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Cloning Blues has been renamed to Clone Angst and redefined to only be about people angsting about discovering they're a clone.
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* '''Marshal Greko Dovian''': GeneralRipper. A high-ranking commanding officer in the Tekgnos Federation who seems [[ImprobableAge a little too young for his position]]. Nevertheless, he displays an astounding [[EnfanteTerrible matured bitterness and deviousness]], as well as a more extreme variant of the Tekgnos FantasticRacism (see below). He believes that {{cyborg}}s, [[CloningBlues clones]], {{mutants}}, and [[LegoGenetics Genomods]] (people who have been genetically altered) shouldn't be given citizenship either. Dresses in a [[BadassLongcoat Badass Greatcoat]] to hide his [[PuttingOnTheReich incriminating]] CustomUniform, and StoicSpectacles.
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* '''Marshal Greko Dovian''': GeneralRipper. A high-ranking commanding officer in the Tekgnos Federation who seems [[ImprobableAge a little too young for his position]]. Nevertheless, he displays an astounding [[EnfanteTerrible matured bitterness and deviousness]], as well as a more extreme variant of the Tekgnos FantasticRacism (see below). He believes that {{cyborg}}s, [[CloningBlues clones]], clones, {{mutants}}, and [[LegoGenetics Genomods]] (people who have been genetically altered) shouldn't be given citizenship either. Dresses in a [[BadassLongcoat Badass Greatcoat]] to hide his [[PuttingOnTheReich incriminating]] CustomUniform, and StoicSpectacles.
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* TheWikiRule - It now has one, primarily serving as a place to store all that world-building information, as opposed to the original word document, which recently hit 3.56MB.
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* CoolShip - ''Kratos'', the Tekgnos flagship, rivals ''[[StarWars Executor]]'' in size and firepower. Additionally, its name should be more than enough to [[ShoutOut ring a bell]] [[VideoGame/GodOfWar to readers]]...
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* CoolShip - ''Kratos'', the Tekgnos flagship, rivals ''[[StarWars ''[[Franchise/StarWars Executor]]'' in size and firepower. Additionally, its name should be more than enough to [[ShoutOut ring a bell]] [[VideoGame/GodOfWar to readers]]...
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* '''Hermea Norfür''': TheLancer. Karan's childhood friend who regards herself as the only person in the group who can understand him. A [[WhiteMage Sanjuran]] [[NunsAreMikos Graduated Cleric]], [[RandomPowerRanking Third Class]], who serves as FirstPersonPeripheralNarrator. DeadpanSnarker by nature, and prone to [[InnerMonologue ranting to herself]] about [[LemonyNarrator various things of no particular relevance]]. One of the author's friends describes her as a female version of [[LightNovel/HaruhiSuzumiya Kyon]].
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* '''Hermea Norfür''': TheLancer. Karan's childhood friend who regards herself as the only person in the group who can understand him. A [[WhiteMage Sanjuran]] [[NunsAreMikos Graduated Cleric]], [[RandomPowerRanking Third Class]], who serves as FirstPersonPeripheralNarrator. DeadpanSnarker by nature, and prone to [[InnerMonologue ranting to herself]] about [[LemonyNarrator various things of no particular relevance]]. One of the author's friends describes her as a female version of [[LightNovel/HaruhiSuzumiya [[Literature/HaruhiSuzumiya Kyon]].
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* {{Defictionalization}} - Our Paradise originally started out as a fictional Light Novel series and Anime used in the background story of a character (a [[FunnyForeigner Funny Italian]] Seiyuu) the author roleplayed in a now-defunct ''LightNovel/HaruhiSuzumiya'' [[PlayByPostGames RP]].
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* {{Defictionalization}} - Our Paradise originally started out as a fictional Light Novel series and Anime used in the background story of a character (a [[FunnyForeigner Funny Italian]] Seiyuu) the author roleplayed in a now-defunct ''LightNovel/HaruhiSuzumiya'' ''Literature/HaruhiSuzumiya'' [[PlayByPostGames RP]].
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* RecycledInSpace - Hermea is essentially a GenderFlip [[LightNovel/HaruhiSuzumiya Kyon]] [[AC:[[RecycledInSpace In a]]]] [[AC:MedievalEuropeanFantasy]].
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* RecycledInSpace - Hermea is essentially a GenderFlip [[LightNovel/HaruhiSuzumiya [[Literature/HaruhiSuzumiya Kyon]] [[AC:[[RecycledInSpace In a]]]] [[AC:MedievalEuropeanFantasy]].
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** Reena Adverse is [[{{LightNovel/Slayers}} notorious for blowing lots of things up with fire-based attacks, her first name can easily be mistaken for a case of]] SpellMyNameWithAnS, [[{{LightNovel/Slayers}} and her last name is more or less a bastardization of "Inverse"]].
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** Reena Adverse is [[{{LightNovel/Slayers}} [[{{Literature/Slayers}} notorious for blowing lots of things up with fire-based attacks, her first name can easily be mistaken for a case of]] SpellMyNameWithAnS, [[{{LightNovel/Slayers}} [[{{Literature/Slayers}} and her last name is more or less a bastardization of "Inverse"]].
