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* DangerousDeserter: Jax.
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* DangerousDeserter: Jax.Jax; she has little to lose but her own life.
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* SympatheticPOV: A major theme of the comic. While BuzzLightyearOfStarCommand's main focus is on the best of the best, Line Rockets follows the story of an overconfident but successful criminal turned depressed, JadedWashout being put through a system that favors only the inhumanly good, or at least those who are percieved as such, after experiencing a traumatic event and betrayal.
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* DarkerAndEdgier: Than [[BuzzLightyearOfStarCommand?from=Main.BuzzLightyearOfStarCommand Buzz Lightyear of Star Command]], which is a major goal of the comic.
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* DarkerAndEdgier: Than [[BuzzLightyearOfStarCommand?from=Main.BuzzLightyearOfStarCommand Buzz Lightyear of Star Command]], BuzzLightyearofStarCommand, which is a major goal of the comic.
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* DarkerAndEdgier: ThanBuzzLightyearofStarCommand, Than [[BuzzLightyearOfStarCommand?from=Main.BuzzLightyearOfStarCommand Buzz Lightyear of Star Command]], which is a major goal of the comic.
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* FamilyUnfriendlyViolence: Unlike the original series, bullets do, in fact, cause damage to the targets they hit.
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* BloodKnight: Jax, full stop.
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* BrokenBird: Jax, full stop.Jax.
* [[CrapsaccharineWorld Crapsaccharine Galaxy]]: One of the major points of the comic is to deconstruct the [[AnthropicPrinciple suspiciously]] AdventureFriendlyWorld of the original series.
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* GameFace: Despite having heat powers Jax is not particularly HotBlooded. But she [[GlowingEyesOfDoom shines]] [[ SlasherSmile maybe a little too brightly]] in combat.
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* GameFace: Despite having heat powers Jax is not particularly HotBlooded. But she [[GlowingEyesOfDoom shines]] [[ SlasherSmile [[SlasherSmile maybe a little too brightly]] in combat.
* ObnoxiousSnarker: XR. Jax is not amused.
* PsychoForHire: Jax, in earlier years. Ves could be considered this, but [[DragonWithAnAgenda he's only ever worked for Zod.]]
* SpaceElves: Azians have three eyes, sharp teeth, and are far from elegant, but the initial concept is pretty much the same.
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* WinYourFreedomWinYourFreedom
* WretchedHive: Trade World, where nearly all of the flashbacks take place.
* WretchedHive: Trade World, where nearly all of the flashbacks take place.
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* TryingToCatchMeFightingDirty: Jax, and most of the other criminals.
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* [[BenevolentBoss The contractor, contractor,]] Curently nameless, [[AffablyEvil a friend to Ochak Ochak]] and the person who initially introduces Jax to crime.
* AttentionWhore, ShrinkingViolet: Jax and XR, respectively.
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* CantActPervertedTowardALoveInterest: Though it might just be "Can't Act Perverted Toward someone you are worried might kill you for being annoying.Someone You Are Worried Might Kill You For Being Annoying." It's hard to say.
* CheshireCatGrin: It unfortunately makes Jax hard to trust. Ves too, [[SlasherSmile but you shouldn't trust him anyway.]]
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** And the second time [[spoiler: when on a mission that breaks the boundaries of her biology, [[YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefulness her brother shoots her in the stomach at close range and leaves her for dead;]] revealing that [[DespairEventHorizon Zod had been aware of her undercover status the beginning.]]]]
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** And the second time [[spoiler: when on a mission that [[KillItWithIce breaks the boundaries of her biology, biology,]] [[YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefulness her brother shoots her in the stomach at close range and leaves her for dead;]] revealing that [[DespairEventHorizon Zod had been aware of her undercover status the beginning.]]]]
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* SoftspokenSadist: Ves.
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* [[spoiler: IntimateHealing: After the DespairEventHorizon; XR does his best.]]
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* [[spoiler: Robosexual: Natch.]]
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* JerkassWoobie: [[JerkassWoobie Jerkass Woobie]]: Jax.
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** And the second time [[spoiler: when on a mission that breaks the boundaries of her biology, [[YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefulness her brother shoots her in the stomach at close range and leaves her for dead;]] revealing that [[DespairEventHorizon Zod had never been fooled all along.]]aware of her undercover status the beginning.]]]]
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* [[spoiler: CainAndAbel]]
* DangerousDeserter: Jax.
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* KickTheDog: [[spoiler: Jax gives away valuable information, [[InterrogatedForNothing but that wasn't the]] [[PastVictimShowcase point of the capture.]]]]
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* KickTheDog: [[spoiler: Twice,
**Once,[[spoiler: When a rival gang captures her, Jax gives away valuable information, [[InterrogatedForNothing but that wasn't the]] [[PastVictimShowcase point of the capture.]]]]]]]]
** And the second time [[spoiler: when on a mission that breaks the boundaries of her biology, [[YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefulness her brother shoots her in the stomach at close range and leaves her for dead;]] revealing that Zod had never been fooled all along.]]
