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* ButtMonkey: Borygmus does ''not'' have a good time here.

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* ButtMonkey: TheChewToy: Borygmus does ''not'' have a good time here.
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* {{Acrofatic}}: Downplayed; while the main character can run fast, anything beyond that is a challenge for him.

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* {{Acrofatic}}: Downplayed; while the main character can certainly run fast, anything beyond that is a challenge for him.



* EldritchLocation: The hospital the story takes place in look normal at first, but starts to become dark and dreay upon tye realization that something's wrong. Hallways and rooms seem to replicate and go on forever, and the building gains qualities similar to a sunny jungle or forest the further you go in...despite the outside being AlwaysNight. [[spoiler: It's also meant to "protect" anyone who resents the outside world for any reason, turning them into strange monsters, making them undetectable from others, & drawing them in. Anyone who wants to leave will be [[DeadlyEuphemism convinced otherwise]], since that will likely make others leave.]]

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* EldritchLocation: The hospital the story takes place in look normal at first, but starts to become dark and dreay upon tye realization that something's wrong. Hallways and rooms seem to replicate and go on forever, and the building gains qualities similar to a sunny jungle or forest the further you go in...despite the outside being AlwaysNight. [[spoiler: It's also meant to "protect" anyone who resents the outside world for any reason, turning them into strange monsters, making them undetectable from others, & drawing them in. Anyone who wants to leave will be [[DeadlyEuphemism convinced otherwise]], since that will likely make others want to leave.]]



* ShoutOut: Steelie is likely a reference to [[Music/SteelyDan Steely Dan]]. The fact that he's a doctor could be a reference to "Doctor Wu", a song from his "Katy Lied" album.

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* ShoutOut: Steelie is likely a reference to [[Music/SteelyDan Steely Dan]]. The fact that he's a doctor could be a reference to "Doctor Wu", a song from his Steely Dan's "Katy Lied" album.

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* EldritchLocation: The hospital the story takes place in look normal at first, but starts to become dark and dreay upon tye realization that something's wrong. Hallways and rooms seem to replicate and go on forever, and the building gains qualities similar to a sunny jungle or forest the further you go in...despite the outside being AlwaysNight. [[spoiler: It's also meant to "protect" anyone who resents the outside world for any reason, turning them into strange monsters and drawing them in. Anyone who wants to leave will be [[DeadlyEuphemism convinced otherwise]], since that will likely make others leave.]]

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* EldritchLocation: The hospital the story takes place in look normal at first, but starts to become dark and dreay upon tye realization that something's wrong. Hallways and rooms seem to replicate and go on forever, and the building gains qualities similar to a sunny jungle or forest the further you go in...despite the outside being AlwaysNight. [[spoiler: It's also meant to "protect" anyone who resents the outside world for any reason, turning them into strange monsters and monsters, making them undetectable from others, & drawing them in. Anyone who wants to leave will be [[DeadlyEuphemism convinced otherwise]], since that will likely make others leave.]]



* {{Foreshadowing}}: Despite being in it, Borygmus can't seem to remember the name of the hospital, and very few people seemed to be there at the start kf the story. [[spoiler: Likely because it's not one at all.]]

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* {{Foreshadowing}}: Despite being in it, Borygmus can't seem to remember the name of the hospital, and very few people seemed to be there at the start kf of the story. [[spoiler: Likely because it's not one at all.]]
** You'd think that more people would notice a lizard-like humanoid walking around, even if he covered himself. [[spoiler: Turns out they couldn't see him.
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* StuckInTheDoorway: Becuase of his stomach, the title character often has trouble getting through small spaces, and proves to be a problem when he's trying to hide in tight areas.

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* StuckInTheDoorway: Becuase of his stomach, the title character often has trouble getting through small spaces, and which proves to be a problem when he's trying to hide in tight areas.hide.
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* EldritchLocation: The hospital the story takes place in look normal at first, but starts to become dark and dreay upon realizing that something's wrong. Hallways and rooms seem to replicate and go on forever, and the building gains qualities similar to a sunny jungle or forest the further you go in...despite the outside being AlwaysNight. [[spoiler: It's also meant to "protect" anyone who resents the outside world for any reason, turning them into things less human and drawing them in. Anyone who wants to leave will be [[DeadlyEuphemism convinced otherwise]], since that will likely make others leave.]]

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* EldritchLocation: The hospital the story takes place in look normal at first, but starts to become dark and dreay upon realizing tye realization that something's wrong. Hallways and rooms seem to replicate and go on forever, and the building gains qualities similar to a sunny jungle or forest the further you go in...despite the outside being AlwaysNight. [[spoiler: It's also meant to "protect" anyone who resents the outside world for any reason, turning them into things less human strange monsters and drawing them in. Anyone who wants to leave will be [[DeadlyEuphemism convinced otherwise]], since that will likely make others leave.]]



* {{Foreshadowing}}: Despite being in it, Borygmus can't seem to remember the name of the hospital, and very few people seemed to be there. [[spoiler: Likely because it's not one at all.]]

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* {{Foreshadowing}}: Despite being in it, Borygmus can't seem to remember the name of the hospital, and very few people seemed to be there.there at the start kf the story. [[spoiler: Likely because it's not one at all.]]
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* ShoutOut: Steelie is likely a reference to [[Music/SteelyDan Steely Dan]]. The fact that he's a doctor could be a reference to "Doctor Wu", a song from his "Katy Lied" album.

