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* ''Fanfic/HarryPotterAndTheMagicOfTheBeasts'': Fudge's attempts to order Hermione's execution in full view of the Great Hall in second year unless Steve Feros turns up to be arrested for murdering 'prominent purebloods'. Why? Because she didn't report herself as a Nekomata to the Ministry. [[DidntThinkThisThrough This political stunt backfired big time]], with Fudge [[OhCrap backing off under possible threat of arrest for violating international law]], [[HoistByHisOwnPetard Snape stripped of all but teaching potions]], and Fudge expected to lose a lot of political power over the coming years.



* ''Fanfic/HarryPotterAndTheMagicOfTheBeasts'': Fudge's attempts to order Hermione's execution in full view of the Great Hall in second year unless Steve Feros turns up to be arrested for murdering 'prominent purebloods'. Why? Because she didn't report herself as a Nekomata to the Ministry. [[DidntThinkThisThrough This political stunt backfired big time]], with Fudge [[OhCrap backing off under possible threat of arrest for violating international law]], [[HoistByHisOwnPetard Snape stripped of all but teaching potions]], and Fudge expected to lose a lot of political power over the coming years.
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* ''Fanfic/DontLookBack'': Intentionally invoked. Emperor Belos has a bounty for 1 million snails placed on [[spoiler:Amity's]] head for fighting back against coven guards. However, [[spoiler:Amity]] only acted in self-defense as the guards were threatening to arrest her, Luz and Marcy just for talking to Eda.
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* ''Fanfic/HarryPotterAndTheMagicOfTheBeasts'': Fudge's attempts to order Hermione's execution in full view of the Great Hall in second year unless Steve Feros turns up to be arrested for murdering 'prominent purebloods'. Why? Because she didn't report herself as a Nekomata to the Ministry. [[DidntThinkThisThrough This political stunt backfired big time]], with Fudge [[OhCrap backing off under possible threat of arrest for violating international law]], [[HoistByHisOwnPetard Snape stripped of all but teaching potions]], and Fudge expected to lose a lot of political power over the coming years.
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* Remember in ''Literature/HarryPotterAndTheGobletOfFire'' when Ron and Harry were having an argument, because Ron was feeling OvershadowedByAwesome and he felt Harry was hiding something from him? Well, Rose Potter of ''The Girl Who Lived'' responded to this by throwing Ron around the room and carving words into his forehead.

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* Remember in In ''Literature/HarryPotterAndTheGobletOfFire'' when Ron and Harry were having have an argument, because Ron was feeling OvershadowedByAwesome and he felt Harry was hiding something from him? Well, him. Rose Potter of ''The Girl Who Lived'' responded to this by throwing Ron around the room and carving words into his forehead.

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* In ''Fanfic/ChristianHumberReloaded''[[note]]A crossover involving too many fictional works to list here[[/note]], Vash kills a hunter for setting a trap that he stepped in [[{{Hypocrite}} while hunting]] that did not even harm him because it broke on his leg. To make matters worse, the trap [[FridgeLogic may not have even been intended for him]].

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* In ''Fanfic/ChristianHumberReloaded''[[note]]A crossover involving too many fictional works to list here[[/note]], here[[/note]]:
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Vash kills a hunter for setting a trap that he stepped in [[{{Hypocrite}} while hunting]] that did not even harm him because it broke on his leg. To make matters worse, the trap [[FridgeLogic may not have even been intended for him]].



*** After he gets shot in the shoulder after accidentally teleporting to the Super Bowl, he kills 6 million people just to prove a point about how dangerous angry Horteka are.

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*** After ***After he gets shot in the shoulder after accidentally teleporting to the Super Bowl, he kills 6 million people just to prove a point about how dangerous angry Horteka are.
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* In canon, Eraqus is a KnightTemplar WellIntentionedExtremist who only [[spoiler:tries to kill Ventus because he didn't want a second Keyblade War]]. In WebVideo/KingdomHeartsButItsSilly, he immediately decides to murder Ventus after hearing him talking backwards, and when Terra comes to rescue him and also starts speaking backwards, Eraqus tries to kill him as well. [[{{Hypocrite}} Eraqus himself spoke backwards in an earlier part]]. Additionally, Xehanort tries to kill Ventus in a flashback because [[ToiletHumor Ventus wouldn't wipe his ass]], and later on, the Wayfinder Trio decides to beat Xehanort to death for dancing to [[Music/BeeGees Stayin' Alive]]. They fail.

