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* ''Fanfic/WithThisRing'': Sunset Shimmer agrees that the Elements of Harmony ''might'' possibly be able to purge the fragment of Anti-Life embedded in the Renegade's soul -- and then she realises just how he plans to ensure that the Elements will be used on him. (She's too late, though; he's already stepping through a portal to his destination.)
--> '''Sunset:''' But I'm not sure that it works on things that aren't a real threat ''noGrayvenno''!
* ''Fanfic/WithThisRing'': Sunset Shimmer agrees that the Elements of Harmony ''might'' possibly be able to purge the fragment of Anti-Life embedded in the Renegade's soul -- and then she realises just how he plans to ensure that the Elements will be used on him. (She's too late, though; he's already stepping through a portal to his destination.)
--> '''Sunset:''' But I'm not sure that it works on things that aren't a real threat ''noGrayvenno''!
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* ''Fanfic/EverydayCrazinessInPontypandy'': In "Shop Till You Drop", as Elvis explains to Jerry Lee that he tried the best he could to get everyone out of the burning shopping mall, he begins to realize that in his haste, he left without his friend Gabby, and freaks out.
* ''Fanfic/EverydayCrazinessInPontypandy'': In "Shop Till You Drop", as Elvis explains to Jerry Lee that he tried the best he could to get everyone out of the burning shopping mall, he begins to realize that in his haste, he left without his friend Gabby, and freaks out.
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* ''Fanfic/HereComesTheNewBoss'': When Panacea heals up Elpis, she sees the changes the latter underwent due to her Trigger, and notes that had Elpis appeared earlier people would have mistaken her for the Butcher, what with the HealingFactor, and the tough skin, and the extra photoreceptors, and extra row of teeth, in combination with being a Tinker... and Panacea realizes all of a sudden that she's enclosed in a room with the latest incarnation of the country's biggest SerialKiller.
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* ''Fanfic/HereComesTheNewBoss'': When Panacea heals up Elpis, she sees the changes the latter underwent due to her Trigger, and notes that had Elpis appeared earlier people would have mistaken her for the Butcher, what with the HealingFactor, and the tough skin, and the extra photoreceptors, and extra row of teeth, in combination with being a Tinker... and Panacea realizes all of a sudden that she's enclosed in a room with the latest incarnation of the country's biggest an immortal SerialKiller.
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* In the AccusationFic ''Fanfic/BridgesBurned'', Alya learns that Marinette is friends with [[Characters/SupermanLoisLane Lois Lane]] when Marinette invites her to visit her school and introduces her to Aurore. After her initial shock wears off, Alya starts complaining to Nino about how Marinette never ''told her'' that she knew Lois Lane, but trails off as she recalls how she [[WeUsedToBeFriends broke off their friendship]].
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* In the AccusationFic ''Fanfic/BridgesBurned'', ''[[Fanfic/BridgesBurned Bridges Burned (Mama Always Told Me That I Should Play Nice. But She Never Met You)]]'', Alya learns that Marinette is friends with [[Characters/SupermanLoisLane Lois Lane]] when Marinette invites her to visit her school and introduces her to Aurore. After her initial shock wears off, Alya starts complaining to Nino about how Marinette never ''told her'' that she knew Lois Lane, but trails off as she recalls how she [[WeUsedToBeFriends broke off their friendship]].friendship]].
-->'''Alya:''' Marinette! She knows Lois Lane. I can't believe she never told me. And how could she recommend ''Aurore'' for an internship over me, I thought we were... We're not friends. Lois Lane said she just wanted to meet Marinette's friends. I'm not her friend.
-->'''Alya:''' Marinette! She knows Lois Lane. I can't believe she never told me. And how could she recommend ''Aurore'' for an internship over me, I thought we were... We're not friends. Lois Lane said she just wanted to meet Marinette's friends. I'm not her friend.
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'''Lelouch:''' There are only five of you... ''[{{beat}}]'' [[DisguisedInDrag No, you can't be serious!]]\\
'''Milly:''' ''[cackling]'' Time to take one for the team, Zero!
'''Milly:''' ''[cackling]'' Time to take one for the team, Zero!
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'''Lelouch:''' There are only five of you... ''[{{beat}}]'' ''({{beat}})'' [[DisguisedInDrag No, you can't be serious!]]\\
'''Milly:'''''[cackling]'' ''(cackling)'' Time to take one for the team, Zero!
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-->You blink a few times as you look at Port, before your eyes glance around at your fellow students. You see that they're all staring at you with really weirded out expressions... well, except Kacchan. The guy looked like he was about to bust a blood vessel from pure rage and annoyance. Huh, that's funny... usually people and Kacchan only looked at you like this whenever you... you... [[OhCrap Oh crap.]]
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-->You blink a few times as you look at Port, before your eyes glance around at your fellow students. You see that they're all staring at you with really weirded out expressions... well, except Kacchan. The guy looked like he was about to bust a blood vessel from pure rage and annoyance. Huh, that's funny... usually people and Kacchan only looked at you like this whenever you... you... [[OhCrap Oh crap.]]crap]].