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* BigBad: Steelie, the doctor maintaining the hospital.



* EldritchLocation: The hospital the story takes place in look normal at first, but starts to become dark and dreay upon realizing that something's wrong. Hallways and rooms seem to replicate and go on forever, a d the building gains qualities similar to a sunny jungle or forest the further you go in...despite the outside being AlwaysNight. [[spoiler: It's also meant to "protect" anyone who resents the outside world for any reason, turning them into things less human and drawing them in.]]

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* EldritchLocation: The hospital the story takes place in look normal at first, but starts to become dark and dreay upon realizing that something's wrong. Hallways and rooms seem to replicate and go on forever, a d and the building gains qualities similar to a sunny jungle or forest the further you go in...despite the outside being AlwaysNight. [[spoiler: It's also meant to "protect" anyone who resents the outside world for any reason, turning them into things less human and drawing them in. Anyone who wants to leave will be [[DeadlyEuphemism convinced otherwise]], since that will likely make others leave.]]



* {{Foreshadowing}}: Despite being in it, Borygmus can't seem to remember the name of the hospital, and very few people seemed to be there. [[spoiler: Likely because it's not one at all.]]



* MorallyAmbiguousDoctorate: Steelie, given that he's giving Borygmus fruit that alters his physiology, and seems to view everything in the hospital in the most casual manner.
* OnlySaneMan: Even with other characters that aren't actively trying to kill him, Borygmus seems to be the only one who acknowledges the situation and is actively trying to get out.

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* MorallyAmbiguousDoctorate: Steelie, given that he's giving Borygmus fruit that alters his physiology, and seems to view everything in the hospital in the most casual manner.
manner. [[spoiler: Then it turns out he's [[HumanoidAbomination not exactly a doctor...]]]]
* OnlySaneMan: Even with other characters that aren't actively trying to kill him, Borygmus seems to be the only one who acknowledges the situation and is actively trying to get out. [[spoiler: Though that's mainly because they don't wish to leave.]]
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* EldritchLocation: The hospital the story takes place in look normal at first, but starts to become dark and dreay upon realizing that something's wrong. Hallways and rooms seem to replicate and go on forever, a d the building gains qualities similar to a sunny jungle or forest the further you go in...despite the outside being AlwaysNight. [[spoilers: It's also meant to "protect" anyone who resents the outside world for any reason, turning them into things less human and drawing them in.]]

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* EldritchLocation: The hospital the story takes place in look normal at first, but starts to become dark and dreay upon realizing that something's wrong. Hallways and rooms seem to replicate and go on forever, a d the building gains qualities similar to a sunny jungle or forest the further you go in...despite the outside being AlwaysNight. [[spoilers: [[spoiler: It's also meant to "protect" anyone who resents the outside world for any reason, turning them into things less human and drawing them in.]]
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* EldritchLocation: The hospital the story takes place in starts off normal at first, but gains qualities similar to a sunny jungle or forest the further you go in...despite the outside being AlwaysNight.

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* EldritchLocation: The hospital the story takes place in starts off look normal at first, but starts to become dark and dreay upon realizing that something's wrong. Hallways and rooms seem to replicate and go on forever, a d the building gains qualities similar to a sunny jungle or forest the further you go in...despite the outside being AlwaysNight. [[spoilers: It's also meant to "protect" anyone who resents the outside world for any reason, turning them into things less human and drawing them in.]]
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* MorallyAmbiguousDoctorate: Steelie, given that he's giving Borygmus fruit that alters his physiology, and seems to view everything in the hospital in the most casual manner.

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* ButtMonkey: Borygmus does ''not'' have a good time here.



* GrowlingGut: The title character's stomach often growls from hunger or indigestion, especially from the fruit he eats.



* StuckInTheDoorway: Becuase of his stomach, the title character often has trouble getting through small spaces, including some hiding spaces.

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* StuckInTheDoorway: Becuase of his stomach, the title character often has trouble getting through small spaces, including some hiding spaces.and proves to be a problem when he's trying to hide in tight areas.

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Borygmus, a cranky & introverted man who resents attention, is suddenly turned into a lizard-man. He tries to remedy this by eating various fruits prescribed by his [[MorallyAmbiguousDoctorate "doctor"]]. However, these fruits remove any ailment ''except'' his condition, while giving him weird power-ups. On top of this, he's attacked by other [[HumanoidAbomination mutated patients]] who seem to have also eaten similar fruit from the same person.

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Borygmus, a cranky & introverted man who resents attention, is suddenly turned into a lizard-man. He tries to remedy this by eating various fruits prescribed by his [[MorallyAmbiguousDoctorate "doctor"]]."doctor", named Steelie]]. However, these fruits remove any ailment ''except'' his condition, while giving him weird power-ups. On top of this, he's attacked by other [[HumanoidAbomination mutated patients]] who seem to have also eaten similar fruit from the same person.
person. Any exits from the hospital are closed off, and any form of outside light is gone. Thus begins Borygmus' journey to escape from the "hospital" he's trapped in.


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* StuckInTheDoorway: Becuase of his stomach, the title character often has trouble getting through small spaces, including some hiding spaces.
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* {{Acrofatic}}: Downplayed; while the main character can run fast, anything beyond that is a challenge for him.

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