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* In canon, Eraqus is a KnightTemplar WellIntentionedExtremist who only [[spoiler:tries to kill Ventus because he didn't want a second Keyblade War]]. In WebVideo/KingdomHeartsButItsSilly, ''WebVideo/KingdomHeartsButItsSilly'', he immediately decides to murder Ventus after hearing him talking backwards, and when Terra comes to rescue him and also starts speaking backwards, Eraqus tries to kill him as well. [[{{Hypocrite}} Eraqus himself spoke backwards in an earlier part]]. Additionally, Xehanort tries to kill Ventus in a flashback because [[ToiletHumor Ventus wouldn't wipe his ass]], and later on, the Wayfinder Trio decides to beat Xehanort to death for dancing to [[Music/BeeGees Stayin' Alive]]. They fail.
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* In canon, Eraqus is a KnightTemplar WellIntentionedExtremist who only [[spoiler:tries to kill Ventus because he didn't want a second Keyblade War]]. In WebVideo/KingdomHeartsButItsSilly, he immediately decides to murder Ventus after hearing him talking backwards, and when Terra comes to rescue him and also starts speaking backwards, Eraqus tries to kill him as well. [[{{Hypocrite}} Eraqus himself spoke backwards in an earlier part]]. Additionally, Xehanort tries to kill Ventus in a flashback because [[ToiletHumor Ventus wouldn't wipe his ass]], and later on, the Wayfinder Trio decides to beat Xehanort to death for dancing to [[Music/BeeGees Stayin' Alive]]. They fail.
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--->'''Chloe:''' "Too bad your friend Marinette ''isn't'' Scarlet Lady... or she ''might'' have saved you."

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* Most of the main cast in Fanfic/DragonAgeTheCrownOfThorns, and some others, feel that the DN protagonist [[spoiler:lashes out at Isolde a bit too strongly]], although, true enough, she did [[spoiler:outright accuse him that he doesn't mind killing children]]. He [[spoiler:makes her cry with TheReasonYouSuckSpeech and even deliberately makes her think he is going to/did kill Connor]]. Fortunately, he'd only [[spoiler:gone upstairs to give the kid a hug and a SoProudOfYou, plus talk to the demon possessing him face to face]].

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* Most of the main cast in Fanfic/DragonAgeTheCrownOfThorns, ''Fanfic/DragonAgeTheCrownOfThorns'', and some others, feel that the DN protagonist [[spoiler:lashes out at Isolde a bit too strongly]], although, true enough, she did [[spoiler:outright accuse him that he doesn't mind killing children]]. He [[spoiler:makes her cry with TheReasonYouSuckSpeech and even deliberately makes her think he is going to/did kill Connor]]. Fortunately, he'd only [[spoiler:gone upstairs to give the kid a hug and a SoProudOfYou, plus talk to the demon possessing him face to face]].

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* ''FanFic/DeathNoteEquestria'': Twilight, as Kira, kills criminals of various calibers -- her main targets are {{Karma Houdini}}s and those she considers unrepentant -- so a pony with a life-long history of minor offences might also be offed. Second Kira [[spoiler:(Fluttershy)]], meanwhile, openly kills those who speak against Kira.

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* ''FanFic/DeathNoteEquestria'': ''Fanfic/DeathNoteEquestria'': Twilight, as Kira, kills criminals of various calibers -- her main targets are {{Karma Houdini}}s and those she considers unrepentant -- so a pony with a life-long history of minor offences might also be offed. Second Kira [[spoiler:(Fluttershy)]], meanwhile, openly kills those who speak against Kira.



