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* SpiritedYoungLady: Hes is a wealthy merchants daughter and was raised to one day take over the business. She's also bored out of her mind and spends most of her time gambling.
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* FourTemperamentEnsemble: Lucan is choleric, Sabiya and Verian are Sanguine, Ruuß is melancholica and Hesindiane is phlegmatic.
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* ActionGirl: Despite being a thief, Sabiya is quite handy with her daggers and is the best fighter in the group after Lucan.
* PluckyGirl: Nothing gets her down long. Being a child bride, her new family getting slaughtered, getting thrown into prison, then sold as a slave, all this at only 16. Yet she still manages to keep a smile on her face.
* PluckyGirl: Nothing gets her down long. Being a child bride, her new family getting slaughtered, getting thrown into prison, then sold as a slave, all this at only 16. Yet she still manages to keep a smile on her face.
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* ActionGirl: Hes learned to fight with a rapier early in her life and is quite capable if forced to use this knowledge. However, she rarely uses this skill, as she tends to avoid fights.
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* VulnerableConvoy: On the way to Santobal, the prisoner convoy is attacked by the natives.
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* LockedInTheDungeon: What happens to the prisoners at night; they're locked in the partially collapsed old mine.
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* PrisonRiot: What happened previous to the groups arrival, triggering the need for new prisoners.
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* YouAllMeetInACell: Literally.
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* NoPrisonSegregation: Santobal holds men, women and children all under the same conditions.
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* PrisonersWork: All prisoners of Santobal have to work in the mines, a lucky few get to work in the kitchen.
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* CapturedOnPurpose: Hes and Verian are imprisoned to gather information about the mines for the Horas Empire who will bail them out after a month (which doesn't work). The alternative was being prosecuted for real in their homecountry losing their social standing.
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* DeadlyEnvironmentPrison: Santobal is surrounded by rainforrest, with dangerous animals and natives, on an island in pirate infested waters.
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* POWCamp: Santobal has regular criminals, as well as prisoners of war.
* TheAlcatraz: Santobal.
* WardensAreEvil: Some are even criminals themselves.
* TheAlcatraz: Santobal.
* WardensAreEvil: Some are even criminals themselves.
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Hes: "Making them strive for something they can never have. Your attention.''
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Hes: "A sword to the throat is kinder, than what you're doing."
Verian: "And, pray tell, what am I doing?"
Hes: "Making them strive for something they can never have. Your attention.''
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* TheUnfettered: He does not care about morals or ethics. If something needs doing, no matter how dirty the work is, he will do it unflinchingly.
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* ManipulativeBastard: How he usually gets his way. His whole skillset is focused on how others perceive him, while Verian cares very little about the people he manipulates.
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Hes: "A sword to the throat is kinder, than what you're doing."
Verian: "And, pray tell, what am I doing?"
Hes: "Making them strive for something they can never have. Your attention.''
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Verian: "Me? He kills people!"
Hes: "A sword to the throat is kinder, than what you're doing."
Verian: "And, pray tell, what am I doing?"
Hes: "Making them strive for something they can never have. Your attention.''
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* Determinator: It's implied one needs to be this to graduate the Ravenbeak Academy. Lucan is trained in withstanding torture.
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* FourTemperamentEnsemble: Lucan is choleric, Sabiya and Verian are Sanguine, Ruuß is melancholica and Hesindiane is phlegmatic.
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* TheStoic: Nothing ever seems to face him.
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* LongHairedPrettyBoy: Verian comments that Lucan would be this, if it weren't for the multitude of scars covering his body.
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* DudeLooksLikeALady: He is very androgynous.
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* PrettyBoy: He takes great pride in it.
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* AgentPeacock: Verian is very vain and his magical skillset focuses on changing ones appearance and making others bend to his will.
*EvenTheGuysWantHim: He has admirers of both genders.
*EvenTheGuysWantHim: He has admirers of both genders.
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->''"You're going to die in here."''
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The Prisoners of Santobal is an unpublished work taking place in the fictional universe of The Dark Eye. It revolves around five prisoners in the diamond mine Santobal.
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* HellholePrison: Santobal is this, as all of the workers are either prisoners or slaves and work under abysmal conditions.
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The Prisoners of Santobal is an unpublished work taking place in the fictional universe of The Dark Eye. It revolves around five prisoners in the diamond mine Santobal.
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