* ''Webcomic/FeralnetteAU'': During an argument with Alya, Marinette reveals that she stopped trying to salvage her friendship with her after a ''past'' confrontation that happened right on the heels of a painful personal loss. Alya had been badgering her to answer her accusations, pushed her to the point that she'd snapped, then took her lashing out as proof that Lila was right about her being a BitchInSheepsClothing, leaving Marinette to realize there was nothing she could do to sway Alya off her TheoryTunnelvision. Alya insists that if she had only known what was going on, she would've dropped the subject and supported her friend... before talking her way through what would have likely happened next, causing her to realize just how much [[ManipulativeBitch Lila manipulated her]]:
-->'''Alya:''' Marinette, if you had just told me you were going through some sort of a crisis, I wouldn't have--\\
'''Marinette:''' ''[[ArmorPiercingQuestion So it's my fault again?]]''\\
'''Alya:''' That isn't what I meant, I, I meant -- if I knew you'd been going through some terrible thing, I would've dropped the Lila topic. I would've asked what was wrong, I promise, I -- But... then Lila would've asked how it went, and I would've told her, and she would have made your troubles all about herself. ''(covering her face with one hand)'' She always wanted to know how you responded to stuff and I never even wondered why, just assumed she was shy or nervous around you... She was playing mind games and I didn't... even see it. Didn't notice. Didn't ''think''. ''(moves hand to reveal sweat and tears trickling down her face)'' You've never been a menace to Lila, have you. You started acting like a marble statue because something bad happened to you. And I'd never seen you act like that before, so I just assumed Lila was right. Because... the alternative was that I was a bad friend.\\
'''Marinette:''' It's always easier to believe someone {{playing the victim|Card}}. After all, the alternative to ''that'' is [[BlamingTheVictim blaming the suffering party]].\\
'''Alya:''' But I did that. I pointed the finger at ''you'' and didn't even realize you were hurt.
-->'''Alya:''' Marinette, if you had just told me you were going through some sort of a crisis, I wouldn't have--\\
'''Marinette:''' ''[[ArmorPiercingQuestion So it's my fault again?]]''\\
'''Alya:''' That isn't what I meant, I, I meant -- if I knew you'd been going through some terrible thing, I would've dropped the Lila topic. I would've asked what was wrong, I promise, I -- But... then Lila would've asked how it went, and I would've told her, and she would have made your troubles all about herself. ''(covering her face with one hand)'' She always wanted to know how you responded to stuff and I never even wondered why, just assumed she was shy or nervous around you... She was playing mind games and I didn't... even see it. Didn't notice. Didn't ''think''. ''(moves hand to reveal sweat and tears trickling down her face)'' You've never been a menace to Lila, have you. You started acting like a marble statue because something bad happened to you. And I'd never seen you act like that before, so I just assumed Lila was right. Because... the alternative was that I was a bad friend.\\
'''Marinette:''' It's always easier to believe someone {{playing the victim|Card}}. After all, the alternative to ''that'' is [[BlamingTheVictim blaming the suffering party]].\\
'''Alya:''' But I did that. I pointed the finger at ''you'' and didn't even realize you were hurt.
* ''Fanfic/OneForAllAndEightForTheNinth'': After meeting with Mirio and Tamaki, Izuku admits that he felt a little jealous over how close they were and wished he and Bakugo could've been like that. Nejire points out that Mirio and Tamaki are dating as well as best friends, and questions why Izuku would be jealous of that, at which point [[AllLoveIsUnrequited the implications]] dawn on her.
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* ''Fanfic/OneForAllAndEightForTheNinth'': After meeting with Mirio and Tamaki, Izuku admits that he felt a little jealous over how close they were and wished he and Bakugo could've been like that. Nejire points out that Mirio and Tamaki are dating as well as best friends, and questions why Izuku would be jealous of that, at which point [[AllLoveIsUnrequited the implications]] dawn on her.
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* Discord of all creatures, gets one in ''Fanfic/{{Misunderstandings}}''. Throughout the story, the human protagonist Peter has been absorbing the magic around him [[spoiler:and channeling it to Earth, only now a sabotage of Twlight's experiments has cut off that connection.]] Discord starts out explaining how it happened in his strange way -- ''he pulls off one of his horns'' to symbolize the connection -- but starts to get very nervous when he realizes [[spoiler:the magic building up in the broken conduit will eventually cause Peter to explode.]]
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* Discord of all creatures, gets one in ''Fanfic/{{Misunderstandings}}''. Throughout the story, the human protagonist Peter has been absorbing the magic around him [[spoiler:and channeling it to Earth, only now a sabotage of Twlight's experiments has cut off that connection.]] connection]]. Discord starts out explaining how it happened in his strange way -- ''he pulls off one of his horns'' to symbolize the connection -- but starts to get very nervous when he realizes [[spoiler:the magic building up in the broken conduit will eventually cause Peter to explode.]]
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* ''Fanfic/AllAssortedAnimorphsAUs'': In "What if Marco was the one split in half in #32?", Marco gets split into two people embodying his silly (Shallow Marco) and ruthless (Robot Marco) sides. When Shallow Marco spends the night at Jake's house, Rachel calls Jake the next morning to complain about all the inane phone calls she got from Shallow Marco that night. Jake starts saying this doesn't make sense because Shallow Marco's been with him the whole time, only to realize midsentence [[spoiler:that his "Shallow Marco" was actually Robot Marco pretending to be his nicer half; when Jake rushes upstairs to check on him, he finds that Robot Marco's been gone for hours and left a SleepingDummy behind.]]
* ''Fanfic/AllAssortedAnimorphsAUs'': In "What if Marco was the one split in half in #32?", Marco gets split into two people embodying his silly (Shallow Marco) and ruthless (Robot Marco) sides. When Shallow Marco spends the night at Jake's house, Rachel calls Jake the next morning to complain about all the inane phone calls she got from Shallow Marco that night. Jake starts saying this doesn't make sense because Shallow Marco's been with him the whole time, only to realize midsentence [[spoiler:that his "Shallow Marco" was actually Robot Marco pretending to be his nicer half; when Jake rushes upstairs to check on him, he finds that Robot Marco's been gone for hours and left a SleepingDummy behind.]]