* ''Fanfic/InfinityTrainStarFinder'': Rusty once tried to flirt with Stella, so she decided to toss him in a trash can, but she was suspended from school when she did this. [[LampshadeHanging Lampshaded]] by her mother when she says that tossing him in a trash can was a "disproportionate action".






* Most of the main cast in FanFic/DragonAgeTheCrownOfThorns, and some others, feel that the DN protagonist [[spoiler:lashes out at Isolde a bit too strongly]], although, true enough, she did [[spoiler:outright accuse him that he doesn't mind killing children]]. He [[spoiler:makes her cry with TheReasonYouSuckSpeech and even deliberately makes her think he is going to/did kill Connor]]. Fortunately, he'd only [[spoiler:gone upstairs to give the kid a hug and a SoProudOfYou, plus talk to the demon possessing him face to face]].

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* Most of the main cast in FanFic/DragonAgeTheCrownOfThorns, Fanfic/DragonAgeTheCrownOfThorns, and some others, feel that the DN protagonist [[spoiler:lashes out at Isolde a bit too strongly]], although, true enough, she did [[spoiler:outright accuse him that he doesn't mind killing children]]. He [[spoiler:makes her cry with TheReasonYouSuckSpeech and even deliberately makes her think he is going to/did kill Connor]]. Fortunately, he'd only [[spoiler:gone upstairs to give the kid a hug and a SoProudOfYou, plus talk to the demon possessing him face to face]].



* ''FanFic/CelestiaVSCleverbot'': Luna gets upset with Cleverbot and takes out her anger by destroying the computer and setting it on fire.

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* ''FanFic/CelestiaVSCleverbot'': ''Fanfic/CelestiaVSCleverbot'': Luna gets upset with Cleverbot and takes out her anger by destroying the computer and setting it on fire.



* In ''FanFic/LatiasJourney'', the Ghost King proposes to Latias after sending her several gifts. She refuses his advances, so he kills her family, and then destroys her home, Altomare, along with everyone in it. Judging by the city it is based on, he killed upwards of 800,000 people. Strangely enough, she still falls in [[AMillionIsAStatistic love with him.]]
* In ''FanFic/NewWorld'', Maddie smacks Ashton in the face. And he proceeds to savagely beat her. Keep in mind that the reason she hit him in the first place was because he was trying to ''rape her.''

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* In ''FanFic/LatiasJourney'', ''Fanfic/LatiasJourney'', the Ghost King proposes to Latias after sending her several gifts. She refuses his advances, so he kills her family, and then destroys her home, Altomare, along with everyone in it. Judging by the city it is based on, he killed upwards of 800,000 people. Strangely enough, she still falls in [[AMillionIsAStatistic love with him.]]
* In ''FanFic/NewWorld'', ''Fanfic/NewWorld'', Maddie smacks Ashton in the face. And he proceeds to savagely beat her. Keep in mind that the reason she hit him in the first place was because he was trying to ''rape her.''



* ''FanFic/PokemonMysteryDungeonWhatCameAfter'':

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* In Episode 61 of ''FanFic/SonicXDarkChaos'', Sonic and his friends heavily damage Beelzebub's prototype flagship. His response? In episode 67, Beelzebub brutally tortures Cosmo and [[spoiler:nearly rapes Chris to death]] after luring them to his base. Although revenge wasn't the [[ForTheEvulz only]] [[SenseFreak reason]]...

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* In Episode 61 of ''FanFic/SonicXDarkChaos'', ''Fanfic/SonicXDarkChaos'', Sonic and his friends heavily damage Beelzebub's prototype flagship. His response? In episode 67, Beelzebub brutally tortures Cosmo and [[spoiler:nearly rapes Chris to death]] after luring them to his base. Although revenge wasn't the [[ForTheEvulz only]] [[SenseFreak reason]]...
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** [[RonTheDeathEater Cosmo's mother Hertia]] exterminated an entire tribe of primitive aliens because they worshiped an icon of Tsali. She also [[PayEvilUntoEvil had several of Tsali's acquaintances publicly tortured to death]] and even imprisoned Seedrians who protested her actions.

