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->''"This is an ANTI-RAPE piece, speaking out against erotic rape scenes in fanfictions. In no way is this meant to be "hot" or anything, it's supposed to be disturbing to show how horrible an criminal rape is. But there are a buncha funny parts an it's not all depressing. I just wanna get a message across to my readers that RAPE IS NOT GOOD."''
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* UpdatedRerelease: In the original, the [[spoiler: the Chipmunks killed [[spoiler:killed Ian]]. In the re-release, [[spoiler:he gets sent to prison instead]].
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The story here involves Ian Hawk, Creator/David Cross' villainous character, using a scientist's "Munkifier" to transform himself into a chipmunk as part of a plan to infiltrate their group and kill them (and maybe get a little Chipette tail on the side). Meanwhile, Dave has left for the UK to attend the premiere of a ''Film/HarryPotter'' movie, and has left the Chipmunks and Chipettes in the care of...Music/SnoopDogg. However, they are visited by a strange chipmunk named "[[SdrawkcabName Kwah Nai]]", who is nice, even if he seems a bit familiar...
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The story here involves Ian Hawk, Creator/David Cross' Creator/DavidCross' villainous character, using a scientist's "Munkifier" to transform himself into a chipmunk as part of a plan to infiltrate their group and kill them (and maybe get a little Chipette tail on the side). Meanwhile, Dave has left for the UK to attend the premiere of a ''Film/HarryPotter'' movie, and has left the Chipmunks and Chipettes in the care of...Music/SnoopDogg. However, they are visited by a strange chipmunk named "[[SdrawkcabName Kwah Nai]]", who is nice, even if he seems a bit familiar...
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The story here involves Ian Hawk, David Creator/David Cross' villainous character, using a scientist's "Munkifier" to transform himself into a chipmunk as part of a plan to infiltrate their group and kill them (and maybe get a little Chipette tail on the side). Meanwhile, Dave has left for the UK to attend the premiere of a ''Film/HarryPotter'' movie, and has left the Chipmunks and Chipettes in the care of...Music/SnoopDogg. However, they are visited by a strange chipmunk named "[[SdrawkcabName Kwah Nai]]", who is nice, even if he seems a bit familiar...
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* ShoutOut: Several. The shoutout to FanFic/MyImmortal proves its TrollFic status:
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* ShoutOut: Several. The shoutout to FanFic/MyImmortal ''FanFic/MyImmortal'' proves its TrollFic status:
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It even recently got an unofficial sequel [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11446651/1/Alvan-An-The-Chipmunks-4-The-Third-Squeakuel as seen here]].
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[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8816560/1/Alvin-and-the-chipmunks-3-the-second-squeakquel Here is the fic]]. For a relatively new fanfiction, it's already garnered some infamy on the internet, even more than ''When Qwaritch Takes Revenge''. Blog/ToplessRobot [[http://www.toplessrobot.com/2010/04/fan_fiction_friday_alvan_an_the_chipmunks_3_the_se.php featured it in their April 2nd Fanfiction Friday]]. A reading of it [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_aaSeOLwO68 can]] [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RJVU1DyBlMI&feature=related be]] [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lGbTfSarJXU&feature=related found]] [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-0DXrsgkwhM&feature=related on]] [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6CeXOV5uMKY&feature=related YouTube.]]
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But a description of the plot really doesn't do it justice in terms of getting across just how batshit insane it is. There's a chipmunk orgy, Theodor [sic] farting too much, the Chipmunks swearing, Snoop Dogg running out to the store - right as his charges are going to bed, mind you - to get some beer, and Simon playing ''VideoGame/CallOfDuty'' and screaming in rage as he is killed by an alien. Oh, and Ian flushing Eleanor down the toilet and [[{{Squick}} violently raping and torturing Brittany]]...and his rather ridiculous comeuppance the next day. It must be read to be believed.
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It even recently got an unofficial [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11446651/1/Alvan-An-The-Chipmunks-4-The-Third-Squeakuel sequel as seen here]].
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* CowboyBebopAtHisComputer: The chipmunks get killed by an ''alien'' in ''VideoGame/CallOfDuty'', a shooter series based off of real life military conflicts against entirely human enemies.
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The story here involves Ian Hawk, David Cross' villainous character, using a scientist's "Munkifier" to transform himself into a chipmunk as part of a plan to infiltrate their group and kill them (and maybe get a little Chipette tail on the side). Meanwhile, Dave has left for the UK to attend the premiere of a ''Film/HarryPotter'' movie, and has left the Chipmunks and Chipettes in the care of...SnoopDogg. However, they are visited by a strange chipmunk named "[[SdrawkcabName Kwah Nai]]", who is nice, even if he seems a bit familiar...
