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* SergeantRock: Fluctuates between this and TheNeidermeyer. While not incompetent or actively malicious per se Augustus is known for his terrible temper and his tendency to decide rashly and harshly. He is not above sacrificing others for his goals, but ultimately is just as devoted to his task as the more well liked Max.
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* OverrankedSoldier: Max is an Adjutant and even acted as a captain for a time due to the position being unfilled, despite being only a Mage (at least as far as the Alliance is aware) and being relatively bad at his job as a Trutzer. ''Justified'' in that he has been with the division the longest and is an all around capable and well liked officer. He is also the only one undisturbed by Augustus temper tantrums.
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* YouAreInCommandNow: Was this for a long time due to the division being short on personal. Was relieved of this by Augustus.
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!! Erik Danzer:
* Consummate Professional
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* * AntiAir: Basically what the Zwinger (coercionists) in the Bondspeople military were designed to be. DUring fights with harpies they're supposed to bring them down by using spells like "Pride goes before a fall".
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* AntiAir: Basically what his job as a Zwinger (coercionist) in the Bondspeople military is designed to be. During fights with harpies they're supposed to bring them down by using spells like "Pride goes before a fall".
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* AirborneMook: They are this to the bondspeople.
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* AntiAir: Basically what the Zwinger (coercionists) in the Bondspeople military were designed to be. DUring fights with harpies they're supposed to bring them down by using spells like "Pride goes before a fall".
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!! Ehren:
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* AntiAir: Basically what his job as a Zwinger (coercionist) in the Bondspeople military is designed to be. During fights with harpies they're supposed to bring them down by using spells like "Pride goes before a fall".
* AntiAir: Basically what his job as a Zwinger (coercionist) in the Bondspeople military is designed to be. During fights with harpies they're supposed to bring them down by using spells like "Pride goes before a fall".
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* AntiAir: Basically what the Zwinger (coercionists) in the Bondspeople military were designed to be. DUring fights with harpies they're supposed to bring them down by using spells like "Pride goes before a fall".
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* PerpetualStorm: Luv is naturally very windy due to the everchanging tides and maritime climate.
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* PerpetualStorm: Luv is naturally very windy due to the everchanging ever changing tides and maritime climate.
* WildMagic: All beings old or otherwise powerful enough will innately have magic. This magic does not follow a purpose or pattern, but rather changes the world around it in random and strange ways, such as trees growing in awkward ways and gravity defying ways.
* WildMagic: All beings old or otherwise powerful enough will innately have magic. This magic does not follow a purpose or pattern, but rather changes the world around it in random and strange ways, such as trees growing in awkward ways and gravity defying ways.
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* FunctionalMagic: To do magic one needs to acquire an Astral. Gaining an Astral also gains the Mage a spell, either a spell the being that left the Astral behind knew or one that is consistent with the beings nature. Doing a spell uses up one Astral, which only regenerates during the magic hour, during sunrise.
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* MadeOfMagic: To do magic one needs to have an Astral, an energy source that's left behind when old or otherwise powerful beings die. Astrals are bound to the person that first releases them and can only be transferred by death. Bondspeople may share Astrals.
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* SimpleYetAwesome: Flight. In a world of islands and mountains, being able to fly is one of the biggest advantages out there.
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* SpeaksFuentAnimal: In their animal form.
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* SpeaksFuentAnimal: SpeaksFluentAnimal: In their animal form.
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* AwesomeButImpractical: Lindworms are immortal and only grow stronger and larger with age, their scales are also impenetrable in most places, but they can't climb and can't swim in a world of islands and rough terrain and while being immortal is awesome, they may only have an egg once in their lifetime, so fast reproduction is not one of their strengths.
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* AwesomeButImpractical: Lindworms are immortal and only grow stronger and larger with age, their scales are also impenetrable in most places, but they can't climb and can't swim in a world of islands and rough terrain and while being immortal is awesome, they may only have an egg once in their lifetime, so fast reproduction is not one of their strengths.
strengths. This is the reason they didn't enter the First Alliance War as a cohesive unit, they'd be unable to sustain their numbers, should to many of them die during the conflict.
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!! The Allianz:
Alliance:
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* BoringButPractical: Their ability to share Astrals can sound like this. Bondspeople are regular humans with no additional strengths in a world with immortal Lizards, flying Harpies and shapechanging Tricksters. But sharing Astrals and thus enabling them to be able to cast exactly the right spell at the right time as opposed to having to wait for the owner of the spell to regenerate his Astrals gives them a huge advantage.
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* AwesomeButImpractical: Lindworms are immortal and only grow stronger and larger with age, their scales are also impenetrable in most places, but they can't climb and can't swim in a world of islands and rough terrain and while being immortal is awesome, they may only have an egg once in their lifetime, so fast reproduction is not one of their strengths.
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* SpeaksFuentAnimal: In their animal form.
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* AlwaysNight: During the winter on the southern islands.
* EndlessDaytime: During the summer the southern part of Luv experiences this.
* PerpetualStorm: Luv is naturally very windy due to the everchanging tides and maritime climate.
* EndlessDaytime: During the summer the southern part of Luv experiences this.
* PerpetualStorm: Luv is naturally very windy due to the everchanging tides and maritime climate.
