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* Because of the amount of SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome placed on the ''Manga/LoveHina'' cast in the DeconstructionFic ''Fanfic/ForHisOwnSake'', Sarah [=MacDougal=] ends up being this. A bad mixture of being a jealous DaddysGirl and a SpoiledBrat means, when Naru and Motoko regularly beat up Keitaro (under the idea he's trying to be "perverted") whenever he attempts to discipline her, she now believes she can do whatever she wants by beating up anyone who disagrees with her. [[spoiler:Her attitude has her kicked out of elementary school when she attacks a teacher, so Seta's forced to put her in the strict St. Clavius Academy as she refuses to listen to him. Seta eventually realizes Sarah's a lost cause when she continue to blames Keitaro for her situation and proclaims he should die before disowning her adopted father.]]
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* Downplayed with Chloe Cerise in ''Fanfic/InfinityTrainBlossomingTrail''. Unlike her anime counterpart -- in which she's a ShrinkingViolet because she's not sure if she wants a career in Pokémon like her classmates are expecting her to get into -- she's shown to have very macabre tastes: she writes stories where characters end up with a FateWorseThanDeath, she sprinkles her dialogue with dark lyrics and she has an interest in ''demons''. However she's an average girl out of that, and is considered a CreepyLonerGirl because of how many of her classmates jeer at her likes and because she usually keeps to herself anyway. ''Fanfic/InfinityTrainSeekerOfCrocus'' makes this trope a larger part of her character with Chloe gaining a history with Ghost-type Pokemon, a tendency towards ClawingAtOwnThroat when stressed, more suicidal threats and tendencies, and having at one point actively fantasized about killing Goh for not paying more attention to her.
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* Downplayed with Chloe Cerise in ''Fanfic/InfinityTrainBlossomingTrail''. Unlike her anime counterpart -- counterpart, in which she's just a ShrinkingViolet because she's not sure if she wants a career in Pokémon like her classmates are expecting her to get into -- into, she's shown to have very macabre tastes: she writes stories where characters end up with meet a FateWorseThanDeath, she sprinkles her dialogue with dark lyrics lyrics, and she has an interest in ''demons''. However However, she's an average girl out outside of that, and but is considered a CreepyLonerGirl because of how many of her classmates jeer at her likes and because she usually keeps to herself anyway. ''Fanfic/InfinityTrainSeekerOfCrocus'' makes this trope a larger part of her character with Chloe gaining a history with Ghost-type Pokemon, a tendency towards ClawingAtOwnThroat [[ClawingAtOwnThroat clawing at her throat]] when stressed, more suicidal threats and tendencies, and having at one point actively fantasized about killing Goh simply for not paying more attention to her.
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* Downplayed with Chloe Cerise in ''Fanfic/InfinityTrainBlossomingTrail''. Unlike her anime counterpart -- in which she's a ShrinkingViolet because she's not sure if she wants a career in Pokémon like her classmates are expecting her to get into -- she's shown to have very macabre tastes: she writes stories where characters end up with a FateWorseThanDeath, she sprinkles her dialogue with dark lyrics and she has an interest in ''demons''. However she's an average girl out of that, and is considered a CreepyLonerGirl because of how many of her classmates jeer at her likes and because she usually keeps to herself anyway.
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* Downplayed with Chloe Cerise in ''Fanfic/InfinityTrainBlossomingTrail''. Unlike her anime counterpart -- in which she's a ShrinkingViolet because she's not sure if she wants a career in Pokémon like her classmates are expecting her to get into -- she's shown to have very macabre tastes: she writes stories where characters end up with a FateWorseThanDeath, she sprinkles her dialogue with dark lyrics and she has an interest in ''demons''. However she's an average girl out of that, and is considered a CreepyLonerGirl because of how many of her classmates jeer at her likes and because she usually keeps to herself anyway. ''Fanfic/InfinityTrainSeekerOfCrocus'' makes this trope a larger part of her character with Chloe gaining a history with Ghost-type Pokemon, a tendency towards ClawingAtOwnThroat when stressed, more suicidal threats and tendencies, and having at one point actively fantasized about killing Goh for not paying more attention to her.
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* ''Fanfic/YuyaVision'' has [[Anime/YuGiOh5Ds Lucciano]], who was already pretty unsettling as a child leader of a time-altering cult and cyborg, but the fic ups his antics for comedy to make him a grinning loon who wants to paint the town red.
* Fanfic/EchoesKagaseo: Two alternate Narutos, Gaara, and a version of Sakura Haruno who is a Jinchuriki all qualify as this. A few of them, like one of the Narutos and a female Gaara, get help and become less of this as the story goes, but others aren't so lucky.
* Fanfic/EchoesKagaseo: Two alternate Narutos, Gaara, and a version of Sakura Haruno who is a Jinchuriki all qualify as this. A few of them, like one of the Narutos and a female Gaara, get help and become less of this as the story goes, but others aren't so lucky.
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* The ''Literature/{{Twilight}}'' fic "[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/4668040/1/Bella-Hale Bella Hale]]" has a sub-plot involving the Cullens meeting Matt, Hailey, and Connor, a family of vampires; Matt and Hailey were turned and then turned their son Connor after his guardian was killed. Connor is initially a friend to Bella, who was adopted by the Cullens when she was six, but [[spoiler:after Connor drinks human blood, he gives into temptation and tries to turn Bella when she's just eleven, prompting the Cullens to tear him apart]].
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* The ''Literature/{{Twilight}}'' ''[[Literature/TheTwilightSaga Twilight]]'' fic "[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/4668040/1/Bella-Hale Bella Hale]]" has a sub-plot involving the Cullens meeting Matt, Hailey, and Connor, a family of vampires; Matt and Hailey were turned and then turned their son Connor after his guardian was killed. Connor is initially a friend to Bella, who was adopted by the Cullens when she was six, but [[spoiler:after Connor drinks human blood, he gives into temptation and tries to turn Bella when she's just eleven, prompting the Cullens to tear him apart]].