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The story here involves Ian Hawk, David Cross' villainous character, using a scientist's "Munkifier" to transform himself into a chipmunk as part of a plan to infiltrate their group and kill them (and maybe get a little Chipette tail on the side). Meanwhile, Dave has left for the UK to attend the premiere of a ''Film/HarryPotter'' movie, and has left the Chipmunks and Chipettes in the care of...SnoopDogg.Music/SnoopDogg. However, they are visited by a strange chipmunk named "[[SdrawkcabName Kwah Nai]]", who is nice, even if he seems a bit familiar...
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* ArtisticLicenseGeography: Ian describes London as "in the desert an there are tigers an its a nude city so ther're naked hoes everywhere showin off there gozangas". It's pretty clear he's just making shit up at that point.
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** To be fair, it's pretty clear he's just making shit up at that point.
** Either that or Ian's never been to London.
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Dude, this is natter!
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** [[spoiler: Unloaded a full clip?]] Dude, that's nothing compared to how he was apparently [[spoiler: "such a power fuck that Brittany went ''flyin'' [sic] ''across the room''"!]]
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[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8816560/1/Alvin-and-the-chipmunks-3-the-second-squeakquel Here is the fic]]. For a relatively new fanfiction, it's already garnered some infamy on the internet, even more than ''When Qwaritch Takes Revenge''. ToplessRobot [[http://www.toplessrobot.com/2010/04/fan_fiction_friday_alvan_an_the_chipmunks_3_the_se.php featured it in their April 2nd Fanfiction Friday]]. A reading of it [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_aaSeOLwO68 can]] [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RJVU1DyBlMI&feature=related be]] [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lGbTfSarJXU&feature=related found]] [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-0DXrsgkwhM&feature=related on]] [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6CeXOV5uMKY&feature=related YouTube.]]
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[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8816560/1/Alvin-and-the-chipmunks-3-the-second-squeakquel Here is the fic]]. For a relatively new fanfiction, it's already garnered some infamy on the internet, even more than ''When Qwaritch Takes Revenge''. ToplessRobot Blog/ToplessRobot [[http://www.toplessrobot.com/2010/04/fan_fiction_friday_alvan_an_the_chipmunks_3_the_se.php featured it in their April 2nd Fanfiction Friday]]. A reading of it [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_aaSeOLwO68 can]] [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RJVU1DyBlMI&feature=related be]] [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lGbTfSarJXU&feature=related found]] [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-0DXrsgkwhM&feature=related on]] [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6CeXOV5uMKY&feature=related YouTube.]]]]
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But a description of the plot really doesn't do it justice in terms of getting across just how batshit insane it is. There's a chipmunk orgy, Theodor [sic] farting too much, the Chipmunks swearing, Snoop Dogg running out to the store - right as his charges are going to bed, mind you - to get some beer, and Simon playing ''CallOfDuty'' and screaming in rage as he is killed by an alien. Oh, and Ian flushing Eleanor down the toilet and [[{{Squick}} violently raping and torturing Brittany]]...and his rather ridiculous comeuppance the next day. It must be read to be believed.
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But a description of the plot really doesn't do it justice in terms of getting across just how batshit insane it is. There's a chipmunk orgy, Theodor [sic] farting too much, the Chipmunks swearing, Snoop Dogg running out to the store - right as his charges are going to bed, mind you - to get some beer, and Simon playing ''CallOfDuty'' ''VideoGame/CallOfDuty'' and screaming in rage as he is killed by an alien. Oh, and Ian flushing Eleanor down the toilet and [[{{Squick}} violently raping and torturing Brittany]]...and his rather ridiculous comeuppance the next day. It must be read to be believed.
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For a relatively new fanfiction, it's already garnered some infamy on the internet, even more than ''When Qwaritch Takes Revenge''. ToplessRobot [[http://www.toplessrobot.com/2010/04/fan_fiction_friday_alvan_an_the_chipmunks_3_the_se.php featured it in their April 2nd Fanfiction Friday]]. A reading of it [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_aaSeOLwO68 can]] [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RJVU1DyBlMI&feature=related be]] [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lGbTfSarJXU&feature=related found]] [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-0DXrsgkwhM&feature=related on]] [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6CeXOV5uMKY&feature=related YouTube.]]
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[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8816560/1/Alvin-and-the-chipmunks-3-the-second-squeakquel Here is the fic]]. For a relatively new fanfiction, it's already garnered some infamy on the internet, even more than ''When Qwaritch Takes Revenge''. ToplessRobot [[http://www.toplessrobot.com/2010/04/fan_fiction_friday_alvan_an_the_chipmunks_3_the_se.php featured it in their April 2nd Fanfiction Friday]]. A reading of it [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_aaSeOLwO68 can]] [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RJVU1DyBlMI&feature=related be]] [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lGbTfSarJXU&feature=related found]] [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-0DXrsgkwhM&feature=related on]] [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6CeXOV5uMKY&feature=related YouTube.]]
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