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''Intertwined Reimagined'' is a Website/{{Wattpad}} book by Tropers/{{IAmHoussem17}} and Watermelon Caticorn. It is based on the previous series consisting of ''Literature/{{Intertwined}}'' and ''Literature/IntertwinedIITheLostSpirits'' and features the same characters while having [[ContinuityReboot a different plot]] that introduces new ones.
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''Intertwined Reimagined'' is a Website/{{Wattpad}} Platform/{{Wattpad}} book by Tropers/{{IAmHoussem17}} and Watermelon Caticorn. It is based on the previous series consisting of ''Literature/{{Intertwined}}'' and ''Literature/IntertwinedIITheLostSpirits'' and features the same characters while having [[ContinuityReboot a different plot]] that introduces new ones.
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** Of the parents, Samuel, Dianna, Mark, Sophie and Norman.
** Surprisingly, Arthur and Gerald too.
** Surprisingly, Arthur and Gerald too.
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** Amy's father [[spoiler:Liam]] Thornton and [[spoiler: the Black Hats leader preceding Harold Liam]].
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** Amy's father [[spoiler:Liam]] Thornton and Thornton, [[spoiler: the Black Hats leader preceding Harold Liam]].Harold, and Liam West, one of the hired criminals of the Black Hats]].
** Protagonists Matthew and Michael share names with two of the hired criminals.
** Nathan Norton and Nathaniel Newman.
** Protagonists Matthew and Michael share names with two of the hired criminals.
** Nathan Norton and Nathaniel Newman.
** The Black Hats leader preceding Harold, Liam.
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** [[spoiler:Gerald]]'s codename while in disguise is [[UsefulNotes/{{Blackbeard}} Edward Teach]].
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** [[spoiler:Gerald]]'s codename while in disguise is [[UsefulNotes/{{Blackbeard}} Edward Teach]].Thatch]].
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* UsedToBeASweetKid: According to Dianna, her husband Jack used to be a lot nicer than he is now.
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* UsedToBeASweetKid: UsedToBeASweetKid:
** According to Dianna, her husband Jack used to be a lot nicer than he isnow.now.
** [[spoiler:Downplayed with Francis. He didn't become a {{jerkass}} towards his brother Derrick, just distant and a bit snarky]].
** According to Dianna, her husband Jack used to be a lot nicer than he is
** [[spoiler:Downplayed with Francis. He didn't become a {{jerkass}} towards his brother Derrick, just distant and a bit snarky]].
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* VillainWithGoodPublicity: Mason [[spoiler:turns out to have built this reputation to use in his plan to make sure a lot of people would believe him when he frames Jordan as his abusive ex]].
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* VillainWithGoodPublicity: VillainWithGoodPublicity:
** Mason [[spoiler:turns out to have built this reputation to use in his plan to make sure a lot of people would believe him when he frames Jordan as his abusiveex]].ex]].
** Kyle presents himself as affable to the public for the sake of his company.
** Mason [[spoiler:turns out to have built this reputation to use in his plan to make sure a lot of people would believe him when he frames Jordan as his abusive
** Kyle presents himself as affable to the public for the sake of his company.
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** Kyle finally reveals who is Liam that he always mentions:
-->'''Kyle:''' Liam was our friend back then. Liam [[spoiler: Thornton]].
-->'''Kyle:''' Liam was our friend back then. Liam [[spoiler: Thornton]].
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* AffablyEvil: He's polite for a PunchClockVillain.
* TokenGoodTeammate: The nicest of the bunch.
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* ItAmusedMe: He engages in reckless driving because he enjoys it.
* OneSteveLimit: Shares his first name with protagonist Matthew.
* OneSteveLimit: Shares his first name with protagonist Matthew.
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* BadassDriver: He might drive crazy, but he's really good at it.
* CommonalityConnection: He gets along with Jacey because they both like smoking marijuana.
* DrivesLikeCrazy: He's a joyrider, and ''absolutely loves it''.
* ItAmusedMe:He Unlike most of his teammates who are {{Punch Clock Villain}}s, he engages in reckless driving crime because he enjoys it.
reckless driving.