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** [[RonTheDeathEater Cosmo's mother Hertia]] Hertia exterminated an entire tribe of primitive aliens because they worshiped an icon of Tsali. She also [[PayEvilUntoEvil had several of Tsali's acquaintances publicly tortured to death]] and even imprisoned Seedrians who protested her actions.
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** In [[ForWantOfANail this reality's version]] of "Lady [=WiFi=]", Chloé learns that Alya mistakenly believes that ''Marinette'' is Scarlet Lady. She responds to this unknowing slight by snapping a picture of Alya getting into Marinette's locker looking for proof, then makes a scene in the Principal's office and threatens to [[ScrewTheRulesIHaveConnections get her father involved]] until he suspends Alya for a week. Followed by her gleefully taunting her:

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** In [[ForWantOfANail this reality's version]] version of "Lady [=WiFi=]", Chloé learns that Alya mistakenly believes that ''Marinette'' is Scarlet Lady. She responds to this unknowing slight by snapping a picture of Alya getting into Marinette's locker looking for proof, then makes a scene in the Principal's office and threatens to [[ScrewTheRulesIHaveConnections get her father involved]] until he suspends Alya for a week. Followed by her gleefully taunting her:
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* ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13299580/ Collateral Damage]]'': Danny triggered as a Tinker who specialises in returning any attack tenfold. He calls himself Ragnarok, and his technology is so horrifically destructive that he killed ''Behemoth'' and people still aren't sure it was worth the side effects. Taylor gets a necklace from him for personal protection, which results in [[spoiler:giving Glory Girl a stroke by magnifying and returning her aura, blasting Brandish across the street for slapping her, then Brandish attacks with her power and is turned into LudicrousGibs]].
--> '''Taylor:''' Hello? Ragnarok's daughter, here. Of ''course'' we do disproportionate. It's how we roll.
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* In ''Fanfic/{{Turtles}}'', St. Gloriana apparently inflicts this on people who are rude to them. After the student council decides to challenge St. Gloriana to a match despite Miho and Koume ([[ForWantOfANail who is an Oarai student in this fic]]) advising them to choose an easier opponent, Miho warns the student council that St. Gloriana is one of the only Power Five schools that will deign to have a practice match with Oarai, and since St. Gloriana sees Oarai as their inferiors, Oarai must show St. Gloriana the utmost respect (e.g. using "-dono" on the St. Gloriana top brass). If Oarai complies, St. Gloriana might go easy on them, but if not, St. Gloriana will field the Tortoise and crush them.

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* In ''Fanfic/{{Turtles}}'', St. Gloriana apparently inflicts this on people who are rude to them. After the student council decides to challenge St. Gloriana to a match despite Miho and Koume ([[ForWantOfANail ([[PointOfDivergence who is an Oarai student in this fic]]) advising them to choose an easier opponent, Miho warns the student council that St. Gloriana is one of the only Power Five schools that will deign to have a practice match with Oarai, and since St. Gloriana sees Oarai as their inferiors, Oarai must show St. Gloriana the utmost respect (e.g. using "-dono" on the St. Gloriana top brass). If Oarai complies, St. Gloriana might go easy on them, but if not, St. Gloriana will field the Tortoise and crush them.
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* In ''Fanfic/MoreFamilyMoreHappinessRight'' Alberto started a fight with his adoptive sister Giulia just because she drank from his favourite mug.
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* ''Fanfic/PreCureInANutshell'': In the nutshell retelling of [[Anime/FutariWaPrettyCure the very first episode of the franchise]], Eggnog (Nagisa) hits Piss (Pisard) with a stick. In retaliation, he hits her with a bench.
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* [[https://tragedybunny.tumblr.com/post/728910281451962368/look-i-know-this-is-an-awful-quality-meme This]] post jokingly proposes that Cazador turned Astarion into a vampire spawn and made his life a living hell because in his capacity as a magistrate, Astarion once served Cazador a fine for a building code violation.
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* ''Fanfic/AsylumOfDoom'': Maddie is an albino girl who was institutionalized at the [[BedlamHouse Burke Lunatic Asylum]] just for vocally protesting that she shouldn't be treated as abnormal just for being albino. [[DeliberateValuesDissonance Due to the time period she lives in]], such a belief was viewed as delusional.