**Once,[[spoiler: When a rival gang captures her, Jax gives away valuable information, [[InterrogatedForNothing but that wasn't the]] [[PastVictimShowcase point of the capture.
** And the second time [[spoiler: when on a mission that breaks the boundaries of her biology, [[YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefulness her brother shoots her in the stomach at close range and leaves her for dead;]] revealing that Zod had never been fooled all along.]]
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-->-- '''Contracter'''
'''Contractor'''
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* [[spoiler: PreClimaxClimax]]
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'''''Line Rockets''''' is an in-progress [[BuzzLightyearOfStarCommand Buzz Lightyear of Star Command]] fan comic about an convict named Jax who, in exchange for early release from prison, agrees to assist Star Command in infiltrating and taking down a drug ring she used to be a part of. You can read it [[http://hazard-girl.deviantart.com/gallery/46961217 here.]]
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'''''Line Rockets''''' is an in-progress [[BuzzLightyearOfStarCommand Buzz Lightyear of Star Command]] fan comic about an a convict named Jax who, in exchange for early release from prison, agrees to assist Star Command in infiltrating and taking down a drug ring she used to be a part of. You can read it [[http://hazard-girl.deviantart.com/gallery/46961217 here.]]
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* CynicismCatalyst: Jax's [[ColdBloodedTorture capture by a rival gang]].
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* CynicismCatalyst: [[spoiler: Jax's [[ColdBloodedTorture capture by a rival gang]].]]
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* KickTheDog: [[spoiler: Jax gives away valuable information, [[InterrogatedForNothing but that wasn't the]] [[PastVictimShowcase point of the capture.]]]]]]
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* CynicismCatalyst: Jax's [[ColdBloodedTorture capture by a rival gang]].
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* [[Antihero]]: Both Jax and XR, though whether or not they qualify as "heroes" is up for debate.
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* [[Antihero]]: {{Antihero}}: Both Jax and XR, though whether or not they qualify as "heroes" is up for debate.
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* MagicVersusScience/[[Magitek]]: MagicVersusScience/{{Magitek}}: Jax and XR's partnership, loosely.
* NobleSpaceSavage: Azians (Jax and Ves's species.)
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* WinYourFreedom
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'''''Line Rockets''''' is a [[BuzzLightyearOfStarCommand Buzz Lightyear of Star Command]] fan comic about an convict named Jax who, in exchange for early release from prison, agrees to assist Star Command in infiltrating and taking down a drug ring she used to be a part of.
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'''''Line Rockets''''' is a an in-progress [[BuzzLightyearOfStarCommand Buzz Lightyear of Star Command]] fan comic about an convict named Jax who, in exchange for early release from prison, agrees to assist Star Command in infiltrating and taking down a drug ring she used to be a part of.
of. You can read it [[http://hazard-girl.deviantart.com/gallery/46961217 here.]]
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* [[Antihero]]: Both Jax and XR, though whether or not they qualify as "heroes" is up for debate.
* [[Antihero]]: Both Jax and XR, though whether or not they qualify as "heroes" is up for debate.
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* ThirdEye: Jax and Ves.Ves.
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* WinYourFreedom
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* RedOniBlueOni: Jax and Ves, respectively.
* SociopathicHero: Jax, but [[YMMV/HomePage YMMV]].
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* BelligerentSexualTension: Just another one of the many conflicts Jax and XR find themselves in.
* BlackAndGreyMorality: Discussed.
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* CigaretteOfAnxiety: And Jax is anxious a lot.
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Through a ContrivedCoincidence XR, who Jax is not fond of, becomes Jax's partner; and the two are forced to put up with each other for the duration of the mission.
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* [[DiabolicalMastermind Zod]], Jax's former boss, now the head of the large operation the "good guys" "[[WellIntentionedExtremist good guys]]" are attempting to dismantle.
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* SourOutsideSadInside: I wonder who?
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* ThirdEye: Jax and Ves.
* ThirdEye: Jax and Ves.
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->''"So what do you say? A little easy work for a little leeway."''
-->-- '''Contracter'''
'''''Line Rockets''''' is a [[BuzzLightyearOfStarCommand Buzz Lightyear of Star Command]] fan comic about an convict named Jax who, in exchange for early release from prison, agrees to assist Star Command in infiltrating and taking down a drug ring she used to be a part of.
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!!Dear Tropers, this comic provides examples of:
* PlayingWithFire: Both Jax, Ves, and presumably all others of their species.
->''"So what do you say? A little easy work for a little leeway."''
-->-- '''Contracter'''
'''''Line Rockets''''' is a [[BuzzLightyearOfStarCommand Buzz Lightyear of Star Command]] fan comic about an convict named Jax who, in exchange for early release from prison, agrees to assist Star Command in infiltrating and taking down a drug ring she used to be a part of.
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!!Dear Tropers, this comic provides examples of:
* PlayingWithFire: Both Jax, Ves, and presumably all others of their species.