* OneSteveLimit: Shares his first name with protagonist Matthew. The latter is unamused when he finds out.
* CommonalityConnection: He gets along with Jacey because they both like smoking marijuana.
* DrivesLikeCrazy: He's a joyrider, and ''absolutely loves it''.
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* OneSteveLimit: Shares his first name with protagonist Matthew. The latter is unamused when he finds out.
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* {{Jerkass}}: The most meanspirited of the bunch.
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* {{Jerkass}}: The most meanspirited of the bunch.He's very pushy and rude to his teammates.
* TokenEvilTeammate: The most meanspirited of the bunch.
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* CommonalityConnection: She gets along with Matthew because they both like smoking marijuana.
* TheStoner: Like Matt, she likes smoking weed.
* TheStoner: Like Matt, she likes smoking weed.
** Most of the people they hire are perfectly sound and approachable individuals as well.
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* AntiVillain: Most of the Black Hats members are this, they're morally ambiguous and seem to only target people worse than them, or people who betrayed them and thus they feel justified in getting revenge against.
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* AntiVillain: Most of the Black Hats members are this, they're morally ambiguous and seem to only target people worse than them, or people who betrayed them and thus they feel justified in getting revenge against. Their hired help are also {{Punch Clock Villain}}s at worst.
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** "I cried for help silently...[[VideoGame/{{Undertale}} but nobody came]]." Repeated by victims of abuse. Those being Jordan, Mara and her mother Dianna.
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* BigBrotherBully: Xavier is this towards Mara until he gets better.
* BigBrotherInstinct: Part of Xavier's CharacterDevelopment is gaining one of these for his sister Mara.
* CainAndAbel: The book has an interesting variation on this. [[spoiler:You have the AloofBigBrother Francis as Cain while the NiceGuy Derrick is Abel. It's Abel in this case that kills Cain, albeit accidentally]].
* BigBrotherInstinct: Part of Xavier's CharacterDevelopment is gaining one of these for his sister Mara.
* CainAndAbel: The book has an interesting variation on this. [[spoiler:You have the AloofBigBrother Francis as Cain while the NiceGuy Derrick is Abel. It's Abel in this case that kills Cain, albeit accidentally]].
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* BigBrotherBully: BigBrotherBully:
** Xavier is this towards Mara until he gets better.
** [[spoiler:Francis is a downplayed example. After becoming jealous of Derrick, he never went out of his way to bully him, he just distanced himself while occasionally making passive aggressive comments]].
*BigBrotherInstinct: BigBrotherInstinct:
** Part of Xavier's CharacterDevelopment is gaining one of these for his sister Mara.
** John has [[KnightTemplarBigBrother the extreme version]] of this for Gerald.
** [[spoiler:Francis used to have this for Derrick when they were younger, but it disappeared as their relationship worsened in adulthood]].
*CainAndAbel: CainAndAbel:
** Xavier is Cain while Mara and Kata are Abels.
** The book has an interesting variation on this. [[spoiler:You have the AloofBigBrother Francis as Cain while the NiceGuy Derrick is Abel. It's Abel in this case that kills Cain, albeit accidentally]].
** Xavier is this towards Mara until he gets better.
** [[spoiler:Francis is a downplayed example. After becoming jealous of Derrick, he never went out of his way to bully him, he just distanced himself while occasionally making passive aggressive comments]].
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** Part of Xavier's CharacterDevelopment is gaining one of these for his sister Mara.
** John has [[KnightTemplarBigBrother the extreme version]] of this for Gerald.
** [[spoiler:Francis used to have this for Derrick when they were younger, but it disappeared as their relationship worsened in adulthood]].
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** Xavier is Cain while Mara and Kata are Abels.
** The book has an interesting variation on this. [[spoiler:You have the AloofBigBrother Francis as Cain while the NiceGuy Derrick is Abel. It's Abel in this case that kills Cain, albeit accidentally]].
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* CreateYourOwnHero: The Black Hats tends to make people rise to defeat them with their actions, notable examples being [[spoiler:Derrick who wants to protect his daughter Eliza, Karen who wants revenge for her wrecked property and even Kyle pulls a HeelFaceTurn when [[EvenEvilHasStandards he hears they killed Norman's wife]]]].