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* ''Fanfic/WitchingHour'':
** Gaz threatens to feed a guardsman to her hunting hounds simply for suggesting that she should allow servants to finish off wounded animals when she hunts rather than risk her own safety.
-->'''Gaz''': Are you suggesting I'm too weak to handle a crippled animal? Think carefully before you answer, and remember that I've trained my dogs to eat human flesh on command.
** Later, she has Nick [[StockPunishment locked in a pillory]] and [[ProducePelting pelted with rotten vegetables]] to punish him for accidentally bumping into her at Bloaty's Tavern and making her spill her drink on herself.
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* ''Fanfic/ACertainDrollHiveMind'': PlayedForLaughs. Misaka-11111, who has minimal understanding of exaggeration and euphemism, is rather confused when the angry magician keeps yelling threats.
-->"I am having a really bad day!" she shouts at us. "You have one last chance to get out of my way, or I will ''destroy you all!''"\\
I am also having a bad day. However, I have not threatened to destroy anyone. We shall investigate as to whether this is a traditional human response to having bad days. We do not think it is. We suspect the human population would be considerably lower if it was traditional to commit omnicide in response to experiencing a bad day.
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* ''WebAnimation/TheMandelaMagazine'':
** The hooded Intruder gets in Mark's face and screeches at him after he refuses to give him a tip for delivering pizza.
** Mark shoots an Alternate who gets in his personal space and sniffs him weirdly.
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* {{Discussed}} in ''Fanfic/The Scorpion Jar'': After Izuku [[TheChessmaster manipulates events at Aldera]], gathering up evidence of all the abuse there and submitting it to the Board of Education, a reporter asks whether it's possible he went too far. After all, many of the students there have now been publicly exposed as bullies and shipped off to juvenile detention centers. In response, Izuku reveals a pair of scars on his face that he'd been hiding with concealer, and [[EveryScarHasAStory explains how he got them]]:

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* {{Discussed}} in ''Fanfic/The Scorpion Jar'': ''Fanfic/TheScorpionJar'': After Izuku [[TheChessmaster manipulates events at Aldera]], gathering up evidence of all the abuse there and submitting it to the Board of Education, a reporter asks whether it's possible he went too far. After all, many of the students there have now been publicly exposed as bullies and shipped off to juvenile detention centers. In response, Izuku reveals a pair of scars on his face that he'd been hiding with concealer, and [[EveryScarHasAStory explains how he got them]]:
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* {{Discussed}} in ''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/31632545/chapters/78281438 The Scorpion Jar]]'': After Izuku [[TheChessmaster manipulates events at Aldera]], gathering up evidence of all the abuse there and submitting it to the Board of Education, a reporter asks whether it's possible he went too far. After all, many of the students there have now been publicly exposed as bullies and shipped off to juvenile detention centers. In response, Izuku reveals a pair of scars on his face that he'd been hiding with concealer, and [[EveryScarHasAStory explains how he got them]]:

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* {{Discussed}} in ''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/31632545/chapters/78281438 The ''Fanfic/The Scorpion Jar]]'': Jar'': After Izuku [[TheChessmaster manipulates events at Aldera]], gathering up evidence of all the abuse there and submitting it to the Board of Education, a reporter asks whether it's possible he went too far. After all, many of the students there have now been publicly exposed as bullies and shipped off to juvenile detention centers. In response, Izuku reveals a pair of scars on his face that he'd been hiding with concealer, and [[EveryScarHasAStory explains how he got them]]:
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* ''Fanfic/TheseFoolishThings'': Learning that Laurel still has one of Oliver's old sweaters prompts Felicity to hack into Oliver's accounts dating back to his teens, pick out anything that ''might'' have been a gift to Laurel, and go to her flat to basically demand all of these gifts back. Putting aside how gross a violation that is of Oliver's privacy when he and Felicity don't have a joint bank account, as Thea points out some of those gifts could have easily been for her or Moira rather than Laurel, and in any case Felicity has no right to go to those levels.

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