layout of Ponyville. [[http://aurebesh.deviantart.com/gallery/31093498 It's really quite amazing.]]