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* CreateYourOwnHero: The Black Hats tends to make people rise to defeat them with their actions, notable examples being [[spoiler:Derrick who wants to protect his daughter Eliza, Karen who wants revenge for her wrecked property and even Kyle pulls a HeelFaceTurn when [[EvenEvilHasStandards he hears they killed Norman's wife]]]].
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* EvilAllAlong: Downplayed with [[spoiler: Eliza's father Derrick. He was revealed to be disguised as Jake and working for the heroes, but he also planned to use the situation to his advantage so he can hide his murder of his brother Francis]].
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* EvilAllAlong: EvilAllAlong:
** Downplayed with [[spoiler: Eliza's father Derrick. He was revealed to be disguised as Jake and working for the heroes, but he also planned to use the situation to his advantage so he can hide his murder of his brotherFrancis]].Francis]].
** Played straight with [[spoiler:Karen aka Michelle, who posed as mild mannered employee when in reality she was a criminal plotting for revenge against the Black Hats]].
** Downplayed with [[spoiler: Eliza's father Derrick. He was revealed to be disguised as Jake and working for the heroes, but he also planned to use the situation to his advantage so he can hide his murder of his brother
** Played straight with [[spoiler:Karen aka Michelle, who posed as mild mannered employee when in reality she was a criminal plotting for revenge against the Black Hats]].
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** Karen and Jake [[spoiler:both working together to bring down the Black Hats from the inside]].
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** Karen Michelle and Jake [[spoiler:both working together to bring down the Black Hats from the inside]].
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* InternalReveal: The audience is already aware ahead of time that [[spoiler:Arthur is in fact Jeremy]] thanks to a flashback. The characters InUniverse only find out [[spoiler:after his death by listening to a voice message he recorded]].
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* InternalReveal: InternalReveal:
** The audience is already aware ahead of time that [[spoiler:Arthur is in fact Jeremy]] thanks to a flashback. The characters InUniverse only find out [[spoiler:after his death by listening to a voice message herecorded]].recorded]].
** The characters don't also find out that [[spoiler:Kate is Arthur's wife's murderer until Kyle's HeelFaceTurn]].
** The audience is already aware ahead of time that [[spoiler:Arthur is in fact Jeremy]] thanks to a flashback. The characters InUniverse only find out [[spoiler:after his death by listening to a voice message he
** The characters don't also find out that [[spoiler:Kate is Arthur's wife's murderer until Kyle's HeelFaceTurn]].
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** "But nobody came" that are used as ArcWords here were also used that way in ''VideoGame/{{Undertale}}''.
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* TwoGirlsToATeam: Michelle and Kate are the only female Black Hats members we see.
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* TwoGirlsToATeam: Michelle and Kate are the only official female Black Hats members we see.
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* BestFriend: One of Leah's best friends, alongside Sam.
* OddNameOut: The only one in his circle without an AlliterativeName.
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* AlliterativeName: All of the criminals hired by the Black Hats, except for Liam West.
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!Hired Criminals
These people are not official members of TheSyndicate, but rather people hired by the Black Hats to assist them in exchange for payment.
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!!Leah
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[[folder:Nathaniel]]
!!Nathaniel
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* OneSteveLimit: One of his fellow criminals is called Nathan.
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* NiceGuy: Among the nicest in the group.
* OneSteveLimit: He shares his name with two other Liams in the story: [[spoiler:Amy's father and the Black Hats leader preceding Harold]].
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[[folder:Matthew]]
!!Matthew
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* ItAmusedMe: He engages in reckless driving because he enjoys it.
* OneSteveLimit: Shares his first name with protagonist Matthew.
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* {{Jerkass}}: The most meanspirited of the bunch.
* OneSteveLimit Shares his first name with protagonist Michael.
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* BestFriend: She's one of Leah's besties, the other being Liam.
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[[folder:Jasmine]]
[[folder:Seth]]
[[folder:Nathan]]
These people are not official members of TheSyndicate, but rather people hired by the Black Hats to assist them in exchange for payment.
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!!Leah
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!!Nathaniel
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* OneSteveLimit: One of his fellow criminals is called Nathan.