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Luv is an unpublished work about the fate of the fictional archipelago Luv.
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Luv is an unpublished work about the fate of the fictional archipelago Luv.
Luv as it battles with the result of a magical war. During the war much of the islands magical resources were depleted and now the winning faction, the Allianz, is trying to gain access and control over the barely touched lands to the east, where the Trickster roam huge territories, whilst fighting against the harpies in the mountain regions.
The islands themselves range from icy cold to mild but very wet in climate and boast harsh winds and extreme tides as well, making life on these sparsely settled lands hard and unforgiving.
The islands themselves range from icy cold to mild but very wet in climate and boast harsh winds and extreme tides as well, making life on these sparsely settled lands hard and unforgiving.
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!! Harpyies:
Harpies:
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!! Trickster:
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!! Trickster:
* GenderBender: When they change, the Trickster also change into the opposite sex.
* TheMindIsAPlaythingOfTheBody: Tricksters in their animal forms must adhere to those animals instincts.
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!! The Wardens of Magic
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!! The Wardens of Magic
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* {{Shapeshifting}}: The main ability of the Trickster race.
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* VoluntaryShapeshifting: The Trickster have full control over their shifting abilities.
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* ShapeshifterModeLock: As they age beyond the life expectancy of their animal counterpart the Trickster lose the ability to change.
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* GenderBender: When they change, the Trickster also change into the opposite sex.
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* {{Animorphism}}: THe Trickster can shift into one kind of either a feline or canine animal.
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* {{Animorphism}}: THe The Trickster can shift into one kind of either a feline or canine animal.
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** {{Animorphism}}
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* {{Shapeshifting}}: The main ability of the Trickster race is to race.
* {{Animorphism}}: THe Trickster can shift into one kind of either a feline or canineor feline animal. THey lose this ability with age, being forced to stay human.
** {{Animorphism}}
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* ShapeshiftingExcludesClothing: When a Trickster changes its clothes are left behind.
* {{Animorphism}}: THe Trickster can shift into one kind of either a feline or canine
** {{Animorphism}}
* ShapeshiftingExcludesClothing: When a Trickster changes its clothes are left behind.
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** {{Animorphism}}
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* Shapeshifting: {{Shapeshifting}}: The main ability of the Trickster race is to shift into either a canine or feline animal. THey lose this ability with age, being forced to stay human.
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* AllAbusersAreMale: Sadly ''Averted''. While Nikolasz father was severly neglectful of him growing up he never laid a hand on him. Adrians mother on the other hand is mentioned to have often slapped her son.
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* AllAbusersAreMale: Sadly ''Averted''. While Nikolasz father was severly neglectful Shapeshifting: The main ability of him growing up he never laid a hand on him. Adrians mother on the other hand Trickster race is mentioned to have often slapped her son.
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->''Natalia is in the process of discovering that hard work sometimes just isn't enough.''
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->''And the less is said about Nikolasz privat life, the better.''
->''Natalia is in the process of discovering that hard work sometimes just isn't enough.''
->''Kevin struggles to balance both his parents expectations with his nightly excesses as well as not flunking his exams.''
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->''Kevin struggles to balance both his parents expectations with his nightly excesses as well as not flunking his exams.''
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The Myer Briggs Test is an unpublished work revolving around a group of four students, Mihàly, Henriette, Kevin and Natalia, assigned to do a project on the Myer Briggs test together. During this they discover a lot about each other and themselves.
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!! The group as a whole exhibits the following tropes:
* FourTemperamentEnsemble: With Natalia as the Sanguine, Henriette as the Choleric, Kevin as the Phlegmatic and Nikolasz as the Melancholic.
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!! The group as a whole exhibits the following tropes:
* FourTemperamentEnsemble: With Natalia as the Sanguine, Henriette as the Choleric, Kevin as the Phlegmatic and Nikolasz as the Melancholic.
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* FourTemperamentEnsemble: With Natalia as the Sanguine, Henriette as the Choleric, Kevin as the Phlegmatic and Nikolasz as the Melancholic.
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->''Henriette has a decision to make that could change her happy relationship forever.''
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->''And the less is said about Nikolasz privat life, the better.''
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* AllAbusersAreMale: Sadly ''Averted''. While Nikolasz father was severly neglectful of him growing up he never laid a hand on him. Adrians mother on the other hand is mentioned to have often slapped her son.
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!! The group as a whole exhibits the following tropes:
* FourTemperamentEnsemble: With Natalia as the Sanguine, Henriette as the Choleric, Kevin as the Phlegmatic and Nikolasz as the Melancholic.
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->''Henriette has a decision to make that could change her happy relationship forever.''
->''Natalia is in the process of discovering that hard work sometimes just isn't enough.''
->''Kevin struggles to balance both his parents expectations with his nightly excesses as well as not flunking his exams.''
->''And the less is said about Nikolasz privat life, the better.''
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* AllAbusersAreMale: Sadly ''Averted''. While Nikolasz father was severly neglectful of him growing up he never laid a hand on him. Adrians mother on the other hand is mentioned to have often slapped her son.
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!! The group as a whole exhibits the following tropes:
* FourTemperamentEnsemble: With Natalia as the Sanguine, Henriette as the Choleric, Kevin as the Phlegmatic and Nikolasz as the Melancholic.
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