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!!Liam
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* NiceGuy: Among the nicest in the group.
* OneSteveLimit: He shares his name with two other Liams in the story: [[spoiler:Amy's father and the Black Hats leader preceding Harold]].
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* ItAmusedMe: He engages in reckless driving because he enjoys it.
* OneSteveLimit: Shares his first name with protagonist Matthew.
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!!Michael
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* {{Jerkass}}: The most meanspirited of the bunch.
* OneSteveLimit Shares his first name with protagonist Michael.
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!!Sam
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* BestFriend: She's one of Leah's besties, the other being Liam.
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[[folder:Jacey]]
[[folder:Jasmine]]
[[folder:Seth]]
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* AmicablyDivorced: Jordan's parents Lizzie and Daniel are divorced but on good terms, and Daniel occasionally visits the two.
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* SmartPeopleWearGlasses: Michelle has glasses (albeit fake ones to help hide her face a bit) and she's pretty good with computers.
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* EmotionlessGirl: Most of the time, Michelle doesn't really emote, maybe even more than John.
* HeelFaceRevolvingDoor: At first, Michelle is a villain working for the Black Hats, then she allies herself with Derrick and the heroes to take them down, THEN returns to her evil ways after all is said and done. And once she's arrested, she agrees to surrender what she knows about the Black Hats to help take them down.
* ManipulativeBitch: She's playing the part of an uninterested employee to trick the Black Hats while she plans to take them down.
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* PerpetualFrowner: She's not seen smiling once. Once we learn of her background, it makes sense.
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* WhenSheSmiles: When Gerald visits her in the finale.
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* FemmeFatale: Kate is attractive, seductive and really, really dangerous to get involved with.
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* EvenEvilHasStandards: Kate might be the resident evil seductress, but she explicitly states that she's above using her charm on someone much younger than her or forcibly seduce someone.
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* EvenEvilHasStandards: EvenEvilHasStandards:
** Kate might be the resident evil seductress, but she explicitly states that she's above using her charm on someone much younger than her or forcibly seducesomeone.someone.
** She was also horrified when she found out [[spoiler:Harold planned to betray her]].
** Kate might be the resident evil seductress, but she explicitly states that she's above using her charm on someone much younger than her or forcibly seduce
** She was also horrified when she found out [[spoiler:Harold planned to betray her]].
* EvilFeelsGood: She enjoys committing crimes and openly expresses it a lot.
* FauxAffablyEvil: With most men when she's conning them into doing her bidding.
* HiddenDepths: Kate might seem less intelligent than her peers when it comes to planning, but apparently she's really good at card games.
* PsychoForHire: Unlike John, Kate really enjoys the assassinations she gets to do.
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* GreaterScopeVillain: [[spoiler:NEARLY everything bad that happens in the story can be traced back to him. Had he not planned for Jeremy to kill Norman's wife, have his own wife killed by Melissa then torture him and try to kill him, the story would've gone a very different way]].
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* GreaterScopeVillain: [[spoiler:NEARLY everything bad that happens in the story can be traced back to him. Had he not planned for Jeremy to kill Norman's wife, have his own wife killed by Melissa Kate then torture him and try to kill him, the story would've gone a very different way]].
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* LovableAlphaBitch: She becomes a lot more likable after breaking away from her mother.
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* AlphaBitch: She's known in school for being mean and seeing everyone beneath her.
* FreudianExcuse: Her dad's absence left her vulnerable to her mother's manipulation and led to her becoming as unpleasant as possible to try and appease her.
* TheFriendNobodyLikes: She's very unpopular amongst her peers, even the ones who are known for being mean towards everyone else.
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* StarterVillain: Amy is the first antagonist encountered in the journey, and she actually [[StarterVillainStays continues to be important to the plot]] (albeit still incompetent) [[spoiler:till she eventually reforms]].
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* StarterVillain: Amy is the first antagonist encountered in the journey, and she actually [[StarterVillainStays journey.
* StarterVillainStays: She continues to be important to theplot]] plot after her introduction (albeit still incompetent) [[spoiler:till she eventually reforms]].
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* BigBad: The first true threat in the story before the appearance of the Black hats.Hats.
